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Binguo

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Binguo 2016-08-05T13:42:11+00:00

-ClariS- wrote:
[EASY]
卜要偷懒啊= =最后还有一段呢正打算做呢
[insane]

00:10:152 (2,3,4,5,6) - 随机跳形状也要按照基本法( 这个到底那里不对了...
00:21:425 你要真想这么放就这么NC吧00:21:425 (1,1,1) - 嗯我是这样放的啊你摸之前没更新吗..
00:27:425 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这间距手感挺怪的就是要怪暂时保留
00:43:970 (3,4,5,6) - 这里可以放1212的节奏的跳(亲戚家没装PUUSH截不了图) 最后那个物件是没有音的我自己添上去补正的 1212反而违和
01:10:879 (1,2,3,1,2) - 还是NC问题，同第二条
最后的大跳可以更放开点，不用拘泥在五边形里暂时保留
怎么说呢......有点乱，还有点抄反震的感觉？( 除了11秒那里我抄了一组其他的并没抄啊....

美丽
没有NG我要死了.jpg 要坚强的活下来等更新这很重要谢谢你了
good luck~

Kamiya

[Kamiya] wrote:
~~这个位置是我的！~~
咕咕不可

[Easy]

00:35:971 (1) - 这个finish感觉可以去掉 fix

[Insane]

00:06:334 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 间距不等~故意的吗;w; 无可奈何所以也是故意的吧...
00:11:970 (3,4,5,6) - 这里感觉音效或者摆放听起来(打起来)很奇怪，换成连打呢？嗯....还好吧

你们都做的太好了啦QAQ(逃~

谢谢你们

Last edited by Binguo 2016-08-05T14:03:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Gust

516 posts

Joined December 2011

Gust 2016-08-05T13:48:05+00:00

不好意思鸽儿了两天
[Insane]
00:03:061 (2,3,4) - 00:06:516 (2,3,4,5,1) - ?连打注意下ds等距，我是看着不太好受
00:10:152 (2,3,4,5,6) - 随机跳也摆好看点吧。。
00:15:243 (7) - slider尾是个vocal重音，拆成2个note我觉得会比较好
00:18:152 (1) - 同
00:21:425 (1,2,3,1,2) - 我是从图上读不太清楚你的节奏是这么下的。。ds或者nc考虑下得更明显些吧
00:34:697 (1) - 虽然打起来没什么问题但这个横直slider就是觉得好别扭。。
00:37:243 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得吧。。前面半分钟的点跳ds伸缩自如到这里怎么变成ds差不多的了。。这种地方处理成跳我觉得更好吧（
00:39:061 (2) - 可以拆成note
00:44:334 (5,6) - 这里倒是可以合并成slider
00:47:243 (7,8) - 可以做个变高sv的slider
01:00:334 (1) - 我觉得没必要为了合梗而牺牲更好的节奏感，这里01:00:516 - 明显处理成note更好
kiai倒是没啥问题。。都是之前提过的
01:25:425 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 最后没必要固定在这么小的空间里吧，可以考虑再舒展一些

Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Binguo 2016-08-05T13:59:27+00:00

Ultimate Madoka wrote:
不好意思鸽儿了两天
[Insane]
00:03:061 (2,3,4) - 00:06:516 (2,3,4,5,1) - ?连打注意下ds等距，我是看着不太好受一张图连打的DS没必要一样吧
00:10:152 (2,3,4,5,6) - 随机跳也摆好看点吧。。既然你们都提到了那就 fixed
00:15:243 (7) - slider尾是个vocal重音，拆成2个note我觉得会比较好我认为这个人声没必要跟
00:18:152 (1) - 同这个拆了节奏就破了吧...
00:21:425 (1,2,3,1,2) - 我是从图上读不太清楚你的节奏是这么下的。。ds或者nc考虑下得更明显些吧暂时保留
00:34:697 (1) - 虽然打起来没什么问题但这个横直slider就是觉得好别扭。。？？？
00:37:243 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得吧。。前面半分钟的点跳ds伸缩自如到这里怎么变成ds差不多的了。。这种地方处理成跳我觉得更好吧（这里音乐是慢下来了吧
00:39:061 (2) - 可以拆成note fix
00:44:334 (5,6) - 这里倒是可以合并成slider 不可
00:47:243 (7,8) - 可以做个变高sv的slider 鼓点
01:00:334 (1) - 我觉得没必要为了合梗而牺牲更好的节奏感，这里01:00:516 - 明显处理成note更好暂时保留
kiai倒是没啥问题。。都是之前提过的
01:25:425 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 最后没必要固定在这么小的空间里吧，可以考虑再舒展一些也不一定要跳开吧中间也有空拍暂时保留

谢谢哦

Kobayakawa Sae

131 posts

Joined December 2013

Kobayakawa Sae 2016-08-05T15:37:29+00:00

[Kamiya] wrote:
[Lam's Hard]

00:25:061 (3,4) - 没包住哦已改
00:29:061 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里我的意见可能是3,4换成slider好些? 可以，已改
十分感谢

-ClariS- wrote:
[林奶奶]

00:31:243 (5) - 这个本来没啥，配上BG之后莫名的遮挡坑(虽然个人没什么感觉，不过还是把遮挡改了
00:33:425 (4,5) - 换单点？这里的话感觉还是用滑条好点，后面的我也改成了滑条这样感觉就没那么违和(
00:35:970 (2) - NC，这里是明显的另一段开头我zz了orz
00:53:425 (1,2,3) - 这里和之后间距缩的太突然了.......稍微拉大点再慢慢缩？可以，已改
01:00:879 (7) - NC 已改
01:03:243 (4,5) - 感觉没对齐呢已改
01:07:970 (4) - NC 已改
01:21:788 (1,2) - 有点丑？改成平行了，应该会好看点(
01:21:788 (1) - NC去掉，在01:22:515 (3) - 这里已改
01:23:788 (8) - NC 已改
01:26:152 (1) - 可以不NC 可
多谢激光姥爷XD

