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Ora

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-08-06T19:35:50+00:00

JustinSONE wrote:
Ora's Light Insane
00:23:174 (1) - I'd prefer something like this, just my opinion
SPOILER
00:28:858 (2,5) - could potentially stack
02:39:595 (1,2) - this overlap is okay, but could look nicer i think
02:47:174 (1,2) - ^

Sorry! no changes. Thanks for the mod though

[ Scarlet Red ]

379 posts

Joined September 2013

[ Scarlet Red ] 2016-08-06T21:10:38+00:00

I'm going to start from the top and work my way down, from mine (and your) M4M queue!

(I'm really not a bieber fan haha but I'll do it. You modded my map so I will mod yours)

Ora's Light Insane

- 00:43:858 (2) - This note is a bit too far from (1)'s end. Maybe you can remake the slider so it underlaps (1) but in a neater looking way? Like this
- 01:22:227 (3) - Overlap this above (5)'s ending circle. It looks a lot better than your original overlap.
- 01:23:806 (1) - Overlap this above (7)'s beginning, basically push it back a bit. It looks a lot better like that, since before it looked a little too low. | Also make the end of (1) flow a bit better into (2) and (3) like this
- 01:27:437 (4,5) - Push this backwards since the current overlap isn't really that appealing to look at.
- 01:33:911 (1) - This is more of what I think is cool but try underlapping this note under (7)'s end. I think it would look better.
- 02:01:385 (3) - move this like 1 or 2 units up so it looks even with (1) and (2) going downwards.
- 02:04:227 (1) - Try underlapping this one as well with (10)'s end.
- 02:33:753 (6,9) - Try to move these so that the ending of (5), (6), and (7) are all even.
- 02:34:542 (1) - Underlap this with (7)'s beginning. Personally I think it looks better
- 02:39:595 (1,2) - Move the (1) a tiny bit to the left and move the (2) a little back so it looks like this
- 02:47:174 (1,2) - Move the (2) back so the (1) blankets it. Like the last mod suggestion.
- 02:52:227 (1,2) - ^ do this anywhere else you see it. It makes it a bit more challenging of a jump and looks neater.

ezek's Hard

- 00:34:227 (3) - You have a few overlaps in your map like this one. Personally I don't really like them and suggest you do something about each. For this one you can move it so that the end of it overlaps the beginning of (3).
- 00:35:490 (6) - For this move it to the left and back so it doesn't overlap the slider's path.
- 01:23:490 (6) - Overlap. Maybe move it a little bit down and backwards just enough so it doesn't.
- 01:29:806 (3) - I don't know about this overlap. It doesn't look good at all to be there, maybe remake a slider or change the pattern. Something else that doesn't overlap would work here.
- 02:00:437 (5) - Move this a little down. It's too high above the (4)
- 02:18:911 (6,7) - Move these a bit down and to the right so it flows but doesn't overlap any notes.
- 02:25:385 (3) - Another overlap, move it to the left and a tad bit up to avoid this overlap.
- 02:35:490 (3) - Overlap here as well
- 03:00:754 (3) - Another one of those bad overlaps. Try to find a way to fix this one?

Normal

- 00:30:121 (2) - This hitsound is too weak. Make it normal-sounding not soft.
- 00:33:595 (2) - I know you tried to change the rhythm but it doesn't seem like it fits here.
- 01:55:385 (4) - Again I feel like this should change to a normal-sounding one not soft
- 02:14:332 (1) - The part starting from here should be hitsounded with claps.
- 03:12:437 (1) - This note looks too far out. Maybe bring it in a little bit?

Easy

- 00:35:806 (2) - Maybe you can make the sharp curves in the slider path fit more to the beat? That'd be interesting
- 01:03:595 (1,2) - Definitely not a fan of this overlap. Needs fixing.
- 02:35:806 (2) - Overlap here needs fixing.

I'm a poor modder on anything besides the harder difficulties but I gave it a shot. Hope this helped in any way!

[ Scarlet Red ]

379 posts

Joined September 2013

[ Scarlet Red ] 2016-08-06T21:11:51+00:00

ezek wrote:
JustinSONE wrote:
ezek's Hard
01:30:911 (5,1) - not sure if intentional but slightly not stacked the editor doesn't allow me to do a perfect stack
03:01:859 (5,1) - ^ ^
03:09:595 (4,1) - angles look slightly different, might just be my eyes I can't see that difference .-.
No changes~
Thanks for the mod!

Do you have your editor on grid view 4 or disable grid snap? Would help.

Plaudible

1,028 posts

Joined September 2015

Plaudible 2016-08-06T21:16:51+00:00

M4M from Ora's queue, for Ora (/^-^)/
___________

damn this background is saucy ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Ora's Light Insane
00:23:806 (2,3) - The rhythm here doesn't feel like it should be circle then slider, I feel like slider then circle would be more fitting...
00:26:332 (2,3) - ^
00:28:858 (2,3) - You do it here, after all :3
I suppose ^ is just preference, though I feel it compliments the rhythm a lot more.
00:42:753 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Some inconsistency with spacing... some 1/4s are overlapped, some are stacked, some are regularly spaced. I feel like you should either stick to only stack + overlap, or stack + spaced. With this part of the song being more calm though, I think stack + overlap would be better

01:22:227 (3,4,5) - The way these stack are a bit weird, especially going into this pattern: 01:22:227 (3,6,7,8). Maybe center 3 within the triangle and then adjust how the slider is in respect to it.

So far, I notice you're alternating between slider then circle, and circle then slider. For players who play around 3 star, this may throw them off each time and make it confusing, consistency will benefit this SD imo

02:21:911 (1,2) - I like this shape, but I feel you should make them compliment the vocals, maybe change direction as they go with them? I know it may make them look weird, feel free to disregard.

After several playtests, I definitely feel like playing rhythms like this 02:25:069 (2,3) with circle first are harder, so if you use one I strongly suggest slider then circle.

02:47:174 (1,2) - Ehh, this ribbon slider

feel like angling a bit more left would help.
02:48:121 (3,4) - Very sudden increase in distance compared to the rest of kiai, without much reasoning, it would fit if the vocals were here... I'd tone these down, but since it's circular flow it may not be an issue. However, areas with more jagged curves like 02:53:174 (3,4) should be toned down for sure, IMO.
03:04:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - Quite a bit to select. Please switch the hitsounds here. The loud thumping sticks out bad. Soft would be just fine.

The flow is incredibly well done and you compliment my aesthetics?! Yours are 10x better! Well done with this difficulty, just watch out for some mapping + spacing consistency and I think you're set

gl~

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-06T22:18:09+00:00

[ Scarlet Red ] wrote:
I'm going to start from the top and work my way down, from mine (and your) M4M queue!

