Odaril wrote:

Please reply to his mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game >.<

General
The maximum size for combobursts is 800x500. You need to resize yours...fixed

Aleks' Easy
Looks fine.

Normal
The rhythms used are simpler than in Easy...o(╯□╰)o

Hard
00:03:364 (1) - Surprisingly far from the center of the screen so soon after the spinner.
01:28:763 (2,3,4) - Space them in a better way ? The pattern will look at lot better.（Some minor adjustments）

Insane
I fail to mod this. This diff is just 1/2 all the way through that doesn't even fit the song for the sake of making an Insane diff. Not to mention the high spacing hardly fits....
00:43:119 (1,1,1,1) - The new combo here make the pattern absolutely unreadable. You should reduce the jumps as well...
00:54:898 (1,1,1,1) - Remove the new combo as well, for the same reasons...fixed
（oh my poor diff 。。but I dont understand how to change orz，just changed to CS+1.。T.T）


The first three diffs were okay, but I really didn't like the Insane. It's here only for the sake of having an Insane diff...

-kevincela- wrote:

[Aleks' Easy]
00:59:315 (4) - Maybe flip this orizontally? nope, thanks

winber1 wrote:

--I don't like the whistle sound, doesn't fit in this song imo We have different opinions :3
That's it for this difficulty. Looks fine other than that ty

Mystica wrote:

Hi.
Here comes my mod.

[Normal]
fine.But I feel it's similar to the Easy.It's just my feeling?

[Hard]
00:28:395 New combo?

[Insane]
00:07:045 new combo?
00:12:935 this jump may not fits this part?
00:45:696 New Combo?
00:48:640 ^
00:57:475 ^
other parts seems fine.

Well done.I think you have spent effort on this map.
Own this star.

-kevincela- wrote:

Ok,here's my mod

[Normal]

00:39:070 - Add a note?
00:41:646 (4) - New combo?
00:42:935 (6) - Remove combo?

[Hard]

Fine~

[Insane]

Nothing to say apart that this difficulty is all 1/2 D:

Star~

winber1 wrote:

Sorry for slow mod :/

Insane

01:10:358(1,2,3,4) - perhaps use soft hitsounds instead of normal. Then use whistle instead of clap on combo 1 and 3. Start the normal hitsounds on combo 5.
01:11:094(5,7) - place claps on these
01:41:646(5) - completely silence it? I don't think it needs a very soft finish here.
01:46:432(spinner) - sould end a little louder imo, like how it does in hard.

Hard

00:21:217(1) - remove finish (keep the first finish tho).
01:01:800(2) - I think you should space this note, not just stack it. It also makes it easier to read.
01:10:358(1,2,3,4) - same as in insane

Normal

00:08:518(2) - add clap
00:10:726(2,4) - claps on these two combos sound weird. They should be on combo 1 and 3
00:12:199(4) - replace clap with finish
00:21:033(1) - finish
00:27:659(1) - spacing is a little off :/. You may consider adding a note to make the spacing work. I guess it's readable though.
00:57:475(2) - start this slider at 00:57:659 and end it in the same place. Then fix spacing
01:10:358(1,2) - same as in insane. Use soft hitsounds?



Nice map! :3

Star~~

Dark_Ai wrote:

Mod Queues:

Easy and Normal:
Nice

Hard:
too ^^

Insane:
00:57:475 (9) - new combo?
01:23:610 (8) - ^
01:30:604 (8) - ^

Really nice. Star

thx fior mod~~

jericho2442 wrote:

i would say -2 onto your offset

Normal
00:26:186 (7,1) - ok first off you need to put the newcombo in the (7) to follow pattern and remove it from the (1), then you need to give these 2 more space between them, they are too close for the timing of them, thus they feels odd to play
00:41:646 (4) - need a new combo here
00:42:935 (1,2) - remove the new combo from this (1) and put it on the (2)
01:18:272 (4) - new combo
01:24:162 (4) - new combo

