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PotatoJA
hi from #modreq

Small Mod
[Hard]
01:15:153 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - make as one combo

[Yahuri's Novel]
01:01:617 (4) - this placement feels weird imo, maybe a little higher? stack it with 01:00:885 (2)'s start point
GL :v
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

PotatoJA wrote:

hi from #modreq

[Hard]
01:15:153 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - make as one combo done

GL :v
lol thanks for the short mod =w=
Yahuri

PotatoJA wrote:

hi from #modreq

Small Mod
[Yahuri's Novel]
01:01:617 (4) - this placement feels weird imo, maybe a little higher? stack it with 01:00:885 (2)'s start point the DS matches what i normally use (1.6x) while the proposed change will make it ~2.0x. anyways this pattern matches what i have here 01:23:934 (1,2,3) - as well.
GL :v
no changes, but thanks for taking a look C:
Lumario
Hey here for my part of M4M :3

General, some things of my mod are based on this: t/517731 which could be helpful to know, just so you know :P

Easy:
01:19:544 (3) - Why is there this one whistle in the whole kiai?
01:43:690 (1) - maybe NC here instead of the last note
The first timing point is at -1167 (lol) not sure if that's ok for ranked that's probably also why the offset isn't correct till 19544
the whistle in this part 00:19:544 (1) - up to here 00:48:080 (3) - is too loud imo
01:08:568 (4) - Just a small general thing (I use this specific slider as an example it can be used on others too tho) you can map strong vocals like this http://puu.sh/tgAwf/24f3d140d4.jpg try to get the timing by going directly on to the strong vocal and then form the slider around the "slider circle"
You should also change the HP and OD to 3

Normal:
Didn't notice anything except the weird timing point and hitsounding I won't write this and the slider suggestion I wrote in Easy for every Diff but I think they apply for everyone.

Hard:
01:43:690 (5,6,7) - reverse slider maybe

Novel:
Looks fine :3

Well GL with ranking your map I hope this mod helped you even if it isn't the biggest :S
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

Lumario wrote:

Hey here for my part of M4M :3

General, some things of my mod are based on this: t/517731 which could be helpful to know, just so you know :P

Easy:
01:19:544 (3) - Why is there this one whistle in the whole kiai? umm I'm very sure it isn't..? I use them throughout the entire song
01:43:690 (1) - maybe NC here instead of the last note nah, I'll stick to the nc pattern I have used so far
The first timing point is at -1167 (lol) not sure if that's ok for ranked that's probably also why the offset isn't correct till 19544
the whistle in this part 00:19:544 (1) - up to here 00:48:080 (3) - is too loud imo too loud even though its the same with the rest of the maps? won't plan to change but I'll keep that in mind. not sure how this ties to the first offset tho
01:08:568 (4) - Just a small general thing (I use this specific slider as an example it can be used on others too tho) you can map strong vocals like this http://puu.sh/tgAwf/24f3d140d4.jpg try to get the timing by going directly on to the strong vocal and then form the slider around the "slider circle" done
You should also change the HP and OD to 3 sure thing for OD but I won't be changing the drain rate unless stated necessary

Normal:
Didn't notice anything except the weird timing point and hitsounding I won't write this and the slider suggestion I wrote in Easy for every Diff but I think they apply for everyone.
Ill check on the offset again; hitsounding in Easy and Normal is a bit tough tbh I'll have to figure this out again I guess; Slider suggestion will be kept in mind (unless I miss anything) :)

Hard:
01:43:690 (5,6,7) - reverse slider maybe nah I like it this way

Novel:
Looks fine :3 乁( ˙ ω˙乁)

Well GL with ranking your map I hope this mod helped you even if it isn't the biggest :S
thanks for the mod!~
Yahuri
ok the map is coming along nicely so i guess its time to drop my mod :)

General
-on your diffs sometimes you have the sliderwhistle (which i dont think you want?) such as this (from Hard) 00:34:178 (3) - so get rid of those by highlighting ONLY the slider body and then removing whistle (you dont want to accidentally get rid of whistle on the head/tail)
-many blankets can be polished a bit more (use 1/8 snap for approach circles) ill point out the most noticeable ones in the diffs
00:15:129 (1) - i dont think you need an NC here

Easy
-im not sure if SV changes are rankable in Easy. anyways the change is really noticeable here 01:15:153 (1,2,3,4) and here 01:35:641
blankets
00:19:544 (1,2) -
00:21:739 (3,1) -
01:37:104 (1,3) -
00:01:795 - 00:13:277 rhythms are not consistent in accordance to the repeating guitar rhythm
00:13:647 (1,2,1,2) - how about making something more like this? https://puu.sh/thHxo/5f4fdc5c51.png
00:26:861 (2) - i think you should end this slider here 00:27:226 - because the 1/4 spacing really sticks out. (on the other hand, 00:42:226 (3,1) - is okay because its a transition into a slightly more intense section)
00:51:739 (1,2) - flow doesnt look too great, how about rotating 1 by -90 degrees?
01:37:104 (1,2,3) - fix DS

Normal
blankets
00:03:647 (3,1,2) -
00:22:470 (1,2) -
00:30:885 (6,1) -
00:45:885 (1,2) - ?
00:58:324 (2,3) -
01:15:885 (2,3) -
01:31:983 (4,5) -
01:42:044 (2,3) -
00:05:870 (2,3,4) - dont really like flow here, it would be better if ctrl+g (3,4)
00:08:833 (2,3,4,1) - how about making 2 a blanket slider for 1? (tail of 2,3,4,1) should make a parallelogram/square
00:13:647 (1) - could make this slider perfectly symmetrical (rotate to line up with the grid -> make adjustments to anchors -> rotate back)
00:29:056 (2) - remove clap
00:50:275 (1,2) - flow kinda awkward because 2 is in the opposite direction of 1
00:51:739 - remove whistle add clap
00:52:104 - add clap
00:52:653 - remove whistle add drum-finish?
00:52:836 - ^
01:43:873 - ^
01:44:056 - ^
00:59:787 (3) - note here 00:59:970 - isnt loud enough for a repeat slider imo
01:23:202 (3) - 01:23:385 - ^
01:10:580 - add clap
01:25:580 - add whistle
01:31:617 - ^
01:30:885 (2) - remove whistle on head, add whistle on tail
01:33:812 (1) - 01:35:641 (3) - sliders have really weird shapes in comparison to the other sliders, why?
01:34:544 - remove clap add whistle
01:35:092 - remove whistle add clap
01:44:422 (1) - add whistle?

Hard
00:05:869 (2,1) - fix stack
00:10:314 (3,1) - why stack here?
blankets
00:19:544 (1,2,3) - pattern looks weird because 2-3 blankets, could rotate 2 clockwise (to avoid 1-3 overlap) then fix the blankets
00:56:495 (5,6) -
00:57:592 (1,3) -
00:59:056 (5,6) -
01:00:153 (7,1) -
01:17:897 (6,1) -
01:24:665 (3,4) -
00:28:324 (3,4) - could make double blanket (3 around the head of 4)
01:12:044 (7) - remove clap
01:13:507 (4) - ^
01:14:970 (4) - ^
01:16:617 (3,4) - having the slider angles different look weird imo, make them horizontally symmetrical
01:33:812 (1) - same thing as Normal, why is the slider shape so weird in comparison to the other sliders?
01:43:324 (4,5,6,7) - this isnt a straight line, either make it straight or make the angle change more noticeable from 4-5


ok i probably didnt catch everything, let me know if you want me to recheck specific aspects like hitsounding or something :P
Good luck!
iHatePeople
Hello, my Mod from iHateModding

I don't mod this yet? LOL, I make the mod in notepad and I forget to post, but I remember the problem in this map.
I love the song, I find issues to ranking this, but I will give 1 KDS because I want to see this ranked

[Easy]

Ranking Criteria Issues

It's very important then you use only 1/1 sections in Easy Difficult, but in this timing you can use 1/2 section, but 1/4 - NEVER (Only in Slide Return)

01:07:470 - Start slide here and end here 01:08:202
00:42:226 (3) - End slide in red point
00:26:861 (2) - End this slide in red point or make this slide at 00:27:958
00:53:934 (4) - This i think that not have problem, but is better you make a circle here
01:30:885 - Start slide here and end this here 01:31:617
00:16:610 (1,1) - Unrankable this 00:19:544 (1) - have to start 4 stacks after the spinner, you can stop the spinner here 00:18:092 (acceptable) or here 00:18:462 (it's more correct, but can be unrankable)

Compose

00:05:870 (2) - Open more this slide to blanket this correctly
00:19:544 (1,1) - Open more this 2 sliders to blanket correctly
01:44:604 (1) - start this spinner here 01:44:787

[Normal]

Ranking Criteria Issues

I do not have sure about this, but I think this thing unrankable:
You used a stack in 1/4 here 00:53:934 (5,6) (There is no problem in that)
But after you used a stack in 1/2 here 01:11:861 (5,1) - The problem is: The Newbie player can beat the second stack like the 1/4 rhythm.
Because in first action you adapt the player to beat 1/4 in a stack, then after you change this to 1/2, herr you got it?
I do not have sure, but must be more correct stack 00:53:568 (4,5), but this can be unrankable too because stack 2 different rhythms in the same time is weird to a new player, but is totally correct on Hard/Insane.
I think is better you see ranking criteria about "stacks", my English is horrible to write and read.

I do not have sure about this too, but 01:05:641 (3,4,1) - can be confusing, why? the player can beat the (3) after the (4)

[Yahuri's Novel]

Ranking Criteria

01:04:726 (5,2) - Why I always miss this circles? Offscreen. (372,348)

Difficult Issues (Basically Flow)

The problem in this map is the flow and this %$#¨%$*#¨%$*@#¨%@$ triplet here 00:52:104 (2,3,4) I have lost 1 hour to fix this flow 00:52:653 (5,6,7,1,2,1,2) - and the true problem is here 00:52:104 (2,3,4), but let's go by parts
00:48:812 (1,2) - Distance x2,00 (Minor issue: It's only to adapt player to next jumps)

00:52:653 (5,6,7,1,2) - This part is actually horrible to play. I change a lot to find a good flow:

00:52:104 (2) - First delete this slide and make a Circle here. (x2,0 Distance)
00:52:287 - Second, make a Triplet here with 3 Circles stacked (x2,5 Distance)
00:52:470 (5,6,7) - Same distance
00:52:836 (7,8,1) - Same distance (+DS)
00:53:202 (1,2) - Stack
00:53:934 (2,3) - Jump

This is my arrangement:

00:51:739 (1) - 372, 192 < Slide
00:52:104 (2) - 256, 328 < Circle
00:52:287 (3) - 136, 192 < Circle
00:52:379 (4) - 136, 192 < Circle
00:52:470 (1) - 136, 192 < Circle - NC
00:52:653 (2) - 256, 072 < Circle
00:52:836 (3) - 372, 192 < Circle
00:53:019 (4) - 256, 344 < Circle
00:53:202 (5) - 136, 192 < Circle
00:53:568 (1) - 104, 192 < Circle - NC
00:53:934 (2) - 256, 072 < Circle
00:54:117 (3) - 256, 344 < Circle

This is the better arrangement that I got.