(I'm really not a bieber fan haha but I'll do it. You modded my map so I will mod yours)

Normal

- 00:30:121 (2) - This hitsound is too weak. Make it normal-sounding not soft. fixed my bad
- 00:33:595 (2) - I know you tried to change the rhythm but it doesn't seem like it fits here. yes done
- 01:55:385 (4) - Again I feel like this should change to a normal-sounding one not soft fixed that my bad again
- 02:14:332 (1) - The part starting from here should be hitsounded with claps. i remapped that part so i forgot to aadd back the hitsounds
- 03:12:437 (1) - This note looks too far out. Maybe bring it in a little bit?the ds didnt let me but ichanged little closer

I'm a poor modder on anything besides the harder difficulties but I gave it a shot. Hope this helped in any way!

thx for mod

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-08-06T23:35:29+00:00

Plaudible wrote:
M4M from Ora's queue, for Ora (/^-^)/
___________

damn this background is saucy ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Ora's Light Insane
00:23:806 (2,3) - The rhythm here doesn't feel like it should be circle then slider, I feel like slider then circle would be more fitting... If more people complain about this pattern then I will change it, but I switch between circle-slider and slider-circle consistently throughout the map to mix it up a little.
00:26:332 (2,3) - ^ same, but I do agree the slider-circle is more comfortable to play. I will highly consider it
00:28:858 (2,3) - You do it here, after all :3
I suppose ^ is just preference, though I feel it compliments the rhythm a lot more.
00:42:753 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Some inconsistency with spacing... some 1/4s are overlapped, some are stacked, some are regularly spaced. I feel like you should either stick to only stack + overlap, or stack + spaced. With this part of the song being more calm though, I think stack + overlap would be better I remapped this section and added more consistent spacing. Hope it's better now
01:22:227 (3,4,5) - The way these stack are a bit weird, especially going into this pattern: 01:22:227 (3,6,7,8). Maybe center 3 within the triangle and then adjust how the slider is in respect to it. remapping this entire part. It's a mess...I know ._.

So far, I notice you're alternating between slider then circle, and circle then slider. For players who play around 3 star, this may throw them off each time and make it confusing, consistency will benefit this SD imo Yeah adding on to what I said above, I think for most of the map it's 2 of circle-slider and then 2 of slider-circle consistently. But I think I will change to Slider-circle only if it's more comfortable

02:21:911 (1,2) - I like this shape, but I feel you should make them compliment the vocals, maybe change direction as they go with them? I know it may make them look weird, feel free to disregard. I will mess around with this, I think you're right

After several playtests, I definitely feel like playing rhythms like this 02:25:069 (2,3) with circle first are harder, so if you use one I strongly suggest slider then circle. haha ok

02:47:174 (1,2) - Ehh, this ribbon slider feel like angling a bit more left would help. i don't see what's wrong D: pm me ingame
02:48:121 (3,4) - Very sudden increase in distance compared to the rest of kiai, without much reasoning, it would fit if the vocals were here... I'd tone these down, but since it's circular flow it may not be an issue. However, areas with more jagged curves like 02:53:174 (3,4) should be toned down for sure, IMO. fixed distace for all of these ! I was using 2.5 for some reason when everything else is 2.3.
03:04:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - Quite a bit to select. Please switch the hitsounds here. The loud thumping sticks out bad. Soft would be just fine. I will have Lily take a look at this !

The flow is incredibly well done and you compliment my aesthetics?! Yours are 10x better! Well done with this difficulty, just watch out for some mapping + spacing consistency and I think you're set gl~

Thanks for the mod and for pointing out the circle-slider issue. I know it's not fun to play those so I will most likely end up remapping all of those to slider-circle. Goodluck with your map :^)

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-08-07T01:05:54+00:00

[ Scarlet Red ] wrote:
ezek's Hard

- 00:34:227 (3) - You have a few overlaps in your map like this one. Personally I don't really like them and suggest you do something about each. For this one you can move it so that the end of it overlaps the beginning of (3). Personally, I like these kind of overlaps, and they flow pretty well imo~
- 00:35:490 (6) - For this move it to the left and back so it doesn't overlap the slider's path. Nope, totally intentional.
- 01:23:490 (6) - Overlap. Maybe move it a little bit down and backwards just enough so it doesn't. You really hate overlaps, don't you? But in this case I agree with you since the overlap is very small and doesn't look as pretty as a bigger one~
- 01:29:806 (3) - I don't know about this overlap. It doesn't look good at all to be there, maybe remake a slider or change the pattern. Something else that doesn't overlap would work here. I did this all on purpose and works fine imo.
- 02:00:437 (5) - Move this a little down. It's too high above the (4) Nope. This is to emphasize the strong vocals + the sudden stop on the 1/4 usage.
- 02:18:911 (6,7) - Move these a bit down and to the right so it flows but doesn't overlap any notes.
- 02:25:385 (3) - Another overlap, move it to the left and a tad bit up to avoid this overlap.
- 02:35:490 (3) - Overlap here as well
- 03:00:754 (3) - Another one of those bad overlaps. Try to find a way to fix this one? All the overlaps are intended and I don't see why they wouldn't work.

Thanks for the mod! ^^

Well, there's a change! :3

open me

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Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-08-07T02:31:49+00:00

Ora's Light Insane

- 00:43:858 (2) - This note is a bit too far from (1)'s end. Maybe you can remake the slider so it underlaps (1) but in a neater looking way? Like this Fixed distance but kept it the same :s
- 01:22:227 (3) - Overlap this above (5)'s ending circle. It looks a lot better than your original overlap. Remapped entire part because it's ugly, you're right :p
- 01:23:806 (1) - Overlap this above (7)'s beginning, basically push it back a bit. It looks a lot better like that, since before it looked a little too low. | Also make the end of (1) flow a bit better into (2) and (3) like this Same
- 01:27:437 (4,5) - Push this backwards since the current overlap isn't really that appealing to look at. only if more people complain. I like it personally, and it flows fine
- 01:33:911 (1) - This is more of what I think is cool but try underlapping this note under (7)'s end. I think it would look better. ill try it for now
- 02:01:385 (3) - move this like 1 or 2 units up so it looks even with (1) and (2) going downwards. not sure what you mean, picture please? !
- 02:04:227 (1) - Try underlapping this one as well with (10)'s end. Keeping this one. It's just not my mapping style to do stacks like that
- 02:33:753 (6,9) - Try to move these so that the ending of (5), (6), and (7) are all even. fixed
- 02:34:542 (1) - Underlap this with (7)'s beginning. Personally I think it looks better agreed
- 02:39:595 (1,2) - Move the (1) a tiny bit to the left and move the (2) a little back so it looks like this I dont see problems with it, the overlap is fine
- 02:47:174 (1,2) - Move the (2) back so the (1) blankets it. Like the last mod suggestion. same
- 02:52:227 (1,2) - ^ do this anywhere else you see it. It makes it a bit more challenging of a jump and looks neater. same

Thanks !

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-07T02:56:00+00:00

Updated changes x)

Hollow Delta

793 posts

Joined March 2015

Hollow Delta 2016-08-07T03:37:34+00:00

From #modreqs doing M4M
Aru's Easy

SPOILER

00:33:279 (1) - This slider cuts off of the play field just a little bit. Adjust the shape so it doesn't do this.
00:30:753 (3,2) - 2 Gets overlapped by 3. Adjust pattern of 2.
00:38:332 (1) - Adjust this note and other notes after this if you fix the overlap noted above.
01:03:595 (1,1) - Overlap.
01:50:964 (2,3) - Put these notes on the other side of slider 1. This will fix an overlap.
01:51:595 (3,4,3,4) - Overlap.
02:21:279 (2) - ^
02:34:542 (1) - This slider cuts off the play field way to much to be playable by with any monitor. Adjust shape so it doesn't do this.
02:37:069 (3) - Terrible looking overlap.
02:44:648 (1) - Overlap.
03:03:595 (5) - This part of the song is not exaggerated, so you should change the shape to something more basic. (Might have to re-snap notes after this.)
03:12:437 (2,1) - Terrible overlap.
03:17:490 (3,2) - Overlap.
There are a lot of overlaps, which are okay in higher difficulties, but in normal and easy, and sometimes Hard: It's unrankable. Sadly, some parts might have to get re mapped, but it's an easy so it shouldn't take too much time.

