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fourfolium - SAKURA Skip

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Boruma
90 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Boruma
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, May 19, 2017 at 4:23:54 AM

Artist: fourfolium
Title: SAKURA Skip
Source: New Game!
Tags: new game anime フォーフォリウム ニューゲーム opening tv size takeda yuuki 高田憂希 suzukaze aoba 涼風青葉 yamaguchi megumi frost
BPM: 165
Filesize: 2937kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.48 stars, 96 notes)
  2. Frost's Extra (5.29 stars, 401 notes)
  3. Hard (2.75 stars, 191 notes)
  4. Insane (4.44 stars, 303 notes)
  5. Normal (2.06 stars, 127 notes)
Download: fourfolium - SAKURA Skip
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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New Game! opening

Easy: 100%
Normal: 100%
Hard: 100%
Insane: 100%
Frost's Extra: 100%
Last edited by Boruma , edited 41 times in total.
871
191 posts
Joined August 2011
871
Sup~

Sorry it might be rude, but rythm on your maps are too bad. Though map placement is fine ;).

Try focusing on this :
1) Your sliders look awful. Try changing their form or reduce dots in them (sorry donno how this thing called)
2) Try changing hitsounds. This one are bad.
3) Reconsider rythm on every your difficulty. You have too much random breakes. For exeple on insene its : 00:05:067, there sould be note here. 00:08:886 whats wrong with this pause ? Atleast use sliders at moments like this. 00:07:976 there shouldn't be triple there. 00:20:522 this one is totaly not place dor breaking rythm. Well hope u got me.
4) Offset on this map should be on 00:00:340 or 00:00:295 ( i'd prefer the last one. try both of them )

That's all. Actualy I think your map is unreadable so if you are trying to get it ranked you will probably have to fully remake all your difficulties.
( Poor 'easy' dif u look so awful T_T )
( BTW there is ranked version of this song. Try to play it or open in edit and look it trough. It might help)
Boruma
90 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Boruma

871 wrote:

Sup~

Sorry it might be rude, but rythm on your maps are too bad. Though map placement is fine ;).

Try focusing on this :
1) Your sliders look awful. Try changing their form or reduce dots in them (sorry donno how this thing called)
2) Try changing hitsounds. This one are bad.
3) Reconsider rythm on every your difficulty. You have too much random breakes. For exeple on insene its : 00:05:067, there sould be note here. 00:08:886 whats wrong with this pause ? Atleast use sliders at moments like this. 00:07:976 there shouldn't be triple there. 00:20:522 this one is totaly not place dor breaking rythm. Well hope u got me.
4) Offset on this map should be on 00:00:340 or 00:00:295 ( i'd prefer the last one. try both of them )

That's all. Actualy I think your map is unreadable so if you are trying to get it ranked you will probably have to fully remake all your difficulties.
( Poor 'easy' dif u look so awful T_T )
( BTW there is ranked version of this song. Try to play it or open in edit and look it trough. It might help)

Retimed all difficulties. Remapped bits and parts of each map to make it flow better. Fixed more of the sliders' shapes.
-Latias-
589 posts
Joined November 2015
-Latias-
Just saw the map, so I thought I would mod it :)

Frost's Extra
00:00:976(7) triple doesn't need to be here, imo sounds better as just a two stack
00:01:977(3) put on 00:03:068(3,4,5) triple stack
00:05:249(1,1,1) these sliders aren't straight and are curved. Make it look better with making it straight
00:11:977(3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) this stream is inconsistent. Make it more consistent with ds to also make it look and play better
00:13:613(2,7) and 00:14:522(3) if you compare these two jumps, then 3 is more higher up than these other circle's. Make 3 lower
00:17:341(2,2) put the second two where 00:16:886 is
00:18:886 doesn't need to be nc here
00:20:340(2,6) stack 6 on slider 2's end
00:20:704(3,5) stack these two
00:23:431(3) 3 is making the jumps bigger than they need to be. Move it closer to 00:23:613(1) slider end
00:23:631(4) you could either move it more to the right to make better consistent jumps, or put on 00:23:977(1) on the begging circle or the middle
00:25:613(1,5) stack these
00:26:128(2,4) make a blanket while still keeping the star jumps
00:27:613(2) stack with 00:25:613(1)
00:31:068(4) stack with 00:29:977(2)
00:33:249(1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1) overmapped jumps. Maybe you were trying to stretch for the extra difficulty mark? doesn't need to be exact 5.1
00:37:068(5,1) blanket better
00:37:977(3,4,5) stack with 00:37:068(5)
00:39:068(2,3,4) could change for repeating slider. just a thought, dont have to do it
00:40:886(3,4,5) really close with 00:40:158(1). Distance them out
00:47:249(1,2,3,4) it would sound better if you add a fast repeating slider
00:53:249(5) stack with 00:54:158(3)
00:57:431(7) move more up to make it more of a star pattern
01:01:431(2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) again with inconsistent streams. I see its intentional but it doesn't look good at all and doesn't play that well either
01:03:068(2) make it in the middle of ^ time
01:03:249(3) stack with 01:04:158(4,5,6)