01:34:909 (2,3,4,5) - Why this huge distance, the music have a break in this part, is not cool make this huge jump after a break, only nerf it (Box)

Compose

00:42:592 (7,8) - Ctrl + G (Why? (5) strong (6) strong (7) down (8) down - This flow is better) but I have a better flow making this: ( Is totally optional, you arrangment is good too)
01:06:373 (1) - Ctrl + J and make this:
01:43:690 (1,2,3) - 256, 132
01:44:422 (1) - 256, 044
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

Yahuri wrote:

ok the map is coming along nicely so i guess its time to drop my mod :)

General
-on your diffs sometimes you have the sliderwhistle (which i dont think you want?) such as this (from Hard) 00:34:178 (3) - so get rid of those by highlighting ONLY the slider body and then removing whistle (you dont want to accidentally get rid of whistle on the head/tail) ohh I thought that was sound error on my part oops
-many blankets can be polished a bit more (use 1/8 snap for approach circles) ill point out the most noticeable ones in the diffs
00:15:129 (1) - i dont think you need an NC here sure

Easy
-im not sure if SV changes are rankable in Easy. anyways the change is really noticeable here 01:15:153 (1,2,3,4) and here 01:35:641 I'll just change it :3
blankets
00:19:544 (1,2) - donee
00:21:739 (3,1) - ^
01:37:104 (1,3) - ^
00:01:795 - 00:13:277 rhythms are not consistent in accordance to the repeating guitar rhythm I think I know what you mean? :p anyways changed something there so I hope this one would work out better
00:13:647 (1,2,1,2) - how about making something more like this? https://puu.sh/thHxo/5f4fdc5c51.png ok
00:26:861 (2) - i think you should end this slider here 00:27:226 - because the 1/4 spacing really sticks out. (on the other hand, 00:42:226 (3,1) - is okay because its a transition into a slightly more intense section) ^
00:51:739 (1,2) - flow doesnt look too great, how about rotating 1 by -90 degrees? ^
01:37:104 (1,2,3) - fix DS whoops

Normal
blankets
00:03:647 (3,1,2) - hopefully this is better c":
00:22:470 (1,2) - done
00:30:885 (6,1) - ^
00:45:885 (1,2) - ? ^?
00:58:324 (2,3) - don't really see it but I moved it around just in case
01:15:885 (2,3) - again, not exactly sure where but i moved it around?
01:31:983 (4,5) - uhh like this I think
01:42:044 (2,3) - done
00:05:870 (2,3,4) - dont really like flow here, it would be better if ctrl+g (3,4) ok
00:08:833 (2,3,4,1) - how about making 2 a blanket slider for 1? (tail of 2,3,4,1) should make a parallelogram/square started moving around the hitcircles and sliders before I even know this suggestion so I'm just gonna keep it my way //sorry
00:13:647 (1) - could make this slider perfectly symmetrical (rotate to line up with the grid -> make adjustments to anchors -> rotate back) done
00:29:056 (2) - remove clap ^
00:50:275 (1,2) - flow kinda awkward because 2 is in the opposite direction of 1 changed
00:51:739 - remove whistle add clap ^
00:52:104 - add clap ^
00:52:653 - remove whistle add drum-finish? whoops missed that one
00:52:836 - ^ ^
01:43:873 - ^ ^
01:44:056 - ^ ^
00:59:787 (3) - note here 00:59:970 - isnt loud enough for a repeat slider imo hmm more so I'm doing this to follow 00:56:861 (5) so I think I'm gonna keep it this way. edit: would it be okay if I put a whistle there?
01:23:202 (3) - 01:23:385 - ^ ^
01:10:580 - add clap wow how can I miss that
01:25:580 - add whistle done
01:31:617 - ^ ^
01:30:885 (2) - remove whistle on head, add whistle on tail whoops big mistake
01:33:812 (1) - 01:35:641 (3) - sliders have really weird shapes in comparison to the other sliders, why? bad taste I suppose xd hopefully this one is nicer ;w;
01:34:544 - remove clap add whistle ok
01:35:092 - remove whistle add clap A clap at 01:33:080 (6) is a must but not for this imo since it only compliments well with a finish after that. it seems overused to me
01:44:422 (1) - add whistle? sure why not

Hard
00:05:869 (2,1) - fix stack done
00:10:314 (3,1) - why stack here? uhh.. because..?
blankets
00:19:544 (1,2,3) - pattern looks weird because 2-3 blankets, could rotate 2 clockwise (to avoid 1-3 overlap) then fix the blankets fixed
00:56:495 (5,6) - ^
00:57:592 (1,3) - ^
00:59:056 (5,6) - ^
01:00:153 (7,1) - ^
01:17:897 (6,1) - ^
01:24:665 (3,4) - ^
00:28:324 (3,4) - could make double blanket (3 around the head of 4) better!
01:12:044 (7) - remove clap ok
01:13:507 (4) - ^ ^
01:14:970 (4) - ^ ^
01:16:617 (3,4) - having the slider angles different look weird imo, make them horizontally symmetrical oh that was just a mistake loll
01:33:812 (1) - same thing as Normal, why is the slider shape so weird in comparison to the other sliders? I don't know either xdxd
01:43:324 (4,5,6,7) - this isnt a straight line, either make it straight or make the angle change more noticeable from 4-5 fixed~

Yahuri's Novel
remap kds
wait what

ok i probably didnt catch everything, let me know if you want me to recheck specific aspects like hitsounding or something :P
maybe hitsounding would be a great help since I still suck at it lol but thanks for now~
Good luck!
thanks for the mod~ *^*/
Yahuri

iHatePeople wrote:

[Yahuri's Novel]

Ranking Criteria

01:04:726 (5,2) - Why I always miss this circles? Offscreen. (372,348) these are not offscreen. partially off-grid yes, but not offscreen.

Difficult Issues (Basically Flow)

The problem in this map is the flow and this %$#¨%$*#¨%$*@#¨%@$ triplet here 00:52:104 (2,3,4) I have lost 1 hour to fix this flow 00:52:653 (5,6,7,1,2,1,2) - and the true problem is here 00:52:104 (2,3,4), but let's go by parts i dont see how (2,3,4) by itself makes the flow bad. i would guess that the 90 degree flow of 00:51:739 (1,2) - makes it tougher to play.
00:48:812 (1,2) - Distance x2,00 (Minor issue: It's only to adapt player to next jumps) fixed

00:52:653 (5,6,7,1,2) - This part is actually horrible to play. I change a lot to find a good flow:

00:52:104 (2) - First delete this slide and make a Circle here. (x2,0 Distance) made jump smaller, kept slider. rotated 00:51:739 (1) - by 15 degrees and copy/paste for this 00:52:104 (2)
00:52:287 - Second, make a Triplet here with 3 Circles stacked (x2,5 Distance) i never stack consecutive circles in this diff.
00:52:470 (5,6,7) - Same distance already done
00:52:836 (7,8,1) - Same distance (+DS) im not sure what you've highlighted here.
00:53:202 (1,2) - Stack never stack
00:53:934 (2,3) - Jump already done

This is my arrangement:

00:51:739 (1) - 372, 192 < Slide
00:52:104 (2) - 256, 328 < Circle
00:52:287 (3) - 136, 192 < Circle
00:52:379 (4) - 136, 192 < Circle
00:52:470 (1) - 136, 192 < Circle - NC i think NC here doesnt really serve a purpose. 00:51:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this whole combo is part of the same phrase. then these two combos 00:53:202 (1,2,1,2) - have NC to indicate rhythm/jump changes
00:52:653 (2) - 256, 072 < Circle
00:52:836 (3) - 372, 192 < Circle
00:53:019 (4) - 256, 344 < Circle
00:53:202 (5) - 136, 192 < Circle
00:53:568 (1) - 104, 192 < Circle - NC ....on red tick? doesnt make sense with the patterns i have
00:53:934 (2) - 256, 072 < Circle
00:54:117 (3) - 256, 344 < Circle

This is the better arrangement that I got.

01:34:909 (2,3,4,5) - Why this huge distance, the music have a break in this part, is not cool make this huge jump after a break, only nerf it (Box) this is the exact same star pattern i used in the rest of the kiai, and i dont see how having a break should affect how i make jumps.

