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fourfolium - SAKURA Skip

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Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
Binguo

__Ag wrote:

[insane]
00:13:061 (2,4) - 分开一点，粘在一起了 改

00:21:425 (1,2,3,1) - DS有点不懂 我纸张了 改了

00:24:334 (1,4) - 粘在一起了 改

00:30:061 - 可以加一个note 不是很懂 还是不加了

00:37:970 (3,4) - 节奏不好，试试三连+一滑条 改

其他也找不出什么了，都已经这么多摸了，快飞

谢谢琪老板 :)
Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
Binguo

- Angelia wrote:

[insane]
00:06:879 (1) - 这个由你 是贴还是保持连打的间距 ？
00:11:061 (7) - nc/?
00:11:607 (1) - nc 前面用了 后面？
00:12:516 (6) - 这个是重音 nc否 ?
00:12:697 (1) - 如果前面nc的话 ?
00:17:425 (3) - 漏了个音 红线上 而且感觉这里变速有点突兀 可能是我的错觉 还好吧 打起来手感不错
00:27:970 (5,6,7,1) - 试试平行？ 这个平行没有意义
00:59:607 (2) - ctrl+G fix

Easy

00:35:971 (1,2) - 感觉节奏和歌词配起来不太好 我是低难度尽量不跟人声的那种
aimod的那个堆叠判定值我没看懂 这个怎么改来着


起飞了 老司机要开船了 :shock:


:) 谢谢你
sahuang
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Kobayakawa Sae
131 posts
Joined December 2013
Kobayakawa Sae

- Angelia wrote:

hard
00:11:061 (6) - nc √
01:12:152 (4) - nc √
00:23:061 (5) - 可以换成一个长条的 毕竟中间没音（应该没听错 ）这个感觉可以没多大问题 可以保留
00:37:243 (5) - nc √
00:40:152 (6) - nc √
00:43:061 (7) - nc √

01:25:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 推荐改一下 太梗了 这个感觉还好 先放着吧

多谢你啦 :)
8/24 22:50
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Source:NEW GAME!
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sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
[General]
  1. http://puu.sh/qVSLI/82c5a0a71e.png
    http://puu.sh/qVSME/d089bab2c2.png
    ??

[Easy]
  1. Timing里resnap all notes一下，一堆很小的unsnap编辑器没报错但是assistance有写，虽然没事不过还是做一下
  2. 你到底sc1还是37...insane是全部1然而这边先1后37，keep consistency.
  3. 01:13:697 - 01:13:788 - 开关kiai没设置，喷泉每个diff统一一下。
  4. 00:11:971 (4,1) - ？
  5. 00:20:698 (3,1) - 弄一样的滑条，一个红点一个圆弧不好看
  6. 00:42:153 (2) - blanket

[Normal]
  1. 00:06:879 - 删了绿线
  2. 00:08:152 (3) - ctrl+H,不然flow有点怪
  3. 01:09:243 (3,4) - ...4的位置有点勉强
    稳

[Hard]
  1. 00:57:788 - 01:02:425 - 01:19:879 - 绿线删了
  2. 01:23:606 (5,1) - 01:11:424 (2,3) - 不一致啊，建议01:11:606 (3) - 滑条g一下，现在这样太难
  3. 01:25:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边01:26:152 (5,6,7,8) - 音低一点，现在这个01:25:970 (4,5) - 有点莫名其妙。可以考虑其他摆法，比如两个同心正方形，后一个是前一个旋转缩小图形什么的。然后4这里也NC一下。
    好强啊，很稳的hard

