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Sakuya [CV-Sakakibara Yui] - Ai Sakura [Taiko]

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kiminokokoro
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年8月25日 at 10:40:07

Artist: Sakuya [CV-Sakakibara Yui]
Title: Ai Sakura
Source: Stella Glow
Tags: yassu- cherry blossom ステラ グロウ sega atlus nintendo 3ds fire witch 火の魔女 game セが 星光幻歌
BPM: 180
Filesize: 7723kb
Play Time: 03:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.29 stars, 326 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.46 stars, 257 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (3.07 stars, 683 notes)
  4. Oni (4.12 stars, 1013 notes)
  5. Ura Sakura (7.49 stars, 1555 notes)
  6. yassu-'s Inner Oni (5.34 stars, 1260 notes)
Download: Sakuya [CV-Sakakibara Yui] - Ai Sakura
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For rank NEED MORE MODDING
All difficulty 100%
Change Ura BG.RE DL PLZ.

As we all know,the fire witches are always hot tempered. 众所周知,火之魔女的脾气一直都不是很好...

yassu-'s Inner Oni by yassu-
the rest by me
katacheh
Hi~ from my queue!
General
  • Widescreen support取消
    kantan,futsuu幾乎不能有變速
    Offset有點早了 Offset+15差不多
    kantan幾乎只能放4/1 2/1+偶爾1/1 *詳細這裡
抱歉 我不太會打你的譜 只能幫你看簡單的難度了
Kantan
你乾脆把這個難度改成futsuu好了 kantan再做一個.... 建議而已
以下是改成Futsuu之後的mod
00:01:715 (2) - 移到00:01:382 (2) -

00:03:049 (4) - 移到00:02:715 (4) -

00:06:382 (10,11) - delete
00:06:715 (10) - 加d
00:07:382 (11) - 加k
00:08:382 (14) - delete

00:13:049 (23) - 移到00:12:715 (23) -

00:13:549 (24) - 移到00:13:382 (24) - 我知道你想對那個人聲 可是kantan節奏簡單一點好

00:19:715 (32) - 移到 00:19:382 (32) -

00:24:715 (42,43) - kk

00:36:882 (63) - 移到00:37:049 (63) -

00:52:049 (90,91,92) - 移到 00:51:882 (90,91,92) -(往前1/2) 然後變成dkd

00:55:049 (96) - 移到00:54:715 (96) -

00:55:382 (97) - 移到00:55:215 (97)

00:56:215 (99) - delete

01:03:715 (10) - 移到01:03:882 (10) -

01:28:715 (23) - delete

01:29:715 (2) - ^

01:33:048 (7) - ^

01:33:048 (7,1) - ^

01:44:882 (4) - 移到 01:45:049 (4) -

01:54:882 (8) - delete

01:55:549 (9) - 移到01:55:715 (10)

02:10:382 (5) - 移到 02:10:549 (5) -

02:11:049 (6,7) - delete 然後02:11:215 (7) - 加k

02:13:549 (11) - 移到02:13:382 (11) -

02:22:382 (10) - 移到02:22:549 (10) -

02:22:882 (11) - delete

02:47:382 (24,27) - ^

02:50:382 (32) - ^

02:56:215 (12) - 移到02:56:382 (12) -

抱歉 Mod不是很好((泣奔
Futsuu
有點放太多 futsuu的基本是2/1和1/1+偶爾1/2 這樣就太多了
我不知道怎麼改(太多了 自己改比較快) 先刪掉1/2吧 或是你想改成Muzukashii...
先這樣了 改好也許我可以再看一次 :)

加油囉!
Topic Starter
kiminokokoro

katacheh wrote:

Hi~ from my queue!
General
  • Widescreen support取消 改了
    kantan,futsuu幾乎不能有變速 取消了 不过保留了慢速段的0.9 SV change
    Offset有點早了 Offset+15差不多 谢谢指出 因为这个完成的很赶 没有慢速仔细对过offset
    kantan幾乎只能放4/1 2/1+偶爾1/1 *詳細這裡
抱歉 我不太會打你的譜 只能幫你看簡單的難度了
Kantan
你乾脆把這個難度改成futsuu好了 kantan再做一個.... 建議而已 kantan真的好难做QAQ 我再self mod
以下是改成Futsuu之後的mod All accept
00:01:715 (2) - 移到00:01:382 (2) -

00:03:049 (4) - 移到00:02:715 (4) -

00:06:382 (10,11) - delete
00:06:715 (10) - 加d
00:07:382 (11) - 加k
00:08:382 (14) - delete