Compose

00:42:592 (7,8) - Ctrl + G (Why? (5) strong (6) strong (7) down (8) down - This flow is better) but I have a better flow making this: ( Is totally optional, you arrangment is good too) i want to keep the emphasis on 7. it has drum-hitfinish. 8 is still okay for small jump because it has vocals.
01:06:373 (1) - Ctrl + J and make this: that arrangement has more awkward flow imo. 3 has counterclockwise flow -> jumps completely backwards -> clockwise flow, while my arrangement continues the counterclockwise flow after the jump. my pattern matches this too 01:29:422 (3,1)
01:43:690 (1,2,3) - 256, 132 no stack
01:44:422 (1) - 256, 044 having the last circle in the grid center has a better impact imo. it shouldnt be too hard to read either because of NC
Thanks!
wew
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TitleUnicode:名前を呼ぶよ
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163,246,104056,1,4,0:3:0:0:
256,192,104422,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104604,12,0,107348,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

iHatePeople wrote:

Hello, my Mod from iHateModding

I don't mod this yet? LOL, I make the mod in notepad and I forget to post, but I remember the problem in this map.
I love the song, I find issues to ranking this, but I will give 1 KDS because I want to see this ranked thanks for the support~

[Easy]

Ranking Criteria Issues

It's very important then you use only 1/1 sections in Easy Difficult, but in this timing you can use 1/2 section, but 1/4 - NEVER (Only in Slide Return) this is not applied to all Easy difficulties and this is an exception; reason mentioned below

01:07:470 - Start slide here and end here 01:08:202 I'm keeping it this way since it emphasizes on the guitar. Readability is not a problem tho since I used sliders to introduce players to 1/4
00:42:226 (3) - End slide in red point transition into a more intense section so no
00:26:861 (2) - End this slide in red point or make this slide at 00:27:958 this already ends in red point
00:53:934 (4) - This i think that not have problem, but is better you make a circle here a circle here won't emphasize on 00:53:934 (4) so I'm gonna keep it this way :3
01:30:885 - Start slide here and end this here 01:31:617 same reason as above, I don't see the problem
00:16:610 (1,1) - Unrankable this 00:19:544 (1) - have to start 4 stacks after the spinner, you can stop the spinner here 00:18:092 (acceptable) or here 00:18:462 (it's more correct, but can be unrankable) spinners should at least have 4 beats or more so nope

Compose

00:05:870 (2) - Open more this slide to blanket this correctly fixed since last mod I think :p
00:19:544 (1,1) - Open more this 2 sliders to blanket correctly ^
01:44:604 (1) - start this spinner here 01:44:787 doesn't really emphasize on anything at 01:44:787 either so there wouldn't be any reason to change

[Normal]

Ranking Criteria Issues

I do not have sure about this, but I think this thing unrankable:
You used a stack in 1/4 here 00:53:934 (5,6) (There is no problem in that)
But after you used a stack in 1/2 here 01:11:861 (5,1) - The problem is: The Newbie player can beat the second stack like the 1/4 rhythm.
Because in first action you adapt the player to beat 1/4 in a stack, then after you change this to 1/2, herr you got it?
I do not have sure, but must be more correct stack 00:53:568 (4,5), but this can be unrankable too because stack 2 different rhythms in the same time is weird to a new player, but is totally correct on Hard/Insane.
I think is better you see ranking criteria about "stacks", my English is horrible to write and read.
First of all, this is definitely rankable and I understand where you're getting but doing stacks help emphasize on strong beats imo. Also, the stack at 00:53:934 is not overused so adapting to those stacks wouldn't be a problem. It wouldn't be a problem if its in Normal as well. It's also a matter of personal preferences I guess, but I'll keep that in mind

I do not have sure about this too, but 01:05:641 (3,4,1) - can be confusing, why? the player can beat the (3) after the (4)
How so? the number is in order. the AR would have help clear that out for the players as well, but I'll keep that in mind :D
thanks for the mod! :)
all diff updated!
Lonesome Dreams_old
From my dreamy timing queue.

As requested I checked the first offset. You were right, the offset was a bit late so I changed it to -1181 and sounds better to me.

I hope this was helpful
Yahuri

Kirisakiii wrote:

Normal
00:59:787 (3) - note here 00:59:970 - isnt loud enough for a repeat slider imo hmm more so I'm doing this to follow 00:56:861 (5) so I think I'm gonna keep it this way. edit: would it be okay if I put a whistle there? the purpose of hitsounding is to emphasize what already exists, not to add what doesn't exist (imo) (note: everything i tell you will be based upon this), so remove whistle
01:23:202 (3) - 01:23:385 - ^ ^ ^
01:35:092 - remove whistle add clap A clap at 01:33:080 (6) is a must but not for this imo since it only compliments well with a finish after that. it seems overused to me ^ i still stand by what i said above because the clap sound is pretty clear at 01:35:092
01:33:812 (1) - 01:35:641 (3) - sliders have really weird shapes in comparison to the other sliders, why? bad taste I suppose xd hopefully this one is nicer ;w; these ones are better, though you can clear up the shapes and (probably) the blankets as well by using only 2 anchor points. you can refer to my diff for reference sliders if you'd like (or you can use a similarly structured slider like this from Hard 01:33:812 (1)

Hard
00:10:314 (3,1) - why stack here? uhh.. because..? well anyways there is only 1 stack through the whole intro, so the stack really sticks out, so if you don't have a good reason for it then you should probably remove it

Yahuri's Novel
remap kds
wait what modding meme xd

Lonesome Dreams wrote:

From my dreamy timing queue.
As requested I checked the first offset. You were right, the offset was a bit late so I changed it to -1181 and sounds better to me.
I hope this was helpful
Sounds good to me

Hitsounding recheck dont make the change if you think i made a mistake obviously Dx
Easy
00:01:795 - add whistle
00:14:758 (2) - ^ (the hi-hat sound occurs here, rather than the next note, that's just guitar)
00:15:129 - remove whistle
00:42:958 - add whistle
00:48:812 - ^
00:50:275 - ^
00:51:739 (1) - remove whistle add clap on all 3 endpoints of slider
00:52:836 (2) - remove clap add drum-hitfinish
00:56:129 - remove whistle
00:59:056 - ^
00:59:422 (2) - add whistle
01:01:983 - remove whistle
01:04:909 - ^
01:06:373 - add whistle
01:07:104 - add clap
01:07:653 - add whistle
01:07:653 - ^
01:08:019 (3) - ^ on both endpoints
01:11:129 - add whistle
01:11:861 - remove whistle
01:16:251 (2) - add clap
01:16:617 - add finish
01:17:348 - add clap
01:19:544 - remove whistle
01:22:470 - ^
01:22:836 (2) - add whistle
01:25:397 - remove whistle
01:28:324 - ^
01:30:519 - ^ and add clap
01:30:885 (2) - remove whistle on head, add whistle on tail
01:35:275 - remove whistle
01:35:641 - add finish
01:38:202 (2) - remove whistle
01:39:665 - ^ and add clap
01:39:848 - ^ and add clap
01:42:044 - add finish
01:43:324 - remove whistle, add drum-hitfinish
01:43:873 - ^
01:44:056 - ^

Normal
00:01:795 - add whistle
00:14:758 (2) - ^
00:30:336 - remove whistle
00:32:714 (2,3,4,1) - not hitsounding related lol but ctrl+g 3 and 4 for smoother flow out of 2 and into 1
00:48:263 - remove whistle (though this sounds like a ghost note as well, maybe remove repeat too)
00:48:446 - remove whistle
00:55:946 - add whistle
00:56:129 (3) - remove whistle
01:08:934 - ^
01:10:397 - ^
01:11:129 - add whistle
01:15:153 - add finish
01:16:251 - remove whistle add clap
01:17:531 - add drum-hitfinish
01:17:714 - ^
01:19:361 - add whistle
01:19:544 - remove whistle
01:35:641 - add finish
01:38:202 - remove whistle
01:38:934 - add whistle
01:39:665 - remove whistle add clap
01:39:848 - ^
01:42:592 - add finish
01:43:324 (4) - add whistle

Hard
00:01:795 - add whistle
00:14:758 - ^
00:20:824 - remove whistle
00:26:678 - ^
00:38:568 - ^
00:44:422 - ^
00:48:263 - remove whistle (though this sounds like a ghost note as well, maybe remove repeat too)
00:48:446 - remove whistle
00:52:287 (4) - add clap
00:53:019 (6) - remove clap add drum-hitfinish
00:59:422 - add whistle
01:01:068 (2,3) - not hitsound related: overlap doesnt look good because 2 is overlapping with the tail of 3, would look better if only overlap with slider body or no overlap at all
01:06:007 (3) - remove whistle
01:07:470 (2) - ^
01:08:019 - add whistle
01:11:861 (6) - remove whistle
01:13:324 (3) - ^
01:14:787 (3) - ^
01:15:519 - add whistle
01:16:251 - add clap
01:16:800 - remove whistle add drum-hitfinish
01:16:983 - ^
01:17:165 - add finish
01:17:531 - remove whistle add drum-hitfinish
01:17:897 - remove whistle
01:29:422 (3) - ^
01:30:885 (2) - ^
01:34:544 - remove clap add whistle
01:35:092 - remove whistle add clap
01:35:275 (3) - remove clap and whistle on both endpoints
01:35:641 - add finish
01:39:665 (2,3) - remove whistle add clap
01:42:409 - remove whistle
01:43:324 (4) - remove whistle add drum-hitfinish
01:43:873 (6,7) - ^

Novel
01:17:348 (2) - add clap XD
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

Yahuri wrote:

Kirisakiii wrote:

Normal
00:59:787 (3) - note here 00:59:970 - isnt loud enough for a repeat slider imo hmm more so I'm doing this to follow 00:56:861 (5) so I think I'm gonna keep it this way. edit: would it be okay if I put a whistle there? the purpose of hitsounding is to emphasize what already exists, not to add what doesn't exist (imo) (note: everything i tell you will be based upon this), so remove whistle then I guess we'll have to leave it as it is. removed.
01:23:202 (3) - 01:23:385 - ^ ^ ^ ^
01:35:092 - remove whistle add clap A clap at 01:33:080 (6) is a must but not for this imo since it only compliments well with a finish after that. it seems overused to me ^ i still stand by what i said above because the clap sound is pretty clear at 01:35:092fixed
01:33:812 (1) - 01:35:641 (3) - sliders have really weird shapes in comparison to the other sliders, why? bad taste I suppose xd hopefully this one is nicer ;w; these ones are better, though you can clear up the shapes and (probably) the blankets as well by using only 2 anchor points. you can refer to my diff for reference sliders if you'd like (or you can use a similarly structured slider like this from Hard 01:33:812 (1) Two-anchor sliders are harder than it looks if I have to consider other stuffs like making a curve along 01:33:080 (6) or overlapping 01:32:714 (5) :? but I managed to reduce it to three anchors if thats okay :9

Hard
00:10:314 (3,1) - why stack here? uhh.. because..? well anyways there is only 1 stack through the whole intro, so the stack really sticks out, so if you don't have a good reason for it then you should probably remove it probably personal preference but okay. changed.

