SPYAIR - Genjou Destruction · forum

Sotarks

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-07-21T14:31:47+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on vendredi 11 novembre 2016 at 12:58:16

Artist: SPYAIR
Title: Genjou Destruction
Source: Gekijouban Gintama Kanketsu-hen Yorozuya yo Eien Nare
Tags: ending ed full ver version akitoshi hb24 kalibe doormat movie 劇場版銀魂完結篇万事屋よ永遠なれ
BPM: 194
Filesize: 4281kb
Play Time: 03:29
Difficulties Available:

Akitoshi's Normal (1,84 stars, 278 notes)
Doormat's Hard (3,25 stars, 531 notes)
HB's Expert (5,38 stars, 760 notes)
Kalibe's Insane (4,44 stars, 648 notes)
Obliteration (5,61 stars, 763 notes)

Download: SPYAIR - Genjou Destruction
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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-身食らう蛇- I
Background by「swd3e2」

#19

Normal - Akitoshi

Hard - Doormat

Insane - Kalibe

Expert - HB24

Obliteration - Sotarks

Hitsounds - Sotarks

Last edited by Sotarks 2016-11-11T11:58:38+00:00, edited 35 times in total.

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-07-31T04:18:27+00:00

gintama
spyair

why im not here

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Haruto 2016-07-31T04:24:52+00:00

pkhg wrote:
gintama
spyair

why im not here

same. i'll probably make the short ver of this song Xd
anyways, gl on the set sotarks, just poke me if you need mods

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-07-31T16:50:30+00:00

pkhg wrote:
gintama
spyair

why im not here

i thought u mapped only tvsize, and i didn't know it was gintama when I started mapping it xd (that's why no gintama bg xd)

Haruto wrote:
same. i'll probably make the short ver of this song Xd
anyways, gl on the set sotarks, just poke me if you need mods

tyty

Mint

1,607 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2016-08-03T21:53:05+00:00

i did something i think

23:30 Sotarks: dud
23:30 Sotarks: can u play?
23:30 appleeaterx: np
23:31 *Sotarks is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1034343 SPYAIR - Genjou Destruction]
23:32 Sotarks: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
23:37 Sotarks: wow
23:37 Sotarks: that slider
23:37 Sotarks: break
23:37 Sotarks: xd
23:37 Sotarks: i laughed
23:37 appleeaterx: mostly same as ur other maps, not really structured but only based on flow usage / breaks
23:38 appleeaterx: 00:49:235 (1) - rip vocal on white tick
23:38 appleeaterx: 00:58:823 (1,2,1,2,1,1) - see the combos dont match, another reason why 1212 never make sense to me
23:38 Sotarks: i don't think it's necessary
23:39 Sotarks: well
23:39 appleeaterx: 01:10:885 (1,1,1) - the sv changes feel so minimal it does more bad than good
23:39 Sotarks: 1 2 1 2
23:39 Sotarks: back and fourth like that
23:39 Sotarks: make it more readable
23:39 Sotarks: for this kind of patern
23:39 Sotarks: wat ?
23:39 Sotarks: xd
23:39 Sotarks: english pls
23:40 appleeaterx: the sv changes arent that noticeable, and i doubt people can actually figure out what it follows without going to the editor
23:40 Sotarks: and u kidding me right when u say my map is not structured
23:40 appleeaterx: therefore making it really random
23:40 Sotarks: hm
23:41 appleeaterx: 01:26:349 (1,2,3) - one of the less comfortable kickslider patterns ive played, since you really have to make a sharp turn to catch (3)
23:41 Sotarks: lol it's 0,20 change
23:41 Sotarks: it's kinda noticable
23:41 Sotarks: oh
23:41 appleeaterx: 00:24:493 (1,2,3) - this really does feel and play so much better
23:42 appleeaterx: 01:36:091 (1,2,3,4,5) - same here
23:42 appleeaterx: 01:49:235 (1) - still have my doubts on this slider
23:42 Sotarks: fixed
23:42 Sotarks: i ctrl g
23:42 Sotarks: (2)
23:42 appleeaterx: 01:51:091 (1) - rip rocal
23:43 appleeaterx: 02:13:050 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i guess u dont like streams lol
23:43 appleeaterx: 02:22:947 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
23:43 Sotarks: xd
23:43 Sotarks: fuck streams
23:43 Sotarks: kills my combo
23:43 Sotarks: in hr
23:43 appleeaterx: why did you map 02:42:741 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - then?
23:44 appleeaterx: it only makes that stream really sudden
23:44 appleeaterx: 02:36:246 (1) - would say that ignoring the clap isnt really a smart move after following it in previous combos
23:44 appleeaterx: you'll already have 02:36:710 (2) - as a 1/1 slider so i think thats already sufficient for this part
23:45 appleeaterx: 02:37:483 (1) - cymbal offbeat when not needed brings me to tears
23:45 appleeaterx: 02:37:947 (2) - not only one but two claps this time!!
23:45 Sotarks: i mapped that stream because to not make the same rythmn as guitar
23:45 Sotarks: so no jumps
23:45 Sotarks: your fingers change
23:45 Sotarks: and here i really want to emphasis the guitar
23:46 appleeaterx: 02:40:189 (3) - dont map this one or get someone to edit your mp3
23:46 appleeaterx: because the guitar is snapped to 1/6
23:46 Sotarks: Really ?
23:46 Sotarks: NOOO
23:46 Sotarks: it fucks up
23:46 Sotarks: my whole patern
23:46 appleeaterx: 02:53:256 (1) - this nc is not needed
23:47 appleeaterx: its still not snapped right either way, so rip pattern or get someone to edit ur mp3
23:47 Sotarks: ahhh fck
23:48 Sotarks: ok i remap this part
23:48 appleeaterx: 03:18:308 (1,1) - this looks funny in game lol
23:48 Sotarks: it's my cock
23:48 appleeaterx: 02:06:400 (1,2) - please dont do stuff like this
23:48 appleeaterx: just do the manual stack thing
23:49 appleeaterx: where you put it a few grids away from the head
23:49 appleeaterx: same effect, but waaay more readable
23:49 appleeaterx: and more predictable bc u spam that 100x in this map anyways
23:49 Sotarks: yeah
23:49 Sotarks: done
23:49 Sotarks: xd
23:49 appleeaterx: rest is fine; though i do feel that sometimes the map feels really limited to the rightside of the playfield at times
23:50 Sotarks: oh
23:50 appleeaterx: 02:07:638 (1,2) - also counts for this btw
23:50 Sotarks: i didn't play it yet
23:50 Sotarks: so idk
23:50 Sotarks: i'm on holidays
23:50 Sotarks: so
23:50 Sotarks: rip
23:50 appleeaterx: well, maybe its just me, but if you testplay it, maybe you can notice it too
23:50 appleeaterx: maybe its just me who always notices this stuff but w/e
23:51 appleeaterx: wish you would use more 1/4 tapping (triplets/ministreams) so that random stream doesnt come too sudden
23:51 appleeaterx: thats all gl
23:52 Sotarks: oh thanks
23:52 Sotarks: didn't expect an irc xd
23:52 Sotarks: but post
23:52 appleeaterx: and gj mapping a full song lol makes me less disappointed in this era
23:52 Sotarks: log for cum
23:52 Sotarks: kudo*

Yuii-

2,503 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2016-08-18T16:49:52+00:00

Aww, guess what I am about to comment?

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-08-18T18:54:38+00:00

Who are you ?

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2016-08-27T15:59:16+00:00

I'm a turtle

Doormat

2,049 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2016-10-05T04:05:01+00:00

i heard you like turtles

osu file format v14

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Version:Doormat's Hard
Source:Gintama Movie: Kanketsu-hen - Yorozuya yo Eien Nare
Tags:劇場版銀魂 完結篇 万事屋よ永遠なれ ending ed full ver version akitoshi hb24 kalibe doormat
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508,292,206504,1,0,1:0:0:0:
508,292,206658,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,348,206813,6,0,L|263:328,1,150,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,264,207277,2,0,L|336:244,1,150,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
272,172,207741,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,172,207895,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,107,208050,6,0,P|106:96|37:124,1,150,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,216,208514,2,0,P|26:285|85:331,1,150,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,352,208978,1,8,0:0:0:0:
150,259,209133,1,8,0:0:0:0:
150,259,209287,1,10,3:0:0:0:

i spent like a total of 5 hours on it when i should've been doing my assignments =w=;

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-10-05T14:06:18+00:00

~~i'll upload hard tonight, and we'll be rdy!~~
ok rdy for mods!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ProfessionalBox

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

771 posts

Joined September 2013

ProfessionalBox 2016-10-05T17:16:42+00:00

irc

19:58 Sotarks: hey probox!
19:58 ProfessionalBox: sup sotarks
19:58 Sotarks: are u free to mod 1 diff on a set of me ?
19:58 Sotarks: fine u?
19:59 Sotarks: bit exhausted
19:59 ProfessionalBox: how long is the diff
19:59 Sotarks: with school work
19:59 Sotarks: 3min
19:59 ProfessionalBox: same for me tbh xd
19:59 Sotarks: sypair
19:59 *Sotarks is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1099216 SPYAIR - Genjou Destruction]
19:59 ProfessionalBox: I can do a quick irc mod
19:59 Sotarks: sure
19:59 ProfessionalBox: I've really started to dislike modding
19:59 ProfessionalBox: so forum posts are meh
19:59 Sotarks: oh eyah
19:59 Sotarks: same
19:59 ProfessionalBox: highest diff?
20:00 ProfessionalBox: I'll playtest it first and mod after that
20:00 Sotarks: okk
20:03 Sotarks: uhh
20:03 ProfessionalBox: rip acc
20:04 Sotarks: sick slider break
20:04 ProfessionalBox: 02:55:576 (4,5,6) - This snapping movement was a bit meh
20:04 ProfessionalBox: but that's just me disliking the movement
20:04 Sotarks: yeah I know linear stuff
20:04 Sotarks: it's just personnal taste
20:04 Sotarks: I just wanted to change the flowing here
20:05 ProfessionalBox: That was the only thing that playability wise popped up for me
20:05 ProfessionalBox: as weird
20:05 ProfessionalBox: 00:15:215 (1) -
20:05 Sotarks: Heh ok xD
20:05 Sotarks: i'll try to see what over poeple think about that
20:05 ProfessionalBox: I'd suggest more consistency with these
20:05 ProfessionalBox: 00:52:174 (1) -
20:06 ProfessionalBox: Maybe try to make them all look more alike
20:06 ProfessionalBox: and a bit more symmetric
20:06 ProfessionalBox: That's just my visual preference tbh though
20:06 Sotarks: Yeah good idea tho
20:06 ProfessionalBox: 00:57:122 (1,3) - Also blanketing these would be cool xd
20:06 ProfessionalBox: 00:59:596 (1) - Just remove the nc
20:07 ProfessionalBox: I know that it's supposed to start a new measure
20:07 Sotarks: I don't like blankets man :/
20:07 ProfessionalBox: but looks stupid with the 1,1
20:07 ProfessionalBox: also inconsistent with 00:58:823 (1,2,1,2) -
20:07 ProfessionalBox: so
20:07 ProfessionalBox: you should just remove the NC
20:07 ProfessionalBox: It's alright
20:07 ProfessionalBox: I'm just a visual nazi at times
20:07 Sotarks: yeah fine ok, removed
20:07 ProfessionalBox: xd
20:09 ProfessionalBox: 01:22:019 (1) - X:82 Y:367 somewhere around there would be a bit more better flow but the idea would be the same
20:09 Sotarks: yeah ok
20:10 Sotarks: nice
20:10 ProfessionalBox: 01:49:235 (1) - I'm thinking of a better way to use this
20:10 Sotarks: yeah
20:10 Sotarks: I know
20:10 Sotarks: xDDD
20:12 ProfessionalBox: The spinning movement should start by going to the left
20:12 ProfessionalBox: but idk how to make that happen
20:12 ProfessionalBox: since right now it's impossible to tell in which direction the spinning goes the player assumes it goes left because of the flow
20:12 ProfessionalBox: so the spinning right feels weird but nobody will break
20:12 Sotarks: yeha
20:12 Sotarks: i did smth
20:12 Sotarks: else
20:13 ProfessionalBox: 02:01:297 (1,1) - The NC thing
20:14 ProfessionalBox: 02:40:112 (2,3) -
20:14 ProfessionalBox: I feel like you should capture this sound with a triplet instead
20:14 Sotarks: yeah yea
20:14 ProfessionalBox:

?
20:14 ProfessionalBox: 02:55:885 (6) - consider NC btw
20:15 Sotarks: the triple
20:15 Sotarks: here
20:15 Sotarks: is out of the bpm
20:15 Sotarks: i mean
20:15 Sotarks: i need to time it
20:15 ProfessionalBox: uh
20:15 ProfessionalBox: the most accurate would be 1/3
20:15 Sotarks: so weird
20:15 ProfessionalBox: but 1/4 works better
20:15 ProfessionalBox: or a repeat 1/3
20:16 ProfessionalBox: I don't have anything more to add
20:16 Sotarks: i did 1/4
20:16 Sotarks: thanks buddy!
20:16 ProfessionalBox: np
20:16 Sotarks: u can post for kd

Yoshimaro

539 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoshimaro 2016-10-06T02:48:48+00:00

hi from q

before i start i just want to say Color 3 feels really out of place. the other colors are super super saturated and every combo with Combo 3 just feels aesthetically underwhelming in comparison. i understand that color is like 50% of the BG image but you could've picked another super saturated color like magenta or something lo (i cant tell what the BG is but i see some pink stuff in there so why not h e h)

ok here's some shit

Atikohsis' nromal

lol where are your hitsounds

10/10 diff tho

doomrats hrad

00:39:493 - place slider here instead fill 00:39:802 - and 00:39:957 - with circles? i just thought 00:39:493 - deserved as much held emphasis as 00:39:184 (2) -

03:29:287 (5) - think this deserves just as much spacing as 03:28:514 (2,3,4) -

Kablie's isnaen

01:02:844 - shouldnt the longer stressed slider start here with the heavier emphasis on "ta"? the way you mapped it here 00:52:947 (3,4,1) - captures both the emphasized hard syllable "ta" 00:52:947 - and the changing of pitch during the "ai" with 00:53:411 - ... i think this instance was much more appropriately mapped since it covers all of the elements

01:09:339 (1,1) - was that suppose dto lbanket h e h e h e cus fix that if it was

01:10:266 - to be consistent with 01:10:885 (1,1,1) - , which is obviously mapped to his held vocals, this should be a slider that ends 01:10:576 - (how convenient)

01:43:668 (3,4) - a whole 1.4 more than 01:46:143 (3,4) - (nerf one or buff the other)

01:54:802 (3,4,5,1) - this way works too

02:04:390 (2,3,4) - but again tho, this is missing the "ta"

02:59:132 (3,1) - lol this way also works

03:24:339 - i like how starting here, 03:24:339 (1,1,1,1) - all have heavy left direction emphasis... that was dope

pretty conservative usage of mapping space, ctrl a

BH's etrxa

00:11:040 (4,6) - if that was supposed to stack then fix that

01:43:668 (5) - NC to be consistent with 01:46:143 (1) - , or un NC that to be consistent with 01:48:617 (8) - (fix your NCs here)

02:11:040 (1,2,3) - 01:08:875 (3,4,5) - 03:15:060 (3,4,5,6,7) - compare, second kiai ending is super underwhelming in comparison

03:28:823 (3) - NC to help visually aid the emphasize on the percussion-guitar combo?

fuck im so tired

Olbtiitratoin

00:20:009 (4) - mmmm... personally would like to see it face the other direction but i understand this way too

00:24:493 (1,2) - mute slider ends because it sounds overmapped even if you are only applying the clicking function to just 00:24:493 - and 00:24:648 -

00:24:802 (3) - delete or NC to clarify this is mapped to vocals and not a continuation of the percussions... alternatively you could make 00:24:648 (2) - longer

00:30:060 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - how long does it take you to map these types of slow combos because i stare at them for way too long i feel like lmao

01:26:349 (1,2,3) - this part is different than 00:24:493 (1,2,3) - in that there isn't even a syllable on 01:26:658 - . delete 01:26:658 (3) - , mute slider ends, make 01:26:504 (2) - longer is my suggestion

01:36:555 (5) - delete, 01:36:401 (4) - make this longer, and mute slider ends

01:49:235 (1) - o shit thats pretty

02:13:050 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i dont think ive seen build ups mapped this way, this was also pretty

02:43:668 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - super awkwardly circular flow lo

03:18:308 (1) - LOL THESE POINTS LOOK LIKE SHIT BUT THE SLIDER LOOKS DOPE... unfortunately tho you should fix the blanket a bit better on 03:19:545 (1) - from this standpoint: 03:19:313 - it favors the top right super heavily

03:29:132 (3,4) - pp or ragequit, either or i guess

waow so pretty

nice set, gl c:

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-10-06T09:54:53+00:00

i hate turtles

[

's hard]
00:02:225 - 00:03:153 - could add breaks lol why not
00:28:668 (1) - i would try this cuz i think it flows better! http://puu.sh/rzwaz/1c9d747c7d.jpg
btw try place 00:28:514 (4) - around x406 y375 for a little better aesthetics? xd
00:34:390 (5,6) - either use 1/2 slider so its same with start of verse or space these so its differ from 00:35:782 (3,4) - cuz its stronger d
01:11:349 (2,3) - psl try this rhythm http://puu.sh/rzwjd/a8f162806b.jpg (stack 3,4 xd
01:45:060 (2,1) - fix blanket im nazi
02:13:437 - pls map 1/4s here its only 4 notes it wont affect sr lo
02:18:617 (4) - not 2 circles here? xd
02:42:741 - pls map 1/4
03:17:534 (2,3) - blanket
03:28:978 (3,4,5) - i would stack 3,4 instead of 4,5 so the end of map jump will have better impact

[obliteration]
00:09:339 (2,3,4) - 3 -> 4 should be bigger spaced u bad
00:24:802 (3) - mapped on nothing, the sound is on 1/8 LO (probably same with other parts as well)
01:00:833 (1,1) - maybe stack tails for a e s t h e t i c s
01:42:741 (3,4) - this spacing is obviously too high and the song isnt even dat more intense than 01:42:586 (2,3) -
01:47:844 (4) - same tbh
02:12:741 (4) - i would make this a 3/4 to follow instrument so the kickslider wil hav beter impac
02:37:483 (1) - ok this is bad af pls make upbeat clikable
02:55:885 (6) - could be 1/2 slider tbh

cool

Shocola

287 posts

Joined July 2015

Shocola 2016-10-06T13:33:09+00:00

the map is too refine, i can mod more

gg good map 10/10 ign

Aki's Normal

- Finely made map 11/100 good jop
Btw fwheres the HS bro >///<

Door's Hard

01:10:266 (3,1) - Blanket meybe?
03:11:967 (1,3) - ^ same as de above
02:33:772 - 02:43:668 - could have maped this part

02:33:462 (4,1) - the distance between these 2 arent the same as 02:33:153 (3,4) - try matching them up, it might look sexier or just a terrible idea
03:28:978 (3,4,5) - i think this patern would make a better flow http://puu.sh/rzDhN/6185f23689.jpg

Kalibe's Insane

00:40:730 (3) - i hope this is actually a copy paste version of this 00:40:266 (2) - slider been rotate 120 - 117 , same for this 00:41:194 (1) -
but copied by 00:40:730 (3) -
00:14:751 (4,1) - blanket ? (it might brake the flow tho)
00:14:751 (4,1) - these two aren't copy pasted right?
01:09:339 (1,1) - these two suppose to be blanket? try making it look natural
01:49:081 (4,1) - ^
03:28:050 (1,2) - ^
01:26:658 (2) - remove this

HD's Ex

01:28:050 (1,2) - this just look ugly
01:48:926 (9) - try placing this at the same place but use ctrl+h, the little diffrance makes it beautiful
02:24:957 (1) - ^ same as above, but use ctrl + g
02:54:802 (1) - i think this slider is ruining the jumping flow, try making the slider abir more faster or just try thinking something else
03:21:400 (4,5) - make these circles instead or slider OR 03:22:019 (1,2) - this one, make your chooice
can't find more