Normal

SPOILER

00:24:121 (2,4) - Overlap.
00:24:437 (3,5) - ^
00:23:174 (1,1) - ^
00:32:648 (1,4) - ^
00:35:174 (1,4) - ^
00:36:437 (3,1) - ^
00:37:700 (1,3) - ^
00:40:227 (3,1) - Move 1 a little bit while keeping DS on. These notes are touching and don't look good.
00:44:016 (3,4) - Change the direction of this flow. It gets overlapped by 00:41:490 (4) - Fix please.
00:48:437 (2,3,4) - Change the direction of the flow downwards, not upwards. Making it go up is asking for more overlaps. Which reminder: Are not okay in Normal and Easy.
00:51:911 (2,3) - Change the flow so these notes stop overlapping each other. Just in case you don't know, when I saw change flow, I mean make the patterns lead towards another area of the play field.
01:03:595 (1) - Select this note, and all of the notes after this, then vertically flip. This will get rid of the overlaps, yet keep this beautiful slider art.
01:10:542 (1) - Doesn't fit well. Would be better if mapped with sliders and circles. Anything but a spinner here please.
01:31:069 (4,6) - Overlaps.
01:29:806 (2,1) - ^
01:32:648 (1,4) - ^
01:38:964 (1,4) - Slight overlap.
01:43:069 (6,4) - Overlap.
01:44:648 (4,6) - ^
01:53:490 (1,4) - ^
01:59:490 (2,4) - ^
01:58:542 (1,5) - ^
02:16:542 (4) - Change this shape. (You will see why in a second.)
02:18:753 (1,2) - You're leading the flow into more overlaps, if you change the shape from before you can let this flow somewhere else, while still keeping the slider art.
02:24:437 (1) - Select this slider, and all notes after it, and horizontally flip. Fixes some patterns, while keeping structure.
02:30:437 (2,4) - Overlaps
02:29:490 (1,2,3,7) - Overlap Frenzy.
02:40:542 (2,4) - Overlap
02:43:385 (1,2,3,4,5,4,5,6,7) - Overlap Mania.
Easy way to fix the above is to select 02:47:174 (3) - This note plus all the notes after it, and vertically flip the whole selection. Fixes that nasty overlap mania without too much work.
02:53:174 (4,8) - Overlap.
03:00:437 (8,3) - ^
03:04:858 (2) - Select this note, and every other note after it, and vertically flip. Fixes a lot of overlaps with no effort at all.
03:07:385 (5) - 03:07:385 (5) - With how chill the song is getting now, this hitsound is not so chill. Remove hitsound.

Overall you guys did neat slider art, and kept the DS on, but you had a lot of overlaps.
As hard as I tried, some parts of both diffs might need some re-mapping for it to be rankable.
In Easy and Normal Diffs, Overlaps are Unacceptable. You could probably get away with a few in hard and normal. Overlaps are okay in Insane and Extra, just a matter of if they look good or not. Regardless, try not to do overlaps in Normal and Easy.

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-07T12:28:51+00:00

Bubblun wrote:
From #modreqs doing M4M

Normal
SPOILER
00:24:121 (2,4) - Overlap.
00:24:437 (3,5) - ^
00:23:174 (1,1) - ^
00:32:648 (1,4) - ^
00:35:174 (1,4) - ^
00:36:437 (3,1) - ^
00:37:700 (1,3) - ^
all i can say is some of them are stacked and its simple x) and some of them doesnt seem overlap to me
00:40:227 (3,1) - Move 1 a little bit while keeping DS on. These notes are touching and don't look good. doesnt seem big problem to me
00:44:016 (3,4) - Change the direction of this flow. It gets overlapped by 00:41:490 (4) - Fix please. ^
00:48:437 (2,3,4) - Change the direction of the flow downwards, not upwards. Making it go up is asking for more overlaps. Which reminder: Are not okay in Normal and Easy.^
00:51:911 (2,3) - Change the flow so these notes stop overlapping each other. Just in case you don't know, when I saw change flow, I mean make the patterns lead towards another area of the play field. changed
01:03:595 (1) - Select this note, and all of the notes after this, then vertically flip. This will get rid of the overlaps, yet keep this beautiful slider art. i think its fine
01:10:542 (1) - Doesn't fit well. Would be better if mapped with sliders and circles. Anything but a spinner here please. for bg music it can fit but i made it shorter for recover
01:31:069 (4,6) - Overlaps.
01:29:806 (2,1) - ^
01:32:648 (1,4) - ^
01:38:964 (1,4) - Slight overlap.
01:43:069 (6,4) - Overlap.
01:44:648 (4,6) - ^
01:53:490 (1,4) - ^
01:59:490 (2,4) - ^
01:58:542 (1,5) - ^
02:16:542 (4) - Change this shape. (You will see why in a second.)
02:18:753 (1,2) - You're leading the flow into more overlaps, if you change the shape from before you can let this flow somewhere else, while still keeping the slider art.
02:24:437 (1) - Select this slider, and all notes after it, and horizontally flip. Fixes some patterns, while keeping structure.changed something there
02:30:437 (2,4) - Overlaps
02:29:490 (1,2,3,7) - Overlap Frenzy.
02:40:542 (2,4) - Overlap
02:43:385 (1,2,3,4,5,4,5,6,7) - Overlap Mania.
Easy way to fix the above is to select 02:47:174 (3) - This note plus all the notes after it, and vertically flip the whole selection. Fixes that nasty overlap mania without too much work.
02:53:174 (4,8) - Overlap.
03:00:437 (8,3) - ^
03:04:858 (2) - Select this note, and every other note after it, and vertically flip. Fixes a lot of overlaps with no effort at all.
03:07:385 (5) - 03:07:385 (5) - With how chill the song is getting now, this hitsound is not so chill. Remove hitsound.well there is a clap sound

Overall you guys did neat slider art, and kept the DS on, but you had a lot of overlaps.
As hard as I tried, some parts of both diffs might need some re-mapping for it to be rankable.
In Easy and Normal Diffs, Overlaps are Unacceptable. You could probably get away with a few in hard and normal. Overlaps are okay in Insane and Extra, just a matter of if they look good or not. Regardless, try not to do overlaps in Normal and Easy.the once i didnt reply i dont think its important overlaps thx for mod

thx for the mod x)

Saoji

825 posts

Joined February 2013

Saoji 2016-08-08T00:46:39+00:00

[Normal]

First off I find your histsound a bit too loud, 70% might fit better. You can even lower it to 50% (?) for that spinner 00:20:648 (1) - Same here 03:04:227 (1) - It's particulary obvious at that last spinner 03:22:542 (1) - that you can lower to 5%. (Other than that, hitsounds are great).
00:36:121 (2) - Move to x247y149 so it'll be properly stacked with 00:33:911 (3) -
00:50:963 (1,2) - Try to make a blanket with those 2? Would look neater.
01:44:016 (2) - A 1/2 slider might empasize the vocal better. And you could put the same rhythm that you did here 01:45:911 (5) - as it's clearly a rhythm repetion.
I didn't mention them in case you don't care, but most of the blankets could be improved. (00:32:648 (1,2) - 00:35:174 (1,2) - 00:36:437 (3,4) - 01:16:227 (1,2) - etc.)