Yahuri's Novel
remap kds
wait what modding meme xd

Lonesome Dreams wrote:

From my dreamy timing queue.
As requested I checked the first offset. You were right, the offset was a bit late so I changed it to -1181 and sounds better to me.
I hope this was helpful
Sounds good to me

Hitsounding recheck dont make the change if you think i made a mistake obviously Dx
Also commented down a few that I have changed myself
Easy
00:01:795 - add whistle added
00:14:758 (2) - ^ (the hi-hat sound occurs here, rather than the next note, that's just guitar) oh yea
00:15:129 - remove whistle done
00:42:958 - add whistle ok
00:48:812 - ^ ^
00:50:275 - ^ ^
00:51:739 (1) - remove whistle add clap on all 3 endpoints of slider ^
00:52:836 (2) - remove clap add drum-hitfinish ^
00:56:129 - remove whistle ^
00:59:056 - ^ ^
00:59:422 (2) - add whistle ^
01:01:983 - remove whistle ^
01:04:909 - ^ ^
01:06:373 - add whistle ^
01:07:104 - add clap ^
01:07:653 - add whistle ^
01:07:653 - ^ noticed that too after that :D
01:08:019 (3) - ^ on both endpoints ^
01:11:129 - add whistle done
01:11:861 - remove whistle ^
01:16:251 (2) - add clap ^
01:16:617 - add finish^
01:17:348 - add clap ^
01:19:544 - remove whistle ^
01:22:470 - ^ ^
01:22:836 (2) - add whistle ^
01:25:397 - remove whistle ^
01:28:324 - ^ ^
01:30:519 - ^ and add clap ^
01:30:885 (2) - remove whistle on head, add whistle on tail ^
01:35:275 - remove whistle ^
01:35:641 - add finish ^
01:38:202 (2) - remove whistle ^
01:39:665 - ^ and add clap ^
01:39:848 - ^ and add clap ^
01:42:044 - add finish ^
01:43:324 - remove whistle, add drum-hitfinish ^
01:43:873 - ^ ^
01:44:056 - ^ ^

Normal
00:01:795 - add whistle ok
00:14:758 (2) - ^ ^
00:30:336 - remove whistle ^
00:32:714 (2,3,4,1) - not hitsounding related lol but ctrl+g 3 and 4 for smoother flow out of 2 and into 1 changed
00:48:263 - remove whistle (though this sounds like a ghost note as well, maybe remove repeat too) fixed; I like it this way so just gonna keep it >.>[/color]
00:48:446 - remove whistle ^
00:55:946 - add whistle ^
00:56:129 (3) - remove whistle ^
01:08:934 - ^ ^
01:10:397 - ^ ^
01:11:129 - add whistle ^
01:15:153 - add finish ^
01:16:251 - remove whistle add clap ^
01:16:617 (3) - I added a finish here
01:17:531 - add drum-hitfinish ^ and removed whistle
01:17:714 - ^ ^ and removed whistle
01:19:361 - add whistle done
01:19:544 - remove whistle ^
01:35:641 - add finish ^
01:38:202 - remove whistle ^
01:38:934 - add whistle ^
01:39:665 - remove whistle add clap ^
01:39:848 - ^ ^
01:42:592 - add finish ^ and removed whistle
01:43:324 (4) - add whistle fixed to drum-hitfinish instead

Hard
00:01:795 - add whistle fixed
00:14:758 - ^ ^
00:20:824 - remove whistle ^
00:26:678 - ^ ^
00:38:568 - ^ ^
00:44:422 - ^ ^
00:48:263 - remove whistle (though this sounds like a ghost note as well, maybe remove repeat too) removed; same thing with Normal
00:48:446 - remove whistle ^
00:52:287 (4) - add clap fixed
00:53:019 (6) - remove clap add drum-hitfinish ^
00:59:422 - add whistle ^
01:01:068 (2,3) - not hitsound related: overlap doesnt look good because 2 is overlapping with the tail of 3, would look better if only overlap with slider body or no overlap at all fixed
01:06:007 (3) - remove whistle^
01:07:470 (2) - ^ ^
01:08:019 - add whistle ^
01:11:861 (6) - remove whistle ^
01:13:324 (3) - ^ ^
01:14:787 (3) - ^ ^
01:15:519 - add whistle ^
01:16:251 - add clap ^
01:16:617 (3) - fixed to whistle and finish
01:16:800 - remove whistle add drum-hitfinish ^
01:16:983 - ^ ^
01:17:165 - add finish ^
01:17:531 - remove whistle add drum-hitfinish ^
01:17:714 (5) - fixed to drum-hitfinish
01:17:897 - remove whistle ^
01:29:422 (3) - ^ ^
01:30:885 (2) - ^ ^
01:34:544 - remove clap add whistle ^
01:35:092 - remove whistle add clap ^
01:35:275 (3) - remove clap and whistle on both endpoints
01:35:641 - add finish ^
01:39:665 (2,3) - remove whistle add clap ^
01:42:409 - remove whistle ^
01:43:324 (4) - remove whistle add drum-hitfinish ^
01:43:873 (6,7) - ^ ^

Novel
01:17:348 (2) - add clap XD I'll fixed this along with the new offset and just update it
had a small error in preview time as well so I also fixed that
idk about the kiai time difference tho :?
thanks! still new to hitsounding so I managed to find some of my stupid mistakes as well ;-; it was a great help
Kyouren
No Kudosu because this is metadata check!

http://bungo-stray-dogs.jp/goods/?mode=music

22. 名前を呼ぶよ(TV Size)
作詞・作曲:PON 編曲:ラックライフ 歌:ラックライフ

I found that from original soundtrack, so

Title: 名前を呼ぶよ(TV Size)
Romaji Title: Namae wo Yobu yo (TV Size)

Good luck! :3
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

KittyAdventure wrote:

No Kudosu because this is metadata check!

http://bungo-stray-dogs.jp/goods/?mode=music

22. 名前を呼ぶよ(TV Size)
作詞・作曲:PON 編曲:ラックライフ 歌:ラックライフ

I found that from original soundtrack, so
aa didnt know

Title: 名前を呼ぶよ(TV Size)
Romaji Title: Namae wo Yobu yo (TV Size)

Good luck! :3
thanks! :o
updated.
Electoz
Oh yeah I'm late sorry for that, kill me.

[General]

  1. Video offset is inconsistent in Yahuri's Novel.
  2. Recheck AiMod pls your metadata conflicts in Easy.
[Easy]

  1. A combo colour in Easy are inconsistent with other diffs so yeah try rechecking that again, the purple one with 102,102,255.
  2. 00:16:596 (1,1) - The recovery is not really sufficient for Easy, would be sufficient if the spinner ended at 00:18:078 but it's kinda lame spot to put a spinner there so yeah might as well use a long slider instead.
  3. 00:27:592 (3,1) - DS
  4. 01:07:470 (2,3) - 01:30:885 (2,3) - Probably a no-go lol, using this kind of rhythm in Easy is already edgy to begin with, plus the intensity on these places isn't really different from the rest of kiai so using denser rhythms doesn't really fit here.
[Normal]

  1. 00:38:568 (3,4) - 01:24:665 (2,3) - DS on these places can be polished a bit.
  2. 01:11:861 (5,1) - The stack looks pretty random tho, I mean you barely did this anywhere else so better unstack it (unless you have a reason behind this ofc).
  3. 01:42:044 (2,3) - Using the same rhythm as Hard plays much better imo cuz you wanna prioritize 01:42:592 than 01:42:958 since the sound is clearly stronger and there's nothing on 01:42:958 so that one shouldn't be even clickable lol
[Hard]

  1. 00:27:592 (6,1) - 01:09:665 (7,1) - 01:18:629 (2,3) - 01:43:690 (5,6,7) - Recheck your spacings pls
  2. Actually around this part 00:42:226 your DS kinda swings between 1.4-1.5 I don't know which one you're going for but try polish them a bit more.
  3. 00:44:056 - Add whistle.
  4. 00:52:653 - You mapped this in Normal but not in Hard? There's a drum roll here so rhythm should be denser than just a 1/2 slider anyways.
  5. 01:01:068 (2,3) - 01:18:629 (2,3) - Overlaps which you didn't do anywhere else so it kinda breaks consistency from what you're usually do.
    1. The main idea of this is like, if you usually don't do overlaps and then you suddenly do it, then you should have reasonings for doing an overlap, "Does this overlap express anything from the song?", "Are these overlaps making some parts on my map stand out for no reason?", something along that line and this doesn't apply only to overlaps but also whatever you do when you're mapping as well.
  6. 01:04:726 (4,5) - Should be mapped differently, a pattern like this only works well if they're mapped on the same thing, clearly there's another sound occured at 01:05:092 (5) so 2 circles instead of this could do the job. If you apply this then you could use the same rhythm at 01:28:141 (5,6) for consistency.
  7. 01:12:226 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't compliment the rhythm very well imo, there's nothing at 01:13:141 - 01:12:958 and you let a strong sound ended on a slider end which could've been better, something like this could work. If you apply this then the same thing goes to 01:13:690 (1,2,3,4) as well.
  8. 01:19:361 (4,5) - A random 1/4 stack out of nowhere which is pretty much the same thing as overlap thingy I mentioned earlier.
  9. 01:21:556 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Idk what you're trying to follow here but it's kinda like you're pushing it cuz the rhythm is suddenly denser despite having the same intensity as other parts in kiai, I was expecting a 1/2 slider instead of 01:21:739 (3,4) .
  10. 01:41:495 (1,2,3) - Could easily create a pattern or sth since they're musically related, feels kinda wasted with the way you mapped them currently as these sliders aren’t visually related in any way whatsoever.
Can be improved more imo but you're getting close.
Good luck~
Watch My Skill
Yahuri's Novel
00:51:007 (3,4) - Just consider flipping these sliders to help the section flow. like this Sorry bout the image size =.=
01:14:422 (3) - I think this is a weird shape, you should keep it consistant with these 01:12:958 (3) -

No comments for any others really, this is a beautiful mapset! nice work man :)
Yahuri

Watch My Skill wrote:

Yahuri's Novel
00:51:007 (3,4) - Just consider flipping these sliders to help the section flow. like this Sorry bout the image size =.= i wanted the flow to be less flowy, since this section is buildup into the kiai.
01:14:422 (3) - I think this is a weird shape, you should keep it consistant with these 01:12:958 (3) - i changed this from an earlier mod, but if i get more complaints i guess ill change it back LOL

No comments for any others really, this is a beautiful mapset! nice work man :)
Thanks!
Affirmation
Q

[Easy]
00:03:633 (3,1) - check DS
00:09:930 (3,2) - avoid overlap
00:16:596 (1) - Delete spinner, In Easy diff, you have to make rest time in 4 ticks after spinner
01:07:470 (2,3) - hard to play in Easy diff?