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297,300,39606,2,0,L|306:369,1,70,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,382,39970,1,0,1:0:0:0:
456,331,40152,2,0,P|474:265|444:203,1,140,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,169,40697,2,0,P|336:188|302:188,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,176,40970,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,155,41061,6,0,P|217:90|247:29,1,140,2|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,21,41788,2,0,L|91:90,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,182,42152,1,0,1:0:0:0:
181,181,42334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,181,42424,1,0,1:0:0:0:
181,180,42515,2,0,L|179:256,1,70,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,329,42879,1,0,1:0:0:0:
314,315,43061,2,0,P|383:305|453:302,2,140,2|2|2,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
250,249,43970,6,0,P|250:182|309:151,1,140,2|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
473,183,44697,1,2,0:3:0:0:
498,103,44879,1,2,0:3:0:0:
447,35,45061,1,0,1:0:0:0:
364,51,45243,2,0,B|310:63|270:27|270:27|233:37,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
152,64,45788,1,0,1:0:0:0:
116,139,45970,2,0,P|142:198|205:183,2,140,4|2|2,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
192,108,46879,5,0,1:0:0:0:
208,108,46970,1,2,0:3:0:0:
224,108,47061,1,2,0:3:0:0:
240,108,47152,1,2,0:3:0:0:
256,108,47243,1,2,0:3:0:0:
420,184,47606,6,0,P|434:250|401:310,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
284,264,48152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,264,48243,1,0,1:0:0:0:
284,264,48334,2,0,L|215:280,1,70,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,344,48697,1,0,1:0:0:0:
92,296,48879,2,0,L|73:157,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
60,72,49424,1,0,1:0:0:0:
265,60,49788,5,2,0:3:0:0:
201,114,49970,1,2,0:3:0:0:
236,191,50152,1,0,1:0:0:0:
319,183,50334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,96,50516,2,0,B|386:72|446:92|446:92|433:112,1,140,2|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
405,199,51061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,199,51152,1,0,1:0:0:0:
405,198,51243,6,0,P|396:232|399:267,2,70,2|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,304,51788,2,0,P|415:345|350:329,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
266,337,52334,2,0,P|232:345|198:338,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,285,52697,2,0,P|122:251|130:217,1,70,8|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
154,137,53061,1,2,0:3:0:0:
168,112,53243,1,2,0:3:0:0:
184,84,53425,6,0,L|288:73,1,105.000004005432,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,120,54152,1,0,1:0:0:0:
348,220,54515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
250,182,54879,2,0,P|197:181|145:189,1,105.000004005432,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
59,126,55607,2,0,P|42:175|46:227,1,105.000004005432,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
103,315,56334,2,0,L|171:297,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,355,56697,2,0,L|299:337,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,271,57061,5,2,0:3:0:0:
425,310,57243,2,0,L|446:376,2,70,2|0|0,0:3|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,232,57788,2,0,L|464:198,3,35,4|0|0|0,0:3|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
434,167,58152,2,0,L|424:133,3,35,4|0|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,104,58515,2,0,L|462:69,3,35,2|0|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,36,58879,2,0,L|422:3,3,35,2|0|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,11,59243,6,0,L|311:16,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,49,59606,1,2,0:0:0:0:
233,49,59788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,128,59970,2,0,L|219:196,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,276,60333,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,276,60515,1,2,0:3:0:0:
88,338,60879,5,2,0:3:0:0:
81,183,61243,1,2,0:3:0:0:
81,183,61424,2,0,L|76:148,3,35,2|2|2|2,0:3|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
93,109,61788,2,0,L|115:81,3,35,2|2|2|2,0:3|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
162,100,62152,6,0,B|200:111|231:98|231:98|258:111|285:103,1,125.999996154785,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,91,62515,2,0,P|301:169|335:244,1,167.999994873047,2|2,1:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
335,244,63061,1,2,0:3:0:0:
431,248,63243,1,0,1:0:0:0:
431,248,63424,2,0,P|454:169|420:94,1,167.999994873047,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
358,18,63970,2,0,P|317:12|276:22,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,49,64243,1,0,1:0:0:0:
215,82,64334,6,0,P|176:94|134:90,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,60,64697,2,0,L|49:152,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,241,65061,2,0,B|73:241|98:227|98:227|136:228|136:228|172:216|172:216|207:223,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
265,301,65606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,301,65697,1,0,1:0:0:0:
265,301,65788,2,0,P|249:339|215:362,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,295,66152,1,0,1:0:0:0:
207,223,66334,6,0,B|240:192|296:192|331:223|331:223|356:201,1,167.999994873047,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
418,129,66879,2,0,P|400:91|368:65,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,62,67152,1,0,1:0:0:0:
355,60,67243,1,2,0:3:0:0:
283,123,67424,1,2,0:3:0:0:
283,123,67607,2,0,B|233:123|233:123|198:93,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,184,67970,6,0,P|102:186|122:236,1,125.999996154785,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,225,68334,2,0,B|260:202|244:260|327:226,1,167.999994873047,2|2,1:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
385,149,68879,1,2,0:3:0:0:
385,149,69061,1,0,1:0:0:0:
288,157,69243,2,0,P|263:235|294:311,1,167.999994873047,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
378,359,69788,2,0,P|414:339|437:305,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,261,70061,1,0,1:0:0:0:
427,221,70152,6,0,P|386:208|345:211,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,137,70515,2,0,P|322:124|363:127,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,73,70879,2,0,B|456:57|456:29|456:29|428:13|396:9|364:13|338:25,1,167.999994873047,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
255,75,71424,1,2,0:3:0:0:
105,77,71606,2,0,P|179:44|255:75,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
180,136,72152,2,0,B|160:192|160:192|176:240|176:240|161:295,2,167.999994873047,4|2|2,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
280,148,73061,6,0,P|344:160|408:176,1,125.999996154785,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,188,73424,1,2,0:3:0:0:
448,208,73515,1,2,0:3:0:0:
456,236,73606,1,2,0:3:0:0:
456,264,73697,1,2,0:3:0:0:
448,291,73788,6,0,P|410:341|350:356,1,125.999996154785,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,348,74152,2,0,B|296:336|264:336|264:336|244:344|224:356|224:356|192:360|156:351,1,167.999994873047,2|2,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
88,308,74697,1,2,0:3:0:0:
24,360,74879,1,0,1:0:0:0:
88,308,75061,2,0,B|104:276|96:236|96:236|80:208|76:176|83:144,1,167.999994873047,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
150,59,75606,2,0,P|178:89|190:129,1,83.9999974365235,0|2,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
193,171,75879,1,0,1:0:0:0:
191,213,75970,6,0,L|273:230,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,226,76334,2,0,L|386:144,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,107,76697,2,0,P|220:136|190:212,1,167.999994873047,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
217,291,77243,1,0,0:3:0:0:
293,326,77425,2,0,B|341:329|341:329|374:316,1,83.9999974365235,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
452,282,77788,1,0,1:0:0:0:
430,200,77970,2,0,B|418:163|418:163|432:123|432:123|389:106|379:58,1,167.999994873047,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
305,18,78515,2,0,P|285:55|250:79,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,102,78879,5,2,0:3:0:0:
85,89,79061,1,2,0:3:0:0:
21,143,79243,2,0,B|12:182|12:182|17:225,1,83.9999974365235,0|2,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
39,261,79515,1,2,0:3:0:0:
76,280,79606,2,0,B|136:263|136:263|211:263,1,125.999996154785,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,264,79970,2,0,B|280:270|305:254|305:254|324:259|345:271|345:271|373:262|403:265,1,167.999994873047,2|2,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
476,306,80515,5,2,0:3:0:0:
376,341,80697,1,0,1:0:0:0:
261,195,80879,2,0,P|185:219|179:298,1,167.999994873047,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
243,350,81425,2,0,P|281:333|322:329,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,321,81788,2,0,L|400:232,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,204,82152,2,0,L|484:293,1,83.9999974365235,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,160,82515,6,0,B|373:157|347:180|347:180|331:163|308:159|308:159|283:167|253:161,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
169,164,83061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,164,83152,1,0,1:0:0:0:
169,164,83243,2,0,P|178:206|176:247,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,328,83606,1,0,1:0:0:0:
158,328,83788,6,0,B|197:333|221:317|221:317|266:331|266:331|293:319|320:320,1,167.999994873047,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
404,320,84334,2,0,B|437:322|458:337|458:337|475:317,1,83.9999974365235,0|2,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
464,233,84697,1,2,0:3:0:0:
460,209,84788,1,2,0:3:0:0:
456,185,84879,1,2,0:3:0:0:
452,161,84970,1,2,0:3:0:0:
448,137,85061,1,2,0:3:0:0:
256,80,85424,5,4,0:3:0:0:
269,150,85606,1,2,0:3:0:0:
340,136,85788,1,2,0:3:0:0:
326,66,85970,1,2,0:3:0:0:
184,96,86152,1,0,1:0:0:0:
113,110,86334,1,2,0:3:0:0:
127,180,86516,1,2,0:3:0:0:
197,166,86698,1,4,0:0:0:0:
344,320,87061,5,0,1:0:0:0:
276,292,87243,1,2,0:3:0:0:
204,280,87424,1,2,0:3:0:0:
128,280,87606,2,0,B|75:276|35:304|35:304|72:224|4:200|37:127,1,280,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-08-05T15:47:11+00:00