00:13:049 (23) - 移到00:12:715 (23) -

00:13:549 (24) - 移到00:13:382 (24) - 我知道你想對那個人聲 可是kantan節奏簡單一點好

00:19:715 (32) - 移到 00:19:382 (32) -

00:24:715 (42,43) - kk

00:36:882 (63) - 移到00:37:049 (63) -

00:52:049 (90,91,92) - 移到 00:51:882 (90,91,92) -(往前1/2) 然後變成dkd

00:55:049 (96) - 移到00:54:715 (96) -

00:55:382 (97) - 移到00:55:215 (97)

00:56:215 (99) - delete

01:03:715 (10) - 移到01:03:882 (10) -

01:28:715 (23) - delete

01:29:715 (2) - ^

01:33:048 (7) - ^

01:33:048 (7,1) - ^

01:44:882 (4) - 移到 01:45:049 (4) -

01:54:882 (8) - delete

01:55:549 (9) - 移到01:55:715 (10)

02:10:382 (5) - 移到 02:10:549 (5) -

02:11:049 (6,7) - delete 然後02:11:215 (7) - 加k

02:13:549 (11) - 移到02:13:382 (11) -

02:22:382 (10) - 移到02:22:549 (10) -

02:22:882 (11) - delete

02:47:382 (24,27) - ^

02:50:382 (32) - ^

02:56:215 (12) - 移到02:56:382 (12) -

抱歉 Mod不是很好((泣奔
Futsuu
有點放太多 futsuu的基本是2/1和1/1+偶爾1/2 這樣就太多了 我再self mod
我不知道怎麼改(太多了 自己改比較快) 先刪掉1/2吧 或是你想改成Muzukashii...
先這樣了 改好也許我可以再看一次 :)

加油囉!
Prophecy
Hello, from CHINESE modding queue as well, Would you please mod my map > t/479084 , thank you, Here as your mod:

[Ura Oni]
00:04:480 (17) - delete, It is Ura but you cannot overmap it, a unnecessary note appeared here and it was not expected here, Considerate to remove it. k k d d k d k is good.
00:06:730 (29,30,31,32) - These 1/3 is a little bit non-sense, as the main rhythm does not show that here is a 1/3 beat , that's mean it should not using 1/3 or 1/6 as well in your difficulties, Besides, these pattern will make player a bit of confuse, Sudden 1/3 and suddenly 1/4, really confusing for me, Consider to remove the (30,31), instead, you can snap it to 1/4, maybe it would help you a lots.
00:08:342 (40,41) - This issue obviously is same as above one, confusing 1/3 pattern. Remove or snap to 1/4 instead.
00:09:508 (1,2,3) - ^ same as above.
00:12:175 (14,15,16) - However, these pattern is quite acceptable, but the coloring is not good enough, listen carefully by using 50% playback, dkkk not fits at all.
00:17:814 (26) - move to 00:17:730 , I can see your point, you're following vocal, but you snap wrongly, listen at 00:17:730
00:18:147 (29) - a unnecessary note here, these note cannot emphasise the sound of vocal or even rhythm, consider to remove.
00:18:314 (30) - same as above, listening carefully with the vocal, no sound here and you should not overmap your Ura Oni, it's quite unacceptable and no one would like to play something that is very odd or something that is really annoying.
00:20:397 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - I don't know these stream for what, first, the stream pattern is so random and it's not fit the music at all.
00:22:064 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - same as above, 1/3 and 1/4 combine, please, use it wisely and follow the main rhythm and vocal. Especially the notes that snap on 1/3 timing, this song is really not suitable for 1/3 and 1/4 combine here, Considerate to replace the notes at these area, a suggestion here: If you want to using 1/3 here, try this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5704873 or something like that, I don't think 1/3 and 1/4 combine is really good idea in this situation. Consider to follow my pattern suggestion or change something that is acceptable.
00:24:730 (3) - timing points are unrankable, you cannot use x1.5 SV speed with no reason, your song is 180BPM, Not really suitable for using x1.5 SV , Obviously, you should remove this timing points.
00:26:008 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - these 1/8 notes are unacceptable and cannot play probably, 1/8 notes should be placed reasonable and not be overused. Consider to change it to 1/4 pattern or nerf it. A good example that appear at 00:35:897 (89,90,91,92,93,94) -
00:36:730 (99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107) - again, these pattern are really confusing and unacceptable, you cannot placing these 1/8 notes with no reason, these notes cannot emphasis the vocal. Nerf it.

