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Shoujo - Reminiscing [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, July 27, 2016 at 10:15:11 PM

Artist: Shoujo
Title: Reminiscing
Tags: bastard pop terrorists volume 17 electronic makina happy hardcore sreisen
BPM: 175
Filesize: 4272kb
Play Time: 02:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another - 4Key (4.31 stars, 1616 notes)
  2. Black Another - 4Key (4.6 stars, 1849 notes)
  3. Hyper - 4Key (3.04 stars, 1082 notes)
  4. Normal - 4Key (1.6 stars, 536 notes)
  5. Shiki's Hard - 4Key (2.48 stars, 700 notes)
Download: Shoujo - Reminiscing
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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OPEN FOR MODDING

Mod
Normal:5/20
Shiki's Hard:2/20
Hyper:5/20
Another:3/20
Black Another:4/20
- Ly0572 -
hi~ req from my sh♥ty queue

|1|2|3|4|

normal
00:24:852 (24852|1,24852|3) - forgot to put note her like 00:10:110 -
00:46:052 (46052|2) - uhm u can put this here 00:46:024 -
00:46:024 (46024|2) - forgot the note here.. put it on col. 3
00:54:167 - add note to 1
00:54:338 (54338|0) - move to 2 better flow
00:54:595 - add to 3
00:57:338 - ^ 3
00:57:595 (57595|1) - delete
00:57:510 - add to 2
01:05:652 (65652|1,65824|0,65995|1) - u can keep this but it would be great if u change this to an LN,
if u did that add note to 4 01:05:995 -
01:06:167 (66167|3) - move to 1
01:17:995 (77995|0) - ^ 2
01:19:710 (79710|3) - ^ 3
01:21:424 (81424|3,81767|0) - ctrl+j
01:27:938 (87938|1) - move to 1
01:28:281 (88281|2,88281|3) - move in 2 and 3


hyper
00:10:110 (10110|3) - change to LN, ends here 00:10:452 -
00:20:481 (20481|1) - delete
00:41:138 (41138|1) - ^
00:41:224 - add to 2
00:49:881 (49881|3) - move to 2
00:49:881 (49881|1) - add to 4
00:55:367 - add to 2 or 1
01:02:052 (62052|0) - delete
01:06:167 - add to 2
01:23:481 (83481|2,83481|3) - ctrl+h
01:24:167 (84167|0,84167|3) - move to 2 and 3
01:24:852 (84852|3,84852|0) - ^
01:25:881 - add to 4
01:26:567 - ^
01:27:767 (87767|1) - change to LN, ends here 01:27:938 -

i can only mod 1*-3* so i didnt mod the 2 other diff sorry bout that. well good luck.. add kiai time btw
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

- Ly0572 - wrote:

hi~ req from my sh♥ty queue

|1|2|3|4|

normal
00:24:852 (24852|1,24852|3) - forgot to put note her like 00:10:110 - added
00:46:052 (46052|2) - uhm u can put this here 00:46:024 - fixed
00:46:024 (46024|2) - forgot the note here.. put it on col. 3 already have note at col 3
00:54:167 - add note to 1 no sound at there
00:54:338 (54338|0) - move to 2 better flow
00:54:595 - add to 3
00:57:338 - ^ 3
00:57:595 (57595|1) - delete
00:57:510 - add to 2
01:05:652 (65652|1,65824|0,65995|1) - u can keep this but it would be great if u change this to an LN,changed
if u did that add note to 4 01:05:995 -
01:06:167 (66167|3) - move to 1
01:17:995 (77995|0) - ^ 2
01:19:710 (79710|3) - ^ 3
01:21:424 (81424|3,81767|0) - ctrl+j
01:27:938 (87938|1) - move to 1
01:28:281 (88281|2,88281|3) - move in 2 and 3
others are accepted


hyper
00:10:110 (10110|3) - change to LN, ends here 00:10:452 -
00:20:481 (20481|1) - delete
00:41:138 (41138|1) - ^
00:41:224 - add to 2
00:49:881 (49881|3) - move to 2 i dont intend to make jack here so i change the pattern a bit..still accept ur suggestion
00:49:881 (49881|1) - add to 4 ^
00:55:367 - add to 2 or 1
01:02:052 (62052|0) - delete
01:06:167 - add to 2 accepted but changed the pattern a bit
01:23:481 (83481|2,83481|3) - ctrl+h that jack kinda uncomfortable for hyper diff
01:24:167 (84167|0,84167|3) - move to 2 and 3 ^
01:24:852 (84852|3,84852|0) - ^ ^
01:25:881 - add to 4 dont want to ruin the stream
01:26:567 - ^ ^
01:27:767 (87767|1) - change to LN, ends here 01:27:938 -

i can only mod 1*-3* so i didnt mod the 2 other diff sorry bout that. well good luck.. add kiai time btw thanks for remind..totally forgot about kiai :v
Thanks For Mod :)
Updated
erlinadewi-
hai Satoshi >3<)/

Mod Request from chat

4K 1|2|3|4

[Normal]
00:05:995 (5995|0,6338|1) - ctrl g?
00:11:052 - add for kick
00:11:138 - ^
00:11:310 - ^
00:11:395 - ^
00:16:795 - how about add 1/2 LN for layering 1/8 sound. like you did in hyper diff
00:41:652 - how about add note 1/2 snap in here. because this part have 1/4, but this is normal diff. i think is good if you add 1/2
00:45:767 (45767|1,46024|2,46281|3) - those note have same pitch, right? maybe you can move to same column for pitch
00:46:281 (46281|2) - whoops.. missing kick
00:49:710 - ^
00:51:252 (51252|2,51510|0,51767|3) - same pitch again.
00:55:195 - missing kick, you can check it again ^w^) for missing sound
01:06:167 (66167|0) - col 2 more balance
01:21:081 (81081|1,81424|0) - ctrl g

[Hyper]
00:32:052 - add note? for layer voice
00:32:224 - ^
00:45:767 (45767|2,46024|1,46281|2) - same pitch again. check my normal mod
00:51:252 (51252|1,51510|2,51767|1) - ^
00:52:281 - snare should be double,right?
02:01:195 - why not triple? have same sound with 02:00:852 - 02:00:510 - 02:00:338 - right?

goodluck satoshi >w<)/ <3
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

erlinadewi- wrote:

hai Satoshi >3<)/

Mod Request from chat

4K 1|2|3|4

[Normal]
00:05:995 (5995|0,6338|1) - ctrl g?
00:11:052 - add for kick dont want make note became 1/4 stream
00:11:138 - ^ ^
00:11:310 - ^ ^
00:11:395 - ^ ^
00:16:795 - how about add 1/2 LN for layering 1/8 sound. like you did in hyper diff not really focus on that part
00:41:652 - how about add note 1/2 snap in here. because this part have 1/4, but this is normal diff. i think is good if you add 1/2 nice! added
00:45:767 (45767|1,46024|2,46281|3) - those note have same pitch, right? maybe you can move to same column for pitch i hate jack xD so no
00:46:281 (46281|2) - whoops.. missing kick just added single note there?
00:49:710 - ^ nice catch
00:51:252 (51252|2,51510|0,51767|3) - same pitch again. same reason
00:55:195 - missing kick, you can check it again ^w^) for missing sound
01:06:167 (66167|0) - col 2 more balance
01:21:081 (81081|1,81424|0) - ctrl g
Others Are accepted

[Hyper]
00:32:052 - add note? for layer voice
00:32:224 - ^ it was supposed to be here 00:32:310 -
00:45:767 (45767|2,46024|1,46281|2) - same pitch again. check my normal mod since this was 3 star i make it as a jack
00:51:252 (51252|1,51510|2,51767|1) - ^ ^
00:52:281 - snare should be double,right? since there has LN so i make it so be single note..to prevent from jack
02:01:195 - why not triple? have same sound with 02:00:852 - 02:00:510 - 02:00:338 - right? my mistake..thanks

goodluck satoshi >w<)/ <3
Thanks For very Useful Mod Senpai xD
Updated
Alepat
Hey! from Warfu's Alepat's Timing Queue

the timing and offset is perfect, although, I thinking about the final streams with the custom hitsounds, I sound a bit weird, but when I replace the custom hitsounds by a normal hitsounds, sounds good, so don't worry, all is psycological

