In place of the usual bakatastic bubble, I present to you Saint Archer, Patron saint of the Indo mappers. Pray to him whenever I come into your threads to destroy a map :^)

let the next BN rest in peace

prot can just die

Protastic101 wrote:

In place of the usual bakatastic bubble, I present to you Saint Archer, Patron saint of the Indo mappers. Pray to him whenever I come into your threads to destroy a map :^)

thankssss my first bubble =3=
im a masochist so its okay owo)b

usaha yg tdk sisa2 trnyata :3
good luck on ranking ~

AchsanLovers wrote:

usaha yg tdk sisa2 trnyata :3
good luck on ranking ~

thanksss

Alsty- wrote:

AchsanLovers wrote:

usaha yg tdk sisa2 trnyata :3
good luck on ranking ~

thanksss

sia2 kali ah
masa sisa2

#terlalubersemangat

Frim4503 wrote:

sia2 kali ah
masa sisa2

#terlalubersemangat

yhaa gak sengaja aja typonya :v

anjir, ini kok malah banyak ngeshitpost dimari :v

mark for qualify really sorry for the huge delay due to my examination

column 1 2 3 4

Beginner Nue
- 00:41:195 (41195|0,41195|1,41532|3,41869|1,41869|2) - how about this one? > http://puu.sh/upeB1/e90e5978d7.png
- 01:08:835 (68835|0,69004|3,69172|2,69341|0,69509|1,69678|3,69846|2,70015|1) - my suggestion > http://puu.sh/upeRm/5a0fb18dd6.png , 01:10:184 - i guess u would'nt need a normal note here goes along with LN since there isn't any special sound goes with 1/4 sound here.
- 01:17:262 - suggest to add a note here to be consistent with 01:22:655 (82655|2) - 01:24:004 (84004|3) - etc
- 02:02:768 (122768|0,122936|3,123105|2,123273|1) - how about make a descending stair here 4-3-2-1? it would be nice to make a mirror stair with 02:05:464 (125464|0,125633|1,125802|2,125970|3) -
- 02:08:161 (128161|3,128161|2,128330|0,128498|1,128667|2) - a stair here could work > http://puu.sh/upfii/5c9266cc36.png ?
- 02:09:509 (129509|1) - i think single LN is enough to emphasize the sound here
- 02:30:408 (150408|3) - missing hitsound
- 02:31:757 (151757|2) - 02:36:813 (156813|0) - 02:38:498 (158498|3) - 02:42:712 (162712|0) - ^
- 02:56:026 (176026|1,176195|0,176363|3) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/upfCX/4805f6e0fb.png since the sound are a little different here
- 03:34:453 - could be nice to use double note here
- 03:39:846 (219846|2,219846|1) - i guess single note should be enough
- 03:41:532 (221532|3) - maybe try to move this to other column to make it different from 03:40:184 (220184|3) -
- 03:45:240 (225240|1,225240|0) - i suggest single note here since it is just omly kick sound
- 03:47:262 (227262|3,227262|2) - kinda sudden double note for this sound here? since u did not layer double note with this sound before

Intermediate Bushi
- 00:06:476 (6476|2,6644|3) - CTRL+H? to prevent using the same stair pattern here
- 00:17:599 (17599|1,17768|0) - CTRL+G? same reason here
- 00:49:959 (49959|2) - move to 4?
- 01:01:925 (61925|2,62262|2) - move to 2? just to make a little space to the left
- 01:22:993 - would be better to have a note here for the dubstep sound, feeling a little off when i am playing at this part
- 01:24:341 (84341|1,84509|0) - CTRL+G?
- 01:33:779 - same reason like before, my suggestion to add a note
- 01:35:127 (95127|1,95296|2) - how about CTRL+H? a jump pattern could fit better to the sound here
- 01:36:139 (96139|3,96139|0,96307|1,96476|2,96644|1,96813|3,96813|0,96981|2) - how about > http://puu.sh/upgRZ/6fb7e52d1f.png ?
- 01:49:285 - add another note here for crash? it won't be hard
- 02:16:251 (136251|2,136251|0,136419|1,136588|2,136757|3,136925|2,136925|0,137094|1,137262|2,137431|3) - try an alternative stair pattern here? > http://puu.sh/uph3o/9fe0b7ed12.png because the current one seems heavy on right hand > http://puu.sh/uph63/923e814f98.png
- 02:22:655 (142655|1) - move to 4?
- 02:38:498 (158498|1,158667|2) - they have the similiar sound but different pattern with 02:27:712 (147712|3) - u can make both of them same for consistency
- 03:37:993 (217993|3,218161|2) - CTRL+G? to make a mirror pattern of 03:37:487 (217487|3,217487|0,217655|2) -
- 03:40:521 - like before my suggestion to add a note here