too lazy to mod rest xd

Good luck ;)
Maerthyu
3 posts
Joined August 2015
Maerthyu
Insane
00:01:795 (3,4,5) - A 1/4 beat is missing at 2:158, maybe if you want you can attach it to the slider on the 5
00:07:976 (1,2,3) - I can see the sound you're going for and using a triple (that sort of trumpet noise), but it doesn't flow too well with the music and seems to come out of nowhere. Also for a map of this difficulty level, I don't think you should use spaced triples sparingly. I think your spacing of the triples also has somewhat to do with the intensity of the song and that part doesn't really warrant that kind of spacing
00:08:158 (3,4) - The slider at 08:340 if anything should be a half beat early, and you can use an inherited timing section to decrease the sound of the sliderend if you don't think it fits. That whole sequence would sound better if it were like this: http://puu.sh/qUFPn/80c88f0212.jpg
00:08:886 (5) - You have an extended sound so a single beat doesn't really justify it, place a slider that is extended for that portion of the beat or even a back and forth one, but don't just leave empty silence
00:11:067 (6) - Another awkward pause, not too sure myself what to do to fix it, but I'm sure if you looked at different songs and maps you could find a lot of things to fill in for that
00:13:431 (4,5,1) - 13:795 ish Move the slider 1/2 beat later, and put another circle there instead in front of the 4 and 5 like 1/2 beat triple, and you'll be good
00:16:704 (5,1) - Changing this slider to a circle first and then put the 1 slider a 1/2 beat later after the 5 up to 17:249 would flow better
00:17:431 (2,3) - You don't need a 1/4 double, move the 3 another 1/4 beat later
00:20:522 (9,1) - You're going to have another pause that still has music that can have beats, so add another circle to count for the "ga!" at the end of "kimi ga" and then at 21:067 you can add a circle before the slider since there's a sort of beat there, but whether or not you want this beat is completely up to you
00:23:249 (7,8,9,10) - Dunno where you got the 7 and 8 from, doesn't follow any beats, if anything you should just keep the 9th one, add a beat after that, and lead it into the slider like this: http://puu.sh/qUH1A/9408178046.jpg
00:24:340 (1) - Random long slider, held a bit too long and then it follows with a slider that's too early, slider, circle, slider is a lot better, so reduce the 1 slider by a half beat, add a circle, and then leave the slider like this: http://puu.sh/qUHch/1f3cb58d4f.jpg
00:25:431 (3,4,5,1,2) - The triple before is fine, but this double is weird, take the single circle out and you'll see for yourself
00:27:613 (5,6,7,8) - This triple is weird, slow down to 50% you'll hear it's sort of like two beats but it's stuck between three 1/4 ticks,so the triple works, but you'll find a spaced triple isn't that way to go and a solid triple is much better
00:29:067 (5,6) - 29:158 This is where you should be setting up for a triple, place a circle here, move the 6 slider up 1/4 beat and put a circle there, so you have a double that leads into a slider
00:30:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just wanted to say this part was cool, seems really flowy along with the song, and maybe a place where the spaced triple is ok? Though I just avoid them in general
00:32:340 (3) - Perfect place for a triple leading into a slider, it sounds nice and flows too :http://puu.sh/qUI6s/3b5d180503.jpg
00:32:886 (4) - Seems like extremely lazy mapping, maybe it just fits the song, up to you what you want to do
00:35:976 (1,2,3) - Get rid of the '2' circle and extend the '1' slider into that beat
00:37:249 (5,1,2,3) - Haven't been focusing on this because there's a lot of technical errors but you can make a new combo here
00:37:249 (5,1,2,3) - First get rid of the triple since it doesn't belong. Put two circles each 1/4 beat from each right next to the '5' slider, and attach them to the end of the 5 slider since that's a good triple and some variety
00:37:795 (3,4) - With the triple gone and the two circles attached to the slider in the previous correction, you can put a note here, move the slider next to it to 38:158, another 1/2 beat after the first circle can be another circle (37:976), and then the slider sounds much better than a forced triple : http://puu.sh/qUIMV/22b4d15b95.jpg

will do rest later
Frost
182 posts
Joined March 2014
Frost

-Latias- wrote:

Just saw the map, so I thought I would mod it :)

Frost's Extra
00:00:976(7) triple doesn't need to be here, imo sounds better as just a two stack But there's a triple in the song, listen on 25% speed :s
00:01:977(3) put on 00:03:068(3,4,5) triple stack I like the current flow better, plus, no one will really appreciate the stack while playing because the jump note will be gone a while before the triple appears.
00:05:249(1,1,1) these sliders aren't straight and are curved. Make it look better with making it straight Sure, I guess.
00:11:977(3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) this stream is inconsistent. Make it more consistent with ds to also make it look and play better This is completely intentional. I like the extra buildup it provides and it plays just fine imo.
00:13:613(2,7) and 00:14:522(3) if you compare these two jumps, then 3 is more higher up than these other circle's. Make 3 lower
00:17:341(2,2) put the second two where 00:16:886 is 3 is higher on purpose, I just did it for flow.
00:18:886 doesn't need to be nc here It does, the SV goes up by 0.25x, the NC is to signal that.
00:20:340(2,6) stack 6 on slider 2's end Sure, it did need to be moved up, so why not.
00:20:704(3,5) stack these two I overlapped them intentionally, it's just my view on aesthetic. Clearly, you enjoy stacking much more than I do. Just a difference in taste, not much play difference.
00:23:431(3) 3 is making the jumps bigger than they need to be. Move it closer to 00:23:613(1) slider end I believe the intensity at this part calls for more spacing.
00:23:631(4) you could either move it more to the right to make better consistent jumps, or put on 00:23:977(1) on the begging circle or the middle It feels nicer to end where it does currently imo, it flows into the next slider well because it's near the y-axis.
00:25:613(1,5) stack these Sure?
00:26:128(2,4) make a blanket while still keeping the star jumps Too much blanketing imo, 2 is already being blanketed by 1.
00:27:613(2) stack with 00:25:613(1) I prefer its current position, plus, there's too much stacking on that one spot.
00:31:068(4) stack with 00:29:977(2) This is supposed to keep the pattern at 00:29:249 (2,2,2) going.
00:33:249(1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1) overmapped jumps. Maybe you were trying to stretch for the extra difficulty mark? doesn't need to be exact 5.1 But this is the most intense part of the song, I think the spacing is reasonable. And there's only like six 1/2 jumps here, the 1/1 are even easier.
00:37:068(5,1) blanket better K.
00:37:977(3,4,5) stack with 00:37:068(5) No real reason to stack, flows better as is now.
00:39:068(2,3,4) could change for repeating slider. just a thought, dont have to do it It doesn't really make a difference, but I just personally like to involve spaced triples in my maps, I think they're fun, even if they're a bit more challenging. No right or wrong answer here.
00:40:886(3,4,5) really close with 00:40:158(1). Distance them out Meh, they're not touching, so I think it's fine. If it triggers a bunch of people, I could change, but I see no issue with it.
00:47:249(1,2,3,4) it would sound better if you add a fast repeating slider I don't think it makes a difference, and I like the flow of this stream.
00:53:249(5) stack with 00:54:158(3) I guess, the flow is slightly better.
00:57:431(7) move more up to make it more of a star pattern It's close enough to a star currently, and I think the extra momentum is nice to prepare for the kickslider after.
01:01:431(2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) again with inconsistent streams. I see its intentional but it doesn't look good at all and doesn't play that well either I agree that it's not the most aesthetically pleasing style, but again, it adds a sort of "rising intensity" and it plays 100% fine for me.
01:03:068(2) make it in the middle of ^ time Feels kinda jerky to me, the momentum from 1 to 2 is much different than from 2 to 3.
01:03:249(3) stack with 01:04:158(4,5,6) Again, the spacing feels weird.

too lazy to mod rest xd

Good luck ;)
Thanks so much for the mod! :)

Updated
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TitleUnicode:SAKURA Skip
Artist:fourfolium
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Creator:Boruma
Version:Frost's Extra
Source:New Game!
Tags:new game anime フォーフォリウム ニューゲーム opening tv size takeda yuuki 高田憂希 suzukaze aoba 涼風青葉 yamaguchi megumi
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Last edited by Frost , edited 2 times in total.
Boruma
90 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Boruma

Maerthyu wrote:

[box=Insane]00:01:795 (3,4,5) - A 1/4 beat is missing at 2:158, maybe if you want you can attach it to the slider on the 5 Added hitcircle before slider.