[Ora's Light Insane]

Same remark for hitsounds, I supposed you could tone it down a bit by like 10%, it's a bit loud right now. 03:22:542 (1) - The end could even be 5%
I'd say that my main concern is the second part of both your kiais. 01:23:806 (1) - and 02:34:542 (1) - the music is cleatly getting higher but you stick with the pretty slow rhythm. Try to replace 01:23:806 (1) - with two 1/4 sliders to punch up your highlighted part a bit. (It wouldn't even be overmapped!)

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-08-08T02:50:54+00:00

Yales wrote:
[Ora's Light Insane]
Same remark for hitsounds, I supposed you could tone it down a bit by like 10%, it's a bit loud right now. 03:22:542 (1) - The end could even be 5% Fixed!
I'd say that my main concern is the second part of both your kiais. 01:23:806 (1) - and 02:34:542 (1) - the music is cleatly getting higher but you stick with the pretty slow rhythm. Try to replace 01:23:806 (1) - with two 1/4 sliders to punch up your highlighted part a bit. (It wouldn't even be overmapped!) Changed this and I like how it soudns now. And it makes sense because the Kiai part gets a lot more intense here

Thanks Yales for the mod! GL with your map

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-08T02:54:34+00:00

Yales wrote:
[Normal]
First off I find your histsound a bit too loud, 70% might fit better. You can even lower it to 50% (?) for that spinner 00:20:648 (1) - Same here 03:04:227 (1) - It's particulary obvious at that last spinner 03:22:542 (1) - that you can lower to 5%. (Other than that, hitsounds are great). i fixed them ty
00:36:121 (2) - Move to x247y149 so it'll be properly stacked with 00:33:911 (3) - that rly hard to notice D: fixed ty
00:50:963 (1,2) - Try to make a blanket with those 2? Would look neater. did that
01:44:016 (2) - A 1/2 slider might empasize the vocal better. And you could put the same rhythm that you did here 01:45:911 (5) - as it's clearly a rhythm repetion. changed ty
I didn't mention them in case you don't care, but most of the blankets could be improved. (00:32:648 (1,2) - 00:35:174 (1,2) - 00:36:437 (3,4) - 01:16:227 (1,2) - etc.)fixed all as much and ill keep polishing

Update both diff x)
thx for mod.

Lami

1,756 posts

Joined June 2011

Lami 2016-08-08T18:15:59+00:00

Ora's Light Insane: missing video?

i recommend to set custom combo-colors.

N

03:06:753 (3,4) - suggest to change 1/2 slider.
because continue circle isn't cool idea on visual or etc...

ezek's H

02:27:911 (3,4) - inconsistent DS?
03:01:859 (5,1) - stack, like others?

Ora's light I

00:33:911 (2) - missing hitsound
00:36:437 (2) - ^
01:16:858 (2) - ^
00:47:806 (1) - against other NC cycle.
02:30:121 (2,3) - remove Normal hitsound on slider's body.
02:39:595 (1,2) - not good feeling about this.
i think you can more clean partten, like others..

-also, maybe need to check hitsound setting again.

i suggest to reduce volume. about 10~20%?
current is a bit loud. x_x because it's relax song.

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-08T23:24:08+00:00

Lami wrote:
Ora's Light Insane: missing video? fixed that

i recommend to set custom combo-colors. i always say ill set them and i forget xD done

N

03:06:753 (3,4) - suggest to change 1/2 slider. since u not first told me that ill do it
because continue circle isn't cool idea on visual or etc...

Ora's light I

00:33:911 (2) - missing hitsound since this all about hitsounding because i did them ill reply on this btw there is clap in each one i just changed the auto to normal sample
00:36:437 (2) - ^
01:16:858 (2) - ^
00:47:806 (1) - against other NC cycle.
02:30:121 (2,3) - remove Normal hitsound on slider's body. it isnt normal already
02:39:595 (1,2) - not good feeling about this.
i think you can more clean partten, like others..

-also, maybe need to check hitsound setting again. done

i suggest to reduce volume. about 10~20%? i think 10 20 is realy too little xd but i reduce at the slow relaxing parts compared to the others
current is a bit loud. x_x because it's relax song.

Thx alot for the mod x))

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-08-08T23:28:53+00:00

Lami wrote:
ezek's H

02:27:911 (3,4) - inconsistent DS? It's actually a jump~
03:01:859 (5,1) - stack, like others? Oh, I messed this stack, fixed~

Thanks for the mod! ^^

yeee

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Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-08T23:46:04+00:00

Okay updated.

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2016-08-09T08:31:35+00:00

Hey~

NM ready!

Difficulties

Normal

00:52:227 (3) - This slider is weird.
01:58:542 (1) - Fix this blanket.
02:32:016 (5) - NC
02:32:964 (6) - Put the circle in the middle of both sliders.

Ora's Light Insane

00:36:437 (2) - Maybe you can make it ?
~
01:23:253 - You can make a beautiful stream, you know ?
02:33:911 - Stream

It's all that I can make lool
This is a good map! Good luck for the rest!

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-09T17:40:40+00:00

ShogunMoon wrote:
Hey~ hello

NM ready!

Difficulties
Normal
00:52:227 (3) - This slider is weird. changed
01:58:542 (1) - Fix this blanket. it was not supposed to be a blanket
02:32:016 (5) - NC okay
02:32:964 (6) - Put the circle in the middle of both sliders.done

It's all that I can make lool
This is a good map! Good luck for the rest!

thx for mod x)

Froskya

1,231 posts

Joined April 2014

Froskya 2016-08-10T17:17:32+00:00

Hi!~ NM from queue!~

Aru's Easy

00:25:700 (2) - x:276 y:72
00:53:490 (1) - y:228
02:01:700 (3) - make it like 01:41:490 (2)
02:15:279 - normal sampleset?
02:54:753 - finish?
03:03:595 (5) - this slider can looks better
03:17:490 (3) - ^
03:12:437 (2,1) - this overlap looks not beautiful + flow?

Normal

Check if this spinner length is appropriate for the difficulty level:
00:20:648 (1) 2beats 1263ms
02:21:595 (1) 2.5beats 1579ms
00:25:700 (5) - NC
00:30:753 (3) - ^
00:33:595 (2) - ^
00:36:121 (2) - ^ and etc
00:32:648 (1) - delete NC
00:35:174 (1) - ^ and etc
00:42:753 - clap?
00:44:016 - ^
00:50:332 - ^
01:19:385 - ^ and etc
01:24:437 - ^ and etc
00:50:964 (1,2,3) - use normal sampleset
01:40:227 (3) - ^
01:52:227 (7) - ^
02:18:753 (1) - ^
00:20:648 (1) - finish?
01:21:279 - ^
01:26:332 - ^ and etc
01:43:069 (6,1) - spacing?
01:10:542 (1,1) - delete and map here something

Good Luck!~

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-08-10T19:02:19+00:00

NM

[Aru's Easy]

00:50:964 (3) - Out of the grid

00:50:964 (3,1) - Blanket ?