[Insane]
  1. 00:05:607 (1,1) - 没必要NC，sv又没变..
  2. 00:11:970 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太难了。。00:12:152 (5,6) - 这个间距没法打啊，然后00:12:516 (8,1) - 这个重叠也很不好看，我建议这边重新摆下
  3. 00:18:516 - 这边的1.0完全没必要
  4. 00:39:061 (2,3) - ctrl+G?感觉00:39:243 (3,4) - 略突然
  5. 00:52:334 (1) - 去nc
  6. 00:53:243 (4,1) - 这俩叠一下，3个圈叠一起不好
  7. 00:54:879 (1,2) - 变成两个滑条，00:55:243 - should be emphasised.
  8. 00:57:061 (3,1) - 这种overlap..太乱了
  9. 01:07:970 - 也是1.0没啥用
  10. 01:19:607 (3,4,5) - 01:20:334 (6,7,1) - flow太直
  11. 01:23:788 (8,1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/qVZ7u/890e7df2f9.jpg
    这个diff的overlap太凌乱了，按照hw说的要不分开要不stack好，过多的重叠看着就乱，何况你叠的面积还不都一样。
    00:01:425 (2,4) - 00:22:152 (1,3) - 00:22:697 (3,3) - 00:51:152 (3,5,1) - 00:55:970 (4,2) - 00:57:061 (3,1) -

[fanzhen]
  1. 00:39:061 (2,4,5,6) - stack?
    无敌

[NG]
  1. 加个喷泉更适合，参考其他diff
  2. 01:19:607 (1,3,4,5) - 视觉遮挡有点严重，三连换个位置吧
Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
Binguo

sahuang wrote:

[General]
  1. http://puu.sh/qVSLI/82c5a0a71e.png
    http://puu.sh/qVSME/d089bab2c2.png
    ??

[Easy]
  1. Timing里resnap all notes一下，一堆很小的unsnap编辑器没报错但是assistance有写，虽然没事不过还是做一下
  2. 你到底sc1还是37...insane是全部1然而这边先1后37，keep consistency.
  3. 01:13:697 - 01:13:788 - 开关kiai没设置，喷泉每个diff统一一下。
  4. 00:11:971 (4,1) - ？
  5. 00:20:698 (3,1) - 弄一样的滑条，一个红点一个圆弧不好看
  6. 00:42:153 (2) - blanket FIX


[Insane]
  1. 00:05:607 (1,1) - 没必要NC，sv又没变.. 这个连起来会难看
  2. 00:11:970 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太难了。。00:12:152 (5,6) - 这个间距没法打啊，然后00:12:516 (8,1) - 这个重叠也很不好看，我建议这边重新摆下 这个难度这样做的确太难 我会改的
  3. 00:18:516 - 这边的1.0完全没必要 fix
  4. 00:39:061 (2,3) - ctrl+G?感觉00:39:243 (3,4) - 略突然
  5. 00:52:334 (1) - 去nc fix
  6. 00:53:243 (4,1) - 这俩叠一下，3个圈叠一起不好
  7. 00:54:879 (1,2) - 变成两个滑条，00:55:243 - should be emphasised. 我改成1滑条两单点
  8. 00:57:061 (3,1) - 这种overlap..太乱了
  9. 01:07:970 - 也是1.0没啥用 fix
  10. 01:19:607 (3,4,5) - 01:20:334 (6,7,1) - flow太直 fix
  11. 01:23:788 (8,1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/qVZ7u/890e7df2f9.jpg
    这个diff的overlap太凌乱了，按照hw说的要不分开要不stack好，过多的重叠看着就乱，何况你叠的面积还不都一样。
    00:01:425 (2,4) - 00:22:152 (1,3) - 00:22:697 (3,3) - 00:51:152 (3,5,1) - 00:55:970 (4,2) - 00:57:061 (3,1) - 会注意的
Last edited by Binguo , edited 2 times in total.
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
@sahuang
虽然这图比较送，但适当的读图梗我觉得也是有趣的。而且kiai段基本都是这个节奏，每小节第三排前的三连，这么一直打下来到这里应该是很简单的
喷泉ok，@冰菓帮我加一下吧~
自己改了 还另改了一个几像素的直线问题
Doormat
2,049 posts
Joined September 2013
Doormat
hi hi, dropping by about some tags since i noticed you basically copy/pasted mine lol