Call me again, gonna to sleep soon
Topic Starter
kiminokokoro

Prophecy wrote:

Hello, from CHINESE modding queue as well, Would you please mod my map > t/479084 , thank you, Here as your mod: I will try. >_<

[Ura Oni]
00:04:480 (17) - delete, It is Ura but you cannot overmap it, a unnecessary note appeared here and it was not expected here, Considerate to remove it. k k d d k d k is good. remove
00:06:730 (29,30,31,32) - These 1/3 is a little bit non-sense, as the main rhythm does not show that here is a 1/3 beat , that's mean it should not using 1/3 or 1/6 as well in your difficulties, Besides, these pattern will make player a bit of confuse, Sudden 1/3 and suddenly 1/4, really confusing for me, Consider to remove the (30,31), instead, you can snap it to 1/4, maybe it would help you a lots. change into 1/4
00:08:342 (40,41) - This issue obviously is same as above one, confusing 1/3 pattern. Remove or snap to 1/4 instead. change into 1/4
00:09:508 (1,2,3) - ^ same as above. change into 1/4
00:12:175 (14,15,16) - However, these pattern is quite acceptable, but the coloring is not good enough, listen carefully by using 50% playback, dkkk not fits at all. change to kddk
00:17:814 (26) - move to 00:17:730 , I can see your point, you're following vocal, but you snap wrongly, listen at 00:17:730 fix
00:18:147 (29) - a unnecessary note here, these note cannot emphasise the sound of vocal or even rhythm, consider to remove. remove
00:18:314 (30) - same as above, listening carefully with the vocal, no sound here and you should not overmap your Ura Oni, it's quite unacceptable and no one would like to play something that is very odd or something that is really annoying. remove
00:20:397 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - I don't know these stream for what, first, the stream pattern is so random and it's not fit the music at all. change to k kkd k d
00:22:064 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67) - same as above, 1/3 and 1/4 combine, please, use it wisely and follow the main rhythm and vocal. Especially the notes that snap on 1/3 timing, this song is really not suitable for 1/3 and 1/4 combine here, Considerate to replace the notes at these area, a suggestion here: If you want to using 1/3 here, try this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5704873 or something like that, I don't think 1/3 and 1/4 combine is really good idea in this situation. Consider to follow my pattern suggestion or change something that is acceptable. fix
00:24:730 (3) - timing points are unrankable, you cannot use x1.5 SV speed with no reason, your song is 180BPM, Not really suitable for using x1.5 SV , Obviously, you should remove this timing points. remove all the sudden 1.5 SV changes
00:26:008 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - these 1/8 notes are unacceptable and cannot play probably, 1/8 notes should be placed reasonable and not be overused. Consider to change it to 1/4 pattern or nerf it. A good example that appear at 00:35:897 (89,90,91,92,93,94) - They are 1/6 notes. Acceptable?
00:36:730 (99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107) - again, these pattern are really confusing and unacceptable, you cannot placing these 1/8 notes with no reason, these notes cannot emphasis the vocal. Nerf it. Acceptable?


Call me again, gonna to sleep soon
Prophecy
OK, I will back if I have time, please consider to fix all 1/6 issue and the overmap issue, I will recheck again, I hope you can fix more as possible!
Smallwu
Hi, M4M Req (另一張我就不摸了)

