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riffy

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8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2016-09-11T18:57:54+00:00

Whoops, a typo. Whoever qualifies this, make sure the tag is fixed first. It's Ukrainian

Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2016-09-12T12:08:23+00:00

Hellow

As Bakari said, please fix tags!

SB looks good to me.
Collab Easy is good to go as is.

vanucik's Normal ( just nitpicking a bit c: )

OD4 or 4.5 would fit better for the spread, imo
00:15:941 (3) - hmmh, because of the rather strong vocals at 00:16:644 - I'd prefer two 1/2 sliders instead of the reverse.
00:16:879 (1,2) - (2) feels a bit off cause of the vocals, try http://puu.sh/r8zpV.jpg to match them a bit better? All beats still get emphasized
00:18:754 (1,2) - rotate (1) for better blanket? :b
00:19:691 (3) - why not same rhythm as 00:21:566 (3,4) - ? That matches so much better with the vocals!
same for 00:23:441 (3) - 00:25:316 (3) -
00:29:769 (1,2) - NC should be on (2), not on (1)
00:43:129 (1,2,3) - flow feels forced cause of the blanket, how about http://puu.sh/r8zwD.jpg instead?

Hard

00:35:629 (1) - hmh, consider making this symmetrical to (2)? Like this http://puu.sh/r8zTr.jpg . You could stack 00:36:566 (3) - below 00:34:691 (3) - to avoid overlap, looks a bit smoother overall, imo.

YOSHI Insane

00:15:941 (3) - consider splitting this into 1/2 + circle to emphasize the sound on the red tick and the new vocal on the current sliderend better?
00:24:144 (6) - and 00:29:535 (6) - imo(!) these should be spaced a little closer. Not much, just like ~0.2 less, because they feel a tiny bit exaggerated for this 'less exciting' part.
00:47:816 (1) - is NC necessary?

Poke me when all's been replied to! :3

M a r v o l o

M a r v o l o 2016-09-12T14:34:39+00:00

Hype

Yoshikawa Hoshi

Yoshikawa Hoshi 2016-09-12T14:44:02+00:00

Squichu wrote:

YOSHI Insane

00:15:941 (3) - consider splitting this into 1/2 + circle to emphasize the sound on the red tick and the new vocal on the current sliderend better? idk actually.. is this really needed? like, i told before why i did it - i wanted to diversify the monotone 1/2 rhytm in the beginning as since i dont map on vocals, i mapped this way. bbbut if you really dont like this - ill change it!
00:24:144 (6) - and 00:29:535 (6) - imo(!) these should be spaced a little closer. Not much, just like ~0.2 less, because they feel a tiny bit exaggerated for this 'less exciting' part. fixed the first one, but the second one is ok imo becuz 00:29:535 (6) - here the beat is pretty strong and deserves a bit more spacing
00:47:816 (1) - is NC necessary? i tink not, so fixed :3

and since i was asked to
vanucik's Normal ( just nitpicking a bit c: )

00:19:691 (3) - why not same rhythm as 00:21:566 (3,4) - ? That matches so much better with the vocals!
same for 00:23:441 (3) - 00:25:316 (3) - i fixed two of these places, but i kept the others since the rhytm will be too monotone and boring if ill do all

no relpy = fixed

нормал, без хсов

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Poke me when all's been replied to! :3

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wajinshu

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wajinshu 2016-09-12T15:16:09+00:00

Squichu wrote:
Hellow

As Bakari said, please fix tags! Fixed :3
rced cause of the blanket, how about http://puu.sh/r8zwD.jpg instead?[/list]

Hard
00:35:629 (1) - hmh, consider making this symmetrical to (2)? Like this http://puu.sh/r8zTr.jpg . You could stack 00:36:566 (3) - below 00:34:691 (3) - to avoid overlap, looks a bit smoother overall, imo. I prefer the form sliders what I have and not want to change them + fixed blanket blanket
Poke me when all's been replied to! :3

Thank you!
Updated!

Squichu

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Squichu 2016-09-13T12:05:58+00:00

This is so fun to listen to.. xD Qualified!

Namki

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Joined November 2014

Namki 2016-09-13T12:11:43+00:00

urkainian is a good language, by the way.
grats, by the way, by the way.
owo

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