[Normal]
01:12:226 (1) - start at 01:12:044 -
01:33:812 (1,2) - blanket

GL
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

Electroz wrote:

Oh yeah I'm late sorry for that, kill me. //stab
sry for the late reply xd


[General]

  1. Video offset is inconsistent in Yahuri's Novel. hmm I was sure I fixed it that day :? thanks!
  2. Recheck AiMod pls your metadata conflicts in Easy. an extra space in the title loll where did that come from
[Easy]

  1. A combo colour in Easy are inconsistent with other diffs so yeah try rechecking that again, the purple one with 102,102,255. wow didnt notice that
  2. 00:16:596 (1,1) - The recovery is not really sufficient for Easy, would be sufficient if the spinner ended at 00:18:078 but it's kinda lame spot to put a spinner there so yeah might as well use a long slider instead. fixed
  3. 00:27:592 (3,1) - DS ^
  4. 01:07:470 (2,3) - 01:30:885 (2,3) - Probably a no-go lol, using this kind of rhythm in Easy is already edgy to begin with, plus the intensity on these places isn't really different from the rest of kiai so using denser rhythms doesn't really fit here. fixed! started experimenting a few ideas and I finally found one :) hopefully this one is better lol
[Normal]

  1. 00:38:568 (3,4) - 01:24:665 (2,3) - DS on these places can be polished a bit. fixed
  2. 01:11:861 (5,1) - The stack looks pretty random tho, I mean you barely did this anywhere else so better unstack it (unless you have a reason behind this ofc). I like to think of it as an emphasis for (1)
  3. 01:42:044 (2,3) - Using the same rhythm as Hard plays much better imo cuz you wanna prioritize 01:42:592 than 01:42:958 since the sound is clearly stronger and there's nothing on 01:42:958 so that one shouldn't be even clickable lol fixed
[Hard]

  1. 00:27:592 (6,1) - 01:09:665 (7,1) - 01:18:629 (2,3) - 01:43:690 (5,6,7) - Recheck your spacings pls fixed
  2. Actually around this part 00:42:226 your DS kinda swings between 1.4-1.5 I don't know which one you're going for but try polish them a bit more. lol i wonder how did that happen :^)
  3. 00:44:056 - Add whistle. fixed
  4. 00:52:653 - You mapped this in Normal but not in Hard? There's a drum roll here so rhythm should be denser than just a 1/2 slider anyways. fixed
  5. 01:01:068 (2,3) - 01:18:629 (2,3) - Overlaps which you didn't do anywhere else so it kinda breaks consistency from what you're usually do. got it
    1. The main idea of this is like, if you usually don't do overlaps and then you suddenly do it, then you should have reasonings for doing an overlap, "Does this overlap express anything from the song?", "Are these overlaps making some parts on my map stand out for no reason?", something along that line and this doesn't apply only to overlaps but also whatever you do when you're mapping as well. thanks I'll keep that in mind!
  6. 01:04:726 (4,5) - Should be mapped differently, a pattern like this only works well if they're mapped on the same thing, clearly there's another sound occured at 01:05:092 (5) so 2 circles instead of this could do the job. If you apply this then you could use the same rhythm at 01:28:141 (5,6) for consistency. fixed
  7. 01:12:226 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't compliment the rhythm very well imo, there's nothing at 01:13:141 - 01:12:958 and you let a strong sound ended on a slider end which could've been better, something like this could work. If you apply this then the same thing goes to 01:13:690 (1,2,3,4) as well. okie ;-; changed
  8. 01:19:361 (4,5) - A random 1/4 stack out of nowhere which is pretty much the same thing as overlap thingy I mentioned earlier. fixed
  9. 01:21:556 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Idk what you're trying to follow here but it's kinda like you're pushing it cuz the rhythm is suddenly denser despite having the same intensity as other parts in kiai, I was expecting a 1/2 slider instead of 01:21:739 (3,4) . agree >< fixed
  10. 01:41:495 (1,2,3) - Could easily create a pattern or sth since they're musically related, feels kinda wasted with the way you mapped them currently as these sliders aren’t visually related in any way whatsoever. followed a similar pattern to 00:19:544 (1,2,3), hope this is better :p
Can be improved more imo but you're getting close. i hope xd
Good luck~
thanks for the mod~
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Easy]
00:03:633 (3,1) - check DS fixed //i think lol
00:09:930 (3,2) - avoid overlap noticed that too :p fixed
00:16:596 (1) - Delete spinner, In Easy diff, you have to make rest time in 4 ticks after spinner fixed from last mod
01:07:470 (2,3) - hard to play in Easy diff? lol agree; also fixed from last mod

[Normal]
01:12:226 (1) - start at 01:12:044 - Not gonna follow the vocal (just like the rest of the diffs) c: there's a significant sound at 01:12:226 (1) anyway
01:33:812 (1,2) - blanket tried. best i could already anymore and I'm gonna ruin it lol ;w;

GL
thanks for the mod! :D
terratropic
hi, from mod queue

  • General
    1. increase slider tick rate to 2 (at least for hard and above, idk about the rest)

    Normal
    00:16:596 (1) - better to make this clickable, so move spinner 1/2 beat ahead and add circle here

    Hard
    00:16:596 (1) - see above
    00:42:226 (6) - add NC to emphasize the drums
    00:48:263 (4) - i dont think you need this note, it's not in the music
    00:53:019 (7,1,2,3) - very confusing stacks because 00:53:019 (7,1) and 00:53:568 (2,3) are different, a reverse slider would work if you place it at 00:53:202
    01:12:226 - kiai is longer in other difficulties, why end here?
    01:16:617 (5) - add Nc here
    01:33:080 (1,2,3) - i think larger spacing would complement the snares better, move 01:33:080 (1) to x:36 y:312
    01:39:300 (1) - i would move NC over to 01:38:568 (9)
    01:43:690 (5) - add NC


    Yahuri's Novel
    00:16:596 (1) - i know ai mod doesnt list this, but isnt this offscreen?
    00:42:226 (5) - add NC here for the drums
    01:04:544 (5) - i feel this should be closer to the previous object than to 01:04:909 (1), maybe switch 01:04:544 (4,5) around?
    01:06:922 - the gap here feels kind of awkward imo, place a note here
    01:09:300 (1) - see above
    01:30:336 - ^
    01:29:056 (1,2,3) - spacing is too big compared to same part in first kiai 01:05:641 (1,2,3)
    good luck, i hope this helps
Yahuri

terratropic wrote:

hi, from mod queue

  • General
    1. increase slider tick rate to 2 (at least for hard and above, idk about the rest) i dont think thats necessary, but thats up to kirisakiii

    Yahuri's Novel
    00:16:596 (1) - i know ai mod doesnt list this, but isnt this offscreen? nope, it shows up just fine while playing
    00:42:226 (5) - add NC here for the drums inconsistent, and not really necessary imo
    01:04:544 (5) - i feel this should be closer to the previous object than to 01:04:909 (1), maybe switch 01:04:544 (4,5) around? star patterns in the first kiai follow instruments, so vocals dont get jumps
    01:06:922 - the gap here feels kind of awkward imo, place a note here theres no note here to justify that
    01:09:300 (1) - see above ^
    01:30:336 - ^ ^
    01:29:056 (1,2,3) - spacing is too big compared to same part in first kiai 01:05:641 (1,2,3) i made the spacing bigger to emphasize the final "NAMAE" (also, the way i emphasized in the star patterns changed as well, i included vocals for jumps) though if i get more complaints ill change it
    good luck, i hope this helps
Thanks!
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii
Sorry for the late reply!

terratropic wrote:

hi, from mod queue

General
[*]increase slider tick rate to 2 (at least for hard and above, idk about the rest) I don't think its necessary so no sorry

Normal
00:16:596 (1) - better to make this clickable, so move spinner 1/2 beat ahead and add circle here If that's the case, the slider would be shorter and the slider cannot be shorter than that anymore, otherwise its considered unranked :(

Hard
00:16:596 (1) - see above same thing, just gonna keep it this way
00:42:226 (6) - add NC to emphasize the drums it wouldn't be necessary since I'm following based on the nc pattern I'm using so far
00:48:263 (4) - i dont think you need this note, it's not in the music true, but following the same rhythm pattern as 00:42:226 (6,7,8,9) so I'm gonna keep it ^^
00:53:019 (7,1,2,3) - very confusing stacks because 00:53:019 (7,1) and 00:53:568 (2,3) are different, a reverse slider would work if you place it at 00:53:202 still trying to figure out these stacks here as well LOL anyways got an idea from you so thanks! :D //a reversed slider would be good, but I'm looking for something more intense around that area ^^
01:12:226 - kiai is longer in other difficulties, why end here? wow, can't believe I didn't notice that. thanks!
01:16:617 (5) - add Nc here I guess in this case drums needs more emphasis so I'll take it
01:33:080 (1,2,3) - i think larger spacing would complement the snares better, move 01:33:080 (1) to x:36 y:312 sounds great to me but, idk. I've been using the same ds pattern the entire song so keeping it would also keep consistency. I'll keep that in mind!
01:39:300 (1) - i would move NC over to 01:38:568 (9) fixedd
01:43:690 (5) - add NC ok

good luck, i hope this helps
thanks for the mod!
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

#achievementunlockedd
Chihara Minori
m4m return
sorry for the lateness

Easy
Easy:
  1. 00:10:670 (1) - this simply count as miss emphasis, just add curve or angle on it
  2. 00:31:251 (1,2,3,1) - this flow feel awkward you know, try smth like this https://gyazo.com/8ea626bf347697407c9efef9e980ae03
  3. 00:37:104 (1) - make the transtition of angle equal
  4. 00:40:031 (1) - add down angle 1/3 after slider head to emphasis the upbeat
  5. 00:45:153 (4) - upcurve here, or even you can make this as down curve and make next (1) as left curve slider to give more movement
  6. 00:53:202 (3) - light left curve
  7. 01:04:909 (3) - up curve to repeat the flow from (1)
  8. 01:47:348 - add a new timing points with 10% volume to reduce the hs of spinner end

Normal
Normal:
  1. 00:04:744 (1,2) - *cry in mirror slider* https://gyazo.com/f748d8696c88331998f70994e143dcd8
  2. 00:07:707 (1) - right curve to make the transtition to (2) softer
  3. 00:10:670 (1) - down curve for this one
  4. 00:29:787 (4) - 00:34:178 (1) - 00:37:653 (2) - 00:45:885 (1) - 01:18:080 (1) - again
  5. 00:36:373 (4) - to reduce that mayor beat it reccomend to apply curve slider yk
  6. 00:51:739 (1) - left curve
  7. 01:04:178 (2,3,4,1,2) - maybe you meant to make this https://gyazo.com/cd8a6f0b96b8e86cd56177a4f431ac34
  8. 01:20:275 (5) - light down curve is ok
  9. 01:26:861 (1) - the vocal is not straight here, just simply add left curve to emphais it
  10. 01:41:495 (1,2,3,4) - make this pattern as a blanket maybe? that mean each (1,2,3) blanketing (4) perfectly

