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Pet na Kanojotachi - Kimi ga Yume o Tsuretekita
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Hello! m4m here.
I feel like I suggest lots of lots of subjective opinions so please ignore them if you don't think like it is.
And Please forgive my bad English t.t
[General]
* seeing that strong pink after somewhat grassy green color feels awkward to me.
imo, this greeny color doesn't match well with pink. http://puu.sh/sGSVy/bf3547fe62.jpg
so how about rearranging combo color like this? (the default combo color is also red-yellow-green-blue)
* lowering hs volume at intro section would be nice. (except easy)
* Is there any reason to use S:C11? lo
It's pretty much same with the default soft one except the sliderslide,
and that sliderslide only affects 00:14:032 - at normal & 00:42:476 - at hard, which I still think it's unnecessary.
[Easy]
* 00:02:254 (3) - seems a bit awkward. maybe rotate anti-clockwise a bit
http://puu.sh/sGN78/4ead16c172.jpg
http://puu.sh/sGN4H/d24f3dfe0e.jpg
* 01:18:254 (4,1) - swap NC to make 2/1 slider to be combo#2? like other ones 01:04:921 (2) - etc
* 01:04:921 (2) - how about normal-hitfinish at sliderhead?
since it's a long slider unlike other diffs so I think using that rather than following drum would be cool.
* 01:26:254 (2) - move to somewhere around x296 y357?
01:25:810 (1,2) - this flow feels somewhat unnatural compared to other similar ones.
01:04:476 (1,2) - 01:11:588 (1,2) - 01:15:143 (1,2) - 01:22:254 (1,2) -
[Normal]
* 00:17:810 (5,6) - convert this to a slider for consistency with 00:10:699 (5) -
The only other part that has 2 circles in a row is 01:16:254 (2,3) - , which is waaay more intense.
* 00:27:143 (3) - maybe curve more like this? : http://puu.sh/sGPqs/c7f061f54a.jpg
for better look with 00:26:699 (2) -
* 00:32:476 (1,2) - not perfectly symmetrical, quite noticable. http://puu.sh/sGPwc/a2b2c5c0e6.jpg
* 00:39:143 (6) - maybe move a bit downwards? to make linear flow with 00:38:476 (5) -
or move a bit upwards like 00:45:588 (5,6) - if you don't want linear movement.
Current one feels unfinished/grey(?) hope you somehow understand my poor english explanation.
* 00:54:699 (3) - why not reversing one?
* 00:58:032 (2) - avoid overlap.
or overlap even more like 00:48:921 (5,6) - this.
http://puu.sh/sGQ24/3ad429a715.jpg
* kinda weird to miss vocal sound here 00:58:921 - . maybe make 00:58:699 (3) - this into a 1/2 slider?
I think making 00:57:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this whole part to be continuable sliders would be better.
since the same vowel sound "i" or "ee" (日/nichi) lasts from 00:58:699 - to 00:59:143 -
* 01:22:921 (2,3) - & 01:26:476 (2,3) - maybe stack? I think the two "spaced clickables with 1/2 gap" in a row doesn't match the intensity of the song of that part.
[Hard]
* 00:00:921 (2) - maybe use the exact same one with 00:00:477 (1) -
by ctrl+c,v 00:00:477 (1) - and then ctrl +h,j
* 00:02:254 (1,2) - same as above
* 00:07:143 (4) - I agree what Karen wrote. 3/4 works better imo.
* 00:37:810 (1,2) - same as 00:00:477 (1,2) -
* 00:44:921 (1) - this stack feels a bit ugly to me. how about making a triangle?
something like this maybe? : http://puu.sh/sGRYL/b8a65e87e3.jpg
* 00:48:476 (1,2,3) - maybe change like this? for aesthetic reason
current one : http://puu.sh/sGSbZ/d0e515230e.jpg
suggestion : http://puu.sh/sGS8H/7793a3bf65.jpg
* 01:02:699 (1,2,3,4) - this is very similar pattern with 00:05:810 (1,2,3,4) - , but there is a vocal sound (を/wo) at 01:04:254 -.
so how about making 01:04:032 (4) - into a straight slider? (not curved one)
[Insane]
* 01:02:254 (4) - wish this had more sppacing, since 01:01:810 (3,4) - their sliderheads are pretty close.
* 01:18:476 (1) - maybe NC?
That's all!
Nice song & Beautiful map! especially pkhg's one! GL
!