General
移除標籤
"Stella Glow" 它是Source
"榊原ゆい" 是Artist
"サクヤ" 同上
"藍桜" 是Title

Kantan --> OD3/HP7 不然會和Futsuu相同

Muzukashii
00:24:730 - 00:26:730 - 這段我覺得跟Voice較好 原本的我聽不出你在跟啥

00:32:980 (112,113) - 這兩顆怎麼了wwww 移到 00:33:064 和 00:33:230 吧

00:34:314 (118,119) - 移到 00:34:397 和 00:34:480 感覺你想跟"咚-咚" 可是聲音不在原本的Time上:3

00:36:397 (126) - 移到 00:37:230 - 為了跟Voice

00:46:064 - 00:47:397 - 這邊怎麼了:3 直接開1/2放滿k就頗合適了

00:52:064 (186) - 移到 00:51:897

00:52:397 (187) - 移到 00:52:230

00:52:730 (188) - 移到 00:52:564 然後改成D

00:52:897 - 00:54:064 -

00:55:397 (202) - 移到 00:55:564 這樣比較不會顯得後面的1/2那麼突兀 ((而且也合Voice

01:00:730 (3) - D

01:06:064 - 01:06:730 -
原本的轉盤真的太短了 要移除, 移除過後那邊很空 所以就加了一些Note

01:11:397 (1) - D

01:16:730 - 01:17:397 - 做和上面一樣的樣式 顏色可以自己配 照著 o ooo o o 的樣式就行了

01:19:064 - Add d

01:20:897 - 01:21:397 - (17)變成k是因為他的Voice和(18)一樣

01:22:064 (19,20,21,22,23) - D k D k K

01:35:397 - 01:43:397 - 其實我覺得這裡放Break Time比較好 因為狂k k挺無聊

01:43:397 - 01:45:397 -

01:51:647 (5,6) - 移動到 01:51:730 和 01:51:897

01:52:981 (11,12) - 移動到 01:53:064 和 01:53:230

01:55:064 (19) - 移動到 01:55:897

02:04:730 - 02:06:064 - 直接開1/2放滿k就頗合適了

02:10:730 (77) - 移動到 02:10:564

02:11:064 (78) - 移動到 02:10:897

02:11:397 (79) - 移動到 02:11:230

02:11:564 - 02:12:730 -

02:14:064 (92) - 移動到 02:14:230 比較不會顯得後面的1/2那麼突兀

02:19:397 (3) - D

02:24:730 - 02:25:397 - 做和上面一樣的樣式 就不多敘述了

02:30:064 (1) - D

02:35:397 - 02:36:064 - 做和上面一樣的樣式

02:37:730 - Add d

02:39:564 - 02:40:064 - (17)變成k是因為他的Voice和(18)一樣

02:40:731 (15,17,19) - 加Finisher (變大圓)

Oni
00:33:147 (162) - 移動到 00:33:230

00:34:480 (171) - 移動到 00:34:564

00:34:814 (174) - 刪除 或 移動到 00:34:897

00:55:230 (22) - K 凸顯Voice

00:55:397 (23) - 移除 為了凸顯Voice 或移動到 00:55:564

00:55:564 - Add d

00:55:730 (24) - k?

01:00:730 (3) - D

01:05:147 (38) - 移動到 01:05:230

01:08:064 (8) - 強烈建議變k 根本是陷阱嘛qwq

01:08:564 - Add k

01:15:814 (35) - 移動到 01:15:897

01:19:230 - Add k

01:23:508 (30) - 移動到 01:23:564

01:24:064 - 純粹覺得這樣比較好

01:35:397 - 01:43:397 - Break Time (同Muzu)

01:43:397 (109) - D

01:51:647 (163,164,165) - 移動到 01:51:730 當開頭

01:52:980 (169,170,171) - 移動到 01:53:064 當開頭

02:13:897 (20) - K 凸顯Voice

02:14:064 (21) - 移除 為了凸顯前面的Voice 或移動到 02:14:230

02:23:814 (38) - 移動到 02:23:897

02:26:731 (8) - k 因為根本是陷阱qwq

02:27:230 - Add k

02:34:480 (35) - 移動到 02:34:564

02:37:897 - Add k

02:42:175 (30) - 移動到 02:42:230

02:42:730 - 02:43:064 - 純粹覺得這樣比較好

02:44:480 (7) - 移動到 02:44:564

02:48:314 (34) - 移動到 02:48:397

02:49:480 (42) - 移動到 02:49:564

02:51:397 (55,56,57,58,59) - 加Finisher

yassu-'s Inner Oni
00:02:647 (10) - Move to 00:02:814 Because 00:02:730 - 00:02:897 Have drum sound x3

00:48:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kdkdkkd K ?

02:06:731 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

Ura Sakura
沒啥好說的了 直接移除吧www (這歌能做到yassu-的難度已經算非常難了)
大部分的音符(尤其副歌)都沒在節拍上 note密度也高到按不了(論正常玩家)

Levia
累了 所以我就直接跟你講 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/481627 的General該修正的地方

*General*
Kantan --> OD3

標籤移除
"Stella Glow" 因為是Source
"Levia" 是Title
"南條 愛乃" 是Artist
-----
*Oni*
嘗試減少些Note
-----
*Ura Kouzui*
移除吧_(:з」∠)_
原因同"Ura Sakura"
Rank加油囉 (如果哪邊我描述得太少看不懂就PM我吧 摸到後面有點累了)
之後多找些Modder 現在太少了

請不要用 test 這個顏色回覆我 眼睛會爆
Topic Starter
kiminokokoro

Smallwu wrote:

Hi, M4M Req (另一張我就不摸了) I will do it as soon as possible.

General
移除標籤 ALL FIX
"Stella Glow" 它是Source
"榊原ゆい" 是Artist
"サクヤ" 同上
"藍桜" 是Title

Kantan --> OD3/HP7 不然會和Futsuu相同

Muzukashii
00:24:730 - 00:26:730 - 這段我覺得跟Voice較好 原本的我聽不出你在跟啥 FIX

00:32:980 (112,113) - 這兩顆怎麼了wwww 移到 00:33:064 和 00:33:230 吧 fix

00:34:314 (118,119) - 移到 00:34:397 和 00:34:480 感覺你想跟"咚-咚" 可是聲音不在原本的Time上:3 fix it as above

00:36:397 (126) - 移到 00:37:230 - 為了跟Voice fix

00:46:064 - 00:47:397 - 這邊怎麼了:3 直接開1/2放滿k就頗合適了 k k k d k k k d k
00:52:064 (186) - 移到 00:51:897 fix

00:52:397 (187) - 移到 00:52:230 fix

00:52:730 (188) - 移到 00:52:564 然後改成D fix

00:52:897 - 00:54:064 - uhm......