Obliteration

01:08:256 (1,2) - blanket?
01:09:648 (1,3) - ^
01:16:607 (5,1) - ^
02:05:163 (1,3) - ^
01:22:019 (1) - put a finnish HS, idk why but this sound much moar better for me
01:54:956 (4,3) - i like this stacked more

03:15:833 (1) - could have been better
03:18:308 (1,1) - this is kinda too sudden for the player

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2016-10-06T21:19:03+00:00

dom HARD
-00:11:813 (2) - looks better if youjust copy 00:10:885 (3) - tbh xd also it'd retain the same flow so cool
-00:26:504 - this normal samp is kinda random, i guess it's a mistake? since 00:25:266 - or 00:27:741 - dont use it, blame sotarks or idunno
-00:38:720 (1) - 384 / 321 xd
-01:09:339 (5) - just as a circle? a pause sounds cool here as the kiai ends and an unusual tom plays
-01:10:266 (3,4) - i think something like http://puu.sh/rA3nx/25d23ee6df.jpg would fit the drums and intensity of the verse much better
-01:19:235 (4) - my ocd tells me you should bend it a bit xd http://puu.sh/rA3xE/41486bb725.jpg
-01:22:019 (1) - would add a finish with low volumen rather than nothing, or whistle like 01:31:916 (1) - blame sotraks x2
-01:51:091 - cancel whisle? like 00:49:235 -
-02:55:421 (3,1) - the only downbeat that is this far xd consistency
-03:23:565 (2,3,1) - visual spacing? http://puu.sh/rA42n/8894045bdd.jpg
-03:29:133 (4,5) - kinda dull to fnish the song in a stack imo, (5) could be 1.5x spaced too

hb EXPERT
-aimod somthing
-00:11:349 (5) - missing nc?
-00:19:235 (2,3) - jump doesnt fit too well. a slider would be more 'correct'. cuz there's nothing on (3), not even guitar like before. if youw ant jumps you could try http://puu.sh/rA4nH/1b4b9295f0.jpg instead, it'd fit the intensity fine
-00:41:349 (2) - try 304/195 xd for d aestheticz
-01:45:524 (4,1) - swap nc and 01:47:998 (4) - nc. like you've done before
-02:06:710 (2,3) - ctrl g this rhythm pls, even the hitsounds are asking for it xd same for 02:07:947 (2,3) - 02:33:308 (3,4) -
-02:18:308 (4,1,2,1,2) - shouldnt doubles ncs start from 02:18:308 (4) - isntead?
-02:32:534 - you could add some hitosund, atleast a whistle. like sotarks pass over it you're missing it ;(
-03:18:617 - make the head audible pls xd

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2016-10-07T16:08:17+00:00

HB's Expert
00:02:844 (1,1) - Isn't it just better to just stack just like you did here? 00:09:648 (4,1) -
00:11:349 (5) - Missing NC
00:11:040 (4,6) - Oops, stack is off slightly
00:18:772 (1,3) - Looks like to me that you wanted to blanket this
00:24:184 (7,1,2) - Maybe it's just my terrible reading skills, or these confused me since they're the same ds. Nothing off about it, just wanted to give an opinion from a player's perspective ;3
01:31:916 (1) - Add finish?
01:46:143 (1) - Remove NC
01:57:741 (6,1) - Replace NC
02:55:885 (1) - NC?
03:29:287 (1) - ^

Already well polished, so there wasn't that much I could work with. WP

Kalibe's Insane
00:28:205 (3,4) - Since there's a pitch change on 4. It would be better to unstack these. Try putting 4 under 3
00:29:751 (6,1) - Kind off low ds for a major beat
01:14:287 (4,5) - Same as i said before, the song doesn't suggest a stack. One alternative would be to stack 5 on 2 sliderhead
01:17:844 (3,4,1) - Shouldn't 01:17:998 (4,1) - have a bigger distance than 01:17:844 (3,4) - ?
01:38:411 (2,3) - Same as before
01:54:957 (4,5,1) - ^
02:00:988 (4,5,1) - ^
alot of these so ill stop mentioning
01:48:462 (2,3) - Fix blanket
03:18:617 - Got a few unecessary green ticks here
03:29:287 (1) - NC

Good flow, liked the last chorus.

-

Hope my mod was somewhat useful ._.

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2016-10-07T21:08:49+00:00

Hi~ From my queue

I'm not good at English

*I am not a modder
You can not be a good mod

[General]

Source 劇場版銀魂完結篇万事屋よ永遠なれ
Tag Please away 劇場版銀魂劇場版銀魂

[Akitoshi's Normal]
(日本語)

01:20:627 (3,4) - DS1.15?
00:24:493 - 00:34:390 - と01:26:349 - 01:36:246 - は同じにしないのですか？
1つ目と同様に01:50:473 - から01:51:091 - までのスライダーなんてどうでしょう？
それか休憩入れても良いんじゃないかな？

相変わらず綺麗な譜面で真剣に見てもこれっぽっちです・・・

[Doormat's Hard]
(I Hard is not good...)

02:44:751 (1,2,3) -
Beautiful this better

I'm sorry
It is very short

After there is no problem
*Look from me

Good luck!

Kanye

159 posts

Joined November 2013

Kanye 2016-10-08T11:47:22+00:00

Hey from my queue, sorry I'm so late, been catching up on sleep

Ayyyy the Kayo icon above me

[General]
(*) Maybe add another combo colour with RGB: 200, 200, 200, since a dull white would also fit. You should probably just remove the orange and add this, since there's a heavier emphasis on white rather than orange in the bg
(*) Have you considered changing the normal to an easy and adding a 2 star diff? Or just increasing the difficulty of the normal and making an easy. I feel like jumping from 1 star to 3 stars might be an issue
(*) The three highest diffs have timing point clashes, with different SV. I have mentioned them in each diff mod, but make sure these get fixed ASAP

[Akitoshi's Normal]
(*) Why not map the beginning part?
(*) 00:38:720 (3,4) - Add a circle on the white tick in between these, like this
(*) 00:47:380 (1) - Silence the tail of this, since there's no note there
(*) 01:26:813 (1) - Remove this NC and NC 01:27:431 (2) - instead, since your break takes up 3 stanza and then the fourth ends midway through (1), so you wanna NC the next available note, that being (2)
(*) 01:36:710 (1) - Same with this
(*) 02:02:225 (2) - Blanket with (1)?
(*) 02:11:504 (1) - Blanket with (5) to avoid the overlap? You could copy this slider 02:12:741 (2) - and just rotate it

[Doormat's Hard]
(*) You've jumped from CS2.8 to 4, why not make it CS3.8 to keep it different from the insanes
(*) 00:06:400 (1) - Remove this NC and NC the next note, since you want to NC the next available hit object after a stanza. Same here 00:11:349 (1) -
(*) Okay this repeats a lot. Just go through and check your NCS
(*) 00:18:308 (3) - Why not overlap on the head of 00:17:071 (4) -
(*) 00:24:957 (1) - I mentioned in the previous diff, but you wanna remove this NC then NC the next note, same for 00:34:854 (1) - should look like this http://puu.sh/rBHDJ.jpg
(*) 00:31:298 (3) - NC
(*) 00:33:772 (3) - ^
(*) NC's need to be fixed up
(*) 00:55:885 (1) - Blanket around (2)?
(*) 00:57:122 (1) - Stack the tail of this on 00:56:349 (2) - , avoids awkward overlap
(*) 00:56:504 (3,4) - I think this pattern should go circle slider circle instead, like this http://puu.sh/rBHMR.jpg
(*) 01:08:875 (3) - Stack on the tail of 01:07:638 (3) -
(*) 01:21:400 (4,5,6) - This should go slider circle circle, like this http://puu.sh/rBHSL.jpg , or slider slider, like this http://puu.sh/rBHVu.jpg (personally I like the second one better)
(*) The reason I point out these, is because you're mapping the sliders on the red ticks, which don't fit
(*) Like for instance this patter 01:26:813 (1,2,3,4,1) - . You map the singer for the to (1) sliders, which are on red ticks, but they fit, but (3) and (4) are on red ticks, and these ones are on off notes, which don't suit sliders. You can just tell if you listen and watch the sliders, it kinda feels off. Replace (3) with a circle and map it like this instead, sounds much better http://puu.sh/rBI83.jpg
(*) 01:28:050 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same for here
(*) Seems to be a lot of issues with this stuff, I suggest just looking through the diff and fixing it up. It's quite obvious to notice a slider out of place

[Kalibe's Insane]
(*) 00:11:813 (2) - Blanket around 00:11:194 (4) - ?
(*) I mentioned earlier in the hard diff about mapping sliders to red ticks. 00:15:679 (2,3,4,1) - I think that applies here, and I think this would fit better http://puu.sh/rBIVN.jpg . I won't mention it again, but I think you should look through the diff to fix it up
(*) 00:27:431 (1) - If this overlap isn't intentional, maybe try and place closer to (3) so it overlaps a little nicer
(*) Ah, you seem to be overlapping like this throughout the diff, it seems okay
(*) 01:04:235 (4,5,1) - Except stuff like this doesn't look nice, the overlap is awkward and you could blanket the head of (1) with 01:03:772 (2) - instead of having it overlap with the blanket
(*) 01:05:782 (1) - Blanket this with 01:05:318 (3) -
(*) There seem to be a lot of overlapping issues, maybe go through and visually check for overlaps, since it won't be hard to spot them. Even just stacking slightly off a note is okay, but your overlaps seem sloppy, like here 01:08:256 (1,4) -
(*) 01:13:205 (1) - Blanket with the two circles it overlaps?
(*) 01:42:586 (3) - Blanket with 01:42:122 (2) -
(*) 02:00:215 (1) - You could blanket this better by using curves instead of corners
(*) 02:24:957 (1) - Blanket
(*) 02:33:772 (1) - You have two timing points here with different SV
(*) 03:07:483 (2,4) - See how this overlaps is really good, try follow this overlapping
(*) Overall, I feel like this diff is just really sloppy with stacking and overlaps, and it kinda makes it all over the place visually, so just go through and check for all these overlaps and I think it should be okay. Your patterns seem to be nice, though. You can look at HB's diff to see how they did their stacks, might help

