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Yo

[Kantan]
How about moving 01:01:420 (3) - and 02:20:426 (12) - half a beat forward onto the red ticks at 01:01:606 - and 02:20:612 - ? It feels a lot more intuitive to play.

03:45:768 (1,1,1,2) - I don't believe these should be finishers.

[Futsuu]
03:41:668 - 03:44:650 - You've used 1/2 doublets for this rhythm every other time, so why not here?

Same thing I mentioned about the finishers in Kantan applies here.

[kata's Muzukashii]
Could you leave a few more 3/2 + gaps in the last kiai? There's a couple of long stretches like 03:37:755 - 03:47:631 - and 03:48:190 - 04:03:656 - that could use a gap or two to break them up.

[Firmament]
The doublets/quad in 03:45:768 - 03:48:749 - feel a little forced to me and don't really seem to fit with the song. I guess they're okay, but I'd prefer to use simpler, odd-lengthed patterns here instead.

The same thing I mentioned about the finishers in K/F applies here too.

lmk when you've applied.
posted

Aloda wrote:

[kata's Muzukashii]
Could you leave a few more 3/2 + gaps in the last kiai? There's a couple of long stretches like 03:37:755 - 03:47:631 - and 03:48:190 - 04:03:656 - that could use a gap or two to break them up.
ok, more 3/2 now.
osu file format v14

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Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
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thanks!
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Aloda wrote:

Yo

[Kantan]
How about moving 01:01:420 (3) - and 02:20:426 (12) - half a beat forward onto the red ticks at 01:01:606 - and 02:20:612 - ? It feels a lot more intuitive to play.

03:45:768 (1,1,1,2) - I don't believe these should be finishers.

[Futsuu]
03:41:668 - 03:44:650 - You've used 1/2 doublets for this rhythm every other time, so why not here?

Same thing I mentioned about the finishers in Kantan applies here.

[Firmament]
The doublets/quad in 03:45:768 - 03:48:749 - feel a little forced to me and don't really seem to fit with the song. I guess they're okay, but I'd prefer to use simpler, odd-lengthed patterns here instead. Change the patterns to 1/4 style.

The same thing I mentioned about the finishers in K/F applies here too.

lmk when you've applied.
All applied. Thank you!!
Also, updated kata's Muzukashii!
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Quick IRC
23:01 *Aloda is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1036160 Ray - Kimi to Ita Sora [Kantan]]
23:01 Aloda: 2 more suggestions, if you have a minute 'w'
23:01 Smallwu: yes?
23:01 Smallwu: ofc <3
23:02 Aloda: Okay
23:02 Aloda: First, in the Kantan
23:02 Aloda: Is there a reason for the difference in structure between 01:03:283 - and 02:22:289 - ?
23:03 Smallwu: no :o
23:04 Aloda: I recommend making them the same then :p
23:04 Aloda: Second has to do with the tags
23:05 Aloda: Since this song is from the anime, you should probably be using that instead of visual novel/eroge
23:05 Smallwu: okay, done
23:05 Smallwu: i see
23:05 Smallwu: i use those tags because ranked ver has it
23:05 Smallwu: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/445879
23:05 Smallwu: so yea <w>
23:06 Aloda: It's okay to keep them
23:06 Aloda: But maybe add anime too
23:06 Smallwu: sure
Also some metadata sources:
http://aokana-anime.com/products/cd/202/
http://nbcuni-music.com/ray/contents/hp0008/index00210000.html
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gratz 1st Ranked !

congratulation Smallwu ~ ></
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恭喜! :)
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^p^vv
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yuzu__rinrin wrote:

gratz 1st Ranked !

congratulation Smallwu ~ ></

qoot8123 wrote:

恭喜! :)

Rhytoly wrote:

^p^vv
Thank you guys <3
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Whoa, grats for first map getting qualified!
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Gratz on first rank small uwu
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woowowowoowwwwow congratz small chan xDDDDDDDDDDD
go go rank more~ 8-)
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Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Whoa, grats for first map getting qualified!

[R] wrote:

Gratz on first rank small uwu

404 AccNotFound wrote:

woowowowoowwwwow congratz small chan xDDDDDDDDDDD
go go rank more~ 8-)lol ill try
Thank you <3 <3 <3
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Congratz.I'm sorry
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Charlotte wrote:

Congratz.I'm sorry
why xd
but thanks <3
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Congratz for having qualified map! (っ´ω`c)
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Tyistiana wrote:

Congratz for having qualified map! (っ´ω`c)
thank you (っ>ω<c)
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恭喜~

沒想到我們剛好同一個群xD

:D
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