Good luck :)
Critical_Star
Hi, m4m here~
column 1 2 3 4

Normal
00:38:910 - till 00:41:652 - how about use 1/2 stream layering? the sound here seems a little more streamy so maybe it will fit better to the sound instead 1-2-1-2 pattern
00:47:995 - 00:48:081 - how about adding them for the kick sound? the sound pretty obvious while i testplaying here, it just feel something is missing here, i know u wanted to keep it simple but i think it won't really feel hard to play here.i would recommend to add
00:48:767 - u missed a kick note here, the sound is the same as 00:46:024 (46024|1) - i can see u intend to avoid 1/4 here but it just feel odd not to map this sound while u following this sound from previous one.
00:49:195 (49195|3) - this kick note should be at 00:49:195 (49195|3) - xD
00:49:367 - should add a kick note here like 00:54:852 (54852|0) -
00:54:252 - ^like before u missed a kick note here
01:17:310 - till 01:22:795 - just pattern suggestion: 01:17:310 (77310|0,77995|1,78681|1,79367|0,80052|1,80738|2,81424|1,82110|1) - changing them into 1/1 LN could be fun
01:22:795 - till 01:25:538 - i just think layering them with 1/2 would be better, because there is 1/2 loud kick here which the sound is much denser.
01:25:538 (85538|0) - u can use a LN to empyhsize the 1/4 kick sound here like u did before at 00:41:652 (41652|3) -
01:48:852 (108852|3) - i think end at 01:50:224 - and add a LN at 01:50:224 - end 01:50:567 - would fit the sound better here
02:06:681 - maybe add a LN end 02:07:024 - to empyhsize the vocal here?
02:10:110 - u can add another note here for crash

Hyper
00:20:052 - add another note? the sound is louder here
00:20:652 (20652|3,20910|0) - if u are following this sound then u should add at 00:20:224 - here too which is the same sound
00:29:567 (29567|3) - this is pretty sudden change here and is not like 00:32:310 (32310|1) - which is much more noticeable by the vocal, i would to move to 00:29:478 -
00:44:052 - could use a LN end 00:44:395 - to empyhsize the intrumental sync with the vocal here
00:56:052 (56052|2) - remove? i think focus on the drum + kick sound here better which is much more noticeable
01:01:024 (61024|3,61538|0) - remove? ^reason like before if u accepted
01:03:252 (63252|3,63338|1) - CTRL+G could be much more comfortable to play
01:03:767 (63767|0) - ^and so on if u agree to remove like before
01:17:652 (77652|1,77652|3,78338|1,78338|2,79024|3,79024|2,79710|2,79710|1,80395|2,80395|1,81081|3,81081|0,81767|2,81767|0,82452|3,82452|1) - i think make them into single note here would be better, a single stream here would be nice for hyper diff.
01:38:567 (98567|2,98738|1) - move to the right by 1? just to reduce the strain at the left hand
01:49:710 - can consider this http://puu.sh/q8eAA/741cef8c14.jpg , i think the long sound are different from time by time
02:09:424 - maybe http://puu.sh/q8eMc/a5d2c1f192.jpg? if u like a neater pattern

Another
00:03:081 (3081|3) - how about move to 3? to reduce the strain at 00:02:738 (2738|3,2910|3,3081|3,3252|3) -
00:09:081 (9081|1) - move to 4? well is just allow your left hand to rest before 00:09:252 (9252|1,9424|1,9767|1,9938|1) -
00:11:395 (11395|3) - how about remove this note to prevent a mini jack here? it could be more friendly pattern for others, u can use this for the hardest diff of course :3
00:16:967 (16967|1) - remove it? i know triple is for crash sound here but it seems hard to hit it perfectly during 1/4 stream part, removing it would be easier a lot to play.
00:17:824 (17824|0) - move to 3? doesn't really fit with the sound here well so maybe variate it here
00:19:024 (19024|2) - move to 1 for balance
00:23:138 (23138|2) - move to 4?
00:29:310 (29310|2,29481|2,29652|2,29824|2,29995|2,30167|2,30338|2,30510|2,30681|2,30852|2,31024|2,31195|2,31367|2) - looks hard for the right hand here, i would recommend to rearrange some to 1-2 column
00:33:338 (33338|0) - like before ^ remove it to avoid mini jack here
00:38:824 (38824|3) - and so on if u accept
00:42:938 (42938|2) - how about move to 4? to make it constant with your kick pattern here like 00:42:338 (42338|3,42424|0,42510|3,42595|0) - drum trill yea
00:52:367 (52367|1,52410|0,52538|1,52581|0) - how about CTRL+G this? the 1/8 sound here are a little different
01:49:995 (109995|0,109995|3,109995|1,110110|3,110110|0,110110|2) - i think is pretty too much for another diff, maybe reduce them into double note here would be better
02:03:767 (123767|2,123767|1,123767|0) - reduce a note?


Black Another
00:01:195 (1195|0,1195|3,1281|1,1367|2,1452|3,1538|0,1538|2,1538|1,1624|3,1710|2,1795|0,1881|3,1881|1) - just saying that these are 1/8 sound
00:12:167 (12167|1,12167|3,12252|2,12338|0,12424|1,12510|2,12510|3,12510|0,12595|1,12681|2,12767|3,12852|1,12852|0) - ^
00:34:110 (34110|3,34110|1,34195|2,34281|0,34367|1,34452|2,34452|0,34452|3,34538|1,34624|2,34710|3,34795|1,34795|0) - ^ and so on for the same part if u wanted to map that sound here but i still think the best to map it since this is the hardest diff


Good Luck~ :D
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

Alepat wrote:

Hey! from Warfu's Alepat's Timing Queue

the timing and offset is perfect, although, I thinking about the final streams with the custom hitsounds, I sound a bit weird, but when I replace the custom hitsounds by a normal hitsounds, sounds good, so don't worry, all is psycological

Good luck :)
thanks :D about that i just turn the hitsound vol to 10% xD too lazy to put many custom hitsound xD
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi, m4m here~
column 1 2 3 4

Normal
00:38:910 - till 00:41:652 - how about use 1/2 stream layering? the sound here seems a little more streamy so maybe it will fit better to the sound instead 1-2-1-2 pattern hmm i dont think cause there has no sound that fit to add the LN
00:47:995 - 00:48:081 - how about adding them for the kick sound? the sound pretty obvious while i testplaying here, it just feel something is missing here, i know u wanted to keep it simple but i think it won't really feel hard to play here.i would recommend to add added 1/2 only cause i dont want to use 1/4 too many for normal diff
00:48:767 - u missed a kick note here, the sound is the same as 00:46:024 (46024|1) - i can see u intend to avoid 1/4 here but it just feel odd not to map this sound while u following this sound from previous one. hmm reconsider
00:49:195 (49195|3) - this kick note should be at 00:49:195 (49195|3) - xD my mistake xD thanks xD
00:49:367 - should add a kick note here like 00:54:852 (54852|0) -
00:54:252 - ^like before u missed a kick note here same reason
01:17:310 - till 01:22:795 - just pattern suggestion: 01:17:310 (77310|0,77995|1,78681|1,79367|0,80052|1,80738|2,81424|1,82110|1) - changing them into 1/1 LN could be fun hmm sounds nice..i rethink about this
01:22:795 - till 01:25:538 - i just think layering them with 1/2 would be better, because there is 1/2 loud kick here which the sound is much denser. yeah that's kinda right..added
01:25:538 (85538|0) - u can use a LN to empyhsize the 1/4 kick sound here like u did before at 00:41:652 (41652|3) - thanks for notice it :D
01:48:852 (108852|3) - i think end at 01:50:224 - and add a LN at 01:50:224 - end 01:50:567 - would fit the sound better here nice
02:06:681 - maybe add a LN end 02:07:024 - to empyhsize the vocal here? doest really fit if follow vocal
02:10:110 - u can add another note here for crash tbh i forgot to add at this part xD

Hyper
00:20:052 - add another note? the sound is louder here yeah u right
00:20:652 (20652|3,20910|0) - if u are following this sound then u should add at 00:20:224 - here too which is the same sound actually that sound start here 00:20:052 - and should put LN..but i dont want to add LN since it stop at 00:20:310 - and kinda disturbing if i add for this diff
00:29:567 (29567|3) - this is pretty sudden change here and is not like 00:32:310 (32310|1) - which is much more noticeable by the vocal, i would to move to 00:29:478 - actually i misplace the note xD xD xD
00:44:052 - could use a LN end 00:44:395 - to empyhsize the intrumental sync with the vocal here
00:56:052 (56052|2) - remove? i think focus on the drum + kick sound here better which is much more noticeable thanks..i actually dont want to follow hit hat at this part xD
01:01:024 (61024|3,61538|0) - remove? ^reason like before if u accepted
01:03:252 (63252|3,63338|1) - CTRL+G could be much more comfortable to play
01:03:767 (63767|0) - ^and so on if u agree to remove like before ^
01:17:652 (77652|1,77652|3,78338|1,78338|2,79024|3,79024|2,79710|2,79710|1,80395|2,80395|1,81081|3,81081|0,81767|2,81767|0,82452|3,82452|1) - i think make them into single note here would be better, a single stream here would be nice for hyper diff. ok
01:38:567 (98567|2,98738|1) - move to the right by 1? just to reduce the strain at the left hand nice
01:49:710 - can consider this http://puu.sh/q8eAA/741cef8c14.jpg , i think the long sound are different from time by time since i have made the same change like this at normal diff so accepted
02:09:424 - maybe http://puu.sh/q8eMc/a5d2c1f192.jpg? if u like a neater pattern that pattern kinda balanced so accepted