@克拉里斯就不 ~~其实这种我也容易打不准~~但这是玩家的问题，从图的角度这么放是最合适的

谢摸
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_MiaoFUuU_

314 posts

Joined April 2014

_MiaoFUuU_ 2016-08-05T16:25:06+00:00

冰果—鸡

00:20:698 (3) - 请你弯下来！

水仙大大

00:06:516 (6) - 节奏上这里不适宜加这个，建议删了
01:27:061 (4) - 这个NC一下怎样？

Lam's hard

00:01:061 (4) - stack
00:01:061 (4) - NC
00:03:243 (1) - stack，NC
00:03:970 (9) - NC
00:14:879 (1) - 取消NC，如果不想数字过10的话就在00:13:970 (6) - 这里再加NC
00:15:607 - NC
00:16:334 (1) - 取消NC
00:16:879 (6) - NC
00:18:515 (6) - ↑
00:18:879 (1) - 取消NC
后面很多都是，注意一下大白线
00:37:061 (5,6) - stack
00:42:515 (6) - ↑
00:50:516 (5) - 这个摆准星星位置
00:51:243 (1) - ↑
01:01:424 (9,10,1) - 前面一堆折返切指，就建议01:02:152 (1) - 这个滑条结束在红线
01:03:061 (3) - 这里不要放在结束位置
01:06:879 (9,10,1,2) - 这里切指不流畅，01:07:243 (1,2) - 这两个很适合放滑条位（听乐器和人声）
01:08:516 - 不要跳过这里，01:08:697 - 这里放个能按的，最好这3个点01:08:697 - 01:08:879 - 01:09:061 - 是能移动的圈圈，不要叠
01:19:243 (3) - 这个最好换成圈圈，因为01:19:425 - 这里尽量放个能按的，不然切指不流畅
01:20:152 - ↑↑

冰果淫Sex

00:00:879 (3,4,1) - 这3个的距离相同啊
00:05:970 (1,1) - stack
00:49:607 (3,1) - 这里贴着，不工整
00:51:788 (1) - 这个可以blanket好点
00:59:243 (1,1,1,1) - NC？为什么不用数字1234
00:59:607 (1,1) - stack
01:01:516 (3,4) - 这3个DS和后面几个不相同
01:02:516 - clap（如果有些乐器你要跟都不要忘了clap）
01:04:697 - 请保持24clap啊（你这里01:05:061 - 又多了个whistle会很违和）
01:08:697 - 改用whistle
01:14:152 - clap
01:16:334 - ↑
01:22:152 - ↑

反震大大

00:22:516 (1,2) - 这两个分别NC一下
00:30:152 (4) - NC
00:31:425 (6) - NC
00:53:243 (1,2) - 分别NC
01:27:061 (2) - NC

怕他猛

00:35:606 (8,1) - 这两个finish删一个，有点吵，建议删这个00:35:606 (8) -
01:26:697 - 声音降到45吧，本来finish音量就很大了

Echoy

141 posts

Joined December 2013

Echoy 2016-08-06T07:23:57+00:00

Hi, 我没做过hard和normal所以就mod一下所有insane上难度吧

Insane

00:01:061 (1) - 这里有拍手音，还挺带感的，一直持续到00:05:061 (5) - ，最好别忽略了
00:12:697 (1) - 这个可以提前一点，移到00:12:516 - 与人声开始相呼应；毕竟00:13:970 (1) - 这里就是以人声为起始的。
00:15:425 - 这里也类似，如果你改了上面的，后面波及的几个或许都要改改，虽说现在作图主流都喜欢只跟旋律，但是我觉得【强烈的】人声也是很重要的，毕竟一个普通人哼歌的时候都是哼人声。你权衡一下哪种你觉得好吧
00:18:334 - 这里的人声做了个空拍感觉就不太合适了，感觉猛地被迫降了；类似的还有01:07:788 -
00:35:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我感觉前六个都应该是两个两个一组的，这样摆有点随机了
00:41:788 (1,4,5,6) - 这个stack不太好看
01:01:970 (8) - 的后面一个还有鼓，但鉴于在01:01:970 (8) - 处有一声“MEI~~”，你可以在01:01:970 - 处做个短滑条试试看感觉
01:13:607 (8) - 同上
01:19:425 (6,7,1) - new combo为何不从6开始呢？
01:19:970 (3) - 在这个滑条上再加个finish
01:27:061 (1,2,3,4) - 可以扩大点间距

fanzhen's Insane

开头持续到00:05:061 - 的音乐中的拍手音没有体现在音效里
00:39:061 (2,4,5,6) - 这个stack不太好看

Pata-Mon's New Game

开头持续到00:05:061 - 的拍手音…-。-;
00:17:425 (2,5) - 鉴于上面两个难度都有特别强调该处并加了finish的音效，建议这个难度也这样做。类似的还有01:06:879 (2,5) -
00:18:334 - 那个“tsu~”的音用滑条尾巴改掉了，感觉顿时削弱了
01:03:425 (1) - kiai time节奏跟的有些乱，比如fanzhen的难度，如果强调某个音便会全程强调下去。但是在这个难度就显得有些随机，比如该处有特意强调这声“Ei~”，但是到了01:04:879 (8) - 处，同样的“NA~”就用滑条尾巴遮盖了。
01:15:061 (1) - 和01:16:516 - 同上述情况类似

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2016-08-06T07:27:44+00:00

吓出翔这震爷怎么做anime

[fahzhen's insane]
diff名怎么小写
00:02:697 (2,3,4,5) - 这距离有点容易误读成1/4
01:20:334 (5) - 改成slider+note么感觉适合你这图kiai