01:20:016 (2,3,4) - Blanket 2 & 3 and up a bit (4)

01:41:490 (2) - Move to x360 y292 to make it in front of (1)

02:25:700 (2,3,4) - Weird flow due to placing

02:38:964 (4,1) - Fix blanket

03:03:595 (5) - Weird slider

03:06:753 (2,3) - Blanket (2) with the first part of (3)

03:17:490 (3) - Up the end part of the slider, the end need to be fully visible Click4Screen

[Normal]

00:23:174 (1,2,3,4) - Fix blankets Click4Screen

03:09:911 (2) - Make 2 in front of 1

03:16:858 (2,3) - Fix blanket

[ezek's Hard]

00:45:595 (6,1) - Blanket them

00:46:700 (2) - This circle don't need to be here. Overmapping in hard isn't really cool

01:16:858 (2) - Blanket can look better if you move the slider end point to x388 y144

01:26:332 (1,2) - Make parellel lines. Because that's not parallel lines x) Click4Screen

01:27:595 (5,6) - Blanket ?

02:30:437 (3,4,5) - Fix blankets

02:58:543 (4,5) - Blanket ?

---

End of my mod

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-08-10T20:46:11+00:00

Lexis wrote:
[ezek's Hard]

00:45:595 (6,1) - Blanket them why? I like how it looks without blanketing, I designed the pattern to look fine without a blanket~

00:46:700 (2) - This circle don't need to be here. Overmapping in hard isn't really cool overmapping? Listen carefully, there's instrumental sound going on there~

01:16:858 (2) - Blanket can look better if you move the slider end point to x388 y144 I think that makes it look bad and is no longer a blanket that way .-.

01:26:332 (1,2) - Make parellel lines. Because that's not parallel lines x) Click4Screen True, paralleled~

01:27:595 (5,6) - Blanket you pointed a combo number that doesn't exist here .-.

02:30:437 (3,4,5) - Fix blankets I see, fixed~

02:58:543 (4,5) - Blanket ? nope

Thanks for the mod!

~Update~

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324,192,164648,6,0,P|300:244|324:324,1,142.5,4|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,364,165280,2,0,L|216:372,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,165596,2,0,L|208:296,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,224,165912,2,0,L|52:240,2,95,4|2|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,164,166701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,164,167175,6,0,B|208:120|208:120|224:64|180:32,1,142.5,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,92,167806,2,0,L|128:144,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,164,168122,2,0,L|56:112,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,168438,2,0,P|116:256|104:300,2,95,4|2|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,164,169227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,348,169701,6,0,B|280:360|280:360|348:348,1,142.5,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,308,170333,2,0,P|436:304|460:308,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,232,170648,2,0,P|472:236|448:232,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,160,170964,2,0,B|392:124|392:124|396:120|396:120|388:120|388:120|392:116|392:116|392:76,2,95,4|2|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,224,171754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,224,172227,6,0,B|317:249|284:222|284:222|254:198|218:222,1,142.5,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,252,172859,2,0,L|108:236,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,148,173175,2,0,L|152:132,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,40,173490,2,0,L|48:76,2,95,4|2|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,36,174280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,80,174437,2,0,P|292:84|316:80,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,28,174753,6,0,P|380:84|400:164,1,142.5,4|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,216,175384,2,0,L|500:216,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,288,175701,2,0,L|384:288,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,224,176017,2,0,B|316:188|316:188|320:184|320:184|312:184|312:184|316:180|316:180|316:140,2,95,4|2|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,284,176806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,284,177280,6,0,B|188:284|188:284|148:336,1,142.5,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,308,177912,2,0,L|120:256,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,184,178227,2,0,L|44:236,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,208,178543,2,0,P|164:160|152:116,2,95,4|2|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,184,179333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,40,179806,6,0,B|352:24|352:24|424:40,1,142.5,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,68,180438,2,0,P|492:92|488:116,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,169,180754,2,0,P|413:145|417:121,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,208,181069,2,0,P|420:196|372:208,2,95,4|2|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,276,181859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,276,182333,6,0,B|372:304|372:304|332:324|288:304,1,142.5,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,182964,2,0,P|196:260|168:264,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,332,183280,2,0,P|152:336|180:332,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,183596,2,0,P|236:216|224:172,2,95,4|2|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,304,184385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,344,184543,2,0,P|368:348|392:344,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,272,184858,6,0,P|484:220|472:168,2,106.875004076958,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,186753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,187069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,187385,6,0,P|124:124|144:56,1,142.500005435944,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,28,188332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,28,189279,2,0,L|296:32,1,35.625001358986
344,100,189595,2,0,L|292:96,1,35.625001358986
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252,176,192121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,176,192437,5,0,3:0:0:0:
308,224,194016,2,0,P|356:212|412:224,1,106.875004076958
208,296,194964,6,0,P|160:308|104:296,2,106.875004076958,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,196858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,197174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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472,292,198437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,199385,2,0,L|156:152,1,35.625001358986
240,200,199700,2,0,L|252:240,1,35.625001358986
224,128,200016,6,0,L|200:24,2,106.875004076958,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,202227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,202542,5,0,3:0:0:0:
256,192,202700,12,0,205069,0:0:0:0:

AzureDoctor

196 posts

Joined January 2016

AzureDoctor 2016-08-10T21:13:13+00:00

Here is your NM

General

Nothing to say here.

Normal
I didn't find anything needing change here.

Light Insane

01:56:016 (1) - and 01:56:174 (2) - should be part of the previous combo.
02:59:806 (4) - Start a new combo here. The previous 3 notes should be a part of the previous combo.

I hope my mod was helpful.
Good luck on rank

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-10T23:30:30+00:00

Revialink wrote:
Hi!~ NM from queue!~

Normal
Check if this spinner length is appropriate for the difficulty level:
00:20:648 (1) 2beats 1263ms
02:21:595 (1) 2.5beats 1579ms checked both the length is fine even in auto they hit beyond 1000 so its fine x)
00:25:700 (5) - NC fixed
00:30:753 (3) - ^ disagree here xd
00:33:595 (2) - ^ ^
00:36:121 (2) - ^ and etc ^
00:32:648 (1) - delete NC ^
00:35:174 (1) - ^ and etc ^
00:42:753 - clap? oupes fixed
00:44:016 - ^ fixed
00:50:332 - ^ how did i miss those D: fixed
01:19:385 - ^ and etc
01:24:437 - ^ and etc done all
00:50:964 (1,2,3) - use normal sampleset omg fixed
01:40:227 (3) - ^
01:52:227 (7) - ^
02:18:753 (1) - ^ fixed all ty
00:20:648 (1) - finish? ot sure but added for now
01:21:279 - ^
01:26:332 - ^ and etc fixed all finishes
01:43:069 (6,1) - spacing? looks fine to me
01:10:542 (1,1) - delete and map here something will think about x(

Good Luck!~

Thx for mod revi <3

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-10T23:38:32+00:00

Lexis wrote:
NM

[Normal]

00:23:174 (1,2,3,4) - Fix blankets Fixed Click4Screen

03:09:911 (2) - Make 2 in front of 1 fixed and made same for other for consistency

03:16:858 (2,3) - Fix blanket done

---

End of my mod

thx for mod x)

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-08-10T23:51:58+00:00

Annika Flina wrote:
Here is your NM

Light Insane
01:56:016 (1) - and 01:56:174 (2) - should be part of the previous combo. Fixed
02:59:806 (4) - Start a new combo here. The previous 3 notes should be a part of the previous combo fixed.

I hope my mod was helpful.
Good luck on rank

Thanks!

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-11T00:01:00+00:00

Updated Normal hard and light insane.

