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If possible, I'll suggest finding some words associated with "dream" instead of "normal".
[General]
Dream: 159.9, 76390
Aqua's: 159.9, 76401[Dream]
00:24:932 (1,2,3,4) - comparing with the current situation I prefer place triplet right after (1)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/332551 as the music indicated
00:47:244 (2,3) - if you don't want them to be completely stacked, placing them on the left and above (1) would be better than right-bottom of (1).
01:20:530 (4) - clap? the bass drum sound of this one is the strongest among the three (2,3,4)
02:03:096 (3,4) - this is not recommended because (4) is highly covered
02:11:612 (5,6) - [Nazi] if order to produce a symmetrical figure try (5) left 2 grids lv4 and (6) down 2 grids lv4. If you do so move 02:13:885 (5) - as well.
02:18:012 (4) - corresponding to 00:44:229 (4) - this note should recieve more accents.
[normal]
00:12:811 (3,4) - You can stack them properly (it differs more than 1 pixel)
00:51:026 (2,3,4) - whistle on (2), beginning of (3) and (4)? whistle on beginning of (3) solely sounds too "high" which does not fit vocal's pitch.
01:10:340 (1) - does not sound very suitable for a spinner, and might be a bit short
that's all, the map looks well but popped due to different timing