[HB's Expert]
(*) Why not map the intro? I understand why the easier diffs didn't but for an expert the intro is being undermapped now
(*) 00:24:957 (1) - Same NC problem as I mentioned in the hard, you wanna NC the next available hit object after the stanza, so remove this NC and NC 00:25:421 (2) -
(*) Repeats several times, so just fix these up
(*) 00:42:741 (2) - You can stack the tail on 00:42:122 (7) -
(*) 00:45:215 (2) - Blanket with 00:44:596 (7) -
(*) I mentioned this previously in the other diffs, but 02:19:699 (5,1) - doesn't work when you map to red ticks. I would be better to map it like this or something similar http://puu.sh/rBK9J.jpg
(*) 02:13:050 (2) - You have two timing points placed here with different SV
(*) 02:24:648 (4,1) - Same here, map the sliders to the white ticks
(*) Kinda repeats a few times, so have a look through and fix it up
(*) 02:32:998 (2,3,4) - I think shift the two 1/4 sliders down the time scale by 1/2 and replace the (2) with a circle fits much better, like this http://puu.sh/rBKgg.jpg
A very good diff

[Obliteration]
(*) Again, why don't you map this intro, seems to be undermapped for an extra
(*) 00:06:400 (1) - You can blanket this around the tail of 00:05:318 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/rBKxx.jpg
(*) 00:08:565 (4) - Fix this blanket so there's no overlap
(*) Make sure you keep your stacking consistent. 00:09:648 (4,1) - Here it seems to be nearly over the top of it, whereas 00:10:576 (2,4) - Here it's not as close to being over the top, and then 00:11:349 (1,5) - Here it's halfway off. Just make sure you keep stacking the same throughout
(*) 00:24:957 (1) - I mentioned previously, but this shouldn't be NC, 00:25:421 (2) - This should, since the stanza changes through the slider, so you wanna NC the next available hit object. There are other occasions like this, so try fix those up
(*) 00:26:504 (2) - Fix this stacking
(*) 00:27:895 (2) - This too
(*) 00:37:483 (1) - You can either try and get the tail to stack on (5), or blanket this
(*) 00:47:071 (5) - Rotate (5) so that it faces towards the start of 00:47:380 (1) - , and then just stack it on the tail , like this http://puu.sh/rBKQY.jpg
(*) 00:50:318 (3) - Either blanket or stack the tails
(*) 00:53:256 (5) - Stack on the tail of 00:52:174 (1) -
(*) 02:40:112 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is way too confusing to sight read
(*) 02:33:772 (1) - You've got two timing points here with different SV
(*) 02:43:359 (1,2) - Slider ends aren't snapped
(*) 03:25:112 (3) - You can blanket this around the tail of 03:25:576 (1) -

Well, that's all from me. A lot of issues with overlaps and note placement, but some good diffs. I especially like Akitoshi's and HB's diffs, the others could use a bit of looking at, but they're not bad, just need some fixing and this'll be a solid set. I suggest using AiMod (Ctrl + Shift + A) to check some issues like the timing point placement and object snapping. Anyway, I've spent too long on this mod, so I'll be heading off, good luck

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Shyotamaze 2016-10-08T15:47:07+00:00

Hi, from in-game request

General

Disable widescreen support on the GDs ye

Akitoshi's Normal

01:20:627 (3,4) - DS error ye

Kalibe's Insane

http://prntscr.com/crd0qo
02:21:864 (2) - Why not make the same kind of shape as 02:21:400 (1) - ? Right now it looks ugly and it's not even blanketing anything
03:18:617 Unused green lines ye

HB's Expert

http://prntscr.com/crd5bj
00:21:091 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - It looks like you're increasing the spacing for no real reason here and at the end 00:23:565 (6,7,1,2) - they have a similar spacing so it can be confusing for some people
00:30:370 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:53:411 (3) - You could make the slider a bit like this one 01:52:174 (5) - instead so 01:53:411 (3,4) - will look similar and have a better flow imo

Obliteration

http://prntscr.com/crd3o8
00:53:875 (2) - Un truc comme ça serait mieux imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6274762
01:21:710 (3,4,1) - Ce passage m'a l'air un peu galère à jouer à cause du flow, pourquoi pas mettre 01:22:019 (1) - pas loin de 01:20:937 (2) - ou un truc du genre ?
03:15:833 (1) - pls je sais que t'aimes pas les mods sur l'esthétique mais là t'exagères, rien qu'en transformant le premier red anchor en point normal ça rend + joli

Nice map as always, can't say much lo inb4 everything I say gets denied
Good luck!

Doormat

2,049 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2016-10-08T16:49:00+00:00

mario's pet dinosaur thing

- Yoshimaro - wrote:
hi from q

doomrats hrad
00:39:493 - place slider here instead fill 00:39:802 - and 00:39:957 - with circles? i just thought 00:39:493 - deserved as much held emphasis as 00:39:184 (2) - i did the same thing as the second verse and made these both circles

03:29:287 (5) - think this deserves just as much spacing as 03:28:514 (2,3,4) - sure

guy who hates turtles

Deppyforce wrote:
i hate turtles

['s hard]
00:02:225 - 00:03:153 - could add breaks lol why not sure
00:28:668 (1) - i would try this cuz i think it flows better! http://puu.sh/rzwaz/1c9d747c7d.jpg i prefer upwards flow because that's the direction the cursor will be moving towards when player jumps from (4) to (1)
btw try place 00:28:514 (4) - around x406 y375 for a little better aesthetics? xd slightly higher spacing for combo emphasis
00:34:390 (5,6) - either use 1/2 slider so its same with start of verse or space these so its differ from 00:35:782 (3,4) - cuz its stronger d i think the stack gives more emphasis to this spot. start of verse uses a slider because it's right after break and i want to ease players into the verse
01:11:349 (2,3) - psl try this rhythm http://puu.sh/rzwjd/a8f162806b.jpg (stack 3,4 xd want to emphasize vocals, so no
01:45:060 (2,1) - fix blanket im nazi lolk
02:13:437 - pls map 1/4s here its only 4 notes it wont affect sr lo lol i don't want this to be too streamy since it's only a hard. i think it serves as a good balance between the normal and the insane
02:18:617 (4) - not 2 circles here? xd wanted to emphasize vocals
02:42:741 - pls map 1/4 there's a break here for a reason lol. it's to give 02:43:668 (1) - more emphasis
03:17:534 (2,3) - blanket yeah
03:28:978 (3,4,5) - i would stack 3,4 instead of 4,5 so the end of map jump will have better impact i did another thing

sweets

[-Chocola-] wrote:
Door's Hard01:10:266 (3,1) - Blanket meybe? should be fine now
03:11:967 (1,3) - ^ same as de above same
02:33:772 - 02:43:668 - could have maped this part i prefer the break to give the players a chance to rest a little bit since the previous part was one of the longest intense parts in the map
02:33:462 (4,1) - the distance between these 2 arent the same as 02:33:153 (3,4) - try matching them up, it might look sexier or just a terrible idea distance is because of finish emphasis
03:28:978 (3,4,5) - i think this patern would make a better flow http://puu.sh/rzDhN/6185f23689.jpg i did something else

Italian city

Milan- wrote:
dom HARD
-00:11:813 (2) - looks better if youjust copy 00:10:885 (3) - tbh xd also it'd retain the same flow so cool very cool
-00:26:504 - this normal samp is kinda random, i guess it's a mistake? since 00:25:266 - or 00:27:741 - dont use it, blame sotarks or idunno i copied hitsounds, so probably blame sotarks xd
-00:38:720 (1) - 384 / 321 xd xd
-01:09:339 (5) - just as a circle? a pause sounds cool here as the kiai ends and an unusual tom plays i kind of prefer the slider to emphasize the dragged out vocals here
-01:10:266 (3,4) - i think something like http://puu.sh/rA3nx/25d23ee6df.jpg would fit the drums and intensity of the verse much better hmm idk, probably need a few more opinions first

-01:19:235 (4) - my ocd tells me you should bend it a bit xd http://puu.sh/rA3xE/41486bb725.jpg ya i like that
-01:22:019 (1) - would add a finish with low volumen rather than nothing, or whistle like 01:31:916 (1) - blame sotraks x2 finish it is
-01:51:091 - cancel whisle? like 00:49:235 - ya
-02:55:421 (3,1) - the only downbeat that is this far xd consistency k made it consistent
-03:23:565 (2,3,1) - visual spacing? http://puu.sh/rA42n/8894045bdd.jpg i tried
-03:29:133 (4,5) - kinda dull to fnish the song in a stack imo, (5) could be 1.5x spaced too yeah

714

Yasaija 714 wrote:
[Doormat's Hard]
(I Hard is not good...)
[*]02:44:751 (1,2,3) - Beautiful this better http://puu.sh/rB84h/a806ef6ebc.jpg
http://puu.sh/rB83d/e48ad4212d.jpg
pictures aren't loading because puush can't be found, so i have no idea what you're suggesting..