I feel like I suggest lots of lots of subjective opinions so please ignore them if you don't think like it is.
And Please forgive my bad English t.t
[General]
* seeing that strong pink after somewhat grassy green color feels awkward to me.
imo, this greeny color doesn't match well with pink. http://puu.sh/sGSVy/bf3547fe62.jpg
so how about rearranging combo color like this? (the default combo color is also red-yellow-green-blue)
[Colours]
Combo1 : 165,37,233
Combo2 : 234,0,117
Combo3 : 250,196,10
Combo4 : 0,166,83
Combo5 : 0,114,253
* lowering hs volume at intro section would be nice. (except easy)
* Is there any reason to use S:C11? lo
It's pretty much same with the default soft one except the sliderslide,
and that sliderslide only affects 00:14:032 - at normal & 00:42:476 - at hard, which I still think it's unnecessary.
[Easy]
* 00:02:254 (3) - seems a bit awkward. maybe rotate anti-clockwise a bit
http://puu.sh/sGN78/4ead16c172.jpg
http://puu.sh/sGN4H/d24f3dfe0e.jpg
* 01:18:254 (4,1) - swap NC to make 2/1 slider to be combo#2? like other ones 01:04:921 (2) - etc
* 01:04:921 (2) - how about normal-hitfinish at sliderhead?
since it's a long slider unlike other diffs so I think using that rather than following drum would be cool.
* 01:26:254 (2) - move to somewhere around x296 y357?
01:25:810 (1,2) - this flow feels somewhat unnatural compared to other similar ones.
01:04:476 (1,2) - 01:11:588 (1,2) - 01:15:143 (1,2) - 01:22:254 (1,2) -
[Normal]
* 00:17:810 (5,6) - convert this to a slider for consistency with 00:10:699 (5) -
The only other part that has 2 circles in a row is 01:16:254 (2,3) - , which is waaay more intense.
* 00:27:143 (3) - maybe curve more like this? : http://puu.sh/sGPqs/c7f061f54a.jpg
for better look with 00:26:699 (2) -
* 00:32:476 (1,2) - not perfectly symmetrical, quite noticable. http://puu.sh/sGPwc/a2b2c5c0e6.jpg
* 00:39:143 (6) - maybe move a bit downwards? to make linear flow with 00:38:476 (5) -
or move a bit upwards like 00:45:588 (5,6) - if you don't want linear movement.
Current one feels unfinished/grey(?) hope you somehow understand my poor english explanation.
* 00:54:699 (3) - why not reversing one?
* 00:58:032 (2) - avoid overlap.
or overlap even more like 00:48:921 (5,6) - this.
http://puu.sh/sGQ24/3ad429a715.jpg
* kinda weird to miss vocal sound here 00:58:921 - . maybe make 00:58:699 (3) - this into a 1/2 slider?
I think making 00:57:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this whole part to be continuable sliders would be better.
since the same vowel sound "i" or "ee" (日/nichi) lasts from 00:58:699 - to 00:59:143 -
* 01:22:921 (2,3) - & 01:26:476 (2,3) - maybe stack? I think the two "spaced clickables with 1/2 gap" in a row doesn't match the intensity of the song of that part.
[Hard]
* 00:00:921 (2) - maybe use the exact same one with 00:00:477 (1) -
by ctrl+c,v 00:00:477 (1) - and then ctrl +h,j
* 00:02:254 (1,2) - same as above
* 00:07:143 (4) - I agree what Karen wrote. 3/4 works better imo.
* 00:37:810 (1,2) - same as 00:00:477 (1,2) -
* 00:44:921 (1) - this stack feels a bit ugly to me. how about making a triangle?
something like this maybe? : http://puu.sh/sGRYL/b8a65e87e3.jpg
* 00:48:476 (1,2,3) - maybe change like this? for aesthetic reason
current one : http://puu.sh/sGSbZ/d0e515230e.jpg
suggestion : http://puu.sh/sGS8H/7793a3bf65.jpg
* 01:02:699 (1,2,3,4) - this is very similar pattern with 00:05:810 (1,2,3,4) - , but there is a vocal sound (を/wo) at 01:04:254 -.
so how about making 01:04:032 (4) - into a straight slider? (not curved one)
[Insane]
* 01:02:254 (4) - wish this had more sppacing, since 01:01:810 (3,4) - their sliderheads are pretty close.
* 01:18:476 (1) - maybe NC?
That's all!
Nice song & Beautiful map! especially pkhg's one! GL
!hey, here for m4m
sorry if the mod didn't help !
good luck with the map !