00:55:397 (202) - 移到 00:55:564 這樣比較不會顯得後面的1/2那麼突兀 ((而且也合Voice fix

01:00:730 (3) - D fix (no finisher)

01:06:064 - 01:06:730 -
原本的轉盤真的太短了 要移除, 移除過後那邊很空 所以就加了一些Note I think it was suitable and fun.

01:11:397 (1) - D fix (no finisher)

01:16:730 - 01:17:397 - 做和上面一樣的樣式 顏色可以自己配 照著 o ooo o o 的樣式就行了 the same reason as above

01:19:064 - Add d fix

01:20:897 - 01:21:397 - (17)變成k是因為他的Voice和(18)一樣 NO CHANGES
01:22:064 (19,20,21,22,23) - D k D k K change to d k d d k to be in accordance with Oni and Ura(no finisher)

01:35:397 - 01:43:397 - 其實我覺得這裡放Break Time比較好 因為狂k k挺無聊 uhm...I fix the front to make this part suitable.

01:43:397 - 01:45:397 - the same as the front

01:51:647 (5,6) - 移動到 01:51:730 和 01:51:897 ^

01:52:981 (11,12) - 移動到 01:53:064 和 01:53:230 ^

01:55:064 (19) - 移動到 01:55:897 ^

02:04:730 - 02:06:064 - 直接開1/2放滿k就頗合適了 ^

02:10:730 (77) - 移動到 02:10:564 ^

02:11:064 (78) - 移動到 02:10:897 ^

02:11:397 (79) - 移動到 02:11:230 ^

02:11:564 - 02:12:730 - uhm...... the same as the front

02:14:064 (92) - 移動到 02:14:230 比較不會顯得後面的1/2那麼突兀 fix

02:19:397 (3) - D(no finisher)

02:24:730 - 02:25:397 - 做和上面一樣的樣式 就不多敘述了 I think it was suitable and fun.

02:30:064 (1) - D(no finisher)

02:35:397 - 02:36:064 - 做和上面一樣的樣式 I think it was suitable and fun.

02:37:730 - Add d fix

02:39:564 - 02:40:064 - (17)變成k是因為他的Voice和(18)一樣 NO CHANGES

02:40:731 (15,17,19) - 加Finisher (變大圓) (no finisher)


Oni
00:33:147 (162) - 移動到 00:33:230 fix

00:34:480 (171) - 移動到 00:34:564 fix

00:34:814 (174) - 刪除 或 移動到 00:34:897 No changes

00:55:230 (22) - K 凸顯Voice fix

00:55:397 (23) - 移除 為了凸顯Voice 或移動到 00:55:564 fix

00:55:564 - Add d k

00:55:730 (24) - k? uhm...

01:00:730 (3) - D (I really dislike too many finishers in my maps.)

01:05:147 (38) - 移動到 01:05:230 fix

01:08:064 (8) - 強烈建議變k 根本是陷阱嘛qwq ww

01:08:564 - Add k no way

01:15:814 (35) - 移動到 01:15:897 fix

01:19:230 - Add k no way

01:23:508 (30) - 移動到 01:23:564 I will keep it for a time.

01:24:064 - 純粹覺得這樣比較好 I will keep it for a time.

01:35:397 - 01:43:397 - Break Time (同Muzu) I fix the front to make this part suitable.

01:43:397 (109) - D (First,I dislike too many Finishers in maps.Second,it doesn't be in line with the front at all.)

01:51:647 (163,164,165) - 移動到 01:51:730 當開頭 Well,I fix it like the front part.

01:52:980 (169,170,171) - 移動到 01:53:064 當開頭 ^

02:13:897 (20) - K 凸顯Voice change

02:14:064 (21) - 移除 為了凸顯前面的Voice 或移動到 02:14:230 fix

02:23:814 (38) - 移動到 02:23:897 fix

02:26:731 (8) - k 因為根本是陷阱qwq ww(其实原本是设计成在02:26:897有k 不过太无趣就改了)

02:27:230 - Add k no way~

02:34:480 (35) - 移動到 02:34:564 fix

02:37:897 - Add k no way

02:42:175 (30) - 移動到 02:42:230 I will keep it for a time.

02:42:730 - 02:43:064 - 純粹覺得這樣比較好 I will keep it for a time.

