1. BLACK TEMPEST (6,23 stars, 1341 notes)

RoseusJaeger wrote:

I am intrigued by this.

Hareimu wrote:

RoseusJaeger wrote:

I am intrigued by this.

Explain yourself? If you're wondering, yes I'm gonna go for approval with this finished.

koliron wrote:

wew

i dont think a map like this will reach 12 mods before be ready =A= so take some stars good sir

Jusenkyo wrote:

NM via in game

General

1. Ok, no sé si es sumamente necesario, pero te recomiendo cambiar el tamaño del BG a 1366x768 Lamentablemente no he podido encontrar una version del BG que tenga esa resolucion, y aumentarle el tamaño manualmente con alguna herramienta para editar imagenes solamente resultaria en empeorar su calidad. Perdon por esto ^^u
2. Supongo que esto podría ir en Tags, o en caso de que lleguen a pedirte el "metadata" Circle: かめるかめりあ Agregué solo la parte de かめるかめりあ (Circle no parece necesario, imo)
3. El resto parece estar bien.

BLACK TEMPEST

1. 00:49:440 (8,1) - Siento que un h-dash podría encajar, a pesar de ser una parte algo tranquila. Permiteme discrepar en esta sugerencia, ya he testeado multiples patterns con un hdash en esa seccion y no creo que encaje muy bien que digamos.
2. Siento que aquí te falto agregar una nota: 00:52:354 Agregada
3. 00:53:897 (1) - En mi opinión es mejor un repeat slider de 1/2. Porque es claro que hay un sonido aquí: 00:54:069 He eliminado dicho slider y bajado la velocidad de reproduccion a 25% para verificar si dicho sonido se podia escuchar con facilidad, pero ni aun asi pude escuchar algun sonido de cualquier clase lo suficientemente fuerte como para considerar reemplazarlo por un repeat slider de 1/2.
4. Otra nota perdida aquí: 02:35:897 y aquí: 02:36:583 Agregadas
5. Claramente se escucha un sonido aquí: 02:42:069 - Y podrías aprovechar para crear un h-dash con la siguiente nota. Lo mismo que con el punto anterior, no alcanzo a escuchar dicho sonido ni en 25% de velocidad. Si algun otro modder llega a escuchar esos 2 sonidos de los que estas hablando, quizas pueda considerar hacer algo al respecto.
6. Bueno es lo poco que pude encontrar, dado a que no soy de moddear Overdoses, siento que en una "Overdose" puedes hacer casi lo que quieras, h-dash por aquí h-dash por allá, en particular siento que es la única dificultad en donde uno puede hacer lo que quiera, en fin aún así hay límites, buena suerte con el mapa, espero y este pequeño mod sea de ayuda, nos vemos, buena suerte, se ve que es un gran mapa! Muchas gracias! voy a seguir buscando mods, pero el tuyo fue bastante util. Ahi tienes tu kudosu <3

Nelly wrote:

I like it

Chara wrote:

[Black Tempest]
most all of these are pure suggestions, the map is fine rankability-wise yay
00:08:126 (3,4) - maybe space these out more since i end up not moving in this part which kinda breaks the movement flow (if that makes sense) You're right, changed them~
00:23:040 (3) - make this more like 00:24:412 (8) - , the previous jump is a large one so making this more horizontal would give a bit of leeway for movement actually I was changing this pattern to something more playable, so yeah
01:10:697 (5) - ctrl+g to make 01:10:012 (3,4,5) - an alternating direction pattern Sure~
01:59:726 (1,2,3) - unlike the earlier case, it would be nice if these were pointing at the same direction (up to you whether to let them point to the left or the right) I actually changed it to a much cooler version of it, just test it~
02:00:583 (4,5) - move these by 4 medium grids to the right with the previous change, this one is kinda discarted :s
02:49:441 (3,4,5,6) - space these out more Done

yehaj rank this sure wynaut

Dahcreeper wrote:

01:55:612 (1) - seeing this pointing to the left bugged me, so make it point to the right ~:d Done.
01:58:697 (2,3) - weird patterns are good so point this 01:58:869 (3) - to the left and make this 01:59:040 (4) - go a bit farther away ~:d yeah sure why not, a bit of variation in the patterns doesn't hurt anybody
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I don't wanna go through the rest of the map because i'm to tired to do a real good mod (even tho I can't produce good mods in the first place ~:d)
so just add more creative sliders instead of just bland curved sliders and straight sliders, and mix up your jumps a bit np, you're still getting kudos

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Siento el retraso bro, hoy zi o si haha
PD: Aunque la cancion no me gusta para nada uwu

Setomi wrote:

Quick IRC and testplay!!