Normal
00:48:476 (4,5) - make repeater here? then put a circle 00:48:476 (4) ?
01:02:699 (3) - maybe shorten slider to 01:03:810 then add slider 01:04:032 ?
01:02:699 (3) - maybe shorten slider to 01:03:810 then add slider 01:04:032 ?
Hard
00:17:365 (4,5,1) - maybe move 00:18:032 (5) to blanket with 00:18:254 (1) - , like this ?,
00:36:032 (1) - break this up ? put a circle at 00:36:032 and add slider at 00:36:254
00:45:365 (2,3) - imo looks ugly
00:36:032 (1) - break this up ? put a circle at 00:36:032 and add slider at 00:36:254
00:45:365 (2,3) - imo looks ugly
pkhg Insane
00:06:699 (1) - closer than the rest of the stream to 00:05:810 (1,2,3,4,5) . imo this makes the stream look a little bad
00:14:254 (5) - make to more to 00:14:032 (4) ? for example, might move it to x:138 , y:168
01:01:810 (3) - maybe move it away from 01:00:921 (1) like this
00:14:254 (5) - make to more to 00:14:032 (4) ? for example, might move it to x:138 , y:168
01:01:810 (3) - maybe move it away from 01:00:921 (1) like this
sorry if the mod didn't help !
good luck with the map !
Topic Starter
gave kudosu, i'll answer and get at your maps asap
thanks
thanks
fixed stuff will reply properly soon
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TitleUnicode:君が夢を連れてきた
Artist:Pet na Kanojotachi
ArtistUnicode:ペットな彼女たち
Creator:Underforest
Version:pkhg's Insane
Source:さくら荘のペットな彼女
Tags:TV Size opening Sakurasou no Pet Petto na Kanojo Ai Kayano Mariko Nakatsu Takamori Natsumi 茅野愛衣 中津真莉子 高森奈津美 IamKwaN pkhg
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321,346,34254,6,0,P|287:344|253:339,1,68.0000012969971,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,249,34699,1,10,0:0:0:0:
303,195,34921,2,0,P|301:228|296:262,1,68.0000012969971,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,333,35365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,167,35588,1,12,0:0:0:0:
206,167,36032,6,0,P|243:158|286:154,1,71.9999978027344,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,237,36476,2,0,P|75:228|32:224,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,333,36921,2,0,P|226:289|292:309,1,143.999995605469,10|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
409,357,37588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
414,343,37699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
417,328,37810,6,0,P|413:293|404:258,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,177,38254,1,10,0:1:0:0:
417,115,38476,2,0,P|452:119|487:128,1,71.9999978027344,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,177,38921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,30,39143,2,0,P|247:64|243:100,1,71.9999978027344,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,163,39476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,177,39588,6,0,P|321:211|325:247,1,71.9999978027344,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,325,40032,2,0,P|202:315|166:311,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,384,40476,2,0,P|63:316|49:229,1,143.999995605469,10|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
14,110,41143,1,2,0:0:0:0:
27,105,41254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
43,102,41365,6,0,P|78:106|113:115,1,71.9999978027344,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,207,41810,1,8,0:1:0:0:
257,104,42032,2,0,L|250:20,1,71.9999978027344,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,207,42476,1,10,0:0:0:0:
323,154,42699,2,0,P|357:144|393:140,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,176,43032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
489,193,43143,6,0,P|499:227|503:263,1,71.9999978027344,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,337,43588,2,0,L|314:325,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,224,44032,2,0,P|121:204|68:248,1,143.999995605469,10|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
242,300,44699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,288,44810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,275,44921,6,0,P|267:240|270:204,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,88,45365,1,10,0:1:0:0:
114,190,45588,2,0,P|149:186|184:175,1,71.9999978027344,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,88,46032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,218,46254,2,0,P|305:214|270:203,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,161,46588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,153,46699,6,0,P|132:156|97:167,1,71.9999978027344,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,276,47143,1,8,0:1:0:0:
269,168,47365,2,0,P|266:132|255:96,1,71.9999978027344,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,54,47810,1,2,0:0:0:0:
283,13,48032,2,0,L|366:22,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,77,48365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
437,92,48476,6,0,P|447:126|450:162,1,71.9999978027344,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,262,48921,1,10,0:1:0:0:
284,190,49143,2,0,P|248:194|213:202,1,71.9999978027344,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,262,49588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,162,49810,1,10,1:2:0:0:
311,94,50032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,106,50143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,119,50254,6,0,P|286:154|283:190,1,71.9999978027344,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,262,50699,2,0,P|391:297|394:333,1,71.9999978027344,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,354,51143,2,0,P|242:346|206:343,1,71.9999978027344,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,384,51588,1,8,0:1:0:0:
31,274,51810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
26,259,51921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
23,244,52032,6,0,P|27:208|36:173,1,71.9999978027344,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,103,52476,2,0,L|210:96,1,71.9999978027344,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,149,52921,1,2,0:0:0:0:
347,66,53143,1,10,0:0:0:0:
203,96,53365,2,0,P|193:130|189:166,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,240,53699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,53810,6,0,P|274:265|310:269,1,71.9999978027344,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,213,54254,2,0,P|443:203|479:199,1,71.9999978027344,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,125,54699,2,0,P|304:115|268:111,1,71.9999978027344,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,161,55143,1,8,0:1:0:0:
239,15,55365,1,2,0:0:0:0:
249,27,55476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,40,55587,6,0,P|265:75|268:111,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,161,56032,2,0,P|149:196|147:231,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,326,56476,2,0,L|301:332,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,231,56921,2,0,L|75:236,1,71.9999978027344,10|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,142,57365,6,0,P|298:102|369:127,1,143.999995605469,12|10,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
435,203,58032,2,0,B|409:163|409:163|421:61,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,0,58699,1,10,0:1:0:0:
420,67,58921,1,2,0:0:0:0:
405,71,59032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,74,59143,6,0,P|354:69|319:60,1,71.9999978027344,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,0,59588,2,0,P|182:4|147:13,1,71.9999978027344,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,114,60032,2,0,L|77:195,1,71.9999978027344,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,298,60476,1,8,0:1:0:0:
230,226,60699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,222,60810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,219,60921,6,0,P|296:224|331:233,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,271,61365,2,0,P|445:279|409:284,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,152,61810,2,0,P|384:143|420:138,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,88,62254,2,0,P|217:79|181:74,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,139,62699,5,2,0:0:0:0:
31,171,62810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
37,206,62921,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,233,63032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,243,63143,2,0,L|146:235,3,35.9999989013672,2|0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,185,63588,5,2,0:0:0:0:
221,170,63699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,63810,1,2,0:0:0:0:
283,199,63921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,233,64032,2,0,P|291:268|285:304,1,71.9999978027344,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,369,64365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,374,64476,6,0,P|137:368|98:358,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,247,64921,1,10,0:1:0:0:
146,189,65143,2,0,P|156:227|161:267,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,355,65588,2,0,P|287:315|297:276,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
393,187,66032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
397,172,66143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,157,66254,6,0,P|394:117|384:78,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,37,66699,1,10,0:1:0:0:
217,153,66921,2,0,P|178:162|138:167,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,83,67365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,3,67588,2,0,P|152:41|158:81,1,80,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,167,67921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
119,183,68032,6,0,P|109:221|103:261,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,368,68476,1,10,0:1:0:0:
271,290,68699,2,0,P|309:281|349:276,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,192,69143,2,0,P|462:153|467:113,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
353,11,69588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
349,25,69699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,41,69810,6,0,P|352:81|362:120,1,80,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,192,70254,1,8,0:1:0:0:
339,207,70476,2,0,P|299:211|260:220,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,321,70921,1,2,0:0:0:0:
105,222,71143,2,0,P|110:182|120:143,1,80,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,72,71476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,59,71588,6,0,P|229:49|269:43,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,127,72032,1,10,0:1:0:0:
473,81,72254,2,0,P|482:42|488:3,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,127,72699,2,0,P|360:166|370:205,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
464,331,73143,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,322,73254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
438,314,73365,6,0,P|398:305|358:302,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,365,73810,1,10,0:1:0:0:
178,265,74032,2,0,P|169:225|166:185,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,90,74476,1,2,0:0:0:0:
333,199,74699,2,0,P|294:207|254:210,1,80,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,186,75032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,171,75143,6,0,P|105:162|65:159,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,265,75588,1,10,0:1:0:0:
243,137,75810,2,0,P|281:128|321:125,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,183,76254,1,2,0:0:0:0:
495,81,76476,2,0,P|491:41|483:3,1,80,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,46,76921,6,0,P|312:85|320:124,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,183,77365,1,10,0:1:0:0:
495,81,77588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,124,77810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
437,190,78032,5,2,0:0:0:0:
437,190,78143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
437,190,78254,1,10,0:1:0:0:
370,40,78476,1,2,0:0:0:0:
370,40,78587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,40,78698,1,10,0:0:0:0:
495,81,78921,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,124,79143,6,0,P|280:120|241:112,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,33,79588,2,0,P|95:36|56:44,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
18,149,80032,1,8,0:1:0:0:
150,194,80254,6,0,P|158:233|161:272,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,367,80699,1,2,0:0:0:0:
18,297,80921,1,10,0:1:0:0:
18,297,81032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
18,297,81143,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,272,81365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
106,367,81588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
246,297,81810,2,0,P|242:257|234:218,1,80,10|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,153,82143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,125,82254,6,0,P|157:85|165:46,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,87,82699,1,10,0:1:0:0:
324,87,82921,2,0,L|245:94,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,143,83365,1,2,0:0:0:0:
234,218,83588,2,0,P|273:214|312:206,1,80,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,149,83921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,141,84032,6,0,P|440:145|479:153,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,213,84476,1,10,0:1:0:0:
320,213,84588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,213,84699,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,62,84921,2,0,P|396:101|400:141,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,263,85365,1,10,0:1:0:0:
240,166,85588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
227,156,85699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,148,85810,6,0,P|174:139|134:134,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,231,86254,1,10,0:1:0:0:
172,295,86476,2,0,P|168:255|160:216,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,140,86921,1,2,0:0:0:0:
149,50,87143,2,0,P|188:41|227:36,1,80,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,119,87588,6,0,P|389:158|449:145,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,86,88254,2,0,B|449:57|405:86|405:86|379:41|332:47,1,180.000006866455,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
So very short mod, only minor changes.
KwaN's Easy
00:04:921 (2) - make this upside down?
pkhg's Insane... which is hard
00:04:921 (2) - ^
Needs to be above 3.75 stars, to be Insane.
Yay, no kudosu for short mod.
KwaN's Easy
00:04:921 (2) - make this upside down?
pkhg's Insane... which is hard
00:04:921 (2) - ^
Needs to be above 3.75 stars, to be Insane.
Yay, no kudosu for short mod.
its mapped like an insane pl S
Topic Starter
Hola.
Bueno, en realidad lo fui a mirar, pero sí se nota mucho que lo mapeaste cuando estabas más nub ^^U
so... remap pls, no kudo n.n
Good luck! n.n
Bueno, en realidad lo fui a mirar, pero sí se nota mucho que lo mapeaste cuando estabas más nub ^^U
so... remap pls, no kudo n.n
La diff de kwan está bien.
La de pkhg también aunque muy repetitiva, pienso que se puede mejorar.
Las dos tuyas definitivamente necesitan un rework, porque de verdad no tienen una estructura clara... se ven y se sienten desordenadas. Me gusta mucho la canción, pero piensa en que por lo menos debe de tener tanta calidad como la tiene el mapa rankeado de Fumika (https://osu.ppy.sh/b/200746).
La de pkhg también aunque muy repetitiva, pienso que se puede mejorar.
Las dos tuyas definitivamente necesitan un rework, porque de verdad no tienen una estructura clara... se ven y se sienten desordenadas. Me gusta mucho la canción, pero piensa en que por lo menos debe de tener tanta calidad como la tiene el mapa rankeado de Fumika (https://osu.ppy.sh/b/200746).
Good luck! n.n
Topic Starter
he tratado de rediseñarlas un poco, aunque la verdad pienso que ya es rankeable en el estado que está la normal; la hard remapee el kiai y rediseñe la estructura
ya entonces si la remapeo xd
wait pls
wait pls
hi
general
i don't really feel like the combo colors blend together too well, mayhttps://osu.ppy.sh/p/packlistbe try sticking more to thinned out colors rather than bright blue, purple, yellow etc.
hitsounds
01:19:143 - the hs on here feels a bit too strong for me, but thats just personal
insane
looks good
hard
01:18:699 (1,2) - you don't really use any other stacks like this anywhere so it feels kinda out of place
01:25:587 (6,7,1) - stacking kinda messes up visual spacing here
rest looks good too
general
i don't really feel like the combo colors blend together too well, mayhttps://osu.ppy.sh/p/packlistbe try sticking more to thinned out colors rather than bright blue, purple, yellow etc.