02:44:480 (7) - 移動到 02:44:564 I will keep it for a time.

02:48:314 (34) - 移動到 02:48:397 That remind me to add a d at 02:48:397.

02:49:480 (42) - 移動到 02:49:564 I will keep it for a time.

02:51:397 (55,56,57,58,59) - 加Finisher However,these finishers are suitablie.

yassu-'s Inner Oni
00:02:647 (10) - Move to 00:02:814 Because 00:02:730 - 00:02:897 Have drum sound x3

00:48:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kdkdkkd K ?

02:06:731 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

Ura Sakura
沒啥好說的了 直接移除吧www (這歌能做到yassu-的難度已經算非常難了)
大部分的音符(尤其副歌)都沒在節拍上 note密度也高到按不了(論正常玩家)

Levia
累了 所以我就直接跟你講 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/481627 的General該修正的地方

*General* ALL FIX
Kantan --> OD3

標籤移除
"Stella Glow" 因為是Source
"Levia" 是Title
"南條 愛乃" 是Artist
-----
*Oni*
嘗試減少些Note
-----
*Ura Kouzui*
移除吧_(:з」∠)_
原因同"Ura Sakura"
Rank加油囉 (如果哪邊我描述得太少看不懂就PM我吧 摸到後面有點累了)
之後多找些Modder 現在太少了

請不要用 test 這個顏色回覆我 眼睛會爆
Prophecy
Please provide a reason if you reject something from modder, you didn't provide a suitable reason to reject a suggestion, it's is consider at a impolite action.
Topic Starter
kiminokokoro

Prophecy wrote:

Please provide a reason if you reject something from modder, you didn't provide a suitable reason to reject a suggestion, it's is consider at a impolite action.
I'm sorry about my rudeness. I didn't mean it.>_<
My English is poor.And sometimes I was not sure that if a suggestion is suitable.
I will keep it in mind from now on.>_<
yassu-

Smallwu wrote:

Hi, M4M Req (另一張我就不摸了)

yassu-'s Inner Oni
00:02:647 (10) - Move to 00:02:814 Because 00:02:730 - 00:02:897 Have drum sound x3 no fixed. because this is according to voice

00:48:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kdkdkkd K ? fixed

02:06:731 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ fixed

Rank加油囉 (如果哪邊我描述得太少看不懂就PM我吧 摸到後面有點累了)
之後多找些Modder 現在太少了

請不要用 test 這個顏色回覆我 眼睛會爆
update
https://puu.sh/qBEUj/e4720d297d.txt
Canboi
kim, 我也可以幫手做個譜嗎? 我己經找不到歌來做譜,我認為和其他人合作一下好像會好點..
我現在試試開始做吧... 因為我怕自己會半途而廢XD
_kumakichi
(chinese? english?)

I did not start my (relatively) detailed mod
do you intend to map the part after 03:04:730 - ?
if no, you might want to cut that part of the audio away, which i may help but i guess you are more capable then me in doing so

(no kds for sure)
Topic Starter
kiminokokoro

fanhoho wrote:

kim, 我也可以幫手做個譜嗎? 我己經找不到歌來做譜,我認為和其他人合作一下好像會好點..
我現在試試開始做吧... 因為我怕自己會半途而廢XD
嗯...我不知道现在再加GD是否合适 不过你做完可以给我检查一下
Topic Starter
kiminokokoro

_kumakichi wrote:

(chinese? english?) Either

I did not start my (relatively) detailed mod
do you intend to map the part after 03:04:730 - ?
if no, you might want to cut that part of the audio away, which i may help but i guess you are more capable then me in doing so

(no kds for sure)
If it's possible,I wanna keep this part for enjoying this song.
gaston_2199
Hi~
NM From my queue :D

[Kantan]
00:24:730 (27,28,29) - D K D
00:35:397 (38,39,40) - D K K
02:02:064 - Add note
02:23:397 - Add d
02:23:730 (10) - Move to 02:24:397
00:56:397 - Add k
02:40:730 - Add d
02:41:730 (10) - Move to 02:42:064

[Futsuu]
00:10:397 - Add d
00:18:730 (28,29,30,31) - d
00:20:564 (31) - Move to 00:20:730

[Muzukashii]
00:14:730 - Add d
00:14:897 (52) - Remove
00:15:064 - Add d
00:20:897 (71) - Move to 00:21:064 - and change to d
01:06:064 (27) - Slider to 01:06:730 ?
01:16:730 (26) - Same rason ^
02:04:953 (56,57,58,60,61,62) - What is this? Adjust in 1/4

[Oni]
00:04:730 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - Replace for spinner
00:24:397 (106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115) -
00:26:564 (121) - d
00:26:647 (122) - Remove
00:46:230 (234,235,236,237,238,239,240,1,2,3) - Replace this for simple pattern (k k d)
01:43:397 (110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - Same of 00:24:397
03:04:147 (149,150,151) - Remove and add spinner here 03:04:230

[Ura Sakura]
  1. In my opinion, It is a very difficult, has very forced notes. You could remapped this or adjust several thing.