Yeezus

Kanye wrote:
[Doormat's Hard]
(*) You've jumped from CS2.8 to 4, why not make it CS3.8 to keep it different from the insanes this honestly isn't a big deal, but i'll lower cs to 3.8
(*) 00:06:400 (1) - Remove this NC and NC the next note, since you want to NC the next available hit object after a stanza. Same here 00:11:349 (1) - i don't think you understand how nc emphasis works. i'm emphasizing the strongest note here. usually that's the downbeat/start of a new stanza, but sometimes the strongest beat occurs right before it. that's why this is NC'd. all other NC suggestions were rejected
(*) Okay this repeats a lot. Just go through and check your NCS
(*) 00:18:308 (3) - Why not overlap on the head of 00:17:071 (4) - the (4) fades away by the time this slider comes into play so it won't make a big difference
(*) 00:24:957 (1) - I mentioned in the previous diff, but you wanna remove this NC then NC the next note, same for 00:34:854 (1) - should look like this http://puu.sh/rBHDJ.jpg
(*) 00:31:298 (3) - NC this is the slowest part of the song that is mapped, the NC difference is to show that of
(*) 00:33:772 (3) - ^
(*) NC's need to be fixed up
(*) 00:55:885 (1) - Blanket around (2)? not intended to be a blanket.
(*) 00:57:122 (1) - Stack the tail of this on 00:56:349 (2) - , avoids awkward overlap overlap isn't noticeable in gameplay, the (2) fades away by the time this slider comes into play
(*) 00:56:504 (3,4) - I think this pattern should go circle slider circle instead, like this http://puu.sh/rBHMR.jpg current pattern is following the vocals, which i prefer here
(*) 01:08:875 (3) - Stack on the tail of 01:07:638 (3) - i'm not going to be making minor aesthetic changes when there are no benefits to the aesthetics. 01:07:638 (3) - can't be seen when 01:08:875 (3) - comes into play so i see absolutely no reason why i should move this.
(*) 01:21:400 (4,5,6) - This should go slider circle circle, like this http://puu.sh/rBHSL.jpg , or slider slider, like this http://puu.sh/rBHVu.jpg (personally I like the second one better) again, i'm following vocals here.
(*) The reason I point out these, is because you're mapping the sliders on the red ticks, which don't fit ????? they totally fit. have you been paying attention to the song? it constantly places emphasis on red ticks.
(*) Like for instance this patter 01:26:813 (1,2,3,4,1) - . You map the singer for the to (1) sliders, which are on red ticks, but they fit, but (3) and (4) are on red ticks, and these ones are on off notes, which don't suit sliders. You can just tell if you listen and watch the sliders, it kinda feels off. Replace (3) with a circle and map it like this instead, sounds much better http://puu.sh/rBI83.jpg you said so yourself, they fit. stop being a hypocrite. red ticks can totally support sliders if it makes sense with the music, which it does in this case; you even said so yourself.
(*) 01:28:050 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same for here
(*) Seems to be a lot of issues with this stuff, I suggest just looking through the diff and fixing it up. It's quite obvious to notice a slider out of place

thanks for the mods.

https://puu.sh/rC0mv/9d034b6485.zip

Vespirit

350 posts

Joined December 2014

Vespirit 2016-10-08T18:12:54+00:00

tbh never stop asking me for mods

[

Akitoshi's Normal]

00:19:545 (4) - make this the same as 01:21:400 (4,5)?
01:29:132 (5) - seems like it is not needed as you are following vocals
01:39:029 (5) - ^
02:33:772 (1) - 1/2 slider like so, to accomodate the other sound on the red
03:28:823 (4,1) - just a suggestion, but instead you could have 2 1/2 sliders? so it is easier to get the 300s on xD

[

Doormat's Hard]

00:19:235 (2) - imo i would tilt the other way to lead out of (1)
02:25:421 (2) - could have the end clickable for the vocal there
02:32:071 (3) - ^
02:55:885 (1) - imo way too high spacing, you should lower it quite a bit because as far as i know it doesnt happen anywhere else in the map
03:03:308 (1) - the anchor for the slider is off grid by 4

[

Kalibe's Insane]

00:24:802 (2) - delete it? imo plays better with a pause
00:34:699 (2) - ^
01:26:658 (2) - ^
01:30:524 (1) - slightly overlaps the (2) before
02:13:205 (4,5) - stream? or at least, should be more dense than it is

[

HB's Expert]

01:36:091 (1) - i think it is better to be a triple

[

Obliteration]

00:07:174 (4) - stack the slider end with the slider end of (1)? for better structure
00:24:802 (3) - same from kalibe's diff
00:34:699 (3) - ^
01:26:658 (3) - ^
01:36:555 (5) - ^
01:27:277 (2,3,4) - should this be the same pattern as 01:28:514 (2,3,4)? or at least change it so that there is something on the red tick in between (2) where a prominent vocal is

I love how clean every diff is, this might be my fav mapset of urs

Good luck and have a star

Last edited by Vespirit 2016-10-10T02:31:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Doormat

2,049 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2016-10-08T18:44:11+00:00

HydroCannon13 wrote:
[ Doormat's Hard]
00:19:235 (2) - imo i would tilt the other way to lead out of (1) not entirely sure; doesn't really affect gameplay that much, but i'll see what others have to say
02:25:421 (2) - could have the end clickable for the vocal there vocals are kind of dragged out here, so i wanted to reflect that with a longer slider
02:32:071 (3) - ^ imo doing so takes away some of the emphasis on the downbeat. a repeat slider also fits with what the singer is doing imo, since it's one word and he's only changing pitch, as far as i can tell
02:55:885 (1) - imo way too high spacing, you should lower it quite a bit because as far as i know it doesnt happen anywhere else in the map already fixed
03:03:308 (1) - the anchor for the slider is off grid by 4 oops, fixed

i have some time to kill and i forgot to change something so i figured i'd update with this mod as well. thanks-

@Sotarks download this update instead k https://puu.sh/rC6LF/c1c776f37e.zip

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2016-10-09T04:11:10+00:00

GL!

Here My 3 Star!

Yoshimaro

539 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoshimaro 2016-10-09T07:34:08+00:00

Doormat wrote:
mario's pet dinosaur thing

why is it always mario :c

Reillia

1,162 posts

Joined August 2014

Reillia 2016-10-10T09:57:35+00:00

[Aki]
00:34:390 - how about add 1/2 slider like 01:36:246 (1) - this?
01:20:627 (3,4) - ????? wat.. ds 1.15?

[Doormat]
00:19:854 (5,1) - how about change like this?

ayayaaa

[Kalyeebe]
01:13:978 (3,2) - how about stack this?
02:33:772 - ummm two timing lines on same timing :<

[HB24]
00:11:040 (4,6) - stack miss
00:13:823 (1,5) - how about avoid overlap? it looks like bad ;w;
00:43:823 (2) - how about stack this?
01:29:132 (6,1) - stack miss
02:13:050 - two timing lines on same timing ;w;
02:31:297 (1,2) - stack miss

[Sotarks]
01:54:956 (4,3) - how about stack this?
02:40:576 (6,2) - ^

OMG.. terrible mod quality... GL!

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-10-10T13:23:17+00:00

SPOILER

Yasaija 714 wrote:

[Akitoshi's Normal]
(日本語)
01:20:627 (3,4) - DS1.15?
00:24:493 - 00:34:390 - と01:26:349 - 01:36:246 - は同じにしないのですか？
1つ目と同様に01:50:473 - から01:51:091 - までのスライダーなんてどうでしょう？
それか休憩入れても良いんじゃないかな？added break instead

相変わらず綺麗な譜面で真剣に見てもこれっぽっちです・・・manko

Kanye wrote:
[Akitoshi's Normal]
(*) Why not map the beginning part? mapping that as lowest diff is sucks for me
(*) 00:38:720 (3,4) - Add a circle on the white tick in between these, like this no thnx
(*) 00:47:380 (1) - Silence the tail of this, since there's no note there b-but the guitar...
(*) 01:26:813 (1) - Remove this NC and NC 01:27:431 (2) - instead, since your break takes up 3 stanza and then the fourth ends midway through (1), so you wanna NC the next available note, that being (2) current one is fine imo
(*) 01:36:710 (1) - Same with this ^
(*) 02:02:225 (2) - Blanket with (1)? nah
(*) 02:11:504 (1) - Blanket with (5) to avoid the overlap? You could copy this slider 02:12:741 (2) - and just rotate it overlap is fine, slider's path is completely visiblelelelele

Shyotamaze wrote:
Akitoshi's Normal
01:20:627 (3,4) - DS error ye

HydroCannon13 wrote:
[ Akitoshi's Normal]
00:19:545 (4) - make this the same as 01:21:400 (4,5)? nah, the audio itself is different.
01:29:132 (5) - seems like it is not needed as you are following vocals
01:39:029 (5) - ^ those two were adding some spice on diff
02:33:772 (1) - 1/2 slider like so, to accomodate the other sound on the red
03:28:823 (4,1) - just a suggestion, but instead you could have 2 1/2 sliders? so it is easier to get the 300s on xD no :^)

[C u r i] wrote:
[Aki]
00:34:390 - how about add 1/2 slider like 01:36:246 (1) - this?
01:20:627 (3,4) - ????? wat.. ds 1.15?

no comment = fixed, thanks guys!

update

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80,114,148514,2,0,L|77:55,1,46,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,35,148823,6,0,P|158:31|217:33,1,91.9999999999999,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,71,149442,2,0,P|332:75|391:73,1,91.9999999999999,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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66,325,152225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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169,60,153462,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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348,223,163668,6,0,P|434:227|478:324,1,184,6|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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82,199,166143,6,0,P|64:111|130:49,1,184,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
217,38,167071,2,0,B|283:34|283:34|336:48|336:48|409:43,1,184,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,101,167998,2,0,P|479:146|463:195,1,91.9999999999999,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,216,168617,6,0,P|419:268|499:276,2,138,4|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,123,169854,2,0,P|305:156|284:220,2,138,4|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,216,171091,6,0,P|361:276|291:315,2,138,4|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,124,172328,2,0,P|433:141|471:208,2,138,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,129,173565,6,0,P|224:137|175:125,1,91.9999999999999,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,80,174184,2,0,P|88:129|101:176,1,91.9999999999999,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,242,174802,1,8,0:0:0:0:
238,271,175112,1,8,3:0:0:0:
327,250,175421,2,0,L|328:184,2,46,8|8|8,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
359,282,175885,5,2,3:0:0:0:
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404,188,178359,6,0,L|250:192,1,138,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,192,179132,2,0,P|197:129|273:99,2,138,0|2|8,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,284,180370,2,0,P|129:273|91:233,1,91.9999999999999,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,204,180833,6,0,B|73:112|73:112|102:63,1,138,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,47,181607,2,0,P|230:67|261:108,1,91.9999999999999,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,134,182071,2,0,B|334:136|334:136|378:128|378:128|426:131,1,138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,198,182844,2,0,B|495:244|495:244|488:295,1,91.9999999999999,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
466,329,183308,6,0,P|399:349|315:325,1,138,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,294,184081,2,0,L|146:298,1,91.9999999999999,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,299,184545,2,0,B|82:240|82:240|95:154,1,138,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,90,185318,2,0,L|135:30,2,46,8|8|4,0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
172,122,185782,6,0,P|239:135|321:116,1,138,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,68,186555,2,0,P|398:108|389:164,1,91.9999999999999,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,196,187019,2,0,B|359:238|359:238|365:286|365:286|348:329,1,138,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,358,187792,2,0,P|211:369|158:350,1,91.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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137,103,189029,2,0,P|79:122|44:206,2,138,0|2|8,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,115,190266,2,0,P|273:126|334:115,1,91.9999999999999,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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342,327,191504,2,0,L|242:326,1,91.9999999999999,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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228,115,192741,2,0,L|228:57,2,46,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,149,193205,6,0,P|324:161|405:136,1,138,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,130,193823,2,0,L|452:230,1,91.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
453,313,194442,2,0,B|410:329|410:329|354:326,1,91.9999999999999,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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330,342,205112,2,0,L|381:338,2,46,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,346,205576,2,0,B|192:352|192:352|143:336,1,138,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,289,206349,2,0,L|13:298,2,46,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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450,86,208823,2,0,L|461:146,2,46,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,53,209287,5,10,3:0:0:0:

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-10-10T14:43:16+00:00

[C u r i] wrote:
[Sotarks]
01:54:956 (4,3) - how about stack this? wasn't mean to stack
02:40:576 (6,2) - ^ ^

OMG.. terrible mod quality... GL!