Another
00:03:081 (3081|3) - how about move to 3? to reduce the strain at 00:02:738 (2738|3,2910|3,3081|3,3252|3) - i want to make drill note at that part if u say so i repattern it back
00:09:081 (9081|1) - move to 4? well is just allow your left hand to rest before 00:09:252 (9252|1,9424|1,9767|1,9938|1) -
00:11:395 (11395|3) - how about remove this note to prevent a mini jack here? it could be more friendly pattern for others, u can use this for the hardest diff of course :3 since this is just 1/4 jack i dont think its so hard for another diff
00:16:967 (16967|1) - remove it? i know triple is for crash sound here but it seems hard to hit it perfectly during 1/4 stream part, removing it would be reconsidereasier a lot to play.
00:17:824 (17824|0) - move to 3? doesn't really fit with the sound here well so maybe variate it here nice
00:19:024 (19024|2) - move to 1 for balance
00:23:138 (23138|2) - move to 4?
00:29:310 (29310|2,29481|2,29652|2,29824|2,29995|2,30167|2,30338|2,30510|2,30681|2,30852|2,31024|2,31195|2,31367|2) - looks hard for the right hand here, i would recommend to rearrange some to 1-2 column rearranged
00:33:338 (33338|0) - like before ^ remove it to avoid mini jack here 1/4 are fine
00:38:824 (38824|3) - and so on if u accept ^
00:42:938 (42938|2) - how about move to 4? to make it constant with your kick pattern here like 00:42:338 (42338|3,42424|0,42510|3,42595|0) - drum trill yea oki xD
00:52:367 (52367|1,52410|0,52538|1,52581|0) - how about CTRL+G this? the 1/8 sound here are a little different ok
01:49:995 (109995|0,109995|3,109995|1,110110|3,110110|0,110110|2) - i think is pretty too much for another diff, maybe reduce them into double note here would be better yeah i think the same too
02:03:767 (123767|2,123767|1,123767|0) - reduce a note? it's kick+bass though


Black Another
00:01:195 (1195|0,1195|3,1281|1,1367|2,1452|3,1538|0,1538|2,1538|1,1624|3,1710|2,1795|0,1881|3,1881|1) - just saying that these are 1/8 sound i follow the hit hat not that 1/8 sound
00:12:167 (12167|1,12167|3,12252|2,12338|0,12424|1,12510|2,12510|3,12510|0,12595|1,12681|2,12767|3,12852|1,12852|0) - ^ ^
00:34:110 (34110|3,34110|1,34195|2,34281|0,34367|1,34452|2,34452|0,34452|3,34538|1,34624|2,34710|3,34795|1,34795|0) - ^ and so on for the same part if u wanted to map that sound here but i still think the best to map it since this is the hardest diff ^ i think its kinda unstable for that part


Good Luck~ :D
Thanks For Mod Star :D
You find so many my misplace note xD
Upated
SReisen
m4m
open
[General]

https://osu.ppy.sh/b/941149 - follow this map meta

[Normal]

00:11:138 - 00:11:310 - suggest to add a note for a kick
01:06:338 - add note to 4 ,cymbal
01:17:310 - add to 1
01:17:995 - missing LN
02:03:767 - add note
02:06:338 - ^

your normal had huge gap to hyper , make it harder abit

[Hyper]

00:16:538 - add kick
00:19:452 - 00:19:624 - add
00:22:281 (22281|3,22452|2,22624|3,22795|2) - ctrl+j
00:41:138 (41138|2,41224|1) - ctrl+h different pitch
00:41:652 - add note - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5670636 try this , 00:43:024 - add note to 4
00:53:995 (53995|0,54338|2) - ctrl+j
00:55:710 (55710|2,55795|1) - ctrl+h
00:57:510 (57510|1,57595|2) - ^
00:57:767 (57767|1,57938|3) - ctrl+j

[Another]

00:11:052 (11052|0,11138|3) - double note
00:22:110 (22110|1) - LN?
00:59:138 (59138|0) - remove
01:03:424 (63424|2,63510|0) - ctrl+j
01:04:538 (64538|3) - move to 1

[Black Another]

00:16:624 (16624|3) - move to - 00:16:538 -
00:55:281 (55281|3) - remove this i guess
00:57:681 (57681|1) - move to -00:57:767 -

cool

Click me for more info
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

SReisen wrote:

m4m
open
[General]

https://osu.ppy.sh/b/941149 - follow this map meta

[Normal]

00:11:138 - 00:11:310 - suggest to add a note for a kick
01:06:338 - add note to 4 ,cymbal
01:17:310 - add to 1
01:17:995 - missing LN forgot..thnx
02:03:767 - add note i dont follow that sound at this part
02:06:338 - ^ already have note

your normal had huge gap to hyper , make it harder abit

[Hyper]

00:16:538 - add kick
00:19:452 - 00:19:624 - add
00:22:281 (22281|3,22452|2,22624|3,22795|2) - ctrl+j
00:41:138 (41138|2,41224|1) - ctrl+h different pitch
00:41:652 - add note - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5670636 ok try this , 00:43:024 - add note to 4 just a whistle sound
00:53:995 (53995|0,54338|2) - ctrl+j not fully follow this cause this change makes my pattern became weird so i rearranged it
00:55:710 (55710|2,55795|1) - ctrl+h ^
00:57:510 (57510|1,57595|2) - ^ ^
00:57:767 (57767|1,57938|3) - ctrl+j

[Another]

00:11:052 (11052|0,11138|3) - double note
00:22:110 (22110|1) - LN?
00:59:138 (59138|0) - remove
01:03:424 (63424|2,63510|0) - ctrl+j
01:04:538 (64538|3) - move to 1

[Black Another]

00:16:624 (16624|3) - move to - 00:16:538 -
00:55:281 (55281|3) - remove this i guess
00:57:681 (57681|1) - move to -00:57:767 - all accepted..nice

cool

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Alsty-
yooo . nm here.
Col. guide
1|2|3|4

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Black another :
this diff i think u can make this more difficult.
00:01:195 (1195|0,1281|1,1367|2,1452|3,1624|3,1710|2,1795|0) - this is can be 1/8 like thisthis is suggested if u want to create more difficult pattern for highest diff 00:12:167 - next section
00:12:938 (12938|2,13024|1) - make this 2|3 if mod above applied
00:16:967 (16967|0,16967|1) - this is should be 3 , the end have cymbals or u can make it like this
00:21:767 (21767|1) - delete there's no synth or something to make this LN and im sure this 00:21:424 (21424|0) - started from 00:21:467 - if u take the vocal for this LN
00:23:138 - here same as first
00:34:110 - same with 00:12:167 -
00:35:395 (35395|2) - make double , its snare
00:36:852 (36852|2,36852|3) - make triple , its not bass , the sound same with 00:36:510 (36510|1,36510|0,36510|3) -
00:47:138 (47138|2) - if this is synth make it end 00:47:824 - here
00:55:795 (55795|3,55967|1) - double? i hear it was bass
00:59:910 (59910|0) - ^
01:01:281 (61281|3) - here too ^
01:32:910 - missing note?
01:38:481 (98481|0,98567|1) - change this with LN till 01:38:652 -
01:49:995 (109995|2,110110|2) - delete . and i think it will better if like this
02:10:110 - u can add 1 in 2 or i suggested like this :3
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

Alsty- wrote:

yooo . nm here.
Col. guide
1|2|3|4

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Black another :
this diff i think u can make this more difficult.
00:01:195 (1195|0,1281|1,1367|2,1452|3,1624|3,1710|2,1795|0) - this is can be 1/8 like thisthis is suggested if u want to create more difficult pattern for highest diff 00:12:167 - next section want to keep 1/4 part..since adding 1/8 i will lose some note like kick,bass and hit hat
00:12:938 (12938|2,13024|1) - make this 2|3 if mod above applied ^
00:16:967 (16967|0,16967|1) - this is should be 3 , the end have cymbals or u can make it like this planning to make 1/8 double stream..also i make those cymbal note to 2 cause i want to avoid mini 1/8 jack
00:21:767 (21767|1) - delete there's no synth or something to make this LN and im sure this there has some stuck voice..more like 1/8 jack..in order to avoid jack note..i place it with LN 00:21:424 (21424|0) - started from 00:21:467 - if u take the vocal for this LN thanks
00:23:138 - here same as first same reason
00:34:110 - same with 00:12:167 - ^
00:35:395 (35395|2) - make double , its snare nice
00:36:852 (36852|2,36852|3) - make triple , its not bass , the sound same with 00:36:510 (36510|1,36510|0,36510|3) - hear carefully there has a different between those note..yeah its same but there are no sound like this 00:37:195 (37195|0,37195|2,37195|1) - 00:37:881 (37881|2,37881|3,37881|0) -
00:47:138 (47138|2) - if this is synth make it end 00:47:824 - here there have sound change here 00:47:652 -
00:55:795 (55795|3,55967|1) - double? i hear it was bass avoiding jack since there has LN..unless i planning to make this diff to 5 star
00:59:910 (59910|0) - ^ ^
01:01:281 (61281|3) - here too ^
01:32:910 - missing note? thanks
01:38:481 (98481|0,98567|1) - change this with LN till 01:38:652 - not suitable with those sound since there has 2 sound
01:49:995 (109995|2,110110|2) - delete . and i think it will better if like this moved those to 4..i cant delete it since that was the same sound like the others
02:10:110 - u can add 1 in 2 or i suggested like this :3 good idea but i dont place those triple since it makes more difficult to stream
Thanks for mod!
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Sklitterbeer
Ayy nice song (from queueueueueue)

Columns are 1|2|3|4

NM
00:48:852 (48852|1) - there shouldnt be 1/4ths on a nm diff, just saying
00:54:338 (54338|1) - ^
01:28:281 (88281|1) - no kiai at the drop? ok
you're like the first mapper i've ever seen whose kiai isn't 1/4 of the whole map gg

Shiki's HD
01:28:281 (88281|0) - again no kiai at the first drop? :(
00:21:081 (21081|0) - why is dis part completely empty? i know there are just vocals, but there's also some bass that you could map. just sayin.
00:44:395 (44395|0) - why not make the slider speed slower here and then speed up later?