hitsounds
01:19:143 - the hs on here feels a bit too strong for me, but thats just personal
insane
looks good
hard
01:18:699 (1,2) - you don't really use any other stacks like this anywhere so it feels kinda out of place
01:25:587 (6,7,1) - stacking kinda messes up visual spacing here
rest looks good too
Topic Starter
fixed all from my part, hitsound there shouldn't update that part as the clap is to give some emphasis. To fix combo colors I just increased their brightness and added red, should also look OK with the video.
insane
00:07:032 (4) - should highlight the different sound here. something like http://puu.sh/AbSPP/fb7ff7be1f.png would work idk. anything to separate it mapping-wise from 00:05:810 (1,2,3,4,5) - is ok
00:50:032 - switching to slightly lower sv would be nice. current section is less intense than previous, but mapping wise that isnt really clear. even the .85x change from earlier would be better than nothing lol
01:18:698 (6,7,1) - would make the pause more prominent by different design somehow. smaller spacing between 6 and 7 coudl do that, or a low sv slider, or uh something else. lots of options
hard
00:42:254 (3,4,5) - should go with a rhythm that gives importance to the red tick clap stuff. weird to use normal rhythm structure when song has a noticeable difference. possibility: http://puu.sh/AbSZi/d457160c51.jpg -- 00:27:810 (2) - is ok imo, though it could follow clap things more closely still
01:05:143 (2,3,4) - 01:12:254 (2,3,4) - rhythm like 01:19:365 (2,3) - would be nice. same thing musically and they'd fit with the rest of the map's vocal-based rhythms (01:06:921 (3) - 01:08:699 (3) - etc)
01:25:811 (1,2,3) - would follow same vocal stuff as 01:22:254 (1,2,3) - with emphasis on 01:26:476 - . they're practically repeating the same phrase
easy
01:18:254 (4) - should increase tail volume. it can be quieter than surrounding stuff, but having no feedback sucks for scrubs
callback
00:07:032 (4) - should highlight the different sound here. something like http://puu.sh/AbSPP/fb7ff7be1f.png would work idk. anything to separate it mapping-wise from 00:05:810 (1,2,3,4,5) - is ok
00:50:032 - switching to slightly lower sv would be nice. current section is less intense than previous, but mapping wise that isnt really clear. even the .85x change from earlier would be better than nothing lol
01:18:698 (6,7,1) - would make the pause more prominent by different design somehow. smaller spacing between 6 and 7 coudl do that, or a low sv slider, or uh something else. lots of options
hard
00:42:254 (3,4,5) - should go with a rhythm that gives importance to the red tick clap stuff. weird to use normal rhythm structure when song has a noticeable difference. possibility: http://puu.sh/AbSZi/d457160c51.jpg -- 00:27:810 (2) - is ok imo, though it could follow clap things more closely still
01:05:143 (2,3,4) - 01:12:254 (2,3,4) - rhythm like 01:19:365 (2,3) - would be nice. same thing musically and they'd fit with the rest of the map's vocal-based rhythms (01:06:921 (3) - 01:08:699 (3) - etc)
01:25:811 (1,2,3) - would follow same vocal stuff as 01:22:254 (1,2,3) - with emphasis on 01:26:476 - . they're practically repeating the same phrase
easy
01:18:254 (4) - should increase tail volume. it can be quieter than surrounding stuff, but having no feedback sucks for scrubs
callback
Topic Starter
fixed my part
gonna wait for KwaN and pkhg
additionally, gonna post a reply to a fix of sml and latias' mods that i forgot to post like 2 years ago lol
gonna wait for KwaN and pkhg
additionally, gonna post a reply to a fix of sml and latias' mods that i forgot to post like 2 years ago lol
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SLM wrote:
* seeing that strong pink after somewhat grassy green color feels awkward to me.
imo, this greeny color doesn't match well with pink. http://puu.sh/sGSVy/bf3547fe62.jpg
so how about rearranging combo color like this? (the default combo color is also red-yellow-green-blue)
colors were changed to anothers when map was reworked[Colours]
Combo1 : 165,37,233
Combo2 : 234,0,117
Combo3 : 250,196,10
Combo4 : 0,166,83
Combo5 : 0,114,253
* lowering hs volume at intro section would be nice. (except easy) i prefer to don't
* Is there any reason to use S:C11? lo
It's pretty much same with the default soft one except the sliderslide,
and that sliderslide only affects 00:14:032 - at normal & 00:42:476 - at hard, which I still think it's unnecessary.