Arusamour

424 posts

Joined April 2014

Arusamour 2016-08-11T05:56:47+00:00

JustinSONE wrote:
m4m

Easy
03:06:753 (2,3) - could possibly blanket like this
SPOILER
ok
[ Scarlet Red ] wrote:
Easy

- 00:35:806 (2) - Maybe you can make the sharp curves in the slider path fit more to the beat? That'd be interesting ok
- 01:03:595 (1,2) - Definitely not a fan of this overlap. Needs fixing. ok
- 02:35:806 (2) - Overlap here needs fixing.
no it doesn't

Bubblun wrote:
From #modreqs doing M4M
Aru's Easy
00:33:279 (1) - This slider cuts off of the play field just a little bit. Adjust the shape so it doesn't do this. ok
00:30:753 (3,2) - 2 Gets overlapped by 3. Adjust pattern of 2. re-adjusted
00:38:332 (1) - Adjust this note and other notes after this if you fix the overlap noted above. re-adjusted
01:03:595 (1,1) - Overlap. ok
01:50:964 (2,3) - Put these notes on the other side of slider 1. This will fix an overlap. nope
01:51:595 (3,4,3,4) - Overlap. nope
02:21:279 (2) - ^ nope
02:34:542 (1) - This slider cuts off the play field way to much to be playable by with any monitor. Adjust shape so it doesn't do this.ok
02:37:069 (3) - Terrible looking overlap. no it doesn't
02:44:648 (1) - Overlap. nope
03:03:595 (5) - This part of the song is not exaggerated, so you should change the shape to something more basic. (Might have to re-snap notes after this.) ok
03:12:437 (2,1) - Terrible overlap. ??
03:17:490 (3,2) - Overlap. re-adjusted

There are a lot of overlaps, which are okay in higher difficulties, but in normal and easy, and sometimes Hard: It's unrankable. Sadly, some parts might have to get re mapped, but it's an easy so it shouldn't take too much time. nope?

Revialink wrote:
Hi!~ NM from queue!~

Aru's Easy
00:25:700 (2) - x:276 y:72 ok
00:53:490 (1) - y:228 ok
02:01:700 (3) - make it like 01:41:490 (2) re-adjusted
02:15:279 - normal sampleset? ok
02:54:753 - finish? ok
03:03:595 (5) - this slider can looks better ok
03:17:490 (3) - ^ ok
03:12:437 (2,1) - this overlap looks not beautiful + flow? re-adjusted
Lexis wrote:
NM

[Aru's Easy]

00:50:964 (3) - Out of the grid re-adjusted

00:50:964 (3,1) - Blanket ? re-adjusted

01:20:016 (2,3,4) - Blanket 2 & 3 and up a bit (4) re-adjusted

01:41:490 (2) - Move to x360 y292 to make it in front of (1) ok, but it's not really a big deal

02:25:700 (2,3,4) - Weird flow due to placing yeah, i'll think about it

02:38:964 (4,1) - Fix blanket purposely done so

03:03:595 (5) - Weird slider re-adjusted

03:06:753 (2,3) - Blanket (2) with the first part of (3) ok

03:17:490 (3) - Up the end part of the slider, the end need to be fully visible re-adjusted Click4Screen

thanks

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-08-11T11:05:42+00:00

Arusamour wrote:
01:41:490 (2) - Move to x360 y292 to make it in front of (1) ok, but it's not really a big deal

It just create a better flow than the previous pattern ^^

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-08-11T20:37:11+00:00

Normal

01:26:332 (1,2,3,4,5) - use same rhythm you have here for the part before 01:23:806 (1) -

01:33:911 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm here is fine, But I feel you can be more creative with the sliders/positions

01:38:964 (1,2) - Use same beat here that you have on this part 00:33:279 (1,2,3,4) -

01:43:385 (1,2,3) - Keep this ! if you intended to map vocals

01:47:174 (3,4,1) - Use this same rhythm here: 02:01:700 (5,6) -

02:59:174 (6) - move to x234 y3

02:59:806 (7) - move x337 y119

THen space 03:00:437 (8) - out from 7 (1.2 DS I think?)

02:45:595 (5) - You have a note here after he says "be each other's company" but you don't have one in the patterns after this with the same rhythm in the music

03:03:595 - Slider here like the previous ones

03:07:385 (4) - move x138 y62 and make the other the same (copy and paste?)

Decide with what u agree with and then I can help you in-game

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2016-08-11T21:21:58+00:00

nm from q

Aru's Easy

~

00:33:279 (1) - no more slider art? :c
00:40:858 (3,1) - fix blanket
00:50:964 (3) - this might be too hard to read for easy. as much as it looks good the sliders overlapping makes it hard to read for beginners
01:03:595 (1,2) - this would be a perfect change for blanket. no overlap in easy anyways
01:18:121 - why skip this beat when you didnt here 01:16:227 (3) -
01:23:174 - ^ you get the idea
01:27:595 (4,1) - maybe bad flow since it feels very angley maybe rotate it so its flowing downwards
01:33:911 (1) - this spinner is kind of unnecessary imo since its not like the instruments or vocals are holding down a note. map pls
02:16:858 (3) - same issue as last time
02:21:911 (3) - ^
02:26:964 (3,1) - this is a bad overlap. the player just went up and its going back down. + the slider is hiding behind the first which makes it hard to read
02:35:806 (2,3) - another overlap in easy?
02:38:964 (4,1) - fix blanket
02:52:858 (4,5) - maybe blanket
pretty good~

Normal

~

00:22:542 - no note here?
00:24:121 (2,3) - i never really liked these types of flow/looks. maybe something like : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5823394
00:34:227 (2,3) - ^ uu you get the idea
00:38:332 (1,3) - why not overlap
00:48:437 (2,4) - you can blanket
01:05:490 - would make this clickable since the "can be" part starts here
01:10:858 - add note then move spinner one?
01:20:016 (2,3) - fix blanket a bit
01:28:227 (8,1) - blankettttttttt
01:33:911 (1) - even out these sliders : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5823424
01:44:648 (3) - ctrl+g for flow?
01:57:279 (7) - make this repeat to hit 01:57:911 - ?
02:02:964 - clickable
02:15:595 (3,4) - same thing as last time
02:34:542 (1) - little imperfections on this slider
02:40:542 (2,3) - blanket
03:06:753 (3,4) - this is kind of ugly how its touching ( for the rest as well )

ezek's Hard

jk im too lazy rn

gl

Nokris

258 posts

Joined February 2015

Nokris 2016-08-11T21:25:20+00:00

normal
00:24:437 (3) - flow looks a bit wierd, you can do symmetrical pattern here to get more smooth flow. 00:23:174 (1) - copy that and paste here 00:24:437 (3) - do ctrl+h and ctrl+j and ctrl+g. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5823464 (after that stack 00:25:700 (1) - again and fix spacing here 00:25:700 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5823469)
00:34:227 (2,3) - this blanket isn't needed, try to do a smoothie flow in lowest diff's. My suggestion is https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5823477 (with fixed spacing)
00:45:279 (5) - ignoring strong beats isn't good idea. 00:45:279 (5) - move this to 00:45:911 - and put the circle here 00:45:279 -
01:51:595 - don't ignore strong beats, you must strating from this point
01:59:174 - awawaw, ^
01:57:911 - add circle
02:49:700 - you used 1\1 sliders before, maybe change to 1\1 slider and circle like that? it have same sounds 02:39:595 (1,2,3) -
02:44:648 (3,4,5) - too ^
and after that too
02:54:753 (7) - nc, and ^
03:03:595 - add circle
03:12:437 - this beat need object.