  1. the name for aoba's cv is actually takada yuuki, not takeda yuuki; this was a typo i didnt realize i made until after the map got ranked =w=
  2. the official Romanisation for "iijima" and "hajime" was changed to "iizima" and "hazime" so consider changing this
good luck with the set~
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
　
Last edited by Pata-Mon , edited 1 time in total.
Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
Binguo

Doormat wrote:

hi hi, dropping by about some tags since i noticed you basically copy/pasted mine lol

  1. the name for aoba's cv is actually takada yuuki, not takeda yuuki; this was a typo i didnt realize i made until after the map got ranked =w=
  2. the official Romanisation for "iijima" and "hajime" was changed to "iizima" and "hazime" so consider changing this
good luck with the set~
Thank you very much! thanks a lot! I will be embarrassed
Kobayakawa Sae
131 posts
Joined December 2013
Kobayakawa Sae

sahuang wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:57:788 - 01:02:425 - 01:19:879 - 绿线删了 删了√
  2. 01:23:606 (5,1) - 01:11:424 (2,3) - 不一致啊，建议01:11:606 (3) - 滑条g一下，现在这样太难 fix
  3. 01:25:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边01:26:152 (5,6,7,8) - 音低一点，现在这个01:25:970 (4,5) - 有点莫名其妙。可以考虑其他摆法，比如两个同心正方形，后一个是前一个旋转缩小图形什么的。然后4这里也NC一下。 fix
    好强啊，很稳的hard
9/2
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428,188,73424,1,2,0:3:0:0:
448,208,73515,1,2,0:3:0:0:
456,236,73606,1,2,0:3:0:0:
456,264,73697,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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88,308,74697,1,2,0:3:0:0:
24,360,74879,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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183,175,75879,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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217,291,77243,1,0,0:3:0:0:
293,326,77425,2,0,B|341:329|341:329|374:316,1,83.9999974365235,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
452,282,77788,1,0,1:0:0:0:
430,200,77970,6,0,B|418:163|418:163|432:123|432:123|389:106|379:58,1,167.999994873047,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
304,18,78515,2,0,L|239:70,1,83.9999974365235,0|2,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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29,174,79243,1,0,1:0:0:0:
75,257,79425,1,0,1:0:0:0:
75,257,79515,1,2,1:3:0:0:
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421,231,80515,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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nika mika
397 posts
Joined January 2014
nika mika
混水摸 鱼 不对 我就是咸鱼 不能摸自己
[Insane]
00:12:516 (9,1) - 参考00:13:970 (1,2) - 下节奏
00:19:152 - 在2上加个圈
00:43:061 (8) - 改成一个00:43:425 (1) - 处的圈
01:01:970 (8) - 拉一个1/4滑条
01:13:607 (7) - ^
01:17:970 (1,3,4) - 分别ctrl+g，然后把转过的4原地顺时针转个10多度
美丽
aoba好萌啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
祝你rank 嘻嘻
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
你现在的insane我觉得是这样，总体上有一种违和感，就是哪里用什么梗，哪里用什么ds，感觉略微缺乏逻辑，有种随手感，类似的地方也不够有统一性。像像震爷他们那样随手用几把梗表现出音乐可能是非常难的，不过我觉得现阶段你可以试着工整一些地作图，blank、stack、正多边形运用得再熟练些，或是flow上下功夫。之前给过你我的一些图，主要是前三点比较好，加上flow的话，啃球最近这个图就非常漂亮https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1023307，除了前三点无懈可击以外，flow也非常顺，基本上每小段分别是顺时针或逆时针，打得非常顺手。你的图梗略混乱，flow也不够好，这样总体就给人一种违和感。其实如果说没啥梗但就是flow好，也是挺舒服的。总之朝这些方面试试？

ps 00:16:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个我觉得是你图里摆得最漂亮的一个地方，梗合曲，排列美观，flow顺