[Insane]
00:10:152 (2,3,5) - 这间距看着好乱
18334 - 起个音在红线啊
67788 - ……
01:25:242 (8) - 故意歪的？
那几个加速滑条感觉有点过了速度稍微降低点为好

[Lam's Hard]
00:17:788 (5,6) - 这两个叠
00:56:334 (6) - NC

gl

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-08-06T08:23:01+00:00

@妙芙音效改了一些，之前还有漏的，昨晚给冰菓了等他上传吧
@Echoy 开头我觉得没必要放拍手音效。finish那里他们的难度不是我加不加的理由。其他的东西，你听一下鼓点就知道为什么我这么下。no change

thanks for mod

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2016-08-06T08:40:18+00:00

加了個NC，對了個齊

節奏音效都是Doormat 下的我就不客氣的甩鍋了

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Kobayakawa Sae

131 posts

Joined December 2013

Kobayakawa Sae 2016-08-06T09:37:19+00:00

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:
Lam's hard
00:01:061 (4) - stack √
00:01:061 (4) - NC 我又重新nc了一遍，把我认为nc的都nc了而且大多数nc也和你下面所说的基本相同，所以下面的我就不写了（~~其实是懒~~
00:03:243 (1) - stack √ ，NC
00:03:970 (9) - NC
00:14:879 (1) - 取消NC，如果不想数字过10的话就在00:13:970 (6) - 这里再加NC
00:15:607 - NC
00:16:334 (1) - 取消NC
00:16:879 (6) - NC
00:18:515 (6) - ↑
00:18:879 (1) - 取消NC
后面很多都是，注意一下大白线
00:37:061 (5,6) - stack√
00:42:515 (6) - ↑
00:50:516 (5) - 这个摆准星星位置√
00:51:243 (1) - ↑
01:01:424 (9,10,1) - 前面一堆折返切指，就建议01:02:152 (1) - 这个滑条结束在红线可√
01:03:061 (3) - 这里不要放在结束位置已改
01:06:879 (9,10,1,2) - 这里切指不流畅已改，01:07:243 (1,2) - 这两个很适合放滑条位（听乐器和人声）确实，已改√
01:08:516 - 不要跳过这里，01:08:697 - 这里放个能按的，最好这3个点01:08:697 - 01:08:879 - 01:09:061 - 是能移动的圈圈，不要叠已改√
01:19:243 (3) - 这个最好换成圈圈，因为01:19:425 - 这里尽量放个能按的，不然切指不流畅已改√
01:20:152 - ↑↑ √

yf_bmp wrote:
[Lam's Hard]
00:17:788 (5,6) - 这两个叠 √
00:56:334 (6) - NC √

gl

感谢两位大师

8/6 17:40

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Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Binguo 2016-08-08T13:52:15+00:00

_MiaoFUuU_

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:
冰果—鸡
00:20:698 (3) - 请你弯下来！不弯

冰果淫Sex
00:00:879 (3,4,1) - 这3个的距离相同啊 fix
00:05:970 (1,1) - stack ????
00:49:607 (3,1) - 这里贴着，不工整 fix
00:51:788 (1) - 这个可以blanket好点
00:59:243 (1,1,1,1) - NC？为什么不用数字1234 fix
00:59:607 (1,1) - stack
01:01:516 (3,4) - 这3个DS和后面几个不相同 fix
01:02:516 - clap（如果有些乐器你要跟都不要忘了clap）
01:04:697 - 请保持24clap啊（你这里01:05:061 - 又多了个whistle会很违和）
01:08:697 - 改用whistle
01:14:152 - clap
01:16:334 - ↑
01:22:152 - ↑ 音效看的我有些混乱我回头自己检查吧

Echoy

Echoy wrote:
Hi, 我没做过hard和normal所以就mod一下所有insane上难度吧
Insane
00:01:061 (1) - 这里有拍手音，还挺带感的，一直持续到00:05:061 (5) - ，最好别忽略了大家都没用我也是直接用了哨音所以暂时不考虑
00:12:697 (1) - 这个可以提前一点，移到00:12:516 - 与人声开始相呼应；毕竟00:13:970 (1) - 这里就是以人声为起始的。
00:15:425 - 这里也类似，如果你改了上面的，后面波及的几个或许都要改改，虽说现在作图主流都喜欢只跟旋律，但是我觉得【强烈的】人声也是很重要的，毕竟一个普通人哼歌的时候都是哼人声。你权衡一下哪种你觉得好吧此处的人声算不上强烈应为后面几乎也一样
00:18:334 - 这里的人声做了个空拍感觉就不太合适了，感觉猛地被迫降了；类似的还有01:07:788 - fix
00:35:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我感觉前六个都应该是两个两个一组的，这样摆有点随机了 00:35:970 (1,2,4,5) - 因为我注意到的是这两组吧
00:41:788 (1,4,5,6) - 这个stack不太好看 fix
01:01:970 (8) - 的后面一个还有鼓，但鉴于在01:01:970 (8) - 处有一声“MEI~~”，你可以在01:01:970 - 处做个短滑条试试看感觉
01:13:607 (8) - 同上这样的话太难了吧对于我这种不会连打的
01:19:425 (6,7,1) - new combo为何不从6开始呢？ fix
01:19:970 (3) - 在这个滑条上再加个finish fxi
01:27:061 (1,2,3,4) - 可以扩大点间距整个改了

yf_bmp

yf_bmp wrote:
[Insane]
00:10:152 (2,3,5) - 这间距看着好乱 fix
18334 - 起个音在红线啊
67788 - …… fix
01:25:242 (8) - 故意歪的？是的
那几个加速滑条感觉有点过了速度稍微降低点为好我会那样做的现在没时间了下次上传会改

谢谢了

Last edited by Binguo 2016-08-24T12:17:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

__Ag

597 posts

Joined July 2011

__Ag 2016-08-23T08:21:47+00:00

[怕他萌]
00:06:334 (4) - 可以nc

00:23:970 (8,1) - 为什么不直接叠起来

00:35:606 (8,1) - ^

00:02:334 (1) - nc怎么在这，应该在00:02:697 (2) -

[震爷]
00:03:788 (8) - 这个的音相对不强，感觉不适合跟前面两个做成一组单点

00:46:697 (5) - NC？

[insane]
00:13:061 (2,4) - 分开一点，粘在一起了

00:21:425 (1,2,3,1) - DS有点不懂

00:24:334 (1,4) - 粘在一起了

00:30:061 - 可以加一个note

00:37:970 (3,4) - 节奏不好，试试三连+一滑条

其他也找不出什么了，都已经这么多摸了，快飞

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-08-23T08:29:29+00:00

@琪老板
第一个nc不用了吧
然后stack，我想问为什么要叠呢？
最后一个nc是因为那种节拍型里，那拍其实是跟后一个小节的，就像00:05:243 (1) - 之类的，第一拍提前，然后大白线那里空的，nc一律提前加。

谢摸

虽然这个摸没改，但是把我最后那段的跳优化了一下

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- Angelia

118 posts

Joined August 2013

- Angelia 2016-08-23T10:18:55+00:00

[Pata-Mon's New Game]