Hyper
Couldn't find anythin lol gg

Good luck getting dis ranked, I cant play Insane+ diffs so it ends here :o
SReisen

SUPER_Samurai_ wrote:

Ayy nice song (from queueueueueue)

Columns are 1|2|3|4



Shiki's HD
01:28:281 (88281|0) - again no kiai at the first drop? :( not my work
00:21:081 (21081|0) - why is dis part completely empty? i know there are just vocals, but there's also some bass that you could map. just sayin. added some
00:44:395 (44395|0) - why not make the slider speed slower here and then speed up later?hmm rather not

Good luck getting dis ranked, I cant play Insane+ diffs so it ends here :o
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Shinora-
Hihi ^^ I was just passing by and I saw this map. Well I love this song, so let's go (Apply only you think what will fit good, feel free to reject anything that I put here).
(Column 1|2|3|4)

Black Another
• In 00:01:195 to 00:01:881 - I think this sound is in 1/8, so you can make some 1/8 patterns, like... http://puu.sh/qfEzr/564f593d9d.png. However, this would be VERY offensive, so it isn't necessary at all. (Ps: It appears on 00:12:167 - ,00:23:138 - and 00:34:110 - too)

• I think that you can remove 00:41:567 (41567|0) - , the sound isn't that intense and this makes the transition gets softly, imo.

• Remove one of these notes 00:11:395 (11395|3,11395|0) -, the sound isn't that intense on the blue line.

• 00:06:252 (6252|1,6338|0,6338|2,6338|3,6424|1) - This type of transition appears so much between 00:06:167 - and 00:09:852 - , so I think that you can mix this a bit, like... http://puu.sh/qfFmG/5aa447117d.png (this on 00:06:338 - ) and http://puu.sh/qfFqG/3ca8877830.jpg (this one on 00:07:452 - ).

• I would say that 00:13:967 (13967|1,13967|0,14052|2,14052|3,14138|0,14138|1) - should be single notes, so remove one of these on each line. (If you're going to change it, it repeats again in 00:08:481 (8481|2,8481|0,8567|1,8567|3,8652|0,8652|2) - , 00:19:452 (19452|3,19452|0,19538|1,19538|2,19624|3,19624|0) - , 00:24:938 (24938|2,24938|3,25024|1,25024|0,25110|3,25110|2) - , 00:30:424 (30424|1,30424|0,30510|2,30510|3,30595|0,30595|1) - ) and add a note in 00:08:395 - , 00:13:881 - , 00:19:367 - , 00:24:852 - and 00:30:338 - .

• 00:16:710 (16710|2) - Move to column 4.

• 00:17:052 (17052|2) - Ghost note. And move 00:17:138 (17138|0) - to column 3.

• 00:18:938 (18938|2) - Move to column 1.

• 00:21:767 (21767|1) - Delete; it feels so strange, trust me.

• 00:35:481 (35481|1,35910|2,36081|0) - Delete; those sounds aren't that intense.

• 00:41:395 (41395|2,41395|0,41567|2,41567|0) - Ghost notes. I think you can rearrange this session, what about http://puu.sh/qfI9X/5128f0456d.png (the puush starts on 00:41:652 - ). Is it good?

In my opinion, it is better to move 00:48:767 (48767|0) - to column 3; it feels very unconfortable and it isn't that good putting minijacks on the two hands at the same time, you can simply go alternating it between both hands.

• 00:51:938 - I think that it is good to rearrange those streams. What about http://puu.sh/qfI2f/6a06716fe0.png ...?

• Move 01:09:681 (69681|1) - to column 4.

• 01:17:310 - Mixing those patterns with lns can be very offensive, I could say you to rearrange that part (If you're going to change this, it appears on 01:28:281 - to 01:48:852 - too); Although, this is my opinion, feel free to reject it c:

• 01:25:538 - Jumptrill doesn't fit that good on this beginning, so I think that you can make something like http://puu.sh/qfIya/be13ae35ae.png.

• 02:09:424 - Same as above, I would say you to rearrange this part, like the examples that I give.

• 01:48:681 (108681|2) - Transform this into a single note; looks better. (OR you can remove one note from 01:48:852 - and move 01:48:895 (108895|2) - to the empty column, this works too)

Hey dude, that's a really good map, I loved it, and your mapping style is really funny.
The song is pretty good too! I can come back to mod the other diffs later if you want, because I'm out of time at the moment, so yeah, good luck! ^^
No_sync
hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3



General
There are something conflictive (at least for me), in the tags i see a GD with SReisen, but in the only diff that i can see a GD nick/diff, It's called: "Shiki's Hard"
This can be confusing, I mean: how i know that "Shiki's Hard" is from SReisen?. I suggest to change the name of that diff. Up to you.

BG size is 1228x767, what is incorrect, you need 1024x768 or 1366x768 (or even 800x600) from Ranking Criteria:
Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).

B u u u t NO problem!... Take one in 1366x768: http://i.imgur.com/k0Vz96o.jpg :D

Now, AiMod says that Normal diff have few LongNotes and a lot of NoteS, so increase the OD/HP will be necessary.
I think that 6 in both stats is too low for a Normal diff. Apply if you consider:
Normal: OD: 7.0 | HP: 6.5/7.0
Shiki's Hard: OD: 7.0 | HP: 7.2
Hyper: OD: 7.5 | HP: 7.5
Another: OD: 8.0 | HP: 8.0
Black Another: OD: 8.0/8.2 | HP: 8.2/8.5

Just a little comment, I think that Another (StarRating: 4.31) and Black Another (SR: 4.75) are too much close, and Hyper its too behind (SR: 3.04)
I think that Another needs to be more close to Hyper than Black Another. But you can say that SR, dont represent anything in mania mode, that is true. Just saying xD! /runs.

Normal
I think you can put more interest in the vocal, since is a sound (instrument too?) very clear in this song, you can put some LongNotes for the vocal.
Also in certain parts you need spread the kicks from the snares.

00:10:624 - I think you can add a note here, for the vocal. It fits. in |2|

00:10:795 - ^^same, add a note. in |1|

00:10:110 (10110|1,10110|0,10452|3) - Compare this time with the Hard one, There isnt a LongNote in Hard diff... is only these two notes. I suggest to Erase that LongNote. In Hard, well i will add that.

00:11:138 (11138|1,11310|2,11481|0,11481|3) - ...maybe if is too difficult to fit those sounds there, i will do this: http://i.imgur.com/Jv6QT8A.jpg
Is a little similar than Hard, but i think that will better than now.

00:11:824 (11824|1,11824|2) - ^^to |0| and |3|.

00:12:167 (12167|0) - to |1|

00:15:252 (15252|3) - I think you can put more vocals there, here is very clear. Replace with a LongNote to 00:15:595.

00:15:595 (15595|2) - ^^same, Replace with a LongNote to 00:15:938.

00:16:624 (16624|1,16624|0,16967|3,16967|0) - Two options here, http://i.imgur.com/EKYFafv.jpg Or http://i.imgur.com/drHCVLG.jpg

00:20:052 - I think you can add this kick... in |1|.

00:20:738 - Also this. in |2|.

00:21:081 (21081|2) - Move to |3| and Replace with a LongNote to 00:22:110. Because that sound continues...

00:32:052 to 00:33:424 - this part is too much empty, at least add some things:

00:32:052 - Note, vocal "poi!" in |2|

00:32:310 - Note, another "poi!" in |2| as well. (And yes is the blue line).

00:32:395 - Note, Kick. in |1|

00:32:652 - Note, Kick. in |1| too. (blue line again).

00:32:910 - LongNote, you hear that whistle sound? it continues to 00:33:424. Take the Screenshot of all that!: http://i.imgur.com/qH7Lpi3.jpg <- Also you can move the kicks notes to |0| for better rest.