soory, im very bad in lowest diffs

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-12T02:48:47+00:00

Ora wrote:
Normal

01:26:332 (1,2,3,4,5) - use same rhythm you have here for the part before 01:23:806 (1) - fixed

01:33:911 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm here is fine, But I feel you can be more creative with the sliders/positions remaped

01:38:964 (1,2) - Use same beat here that you have on this part 00:33:279 (1,2,3,4) - i used another one

01:43:385 (1,2,3) - Keep this ! if you intended to map vocals

01:47:174 (3,4,1) - Use this same rhythm here: 02:01:700 (5,6) -

02:59:174 (6) - move to x234 y3 it will almost touch the health bar i dont like

02:59:806 (7) - move x337 y119 i think its fine

THen space 03:00:437 (8) - out from 7 (1.2 DS I think?) ^

02:45:595 (5) - You have a note here after he says "be each other's company" but you don't have one in the patterns after this with the same rhythm in the music added in next one but last 2 i left intentionaly

03:03:595 - Slider here like the previous ones done

03:07:385 (4) - move x138 y62 and make the other the same (copy and paste?) okay but they r not same
Decide with what u agree with and then I can help you in-game thx bay

Shiratoi wrote:
nm from q
[/box]
Normal
[box=~]00:22:542 - no note here? if i add note there the recovery time of the spinner will be so short can be unranked so i left recovery time
00:24:121 (2,3) - i never really liked these types of flow/looks. maybe something like : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5823394 well i like them
00:34:227 (2,3) - ^ uu you get the idea i rly like them they look neat
00:38:332 (1,3) - why not overlap u mean stack? wel ds ;w;
00:48:437 (2,4) - you can blanket not needed really
01:05:490 - would make this clickable since the "can be" part starts here ill think about this also work for "be"
01:10:858 - add note then move spinner one? okay done
01:20:016 (2,3) - fix blanket a bit fixed
01:28:227 (8,1) - blankettttttttt fixedddd
01:33:911 (1) - even out these sliders : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5823424 i remapped that part to a spinner
01:44:648 (3) - ctrl+g for flow? ok done that thx
01:57:279 (7) - make this repeat to hit 01:57:911 - ? okay
02:02:964 - clickable think its fine
02:15:595 (3,4) - same thing as last time i think its fine for now
02:34:542 (1) - little imperfections on this slider fixed them
02:40:542 (2,3) - blanket fixed
03:06:753 (3,4) - this is kind of ugly how its touching ( for the rest as well ) fixed
gl

thx for mod x)

Reya wrote:
normal
00:24:437 (3) - flow looks a bit wierd, you can do symmetrical pattern here to get more smooth flow. 00:23:174 (1) - copy that and paste here 00:24:437 (3) - do ctrl+h and ctrl+j and ctrl+g. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5823464 (after that stack 00:25:700 (1) - again and fix spacing here 00:25:700 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5823469) fixed symmetrical
00:34:227 (2,3) - this blanket isn't needed, try to do a smoothie flow in lowest diff's. My suggestion is https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5823477 (with fixed spacing) i like this im gonna keep it
00:45:279 (5) - ignoring strong beats isn't good idea. 00:45:279 (5) - move this to 00:45:911 - and put the circle here 00:45:279 - done i hate ds i hate it !!!
01:51:595 - don't ignore strong beats, you must strating from this point fixed hopefully
01:59:174 - awawaw, ^ ^
01:57:911 - add circle added
02:49:700 - you used 1\1 sliders before, maybe change to 1\1 slider and circle like that? it have same sounds 02:39:595 (1,2,3) -
02:44:648 (3,4,5) - too ^ its really needed? because thats the end of the kiai and i wanted to be like that and enter the relax part ;w; ill keep for now
and after that too
02:54:753 (7) - nc, and ^ done
03:03:595 - add circle there is an object there already
03:12:437 - this beat need object. well see about that ;w;

soory, im very bad in lowest diffs was helpful

thx for mod Reya <3

CrystilonZ

1,557 posts

Joined January 2013

CrystilonZ 2016-08-12T13:23:43+00:00

Hi there~ from the queue

[General]
I think a 192 kbps one should be easy to find for this song. Just ask ezek for this and I believe he can provide you one in no time
asdf product tie-ins
Double spacebar detected

Tags: ezek Ora (here) Pop

[Lilyanna's Light Insane]

Actually, you can name this "Insane" tho. Light Insane is the thing we use if the spread between Hard and Insane sucks
The flow is pretty questionable, but I will just let it slide
I don't understand the choice you made either. Why did you choose to skip things like 01:17:648 but mapped things like 01:21:911 (2,3,4) - . At least it's consistent, so I think it's fine.
00:25:227 (6) - suddenly normal sample lol
00:25:700 (1,5) - this overlap is not really nice and the flow towards 00:27:595 (6) - is not very good either
00:39:595 (4) - to keep this one coherent with the pattern of 00:38:964 (2,3) - , try something like this. And it will also fit with the spacing you did before like 00:34:542 (4) -
00:53:490 (1) - I know this is the pattern you've made, but this one deserves some more emphasis.
01:23:174 (7,8,9,1) - I will just say these overlap badly. Try something like this
01:23:806 (1) - I don't know if you intended to make a manual stack or just a normal stack. If it's a normal stack, then it's off.
01:26:332 (1) - I thought you were making anti-jumps on these notes, but some variation is fine, i guess.
02:01:385 (3) - point this a bit downwards and it will give you a better sense of reversal on 02:01:700 (4) -
02:01:069 (1,4) - swap nc. there's no need for nc at 02:01:069 (1) -
02:20:332 (5) - I don't know exactly why it is put here, so I'm gonna assume you tried to make a blanket. put this at 464/116 should get rid of the spacing inconsistency.
Also, please check for accidental slider-slide sounds.

[ezek's Hard]

report ezek pls: display too lewd i want to read this ajfneofwe

00:23:174 lol wtf the density is even higher than ~~Ora's~~ Lilyanna's diff
Check this box if you want to reduce the density. If not, skip this.
00:31:542 (2,3) - merge this into 1 2/4 slider
01:42:279 (2,3) - ^
01:54:121 (1,2,3) -
01:14:332 (2,3,4) - can you improve this? The pattern is so curvy
01:22:542 (4) - I think this should be point upwards, but this is also fine
02:44:332 (5) - around 486/82 perhaps? reason is obvious
02:44:648 lazy ezek
well, if you fix anything from the first kiai, fix it too in ^
03:20:016 (1,2,1) - stack'em

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01:25:069 check hitsounds
Just stick with the one-big-white-one-nc thing unless the music really calls for a special nc.
01:52:227 (2,2) - wat
I think this map is pretty decent, but for your next map, please don't just flip things. Be imaginative Being consistent is good, but being repetitive isn't

good luck~

Yukiyo

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Joined June 2014

Yukiyo 2016-08-12T16:13:48+00:00

Hi o/
from my q
Disclaimer: I always sound rude in my mods
Don't let it bother you I don't mean it

Let's see if I can help you

Aru's Easy

00:40:858 (3,1) - improve blanket~
01:52:858 (4,1) - ^ ~
02:01:069 (2,3) - Hmm the angle on how the circle is leading into the slider is weird because the slider choses another flow idk~
02:38:964 (4,1) - blanket