Hyper Koutetsujou
- 01:00:745 (60745|2) - u can make it into LN here end at 01:01:082 - , it goes nicely along with 01:01:082 (61082|0) -
- 01:09:088 (69088|1,69425|2,69762|1,70099|2) - missing hitsound
- 01:29:566 - how about this? > http://puu.sh/upiR5/f237724aa5.png it gives a better flow here
- 01:48:611 (108611|1,108948|2) - CTRL+G?
- 02:29:566 (149566|3) - if u follow the main chord, u should move to 02:29:608 -
- 02:37:655 (157655|3) - same here, i still recommend to layer at 02:37:698 -
- 02:40:858 (160858|2,160942|1,161026|3,161111|2) - it should be 1/6 here if i am not mistaken hmm, should be fine to keep it 1/4 here i guess
- 02:41:532 (161532|2,161616|0,161700|1,161785|2) - 02:42:206 (162206|2,162290|1,162375|2,162459|3) - ^ just pointing out in case u wanted to change something
- 03:10:184 - triple for crash?

Another Kabaneri
- 00:44:566 - how about quad note here? to emphasize the special crash impact here
- 01:06:139 - make triple note here? something similiar with 01:05:802 (65802|0,65802|2,65802|3) -
- 01:48:948 - a sv implementation here could be nice , how about 01:48:948 - x0.70 and 01:49:200 - x1.6 and 01:49:285 - x1.00 example of it


nice work, call me back when u are done

no reply = applied!

Critical_Star wrote:

mark for qualify really sorry for the huge delay due to my examination

column 1 2 3 4

Beginner Nue
- 00:41:195 (41195|0,41195|1,41532|3,41869|1,41869|2) - how about this one? > http://puu.sh/upeB1/e90e5978d7.png
- 01:08:835 (68835|0,69004|3,69172|2,69341|0,69509|1,69678|3,69846|2,70015|1) - my suggestion > http://puu.sh/upeRm/5a0fb18dd6.png , 01:10:184 - i guess u would'nt need a normal note here goes along with LN since there isn't any special sound goes with 1/4 sound here.
- 01:17:262 - suggest to add a note here to be consistent with 01:22:655 (82655|2) - 01:24:004 (84004|3) - etc
- 02:02:768 (122768|0,122936|3,123105|2,123273|1) - how about make a descending stair here 4-3-2-1? it would be nice to make a mirror stair with 02:05:464 (125464|0,125633|1,125802|2,125970|3) -
- 02:08:161 (128161|3,128161|2,128330|0,128498|1,128667|2) - a stair here could work > http://puu.sh/upfii/5c9266cc36.png ?
- 02:09:509 (129509|1) - i think single LN is enough to emphasize the sound here
- 02:30:408 (150408|3) - missing hitsound
- 02:31:757 (151757|2) - 02:36:813 (156813|0) - 02:38:498 (158498|3) - 02:42:712 (162712|0) - ^
- 02:56:026 (176026|1,176195|0,176363|3) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/upfCX/4805f6e0fb.png since the sound are a little different here
- 03:34:453 - could be nice to use double note here // i keep it single , but i change it with LN
- 03:39:846 (219846|2,219846|1) - i guess single note should be enough
- 03:41:532 (221532|3) - maybe try to move this to other column to make it different from 03:40:184 (220184|3) -
- 03:45:240 (225240|1,225240|0) - i suggest single note here since it is just omly kick sound
- 03:47:262 (227262|3,227262|2) - kinda sudden double note for this sound here? since u did not layer double note with this sound before

Intermediate Bushi
- 00:06:476 (6476|2,6644|3) - CTRL+H? to prevent using the same stair pattern here
- 00:17:599 (17599|1,17768|0) - CTRL+G? same reason here
- 00:49:959 (49959|2) - move to 4?
- 01:01:925 (61925|2,62262|2) - move to 2? just to make a little space to the left
- 01:22:993 - would be better to have a note here for the dubstep sound, feeling a little off when i am playing at this part
- 01:24:341 (84341|1,84509|0) - CTRL+G?
- 01:33:779 - same reason like before, my suggestion to add a note
- 01:35:127 (95127|1,95296|2) - how about CTRL+H? a jump pattern could fit better to the sound here
- 01:36:139 (96139|3,96139|0,96307|1,96476|2,96644|1,96813|3,96813|0,96981|2) - how about > http://puu.sh/upgRZ/6fb7e52d1f.png ? // im change it a bit
- 01:49:285 - add another note here for crash? it won't be hard
- 02:16:251 (136251|2,136251|0,136419|1,136588|2,136757|3,136925|2,136925|0,137094|1,137262|2,137431|3) - try an alternative stair pattern here? > http://puu.sh/uph3o/9fe0b7ed12.png because the current one seems heavy on right hand > http://puu.sh/uph63/923e814f98.png
- 02:22:655 (142655|1) - move to 4?
- 02:38:498 (158498|1,158667|2) - they have the similiar sound but different pattern with 02:27:712 (147712|3) - u can make both of them same for consistency
- 03:37:993 (217993|3,218161|2) - CTRL+G? to make a mirror pattern of 03:37:487 (217487|3,217487|0,217655|2) -
- 03:40:521 - like before my suggestion to add a note here