Hard
Hard:
  1. 00:15:115 (1) - ctrl+j and replacing, that flow is more familliar for hard diff these days. if you do move (3) higer so you get v movement for (1,2,3)
  2. 00:30:519 (7) - not the right time to absorb the jump, keep sparate this like you do in earlier pattern
  3. 00:38:568 (6) - 00:53:202 (1) - 01:28:141 (5) - 01:36:373 (3) - 01:37:836 (7) - 01:38:568 (1) - again
  4. 00:36:373 (5) - here as well, dont stack it
  5. 00:42:226 (6) - from this poit this hold is ok, just add nc when you do it for easier reading
  6. 00:56:861 (6) - this represent 3 point vocal, and here 00:55:397 (2) - only two. it ok to not repeating the slider way pervectly instead of miss emphaising the vocal
  7. 00:57:592 (1) - re-create the angle
  8. 00:59:422 (6) - flow lead to down instead to up, ctrl+g imo
  9. 01:05:641 (1,2,3) - that ds on purpose?
  10. 01:09:665 (7) - 01:28:690 (6) - 01:39:300 (2) - 01:43:324 (4) - no downbeat, dont stack, as simple as that
  11. 01:21:739 (3) - miss emph, simply add an angle on the middle of it, here as well 01:23:202 (7) -
  12. 01:33:812 (1) - you can make the stack overlapped a bit to give the hold effect https://gyazo.com/7bd5c3d3f3e05eb98f4b9f28d62dc0b4
  13. 01:43:690 (1,2,3) - v pattern more reccomended

Insane
Insane:
  1. 00:16:596 (1) - add the angle at the mayor beat, that mean the tick of slider. that will simply make gameplay more smooth because it emph the instrument better
  2. 00:50:275 (1) - this flow breaker just too. . try to ctrl+g and ctrl+h (2) then change potition of slider (3,4)
  3. 00:59:239 (2,3) - this meant to be straight line?
  4. 01:06:373 (1) - curve slider absorb better
  5. 01:08:202 (3) - ctrl+g this to make the pattern section more clear
  6. 01:12:226 (1) - i stand against this slider at the diff
  7. 01:21:007 (1) - recheck this

well good luck
Yahuri

Time Capsule wrote:

Insane
Insane:
  1. 00:16:596 (1) - add the angle at the mayor beat, that mean the tick of slider. that will simply make gameplay more smooth because it emph the instrument better there arent any instruments at the ticks. the angles indicate guitar.
  2. 00:50:275 (1) - this flow breaker just too. . try to ctrl+g and ctrl+h (2) then change potition of slider (3,4) ctrl+h the rest of symmetry pattern
  3. 00:59:239 (2,3) - this meant to be straight line? nope, all straight sliders should be 15 degrees off from horizontal/vertical in kiai
  4. 01:06:373 (1) - curve slider absorb better i wanted the slider after "NAMAE" to be more emphasized, so thats why it has the sharp angle. also, if it was a normal curve it would look weird because no other slider would have the same curvature (harder to tell if intentional or not)
  5. 01:08:202 (3) - ctrl+g this to make the pattern section more clear keep same to show that the guitar pattern is same as 01:07:653 (1)
  6. 01:12:226 (1) - i stand against this slider at the diff why?
  7. 01:21:007 (1) - recheck this recheck for what?

well good luck
Thanks~
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290,130,56861,2,0,P|270:161|263:198,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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63,175,58873,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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351,274,60336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,84,60519,6,0,L|281:11,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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180,89,61617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
265,263,61800,70,0,P|336:275|403:243,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,50,63995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
122,207,64178,2,0,L|128:282,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,239,64544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,366,64726,1,8,0:0:0:0:
422,265,64909,5,0,0:0:0:0:
262,352,65092,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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241,239,65641,5,8,0:0:0:0:
370,366,65824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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306,145,72044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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144,372,75885,1,8,0:0:0:0:
263,359,76068,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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237,243,76617,85,6,0:0:0:0:
316,105,76800,1,4,3:0:0:0:
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437,139,87409,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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63,189,87958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,352,88141,1,8,0:0:0:0:
178,157,88324,5,0,0:0:0:0:
56,310,88507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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178,157,89056,5,8,0:0:0:0:
307,360,89239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,118,89422,2,0,B|313:81|313:81|287:53,1,75
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109,240,90885,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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66,300,94909,1,8,0:0:0:0:
262,314,95092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
111,189,95275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,377,95458,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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339,144,96190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,285,96373,2,0,B|345:250|323:215|323:215|339:144,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,205,96922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
493,337,97104,6,0,B|476:305|445:277|445:277|454:236|443:205,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,85,97653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,285,97836,2,0,B|345:250|323:215|323:215|339:144,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,85,98385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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353,284,99300,1,8,0:0:0:0:
110,112,99665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
231,198,99848,1,8,0:0:0:0:
66,302,100031,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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Osu Tatakae Ouendan
From World's Largest M4M Queue
Hi Yahurip. Unfortunately for you, you ain't the one getting mods this time ( OvO)

Sorry for wall QuQ. I just wanna help and try to explain this well.

Ok so this is a weird case for me.
I love the map except Yahurip's diffi'm kidding bout hating Yahurip's diff lol. Really I do. Personally, I find the Easy diff lovely in terms of difficulty level, and same with the Normal. I have a problem with the Hard, which starts introducing very spaced 1/4s which are not found on the Easy and Normal, but I do not want it nerfed because it is pretty good too.
To be honest however, I'm not sure what to do yet.
Just think over it first. If you think the Hard is pretty good already, then go ahead and keep everything as is.

The other thing is the NC's. The NC colors seem to be out of order so I believe this is intentional. I won't touch them for the most part because I don't know what exactly the pattern you choose for colors, but I think these two colors: http://puu.sh/tDDOm/71cb78d0de.jpg should never go together as it gets difficult to tell them apart being so similar and for me is straining on the yes.

[Easy]
00:27:592 (3) - would be nice if this was a copy of 00:26:861 (2) - flipped. Might have to adjust 2 and 3 to move them closer to 00:28:324 (1) - though after making that change
00:42:226 (3) - I think that for an Easy, we shouldn't have a 3/4 slider, and instead let's end the slider at 00:42:592 - . I don't think such an emphasis is needed for this portion to warrant the slider ending on blue tick
01:07:653 (2) - i think you should stick to mapping to vocals (i.e. starting slider on 01:07:470 - and ending on 01:08:202 - ) as following to drums might not be too noticeable for a newer player, and it's also a sudden change in rhythm choice. Still, you can keep it really i mean this is only 82 bpm.
01:31:068 (2) - similar as above

[Normal]
00:10:670 (1) - move to X 112 Y 296? so we can keep the zig zag movement on 00:09:930 (3,4,1) -
00:37:104 (1) - might wanna move this to the right a bit so it isn't so far to the side of the playfield, where leaderboards would be. Might have to adjust the next part.
00:40:031 (2) - i think this should end on red tick, and then you could add a circle here 00:40:946 -
00:48:080 (3) - tbh, I don't quite hear something to map a 1/4 slider with reverse arrow here. Should probably make this a 1/2 slider.
01:36:739 (1) - NC probably shouldn't be here. NC either
>here: 01:35:641 (3) - and next NC will be on 01:38:568 (4) - . OR
>here: 01:37:104 (2) -

[Hard]
00:48:080 (3,4,5,6) - I don't think there's anything to map here with 1/4s.
00:54:117 (3) - I think the sudden halt in movement from 3 to 1 is weird. I think you should just stack that on 00:53:934 (2) -
01:03:995 (2,3) - personally think you should change the angle of movement on this: move 01:03:995 (2) - to X68 Y32 and 01:04:178 (3) - X116 Y120. gonna have to adjust 01:04:726 (4,5) - after making that change
01:05:641 (1,2,3) - I think these are better off evenly spaced, as it'd look cleaner and it helps emphasize the whole vocal instead of just 3. Move 01:05:824 (2) - X456 Y88
01:17:714 (3,4,1) - personally I think this sudden huge spacing is too much. Might wanna make the spacing smaller, not sure how though.
01:29:056 (1,2,3) - might wanna make spacing even just like earlier
01:33:080 (1,2,3) - same. In this case, it is 1 that should be moved further.
01:39:665 (1,2,3) - same

Hope this helps (/w\)
Love this mapset ('w')
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

Time Capsule wrote:

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sorry for the lateness
sorry for the late reply xd

Easy
Easy:
  1. 00:10:670 (1) - this simply count as miss emphasis, just add curve or angle on it uhh don't exactly know what a miss emphasis is :?
  2. 00:31:251 (1,2,3,1) - this flow feel awkward you know, try smth like this https://gyazo.com/8ea626bf347697407c9efef9e980ae03 fixed
  3. 00:37:104 (1) - make the transtition of angle equal changed
  4. 00:40:031 (1) - add down angle 1/3 after slider head to emphasis the upbeat umm not exactly sure what you mean by that lol
  5. 00:45:153 (4) - upcurve here, or even you can make this as down curve and make next (1) as left curve slider to give more movement ok
  6. 00:53:202 (3) - light left curve ok
  7. 01:04:909 (3) - up curve to repeat the flow from (1) ok
  8. 01:47:348 - add a new timing points with 10% volume to reduce the hs of spinner endok i like that idea

Normal
Normal:
  1. 00:04:744 (1,2) - *cry in mirror slider* https://gyazo.com/f748d8696c88331998f70994e143dcd8 I feed on people's tears done
  2. 00:07:707 (1) - right curve to make the transtition to (2) softer ok
  3. 00:10:670 (1) - down curve for this one ^
  4. 00:29:787 (4) - 00:34:178 (1) - 00:37:653 (2) - 00:45:885 (1) - 01:18:080 (1) - again some transitions aren't really a problem so I kept some as it is
  5. 00:36:373 (4) - to reduce that mayor beat it reccomend to apply curve slider yk ok do u even engrish xd
  6. 00:51:739 (1) - left curve yep
  7. 01:04:178 (2,3,4,1,2) - maybe you meant to make this https://gyazo.com/cd8a6f0b96b8e86cd56177a4f431ac34 nah I just prefer the idea of creating a straight flow with 01:04:178 (2,3,4)
  8. 01:20:275 (5) - light down curve is ok okie
  9. 01:26:861 (1) - the vocal is not straight here, just simply add left curve to emphais it emphaised
  10. 01:41:495 (1,2,3,4) - make this pattern as a blanket maybe? that mean each (1,2,3) blanketing (4) perfectly a bit too abundant imo so I moved (4) according to the flow instead

