sahuang wrote:

Add to tags "drum and bass"?

Garden wrote:

from 水仙req
[General]

1. 其实是不是可以把中间混进去的两首也加到tag里? 混进去了什么啊

[Horologium]

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  Sharlo

1. 00:33:105 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这个五连overmap在开头这段很突兀啊， 00:33:349 - 这里有个比较轻的音所以大概可以这样下->this，跟前面某处一样 That puush could not be found.
2. 01:02:619 (2,3,4,1) - 不知道是不是错觉看上去没 00:52:565 (4,5,6,1) - 摆得整洁，中间ds需要稍微调整一下，现在是这样 应该是我开GS的问题
3. 01:57:754 (6,1) - 这个好远啊，试试看 01:58:078 (1) - 01:58:727 (4) - 分别ctrl-g，打起来的flow也不错 第一个可以，第二个保留，不是很喜欢反手flow
4. 02:12:997 (5,6) - 不要overlap? 和前面 01:54:835 (5,6) - 一样比较有整体感 O
5. 03:27:267 (5) - 这个减速可以上个nc 凡是有关nc的都不要让我改 我不听我不听
6. 03:48:024 (5) - 04:47:700 (5,6) - 其实可以搞一样的 不是啊 两个地方不一样 后者是真的多了一个音
7. 05:36:025 (1) - 挡了不少血条，ctrlg一下会发现上面的锚点在界外 那我改一下

Trynna wrote:

is it gonna happen at some point?

Garden wrote:

• Chaoslitz

1. 01:12:349 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这里可以随人声音高逐渐加间距，大概这样，个人认为比较有感觉 改了
2. 01:26:619 (1) - 感觉没有必要nc，一个方向的跳给一组nc像 01:25:646 (1,2,3,4) - 一样 刪了
3. 02:44:781 (1,2,3) - 这里做个圆润的blanket可能更好看些 還好吧這個
4. 04:03:105 (3,4,5,6,7) - 建议从人声 04:03:267 - 这里起五连，或者考虑这个 04:03:349 - 蓝线没音，把 04:03:267 (5,6,7) - 换成滑条? 04:03:511 - 這邊沒聲音感覺現在就好了
5. 04:11:213 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^ ^

Garden wrote:

normal-hitfinish2.wav
确认一下没用到的话就删掉

1. 00:40:889 (5,6,7) - this jump feels a bit overdone for such a calm section in comparison to the others, i don't think it's really suitable since people can get frustrated in such a chill part, introdutory jumps are fine but such spikes are a bit sad
2. 01:43:808 (1,2) - while the song has a little pause effect that was represented pretty well on 03:47:051 (1) - and 04:46:726 (1) - respectivelly, you tried to represent it with a kick and a circle, representing something way denser and active than the song provides. i know it's not completely bad but maybe it's cool to consider
3. 02:02:619 (1) - 04:05:862 (3) - inconsistent NCs, i'd rather remove 02:02:619 (1) - actually
4. 02:36:349 (3,4,5) - that should be 1/6, compare with 02:33:754 (1,2,3,4) - were you followed this background accurately, also 02:36:592 (4) - seems like covering nothing in special. This also happens on 02:43:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) -, where you clearly followed 02:43:376 (4) - with 1/6s and randomly switched to 1/4 while the basis is still the same. 02:43:727 (2) - 02:44:051 (5) - 02:44:376 - etc seems like having no specific beat, just a constant sound (except for 02:44:376 -)
5. 02:46:240 (2) - that's definitely not 1/6 it's 1/8 but you can also simplify with 1/4 if you want aswell prob
6. 04:04:889 (4,5,6,1) - in my opinion this kick (04:05:051 (6) -) has nearly no effect since it's super close to the next object that also basically starts a new section with stream sounds. doing something else or giving the transition more impact with more spacing or something would be great
7. 04:52:808 (8) - i'd remove this beat as done on 03:53:132 - and 01:49:889 - cuz seems pure overmap and a bit random as there are 1/6 beats on the background. try adding something on 04:53:132 - as there is a drum there

Trynna wrote:

checking snaps on this song is so tiring
hi btw, came cuz you, chaoslitz and garden pm'd me, but i was going to do it anyway

1. 00:40:889 (5,6,7) - this jump feels a bit overdone for such a calm section in comparison to the others, i don't think it's really suitable since people can get frustrated in such a chill part, introdutory jumps are fine but such spikes are a bit sad ok
2. 01:43:808 (1,2) - while the song has a little pause effect that was represented pretty well on 03:47:051 (1) - and 04:46:726 (1) - respectivelly, you tried to represent it with a kick and a circle, representing something way denser and active than the song provides. i know it's not completely bad but maybe it's cool to consider should be fine represent the kick with a 1/4 slider, and imo leaving a gap between doesn't sounds good so i placed a note before entering the kiai
3. 02:02:619 (1) - 04:05:862 (3) - inconsistent NCs, i'd rather remove 02:02:619 (1) - actually i prefer adding the nc xD anyway fixed
   * need to fix sb
4. 02:36:349 (3,4,5) - that should be 1/6, compare with 02:33:754 (1,2,3,4) - were you followed this background accurately, also 02:36:592 (4) - seems like covering nothing in special. This also happens on 02:43:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) -, where you clearly followed 02:43:376 (4) - with 1/6s and randomly switched to 1/4 while the basis is still the same. 02:43:727 (2) - 02:44:051 (5) - 02:44:376 - etc seems like having no specific beat, just a constant sound (except for 02:44:376 -) yup, fixed 02:43:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - oo
   * need to fix sb
5. 02:46:240 (2) - that's definitely not 1/6 it's 1/8 but you can also simplify with 1/4 if you want aswell prob ok
6. 04:04:889 (4,5,6,1) - in my opinion this kick (04:05:051 (6) -) has nearly no effect since it's super close to the next object that also basically starts a new section with stream sounds. doing something else or giving the transition more impact with more spacing or something would be great fixed
7. 04:52:808 (8) - i'd remove this beat as done on 03:53:132 - and 01:49:889 - cuz seems pure overmap and a bit random as there are 1/6 beats on the background. try adding something on 04:53:132 - as there is a drum there okay

call me or garden back, but i prefer giving you my heart

Trynna wrote:

02:43:808 (2) - seems like missing drum sample added clap
02:46:240 (2) - whistle on 02:46:362 - should be moved to the upbeat moved it to 02:46:403 -

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Lasse wrote:

05:10:889 (9) - shouldn't this be a 1/6 repeat?