From 00:38:910 to 00:41:652 - This part is literally too calm. You have left some notes:

00:39:081 - kick, add a note in |1|.

00:39:424 - kick, add a note in |3|.

00:39:767 - kick, add a note in |0|.

00:40:110 - kick, add a note in |0|.

00:40:452 - kick, add a note in |2|.

00:40:795 - kick, add a note in |1|.

00:41:138 - kick, add a note in |3|.

00:41:481 - kick, add a note in |2|.

00:43:024 (43024|2) - You can Replace this with a LongNote to 00:44:395. Up to you.

00:45:767 (45767|2,46024|1,46281|2) - these snares are exactly the same for me, so you can make stairs... http://i.imgur.com/lPVfUUP.jpg

00:47:138 (47138|2) - This "cymbal" sound extends to 00:47:652. First, move to |1|, then Replace with a LongNote to 00:47:652.

00:48:167 (48167|1) - move to |0| because is a kick, separate it from the snares.

00:48:767 (48767|0) - to |1|.

00:48:852 (48852|1) - to |3|.

00:49:110 (49110|2,49367|3) - Ctrl+H And move these 2 one column to the right.

00:49:538 (49538|1) - to |3|

00:49:710 (49710|2,49881|3) - Ctrl+H.

00:49:881 - ^^Replace this note that was moved...with a LongNote to 00:50:395.

00:50:395 (50395|0) - Move to |1|.

00:50:567 (50567|1) - to |3|.

00:51:081 (51081|3,51252|2,51510|0,51767|3) - Stairs, like 00:45:767 (45767|2,46024|1,46281|2), but to the left, 00:51:510 (51510|0) - to |1| And, 00:51:767 (51767|3) - to |0|.

00:52:110 (52110|1) - to |3|.

00:52:281 (52281|2) - to |0|.

00:52:624 (52624|3) - move to |2| and Replace with a LongNote to 00:53:138.

00:53:138 (53138|0) - to |1|.

00:53:481 (53481|2) - to |0|.

00:53:652 (53652|1) - to |3|.

00:53:995 (53995|3) - to |1|.

00:54:338 (54338|1) - to |3|.

00:54:595 (54595|2) - to |1|.

00:55:195 (55195|2,55367|1) - Ctrl+H and move these one column to the left.

00:55:710 (55710|0) - to |3|.

00:56:224 (56224|2) - to |0|.

00:56:395 (56395|1) - to |3|.

00:56:738 (56738|3,57081|0) - Ctrl+H

00:57:338 (57338|2) - to |1|.

00:57:510 (57510|1) - to |3|.

00:57:767 (57767|3) - to |0|.

00:59:138 (59138|1) - to |0|.

00:59:310 (59310|0) - to |2|.

00:59:824 (59824|2) - to |1|

01:00:681 (60681|1,60852|2) - move these two one column to the right.

01:02:567 (62567|1) - to |0|.

01:03:252 (63252|2) - to |1|.

01:03:595 (63595|0,63938|3) - Ctrl+H.

01:04:110 (64110|1) - to |2|.

01:04:624 (64624|2) - to |0|.

01:04:967 (64967|0,65138|1) - Ctrl+H and move these two one column to the left.

01:05:481 (65481|2) - to |1|.

01:22:795 (82795|3,82795|0,82967|1,83138|2,83310|0,83481|1,83652|2,83824|3,83995|2,84167|1) - Do this: http://i.imgur.com/veKXEaA.jpg

01:24:338 (84338|3,84510|2,84681|1,84852|0,85024|1,85195|2,85367|3) - And this: http://i.imgur.com/H7S6DTd.jpg

01:27:938 (87938|0) - I think you need add a note in |3|... kick + snare.

02:00:852 (120852|2,120852|1) - there a silence there, is good enough right now, but you can try Replace both for LongNotes. you decide, is good enough right now.

From 02:07:024 to 02:09:424 - something similar that "From 00:38:910 to 00:41:652".

02:09:424 (129424|3) - similar to 01:25:538 with that LongNote at least for me.

Shiki's Hard
I think there are many stacks... for a hard maybe is too much having like 4 notes in the same column... Also you can follow some vocal sounds and cymbals..."some".

00:10:110 (10110|2,10452|1) - If you check the Normal diff, there are a LongNote there, but here no. Add it.

00:21:081 (21081|0,21081|3) - Replace one of these notes for a LongNote to 00:22:110.

00:22:110 - Add a note in |2| to fit.

00:32:052 - You can use this Screenshot for reference... to add some vocals and something else that i notice: http://i.imgur.com/qH7Lpi3.jpg <- but dont quit some notes that you have already because are perfect! just add, about the LN i think isnt necessary here.

00:38:224 (38224|1) - I think is snare+kick but if isnt, move this note to |0|, because is somewhat close to those 1/4 stairs...

00:43:024 (43024|1) - You can add a LongNote here to 00:44:395... you decide.

00:47:138 (47138|2) - cymbal to 00:47:652, but i see that you dont like LNs there... i will skip these cymbal from now on...

00:55:710 (55710|3,55795|0,55967|0,56224|0) - ...my idea: http://i.imgur.com/bOqyhSe.jpg <- because maybe is tough if you leave like now...

00:58:624 (58624|1,58881|1,59052|1,59310|1) - Are you sure of this stack?...Im not.

01:01:281 (61281|0,61452|0,61710|0) - Same as 00:55:710 (55710|3,55795|0,55967|0,56224|0)...

01:04:110 (64110|1,64367|1,64538|1) - another...

01:23:310 (83310|1,83481|0,83652|1,83995|0,84167|1,84338|0,84681|1,84852|0,85024|1) - I see that pattern... maybe if you Alternate... because left hand is somewhat under pressure there.

01:25:538 (85538|3,85624|2,85710|1,85795|0,85881|3,85967|2,86052|1,86138|0,86224|1,86310|2,86395|3,86481|0,86567|1,86652|2,86738|3,86824|2,86910|1,86910|0) - Check: http://i.imgur.com/s6Ixrvf.jpg

02:00:852 (120852|3,120852|0) - These two sound different of the rest, you know that silence... i suggest to move to |1| and |2| both.

02:10:795 (130795|0,130795|3,131138|1,131824|1,132167|0,132167|3) - I think is too empty, you can add notes following the vocal too...http://i.imgur.com/XODRB5V.jpg <- left is Hyper, right is your diff.

Hyper
Its well mapped, just some 1/4 stairs (a lot, and in certain cases a bit complicated...) i think you can alternate more with bursts in certain parts...

00:21:467 (21467|0) - Is this LongNote for the vocal? GJ. if not why? :3

00:32:310 (32310|1) - Like the Screenshot in Normal...remember those "poi!" here will be really good: http://i.imgur.com/qH7Lpi3.jpg <- maybe the kicks too. (forget the LN xD)

00:33:081 (33081|2,33167|1,33252|0,33338|1,33424|0,33424|2,33424|3) - you can change for this burst: http://i.imgur.com/iVWGss9.jpg<- if you like it...

00:38:567 (38567|1,38567|0,38652|2,38738|3,38824|2,38910|0,38910|3,38910|1) - http://i.imgur.com/iVWGss9.jpg ...

00:41:138 (41138|1,41224|2,41310|3,41310|0,41395|1,41481|2,41567|1,41652|3,41652|0,41738|1,41824|2,41910|0,41995|3,42081|2,42167|1,42252|3,42338|0,42424|1,42510|2,42595|0,42681|3,42767|0,42852|1,42938|2) - I like it but dont forget you can put bursts...

00:44:052 (44052|2) - I think this ends in 00:44:738... up to you. (or leave like now because fits xD)

From 01:06:338 to 01:17:310 - The LNs section, I see that some LongNotes are Replacing some snares when they are "cymbals" Like: 01:07:710 - 01:09:081 - 01:10:452 - 01:11:138 - 01:11:824 - 01:13:195 - 01:14:567 - 01:15:938 - 01:16:624 - You can add noteS there...

01:17:481 (77481|1,77567|2,77652|3,77738|2,77824|0,77910|1,77995|3,78081|2,78167|1,78252|0,78338|1,78424|0,78510|1,78595|2,78681|3,78767|2,78852|0,78938|1,79024|2,79110|0,79195|1,79281|2,79367|1,79452|0,79538|2,79624|3,79710|1,79795|0,79881|1,79967|2,80052|3,80138|2,80224|1,80310|0,80395|2,80481|3,80567|2,80652|0,80738|1,80824|2,80910|1,80995|2,81081|0,81167|1,81252|2,81338|3,81424|2,81510|0,81595|1,81681|3,81767|2,81852|1,81938|0,82024|3,82110|2,82195|0,82281|1,82367|2,82452|3,82538|2,82624|0,82710|1) - I ... think ... what ... pass. just some parts are stacking, watch out.