00:07:976 (1,2,3) - I can see the sound you're going for and using a triple (that sort of trumpet noise), but it doesn't flow too well with the music and seems to come out of nowhere. Also for a map of this difficulty level, I don't think you should use spaced triples sparingly. I think your spacing of the triples also has somewhat to do with the intensity of the song and that part doesn't really warrant that kind of spacing Although I do agree that the spacing of triples needed to be closer, I disagree that it comes out of nowhere.
00:08:158 (3,4) - The slider at 08:340 if anything should be a half beat early, and you can use an inherited timing section to decrease the sound of the sliderend if you don't think it fits. That whole sequence would sound better if it were like this: http://puu.sh/qUFPn/80c88f0212.jpg Edited slider to half a beat earlier. It's now part of the triple. Also added two hit circles that play after it.
00:08:886 (5) - You have an extended sound so a single beat doesn't really justify it, place a slider that is extended for that portion of the beat or even a back and forth one, but don't just leave empty silence It seems fine as is. I'll change it if someone else says something about it.
00:11:067 (6) - Another awkward pause, not too sure myself what to do to fix it, but I'm sure if you looked at different songs and maps you could find a lot of things to fill in for that There's a slider there. I don't see how that's an awkward pause.
00:13:431 (4,5,1) - 13:795 ish Move the slider 1/2 beat later, and put another circle there instead in front of the 4 and 5 like 1/2 beat triple, and you'll be good Making the slider one half beat later would ruin the pattern I created. Unless someone else says something about it, I'm not likely to change it.
00:16:704 (5,1) - Changing this slider to a circle first and then put the 1 slider a 1/2 beat later after the 5 up to 17:249 would flow better Changed slider to 2 hitcircles, but putting slider a half beat later doesn't seem like it'd flow better.
00:17:431 (2,3) - You don't need a 1/4 double, move the 3 another 1/4 beat later Changed it.
00:20:522 (9,1) - You're going to have another pause that still has music that can have beats, so add another circle to count for the "ga!" at the end of "kimi ga" and then at 21:067 you can add a circle before the slider since there's a sort of beat there, but whether or not you want this beat is completely up to you Remapped that section.
00:23:249 (7,8,9,10) - Dunno where you got the 7 and 8 from, doesn't follow any beats, if anything you should just keep the 9th one, add a beat after that, and lead it into the slider like this: http://puu.sh/qUH1A/9408178046.jpg Changed the separate triple to become attached to slider as a double.
00:24:340 (1) - Random long slider, held a bit too long and then it follows with a slider that's too early, slider, circle, slider is a lot better, so reduce the 1 slider by a half beat, add a circle, and then leave the slider like this: http://puu.sh/qUHch/1f3cb58d4f.jpg It's fine as is.
00:25:431 (3,4,5,1,2) - The triple before is fine, but this double is weird, take the single circle out and you'll see for yourself Changed it to a slider.
00:27:613 (5,6,7,8) - This triple is weird, slow down to 50% you'll hear it's sort of like two beats but it's stuck between three 1/4 ticks,so the triple works, but you'll find a spaced triple isn't that way to go and a solid triple is much better It keeps to the rhythm sufficiently enough at the moment.
00:29:067 (5,6) - 29:158 This is where you should be setting up for a triple, place a circle here, move the 6 slider up 1/4 beat and put a circle there, so you have a double that leads into a slider Maybe I'll add it later on, but right now it would just seem more like it's overmapped more than necessary.
00:30:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just wanted to say this part was cool, seems really flowy along with the song, and maybe a place where the spaced triple is ok? Though I just avoid them in general Got rid of spaced triple.
00:32:340 (3) - Perfect place for a triple leading into a slider, it sounds nice and flows too :http://puu.sh/qUI6s/3b5d180503.jpg Judging from how close the notes are compared to the time spacing, that would be awkward to play.
00:32:886 (4) - Seems like extremely lazy mapping, maybe it just fits the song, up to you what you want to do Unless I figure out a better way to map it, then I'll keep it as is.
00:35:976 (1,2,3) - Get rid of the '2' circle and extend the '1' slider into that beat Seems fine as is, but I might change it later on
00:37:249 (5,1,2,3) - Haven't been focusing on this because there's a lot of technical errors but you can make a new combo here Made a new combo.
00:37:249 (5,1,2,3) - First get rid of the triple since it doesn't belong. Put two circles each 1/4 beat from each right next to the '5' slider, and attach them to the end of the 5 slider since that's a good triple and some variety I feel like it fits the pattern I set up earlier in the song, so unless it really makes the beatmap worse, I'm probably not going to change it.
00:37:795 (3,4) - With the triple gone and the two circles attached to the slider in the previous correction, you can put a note here, move the slider next to it to 38:158, another 1/2 beat after the first circle can be another circle (37:976), and then the slider sounds much better than a forced triple : http://puu.sh/qUIMV/22b4d15b95.jpg The spacing kinda looks odd though...

