Oh yeah I'm late sorry for that, kill me.
[General]
Good luck~
[General]
- Video offset is inconsistent in Yahuri's Novel.
- Recheck AiMod pls your metadata conflicts in Easy.
- A combo colour in Easy are inconsistent with other diffs so yeah try rechecking that again, the purple one with 102,102,255.
- 00:16:596 (1,1) - The recovery is not really sufficient for Easy, would be sufficient if the spinner ended at 00:18:078 but it's kinda lame spot to put a spinner there so yeah might as well use a long slider instead.
- 00:27:592 (3,1) - DS
- 01:07:470 (2,3) - 01:30:885 (2,3) - Probably a no-go lol, using this kind of rhythm in Easy is already edgy to begin with, plus the intensity on these places isn't really different from the rest of kiai so using denser rhythms doesn't really fit here.
- 00:38:568 (3,4) - 01:24:665 (2,3) - DS on these places can be polished a bit.
- 01:11:861 (5,1) - The stack looks pretty random tho, I mean you barely did this anywhere else so better unstack it (unless you have a reason behind this ofc).
- 01:42:044 (2,3) - Using the same rhythm as Hard plays much better imo cuz you wanna prioritize 01:42:592 than 01:42:958 since the sound is clearly stronger and there's nothing on 01:42:958 so that one shouldn't be even clickable lol
- 00:27:592 (6,1) - 01:09:665 (7,1) - 01:18:629 (2,3) - 01:43:690 (5,6,7) - Recheck your spacings pls
- Actually around this part 00:42:226 your DS kinda swings between 1.4-1.5 I don't know which one you're going for but try polish them a bit more.
- 00:44:056 - Add whistle.
- 00:52:653 - You mapped this in Normal but not in Hard? There's a drum roll here so rhythm should be denser than just a 1/2 slider anyways.
- 01:01:068 (2,3) - 01:18:629 (2,3) - Overlaps which you didn't do anywhere else so it kinda breaks consistency from what you're usually do.
- The main idea of this is like, if you usually don't do overlaps and then you suddenly do it, then you should have reasonings for doing an overlap, "Does this overlap express anything from the song?", "Are these overlaps making some parts on my map stand out for no reason?", something along that line and this doesn't apply only to overlaps but also whatever you do when you're mapping as well.
- 01:04:726 (4,5) - Should be mapped differently, a pattern like this only works well if they're mapped on the same thing, clearly there's another sound occured at 01:05:092 (5) so 2 circles instead of this could do the job. If you apply this then you could use the same rhythm at 01:28:141 (5,6) for consistency.
- 01:12:226 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't compliment the rhythm very well imo, there's nothing at 01:13:141 - 01:12:958 and you let a strong sound ended on a slider end which could've been better, something like this could work. If you apply this then the same thing goes to 01:13:690 (1,2,3,4) as well.
- 01:19:361 (4,5) - A random 1/4 stack out of nowhere which is pretty much the same thing as overlap thingy I mentioned earlier.
- 01:21:556 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Idk what you're trying to follow here but it's kinda like you're pushing it cuz the rhythm is suddenly denser despite having the same intensity as other parts in kiai, I was expecting a 1/2 slider instead of 01:21:739 (3,4) .
- 01:41:495 (1,2,3) - Could easily create a pattern or sth since they're musically related, feels kinda wasted with the way you mapped them currently as these sliders aren’t visually related in any way whatsoever.
Good luck~