[Insane]
  1. 00:12:516 (9) - 这个可以改成一个短滑条，一方面鼓全都跟到，另一方面滑条其实更符合vocal
    01:01:970 (8) - 01:13:607 (7) - ^
  2. 00:25:607 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 典型的flow差……主要是这里的flow差我也没感觉是表达了音乐，就是单纯的卡手。我觉得这图主要就是类似问题比较多吧，后面也有不少，你可以自己看看哪里flow很卡但又没有特别地表达曲子
  3. 00:27:970 (5,6,7) - 这个可能属于梗缺乏总体性，整张图好像没看到其他地方有用到这种，特别是音乐类似的地方
  4. 00:52:334 (2) - 把滑条尾拆成note
  5. 00:59:061 (8,1) - 感觉应该放远
不过其实总体来说我觉得也还可以了，rank标准应该是完全能够达到的。你cp比较求稳
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
[Insane]

00:14:697 (4) - 這個應該是疊崩了，關掉堆疊效果就看見了

00:18:879 (1) - 01:08:334 (1) - 不用連續NC

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你的圖斜線很多，然後填空的部分又很少，所以看上去會感覺亂 …… 還有就是相對距離比如00:51:788 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/qY6df/067599cedf.jpg

實際上最麻煩的是斜線，佔地面積大而且破壞空白空間……所以相當一部分人為了工整就基本是橫平豎直小弧度滑條附帶±5° 了（比如樓上非常漂亮的那個圖）

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00:00:879 (3,4,1) - 00:57:788 (1,2) - 這些單獨出現的都很搓，相同的地方出現近似的排列就會給人既視感也就是所謂的邏輯……雖然短圖很難做到這一點。

另一個相反的單獨出現，往極限說就像全程DS的圖結尾有一個跳梗，那麼這個跳梗就很引人注目

區別就是什麼地方應該被強調。很明顯00:57:788 (1,2) - 和附近的1/4沒有區別，不應該被特殊對待，00:00:879 (3,4,1) - 見面就移動三連附近卻用折返代替連打也與理不通。所以它們應該作為那個結尾跳梗的基石，默默無聞的用毫無亮點的排列。比如其他地方也用短滑組，或者去掉這個00:57:788 (1,2) - 短滑組，增加移動三連或者把00:00:879 (3,4,1) - 疊起來。這隻是兩個小地方所以影響不大，隨著自帶的限制越來越多，風格就會越來越明顯，也可以說排列越來越單調……比如全程直滑條就是相當鮮明的特色

01:06:879 (3,4,5) - 01:18:516 (3,4,5) - 然後符合邏輯的地方，本身排列比較挫……一方面和平時沒什麼區別，另外同上就是斜線和相對距離浮動，你可以試試換成和平時差別更大的排列，而且出現兩次就會有既視感，例子https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6003344

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至少比zzb 做的好多了，絕對可以rank。 而且總不能remap 並沒有什麼卵用
Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
Binguo
nika mika

nika mika wrote:

混水摸 鱼 不对 我就是咸鱼 不能摸自己
[Insane]
00:12:516 (9,1) - 参考00:13:970 (1,2) - 下节奏 后面的00:13:970 (1,2) - 人声是落到蓝线上的 所以节奏才会有区别
00:19:152 - 在2上加个圈 改漏的节奏还是要漏的
00:43:061 (8) - 改成一个00:43:425 (1) - 处的圈 这个就没必要了可以就这样好
01:01:970 (8) - 拉一个1/4滑条
01:13:607 (7) - ^ 我试试看吧
01:17:970 (1,3,4) - 分别ctrl+g，然后把转过的4原地顺时针转个10多度 可以这很梗FIX
美丽
aoba好萌啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
祝你rank 嘻嘻

帕她萌

Pata-Mon wrote:

你现在的insane我觉得是这样，总体上有一种违和感，就是哪里用什么梗，哪里用什么ds，感觉略微缺乏逻辑，有种随手感，类似的地方也不够有统一性。像像震爷他们那样随手用几把梗表现出音乐可能是非常难的，不过我觉得现阶段你可以试着工整一些地作图，blank、stack、正多边形运用得再熟练些，或是flow上下功夫。之前给过你我的一些图，主要是前三点比较好，加上flow的话，啃球最近这个图就非常漂亮https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1023307，除了前三点无懈可击以外，flow也非常顺，基本上每小段分别是顺时针或逆时针，打得非常顺手。你的图梗略混乱，flow也不够 好，这样总体就给人一种违和感。其实如果说没啥梗但就是flow好，也是挺舒服的。总之朝这些方面试试？ 谢谢怕他梦指点

ps 00:16:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个我觉得是你图里摆得最漂亮的一个地方，梗合曲，排列美观，flow顺