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00:24:437 (3) - Probably said already but ctrl+g would create a nice (kinda) circular flow which plays nicer then such linear
00:32:648 (4) - missing clap?
00:45:911 (1) - NC because downbeat and pause before
00:48:437 (1) - NC downbeat
01:09:279 - missing clap?
01:10:542 - ^?
01:25:069 - hs missing from here on?
01:32:332 (6,8) - dunno aboout stacking these ... could maintain sliderflow by putting 8 in direction the slider is pointing
01:41:174 (4) - delete NC
01:41:490 (1) - NC
01:51:595 - hs
01:54:121 - hs
01:57:911 - hs ... not going to point out hitsounding anymore~
02:35:806 (1) - no need for NC rather NC here 02:37:069 (3) -
02:40:542 (2,3,4,5) - improve blanket~
02:42:121 (5) - could ctrl+g for flow and stuff
02:44:648 (3) - NC
02:45:911 (1) - delete NC
02:49:700 (3) - NC
02:50:964 (4) - delete NC

Be sure to have consitent downbeat NC's pls (because it is mostly the notes which is mostly emphasized)

ezek's Hard

Looks like a decent diff c:

Ora's Light Insane

already noticed hsing something's wrong ... use my normal mod for reference~
Noticed nothing I felt to be odd

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-08-12T20:43:11+00:00

CrystilonZ wrote:
Hi there~ from the queue

[General]
I think a 192 kbps one should be easy to find for this song. Just ask ezek for this and I believe he can provide you one in no time
asdf product tie-ins
Double spacebar detected oups fixed x)
Tags: ezek Ora (here) Pop
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01:25:069 check hitsounds did and did for rest
Just stick with the one-big-white-one-nc thing unless the music really calls for a special nc. ye
01:52:227 (2,2) - wat doesnt seem of big deal of overlap to me tbh ;w;
I think this map is pretty decent, but for your next map, please don't just flip things. Be imaginative Being consistent is good, but being repetitive isn't but i like symmetry patterns and stuff xdd but thx for the tip

good luck~

thx for mod.

Yukiyo wrote:
Hi o/ hello
from my q
Disclaimer: I always sound rude in my mods
Don't let it bother you I don't mean it

Let's see if I can help you

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00:24:437 (3) - Probably said already but ctrl+g would create a nice (kinda) circular flow which plays nicer then such linear true fixed
00:32:648 (4) - missing clap? yes sir i missed
00:45:911 (1) - NC because downbeat and pause before fixed ;w;
00:48:437 (1) - NC downbeat i think the nc choice is fine here
01:09:279 - missing clap? yes fixed and all the rest
01:10:542 - ^?
01:25:069 - hs missing from here on? fixed all ;w;
01:32:332 (6,8) - dunno aboout stacking these ... could maintain sliderflow by putting 8 in direction the slider is pointing okay done
01:41:174 (4) - delete NC ye
01:41:490 (1) - NC i disagree i did nc when he started singing next part
01:51:595 - hs
01:54:121 - hs
01:57:911 - hs ... not going to point out hitsounding anymore~ when through the map for 54351 time and checked all ;w;
02:35:806 (1) - no need for NC rather NC here 02:37:069 (3) - my bad when i copy paste it iforgot to remove the nc x) fixed
02:40:542 (2,3,4,5) - improve blanket~ fixed
02:42:121 (5) - could ctrl+g for flow and stuff wont be needed
02:44:648 (3) - NC
02:45:911 (1) - delete NC
02:49:700 (3) - NC
02:50:964 (4) - delete NC fixed all nc i hope

Be sure to have consitent downbeat NC's pls (because it is mostly the notes which is mostly emphasized)

THX for mod x).

Rieri

905 posts

Joined December 2014

Rieri 2016-08-12T21:05:23+00:00

Hello~ NM from my queue

Easy

00:23:174 (1,2) - I think you can work on the blankets a bit more
00:30:753 (3,1) - Slight blanket error not mentioning any more, fix them on your own please
01:33:911 (1) - Okay, pretty sure we are going to need more recovery time than that. A full measure of recovery time is highly recommended.
02:01:700 (3) - Sorta weird how you mapped with a 4/1 slider here when you used mostly 1/1 sliders and circles before, sorta seems inconsistent with the current section and 02:04:227 (1) - blanket this properly please.
02:26:964 (3,1) - Overlaps will make the players confused, please avoid overlaps on an easy difficulty

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00:23:174 (1,2,3) - Blankets
By looking at the way you set a NC on 00:50:964 (1) - , I think it would be correct to say that 00:45:911 (6) - this should be NCed too.
01:03:595 (1,2,3) - Okay, why is the distance broken here? Just up to 00:53:490 (1) - , the distance was at 1.2x and you should keep it that way.
01:18:121 (5,1) - Fix distance here please. check the rest on your own, don't be lazy
02:21:595 (1) - Okay, there is a similar part of the song and you choose to map that part differently than this? 01:10:858 (5,1) - You mapped the "oh" with a circle here but not on 02:21:595 (1) - which is inconsistent, I recommend you to map both parts the same
Using velocity changes on normal isn't a great idea because the targeted players are still beginners who may find it confusing. Let's try to keep things simple.

Hard diff is nice, Light Insane has a lower SV than the hard diff, you should adjust that so it is higher than 1.9 or there's gonna be some trouble :3

Good luck!

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-08-12T21:08:16+00:00

[~~Lilyanna's~~ Ora's Light Insane ?? ]
Actually, you can name this "Insane" tho. Light Insane is the thing we use if the spread between Hard and Insane sucks okay
The flow is pretty questionable, but I will just let it slide
I don't understand the choice you made either. Why did you choose to skip things like 01:17:648 but mapped things like 01:21:911 (2,3,4) - . At least it's consistent, so I think it's fine. uhhh if it's fine then okay...
00:25:227 (6) - suddenly normal sample lol fixed
00:25:700 (1,5) - this overlap is not really nice and the flow towards 00:27:595 (6) - is not very good either I fixed it kind of, but it might not flow still. I will probably need to remap this part
00:39:595 (4) - to keep this one coherent with the pattern of 00:38:964 (2,3) - , try something like this. And it will also fit with the spacing you did before like 00:34:542 (4) - fixed
00:53:490 (1) - I know this is the pattern you've made, but this one deserves some more emphasis. what should I do with it? Space 1 out more?
01:23:174 (7,8,9,1) - I will just say these overlap badly. Try something like this fixed but another remap incoming...still looks ugly imo
01:23:806 (1) - I don't know if you intended to make a manual stack or just a normal stack. If it's a normal stack, then it's off. ^
01:26:332 (1) - I thought you were making anti-jumps on these notes, but some variation is fine, i guess. :D
02:01:385 (3) - point this a bit downwards and it will give you a better sense of reversal on 02:01:700 (4) - nice find and fixed
02:01:069 (1,4) - swap nc. there's no need for nc at 02:01:069 (1) - another nice find
02:20:332 (5) - I don't know exactly why it is put here, so I'm gonna assume you tried to make a blanket. put this at 464/116 should get rid of the spacing inconsistency. fixed I guess? I didn't see the problem really
Also, please check for accidental slider-slide sounds. Lily is on it

Thanks a lot for this. Accepted pretty much everything

Underforest

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Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-08-12T21:10:23+00:00

since there isn't a insane diff, you can rename light insane diff with a custom name like "Forever", "Love" or "Together"
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