yes, to keep equal hitsounds for custom skins because default hitsounds fits the song overall. also yeah, fixed sliderslide because it is too noisy :/
[Normal]
* 00:17:810 (5,6) - convert this to a slider for consistency with 00:10:699 (5) -
The only other part that has 2 circles in a row is 01:16:254 (2,3) - , which is waaay more intense. fixed in the rework
* 00:27:143 (3) - maybe curve more like this? : http://puu.sh/sGPqs/c7f061f54a.jpg
for better look with 00:26:699 (2) - a) cannot see the puush / b) nope, linear flow is cool for pitch consistency
* 00:32:476 (1,2) - not perfectly symmetrical, quite noticable. http://puu.sh/sGPwc/a2b2c5c0e6.jpg cannot, it would overlap the third slider
* 00:39:143 (6) - maybe move a bit downwards? to make linear flow with 00:38:476 (5) -
or move a bit upwards like 00:45:588 (5,6) - if you don't want linear movement.
Current one feels unfinished/grey(?) hope you somehow understand my poor english explanation. fixed in the rework
* 00:54:699 (3) - why not reversing one? ^
* 00:58:032 (2) - avoid overlap. ^
or overlap even more like 00:48:921 (5,6) - this.
http://puu.sh/sGQ24/3ad429a715.jpg
* kinda weird to miss vocal sound here 00:58:921 - . maybe make 00:58:699 (3) - this into a 1/2 slider?
I think making 00:57:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this whole part to be continuable sliders would be better.
since the same vowel sound "i" or "ee" (日/nichi) lasts from 00:58:699 - to 00:59:143 - i don't want to break the consistency the map currently has
* 01:22:921 (2,3) - & 01:26:476 (2,3) - maybe stack? I think the two "spaced clickables with 1/2 gap" in a row doesn't match the intensity of the song of that part. yes they do, also i wouldn't prefer to stack it or newbies couldn't see the circle easily
[Hard]
* 00:00:921 (2) - maybe use the exact same one with 00:00:477 (1) - fixed in the rework
by ctrl+c,v 00:00:477 (1) - and then ctrl +h,j
* 00:02:254 (1,2) - same as above ^
* 00:07:143 (4) - I agree what Karen wrote. 3/4 works better imo. want to do a light rhythm break here
* 00:37:810 (1,2) - same as 00:00:477 (1,2) - ^^
* 00:44:921 (1) - this stack feels a bit ugly to me. how about making a triangle?
something like this maybe? : http://puu.sh/sGRYL/b8a65e87e3.jpg did another flow instead
* 00:48:476 (1,2,3) - maybe change like this? for aesthetic reason
current one : http://puu.sh/sGSbZ/d0e515230e.jpg
suggestion : http://puu.sh/sGS8H/7793a3bf65.jpg done
* 01:02:699 (1,2,3,4) - this is very similar pattern with 00:05:810 (1,2,3,4) - , but there is a vocal sound (を/wo) at 01:04:254 -.
so how about making 01:04:032 (4) - into a straight slider? (not curved one) following vocals already
-Latias- wrote:
hey, here for m4m
Normal
00:48:476 (4,5) - make repeater here? then put a circle 00:48:476 (4) ? following vocals, そこ and じゃない respectively
01:02:699 (3) - maybe shorten slider to 01:03:810 then add slider 01:04:032 ? following music
Hard
00:17:365 (4,5,1) - maybe move 00:18:032 (5) to blanket with 00:18:254 (1) - , like this ?,
00:36:032 (1) - break this up ? put a circle at 00:36:032 and add slider at 00:36:254 fixed with a remap of this section before
00:45:365 (2,3) - imo looks ugly that's not a helpful comment to determine an issue
sorry if the mod didn't help !
good luck with the map !
Hytex: its flow is supposed to be contrasting with the first half of 00:05:810 (3) - , so nahSLM wrote:
* 00:02:254 (3) - seems a bit awkward. maybe rotate anti-clockwise a bit not sure in what sense you mean by awkward
* 01:18:254 (4,1) - swap NC to make 2/1 slider to be combo#2? like other ones 01:04:921 (2) - etc i guess my intention was to keep the combo starting at large white bar, or the next object if previous one ends on large white bar
* 01:04:921 (2) - how about normal-hitfinish at sliderhead? music doesn't feel the same as the next stanza
since it's a long slider unlike other diffs so I think using that rather than following drum would be cool.
* 01:26:254 (2) - move to somewhere around x296 y357?