[Insane]
  1. 00:12:516 (9) - 这个可以改成一个短滑条，一方面鼓全都跟到，另一方面滑条其实更符合vocal 我试试看吧
    01:01:970 (8) - 01:13:607 (7) - ^
  2. 00:25:607 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 典型的flow差……主要是这里的flow差我也没感觉是表达了音乐，就是单纯的卡手。我觉得这图主要就是类似问题比较多吧，后面也有不少，你可以自己看看哪里flow很卡但又没有特别地表达曲子 可以我试着排一下
  3. 00:27:970 (5,6,7) - 这个可能属于梗缺乏总体性，整张图好像没看到其他地方有用到这种，特别是音乐类似的地方 以拆
  4. 00:52:334 (2) - 把滑条尾拆成note 真的好吗...我先试试不好改回
  5. 00:59:061 (8,1) - 感觉应该放远 感觉后面1234是过度段没必要放远吧
不过其实总体来说我觉得也还可以了，rank标准应该是完全能够达到的。你cp比较求稳

水仙

Narcissu wrote:

[Insane]

00:14:697 (4) - 這個應該是疊崩了，關掉堆疊效果就看見了 fix

00:18:879 (1) - 01:08:334 (1) - 不用連續NC fix

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你的圖斜線很多，然後填空的部分又很少，所以看上去會感覺亂 …… 還有就是相對距離比如00:51:788 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/qY6df/067599cedf.jpg

實際上最麻煩的是斜線，佔地面積大而且破壞空白空間……所以相當一部分人為了工整就基本是橫平豎直小弧度滑條附帶±5° 了（比如樓上非常漂亮的那個圖） 可以谢谢指导 今后会注意 本人并不喜欢做横直竖平[/color]

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00:00:879 (3,4,1) - 00:57:788 (1,2) - 這些單獨出現的都很搓，相同的地方出現近似的排列就會給人既視感也就是所謂的邏輯……雖然短圖很難做到這一點。 第一个的话稍微修了一下 第二个看了后面的也修了

另一個相反的單獨出現，往極限說就像全程DS的圖結尾有一個跳梗，那麼這個跳梗就很引人注目

區別就是什麼地方應該被強調。很明顯00:57:788 (1,2) - 和附近的1/4沒有區別，不應該被特殊對待，00:00:879 (3,4,1) - 見面就移動三連附近卻用折返代替連打也與理不通。所以它們應該作為那個結尾跳梗的基石，默默無聞的用毫無亮點的排列。比如其他地方也用短滑組，或者去掉這個00:57:788 (1,2) - 短滑組，增加移動三連或者把00:00:879 (3,4,1) - 疊起來。這隻是兩個小地方所以影響不大，隨著自帶的限制越來越多，風格就會越來越明顯，也可以說排列越來越單調……比如全程直滑條就是相當鮮明的特色

01:06:879 (3,4,5) - 01:18:516 (3,4,5) - 然後符合邏輯的地方，本身排列比較挫……一方面和平時沒什麼區別，另外同上就是斜線和相對距離浮動，你可以試試換成和平時差別更大的排列，而且出現兩次就會有既視感，例子https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6003344 我有仔细看 虽然对现在的图帮助不大 不过我之后作图应该会有所改变的谢谢水仙