01:25:538 (85538|3,85538|0,85624|2,85710|1,85795|0,85881|1,85967|2,86052|3,86138|0,86224|1,86310|2,86395|3,86481|2,86567|1,86652|0,86738|3,86824|2) - http://i.imgur.com/iVWGss9.jpg <- neverforget lol

01:27:081 (87081|2) - I think this is repetitive from the last sound...move to |1|.

01:49:710 (109710|0) - There some differences here dont you think? http://i.imgur.com/CQyiGkj.jpg <- right is Hard diff.

Another
ok now are SVs, 1/6 and 1/8 patterns ...very good.

From 00:11:481 to 00:19:710 - Really there so many notes there? is for those whistles in the background? I will skip these sounds from now on...because are maany! :3

00:19:452 (19452|1,19538|0,19624|1) - Here you can use trills, between columns |0| and |3|.

00:32:395 (32395|1,32395|3,32567|1,32567|0,32652|3,32652|2,32738|0,32738|1) - ...but if you do this?... http://i.imgur.com/ufUKCKD.jpg

From 01:07:710 to 01:17:310 - ok i think is good all...that. but here is something bad: 01:17:224 (77224|0,77310|0) - but i dont have ideas how move that because all the columns are covered xD

Im really dont see any more problems here...maybe the SV can be a bit more "slow for trick" i mean really slow, and sudden fast...

Black Another
The only thing bad that i see is those 1/8 chordtrills, more than that is like Another with more noteS in someparts...

00:12:252 (12252|2,12338|0,12424|1,12510|3,12510|0,12510|2,12595|1,12681|2) - When i hear those whistles in the background i think 1/6 stairs...maybe too much.

00:16:795 (16795|1,16795|0,16838|2,16838|3,16881|0,16881|1,16924|2,16924|3,16967|1,16967|0) - Just to say that this is too much, i check another map more difficult (SR: 7 "blastix") and the most they have is 1/4 snap for the chord trills... and alternate between 1/6 and 1/8 stairs.

00:22:024 (22024|3,22110|2,22224|0,22281|3,22281|1,22338|2) - I think is possible to put some jacks in vocal sounds...

01:49:710 (109710|3,109710|2,109752|0,109752|1,109795|3,109795|2,109838|1,109838|0,109881|2,109881|3) - Like a said... too much.

02:07:024 (127024|0,127024|1,127024|2) - Its like 02:01:195 (121195|1,121195|0,121195|3,121195|2) - dont you think? add a note in |3|.

02:10:795 (130795|1,130795|3,130795|0) - ^^might here too.

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OK! i think is all that i can do for you!
Good luck and bye! :)
SReisen

No_sync wrote:

hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3



General
There are something conflictive (at least for me), in the tags i see a GD with SReisen, but in the only diff that i can see a GD nick/diff, It's called: "Shiki's Hard"
This can be confusing, I mean: how i know that "Shiki's Hard" is from SReisen?. I suggest to change the name of that diff. Up to you.

BG size is 1228x767, what is incorrect, you need 1024x768 or 1366x768 (or even 800x600) from Ranking Criteria:
Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).

B u u u t NO problem!... Take one in 1366x768: http://i.imgur.com/k0Vz96o.jpg :D

Now, AiMod says that Normal diff have few LongNotes and a lot of NoteS, so increase the OD/HP will be necessary.
I think that 6 in both stats is too low for a Normal diff. Apply if you consider:
Normal: OD: 7.0 | HP: 6.5/7.0
Shiki's Hard: OD: 7.0 | HP: 7.2
Hyper: OD: 7.5 | HP: 7.5
Another: OD: 8.0 | HP: 8.0
Black Another: OD: 8.0/8.2 | HP: 8.2/8.5

Just a little comment, I think that Another (StarRating: 4.31) and Black Another (SR: 4.75) are too much close, and Hyper its too behind (SR: 3.04)
I think that Another needs to be more close to Hyper than Black Another. But you can say that SR, dont represent anything in mania mode, that is true. Just saying xD! /runs.



Shiki's Hard
I think there are many stacks... for a hard maybe is too much having like 4 notes in the same column... Also you can follow some vocal sounds and cymbals..."some".

00:10:110 (10110|2,10452|1) - If you check the Normal diff, there are a LongNote there, but here no. Add it. different people different taste

00:21:081 (21081|0,21081|3) - Replace one of these notes for a LongNote to 00:22:110.^

00:22:110 - Add a note in |2| to fit.no thanks

00:32:052 - You can use this Screenshot for reference... to add some vocals and something else that i notice: http://i.imgur.com/qH7Lpi3.jpg <- but dont quit some notes that you have already because are perfect! just add, about the LN i think isnt necessary here.i dont follow vocal[/color]

00:38:224 (38224|1) - I think is snare+kick but if isnt, move this note to |0|, because is somewhat close to those 1/4 stairs... kinda weird so nope

00:43:024 (43024|1) - You can add a LongNote here to 00:44:395... you decide. no thanks

00:47:138 (47138|2) - cymbal to 00:47:652, but i see that you dont like LNs there... i will skip these cymbal from now on...cymbal ,well that can be ignored

00:55:710 (55710|3,55795|0,55967|0,56224|0) - ...my idea: http://i.imgur.com/bOqyhSe.jpg <- because maybe is tough if you leave like now... reconsider this

00:58:624 (58624|1,58881|1,59052|1,59310|1) - Are you sure of this stack?...Im not. ^

01:01:281 (61281|0,61452|0,61710|0) - Same as 00:55:710 (55710|3,55795|0,55967|0,56224|0)... ^

01:04:110 (64110|1,64367|1,64538|1) - another...^

01:23:310 (83310|1,83481|0,83652|1,83995|0,84167|1,84338|0,84681|1,84852|0,85024|1) - I see that pattern... maybe if you Alternate... because left hand is somewhat under pressure there. i think its okay

01:25:538 (85538|3,85624|2,85710|1,85795|0,85881|3,85967|2,86052|1,86138|0,86224|1,86310|2,86395|3,86481|0,86567|1,86652|2,86738|3,86824|2,86910|1,86910|0) - Check: http://i.imgur.com/s6Ixrvf.jpg i like this yes changed

02:00:852 (120852|3,120852|0) - These two sound different of the rest, you know that silence... i suggest to move to |1| and |2| both. reconsider

02:10:795 (130795|0,130795|3,131138|1,131824|1,132167|0,132167|3) - I think is too empty, you can add notes following the vocal too...http://i.imgur.com/XODRB5V.jpg <- left is Hyper, right is your diff.no thanks



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OK! i think is all that i can do for you!
Good luck and bye! :)
thank you and sato please add my old name in tags

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Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

SUPER_Samurai_ wrote:

Ayy nice song (from queueueueueue)

Columns are 1|2|3|4

NM
00:48:852 (48852|1) - there shouldnt be 1/4ths on a nm diff, just saying it's not really hard so its okay
00:54:338 (54338|1) - ^ ^
01:28:281 (88281|1) - no kiai at the drop? ok dont want to many kiai lol
you're like the first mapper i've ever seen whose kiai isn't 1/4 of the whole map gg

Shiki's HD
01:28:281 (88281|0) - again no kiai at the first drop? :(
00:21:081 (21081|0) - why is dis part completely empty? i know there are just vocals, but there's also some bass that you could map. just sayin.
00:44:395 (44395|0) - why not make the slider speed slower here and then speed up later?

Hyper
Couldn't find anythin lol gg GG

Good luck getting dis ranked, I cant play Insane+ diffs so it ends here :o
Thanks for mod
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Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

Konoe-chan wrote:

Hihi ^^ I was just passing by and I saw this map. Well I love this song, so let's go (Apply only you think what will fit good, feel free to reject anything that I put here).
(Column 1|2|3|4)

Black Another
• In 00:01:195 to 00:01:881 - I think this sound is in 1/8, so you can make some 1/8 patterns, like... http://puu.sh/qfEzr/564f593d9d.png. However, this would be VERY offensive, so it isn't necessary at all. (Ps: It appears on 00:12:167 - ,00:23:138 - and 00:34:110 - too) i planning to make those too but i will lose such as kick,bass and hit hat sound..many moderator recommended me to map this part..reconsider

• I think that you can remove 00:41:567 (41567|0) - , the sound isn't that intense and this makes the transition gets softly, imo.nice!

• Remove one of these notes 00:11:395 (11395|3,11395|0) -, the sound isn't that intense on the blue line.same sound like this 00:11:052 (11052|3,11052|0) -

• 00:06:252 (6252|1,6338|0,6338|2,6338|3,6424|1) - This type of transition appears so much between 00:06:167 - and 00:09:852 - , so I think that you can mix this a bit, like... http://puu.sh/qfFmG/5aa447117d.png (this on 00:06:338 - ) and http://puu.sh/qfFqG/3ca8877830.jpg (this one on 00:07:452 - ).looks good

• I would say that 00:13:967 (13967|1,13967|0,14052|2,14052|3,14138|0,14138|1) - should be single notes, so remove one of these on each line. (If you're going to change it, it repeats again in 00:08:481 (8481|2,8481|0,8567|1,8567|3,8652|0,8652|2) - , 00:19:452 (19452|3,19452|0,19538|1,19538|2,19624|3,19624|0) - , 00:24:938 (24938|2,24938|3,25024|1,25024|0,25110|3,25110|2) - , 00:30:424 (30424|1,30424|0,30510|2,30510|3,30595|0,30595|1) - ) and add a note in 00:08:395 - , 00:13:881 - , 00:19:367 - , 00:24:852 - and 00:30:338 - .since this is the hardest diff so it will be okay to not remove it

• 00:16:710 (16710|2) - Move to column 4.