HydroCannon13 wrote:
tbh never stop asking me for mods

[ Obliteration]
00:07:174 (4) - stack the slider end with the slider end of (1)? for better structure ok
00:24:802 (3) - same from kalibe's diff nah i like to follow the voice here
00:34:699 (3) - ^
01:26:658 (3) - ^
01:36:555 (5) - ^ same for all
01:27:277 (2,3,4) - should this be the same pattern as 01:28:514 (2,3,4)? or at least change it so that there is something on the red tick in between (2) where a prominent vocal is did smth else but y

I love how clean every diff is, this might be my fav mapset of urs wow thak u very much!

Good luck and have a star

Shyotamaze wrote:
Hi, from in-game request

General
Disable widescreen support on the GDs ye
Obliteration
http://prntscr.com/crd3o8 ok
00:53:875 (2) - Un truc comme ça serait mieux imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6274762 ouep
01:21:710 (3,4,1) - Ce passage m'a l'air un peu galère à jouer à cause du flow, pourquoi pas mettre 01:22:019 (1) - pas loin de 01:20:937 (2) - ou un truc du genre ? j'ai changer le flow ouai mais j'voulais garder l'anti-flow quand meme du carré...
03:15:833 (1) - pls je sais que t'aimes pas les mods sur l'esthétique mais là t'exagères, rien qu'en transformant le premier red anchor en point normal ça rend + joli dakor
Nice map as always, can't say much lo inb4 everything I say gets denied nice mod dud!
Good luck!

Kanye wrote:
Hey from my queue, sorry I'm so late, been catching up on sleep

Ayyyy the Kayo icon above me

[General]
(*) Maybe add another combo colour with RGB: 200, 200, 200, since a dull white would also fit. You should probably just remove the orange and add this, since there's a heavier emphasis on white rather than orange in the bg I like my combo colors the way they are sorry...
(*) Have you considered changing the normal to an easy and adding a 2 star diff? Or just increasing the difficulty of the normal and making an easy. I feel like jumping from 1 star to 3 stars might be an issue Since the normal is under 2* it's okay.
(*) The three highest diffs have timing point clashes, with different SV. I have mentioned them in each diff mod, but make sure these get fixed ASAP Ok we'll see in mod xd

[Obliteration]
(*) Again, why don't you map this intro, seems to be undermapped for an extra I really want to pause the first rythmn, to start when the claps appears.
(*) 00:06:400 (1) - You can blanket this around the tail of 00:05:318 (1) - like this http://puu.sh/rBKxx.jpg I don't blanket.
(*) 00:08:565 (4) - Fix this blanket so there's no overlap I don't blanket.
(*) Make sure you keep your stacking consistent. 00:09:648 (4,1) - Here it seems to be nearly over the top of it, whereas 00:10:576 (2,4) - Here it's not as close to being over the top, and then 00:11:349 (1,5) - Here it's halfway off. Just make sure you keep stacking the same throughout It wasn't mean to be stacked.
(*) 00:24:957 (1) - I mentioned previously, but this shouldn't be NC, 00:25:421 (2) - This should, since the stanza changes through the slider, so you wanna NC the next available hit object. There are other occasions like this, so try fix those up Nope, I NC every downbeats.
(*) 00:26:504 (2) - Fix this stacking It wasn't mean to be stacked.
(*) 00:27:895 (2) - This too This too
(*) 00:37:483 (1) - You can either try and get the tail to stack on (5), or blanket this It wasn't mean to be blanket either stacks.
(*) 00:47:071 (5) - Rotate (5) so that it faces towards the start of 00:47:380 (1) - , and then just stack it on the tail , like this http://puu.sh/rBKQY.jpg Looks not so good your way, I prefer keeping mine if you don't mind.
(*) 00:50:318 (3) - Either blanket or stack the tails Either not.
(*) 00:53:256 (5) - Stack on the tail of 00:52:174 (1) - It wasn't mean to be stacked.
(*) 02:40:112 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is way too confusing to sight read It's not, the fact you can't read it doesn't mean it's not readable. I use this patern in all my maps.
(*) 02:33:772 (1) - You've got two timing points here with different SV Yes, I fixed those.
(*) 02:43:359 (1,2) - Slider ends aren't snapped Yes, I fixed those.
(*) 03:25:112 (3) - You can blanket this around the tail of 03:25:576 (1) - I don't blanket.

Well, that's all from me. A lot of issues with overlaps and note placement, but some good diffs. I especially like Akitoshi's and HB's diffs, the others could use a bit of looking at, but they're not bad, just need some fixing and this'll be a solid set. I suggest using AiMod (Ctrl + Shift + A) to check some issues like the timing point placement and object snapping. Anyway, I've spent too long on this mod, so I'll be heading off, good luck I'm glad you like my diff. I'll try to ask HB to teach me how to map, thanks for the advice.

Yasaija 714 wrote:
Hi~ From my queue

I'm not good at English

*I am not a modder
You can not be a good mod

[General]
Source 劇場版銀魂完結篇万事屋よ永遠なれ
Tag Please away 劇場版銀魂劇場版銀魂
I will confirm source with metaQAT.
Good luck!

[-Chocola-] wrote:
the map is too refine, i can mod more
gg good map 10/10 ign

[Obliteration]
01:08:256 (1,2) - blanket? I don't blanket
01:09:648 (1,3) - ^I don't blanket
01:16:607 (5,1) - ^I don't blanket
02:05:163 (1,3) - ^I don't blanket
01:22:019 (1) - put a finnish HS, idk why but this sound much moar better for me Yes sir!
01:54:956 (4,3) - i like this stacked more I like when not stacked : (
03:15:833 (1) - could have been better y
03:18:308 (1,1) - this is kinda too sudden for the player iu don't thionk so, lets see

Deppyforce wrote:
i hate turtles

[obliteration]
00:09:339 (2,3,4) - 3 -> 4 should be bigger spaced u bad
00:24:802 (3) - mapped on nothing, the sound is on 1/8 LO (probably same with other parts as well) it's for the voice dude
01:00:833 (1,1) - maybe stack tails for a e s t h e t i c s no
01:42:741 (3,4) - this spacing is obviously too high and the song isnt even dat more intense than 01:42:586 (2,3) - yes sir
01:47:844 (4) - same tbh ok
02:12:741 (4) - i would make this a 3/4 to follow instrument so the kickslider wil hav beter impac changed patern
02:37:483 (1) - ok this is bad af pls make upbeat clikable I FOCUS ON GUITAR §§§§!!
02:55:885 (6) - could be 1/2 slider tbh i usually don't like those

cool

- Yoshimaro - wrote:
hi from q

before i start i just want to say Color 3 feels really out of place. the other colors are super super saturated and every combo with Combo 3 just feels aesthetically underwhelming in comparison. i understand that color is like 50% of the BG image but you could've picked another super saturated color like magenta or something lo (i cant tell what the BG is but i see some pink stuff in there so why not h e h)

ok here's some shit

[Olbtiitratoin]
00:20:009 (4) - mmmm... personally would like to see it face the other direction but i understand this way too anti-flow man

00:24:493 (1,2) - mute slider ends because it sounds overmapped even if you are only applying the clicking function to just 00:24:493 - and 00:24:648 - very good idea!

00:24:802 (3) - delete or NC to clarify this is mapped to vocals and not a continuation of the percussions... alternatively you could make 00:24:648 (2) - longer made them ncs

00:30:060 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - how long does it take you to map these types of slow combos because i stare at them for way too long i feel like lmao about 20 seconds

01:26:349 (1,2,3) - this part is different than 00:24:493 (1,2,3) - in that there isn't even a syllable on 01:26:658 - . delete 01:26:658 (3) - , mute slider ends, make 01:26:504 (2) - longer is my suggestion i want to follow guitar + voice cliacble

01:36:555 (5) - delete, 01:36:401 (4) - make this longer, and mute slider ends ahh pls

01:49:235 (1) - o shit thats pretty thjx

02:13:050 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i dont think ive seen build ups mapped this way, this was also pretty changed

02:43:668 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - super awkwardly circular flow lo thx

03:18:308 (1) - LOL THESE POINTS LOOK LIKE SHIT BUT THE SLIDER LOOKS DOPE... unfortunately tho you should fix the blanket a bit better on 03:19:545 (1) - from this standpoint: 03:19:313 - it favors the top right super heavily okk

03:29:132 (3,4) - pp or ragequit, either or i guess xd

waow so pretty

nice set, gl c: thx

thanks all for mods guys !!

@Doormat & Akitoshi : I updated your diff. (please double check hitsounds if you can :/)

Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2016-10-10T17:04:06+00:00

Hi. Here on request. Hope this helps!

[Akitoshi's Normal]

[Doormat's Hard]

00:37:174 (4,1) – These objects are visually very close. Giving (1) a bit of rotation would help space them out and not be so cramped, or if you want to keep the symmetry/structure, you can reduce (1)'s curvature (and even make it linear if you want).

01:40:112 (3,4) – This is overlapping the HP bar. If you move all of 01:36:091 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – to the right, you'll give yourself a little bit of room to move 01:39:184 (1,2,3,4) – down.
03:05:782 (1) – also overlapping.