IRC text

monstratorfull wrote:

Hey !! I love your beatmap !!! Seriously I like your pattern ! And I love this song !!

SPOILER

rew0825 wrote:

Hi PM request <3

[ BLACK TEMPEST]

1. 01:22:354 (5,6) - how about change to other, looks better flow I'll decline on this, as the original pattern was intended to be flow-breaking on purpose. also there's too much curved stream patterns on the whole diff so also no :<
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2. 01:29:554 (1,2) - i think between that it's far a little, how about move 01:29:554 (1) - to x:160 Oh gee, it seems that I accidentally left that distancing as 2.0x and not 2.5x (HDash trigger) as it was supposed to be. Thanks for noticing~
3. 01:48:412 (5) - move to x:160 Done.
4. 01:49:012 (2,4) - this slider i think it's hard to catch please change it to diagonal The purpose of the whole 01:48:754 (1,2,3,4) - pattern would be screwed if I changed the shape of those two sliders, so it's staying like that for now.
5. 02:00:240 (3) - Change it to diagonal Same reason as before, but in this case the pattern was intended to have the three sliders progressively change shape from vertical (01:59:726 (1) - ) to horizontal (02:00:240 (3) - )
6. 02:04:354 (3) - ctrl+g, it's antiflow I think that before continuing applying these changes, I have to state that this song was mapped with the intention to actually be hard. I wanted to mix both nice flowing patterns with anti-flow snappy ones to make it both more fitting to the song's intensity and more fun to play (kinda avoiding pp mapping here) so yeah, most of these changes you're suggesting here refer to most (if not almost every) anti-flow pattern on the diff. Sorry if I don't actually apply the following suggestions :s
   
   Onto the suggestion itself, the pattern you're highlighting 02:04:183 (2,3,4) - here was intended to be anti-flow (snappy 1/4 anti-sliders = harder to catch, as a result)
7. 02:54:326 (6) - ctrl+g, it's antiflow Also intended to be anti-flow here, the song calls for it and tbh the rest of the build-up until the kiai is full of these.
8. 03:38:126 (1) - ctrl+g, it's antiflow and move to x:288 and 03:38:384 (2) - move to x:32 Same as before, it would also make this a left-right simple to play pattern, which is not wanted for this pattern in specific.
9. 03:42:926 (2) - ctrl+g, it's antiflow and move to x:160 Actually applying this, the song's pitch kinda goes down here so a flow-breaking pattern isn't really needed. Thanks for suggesting this.
10. 03:51:498 (5) - How about change this slider to curve Dunno how could that work properly without an example (as you did before with an image), so... I'm kinda lost with this one o.o
11. 03:51:841 (6) - ctrl+g, it's antiflow and move to x:176 so 03:52:184 (1) - ctrl+g The song calls for a hard pattern because of the intensity and pitch of this exact section, so it's staying like it is for now.

Amazing map <3<3 Good luck and shoot star :3 Thank you!~~ And thank you so much for the star <3

Blushing wrote:

D: Im sorry I can't Mod Correctly

03:23:384 (1,2,3,4) - These 4 notes, in my opinion, make the part way dense, hard to hit and read, and over all just not needed. My suggestion on how to fix it is by simply moving them closer together or make them into a 4 note mini stream (where they have to move slightly to hit the notes, but not dash, Like the stream at 03:28:183 (3,4,5,6,7,8) For reference on the stream ) That way its still hard but not as hard as hitting those singles; plus it makes for a good change of direction from the hypers to singles. Yup, sure! Somewhat changed them, it would be a nice transition in direction, now that I see it properly.