• 00:17:052 (17052|2) - Ghost note.hit hat And move 00:17:138 (17138|0) - to column 3.

• 00:18:938 (18938|2) - Move to column 1.

• 00:21:767 (21767|1) - Delete; it feels so strange, trust me.those jacking voice

• 00:35:481 (35481|1,35910|2,36081|0) - Delete; those sounds aren't that intense. bass and kick

• 00:41:395 (41395|2,41395|0,41567|2,41567|0) - Ghost notes. I think you can rearrange this session, what about http://puu.sh/qfI9X/5128f0456d.png (the puush starts on 00:41:652 - ). Is it good? there has bass lol

In my opinion, it is better to move 00:48:767 (48767|0) - to column 3; it feels very unconfortable and it isn't that good putting minijacks on the two hands at the same time, you can simply go alternating it between both hands.

• 00:51:938 - I think that it is good to rearrange those streams. What about http://puu.sh/qfI2f/6a06716fe0.png ...? puush not found

• Move 01:09:681 (69681|1) - to column 4.

• 01:17:310 - Mixing those patterns with lns can be very offensive, I could say you to rearrange that part (If you're going to change this, it appears on 01:28:281 - to 01:48:852 - too); Although, this is my opinion, feel free to reject it c: since this is the hardest diff i think its okay

• 01:25:538 - Jumptrill doesn't fit that good on this beginning, so I think that you can make something like http://puu.sh/qfIya/be13ae35ae.png. much better than 1,4 2,3 stream..also i cant view ur image

• 02:09:424 - Same as above, I would say you to rearrange this part, like the examples that I give. ^

• 01:48:681 (108681|2) - Transform this into a single note; looks better. (OR you can remove one note from 01:48:852 - and move 01:48:895 (108895|2) - to the empty column, this works too)gotta agree..changed to single note

Hey dude, that's a really good map, I loved it, and your mapping style is really funny.
The song is pretty good too! I can come back to mod the other diffs later if you want, because I'm out of time at the moment, so yeah, good luck! ^^
Thanks For Mod :D
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Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki

No_sync wrote:

hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3



General
There are something conflictive (at least for me), in the tags i see a GD with SReisen, but in the only diff that i can see a GD nick/diff, It's called: "Shiki's Hard"
This can be confusing, I mean: how i know that "Shiki's Hard" is from SReisen?. I suggest to change the name of that diff. Up to you. qill discuss

BG size is 1228x767, what is incorrect, you need 1024x768 or 1366x768 (or even 800x600) from Ranking Criteria:
Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).

B u u u t NO problem!... Take one in 1366x768: http://i.imgur.com/k0Vz96o.jpg :D thanks for BG :D

Now, AiMod says that Normal diff have few LongNotes and a lot of NoteS, so increase the OD/HP will be necessary.
I think that 6 in both stats is too low for a Normal diff. Apply if you consider:
Normal: OD: 7.0 | HP: 6.5/7.0
Shiki's Hard: OD: 7.0 | HP: 7.2
Hyper: OD: 7.5 | HP: 7.5
Another: OD: 8.0 | HP: 8.0
Black Another: OD: 8.0/8.2 | HP: 8.2/8.5

Just a little comment, I think that Another (StarRating: 4.31) and Black Another (SR: 4.75) are too much close, and Hyper its too behind (SR: 3.04)
I think that Another needs to be more close to Hyper than Black Another. But you can say that SR, dont represent anything in mania mode, that is true. Just saying xD! /runs. i think there has no problem with it..since ranked one hard = 2.7 and another = 4.12

Normal
I think you can put more interest in the vocal, since is a sound (instrument too?) very clear in this song, you can put some LongNotes for the vocal.
Also in certain parts you need spread the kicks from the snares.

00:10:624 - I think you can add a note here, for the vocal. It fits. in |2|

00:10:795 - ^^same, add a note. in |1|

00:10:110 (10110|1,10110|0,10452|3) - Compare this time with the Hard one, There isnt a LongNote in Hard diff... is only these two notes. I suggest to Erase that LongNote. In Hard, well i will add that.

00:11:138 (11138|1,11310|2,11481|0,11481|3) - ...maybe if is too difficult to fit those sounds there, i will do this: http://i.imgur.com/Jv6QT8A.jpg
Is a little similar than Hard, but i think that will better than now.

00:11:824 (11824|1,11824|2) - ^^to |0| and |3|.

00:12:167 (12167|0) - to |1|

00:15:252 (15252|3) - I think you can put more vocals there, here is very clear. Replace with a LongNote to 00:15:595.

00:15:595 (15595|2) - ^^same, Replace with a LongNote to 00:15:938.

00:16:624 (16624|1,16624|0,16967|3,16967|0) - Two options here, http://i.imgur.com/EKYFafv.jpg Or http://i.imgur.com/drHCVLG.jpg

00:20:052 - I think you can add this kick... in |1|.

00:20:738 - Also this. in |2|.

00:21:081 (21081|2) - Move to |3| and Replace with a LongNote to 00:22:110. Because that sound continues...

00:32:052 to 00:33:424 - this part is too much empty, at least add some things:

00:32:052 - Note, vocal "poi!" in |2| readjust note

00:32:310 - Note, another "poi!" in |2| as well. (And yes is the blue line).

00:32:395 - Note, Kick. in |1|

00:32:652 - Note, Kick. in |1| too. (blue line again). ^ same

00:32:910 - LongNote, you hear that whistle sound? it continues to 00:33:424. Take the Screenshot of all that!: http://i.imgur.com/qH7Lpi3.jpg <- Also you can move the kicks notes to |0| for better rest.

From 00:38:910 to 00:41:652 - This part is literally too calm. You have left some notes:

00:39:081 - kick, add a note in |1|.

00:39:424 - kick, add a note in |3|.

00:39:767 - kick, add a note in |0|.

00:40:110 - kick, add a note in |0|.

00:40:452 - kick, add a note in |2|.

00:40:795 - kick, add a note in |1|.

00:41:138 - kick, add a note in |3|.

00:41:481 - kick, add a note in |2|. ^only focus 1/1 part

00:43:024 (43024|2) - You can Replace this with a LongNote to 00:44:395. Up to you.

00:45:767 (45767|2,46024|1,46281|2) - these snares are exactly the same for me, so you can make stairs... http://i.imgur.com/lPVfUUP.jpg

00:47:138 (47138|2) - This "cymbal" sound extends to 00:47:652. First, move to |1|, then Replace with a LongNote to 00:47:652.moved but single note are fine

00:48:167 (48167|1) - move to |0| because is a kick, separate it from the snares.

00:48:767 (48767|0) - to |1|.

00:48:852 (48852|1) - to |3|.

00:49:110 (49110|2,49367|3) - Ctrl+H And move these 2 one column to the right. weird pattern..still follow this one but i change to 3,2

00:49:538 (49538|1) - to |3|

00:49:710 (49710|2,49881|3) - Ctrl+H.

00:49:881 - ^^Replace this note that was moved...with a LongNote to 00:50:395. same reason

00:50:395 (50395|0) - Move to |1|.

00:50:567 (50567|1) - to |3|.

00:51:081 (51081|3,51252|2,51510|0,51767|3) - Stairs, like 00:45:767 (45767|2,46024|1,46281|2), but to the left, 00:51:510 (51510|0) - to |1| And, 00:51:767 (51767|3) - to |0|.

00:52:110 (52110|1) - to |3|.

00:52:281 (52281|2) - to |0|.

00:52:624 (52624|3) - move to |2| and Replace with a LongNote to 00:53:138. same reason

00:53:138 (53138|0) - to |1|.

00:53:481 (53481|2) - to |0|.

00:53:652 (53652|1) - to |3|.

00:53:995 (53995|3) - to |1|.

00:54:338 (54338|1) - to |3|.

00:54:595 (54595|2) - to |1|.

00:55:195 (55195|2,55367|1) - Ctrl+H and move these one column to the left.

00:55:710 (55710|0) - to |3|.

00:56:224 (56224|2) - to |0|.

00:56:395 (56395|1) - to |3|.

00:56:738 (56738|3,57081|0) - Ctrl+H

00:57:338 (57338|2) - to |1|.

00:57:510 (57510|1) - to |3|.

00:57:767 (57767|3) - to |0|.

00:59:138 (59138|1) - to |0|.

00:59:310 (59310|0) - to |2|.