will do rest later
Thanks for the mod. :)
Infinicy
126 posts
Joined July 2014
Infinicy
Hello from my modding queue <3

Starting with the hardest difficulty because I'm weird like that :P You may choose to do everything that I say could be improved, or nothing at all. It's all up to you c:

Frost's Extra

00:23:249 (2)
I personally would remove this note, as there isn't really a vocal at that point.

01:12:704 (2)
^

01:24:340 (2)
^

Well done with this difficulty :D

Insane

00:13:795 (1)
This slider should be moved to 00:13:977. You can delete the note on 00:14:340 as well to make room for it.

00:32:886 (4)
This slider could end at 00:33:249 to make room for the next fix down below

00:33:431 - 00:34:340
There could be jumpy circles here.

01:00:522
A note could be added here

01:06:522 (6)
This isn't really mapped to anything

01:06:704
Note could be added here

01:07:613
A slider could run from 01:07:613 to 01:07:795. It would also replace the note at 01:07:795 (1)

01:17:795 (7)
This slider should end at 01:17:795 (7)

01:18:340
Add a note here

01:25:431 (1,2)
These two sliders don't really fit to that part of the song. Maybe make them small jumps or small sliders?

01:27:613 (6)
The slider should be a single circle and end where the slider started.

Hard

00:07:976 (5)
This slider should end at 00:08:158

00:08:704 (7)
^ Should end at 00:08:886

00:11:067 (3)
Replace this slider with a single hit circle where the slider starts.

00:13:795 (1)
This slider should end at 00:13:977. Then put a hit circle at 00:14:158

00:16:158
Did you forget to put a note here?

00:18:522 (2)
Move this slider to where this hit circle is 00:18:340 (1) then move the hit circle where the slider used to end at 00:18:886 (2)

00:20:158 (7)
Slider should end at 00:20:340 then put a hit circle at 00:20:522

00:21:977 (3)
Should end at 00:22:158 then put a hit circle at 00:22:340

00:24:340 - 01:27:613
Every single other mistake is a slider ending where it shouldn't and preventing a circle from being there. Just look for mistakes between the two time periods above and you should be fine for this diff.

Good luck in getting ranked!!!
Frost
182 posts
Joined March 2014
Frost

DaTopBull wrote:

Frost's Extra

00:23:249 (2)
I personally would remove this note, as there isn't really a vocal at that point. I was following the trumpet(or trumpet-like?) sound in the background, I prioritize bg music over vocals. I see what you're saying, it makes sense, but I think it would feel unnatural because this is just how my mapping style is.

01:12:704 (2)
^ ^

01:24:340 (2)
^ ^

Well done with this difficulty :D Thank you! <3
No change here.
Boruma
90 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Boruma
SPOILER

DaTopBull wrote:

Hello from my modding queue <3

Starting with the hardest difficulty because I'm weird like that :P You may choose to do everything that I say could be improved, or nothing at all. It's all up to you c:

Frost's Extra

00:23:249 (2)
I personally would remove this note, as there isn't really a vocal at that point.

01:12:704 (2)
^

01:24:340 (2)
^

Well done with this difficulty :D

Insane

00:13:795 (1)
This slider should be moved to 00:13:977. You can delete the note on 00:14:340 as well to make room for it. Done.

00:32:886 (4)
This slider could end at 00:33:249 to make room for the next fix down below Shortened slider.

00:33:431 - 00:34:340
There could be jumpy circles here. Added jumps.