00:00:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - 换成dan dan那首的开头如何
00:08:152 (1) - ctrl+G
00:12:516 (3) - 我感觉从这里就变成滑条如何。。
00:13:334 (4) - 没音三连也不是这么死加的啊。。
00:15:425 (8,1) - 8 删了 1 提前

00:18:152 (7) - 把重音放在滑条尾巴上真的好吗我不知道我是新人但是我不喜欢这样

00:57:061 (1) - nc
00:57:243 (2) - nc
00:57:788 (1) - nc

01:00:879 (1) - 这中间漏了个音

01:01:969 (3,4,1) - #3
后面和前面基本差不多
01:10:516 (7,1) - ↑、、

00:43:061 (1) - ctrl+G 意义不大

[fanzhen]
~~姥爷级别~~
00:47:425 (11) - 换个位置如何我这个弱鸡是读错了
01:22:334 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - nc的问题

[insane]
00:06:879 (1) - 这个由你是贴还是保持连打的间距
00:11:061 (7) - nc/?
00:11:607 (1) - nc
00:12:516 (6) - 这个是重音 nc否
00:12:697 (1) - 如果前面nc的话
00:17:425 (3) - 漏了个音红线上而且感觉这里变速有点突兀可能是我的错觉
00:27:970 (5,6,7,1) - 试试平行？
00:59:607 (2) - ctrl+G

Easy

00:35:971 (1,2) - 感觉节奏和歌词配起来不太好
aimod的那个堆叠判定值我没看懂

normal
神马破

hard
00:11:061 (6) - nc
01:12:152 (4) - nc
00:23:061 (5) - 可以换成一个长条的毕竟中间没音（应该没听错）
00:37:243 (5) - nc
00:40:152 (6) - nc
00:43:061 (7) - nc

01:25:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 推荐改一下太梗了

起飞了老司机要开船了

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-08-23T12:17:43+00:00

- Angelia wrote:
[Pata-Mon's New Game]

00:00:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - 换成dan dan那首的开头如何我见识比较少不是很懂dandandan
00:08:152 (1) - ctrl+G 不因为ds
00:12:516 (3) - 我感觉从这里就变成滑条如何。。我主跟鼓
00:13:334 (4) - 没音三连也不是这么死加的啊。。非常明显的音
00:15:425 (8,1) - 8 删了 1 提前鼓点

00:18:152 (7) - 把重音放在滑条尾巴上真的好吗我不知道我是新人但是我不喜欢这样有鼓点重音有人声重音，不可能两种重音全都clickable

00:57:061 (1) - nc 这几个都没道理
00:57:243 (2) - nc
00:57:788 (1) - nc

01:00:879 (1) - 这中间漏了个音没必要跟。三连的音你又不想让我加，这里漏一个尾巴音

01:01:969 (3,4,1) - #3
后面和前面基本差不多 ^
01:10:516 (7,1) - ↑、、

00:43:061 (1) - ctrl+G 意义不大没看懂

你删掉的那句我是看到的，所以还是就事论事说几句
在自己作图可能还不太熟悉的时候，还是不要随意对别人的图发出那种评论。当然，普通地说出你觉得有问题的地方当然是可以的。
看一下别人回的摸，哪里改了哪里没改为什么没改，对自己作图也是提升。
节奏你需要更仔细听一下原曲，不能凭感觉。我放的连打全是歌里有的，你不喜欢；然后只听到vocal听不到鼓点让我改重音位置……反正以后自己作图也是，放慢50%去听，不要只听到一个轨
摸图记住一点：从麻婆的角度出发思考问题，不要太主观，提一条之前也问问自己为什么，而不是“我感觉应该是那样”

Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Binguo 2016-08-24T02:58:32+00:00

震爷改的摸

我自己的晚上在解决

晚点上传跑路吐槽禁止

Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Binguo 2016-08-24T13:44:40+00:00

__Ag wrote:
[insane]
00:13:061 (2,4) - 分开一点，粘在一起了改

00:21:425 (1,2,3,1) - DS有点不懂我纸张了改了

00:24:334 (1,4) - 粘在一起了改

00:30:061 - 可以加一个note 不是很懂还是不加了

00:37:970 (3,4) - 节奏不好，试试三连+一滑条改

其他也找不出什么了，都已经这么多摸了，快飞

谢谢琪老板

Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Binguo 2016-08-24T13:50:22+00:00

- Angelia wrote:
[insane]
00:06:879 (1) - 这个由你是贴还是保持连打的间距？
00:11:061 (7) - nc/?
00:11:607 (1) - nc 前面用了后面？
00:12:516 (6) - 这个是重音 nc否 ?
00:12:697 (1) - 如果前面nc的话 ?
00:17:425 (3) - 漏了个音红线上而且感觉这里变速有点突兀可能是我的错觉还好吧打起来手感不错
00:27:970 (5,6,7,1) - 试试平行？这个平行没有意义
00:59:607 (2) - ctrl+G fix

Easy

00:35:971 (1,2) - 感觉节奏和歌词配起来不太好我是低难度尽量不跟人声的那种
aimod的那个堆叠判定值我没看懂这个怎么改来着

起飞了老司机要开船了

谢谢你

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-08-24T14:26:35+00:00

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Kobayakawa Sae

131 posts

Joined December 2013

Kobayakawa Sae 2016-08-24T14:43:19+00:00

- Angelia wrote:
hard
00:11:061 (6) - nc √
01:12:152 (4) - nc √
00:23:061 (5) - 可以换成一个长条的毕竟中间没音（应该没听错）这个感觉可以没多大问题可以保留
00:37:243 (5) - nc √
00:40:152 (6) - nc √
00:43:061 (7) - nc √

01:25:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 推荐改一下太梗了这个感觉还好先放着吧

多谢你啦

8/24 22:50

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sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-09-01T07:36:35+00:00

[General]

http://puu.sh/qVSLI/82c5a0a71e.png
http://puu.sh/qVSME/d089bab2c2.png
??