00:56:640 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - [<----- woah], I really love the progression and the way you did it, it flows nice but is also somewhat difficult. The idea on these patterns was to have the player to be changing movement constantly in constrast to the melody that's sounding in the background, so I also think I pretty much nailed it with that thingy.

Everything Else I was going to say has been said above and was too late ,

Anyways thank you for reading this even though it only had 1 thing.

examination wrote:

Hello

[General]
01:08:639 (7) - Object's end isn't snapped! D: Fixed right away
01:04:869 - useless green line oh right... I was using the same sampleset two times ^^u fixed too

[BLACK TEMPEST]
00:23:554 (4) - what about this slider heading left and leave a good HDash for 00:23:554 (4)? You may also consider add a hitsound on this slider tail (Normal Clap maybe?) Done! But when it comes to adding that hitsound you said, I think I'm leaving the normal-hitclap to the buildup until the first kiai as it is.
00:40:012 (4,5) - I suggest placing this pattern like this to add a HDash, also this pattern makes the flow better. woo, I like it~ Changed.

SPOILER

00:48:926 (4,5) - what about also keep the 2.0x ds here? I think a dash is necessary Done, and left the HDash produced by this change
00:53:040 (8) - same problem as ^, tho I know this is following the flow, but the changing tune needs a dash to emphasize. I see what you mean here, kinda remapped this small section overall so that it could flow back to the previously made patterns.
01:03:840 (3,4) - If the previous patterns are changed, you may also consider a dash here Made this into an HDash instead because of the buildup.
01:08:983 (1,2,3) - All with 1.5x ds, and move 01:10:354 (4) to x:256 Done.
01:13:097 (1,2) - 1.0x feels too close, you may choose 1.2 or 1.3x, by moving 01:13:097 (1) to x:480 Left 01:13:097 (1) - at the same spot as before, but instead moved 01:13:269 (2) - to x:304 and 01:13:783 (3) - to x:160
02:16:526 (6) - split this into a triple? Umm... there's not a sound that suggest a triple there, but I think I can get the same results placing a new note 02:16:783 (7) - here.
02:37:269 (2,3) - needing 2.0x ds to make a clear dash Done.
02:41:726 (6,7) - making it move back? 02:41:726 (6) - at x:64 and 02:41:897 (7) - at x:304. Well it's my personal taste, just choose the flow you like. I actually like this! Kinda followed the idea you suggested here, you may want to check it out~

Perfect map, I can't pick out more things! Plz rank it. fdhdasjklfhasdjfhsjkfhdal I will, promise~

1. Combo colors: Los que tienes ahora mismo no combinan demasiado bien con tu imagen de fondo. Sobre todo para el rojo (Combo2 : 186,27,27) deberías buscar una alternativa para que se contrasten mejor las notas a la hora de jugar.

1. Le bajaría el AR/OD a 9.4. La canción no parece tan rápida como para poner 9.6. El estilo de música es bastante intenso, pero no lo suficientemente rápido. Especialmente en el segundo kiai (donde los doubles) se necesita más tiempo de reacción.
2. 00:24:412 (8) - Se podría cambiar la dirección de la curva de este slider para que el salto (7,8) sea más cómodo de jugar. Los puntos donde comienza y termina el slider están bien, pero movería el punto central para hacer el slider con la curva mirando a la izquierda.
3. 00:48:926 (4,5) - Este dash es algo inesperado justo después de esa parte tan calmada. Dejaría el HDash de después, pero intentaría reducir este dash algo para no pillar a los jugadores tan de sorpresa.
4. 00:50:125 (3,4) - Algo menor, pero para que encaje algo mejor con la música y esas notas altas propondría separar algo más esas notas. Por ejemplo (3) podría ir en x:240 y (4) en x:288 o posiciones similares.
5. 01:00:411 (5,1) - Aquí faltaría definitivamente un HDash para hacer de introducción a la siguiente sección. Valdría con uno no demasiado potente.
6. 01:59:726 (1,2,3) - No acaba de convencerme esta parte mucho. La mayoría de los HDashes del kiai los has incluido siguiendo la música de fondo pero aquí preferiste seguir la voz para incluir los HDashes. Intenta cambiar esta parte a algo parecido a esto http://puu.sh/rNf3T/1d4fff1285.jpg e incluye un (HD)dash en 02:00:069 - .
7. 02:23:726 (3) - Es un caso parecido al del primer slider mencionado. Intenta que la curve mire hacia la derecha esta vez para mejorar el movimiento del catcher.
8. 03:50:426 (8,9) - Cuidado con este 1/8 HDash, ya que es bastante inesperado y potente. El slider (9) se podría mover a x:304 aproximadamente, y para compensar un poco habría que mover (10) algo más a la derecha a x:352 más o menos.