01:00:522
A note could be added here I don't see a reason to add a note there.

01:06:522 (6)
This isn't really mapped to anything Deleted note.

01:06:704
Note could be added here Added hitcircle.

01:07:613
A slider could run from 01:07:613 to 01:07:795. It would also replace the note at 01:07:795 (1) I don't see a way to fit it in with my positioning at the moment.

01:17:795 (7)
This slider should end at 01:17:795 (7) At the moment, it seems fine.

01:18:340
Add a note here Added.

01:25:431 (1,2)
These two sliders don't really fit to that part of the song. Maybe make them small jumps or small sliders?

01:27:613 (6)
The slider should be a single circle and end where the slider started. It doesn't feel like the song ends there though.

Hard

00:07:976 (5)
This slider should end at 00:08:158 Shortened slider and added similar pattern to the next sequence.

00:08:704 (7)
^ Should end at 00:08:886

00:11:067 (3)
Replace this slider with a single hit circle where the slider starts. Done.

00:13:795 (1)
This slider should end at 00:13:977. Then put a hit circle at 00:14:158 Done.

00:16:158
Did you forget to put a note here? Yes. Thank you for noticing that.

00:18:522 (2)
Move this slider to where this hit circle is 00:18:340 (1) then move The hit circle where the slider used to end at 00:18:886 (2) Done.

00:20:158 (7)
Slider should end at 00:20:340 then put a hit circle at 00:20:522 I shortened the slider, but the 2nd slider seems alright imo.

00:21:977 (3)
Should end at 00:22:158 then put a hit circle at 00:22:340 Right now, it seems fine in its current state though it does need some fine tuning in positioning.

00:24:340 - 01:27:613
Every single other mistake is a slider ending where it shouldn't and preventing a circle from being there. Just look for mistakes between the two time periods above and you should be fine for this diff.

Good luck in getting ranked!!!

Thanks for the mod. :)
Jonis221
288 posts
Joined October 2013
Jonis221
Hey, Boruma, I have some improvements :)

Easy
00:02:340 (2,3) - I think this rhythm a bit hard on easy diff, how about making somethink like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6036940
00:08:886 (3) - you can remove this circle and make longer slider
00:12:522 (1,3) - you can make these sliders a bit shorter
00:15:431 (1,2,3,4) - Try here also somethink more simple (You can use this rhythm for example http://i.imgur.com/49FPBEa.png&#41;
There is a lot more parts like this!

00:28:522 (5) - Try make this slider make more symmetrical, use a grid snap to do it (for example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6037053 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6037945 )
00:44:704 (4) - Also you can make more simple shape sliders
00:46:886 (6,7,1) - try make this part greater, move this slider away from those circles https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6037769
00:53:431 (1,2) - you can try make those sliders more similar ( for example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6037812 )
01:27:068 (3) - Make this slider shorter to 01:27:613 - , or maybe try use this rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6038049

*I think now you know what have to check more.

*I don't think is a good idea, use slider speed changes on easy levels. (On easy and normal diff)

*Also check same stuff on normal diff.

Good luck!
Boruma
90 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Boruma

Jonis221 wrote:

Hey, Boruma, I have some improvements :)

Easy
00:02:340 (2,3) - I think this rhythm a bit hard on easy diff, how about making somethink like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6036940 Fixed it.
00:08:886 (3) - you can remove this circle and make longer slider The hitcircle after, for me, is needed there due to defining a different note in the song.
00:12:522 (1,3) - you can make these sliders a bit shorter Done.
00:15:431 (1,2,3,4) - Try here also somethink more simple (You can use this rhythm for example http://i.imgur.com/49FPBEa.png&#41;
There is a lot more parts like this! Made sliders shorter except in two circumstances.

00:28:522 (5) - Try make this slider make more symmetrical, use a grid snap to do it (for example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6037053 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6037945 ) Done.
00:44:704 (4) - Also you can make more simple shape sliders Done.
00:46:886 (6,7,1) - try make this part greater, move this slider away from those circles https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6037769 Done.
00:53:431 (1,2) - you can try make those sliders more similar ( for example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6037812 ) Made them a bit more similar?
01:27:068 (3) - Make this slider shorter to 01:27:613 - , or maybe try use this rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6038049 I think it's fine as is.

*I think now you know what have to check more.

*I don't think is a good idea, use slider speed changes on easy levels. (On easy and normal diff)

*Also check same stuff on normal diff.