[Easy]

Timing里resnap all notes一下，一堆很小的unsnap编辑器没报错但是assistance有写，虽然没事不过还是做一下
你到底sc1还是37...insane是全部1然而这边先1后37，keep consistency.
01:13:697 - 01:13:788 - 开关kiai没设置，喷泉每个diff统一一下。
00:11:971 (4,1) - ？
00:20:698 (3,1) - 弄一样的滑条，一个红点一个圆弧不好看
00:42:153 (2) - blanket

[Normal]

00:06:879 - 删了绿线
00:08:152 (3) - ctrl+H,不然flow有点怪
01:09:243 (3,4) - ...4的位置有点勉强
稳

[Hard]

00:57:788 - 01:02:425 - 01:19:879 - 绿线删了
01:23:606 (5,1) - 01:11:424 (2,3) - 不一致啊，建议01:11:606 (3) - 滑条g一下，现在这样太难
01:25:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边01:26:152 (5,6,7,8) - 音低一点，现在这个01:25:970 (4,5) - 有点莫名其妙。可以考虑其他摆法，比如两个同心正方形，后一个是前一个旋转缩小图形什么的。然后4这里也NC一下。
好强啊，很稳的hard

[Insane]

00:05:607 (1,1) - 没必要NC，sv又没变..
00:11:970 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太难了。。00:12:152 (5,6) - 这个间距没法打啊，然后00:12:516 (8,1) - 这个重叠也很不好看，我建议这边重新摆下
00:18:516 - 这边的1.0完全没必要
00:39:061 (2,3) - ctrl+G?感觉00:39:243 (3,4) - 略突然
00:52:334 (1) - 去nc
00:53:243 (4,1) - 这俩叠一下，3个圈叠一起不好
00:54:879 (1,2) - 变成两个滑条，00:55:243 - should be emphasised.
00:57:061 (3,1) - 这种overlap..太乱了
01:07:970 - 也是1.0没啥用
01:19:607 (3,4,5) - 01:20:334 (6,7,1) - flow太直
01:23:788 (8,1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/qVZ7u/890e7df2f9.jpg
这个diff的overlap太凌乱了，按照hw说的要不分开要不stack好，过多的重叠看着就乱，何况你叠的面积还不都一样。
00:01:425 (2,4) - 00:22:152 (1,3) - 00:22:697 (3,3) - 00:51:152 (3,5,1) - 00:55:970 (4,2) - 00:57:061 (3,1) -

[fanzhen]

00:39:061 (2,4,5,6) - stack?
无敌

[NG]

加个喷泉更适合，参考其他diff
01:19:607 (1,3,4,5) - 视觉遮挡有点严重，三连换个位置吧

Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Binguo 2016-09-01T11:51:53+00:00

sahuang wrote:
[General]
http://puu.sh/qVSLI/82c5a0a71e.png
http://puu.sh/qVSME/d089bab2c2.png
??

[Easy]
Timing里resnap all notes一下，一堆很小的unsnap编辑器没报错但是assistance有写，虽然没事不过还是做一下
你到底sc1还是37...insane是全部1然而这边先1后37，keep consistency.
01:13:697 - 01:13:788 - 开关kiai没设置，喷泉每个diff统一一下。
00:11:971 (4,1) - ？
00:20:698 (3,1) - 弄一样的滑条，一个红点一个圆弧不好看
00:42:153 (2) - blanket FIX

[Insane]
00:05:607 (1,1) - 没必要NC，sv又没变.. 这个连起来会难看
00:11:970 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太难了。。00:12:152 (5,6) - 这个间距没法打啊，然后00:12:516 (8,1) - 这个重叠也很不好看，我建议这边重新摆下这个难度这样做的确太难我会改的
00:18:516 - 这边的1.0完全没必要 fix
00:39:061 (2,3) - ctrl+G?感觉00:39:243 (3,4) - 略突然
00:52:334 (1) - 去nc fix
00:53:243 (4,1) - 这俩叠一下，3个圈叠一起不好
00:54:879 (1,2) - 变成两个滑条，00:55:243 - should be emphasised. 我改成1滑条两单点
00:57:061 (3,1) - 这种overlap..太乱了
01:07:970 - 也是1.0没啥用 fix
01:19:607 (3,4,5) - 01:20:334 (6,7,1) - flow太直 fix
01:23:788 (8,1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/qVZ7u/890e7df2f9.jpg
这个diff的overlap太凌乱了，按照hw说的要不分开要不stack好，过多的重叠看着就乱，何况你叠的面积还不都一样。
00:01:425 (2,4) - 00:22:152 (1,3) - 00:22:697 (3,3) - 00:51:152 (3,5,1) - 00:55:970 (4,2) - 00:57:061 (3,1) - 会注意的

Last edited by Binguo 2016-09-01T15:05:15+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-09-01T11:59:10+00:00

@sahuang
虽然这图比较送，但适当的读图梗我觉得也是有趣的。而且kiai段基本都是这个节奏，每小节第三排前的三连，这么一直打下来到这里应该是很简单的
~~喷泉ok，@冰菓帮我加一下吧~~~
自己改了还另改了一个几像素的直线问题

Doormat

2,049 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2016-09-01T16:09:07+00:00

hi hi, dropping by about some tags since i noticed you basically copy/pasted mine lol

the name for aoba's cv is actually takada yuuki, not takeda yuuki; this was a typo i didnt realize i made until after the map got ranked =w=
the official Romanisation for "iijima" and "hajime" was changed to "iizima" and "hazime" so consider changing this

good luck with the set~

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-09-01T16:11:32+00:00

Last edited by Pata-Mon 2017-09-02T03:34:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Binguo 2016-09-01T16:18:56+00:00

Doormat wrote:
hi hi, dropping by about some tags since i noticed you basically copy/pasted mine lol

the name for aoba's cv is actually takada yuuki, not takeda yuuki; this was a typo i didnt realize i made until after the map got ranked =w=
the official Romanisation for "iijima" and "hajime" was changed to "iizima" and "hazime" so consider changing this
good luck with the set~

Thank you very much! thanks a lot! I will be embarrassed

Kobayakawa Sae

131 posts

Joined December 2013

Kobayakawa Sae 2016-09-02T05:01:34+00:00

sahuang wrote:
[Hard]
00:57:788 - 01:02:425 - 01:19:879 - 绿线删了删了√
01:23:606 (5,1) - 01:11:424 (2,3) - 不一致啊，建议01:11:606 (3) - 滑条g一下，现在这样太难 fix
01:25:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边01:26:152 (5,6,7,8) - 音低一点，现在这个01:25:970 (4,5) - 有点莫名其妙。可以考虑其他摆法，比如两个同心正方形，后一个是前一个旋转缩小图形什么的。然后4这里也NC一下。 fix
好强啊，很稳的hard

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nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

nika mika 2016-09-02T11:25:23+00:00

混水摸鱼不对我就是咸鱼不能摸自己
[Insane]

00:12:516 (9,1) - 参考00:13:970 (1,2) - 下节奏
00:19:152 - 在2上加个圈
00:43:061 (8) - 改成一个00:43:425 (1) - 处的圈
01:01:970 (8) - 拉一个1/4滑条
01:13:607 (7) - ^
01:17:970 (1,3,4) - 分别ctrl+g，然后把转过的4原地顺时针转个10多度
美丽

aoba好萌啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
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Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-09-02T14:24:47+00:00

你现在的insane我觉得是这样，总体上有一种违和感，就是哪里用什么梗，哪里用什么ds，感觉略微缺乏逻辑，有种随手感，类似的地方也不够有统一性。像像震爷他们那样随手用几把梗表现出音乐可能是非常难的，不过我觉得现阶段你可以试着工整一些地作图，blank、stack、正多边形运用得再熟练些，或是flow上下功夫。之前给过你我的一些图，主要是前三点比较好，加上flow的话，啃球最近这个图就非常漂亮https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1023307，除了前三点无懈可击以外，flow也非常顺，基本上每小段分别是顺时针或逆时针，打得非常顺手。你的图梗略混乱，flow也不够好，这样总体就给人一种违和感。其实如果说没啥梗但就是flow好，也是挺舒服的。总之朝这些方面试试？

ps 00:16:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个我觉得是你图里摆得最漂亮的一个地方，梗合曲，排列美观，flow顺