Hyper Koutetsujou
- 01:00:745 (60745|2) - u can make it into LN here end at 01:01:082 - , it goes nicely along with 01:01:082 (61082|0) -
- 01:09:088 (69088|1,69425|2,69762|1,70099|2) - missing hitsound
- 01:29:566 - how about this? > http://puu.sh/upiR5/f237724aa5.png it gives a better flow here
- 01:48:611 (108611|1,108948|2) - CTRL+G?
- 02:29:566 (149566|3) - if u follow the main chord, u should move to 02:29:608 -
- 02:37:655 (157655|3) - same here, i still recommend to layer at 02:37:698 -
- 02:40:858 (160858|2,160942|1,161026|3,161111|2) - it should be 1/6 here if i am not mistaken hmm, should be fine to keep it 1/4 here i guess
- 02:41:532 (161532|2,161616|0,161700|1,161785|2) - 02:42:206 (162206|2,162290|1,162375|2,162459|3) - ^ just pointing out in case u wanted to change something // im keeping it because you said it shld be fine with 1/4 , i dont want break the LNs in highest diff
- 03:10:184 - triple for crash?

Another Kabaneri
- 00:44:566 - how about quad note here? to emphasize the special crash impact here
- 01:06:139 - make triple note here? something similiar with 01:05:802 (65802|0,65802|2,65802|3) -
- 01:48:948 - a sv implementation here could be nice , how about 01:48:948 - x0.70 and 01:49:200 - x1.6 and 01:49:285 - x1.00 example of it


nice work, call me back when u are done

waaa

fixed the missing hitsound and rechecked the pattern, removed unwanted timing point
looks good qualified~

Critical_Star wrote:

fixed the missing hitsound and rechecked the pattern, removed unwanted timing point
looks good qualified~

thank you CS , thank you so much <3

uhhh could i know what is "bushi" and "nue" here? idk if its related with kotetsujou no kabaneri in any ways, but i just curious xd

dem it was too fast for me, congrats for ur first ranked beatmap! ~

wadoo aku ntah kapan :V wkowkwokwo

Ntapz map eteh rengket v:
Gratz

AchsanLovers wrote:

dem it was too fast for me, congrats for ur first ranked beatmap! ~

wadoo aku ntah kapan :V wkowkwokwo

Curhat mas :> *slaps

I'm too tired to play it (a g a i n ?)... maybe i need to sleep more lol.

Congratulations, I was waiting this since i mod it 4 months ago!

Rivals_7 wrote:

uhhh could i know what is "bushi" and "nue" here? idk if its related with kotetsujou no kabaneri in any ways, but i just curious xd

Nue is the monster that mumei transform into , its called nue, its from wiki tbh xD (?)
and bushi is the army that fighting the kabaneri.

rip english xD

AchsanLovers wrote:

dem it was too fast for me, congrats for ur first ranked beatmap! ~

wadoo aku ntah kapan :V wkowkwokwo

moga" lewat seminggu neraka :v thanks btw :3

Syadow- wrote:

Ntapz map eteh rengket v:
Gratz

AchsanLovers wrote:

dem it was too fast for me, congrats for ur first ranked beatmap! ~

wadoo aku ntah kapan :V wkowkwokwo

Curhat mas :> *slaps

plsss :v

No_sync wrote:

I'm too tired to play it (a g a i n ?)... maybe i need to sleep more lol.

Congratulations, I was waiting this since i mod it 4 months ago!

thankyou for your support , and also thankyou for playing! :3

thanks to everyone that helping this map, this map cant be here without you all

Alsty- wrote:

Nue is the monster that mumei transform into , its called nue, its from wiki tbh xD (?)

tbh I also dunno what nue is... now I just wondering why that badass monster was E icon rated :3

grtz ranked owo

edit : oh sorry baru paham diff namingnya :v kirain ada "petik dua" nya lol

Ilham wrote:

Alsty- wrote:

Nue is the monster that mumei transform into , its called nue, its from wiki tbh xD (?)

tbh I also dunno what nue is... now I just wondering why that badass monster was E icon rated :3

grtz ranked owo

edit : oh sorry baru paham diff namingnya :v kirain ada "petik dua" nya lol

bentuknya jelek bat , jadi kasih E aja :v lmao

Good Map