Good luck!
Thanks for the mod. :)
hi-mei
784 posts
Joined June 2014
hi-mei
eyyy modreq

Easy:
00:03:249 (3) - this slider is placed on the weird sound, it feels like the melody phrase is starting here 00:03:068 - therefore you could move (3) to that time, and make the (2) a bit shorter.
00:08:158 (3,4,5) - overlap and ds in easy diff? o_O
00:24:340 (1) - ^
00:27:068 (4) - this shape is inconsistent in comparison with previous ones
00:19:249 (5) - weird time placement, i think you could put a note here 00:18:886 - and remove this slider 00:18:340 (4) - , and put a note here 00:18:340 -
the way it plays and sounds is just felt wrong for me.
00:24:340 (1) - this slider shud be finished 00:24:340 (1) - here probably? easy diff?
00:28:522 (5) - make this more accurately, pplace these white anchors in a mirrored way
00:28:522 (5) - this slider shape looks bad, just use simple shapes in easy diff >_> like this one 00:31:431 (2) - is good
00:35:249 (6,1) - overlap?
00:35:977 (1,2,3) - ds? slider shapes? ^
00:38:886 (1,2,3) - overlaps? cmon dude..
00:41:795 (1,2,3) - overlaps ;w;
00:49:977 (2,3,4) - overlap? ;w;
ok basically ure using overlaps all over the whole thing.
but i honestly think that you shud avoid these things in easy diff.
i wont stop on that issue anymore.
01:03:613 (2) - this slider shud be here? 01:03:431 - check the melody? ;w;
01:07:795 (1) - this shud be ended here? 01:08:340 - >_>
01:11:613 (2,3,4,5) - structure?
01:17:431 (4,5,6) - ^ move the 5 to the top right for a bit? ._.

I think im done for now.
Boruma
90 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Boruma

-himei wrote:

eyyy modreq

Easy:
00:03:249 (3) - this slider is placed on the weird sound, it feels like the melody phrase is starting here 00:03:068 - therefore you could move (3) to that time, and make the (2) a bit shorter. I feel like the previous person's suggestion to make it easier is better, so I'm leaving as is.
00:08:158 (3,4,5) - overlap and ds in easy diff? o_O Fixed overlap.
00:24:340 (1) - ^ Seems fine as is.
00:27:068 (4) - this shape is inconsistent in comparison with previous ones Fixed.
00:19:249 (5) - weird time placement, i think you could put a note here 00:18:886 - and remove this slider 00:18:340 (4) - , and put a note here 00:18:340 -
the way it plays and sounds is just felt wrong for me. Done.
00:24:340 (1) - this slider shud be finished 00:24:340 (1) - here probably? easy diff? Seems fine as is.
00:28:522 (5) - make this more accurately, pplace these white anchors in a mirrored way Possibly fixed?
00:28:522 (5) - this slider shape looks bad, just use simple shapes in easy diff >_> like this one 00:31:431 (2) - is good Seems fine.
00:35:249 (6,1) - overlap? I believe I fixed it.
00:35:977 (1,2,3) - ds? slider shapes? ^ Fixed.
00:38:886 (1,2,3) - overlaps? cmon dude.. I kinda changed positions of sliders, so now I don't see any overlap...
00:41:795 (1,2,3) - overlaps ;w; There's no overlap here. The slider is long gone.
00:49:977 (2,3,4) - overlap? ;w; Fixed.
ok basically ure using overlaps all over the whole thing.
but i honestly think that you shud avoid these things in easy diff.
i wont stop on that issue anymore.
01:03:613 (2) - this slider shud be here? 01:03:431 - check the melody? ;w; Fixed.
01:07:795 (1) - this shud be ended here? 01:08:340 - >_> Fixed.
01:11:613 (2,3,4,5) - structure? Fixed.
01:17:431 (4,5,6) - ^ move the 5 to the top right for a bit? ._. Fixed.