00:59:824 (59824|2) - to |1|

01:00:681 (60681|1,60852|2) - move these two one column to the right.

01:02:567 (62567|1) - to |0|.

01:03:252 (63252|2) - to |1|.

01:03:595 (63595|0,63938|3) - Ctrl+H.

01:04:110 (64110|1) - to |2|.

01:04:624 (64624|2) - to |0|.

01:04:967 (64967|0,65138|1) - Ctrl+H and move these two one column to the left.

01:05:481 (65481|2) - to |1|.

01:22:795 (82795|3,82795|0,82967|1,83138|2,83310|0,83481|1,83652|2,83824|3,83995|2,84167|1) - Do this: http://i.imgur.com/veKXEaA.jpg stairs more better

01:24:338 (84338|3,84510|2,84681|1,84852|0,85024|1,85195|2,85367|3) - And this: http://i.imgur.com/H7S6DTd.jpg

01:27:938 (87938|0) - I think you need add a note in |3|... kick + snare.

02:00:852 (120852|2,120852|1) - there a silence there, is good enough right now, but you can try Replace both for LongNotes. you decide, is good enough right now.

From 02:07:024 to 02:09:424 - something similar that "From 00:38:910 to 00:41:652".

02:09:424 (129424|3) - similar to 01:25:538 with that LongNote at least for me. others are accepted

Hyper
Its well mapped, just some 1/4 stairs (a lot, and in certain cases a bit complicated...) i think you can alternate more with bursts in certain parts...

00:21:467 (21467|0) - Is this LongNote for the vocal? GJ. if not why? :3 yes the vocal

00:32:310 (32310|1) - Like the Screenshot in Normal...remember those "poi!" here will be really good: http://i.imgur.com/qH7Lpi3.jpg <- maybe the kicks too. (forget the LN xD) since i follow snare and bass etc..i think its okay to not change

00:33:081 (33081|2,33167|1,33252|0,33338|1,33424|0,33424|2,33424|3) - you can change for this burst: http://i.imgur.com/iVWGss9.jpg<- if you like it... just making simple note

00:38:567 (38567|1,38567|0,38652|2,38738|3,38824|2,38910|0,38910|3,38910|1) - http://i.imgur.com/iVWGss9.jpg ... repattern my own balace pattern

00:41:138 (41138|1,41224|2,41310|3,41310|0,41395|1,41481|2,41567|1,41652|3,41652|0,41738|1,41824|2,41910|0,41995|3,42081|2,42167|1,42252|3,42338|0,42424|1,42510|2,42595|0,42681|3,42767|0,42852|1,42938|2) - I like it but dont forget you can put bursts... focusing single note here

00:44:052 (44052|2) - I think this ends in 00:44:738... up to you. (or leave like now because fits xD) yeah xD

From 01:06:338 to 01:17:310 - The LNs section, I see that some LongNotes are Replacing some snares when they are "cymbals" Like: 01:07:710 - 01:09:081 - 01:10:452 - 01:11:138 - 01:11:824 - 01:13:195 - 01:14:567 - 01:15:938 - 01:16:624 - You can add noteS there...single is fine i want to make this part relaxed

01:17:481 (77481|1,77567|2,77652|3,77738|2,77824|0,77910|1,77995|3,78081|2,78167|1,78252|0,78338|1,78424|0,78510|1,78595|2,78681|3,78767|2,78852|0,78938|1,79024|2,79110|0,79195|1,79281|2,79367|1,79452|0,79538|2,79624|3,79710|1,79795|0,79881|1,79967|2,80052|3,80138|2,80224|1,80310|0,80395|2,80481|3,80567|2,80652|0,80738|1,80824|2,80910|1,80995|2,81081|0,81167|1,81252|2,81338|3,81424|2,81510|0,81595|1,81681|3,81767|2,81852|1,81938|0,82024|3,82110|2,82195|0,82281|1,82367|2,82452|3,82538|2,82624|0,82710|1) - I ... think ... what ... pass. just some parts are stacking, watch out. repattern and lower some stacked

01:25:538 (85538|3,85538|0,85624|2,85710|1,85795|0,85881|1,85967|2,86052|3,86138|0,86224|1,86310|2,86395|3,86481|2,86567|1,86652|0,86738|3,86824|2) - http://i.imgur.com/iVWGss9.jpg <- neverforget lol same reason

01:27:081 (87081|2) - I think this is repetitive from the last sound...move to |1|.

01:49:710 (109710|0) - There some differences here dont you think? http://i.imgur.com/CQyiGkj.jpg <- right is Hard diff. added note

Another
ok now are SVs, 1/6 and 1/8 patterns ...very good.

From 00:11:481 to 00:19:710 - Really there so many notes there? is for those whistles in the background? I will skip these sounds from now on...because are maany! :3 thanks! my mistake

00:19:452 (19452|1,19538|0,19624|1) - Here you can use trills, between columns |0| and |3|. just making simple trill

00:32:395 (32395|1,32395|3,32567|1,32567|0,32652|3,32652|2,32738|0,32738|1) - ...but if you do this?... http://i.imgur.com/ufUKCKD.jpg looks nice

From 01:07:710 to 01:17:310 - ok i think is good all...that. but here is something bad: 01:17:224 (77224|0,77310|0) - but i dont have ideas how move that because all the columns are covered xD xD

Im really dont see any more problems here...maybe the SV can be a bit more "slow for trick" i mean really slow, and sudden fast... i'll try asking other mapper about sv's

Black Another
The only thing bad that i see is those 1/8 chordtrills, more than that is like Another with more noteS in someparts...

00:12:252 (12252|2,12338|0,12424|1,12510|3,12510|0,12510|2,12595|1,12681|2) - When i hear those whistles in the background i think 1/6 stairs...maybe too much. dint plan to make 1/8 note here since its just starting...make the player feel the note first then prepare for 1/8 stream

00:16:795 (16795|1,16795|0,16838|2,16838|3,16881|0,16881|1,16924|2,16924|3,16967|1,16967|0) - Just to say that this is too much, i check another map more difficult (SR: 7 "blastix") and the most they have is 1/4 snap for the chord trills... and alternate between 1/6 and 1/8 stairs. thanks for reminding

00:22:024 (22024|3,22110|2,22224|0,22281|3,22281|1,22338|2) - I think is possible to put some jacks in vocal sounds... this pattern more better since after that are spam note

01:49:710 (109710|3,109710|2,109752|0,109752|1,109795|3,109795|2,109838|1,109838|0,109881|2,109881|3) - Like a said... too much. fixed

02:07:024 (127024|0,127024|1,127024|2) - Its like 02:01:195 (121195|1,121195|0,121195|3,121195|2) - dont you think? add a note in |3|.

02:10:795 (130795|1,130795|3,130795|0) - ^^might here too. this part kinda too much
others are accepted

*modding intensifies*

OK! i think is all that i can do for you!
Good luck and bye! :)
Thank you very much for mod!
Updated
-BloowX
Hi! I come to correct some mistakes :)


you have errors in metadata in two difficults, check below


Diff: Black Another
01:50:567 - Here
and here 01:59:824 -

delete 2 of these 4 that are repeated




Diff: Another
00:38:910 (38910|3,38910|3) - this not is a note, is two notes xD delete one


CHECK THE TAGS OF DIFFICULTY SHIKI'S HARD NOT HAVE

Your map is good! GOOD LUCK! :)
Fubukicat
Hi there ,
hope some of it could help

dadon
collumn = 1/2/3/4
[Black Another]
00:10:281 (10281|0) - move to 3 , this isn't really the same sound as the nest note
00:45:424 (45424|2) - add note there is a drum sound here
02:03:252 (123252|3,123252|1) - remove one of the two notes , because : you should add two notes here : 02:03:167 (123167|2) - ( the drum sounds starts here)
02:11:824 (131824|2,131995|1,132167|2) - Ctrl + H for pitch ?
[Another]
00:10:281 (10281|3) - move to 2 ? same reasons as in Black Another
00:16:452 (16452|0) - move to the blue line above , then add a note here 00:16:452 (16452|1) - on 2 ,3 or 4
00:45:424 (45424|3) - like in Black Another, I think there is a sound here so I suggest to add a note
00:45:767 (45767|3,45767|0,46024|3,46024|0,46281|3,46281|0) - :OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO that looks super cool nice
02:03:167 (123167|1) - there is a drum sound here
[Hyper]
00:14:052 (14052|1,14138|0) - Ctrl+ J , to add some variety ?

Good Luck :3
Adot
sorry for late mod

btw, apply etlie's mod 1st.. then i will back to mod ur map...
Ochasan
mark
Ochasan
OK waiting author come back modding ^^
mod already done. just wait to post that
Topic Starter
Satoshi Kazuki
Damn..sorry guys for my inactive..i was busy studying for my final exams...i will resurrect this map back when im finish with my final exam...sorry everyone
OsuNooubs
I love this mapping, really playable, but this should be great if the song is the full version :)
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