[Insane]

00:12:516 (9) - 这个可以改成一个短滑条，一方面鼓全都跟到，另一方面滑条其实更符合vocal
01:01:970 (8) - 01:13:607 (7) - ^
00:25:607 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 典型的flow差……主要是这里的flow差我也没感觉是表达了音乐，就是单纯的卡手。我觉得这图主要就是类似问题比较多吧，后面也有不少，你可以自己看看哪里flow很卡但又没有特别地表达曲子
00:27:970 (5,6,7) - 这个可能属于梗缺乏总体性，整张图好像没看到其他地方有用到这种，特别是音乐类似的地方
00:52:334 (2) - 把滑条尾拆成note
00:59:061 (8,1) - 感觉应该放远

不过其实总体来说我觉得也还可以了，rank标准应该是完全能够达到的。~~你cp比较求稳~~

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2016-09-03T03:58:20+00:00

[Insane]

00:14:697 (4) - 這個應該是疊崩了，關掉堆疊效果就看見了

00:18:879 (1) - 01:08:334 (1) - 不用連續NC

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你的圖斜線很多，然後填空的部分又很少，所以看上去會感覺亂 …… 還有就是相對距離比如00:51:788 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/qY6df/067599cedf.jpg

實際上最麻煩的是斜線，佔地面積大而且破壞空白空間……所以相當一部分人為了工整就基本是橫平豎直小弧度滑條附帶±5° 了（比如樓上非常漂亮的那個圖）

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00:00:879 (3,4,1) - 00:57:788 (1,2) - 這些單獨出現的都很搓，相同的地方出現近似的排列就會給人既視感也就是所謂的邏輯……雖然短圖很難做到這一點。

另一個相反的單獨出現，往極限說就像全程DS的圖結尾有一個跳梗，那麼這個跳梗就很引人注目

區別就是什麼地方應該被強調。很明顯00:57:788 (1,2) - 和附近的1/4沒有區別，不應該被特殊對待，00:00:879 (3,4,1) - 見面就移動三連附近卻用折返代替連打也與理不通。所以它們應該作為那個結尾跳梗的基石，默默無聞的用毫無亮點的排列。比如其他地方也用短滑組，或者去掉這個00:57:788 (1,2) - 短滑組，增加移動三連或者把00:00:879 (3,4,1) - 疊起來。這隻是兩個小地方所以影響不大，隨著自帶的限制越來越多，風格就會越來越明顯，也可以說排列越來越單調……比如全程直滑條就是相當鮮明的特色

01:06:879 (3,4,5) - 01:18:516 (3,4,5) - 然後符合邏輯的地方，本身排列比較挫……一方面和平時沒什麼區別，另外同上就是斜線和相對距離浮動，你可以試試換成和平時差別更大的排列，而且出現兩次就會有既視感，例子https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6003344

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至少比zzb 做的好多了，絕對可以rank。而且總不能remap 並沒有什麼卵用

Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Topic Starter

Binguo 2016-09-03T14:59:09+00:00

nika mika

nika mika wrote:
混水摸鱼不对我就是咸鱼不能摸自己
[Insane]
00:12:516 (9,1) - 参考00:13:970 (1,2) - 下节奏后面的00:13:970 (1,2) - 人声是落到蓝线上的所以节奏才会有区别
00:19:152 - 在2上加个圈改漏的节奏还是要漏的
00:43:061 (8) - 改成一个00:43:425 (1) - 处的圈这个就没必要了可以就这样好
01:01:970 (8) - 拉一个1/4滑条
01:13:607 (7) - ^ 我试试看吧
01:17:970 (1,3,4) - 分别ctrl+g，然后把转过的4原地顺时针转个10多度可以这很梗FIX
美丽
aoba好萌啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
祝你rank 嘻嘻

帕她萌

Pata-Mon wrote:
你现在的insane我觉得是这样，总体上有一种违和感，就是哪里用什么梗，哪里用什么ds，感觉略微缺乏逻辑，有种随手感，类似的地方也不够有统一性。像像震爷他们那样随手用几把梗表现出音乐可能是非常难的，不过我觉得现阶段你可以试着工整一些地作图，blank、stack、正多边形运用得再熟练些，或是flow上下功夫。之前给过你我的一些图，主要是前三点比较好，加上flow的话，啃球最近这个图就非常漂亮https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1023307，除了前三点无懈可击以外，flow也非常顺，基本上每小段分别是顺时针或逆时针，打得非常顺手。你的图梗略混乱，flow也不够好，这样总体就给人一种违和感。其实如果说没啥梗但就是flow好，也是挺舒服的。总之朝这些方面试试？谢谢怕他梦指点

ps 00:16:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个我觉得是你图里摆得最漂亮的一个地方，梗合曲，排列美观，flow顺

[Insane]
00:12:516 (9) - 这个可以改成一个短滑条，一方面鼓全都跟到，另一方面滑条其实更符合vocal 我试试看吧
01:01:970 (8) - 01:13:607 (7) - ^
00:25:607 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 典型的flow差……主要是这里的flow差我也没感觉是表达了音乐，就是单纯的卡手。我觉得这图主要就是类似问题比较多吧，后面也有不少，你可以自己看看哪里flow很卡但又没有特别地表达曲子可以我试着排一下
00:27:970 (5,6,7) - 这个可能属于梗缺乏总体性，整张图好像没看到其他地方有用到这种，特别是音乐类似的地方以拆
00:52:334 (2) - 把滑条尾拆成note 真的好吗...我先试试不好改回
00:59:061 (8,1) - 感觉应该放远感觉后面1234是过度段没必要放远吧
不过其实总体来说我觉得也还可以了，rank标准应该是完全能够达到的。~~你cp比较求稳~~

水仙

Narcissu wrote:
[Insane]

00:14:697 (4) - 這個應該是疊崩了，關掉堆疊效果就看見了 fix

00:18:879 (1) - 01:08:334 (1) - 不用連續NC fix

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你的圖斜線很多，然後填空的部分又很少，所以看上去會感覺亂 …… 還有就是相對距離比如00:51:788 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/qY6df/067599cedf.jpg

實際上最麻煩的是斜線，佔地面積大而且破壞空白空間……所以相當一部分人為了工整就基本是橫平豎直小弧度滑條附帶±5° 了（比如樓上非常漂亮的那個圖）可以谢谢指导今后会注意本人并不喜欢做横直竖平[/color]

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00:00:879 (3,4,1) - 00:57:788 (1,2) - 這些單獨出現的都很搓，相同的地方出現近似的排列就會給人既視感也就是所謂的邏輯……雖然短圖很難做到這一點。第一个的话稍微修了一下第二个看了后面的也修了