[Kalibe's Insane]

02:33:772 – The version I downloaded has two green lines here with different SV's

00:29:442 (4,5,6) – This angle felt a little awkward to play, consider stacking 00:29:132 (2,6) - ?

00:34:390 (1,2) – Do ctrl + G on this for the rhythm since 00:34:545 – is a strong note

[HB's Extra]

02:13:050 - The version I downloaded has two green lines here with different SV's. Check that 02:13:050 (2,3) – are snapped correctly as a result.

02:39:957 (1) – Why don't you want to map the guitar here?

[Obliteration]

00:20:163 (1) – If you're willing to map the calm section at 00:30:060 (1) - , then I'd like you to also map the calm section here. Yeah, there are more drums in this later section, but the cymbals in the first section are strong enough to make this inconsistency not feel good.

00:32:534 (1) – Switch to going up and down instead of side to side for some flow diversity?

01:26:658 (1) – I'm guessing you know there's no music on this note here, and so my suggestion is just a butting of heads on opinion, but the map will feel nicer here if you delete this since this note takes away the power in the notes at 01:26:349 (1,2) - . I'm actually pleasantly surprised to see this at 02:57:895 (1,2) - . This one played better. But you should stay consistent.

02:34:235 (4,1) – and 02:34:699 (2,1) – and 02:35:163 (2,1) - it felt like these jumps could be stronger.

Mapset looks good to go. Good luck!

Makeli

932 posts

Joined October 2013

Makeli 2016-10-10T17:49:09+00:00

hei!!!

this took me like 5 days to mod so some stuff is prolly fixed already

g

inconsistent widescreen thing

melancholy

02:33:772 - two greenlines here
00:05:782 (2) - rhythmwise this would've worked better as a 1/2 slider cause guitar
00:09:648 (4) - space more form emphasis f
00:10:266 (1) - this is literally the only place you did a 1/2 slider on. Every other place is 1/1
00:12:431 (6) - personally i don't really agree with this movement since there is no sound really supporting this but you do it everywhere so w/e
00:14:596 (4,5,6,7) - do some 1-2, 1-2 nc's here for the drums
00:20:009 (4) - wanna ctrl+g this? idk felt more comfortable to play for me
00:30:370 (2) - weh you could get at least some consistency in for these overlaps now they're just random af
00:37:174 (6,1) - this was super random cause every other instrument except the vocals are following the usual syncopation rhythm.
00:59:442 (1) - doesn't it feel like the drum is doing a 1-2-3 at 00:59:132 (1,2,1) - (even tho it's snare kick snare). So yea I'd remove the nc from that. And maybe do a back n forth there so stack it under 00:59:132 (1) - (or do that overlap stacking thing)
01:21:091 (3) - pls the drum fill starts here. Also just some random square doesn't feel intense enough at 01:21:401 (1,2,3,4) -
01:26:658 (3) - there is no sound here aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. not even vocals here lmao
01:30:060 (3,4,5) - this was probably one of the most awkward things I have ever played. It's super linear and the spacing acceleration from (4) to (5) makes it ever more awkward cause your aim is more flowy than snappy at that point.
01:31:762 (2) - hm if you wanna keep this as a circle i'd stack it under (1) cause there is no prominent sound from the guitar, bass or the drums. Only some super weak vocal
01:36:555 (5) - can you not
01:41:813 (1,2) - 1/2 bassdrum roll ayy. 01:41:813 (1) - this actually works fine as just a circle but 01:42:122 (2) - would be better off as a 1/2 slider cause of the guitar hold and vocals.
01:59:442 (2,3) - imo this would work better as a 1/2 slider cause there is no prominent sound at 01:59:597 (3) -
02:13:359 (5) - could've at least emphasized this stronger snare with an nc or somth
02:28:205 (1,3) - hello there are no snares at those white ticks so why are there these claps
02:32:380 (1) - ew rhythm
02:34:390 (1,2) - swap nc's so the corrects sounds get the emphasis. Or just take a look at what i suggest for this whole thing ass
02:35:627 (2) - , 02:36:246 (1) - , 02:37:483 (1) - , 02:37:947 (2) - you trigger me
02:40:112 (2,3,4,5,6) - never really been a fan of this pattern it's just so awkward to read and play with those overlaps. If it was something like this then i'd have no problem but now just askdhg
02:41:040 (9,1) - ghost note at the blue tick triple pls lol
02:43:050 (6) - nc for emphasis wee (stronger snare hit thing i mentioned before)
02:55:885 (1) - i think this could be spaced further but w/e
02:57:895 (1,2) - THANK YOU
03:05:318 (1) - how about making this first kickslider two circles cause it's two snares and then 03:05:473 (2,3) - can stay as kicksliders cause they're just some tom and bassdrum hits? Gotta make them sounds stand out with rhythm right
03:15:833 (1) - this looks like my dick
pls hitsounds lmao

hentaiboy

00:09:648 (4) - give this more spacing as now this looks pretty much the same as the distance between 00:09:339 (2,3) -
00:12:741 (1,2,3) - this felt kinda awkward while playing idk seems too linear for me. Also this whole 00:12:741 (1,2,3,4) - thing really stands out as you didn't do this type of angles with straight sliders before and after. For example here the slider is at a 7 degree angle and at 00:13:205 (3) - the sliders are like at a 30 degree angle. Hope I'm clear enough about this lol
00:20:163 (1) - i understand you want this as a slider but imo a 1/2 slider would work better. That way you can get all of the hihat sounds clickable.
00:21:091 (2) - having this much movement on all of these 2/1 hihat hits that are super low in power is pretty odd imo. I'd do some custom stack thing.
00:29:132 (1,2,1,2) - imo these would work better if you separated them in some cool way like this or this. These are just some suggestions but I feel like having some back n forths here doesn't really emphasize the snares and the kicks well enough here.
00:39:184 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - while as here i believe that back n forths would fit much more as all of the 1/2 sounds are snares. Also why doesn't 00:39:184 (3) - this have an NC when 00:39:493 (1,1) - have it
00:59:596 (1) - wanna do some flowbreak stuff here for emphasis? Like you did at 00:54:648 (1) - . Same with 01:04:545 (1) - , 01:05:782 (1) - and 01:07:019 (1) - . Those are all powerful sounds so they could be emphasized with some flowbreak movement
01:21:091 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - i'd expect that all the jumps here would increase progressively in spacing but you suddenly have a huge jump at 01:21:555 (5) - and then 01:22:019 (1) - is basically the same spacing.
01:49:854 (2,3) - i seriously wasn't expecting these circles here but w/e
02:06:400 (1) - the chorus is basically the same as last time yet you don't have the 1/1 sliders here
02:22:947 (3,4,5,6) - idk doing this seems kinda odd when there are only tom hits here and kicks every white tick.
02:39:957 (1) - there is a snare in the sliderend. Wanna do something about it?
02:55:885 (7) - emphasis pls
idk i suck at modding and english

Logic Agent

483 posts

Joined April 2015

Logic Agent 2016-10-10T18:09:21+00:00

hi m4m stuff

[HB24]

in your kiai there are some circle -> 1/1 jumps that are smaller distance than 1/2 slider jumps of lesser importance musically. idk if there's any really quick fixes for that but if you wanna go back and look at those again to clean them up it'd prob be a nice touch to your diff. example 01:03:772 (2,3) bigger than 01:04:390 (4,1)

[Obliteration]

A very sizeable portion of this map plays exclusively in the center. This isn't technically unrankable or even a difficult thing to fix, but maybe go back through and see if there's some stuff you can adjust a bit to make the map play in the corners as opposted to staying in the middle.
00:19:699 (1,2,3,4,1) - i think it'd be cool if you flipped this upside down and moved it up and to the left some
00:30:060 (1,2) - feel like this is gonna be misread using roughly the same ds and back and forth flow even though there's a gap between the notes.. maybe the same ds just a different flow would be better? (going up instead of back to the left or something)
01:21:401 (1,2,3,4,1) - the square shape of these jumps makes for really poor flow imo, and leads to the emphasis before the quiet part to be very unimpressive. I would change these and maybe give it a bit more spacing to make it feel stronger
02:03:926 (1) - this is super subjective, but this is a pretty good place for a break in flow, when this sort of flow feels very repetitive already. A change might make this more interesting
02:43:668 (1) - if you wanted to, you could make this 3/4 with a circle at the end to play with the clap and the very noticeable addition of the instrument you're following
03:07:948 (2,1) - same thign as earlier, a change in flow here would make this more interesting imo

p good map. overall the majority of this mod was very subjective stuff and general ideas or ways to clean things up instead of things that are "wrong." love spyair, gl with ranking~

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2016-10-10T18:52:14+00:00

Kanye wrote:
[Kalibe's Insane]
(*) 00:11:813 (2) - Blanket around 00:11:194 (4) - ? ??? How am i able to do that? lol
(*) I mentioned earlier in the hard diff about mapping sliders to red ticks. 00:15:679 (2,3,4,1) - I think that applies here, and I think this would fit better http://puu.sh/rBIVN.jpg . I won't mention it again, but I think you should look through the diff to fix it up listen music, i'm following that strong sound on red beat zzz
(*) 00:27:431 (1) - If this overlap isn't intentional, maybe try and place closer to (3) so it overlaps a little nicer fine for me as it is
(*) Ah, you seem to be overlapping like this throughout the diff, it seems okay
(*) 01:04:235 (4,5,1) - Except stuff like this doesn't look nice, the overlap is awkward and you could blanket the head of (1) with 01:03:772 (2) - instead of having it overlap with the blanket same as before
(*) 01:05:782 (1) - Blanket this with 01:05:318 (3) - why?
(*) There seem to be a lot of overlapping issues, maybe go through and visually check for overlaps, since it won't be hard to spot them. Even just stacking slightly off a note is okay, but your overlaps seem sloppy, like here 01:08:256 (1,4) - well... my mapping style consists of overlaps D:
(*) 01:13:205 (1) - Blanket with the two circles it overlaps? i don't like blankets, also why, i'm not planning to do that ;w;
(*) 01:42:586 (3) - Blanket with 01:42:122 (2) - same
(*) 02:00:215 (1) - You could blanket this better by using curves instead of corners did smth?
(*) 02:24:957 (1) - Blanket i really don't know what blanket is here lol
(*) 02:33:772 (1) - You have two timing points here with different SV yes
(*) 03:07:483 (2,4) - See how this overlaps is really good, try follow this overlapping
(*) Overall, I feel like this diff is just really sloppy with stacking and overlaps, and it kinda makes it all over the place visually, so just go through and check for all these overlaps and I think it should be okay. Your patterns seem to be nice, though. You can look at HB's diff to see how they did their stacks, might help

HydroCannon13 wrote:
[ Kalibe's Insane]
00:24:802 (2) - delete it? imo plays better with a pause vocal thing ;w;
00:34:699 (2) - ^ ^
01:26:658 (2) - ^ ok
01:30:524 (1) - slightly overlaps the (2) before nah
02:13:205 (4,5) - stream? or at least, should be more dense than it is good idea

fixed all from Curi pinataman and Shyotamaze mods, thanks!