Good luck for the rank :)
JudgeTheDude
Hey there, M4M if possible on https://osu.ppy.sh/s/289639
I'll be doing the other map you linked tonight, so don't worry !

[General]
  1. Don't make that strange spacing everywhere https://osu.ppy.sh/s/289639 , just put all the notes in the center https://osu.ppy.sh/s/289639
  2. Same goes for sliders like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/289639 (note that these 2 are only for design and don't change the gameplay)
  3. Your Oni feels like an Ura with 80% reading and 20% logic

[Kantan]
  1. I'll be fast about it, I'm not an expert in Kantan, but I don't like the general mapping. Most "patterns" don't make sense, and the timing feels off for a Kantan. The only parts I feel are good are the Kiai, because they actually fit the rythm and are consistent.
  2. 00:16:730 (19,20,21,22,23,24) - These notes for example feel quite off, timing wise, they don't follow a constant rythm, and are hard to play if you don't already know the map
  3. 00:56:730 (1) - Extend it to the next White Bar at 00:59:397

[Futsuu]
  1. My complaint in Kantan doesn't apply here, since it fits the difficulty
  2. 01:07:230 (15) - to 01:07:064
  3. 01:08:230 (17) - to 01:08:064
  4. 01:24:730 (15) - I'd try something more like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5925011 (using 3-notes patterns on white ticks instead of red-white ticks ones)

[Muzukashii]
  1. 02:04:731 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - This section feels off and isn't mapped properly (1/3 mapping).
  2. Something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5925141 feels better (5-notes patterns from 02:05:064 (56) - 02:05:398 (60) and 02:05:730 (61) - 02:06:063 (65) )
  3. Nothing more to say, I love the mapping at the end !

[Oni]
  1. General note : Too Hard. I strongly advise against using too much 4-notes patterns in Onis. They belong to Inner/Ura Onis, but not regular ones
  2. General note : Globally, the mapping doesn't fir the music/drums/vocals or anything, it's too much reading and not much logic. Most of the of 3-notes patterns are also illogical. This mod will be short, and not that good because I cannot actually play that map, because I have to play without sound to be able to complete it.
  3. 00:27:064 (126) - d to fit a dkkkd pattern
  4. 00:34:314 (171,172,173,174,175,176) - Doesn't make sense
  5. 02:23:231 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same here

[Conclusion]
  1. The Oni feels more like an Inner Oni than an actual Oni (too fast/congested with too many 2-notes and 4-notes patterns)
  2. Try to make an Oni using your Muzu as reference, with just a bit more of 3-notes and 5-notes pattterns and less gaps
  3. The Kantan has some serious placement issues, where it's more of a guessing game than a rythm game

Good luck with ranking ! You ask me again once a proper Oni is done !
Topic Starter
kiminokokoro

gaston_2199 wrote:

Hi~
NM From my queue :D

[Kantan]
00:24:730 (27,28,29) - D K D fix
00:35:397 (38,39,40) - D K K fix
02:02:064 - Add note add d
02:23:397 - Add d fix
02:23:730 (10) - Move to 02:24:397 fix
00:56:397 - Add k Why?There isn't any vocal at here.That's at 00:56:564.
02:40:730 - Add d fix
02:41:730 (10) - Move to 02:42:064 Instead , add a d at 02:42:064.

[Futsuu]
00:10:397 - Add d fix
00:18:730 (28,29,30,31) - d uhm...Keep these k becausu this part is so quiet.
00:20:564 (31) - Move to 00:20:730 There isn't any vocal at here.Instead , add a d at 00:20:897.

[Muzukashii]
00:14:730 - Add d fix
00:14:897 (52) - Remove fix
00:15:064 - Add d add a k
00:20:897 (71) - Move to 00:21:064 - and change to d It's according to voice.So no change.
01:06:064 (27) - Slider to 01:06:730 ? Nice.
01:16:730 (26) - Same rason ^ Nice.
02:04:953 (56,57,58,60,61,62) - What is this? Adjust in 1/4 Oh.Sorry for my mistake.Fix.