Deif wrote:

mod4mod:

[General]

1. Combo colors: Los que tienes ahora mismo no combinan demasiado bien con tu imagen de fondo. Sobre todo para el rojo (Combo2 : 186,27,27) deberías buscar una alternativa para que se contrasten mejor las notas a la hora de jugar. Los hice mas vividos, no se si funcione pero creo que se contrastan un poco mas

[BLACK TEMPEST]

1. Le bajaría el AR/OD a 9.4. La canción no parece tan rápida como para poner 9.6. El estilo de música es bastante intenso, pero no lo suficientemente rápido. Especialmente en el segundo kiai (donde los doubles) se necesita más tiempo de reacción. Supongo que podria bajarlo a 9.5, pero hasta ahi.
2. 00:24:412 (8) - Se podría cambiar la dirección de la curva de este slider para que el salto (7,8) sea más cómodo de jugar. Los puntos donde comienza y termina el slider están bien, pero movería el punto central para hacer el slider con la curva mirando a la izquierda. Hecho.
3. 00:48:926 (4,5) - Este dash es algo inesperado justo después de esa parte tan calmada. Dejaría el HDash de después, pero intentaría reducir este dash algo para no pillar a los jugadores tan de sorpresa. Bajé la distancia del dash a 1.5x
4. 00:50:125 (3,4) - Algo menor, pero para que encaje algo mejor con la música y esas notas altas propondría separar algo más esas notas. Por ejemplo (3) podría ir en x:240 y (4) en x:288 o posiciones similares. Hice bastantes cambios con el conjunto de notas 00:49:783 (1,2,3,4) - , deberias echarle un vistazo ahora.
5. 01:00:411 (5,1) - Aquí faltaría definitivamente un HDash para hacer de introducción a la siguiente sección. Valdría con uno no demasiado potente. Hecho.
6. 01:59:726 (1,2,3) - No acaba de convencerme esta parte mucho. La mayoría de los HDashes del kiai los has incluido siguiendo la música de fondo pero aquí preferiste seguir la voz para incluir los HDashes. Intenta cambiar esta parte a algo parecido a esto http://puu.sh/rNf3T/1d4fff1285.jpg e incluye un (HD)dash en 02:00:069 - . En realidad, en esta parte no seguí la voz para incluirlos, si no que seguí el mismo patron que estaba siguiendo en partes como en 01:48:754 (1,2,3,4) - o como 01:37:783 (1,2,3,4,5) - . Nunca seguí la voz en ningun momento, creo yo.
7. 02:23:726 (3) - Es un caso parecido al del primer slider mencionado. Intenta que la curve mire hacia la derecha esta vez para mejorar el movimiento del catcher. Este slider lo hice curvado en una direccion que hiciera anti-flow con el movimiento de izquierda a derecha propuesto por el anterior slider, debido a la fuerza del sonido de "trueno" prolongado en 02:23:040 (1) - y de los platillos en 02:23:726 - , y preferiria mantenerlo asi.
8. 03:50:426 (8,9) - Cuidado con este 1/8 HDash, ya que es bastante inesperado y potente. El slider (9) se podría mover a x:304 aproximadamente, y para compensar un poco habría que mover (10) algo más a la derecha a x:352 más o menos. Apliqué mas o menos tu sugerencia de mover el slider (9) a una posicion mas cercana a la nota anterior, pero en vez de x:304 lo movi a x:338, y en cuanto a (10), decidi moverlo a x:48 para mantener el HDash que habia anteriormente. Le hice ctrl+h al resto del mapa para que se pueda conectar