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至少比zzb 做的好多了，絕對可以rank。 而且總不能remap 並沒有什麼卵用 @zzb
谢谢你们
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
Lam's Hard tag conflict..
Insane
00:14:697 (4,5,6) - stack
00:22:152 (1) - 去掉NC，顺便00:22:697 (3,1) - 换下NC
00:28:516 (1,2,3) - 这个间距，ds4。。加上钝角，太卡手了。。00:28:152 (6,1) - 这也不好看，这边建议改下。00:32:879 (1,2,3) - 这种flow就好得多
00:37:970 (2,3,4) - stack
01:08:334 (1) - cancel NC
01:11:607 (1,3,1) - 和前面说的一样的NC问题
01:23:788 (8,1) - 换NC
Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
Binguo

sahuang wrote:

Lam's Hard tag conflict..
Insane
00:14:697 (4,5,6) - stack
00:22:152 (1) - 去掉NC，顺便00:22:697 (3,1) - 换下NC
00:28:516 (1,2,3) - 这个间距，ds4。。加上钝角，太卡手了。。00:28:152 (6,1) - 这也不好看，这边建议改下。00:32:879 (1,2,3) - 这种flow就好得多
00:37:970 (2,3,4) - stack
01:08:334 (1) - cancel NC
01:11:607 (1,3,1) - 和前面说的一样的NC问题
01:23:788 (8,1) - 换NC
FIX
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
下个bn来的时候改下insane 00:04:607 (3,4) - 叠好
其他没什么，先泡了
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon

sahuang wrote:

下个bn来的时候改下insane 00:04:607 (3,4) - 叠好
其他没什么，先泡了
可
Underforest
5,895 posts
Joined July 2015
Underforest
Lam's Hard

not really an issue but it will look better
Kobayakawa Sae
131 posts
Joined December 2013
Kobayakawa Sae

sahuang wrote:

下个bn来的时候改下insane 00:04:607 (3,4) - 叠好
其他没什么，先泡了
强
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
じ……
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
m4m

[General]
Would you like to post your metadata source in the creator's words? So that we could prevent potential issues.

[Easy]
00:03:970 (1) - Do you have a specific reason for such a sharp shape? If not, better use smooth curve instead.
00:05:607 (3,4,5) - It looks poor to put 3 4 and 5 in a straight line, forcing players make a 90 degree turn with cursor. This plays much better. https://puu.sh/r3QOL/fafdceedce.png
00:06:334 (5,1,2) - This pattern looks meh for 5 and 2 are neither paralleled not symmetric.
00:09:243 (4) - Rhythm needs a change here. You put cymbal sound onto slider-end and moreover the sound on the slider-head is much weaker. Try this instead: https://puu.sh/r3QXS/2c6a97af62.png
00:20:697 (3,1) - Need to be blanketed.
00:26:516 (3,1) - Poor flow.
00:30:152 (1,2) - Blanket or re-arrange the position of 2.
00:53:425 (1,3) - Blanket
00:55:607 (4) - Do you have a specific reason for such a sharp shape? If not, better use smooth curve instead.
00:55:607 (4,1) - Blanket
00:59:243 (1,2,3,4,5) - Follow vocal here.
01:07:970 (1,2) - Poor flow. 1 should be Ctrl+J'ed
01:15:970 (3,1,2) - Poor flow.
01:25:425 (1,2) - Need to be paralleled.

[Narcissu's Normal]
00:21:788 (2) - Ctrl+H for better flow.

[Lam's Hard]
00:03:970 (1) - Poor shape. It even breaks the flow from 1 to 2.
00:05:970 (4) - Copy shape from 3.
00:18:516 (1) - Do you have a specific reason for such a sharp shape? If not, better use smooth curve instead.
00:32:697 (4,1,2) - Blanket
01:13:061 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Such rhythm is too difficult for Hard.
01:24:697 (3,4,5,6,7) - five note stream is too difficult for Hard.