I think im done for now.
Thanks for the mod. :)
Agatsu
Beatmap Nominator
1,145 posts
Joined January 2015
Agatsu
hi from q

  • Insane

  1. 00:03:795 (3) - use less spacing for a lower volume section
  2. 00:04:340 (2) - should have same spacing as 00:01:431 (2) -
  3. 00:04:977 - missing note
  4. 00:06:522 -
    SPOILER
  5. 00:07:431 -
    SPOILER
  6. 00:09:431 (1,2) - swap nc
  7. 00:11:977 - 1/4 stream till 00:12:522 -
  8. 00:14:795 - missing note
  9. 00:16:886 - 1/1 slider till 00:17:249 -
  10. 00:19:067 (4,1) - ctrl + g
  11. 00:23:067 (2) - change to a circle instead
  12. 00:24:340 -
    SPOILER
  13. 00:30:886 (3,4,5,6,7) - overmapped stream

shitmod ends here

modded 30 seconds as requested~
Boruma
90 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Boruma

Agatsu wrote:

hi from q

  • Insane

  1. 00:03:795 (3) - use less spacing for a lower volume section Done.
  2. 00:04:340 (2) - should have same spacing as 00:01:431 (2) - Done.
  3. 00:04:977 - missing note Added
  4. 00:06:522 -
    SPOILER
    Fixed.
  5. 00:07:431 -
    SPOILER
    Fixed.
  6. 00:09:431 (1,2) - swap nc Fixed
  7. 00:11:977 - 1/4 stream till 00:12:522 - I feel like putting a stream at that point rather than at 30 seconds would be unnecessarily hard.
  8. 00:14:795 - missing note Added
  9. 00:16:886 - 1/1 slider till 00:17:249 - Fixed.
  10. 00:19:067 (4,1) - ctrl + g Fixed.
  11. 00:23:067 (2) - change to a circle instead Fixed.
  12. 00:24:340 -
    SPOILER
    Fixed.
  13. 00:30:886 (3,4,5,6,7) - overmapped stream
Seems fine as is.

shitmod ends here

modded 30 seconds as requested~
Thanks for the mod. :)
Karaki_old_1
Karaki_old_1
may i gd?
Karaki_old_1
Karaki_old_1
may i gd? :D
Boruma
90 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Boruma

Y_Natsu_Y wrote:

may i gd? :D
Currently not accepting guest difficulties.
Kotori-Chan
496 posts
Joined February 2014
Kotori-Chan
From modreqs#
And because i love that opening so damn much......

Easy

Fix that DS error http://puu.sh/vWp9f/15ec17f977.png and tag problem, DS in easy and normal has to be the same trough the whole map

00:09:795 (5,6) - maybe add a clap on the slider end and on 6 ?
00:13:977 (3,2) - dont really like this overlap what you could is to let 00:16:340 (2) - start and the end of 00:13:977 (3) -
00:21:249 - why having that starting there and not here 00:21:431 - where the big cymbal is ?
00:24:340 (1) - you could place this somewhere around x321 y134 to fix ugly overlap with 00:22:704 (3) - ofc you need to adjust 00:25:613 (2) - if you do so
00:27:068 (1) - trough the whole map....why are some things hitsounded and some not ? thats really really weird like this for example 00:31:431 (2,3) - you could put a clap on slider end the note
00:32:886 (4) - i would avoid 2 reverse arrows in an easy diff
00:35:977 - i also think having sv change isnt allowed in an easy diff, you better ask a bn about it

Well i dont really think i need to mod the rest, there are really alot things you could improve like slider shapes and object placement because they are just really really weird ;w; I mean if you have a look at the ranked maps of this you should notice what i mean

Normal

Well after seeing this http://puu.sh/vWq1k/f48875febb.png i dont really think i even need to check the rest, in normal diff DS has to be the same trough the whole map aswell ;w;

Hard

00:02:704 (4) - you REALLY could make this slider more beautiful by making it the gap nicely round shaped D: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8138550
00:05:249 (1) - you could just copy paste this slider, would look more polished
Oh and also SV change needs NC
00:08:522 (2,3) - could add a clap
00:11:795 (2) - could copy paste this slider aswell
00:13:067 (2,3,4) - why the sudden ds increase ?
00:16:340 (1,2,3) - this looks really unpolished and just poorly structured like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8138571 it would look alot better
00:17:613 (4,1) - that overlap is really ugly ;w;


Well...~you do seem to understand the rhythm of the song but this map really lacks strucuture imo, there are many ugly overlaps and the DS like in the hard insane and actually every diff absolutely doesnt make sense and i really cant find a strucuture.
Sry to say but i dont think this map is ready for ranking yet since it really lacks of structure, the rhyhtm isnt actually that bad
All i can actually recommend is that you have a look at pishi's https://osu.ppy.sh/u/3178418 flow,structure videos, maybe it also helps you to have a look at the ranked mapsets, i'm sure you will notice why i said your map lacks structure

But still~ Good luck with this <3
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