Hard
Hard:
  1. 00:15:115 (1) - ctrl+j and replacing, that flow is more familliar for hard diff these days. if you do move (3) higer so you get v movement for (1,2,3) decided to move (3) according to the music instead
  2. 00:30:519 (7) - not the right time to absorb the jump, keep sparate this like you do in earlier pattern gonna keep it as it is since that's where the vocal pauses
  3. 00:38:568 (6) - 00:53:202 (1) - 01:28:141 (5) - 01:36:373 (3) - 01:37:836 (7) - 01:38:568 (1) - again I honestly think its fine as it is so I won't be changing it
  4. 00:36:373 (5) - here as well, dont stack it I personally like to keep it there ^^
  5. 00:42:226 (6) - from this poit this hold is ok, just add nc when you do it for easier reading considered; mentioned twice; changed
  6. 00:56:861 (6) - this represent 3 point vocal, and here 00:55:397 (2) - only two. it ok to not repeating the slider way pervectly instead of miss emphaising the vocal uhh I think get what you're trying to say, fixed
  7. 00:57:592 (1) - re-create the angle fixed?
  8. 00:59:422 (6) - flow lead to down instead to up, ctrl+g imo seems weirder to me imo; made changes myself
  9. 01:05:641 (1,2,3) - that ds on purpose? yep
  10. 01:09:665 (7) - 01:28:690 (6) - 01:39:300 (2) - 01:43:324 (4) - no downbeat, dont stack, as simple as that I'd like to keep it as a paused flow? to make the next ones more intense
  11. 01:21:739 (3) - miss emph, simply add an angle on the middle of it, here as well 01:23:202 (7) - curved it instead; 01:23:202 is unnecessary tho
  12. 01:33:812 (1) - you can make the stack overlapped a bit to give the hold effect https://gyazo.com/7bd5c3d3f3e05eb98f4b9f28d62dc0b4 I'd like to keep the stack itself as a hold effect ^^
  13. 01:43:690 (1,2,3) - v pattern more reccomended used to have that xd this flow is better imo

well good luck
thanks for the modd~
updated Yahuri's Novel as well
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii
super late reply ;-;

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:

From World's Largest M4M Queue
Hi Yahurip. Unfortunately for you, you ain't the one getting mods this time ( OvO)

Sorry for wall QuQ. I just wanna help and try to explain this well. gahh I kinda lost most of my comments and now I have to write again. //gonna keep it shorter this time cause its late already ;-;// but yeah, no worries xd

Ok so this is a weird case for me.
I love the map except Yahurip's diffi'm kidding bout hating Yahurip's diff lol. Really I do. Personally, I find the Easy diff lovely in terms of difficulty level, and same with the Normal. I have a problem with the Hard, which starts introducing very spaced 1/4s which are not found on the Easy and Normal, but I do not want it nerfed because it is pretty good too.
To be honest however, I'm not sure what to do yet.
Just think over it first. If you think the Hard is pretty good already, then go ahead and keep everything as is.
I like the idea of emphasizing those notes that way so yeah gonna keep it as it is

The other thing is the NC's. The NC colors seem to be out of order so I believe this is intentional. I won't touch them for the most part because I don't know what exactly the pattern you choose for colors, but I think these two colors: http://puu.sh/tDDOm/71cb78d0de.jpg should never go together as it gets difficult to tell them apart being so similar and for me is straining on the yes.
NCs are done based on every four beats and some of them are exceptions for emphasis so yeah xd
thanks for bringing that up :o made sure those both colours wont meet each other for every diff :p

[Easy]
00:27:592 (3) - would be nice if this was a copy of 00:26:861 (2) - flipped. Might have to adjust 2 and 3 to move them closer to 00:28:324 (1) - though after making that change keeping it since most of them are done symmetrical-ish that way. its also cause not going for a overall neat look so I'm just gonna keep this consistent with everything else
00:42:226 (3) - I think that for an Easy, we shouldn't have a 3/4 slider, and instead let's end the slider at 00:42:592 - . I don't think such an emphasis is needed for this portion to warrant the slider ending on blue tick its meant to create that moment slightly more intense into the next section
01:07:653 (2) - i think you should stick to mapping to vocals (i.e. starting slider on 01:07:470 - and ending on 01:08:202 - ) as following to drums might not be too noticeable for a newer player, and it's also a sudden change in rhythm choice. Still, you can keep it really i mean this is only 82 bpm. In this case emphasizing on the drum rather than the vocal is more important tbh and I'm also doing the same drum emphasis on every diff. //I thought of that but it just plays weird for me
01:31:068 (2) - similar as above ^

[Normal]
00:10:670 (1) - move to X 112 Y 296? so we can keep the zig zag movement on 00:09:930 (3,4,1) - its meant to curve along the previous hitcircle and the slider after that. plus, I don't really think its necessary to create a symmetrical zig-zag movement since I'm not going for that kind of aesthetic
00:37:104 (1) - might wanna move this to the right a bit so it isn't so far to the side of the playfield, where leaderboards would be. Might have to adjust the next part. technically its not offscreen so I wouldn't really have to worry about that but I moved it around a bit while keeping the flow c:
00:40:031 (2) - i think this should end on red tick, and then you could add a circle here 00:40:946 - I'm focusing on the drums here rather than the vocal and it would seem inconsistent since I didn't do the same thing to other similar vocals in this diff
00:48:080 (3) - tbh, I don't quite hear something to map a 1/4 slider with reverse arrow here. Should probably make this a 1/2 slider. creates slight intensity and also introduces other 1/4 sliders later on ^^ also, a 1/2 slider would only lose emphasis on 00:48:812
01:36:739 (1) - NC probably shouldn't be here. NC either
>here: 01:35:641 (3) - and next NC will be on 01:38:568 (4) - . OR
>here: 01:37:104 (2) -
^fixedd. didnt notice that :o

[Hard]
00:48:080 (3,4,5,6) - I don't think there's anything to map here with 1/4s. was mentioned once from another mod as well; changed
00:54:117 (3) - I think the sudden halt in movement from 3 to 1 is weird. I think you should just stack that on 00:53:934 (2) - a halt then on (2) would seem weirder imo xd had to agree with the halt part tho so I stacked it under (3) instead c:
01:03:995 (2,3) - personally think you should change the angle of movement on this: move 01:03:995 (2) - to X68 Y32 and 01:04:178 (3) - X116 Y120. gonna have to adjust 01:04:726 (4,5) - after making that change made similar changes only since I don't want to flow here to be too sharp
01:05:641 (1,2,3) - I think these are better off evenly spaced, as it'd look cleaner and it helps emphasize the whole vocal instead of just 3. Move 01:05:824 (2) - X456 Y88 sorry but I like the idea of an emphasis for (3) since the vocal there is higher
01:17:714 (3,4,1) - personally I think this sudden huge spacing is too much. Might wanna make the spacing smaller, not sure how though. have to agree on that :( decided to keep (3) and (4) as it is and moved (1) according to spacing. hopefully this works ;-;
01:29:056 (1,2,3) - might wanna make spacing even just like earlier same reason ><
01:33:080 (1,2,3) - same. In this case, it is 1 that should be moved further. ^
01:39:665 (1,2,3) - same ^

Hope this helps (/w\) it did x3
Love this mapset ('w') for Luck Lifee <3
thanks for the modd :)
DeletedUser_6181859
Heyo from my queue.
[General]
  1. soft-hitfinish2.wav have so big delay, it's unrankable. Try to ask anybody for fix it.
  2. BG resolution looks unrankable too. Try this out.
[Easy]
  1. Looks a bit odd why you leave AR4 at the same time on Easy and Normal. Consider to make AR3 for Easy and AR5 for Normal.
  2. 00:03:633 (3,1) - this blanket is bit off and need works, specially in right part of 00:03:633 (3) .
  3. 00:08:819 (2,3) - fix blanket.
  4. 00:19:544 (1) - i think this slider should be in x=274 y=147 for better stack with 00:15:115 (3) => better blanket with nice art
  5. 00:47:348 (2,3) - angle between sliders will be better proof. Just copy-paste 2 and make ctrl+g of him. Same with 01:25:397 (3,4) , but here you should make ctrl+h and ctrl+g (both).
  6. 01:02:714 (4) - slider should be in y=154 (just off grid snap for it) for better symmetrical with 01:01:983 (3) , otherwise move it like in 00:34:178 (1,2) .
[Normal]
  1. 00:10:300 (4,1) - 00:22:470 (1,2) - 01:32:714 (5,1) - 01:36:739 (2,3) - blanket looks a bit off.
  2. 00:16:226 (4) - in this pattern you break flow, but this note is almost polished. For fit your pattern fully consider move this circle left. Same with 01:17:348 (4) . For example, 01:37:836 (4,1,2,3) - looks really better.
  3. 00:34:178 (1) - as for me upper red sliderpoint should be moved a bit up for smoother elbow, i don't think that you really highlight high beats by sliderpoints. Same with 00:37:653 (2) - 00:45:885 (1) . Alternative version - just copy-paste 00:05:856 (2) and remake it a bit.
  4. 00:48:812 (1,1) - you know, symmetrical patterns looks better, right?
[Hard]
  1. Blankets: 00:10:670 (1,2) - 00:11:411 (2,3) - 00:13:633 (1,2) - 00:29:604 (5,6) - 00:40:031 (3,4) - 00:54:665 (1,2)
  2. 01:04:726 (4,5) - usually you have stack "slider-end + note" with 1/2 jump, there you have 1/4 slider and with most cases people miss this pattern
  3. 01:12:226 (1,1) - second slider should be rotated because it's a bit unreadable and monotonous in my opinion
[Yahuri]
  1. 00:54:665 (1,1) - since your following sliders are curved a bit you can curve this too, it's will be better, specially for 2nd case because 01:00:519 (1,2) - are parallel and clearly visible. Same with 01:15:153 (1) - etc
  2. 01:35:641 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - your previous pattern 01:12:044 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) (really love meme patterns) was builded a bit differently, why you leave your style?
Nice polished set, get your kudosustar!
Good luck!
{end of the mod}
Yahuri