01:25:810 (1,2) - this flow feels somewhat unnatural compared to other similar ones. ok
pishi: increased to 20%
thanks
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ill remap
see u next year!
see u next year!
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Topic Starter
pishifat wrote:
f
done
pk posted in q
uwu kawaii song aaaaaaa
[General]
soft-sliderslide3.wav is unused, If you don't plan on using it, remove it
hit sound volumes in the normal and hard could be a bit more dynamic for calm vs kiai sections
[Kwan]
diff is missing video :c
[pk]
why go rebel on the combo colours lo, the variety the other diffs have are nice but this is fine too so up to you
00:24:254 (4) - , 00:31:365 (4) - ok, tbh im not a fan of this blue tick vocal following sliders thing but its fine, what worries me is why its inconsistent with how you did 00:51:365 (5,4) - which is a really similar for following vocals but you mapped them to red instead of holding them for their full vocal length especially when there is actually sound to support blue for them here...?
These would make more sense if you mapped them to blue to be consistent with how you did them in the previous section, either that or make the first section ones to red which i think would be much intuitive to play game play wise
Aside from that, looks good, you can poke me to recheck if you want, i saw pishi asked for a call back tho so mb check with him first and then ask me
uwu kawaii song aaaaaaa
[General]
soft-sliderslide3.wav is unused, If you don't plan on using it, remove it
hit sound volumes in the normal and hard could be a bit more dynamic for calm vs kiai sections
[Kwan]
diff is missing video :c
[pk]
why go rebel on the combo colours lo, the variety the other diffs have are nice but this is fine too so up to you
00:24:254 (4) - , 00:31:365 (4) - ok, tbh im not a fan of this blue tick vocal following sliders thing but its fine, what worries me is why its inconsistent with how you did 00:51:365 (5,4) - which is a really similar for following vocals but you mapped them to red instead of holding them for their full vocal length especially when there is actually sound to support blue for them here...?
These would make more sense if you mapped them to blue to be consistent with how you did them in the previous section, either that or make the first section ones to red which i think would be much intuitive to play game play wise
Aside from that, looks good, you can poke me to recheck if you want, i saw pishi asked for a call back tho so mb check with him first and then ask me
Lafayla wrote:
[pk]
why go rebel on the combo colours lo, the variety the other diffs have are nice but this is fine too so up to you dont really like the other colors forest picked so i picked my owns and these are the most suitable in my eyes
00:24:254 (4) - , 00:31:365 (4) - ok, tbh im not a fan of this blue tick vocal following sliders thing but its fine, what worries me is why its inconsistent with how you did 00:51:365 (5,4) - which is a really similar for following vocals but you mapped them to red instead of holding them for their full vocal length especially when there is actually sound to support blue for them here...?
These would make more sense if you mapped them to blue to be consistent with how you did them in the previous section, either that or make the first section ones to red which i think would be much intuitive to play game play wise u know that the "would be much intuitive" thing is a lie. anyway ill get rid of blues xd
Aside from that, looks good, you can poke me to recheck if you want, i saw pishi asked for a call back tho so mb check with him first and then ask me
Topic Starter
Lafayla wrote:
pk posted in q
uwu kawaii song aaaaaaa
[General]
soft-sliderslide3.wav is unused, If you don't plan on using it, remove it fixed
hit sound volumes in the normal and hard could be a bit more dynamic for calm vs kiai sections I don't find a problem with current volume sections, I found 70% more situable than other volume for transitions on the end
[Kwan]
diff is missing video :c fixed
Aside from that, looks good, you can poke me to recheck if you want, i saw pishi asked for a call back tho so mb check with him first and then ask me
Recheck
on hard and top 00:14:476 (1) - worried about the end of the snap on this reverse, its ~20 ms ish early, also checked with several others that general offset is slightly off, would be good to get timing checked for this
on hard and top 00:14:476 (1) - worried about the end of the snap on this reverse, its ~20 ms ish early, also checked with several others that general offset is slightly off, would be good to get timing checked for this
call me back when timing stuff is checkedpkhg wrote:
u know that the "would be much intuitive" thing is a lie. If you quoted me properly I said "I think" indicating it was my opinion, also its a guideline in the rc so idk why you think its a lie loRC wrote:
"Avoid extended sliders which pass through important sounds. If an extended slider tail lands on silence and passes through a loud sound, players may have trouble interpreting rhythm. In these cases, it is better to place the slider tail on an audible beat."
y arent u laughing at my replies
rc is a lie
rc is a lie
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