Hard
(suggestion) 00:14:407 (6) - maybe a new combo here to help with the rhythm change

seemed nice

Insane
00:20:849 (7,1) - this having smaller spacing compared to all the notes before it felt really odd, i advise to give this larger spacing like the notes before it, that way it helps flow the player into the spacing change
00:27:843 (3,4) - ok this really needs more space, in the middle of a jump pattern you have this anti jump note, it feels out of place and also dont suit the pattern your doing, please give it the same spacing as the rest of the pattern
00:47:168 (12) - reverse this slider so it flows with the jump you use at (5,6) like this

SPOILER

00:50:113 (1,2,3) - i advise a placement like the picture below, this way it flows better due to each note has a 1grid increase between the notes rather than it looking like just one note out of place

SPOILER

01:11:094 (5) - new combo to help the player to change to the larger spacing and to also split the chorus starting abit
01:14:039 (1,2) - have too much space, it plays odd and feels odd, i advise to give every note in this combo the same spacing

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well that will keep you busy for abit, i like the set, just insane needs some fixing up

nomal and insane：all fixed
hard:Thanks for your advice

jericho2442 wrote:

Aleks' Easy
just a few tiny combo things Phuuuuh

00:12:199 (4) - kinda needs a new combo to follow your pattern fixed
00:26:187 (4) - new combo to show the change in lyric feel and pattern fixed
(suggestion) 00:43:119 (4) - maybe new combo here to help give the drums more power like the song does nope

NoHItter wrote:

Aleks' Easy
01:39:990 (2,1) - Perhaps add one repeat here then move the spinner 1/2 forward <= fixed
to form a Post-Spinner Note instead? <= nope

Aleks719 wrote:

NoHItter wrote:

Aleks' Easy

01:39:990 (2,1) - Perhaps add one repeat here then move the spinner 1/2 forward <= fixed
to form a Post-Spinner Note instead? <= nopeThank you, updated~

updated~

IceBeam wrote:

Per Aleks' request.

[Aleks's Easy]
00:59:315 (4) - Вот как-то мне не очень нравится,может развернешь его как-нибудь так:

SPOILER

Няшка!

[Normal]
Custom claps fit better I suppose.Why not to use them from first section?
00:00:788 (1) - Finish?
00:06:309 (1) - ^
00:44:591 (1) - ^
00:50:481 (2) - ^
00:56:370 (1) - ^
00:59:315 (1) - ^
01:11:094 (3) - ^
01:16:984 (3) - ^

I don't see any problems with gameplay,good job!

[Hard]
Soft claps sound disgusting
Fine to me,though some sliders could look better.

[Insane]
Soft claps again..don't use them please :<
00:35:757 (4) - Cymbals are clearly heard in the song,add finish?
00:44:591 (1) - ^
00:47:536 (1) - ^
00:50:481 (2) - ^
00:52:045 (7) - Remove this note,it's off!
01:01:524 (1,2,3) - Spacing doesn't help to read blue tick on (2)-nd note.I think you need to place (1) much closer to 01:01:156 (8).
01:22:873 (3) - New combo? Finish,btw.
01:28:763 (4) - Finish.
01:34:653 (4) - ^
01:41:646 - Use lower volume/soft section for this note.

Nice,star~

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

[Aleks' Easy]:
Heeey! Nice clean, sleek work you got here. Hitsound usage is nice. My only gripe though is how inaudible those timing sections at 30%. They're really difficult to hear; though fortunately it's only a minor area and I understand where you were going with that.

[Normal]:
Maaan. That's nice to see, a Normal that acts like a Normal. Kudos to you. The beginning's soft-hitnormal sound is a little bit gentle for my tastes, but really, overall it's a nice package. Keep up the good work there.

[Hard]:
Really smooth, clean. No complaints here.

[Insane]:
Niiice. It reminds me a little of MoonFragrance's maps in how I can fly through the song without fighting it. Interestingly, this pattern at first caught me in a tangle -- 01:39:438 (1,2,3,4,5) - The (1) and (2) felt too close to each other. But after another try, I was able to get it quickly. I suppose my cursor was just flying around too much -- and my sightread sort of failed me.