另一個相反的單獨出現，往極限說就像全程DS的圖結尾有一個跳梗，那麼這個跳梗就很引人注目

區別就是什麼地方應該被強調。很明顯00:57:788 (1,2) - 和附近的1/4沒有區別，不應該被特殊對待，00:00:879 (3,4,1) - 見面就移動三連附近卻用折返代替連打也與理不通。所以它們應該作為那個結尾跳梗的基石，默默無聞的用毫無亮點的排列。比如其他地方也用短滑組，或者去掉這個00:57:788 (1,2) - 短滑組，增加移動三連或者把00:00:879 (3,4,1) - 疊起來。這隻是兩個小地方所以影響不大，隨著自帶的限制越來越多，風格就會越來越明顯，也可以說排列越來越單調……比如全程直滑條就是相當鮮明的特色

01:06:879 (3,4,5) - 01:18:516 (3,4,5) - 然後符合邏輯的地方，本身排列比較挫……一方面和平時沒什麼區別，另外同上就是斜線和相對距離浮動，你可以試試換成和平時差別更大的排列，而且出現兩次就會有既視感，例子https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6003344 我有仔细看虽然对现在的图帮助不大不过我之后作图应该会有所改变的谢谢水仙

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至少比zzb 做的好多了，絕對可以rank。而且總不能remap 並沒有什麼卵用 @zzb

谢谢你们

sahuang

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sahuang 2016-09-04T04:04:51+00:00

Lam's Hard tag conflict..
Insane
00:14:697 (4,5,6) - stack
00:22:152 (1) - 去掉NC，顺便00:22:697 (3,1) - 换下NC
00:28:516 (1,2,3) - 这个间距，ds4。。加上钝角，太卡手了。。00:28:152 (6,1) - 这也不好看，这边建议改下。00:32:879 (1,2,3) - 这种flow就好得多
00:37:970 (2,3,4) - stack
01:08:334 (1) - cancel NC
01:11:607 (1,3,1) - 和前面说的一样的NC问题
01:23:788 (8,1) - 换NC

Binguo

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Binguo 2016-09-04T14:24:26+00:00

sahuang wrote:
Lam's Hard tag conflict..
Insane
00:14:697 (4,5,6) - stack
00:22:152 (1) - 去掉NC，顺便00:22:697 (3,1) - 换下NC
00:28:516 (1,2,3) - 这个间距，ds4。。加上钝角，太卡手了。。00:28:152 (6,1) - 这也不好看，这边建议改下。00:32:879 (1,2,3) - 这种flow就好得多
00:37:970 (2,3,4) - stack
01:08:334 (1) - cancel NC
01:11:607 (1,3,1) - 和前面说的一样的NC问题
01:23:788 (8,1) - 换NC
FIX

sahuang

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Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-09-05T11:45:03+00:00

下个bn来的时候改下insane 00:04:607 (3,4) - 叠好
其他没什么，先泡了

Pata-Mon

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Pata-Mon 2016-09-05T11:46:36+00:00

sahuang wrote:
下个bn来的时候改下insane 00:04:607 (3,4) - 叠好
其他没什么，先泡了

可

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-09-05T22:18:48+00:00

Lam's Hard

not really an issue but it will look better

Kobayakawa Sae

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Kobayakawa Sae 2016-09-06T04:45:43+00:00

sahuang wrote:
下个bn来的时候改下insane 00:04:607 (3,4) - 叠好
其他没什么，先泡了

强

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2016-09-07T07:11:16+00:00

じ……

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

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Mafumafu 2016-09-08T07:03:45+00:00

m4m

[General]
Would you like to post your metadata source in the creator's words? So that we could prevent potential issues.

[Easy]
00:03:970 (1) - Do you have a specific reason for such a sharp shape? If not, better use smooth curve instead.
00:05:607 (3,4,5) - It looks poor to put 3 4 and 5 in a straight line, forcing players make a 90 degree turn with cursor. This plays much better. https://puu.sh/r3QOL/fafdceedce.png
00:06:334 (5,1,2) - This pattern looks meh for 5 and 2 are neither paralleled not symmetric.
00:09:243 (4) - Rhythm needs a change here. You put cymbal sound onto slider-end and moreover the sound on the slider-head is much weaker. Try this instead: https://puu.sh/r3QXS/2c6a97af62.png
00:20:697 (3,1) - Need to be blanketed.
00:26:516 (3,1) - Poor flow.
00:30:152 (1,2) - Blanket or re-arrange the position of 2.
00:53:425 (1,3) - Blanket
00:55:607 (4) - Do you have a specific reason for such a sharp shape? If not, better use smooth curve instead.
00:55:607 (4,1) - Blanket
00:59:243 (1,2,3,4,5) - Follow vocal here.
01:07:970 (1,2) - Poor flow. 1 should be Ctrl+J'ed
01:15:970 (3,1,2) - Poor flow.
01:25:425 (1,2) - Need to be paralleled.

[Narcissu's Normal]
00:21:788 (2) - Ctrl+H for better flow.

[Lam's Hard]
00:03:970 (1) - Poor shape. It even breaks the flow from 1 to 2.
00:05:970 (4) - Copy shape from 3.
00:18:516 (1) - Do you have a specific reason for such a sharp shape? If not, better use smooth curve instead.
00:32:697 (4,1,2) - Blanket
01:13:061 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Such rhythm is too difficult for Hard.
01:24:697 (3,4,5,6,7) - five note stream is too difficult for Hard.

[Insane]
00:06:879 (1,2) - Poor flow
00:12:334 (7,8) - Slider
00:17:425 (3,4,5) - The spacing you applied to 3/4 sliders are too large.
00:18:516 (1,2) - Poor flow.
00:20:152 (2,3) - Poor flow.
00:22:697 (1,2) - Such stack pattern is not recommended here. It makes no sense and could cause confusions.
00:35:243 (3,4,5) - Poor flow for 1/4.
00:48:152 (2,3) - 00:51:061 (2,3) - Triplet works better here.
00:52:334 (2,3) - Poor flow.
00:53:243 (5,1) - Obviously there should be a jump
01:00:334 (4,1) - make them further from each other
01:01:788 (6,7) - Slider
01:06:879 (3,4,5) - too large spacing for 1/4
01:09:243 (1,2) - Should be like this: https://puu.sh/r3RJb/7df46a03e4.png
01:12:152 (1,2) - 01:23:788 (1,2) - you may choose to stack on 1's tail, not head.
01:13:425 (6,7) - Slider
01:17:970 (1,2) - Too far for 1/4, it looks like 1/2
01:18:516 (3,4,5) - too large spacing for 1/4

[fanzhen's Insane]
HP7？ It is not reasonable to be 1.7 higher than the top diff.
00:16:879 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm plays somewhat weird.
01:10:697 (1) - It plays weird since cymbal sounds are applied onto slider-end.

[Pata-Mon's New Game]
01:25:425 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Should be decreased as to spacing. It's imbalancedly larger than any other part of this map.

You could call me back if you fix those issue above!

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