100bit wrote:

Heyo from my queue.
[General]
[Yahuri]
  1. 00:54:665 (1,1) - since your following sliders are curved a bit you can curve this too, it's will be better, specially for 2nd case because 01:00:519 (1,2) - are parallel and clearly visible. Same with 01:15:153 (1) - etc fixed all that i could find if you come back to this, please let me know if i missed anything~
  2. 01:35:641 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - your previous pattern 01:12:044 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) (really love meme patterns) was builded a bit differently, why you leave your style? i wanted a little variation since its the second half of kiai, but fixed :P
Thanks~

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Abe Nana

Hi. From Usamin's STD modding queue

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
If you want a better quality video, I can help it
[Easy]
nothing
[Normal]
nothing
[Hard]
00:54:665 (1,2) - make more blanket01:12:226 (1,1) - make it beautifully if you make it anyway
[Yahuri's Novel]
-00:00:100 - this green section is unsnapped01:11:495 (4,1,3,1,3) - It's very boring when I see it.01:22:836 (3) - unrankable issue. out of playground01:44:604 (1) - pull this way silent section. 95% volume is very noisy


overall, it is clean, and simple and concise.

nice work. GL
Yahuri

Abe Nana wrote:

[Yahuri's Novel]
  1. -00:00:100 - this green section is unsnapped fixed
  2. 01:11:495 (4,1,3,1,3) - It's very boring when I see it. i did the pattern like that because of the "anata" repeating -> same position
  3. 01:22:836 (3) - unrankable issue. out of playground its a little off the grid, but its not offscreen.
  4. 01:44:604 (1) - pull this way silent section. 95% volume is very noisy made a gradual decrease starting from 80% instead
Thanks!

NOTE: the current AR spread for this mapset is
Easy:4
Normal: 4
Hard: 7
Novel: 8
there's a huge gap between Normal and Hard, so i would increase the AR on Normal to ~5


noot
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Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

Yahuri wrote:


there's a huge gap between Normal and Hard, so i would increase the AR on Normal to ~5
yea was thinking the same when I was skimming through the mods
//that chuya profile pic tho bfjfvkkfv

note for recent modders:
I'll try to reply to your mods as soon as possible cause I'm sick and I have a lot of work to do atm ;-;
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii

100bit wrote:

Heyo from my queue.
[General]
  1. soft-hitfinish2.wav have so big delay, it's unrankable. Try to ask anybody for fix it. tried from different sources a couple of times already and im not exactly sure where can you get ones that are not delayed :/
  2. BG resolution looks unrankable too. Try this out. lol i checked the bg quality and theyre both the same. this current resolution wouldnt be unrankable anyway?
[Easy]
  1. Looks a bit odd why you leave AR4 at the same time on Easy and Normal. Consider to make AR3 for Easy and AR5 for Normal. fixed differently
  2. 00:03:633 (3,1) - this blanket is bit off and need works, specially in right part of 00:03:633 (3) . sorry but i couldnt exactly see where is the problem.. the curve along the next slider seems find imo
  3. 00:08:819 (2,3) - fix blanket. fixed i hope xd
  4. 00:19:544 (1) - i think this slider should be in x=274 y=147 for better stack with 00:15:115 (3) => better blanket with nice art that one space difference tho. its already meant to be stacked lol. changed.
  5. 00:47:348 (2,3) - angle between sliders will be better proof. Just copy-paste 2 and make ctrl+g of him. Same with 01:25:397 (3,4) , but here you should make ctrl+h and ctrl+g (both). all of the same rhythm patterns are meant that way since im not going for a neat aesthetic so this suggestion wont be used except for 00:47:348 (2,3) since I need 00:48:812 (1) to be where it currently is
  6. 01:02:714 (4) - slider should be in y=154 (just off grid snap for it) for better symmetrical with 01:01:983 (3) , otherwise move it like in 00:34:178 (1,2) . done
[Normal]
  1. 00:10:300 (4,1) - 00:22:470 (1,2) - 01:32:714 (5,1) - 01:36:739 (2,3) - blanket looks a bit off. fixed and did some changes
  2. 00:16:226 (4) - in this pattern you break flow, but this note is almost polished. For fit your pattern fully consider move this circle left. Same with 01:17:348 (4) . For example, 01:37:836 (4,1,2,3) - looks really better. fixed
  3. 00:34:178 (1) - as for me upper red sliderpoint should be moved a bit up for smoother elbow, i don't think that you really highlight high beats by sliderpoints. Same with 00:37:653 (2) - 00:45:885 (1) . Alternative version - just copy-paste 00:05:856 (2) and remake it a bit. softened elbow
  4. 00:48:812 (1,1) - you know, symmetrical patterns looks better, right? lol k
[Hard]
  1. Blankets: 00:10:670 (1,2) - 00:11:411 (2,3) - 00:13:633 (1,2) - 00:29:604 (5,6) - 00:40:031 (3,4) - 00:54:665 (1,2) fixed? xd
  2. 01:04:726 (4,5) - usually you have stack "slider-end + note" with 1/2 jump, there you have 1/4 slider and with most cases people miss this pattern at this point I'm already assuming that the players would be able to go with the flow, rather than remembering the pattern
  3. 01:12:226 (1,1) - second slider should be rotated because it's a bit unreadable and monotonous in my opinion hmm changed a bit myself
Nice polished set, get your kudosustar! thanks :o
Good luck!
Thanks for the modd
Will hopefully update them along with Abe Nana's mod tonight :p
Yahuri

Kirisakiii wrote:

soft-hitfinish2.wav have so big delay, it's unrankable. Try to ask anybody for fix it. tried from different sources a couple of times already and im not exactly sure where can you get ones that are not delayed :/

[*] BG resolution looks unrankable too. Try this out. lol i checked the bg quality and theyre both the same. this current resolution wouldnt be unrankable anyway?
i dont know if i gave you this before but i took it from the same source as whatever else i gave you soft-hitfinish2 i cant check delay though so idk if its ok

Background images must not exceed a width of 1920 pixels and a height of 1200 pixels. Images with lower vertical or horizontal resolutions than that of the player's will be upscaled to fit the entire screen. ranking criteria
the bg size they sent is 1920x1200, the one we have right now is 1091x768, which is still smaller than the old ranking criteria (1366x768)
the one we have isnt unrankable, but we might as well use the maximum size

also update my diff lol (last post)
Topic Starter
Kirisakiii
@Yahuri the .wav link you gave was some kind of troll link loll but oh well I may or may not have took another file from a different source idk :? I'm just hoping that this time it'll work

Hard was changed a lot, aesthetic-wise :/
Updated all diffs!
BG changed!


Abe Nana wrote:

  1. If you want a better quality video, I can help it
will PM you more about it ^^
neonat
General

00:47:714 - could implement drum whistle here on all diffs

Easy

00:43:690 (2,3,4) - I think emphasis could be done better without the repeat slider at 00:43:690 (2) - just have a regular slider until 00:44:056 so that you can have another slider start at 00:44:422 where the vocal pitch is increasing. The next major point is then 00:45:153 and 00:45:519 which should be clickable:
01:08:568 (3,4) - why extend over the beat at 01:08:934 though, could be implemented if you change 01:08:568 (3,4) to 2 sliders, 01:09:300 is also a good place to click:
01:31:983 (3) - similarly for this:

Normal

00:45:885 (1) - could bend the 3rd portion of it more to the left, the bend made on the 2nd red node is really small, it contrasts with the 1st one much more sharply
01:10:397 (2,3) - on level axis like 01:07:470 (2,3) - ? having 01:10:946 (3) slightly lower seems odd here
01:42:044 (2) - the finish on the slider end could be removed, it's quite excessive

Hard

00:29:787 (6,7) -
00:35:641 (4,5) -
00:35:641 (4,5) -
00:38:568 (6,7) -
00:44:422 (4,5) -
so apparently after the first 2 slider - circle pattern 00:20:824 (3,4) - 00:26:678 (5,6) - the rest stack as seen above ^ but it doesn't really make sense to suddenly change to doing so, it would be better to choose one pattern?
00:53:934 (2,3) - I think it makes a better effect with stacking these, like what you did in Normal.
01:08:934 (6,7) - I don't think stacking these work that well...
01:17:897 (4) - though it may be where the person starts to hold the vocals, the cymbals at 01:18:080 (1) - have more impact, the spacing between 01:17:897 (4,1) should be bigger than the psacing between 01:17:714 (3,4) - so rather, I think the spacing change should swap
01:30:885 (2,3) - is this imperfect stack intentional, it's not seen at 01:07:470 (2,3) - which is similar, you also don't use imperfect stacks other than here either
01:39:665 (1,2,3) - rather than a bigger spacing for one, I think having the, evenly spaced but spaced out more from each compared to previously, works nicely and looks and plays better, so maybe all 2.1x spacing
01:42:043 (2) - finish on slider start? Like Normal and Easy

Novel

00:08:819 (3) - whistle on slider start?
01:25:397 (1,2,3,4) - seems more distant from the songs using this pattern here though, while it might be one that can be seen earlier on, it doesn't match as nicely to the music here. Like the vocals starting on 01:25:397 and 01:25:946 - making it better locations for the sliders:


Good Luck!
Yahuri

neonat wrote:

General

00:47:714 - could implement drum whistle here on all diffs done

Novel

00:08:819 (3) - whistle on slider start? sure
01:25:397 (1,2,3,4) - seems more distant from the songs using this pattern here though, while it might be one that can be seen earlier on, it doesn't match as nicely to the music here. Like the vocals starting on 01:25:397 and 01:25:946 - making it better locations for the sliders:
while i do agree that this pattern matches vocals better, i cant use it because it means there'll be a clap on a sliderend 01:26:129 (which i never do in this diff). changed 01:23:934 (1) - into a 1/2 slider though

Good Luck!
Thanks!
pls dont delete my spinner next time lol
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307,360,89239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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339,144,96190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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370,28,96922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,198,97104,6,0,B|217:124|217:124|254:55,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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110,112,99665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
231,198,99848,1,8,0:0:0:0:
66,302,100031,5,6,0:0:0:0:
383,135,101495,6,0,B|382:104|361:81|361:81|331:75|303:90,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,104604,12,0,107348,0:0:0:0:
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