[General]
- Maybe make the OD of Another ~8.2 cause there's more notes and few LNs.
- I think your offset is actually ~87. I'm using the old offset.
[Yuki's Normal]00:03:185 (3185|3,3367|2,3549|1) - Since the pitch is ascending, I would consider using Control H here and then shifting the notes one column to the right.
00:03:731 (3731|0,3913|1,4095|2) - I would then suggest using control H on these notes because the pitch of the last note is lower than all the other notes.
00:11:185 (11185|3) - I'd suggest removing this note to add a little emphasis to the bells at 00:11:367 (11367|1,11549|2) because they're the melody and you didn't map the lower pitched bells at 00:10:640
00:25:913 (25913|1,26095|2) - Control H? The first note at 00:25:913 is a high pitched bubble pop, whereas 00:26:095 is a low drum tom.
00:27:367 (27367|0) - Assuming you're following the synth here, this ends at 00:27:822 , and I think it's fine to end it there and leave 1/4 gap between the LN and 00:27:913 (27913|2)
00:31:731 (31731|3,31822|2) - To loosely follow some pitch relevancy here, why not control J? Because 00:31:731 (31731|3) is lower in pitch than 00:31:822 (31822|2)
00:37:185 (37185|1) - What about making this a short 1/2 LN since the sound sounds smoother and longer as opposed to the short sounds around it?
00:41:549 (41549|2,41731|2) - Why are these jacked? They're different pitches with 00:41:549 (41549|2) being lower than 00:41:731 (41731|2) so maybe make it like {2} {3} instead?
00:46:640 (46640|1,46640|3) - I understand that this is the end of this section, but the sound isn't loud at all, and is as soft as the notes around it, so remove one note?
00:44:458 (44458|2,44458|3) - Why is this clap a double when the claps at 00:41:549 - 00:40:095 - and etc. aren't?
00:57:913 (57913|2) - Since there's a burst here in the music, why not add an LN for it and end at 00:58:276 ? If accepted, remove 00:58:095 (58095|1)
01:00:004 (60004|2) - I think this note is a little too quiet to be mapped too since it looks like you're mapping just the melody here, and not the small bells in the background.
01:32:640 (92640|2,92822|3) - I think you flipped these notes around. The synth like 01:32:095 (92095|1) is at 01:32:640 so the LN should be there and 01:32:640 (92640|2) should be at 01:32:822
[Muu's Hard]00:11:185 (11185|2) - These next 2 suggestions are me being a PR nazi. Move this to 2.
00:11:367 (11367|1,11549|2) - Control H. This also works out cause then 00:11:549 (11549|2,11913|1) would be in the same column and they're the same pitch.
00:22:640 - I think 1/6 in a hard difficulty may be too difficult due to the speed and the fact that this pattern isn't a common burst pattern. Instead, you could try to replace it with 1/3 and just save the 1/6 for a higher difficulty, also due to the diff curve and how Normal barely used any 1/4, so this might be too fast.
00:34:276 (34276|3,34276|2,34640|0,34640|1) - Because of the target audience this is aimed towards, I would suggest using jumpbursts like this more sparingly because these kicks aren't that loud and don't really need a double note, as opposed to a clap or something, so I'd consider reducing them to single notes so that it's a little easier to hit and read.
00:38:458 (38458|3,38458|1,38640|2) - Another thing here, why do you ignore the clap and choose to accent the kicks instead? While there's nothing wrong with that, it just feels a little weird to ignore the more emphasized clap.
00:57:913 - Why don't you map the 1/6 synth burst in the music here like you did at places like 00:45:913 or 00:22:640 ?
[Insane]00:02:640 (2640|3) - For pitch relevancy, move this to 2.
00:06:981 - Why not add a note here (1/16) for the gracenote or the small bell sound before the louder synth.
00:46:276 - Here, there's a long synth like at 00:45:549 (45549|0) so maybe try something like this
http://puu.sh/qo1lZ.jpg00:57:913 - Why don't you add the 1/6 here for the synth like you did at the timestamp of the above suggestion?
01:44:095 - The 1/6 synth starts here, so maybe try this
http://puu.sh/qo1yY.jpg