With that, I'm bubbling this. If you'd like to make a change, please, please, please don't hesitate! It's not like this bubble is some sacred relic that you will never get again. If you make a change, just forum PM me or something and let me know. Otherwise, let's have fun.

Night_Side wrote:

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

[Aleks' Easy]:
Heeey! Nice clean, sleek work you got here. Hitsound usage is nice. My only gripe though is how inaudible those timing sections at 30%. They're really difficult to hear; though fortunately it's only a minor area and I understand where you were going with that.

Thank you

i love kirby~~~>.< Me too :3

Garven wrote:

Didn't mod, but the artist should be Itou Kanako.

If you need help updating the artist without duplicating the map there is a thread in the wip/help forum. Im on my phone so its a pain to copy paste the link. Ill edit it in when I get a chance if you hadn't already done it by the time I get to it.

Garven wrote:

Well, time to do a real mod then.

[Aleks' Easy]
00:33:180 (1) - I really recommend against things like this in an easy difficulty since it's so short that new players won't know when it stops. Ok, fixed
00:43:119 (4) - Can you make the end of this more audible kind of like 00:54:898 (4) - whistle added, volume changed a bit
01:07:045 (1,2,3) - This kind of cutting-across motion isn't very newbie friendly. ok, fixed
I'm kind of iffy on all those short sliders too, but they're not too bad.

Garven wrote:

Well, time to do a real mod then.

[Aleks' Easy]
00:33:180 (1) - I really recommend against things like this in an easy difficulty since it's so short that new players won't know when it stops.
00:43:119 (4) - Can you make the end of this more audible kind of like 00:54:898 (4) -
01:07:045 (1,2,3) - This kind of cutting-across motion isn't very newbie friendly.
I'm kind of iffy on all those short sliders too, but they're not too bad.

[Normal]
Snap your kiai start（i think it np,01:11:094 is right）

[Hard]
Snap your kiai start（np）
00:03:364 (1) - This is rather cruel for a hard difficulty.
00:54:714 (6) - I find stacking this with the 7 slider plays much more naturally.(changed~)

[Insane]
Snap your kiai start（changed）
01:22:505 (1) - Remove new combo（done）
Strange that you finish this difficulty with a soft finish instead of a normal finish like the other ones...
The Insane was... kind of bland rhythmically. It felt like almost a constant stream of 1/2 1/2 1/2 for the entire map. Perhaps consider trying to go for a more rhythmically diverse map next time.

Garven wrote:

Um, so were changes done then? I've been waiting for a reply from you in this thread or via PM, but nothing came of it. I can revive this if you want and get this map rolling again. Let me know.

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Can't help but notice this, hehe.

Revived! Best of luck! Go go Night_Side

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
01:24:162 (1) - Odd having this as it's own combo here...（done

[Hard]
00:03:364 (1) - I still this this is rather cruel. Shape is to that it's closer to the center at least, so it's easier to hit. This is more of an Insane difficulty technique.（changed）
Check through this difficulty and make sure that the custom hit sounding is used how you like it. Felt like there were holes in it and the soft claps ended up being used a lot where I'm sure you intended for the custom sounds.

[Insane]
00:26:923 (3) - This repeat is kind of covered by the hit burst from 00:25:818 (6) - I don't have much problem with it, but I know someone else will probably have a fit, and it's easy to mitigate.（something changed
00:35:573 (12,13) - At least make this so that the end of 11 is stacked with the 12.（done
00:42:751 (5) - Some of these slider speed changes don't really make much sense to me, and there's not much structurally (mapping-wise) or musically significant to justify it to me. Care to explain?（something changed
01:18:456 (2,3) - May as well scoot these a little further apart so that they are not overlapping each other（done
01:37:966 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This seems like quite a difficult pattern for a cool down section of the song.（changed