[Insane]
00:06:879 (1,2) - Poor flow
00:12:334 (7,8) - Slider
00:17:425 (3,4,5) - The spacing you applied to 3/4 sliders are too large.
00:18:516 (1,2) - Poor flow.
00:20:152 (2,3) - Poor flow.
00:22:697 (1,2) - Such stack pattern is not recommended here. It makes no sense and could cause confusions.
00:35:243 (3,4,5) - Poor flow for 1/4.
00:48:152 (2,3) - 00:51:061 (2,3) - Triplet works better here.
00:52:334 (2,3) - Poor flow.
00:53:243 (5,1) - Obviously there should be a jump
01:00:334 (4,1) - make them further from each other
01:01:788 (6,7) - Slider
01:06:879 (3,4,5) - too large spacing for 1/4
01:09:243 (1,2) - Should be like this: https://puu.sh/r3RJb/7df46a03e4.png
01:12:152 (1,2) - 01:23:788 (1,2) - you may choose to stack on 1's tail, not head.
01:13:425 (6,7) - Slider
01:17:970 (1,2) - Too far for 1/4, it looks like 1/2
01:18:516 (3,4,5) - too large spacing for 1/4

[fanzhen's Insane]
HP7？ It is not reasonable to be 1.7 higher than the top diff.
00:16:879 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm plays somewhat weird.
01:10:697 (1) - It plays weird since cymbal sounds are applied onto slider-end.

[Pata-Mon's New Game]
01:25:425 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Should be decreased as to spacing. It's imbalancedly larger than any other part of this map.

You could call me back if you fix those issue above!
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Pata-Mon
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Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
我们来猜一猜，果子同学看懂这些英文要多久

哭哭哦 pp图要削结尾跳啦

Edit:

have done some nerf, I think it's fine now
(ds: 2.8-->2.58, 3.2-->2.95 stars: 4.91-->4.87)
Thanks for mod!

Metadata:

CelsiusLK wrote:

b

metadata http://newgame-anime.com/product/music.html , https://twitter.com/nganime/status/748385556510478336
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sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang

Binguo wrote:

I really suck at English.
Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
Binguo

Regraz wrote:

m4m

[General]
Would you like to post your metadata source in the creator's words? So that we could prevent potential issues. 我会那样做

[Easy]
00:03:970 (1) - Do you have a specific reason for such a sharp shape? If not, better use smooth curve instead.
00:05:607 (3,4,5) - It looks poor to put 3 4 and 5 in a straight line, forcing players make a 90 degree turn with cursor. This plays much better. https://puu.sh/r3QOL/fafdceedce.png
00:06:334 (5,1,2) - This pattern looks meh for 5 and 2 are neither paralleled not symmetric.
00:09:243 (4) - Rhythm needs a change here. You put cymbal sound onto slider-end and moreover the sound on the slider-head is much weaker. Try this instead: https://puu.sh/r3QXS/2c6a97af62.png
00:20:697 (3,1) - Need to be blanketed.
00:26:516 (3,1) - Poor flow.
00:30:152 (1,2) - Blanket or re-arrange the position of 2.
00:53:425 (1,3) - Blanket
00:55:607 (4) - Do you have a specific reason for such a sharp shape? If not, better use smooth curve instead.
00:55:607 (4,1) - Blanket
00:59:243 (1,2,3,4,5) - Follow vocal here.
01:07:970 (1,2) - Poor flow. 1 should be Ctrl+J'ed
01:15:970 (3,1,2) - Poor flow.
01:25:425 (1,2) - Need to be paralleled.

[Insane]
00:06:879 (1,2) - Poor flow
00:12:334 (7,8) - Slider
00:17:425 (3,4,5) - The spacing you applied to 3/4 sliders are too large.
00:18:516 (1,2) - Poor flow.
00:20:152 (2,3) - Poor flow.
00:22:697 (1,2) - Such stack pattern is not recommended here. It makes no sense and could cause confusions.
00:35:243 (3,4,5) - Poor flow for 1/4.
00:48:152 (2,3) - 00:51:061 (2,3) - Triplet works better here.
00:52:334 (2,3) - Poor flow.
00:53:243 (5,1) - Obviously there should be a jump
01:00:334 (4,1) - make them further from each other
01:01:788 (6,7) - Slider
01:06:879 (3,4,5) - too large spacing for 1/4
01:09:243 (1,2) - Should be like this: https://puu.sh/r3RJb/7df46a03e4.png
01:12:152 (1,2) - 01:23:788 (1,2) - you may choose to stack on 1's tail, not head.
01:13:425 (6,7) - Slider
01:17:970 (1,2) - Too far for 1/4, it looks like 1/2
01:18:516 (3,4,5) - too large spacing for 1/4

all fix 受益匪浅 :) 谢谢你 Easy大改了......
You could call me back if you fix those issue above!
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Binguo
308 posts
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Topic Starter
Binguo