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Unas últimas palabras con respecto a los 1/8 HDash del primer kiai: No están nada mal y se dejan jugar bien, pero me sorprendió que algunas partes similares como 01:46:697 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - o 02:08:983 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - se dejaran esos beats sin mapear para tener 1/4 HDashes. Quizá quieras agregar (o quitar) notas en ese kiai para que sea más consistente, pero es decisión tuya. Por ahora preferiria mantenerlos asi, aunque quiza agregue un par en esos sitios que dices que me dejé sin mapear para mantener la consistencia y eso.

Avísame cuando hayas revisado el mod para que le eche otro vistazo! Claro! Dentro de un ratito te aviso, voy a estar aplicando los cambios.

MMBan wrote:

Requested
Actualy one of maps that somewhat i like to play. But can't pass as i die before first kiai part

01:05:879 (3,4,1) - 3. Slider end to x448 y132 . 4. Slider end to x112 y 128 . This makes better to play a bit. 1 x412 to avoid somewhat unwanted droplet drops. Left the (3) and (4) sliders as they were before, no need to change them. Moved (1) as you requested tho.
01:13:097 (1) - Too far for me to catch 2. x420 eh... 2 is only 1.50x distance away? and you're basically telling me that I should ctrl+h (2) and probably all the remaining pattern after that, so... nope :s
01:58:869 (3) - Only suggestion. move to x296 and slider end to x260 y160 . To keep somewhat flow and not stop on dis one slider ;s I could probably consider this in the future if somebody else requests something similar, but as for now it's staying like it is. The purpose of this was to break flow actually, the two "thunder" sounds that 01:58:697 (2,3) - represent are somewhat strong and a flow-breaking movement was the most fitting thing I could think of.
02:00:240 (3) - Ctrl G to keep flow and move to x120 same reason as before. Same answer as before, flow was intended to be broken here.
02:04:354 (3) - The same like on previous 1/4 slider but there idk where to move to keep a good flow there. (previous reason as to why not to change it applies here as well)
02:38:469 (3,4) - Good idea would be to make hdash between 3 end to 4 start I don't think the sound in (4) is strong enough to suggest a HDash. Also if I did it here I would also have to do it at the other calm section of the map, which tbh... isn't really needed.
03:23:726 (3,4) - 3 x344 . 4 x456 I'm actually changing this one moving (3) to x:208, the sounds actually ask for a new HDash and that pattern I made wasn't quite fitting.
04:30:691 (1) - White line. Missing hitsound (Finisher.) Unsure about this one. Done.
04:36:069 (1) - Like above Also done.
04:41:554 (1) - ^ Also done, and actually made it consistent with the hitsounding at the beginning section of the map.

Rank this I will :>

BoberOfDarkness wrote:

BLACK TEMPEST

1. 00:19:269 (4,5,6,7) - I would re:work that stream to be a bit harder. So I have to ideas, first is to add some movement by ctrling + g the 00:19:440 (6,7) - and the secound is too divine stream into 2 doubles by placing 00:19:440 (6,7) - at x:432 (doesn't trigger hyper) or a bit futher on x:464 so the doublets would have hyperdashes Applied the first idea.
2. 00:20:983 (5) - put new combo here, the combo contains 18 fruits so that its worth reducing Done
3. 00:26:469 (5) - here the combo is shorter by one fruit but still worth placing new combo (: Also done
4. 00:29:212 (5) - and same here^ Same
5. 00:34:697 (5) - I would place NC here too ^
6. 00:40:869 (1) - NC you placed here feels not consistence with your previous new combos, you didn't put any NC at the same spots like for example 00:29:897 (9) - 00:32:640 (7) - 00:35:383 (8) - so I would not place the NC combo here too Removed.
7. 00:48:412 (3) - put NC here, the combo is not so long (16 fruits) but can be reducted Done.
8. 00:52:526 (5) - add NC here too Done.
9. 01:07:612 (4) - same^ ^
10. 01:18:583 (5) - same^ ^
11. 01:23:726 (4,5,6,7) - I would make it a bit harder by placing (5) from the left side of (4), x:256 works well Changed!
12. 01:25:097 (7,8,9,10) - this stream flows better curved (try something like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6359128&#41; Changed the pattern before these objects to make it flow better with the new curve.
13. 01:26:126 (5) - I feel that there should be new combo Done.
14. The patterns with 1/8 usage could have less fruits in their combos, so I advise you to add NC at those spots: 01:30:583 (7) -, 01:33:326 (5) -, 01:35:726 (5) -, 01:41:554 (5) -, 01:47:040 (10) - and here 02:08:983 (5) - Done.
15. 01:51:497 (5) - place new combo here Done.
16. 02:13:440 (5) - ^ Done.
17. 02:16:354 (5) - ^ Done.
18. 02:18:926 (5) - ^ Done.
19. 02:21:497 (1,2) - actually new combo should be placed at (2), there is the stronger beat and also its first note after new stanza, I would spam NC Instead of changing the nc to (2), I just added some new NCs after it as you said, no need to change the first one.
20. 02:22:697 (6,1) - Hmmm, its would be nice if both sliders could be converted to 1/8 streams, the (6) would work as 1/8 stack placed on x:384 and the (1) could be converted (using the ctrl + shift + f) to 1/8 stream. Thats how I would make that - This is a nice, beautiful idea you've got here tbh, applied!
21. 02:24:412 (5) - put NC here Done.
22. 02:27:154 (5) - ^ Done.
23. 02:30:069 (5) - ^ Done.
24. 02:32:812 (5) - ^ Done.
25. 02:33:669 (9) - instead of this I would place 1/8 stack again, that would be nice finisher of the section and fits very well I actually made it into another 1/8 curved stream, it fits even better <3
26. 02:38:126 (3) - add NC Done.
27. 02:58:354 (6,7) - I don't feel that works well as anti-flow slider. Making pattern look like that (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6359409) flows better for me. I can actually change this one.
28. 03:09:669 (1,2,3) - you could fix this like pattern I point in previous sugestion Also done.
29. 03:13:441 (3,4,5,6) - linear stream doesn't flow well for me (that works nicly http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635924&#41; Actually, based on that pattern you made on that screenshot I did something else, you may want to see it~
30. 03:13:784 (7) - this is good spot for NC Done.
31. 03:14:469 (1,2,3,4) - same with that stream (try something like this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6359235&&#41; :>
32. 03:17:554 (4) - this would work great as introdution to kiai time if you convert that slider to 1/8 stream (using the ctrl + shift + f) jfc I love it now~
33. 03:50:383 (7,8,9) - sorry I have to admit that pattern doesn't look well. I would use instead that placment http://puu.sh/rOlc4/bfc9cedf6d.jpg Done.
34. 03:59:041 (1,2,3) - thats flow better with that placement https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6359504 Done! you're not a fan of linear stuff aren't cha
35. 04:23:726 - add inherited point with 80% vol. This section sounds exactly the same as the one in the beginning, so I think I'm gonna go with a different volume gradient than the one you're suggesting below.
36. 04:34:697 - here with 70%^ Made it with 60%
37. 04:45:669 - here with 60%^ Made it with 40%
38. 04:31:612 (4,5,6,7) - that could be divended into 2 doublets with hypers since 04:31:784 (6) - is actually strong beat Done.
39. 04:37:098 (3,4,5,6) - curve this stream a little bit One linear stream wouldn't hurt too much, right?
40. 04:42:584 (4,5,6,7) - maybe again try with 2 x hypered-doubles (try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6359517&#41; Done.
41. 04:53:555 (4,5,6,7) - and maybe anti-flow pattern with hypers here? (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6359538) I'm gonna go with a different one for now, but that aside, applied.

I love that map <3 I do too <3

good luck with that

catch my star :^) o.o which one?

Xinely wrote:

oh i tried i could testplay this so placeholder. i will mod when im not stress anymore