osuplayer111 wrote:

[ShaggoNormal]

03:35:129 (x) - Remove this unused green line.

[Hard]

00:13:701 (1) - Silence this spinner, it would sound much better than now.
00:53:772 (1) - ^
02:02:558 (9) - New combo.
02:35:665 (6,7,8) - What's with this sudden spacing change? I disagree of having it here. oops x]
02:40:486 (1,2,3) - Stack all the endpoints? It would look nicer.
03:35:129 (x) - Remove this unused green line.

[Collab]

00:53:986 (1) - Same as Hard about spinner suggestion.
02:51:415 (1,2) - Add a warning for these 2 sliders? They are unexpected, I have to say.
03:35:129 (x) - Remove this unused green line.

Also, I'm not a big fan of these slider speed changes.

Other than that, it's a good map! Let me know when you've fixed and I'll gladly rebubble this.

James2250 wrote:

-Not really a good idea to have a break right near the start and then not have another one for 3 mins, try and add a break on the second half tooI think it's a good idea and a suitable break
-Doesn't only the last difficulty need the 2x warning? Remove it from the .osb file and move it to the .osu in the difficulty
-Add Vocaloid to the tags? You could also add Junky to the source (the composer) like this map has
-Your offset might be slightly late, I would get it double checked quickly

fix

ShaggoNormal:
03:31:701 (1) - would be nicer for the easiest difficulty to just extend the spinner to 03:34:701 and delete the note

fix

Hard:
00:34:915 (3,1) - space out more if possible [spacing here is not broken.]
01:16:486 (1,2,3) - keep spacing like this equal

James2250 wrote:

Still not a big fan of the lack of breaks but we can't really decide on a good place to put one so just going to see what the next BAT thinks about that
Offset sounds off to me but a few people disagree so ok.....

-Ok I talked about it with jericho and we both agree 835 sounds much better than the current offset (-20)
-I suggest you add a break somewhere around 02:19:712 on the last 2 difficulties (like ShaggoN has it) to balance them out more, the music slows down there anyway (You can keep the one you have at the start too)
-Some other things were mentioned too

FIX

Hard:
00:27:640 (1,2,3) - try and make the spacing on patterns like more equal as they are difficult to read right now
00:34:497 (1,2,3) - ^
00:41:355 (1,2,3) - ^ (same for any others)
01:44:569 (2) - some slow downs like these are hard to read as there are no slider ticks to base it off of

Bittersweet wrote:

get this ranked ^.^

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

The download's broken. I only get a 2.5kb OSZ.

Bittersweet wrote:

Gratz guys :3

Mashley wrote:

Hello!

Goodbye!