Underforest wrote:

Lam's Hard

not really an issue but it will look better
I understand. Thanks for your reminding. :) muddled
Binguo
308 posts
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Topic Starter
Binguo

Pata-Mon wrote:

我们来猜一猜，果子同学看懂这些英文要多久 我有百度翻译
哭哭哦 pp图要削结尾跳啦
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
我覺得沒明顯區別，幫我改一下
Kobayakawa Sae
131 posts
Joined December 2013
Kobayakawa Sae

Regraz wrote:

m4m

[Lam's Hard]
00:03:970 (1) - Poor shape. It even breaks the flow from 1 to 2.
00:05:970 (4) - Copy shape from 3.
00:18:516 (1) - Do you have a specific reason for such a sharp shape? If not, better use smooth curve instead.
00:32:697 (4,1,2) - Blanket
01:13:061 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Such rhythm is too difficult for Hard.
01:24:697 (3,4,5,6,7) - five note stream is too difficult for Hard.

all fix 非常感谢您 :)

You could call me back if you fix those issue above!
9/9
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59152
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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Artist:fourfolium
ArtistUnicode:fourfolium
Creator:Binguo
Version:Lam's Hard
Source:NEW GAME!
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349,109,69061,1,0,1:0:0:0:
278,158,69243,6,0,P|253:236|284:312,1,167.999994873047,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
363,359,69788,2,0,P|402:346|428:314,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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449,177,73425,1,2,0:3:0:0:
449,177,73516,1,2,0:3:0:0:
449,177,73607,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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343,321,74152,2,0,B|319:309|287:309|287:309|267:317|247:329|247:329|215:333|179:324,1,167.999994873047,2|2,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
90,294,74697,1,2,0:3:0:0:
32,362,74879,1,0,1:0:0:0:
90,294,75061,6,0,B|106:262|98:222|98:222|82:194|78:162|85:130,1,167.999994873047,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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189,158,75879,1,0,1:0:0:0:
191,196,75970,2,0,L|273:213,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Binguo
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Binguo


震爷的改摸
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
看起来马上要飞了，来占坑冒个泡QWQ
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
No kudosu.
It seems that you checked the mod carefully and really try to fix the issues! The attitude of you already shows the outstanding points of you, you would be a great mapper!

[Easy]
01:07:970 (1,2) - Poor flow. 1 should be Ctrl+J'ed

[Insane]
00:17:788 (4,5) - Too far, also poor flow, making it looks like 1/2
01:07:243 (4,5) - Blanket a little off

call me back
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
就要钦点 不点不玩 火钳刘明
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon

Regraz wrote:

You would be a great mapper!
瓜子哥已钦点了 说果子你来当神麻婆
Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
Binguo
害怕 :o
Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
Binguo

Regraz wrote:

No kudosu.
It seems that you checked the mod carefully and really try to fix the issues! The attitude of you already shows the outstanding points of you, you would be a great mapper! Thank you,and I am really very happy! .... 我会继续加油
[Easy]
01:07:970 (1,2) - Poor flow. 1 should be Ctrl+J'ed

[Insane]
00:17:788 (4,5) - Too far, also poor flow, making it looks like 1/2
01:07:243 (4,5) - Blanket a little off Fix!!!

call me back
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
re-bubbled since many changes.
You can ask sahuang to qualify <3
sahuang
2,293 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang

Regraz wrote:

re-bubbled since many changes.
You can ask sahuang to qualify <3
Pata-Mon
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Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
nba
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