[Oni]
00:04:730 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - Replace for spinner Keep it for now.
00:24:397 (106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115) - Fix. But keep the first two notes to match pattern of the front.
00:26:564 (121) - d I remap this part.
00:26:647 (122) - Remove I remap this part.
00:46:230 (234,235,236,237,238,239,240,1,2,3) - Replace this for simple pattern (k k d) k kkk k kkk k pattern
01:43:397 (110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - Same of 00:24:397 Fix. But keep the first two notes to match pattern of the front.
03:04:147 (149,150,151) - Remove and add spinner here 03:04:230 Are you serious?I am confused.The drums end at 03:04:397 so I end the map at here.That spinner will be a 0.167 second one!

[Ura Sakura]
  1. In my opinion, It is a very difficult, has very forced notes. You could remapped this or adjust several thing.

Good luck for the rank :) ty for mod
Topic Starter
kiminokokoro

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hey there, M4M if possible on https://osu.ppy.sh/s/289639 ty for mod I will do it as soon as possible.
I'll be doing the other map you linked tonight, so don't worry !

[General]
  1. Don't make that strange spacing everywhere https://osu.ppy.sh/s/289639 , just put all the notes in the center https://osu.ppy.sh/s/289639
  2. Same goes for sliders like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/289639 (note that these 2 are only for design and don't change the gameplay)
  3. Your Oni feels like an Ura with 80% reading and 20% logic

[Kantan]
  1. I'll be fast about it, I'm not an expert in Kantan, but I don't like the general mapping. Most "patterns" don't make sense, and the timing feels off for a Kantan. The only parts I feel are good are the Kiai, because they actually fit the rythm and are consistent.
  2. 00:16:730 (19,20,21,22,23,24) - These notes for example feel quite off, timing wise, they don't follow a constant rythm, and are hard to play if you don't already know the map fix
  3. 00:56:730 (1) - Extend it to the next White Bar at 00:59:397 Instead, I add a k at 00:59:397.

[Futsuu]
  1. My complaint in Kantan doesn't apply here, since it fits the difficulty
  2. 01:07:230 (15) - to 01:07:064 fix
  3. 01:08:230 (17) - to 01:08:064 fix
  4. 01:24:730 (15) - I'd try something more like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5925011 (using 3-notes patterns on white ticks instead of red-white ticks ones)I keep it for now.Need more advice.

[Muzukashii]
  1. 02:04:731 (55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - This section feels off and isn't mapped properly (1/3 mapping). fix
  2. Something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5925141 feels better (5-notes patterns from 02:05:064 (56) - 02:05:398 (60) and 02:05:730 (61) - 02:06:063 (65) ) Nice.But I will keep it for now.
  3. Nothing more to say, I love the mapping at the end !

[Oni]
  1. General note : Too Hard. I strongly advise against using too much 4-notes patterns in Onis. They belong to Inner/Ura Onis, but not regular ones You are right.I will fix this Oni with self mod.
  2. General note : Globally, the mapping doesn't fir the music/drums/vocals or anything, it's too much reading and not much logic. Most of the of 3-notes patterns are also illogical. This mod will be short, and not that good because I cannot actually play that map, because I have to play without sound to be able to complete it.
  3. 00:27:064 (126) - d to fit a dkkkd pattern
  4. 00:34:314 (171,172,173,174,175,176) - Doesn't make sense
  5. 02:23:231 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same here

[Conclusion]
  1. The Oni feels more like an Inner Oni than an actual Oni (too fast/congested with too many 2-notes and 4-notes patterns)
  2. Try to make an Oni using your Muzu as reference, with just a bit more of 3-notes and 5-notes pattterns and less gaps
  3. The Kantan has some serious placement issues, where it's more of a guessing game than a rythm game

Good luck with ranking ! You ask me again once a proper Oni is done !
_kumakichi
hi

a quick mod since, well, i presume most of my mods will get rejected so i prefer giving less suggestions

futsuu
in general a bit messy in the part before the first chorus, as the spacing isn't quite even
the parts after are significant better in comparsion
may i also point out that sd for futsuu should be somewhere below 2.25
i presume the high sd is much related to the spacing i mentioned

muzu
00:46:064 (170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - i think sb above has said sth about this. the pattern shall look more pattern-like if 00:46:897 (175) - is moved to 00:47:564 -.
01:14:564 (17,18,19,20) - feels somehow strange compared with 01:03:397 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - with sounds clearer. consider moving 01:15:064 (20) - to 01:15:230 - ? same for the 2nd chorus
01:33:230 (60) - k. there was some kind of instrument (drum?) giving two same-pitch sounds at 01:33:063 (59,60) -
01:33:730 - add k. correspond with 01:33:063 (59) -
01:33:896 (62) - k. same as above
01:46:564 (90) - del. feels more natural if 2 kkd does not come consecutively
fairly well done

i think i spent like 3 hours on your map i got so used to it i couldn't make any changes ._.

hope that the above was useful. good luck
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