Last edited by Kalibe 2016-10-10T18:56:51+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2016-10-10T18:52:45+00:00

d

osu file format v14

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Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-10-10T20:06:06+00:00

Logic Agent wrote:
hi m4m stuff

[Obliteration]
A very sizeable portion of this map plays exclusively in the center. This isn't technically unrankable or even a difficult thing to fix, but maybe go back through and see if there's some stuff you can adjust a bit to make the map play in the corners as opposted to staying in the middle. I really like to play and map at the middle of the screen, and lots of mappers use middle screen like me to map, even pkhg is worse than me he's overlapping everything in the middle, but that plays nicely!
00:19:699 (1,2,3,4,1) - i think it'd be cool if you flipped this upside down and moved it up and to the left some I wanted the copy kickslider and then the antiflow to emphasis the downbeat, so yeah..
00:30:060 (1,2) - feel like this is gonna be misread using roughly the same ds and back and forth flow even though there's a gap between the notes.. maybe the same ds just a different flow would be better? (going up instead of back to the left or something) I think it's fine since the rythmn stops here, and if the player miss he can start again LO, and he will know..
01:21:401 (1,2,3,4,1) - the square shape of these jumps makes for really poor flow imo, and leads to the emphasis before the quiet part to be very unimpressive. I would change these and maybe give it a bit more spacing to make it feel stronger Okay good idea, and everybody mentionned it xD remapped
02:03:926 (1) - this is super subjective, but this is a pretty good place for a break in flow, when this sort of flow feels very repetitive already. A change might make this more interesting I'll see here, but I like the back 1 fourth, but I take it in consideration.
02:43:668 (1) - if you wanted to, you could make this 3/4 with a circle at the end to play with the clap and the very noticeable addition of the instrument you're following Well I don't want to, I like that 1/1 rythmn tbh xD
03:07:948 (2,1) - same thign as earlier, a change in flow here would make this more interesting imo KA KE RU KE TE! (( pls
p good map. overall the majority of this mod was very subjective stuff and general ideas or ways to clean things up instead of things that are "wrong." love spyair, gl with ranking~ thanks!

Maakkeli wrote:
hei!!!

this took me like 5 days to mod so some stuff is prolly fixed already

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inconsistent widescreen thing
melancholy
02:33:772 - two greenlines here fixed before!
00:05:782 (2) - rhythmwise this would've worked better as a 1/2 slider cause guitar i wanted to clic clap
00:09:648 (4) - space more form emphasis f done
00:10:266 (1) - this is literally the only place you did a 1/2 slider on. Every other place is 1/1 because it's the first, idk xD it fits so w/e
00:12:431 (6) - personally i don't really agree with this movement since there is no sound really supporting this but you do it everywhere so w/e i follow the guitar
00:14:596 (4,5,6,7) - do some 1-2, 1-2 nc's here for the drums i like my current nc and drums are on red tic so nop
00:20:009 (4) - wanna ctrl+g this? idk felt more comfortable to play for me hah maybe, but yeah i like antifllow
00:30:370 (2) - weh you could get at least some consistency in for these overlaps now they're just random af rly? i don't think so
00:37:174 (6,1) - this was super random cause every other instrument except the vocals are following the usual syncopation rhythm. wait what I'm following vocals here
00:59:442 (1) - doesn't it feel like the drum is doing a 1-2-3 at 00:59:132 (1,2,1) - (even tho it's snare kick snare). So yea I'd remove the nc from that. And maybe do a back n forth there so stack it under 00:59:132 (1) - (or do that overlap stacking thing) ok
01:21:091 (3) - pls the drum fill starts here. Also just some random square doesn't feel intense enough at 01:21:401 (1,2,3,4) - it's because i want to emphasis the TATOE xd no jk
01:26:658 (3) - there is no sound here aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. not even vocals here lmao ok fixed
01:30:060 (3,4,5) - this was probably one of the most awkward things I have ever played. It's super linear and the spacing acceleration from (4) to (5) makes it ever more awkward cause your aim is more flowy than snappy at that point. yreah ok fixed gud job
01:31:762 (2) - hm if you wanna keep this as a circle i'd stack it under (1) cause there is no prominent sound from the guitar, bass or the drums. Only some super weak vocal did an alternative
01:36:555 (5) - can you not can I do
01:41:813 (1,2) - 1/2 bassdrum roll ayy. 01:41:813 (1) - this actually works fine as just a circle but 01:42:122 (2) - would be better off as a 1/2 slider cause of the guitar hold and vocals. i want the guitar pause pls it's more audible
01:59:442 (2,3) - imo this would work better as a 1/2 slider cause there is no prominent sound at 01:59:597 (3) - it's to emphasis the voice building up
02:13:359 (5) - could've at least emphasized this stronger snare with an nc or somth roger dat
02:28:205 (1,3) - hello there are no snares at those white ticks so why are there these claps my mind's telling me NOOOOOOOOOOOO but my body !! MY BODY IS TELLING ME YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH (fixed)
02:32:380 (1) - ew rhythm V O I C E w
02:34:390 (1,2) - swap nc's so the corrects sounds get the emphasis. Or just take a look at what i suggest for this whole thing guitar emphasis and followass
02:35:627 (2) - , 02:36:246 (1) - , 02:37:483 (1) - , 02:37:947 (2) - you trigger me I'M FOLLOWING GUITAR GHYLHFVNS
02:40:112 (2,3,4,5,6) - never really been a fan of this pattern it's just so awkward to read and play with those overlaps. If it was something like this then i'd have no problem but now just askdhg i'm big fan
02:41:040 (9,1) - ghost note at the blue tick triple pls lol i don't like ghosts
02:43:050 (6) - nc for emphasis wee (stronger snare hit thing i mentioned before)
02:55:885 (1) - i think this could be spaced further but w/e yessssssssss
02:57:895 (1,2) - THANK YOU wew
03:05:318 (1) - how about making this first kickslider two circles cause it's two snares and then 03:05:473 (2,3) - can stay as kicksliders cause they're just some tom and bassdrum hits? Gotta make them sounds stand out with rhythm right GOCHA
03:15:833 (1) - this looks like my dick same
pls hitsounds lmao

pinataman wrote:
Hi. Here on request. Hope this helps!

[Obliteration]

00:20:163 (1) – If you're willing to map the calm section at 00:30:060 (1) - , then I'd like you to also map the calm section here. Yeah, there are more drums in this later section, but the cymbals in the first section are strong enough to make this inconsistency not feel good. Nah not really because I don't map the first one because there aren't any kicks or w/e, but the 2nd one there are some! So yeah didn't map vocals.

00:32:534 (1) – Switch to going up and down instead of side to side for some flow diversity? Yes sir!

01:26:658 (1) – I'm guessing you know there's no music on this note here, and so my suggestion is just a butting of heads on opinion, but the map will feel nicer here if you delete this since this note takes away the power in the notes at 01:26:349 (1,2) - . I'm actually pleasantly surprised to see this at 02:57:895 (1,2) - . This one played better. But you should stay consistent. Did an alternative but yeah.

02:34:235 (4,1) – and 02:34:699 (2,1) – and 02:35:163 (2,1) - it felt like these jumps could be stronger. Ok

Mapset looks good to go. Good luck!

Thanks all!!!

Doormat

2,049 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2016-10-11T03:23:26+00:00

@C u r i: i don't want the hard to be too streamy so i went with group of 5 notes here. thanks for checking-

@pinataman: i applied all your suggestions, thanks-

http://puu.sh/rESNd/f0b2302337.zip

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-10-11T10:20:03+00:00

ok waiting for HB to fix, M A Y B E???
@HB make sure to reply to every mods please like evryone did.

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Kyuukai 2016-10-11T11:21:19+00:00

bjr

HB's Expert

01:53:720 (4) - Give it the same shape as 01:53:411 (3) - since 01:52:792 (1,2) - and 01:52:174 (5,6) - has 1,2 same shape
00:08:875 (1,2,3,4) - Something like that would be better I think, the end of 1 slider has the same sound as the 3, moreover, the 4 will be even more emphasized because of the higher spacing.
00:11:040 (4,6) - RIP stack
00:11:813 (6,1) - RIP stack
00:17:380 (6) - 284,60 so it has the same distance between 00:16:916 (3,4) -
00:18:772 (1,3) - RIP blanket
00:37:174 (6) - 248,176 so it has the same distance between 00:36:710 (3,4) -
00:37:328 (7) - 56,176 so it makes a horizontal line with the 6 if you applied the last mod
00:37:174 (6,4) - Don't forget to stack them if you applied the last mod
01:17:534 (3,4) - Make them have the same shape
01:45:679 (6) - 216,152 so it has the same distance between 01:45:060 (3,7) -
02:01:297 (1) - 500,352 so it has [...] between 02:00:679 (1,1) -
02:42:122 (4) - 490,11 so it makes a triangle with the same distance between 02:41:504 (2,3,4) - , the shapes or the sliders are the same so I think it would be better
03:15:370 (5,1) - RIP blanket

@Sotarks J'ai pu mod qu'une diff, j'ai pas trop le temps en ce moment sorry Bon vu que j'ai pas mod des masses et surtout que mon mod est nul, rip le m4m.. xddd

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yaleufeu wrote:
@Sotarks J'ai pu mod qu'une diff, j'ai pas trop le temps en ce moment sorry Bon vu que j'ai pas mod des masses et surtout que mon mod est nul, rip le m4m.. xddd tqt no souci mec!

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