I think you can put more interest in the vocal, since is a sound (instrument too?) very clear in this song, you can put some LongNotes for the vocal.
Also in certain parts you need spread the kicks from the snares.
00:10:624 - I think you can add a note here, for the vocal. It fits. in |2|
00:10:795 - ^^same, add a note. in |1|
00:10:110 (10110|1,10110|0,10452|3) - Compare this time with the Hard one, There isnt a LongNote in Hard diff... is only these two notes. I suggest to Erase that LongNote. In Hard, well i will add that.
00:11:138 (11138|1,11310|2,11481|0,11481|3) - ...maybe if is too difficult to fit those sounds there, i will do this:
http://i.imgur.com/Jv6QT8A.jpgIs a little similar than Hard, but i think that will better than now.
00:11:824 (11824|1,11824|2) - ^^to |0| and |3|.
00:12:167 (12167|0) - to |1|
00:15:252 (15252|3) - I think you can put more vocals there, here is very clear. Replace with a LongNote to 00:15:595.
00:15:595 (15595|2) - ^^same, Replace with a LongNote to 00:15:938.
00:16:624 (16624|1,16624|0,16967|3,16967|0) - Two options here,
http://i.imgur.com/EKYFafv.jpg Or
http://i.imgur.com/drHCVLG.jpg00:20:052 - I think you can add this kick... in |1|.
00:20:738 - Also this. in |2|.
00:21:081 (21081|2) - Move to |3| and Replace with a LongNote to 00:22:110. Because that sound continues...
00:32:052 to 00:33:424 - this part is too much empty, at least add some things:
00:32:052 - Note, vocal "poi!" in |2|
readjust note00:32:310 - Note, another "poi!" in |2| as well. (And yes is the blue line).
00:32:395 - Note, Kick. in |1|
00:32:652 - Note, Kick. in |1| too. (blue line again).
^ same00:32:910 - LongNote, you hear that whistle sound? it continues to 00:33:424. Take the Screenshot of all that!:
http://i.imgur.com/qH7Lpi3.jpg <- Also you can move the kicks notes to |0| for better rest.
From 00:38:910 to 00:41:652 - This part is literally too calm. You have left some notes:
00:39:081 - kick, add a note in |1|.
00:39:424 - kick, add a note in |3|.
00:39:767 - kick, add a note in |0|.
00:40:110 - kick, add a note in |0|.
00:40:452 - kick, add a note in |2|.
00:40:795 - kick, add a note in |1|.
00:41:138 - kick, add a note in |3|.
00:41:481 - kick, add a note in |2|.
^only focus 1/1 part00:43:024 (43024|2) - You can Replace this with a LongNote to 00:44:395. Up to you.
00:45:767 (45767|2,46024|1,46281|2) - these snares are exactly the same for me, so you can make stairs...
http://i.imgur.com/lPVfUUP.jpg00:47:138 (47138|2) - This "cymbal" sound extends to 00:47:652. First, move to |1|, then Replace with a LongNote to 00:47:652.
moved but single note are fine00:48:167 (48167|1) - move to |0| because is a kick, separate it from the snares.
00:48:767 (48767|0) - to |1|.
00:48:852 (48852|1) - to |3|.
00:49:110 (49110|2,49367|3) - Ctrl+H And move these 2 one column to the right.
weird pattern..still follow this one but i change to 3,200:49:538 (49538|1) - to |3|
00:49:710 (49710|2,49881|3) - Ctrl+H.
00:49:881 - ^^Replace this note that was moved...with a LongNote to 00:50:395.
same reason00:50:395 (50395|0) - Move to |1|.
00:50:567 (50567|1) - to |3|.
00:51:081 (51081|3,51252|2,51510|0,51767|3) - Stairs, like 00:45:767 (45767|2,46024|1,46281|2), but to the left, 00:51:510 (51510|0) - to |1| And, 00:51:767 (51767|3) - to |0|.
00:52:110 (52110|1) - to |3|.
00:52:281 (52281|2) - to |0|.
00:52:624 (52624|3) - move to |2| and Replace with a LongNote to 00:53:138.
same reason00:53:138 (53138|0) - to |1|.
00:53:481 (53481|2) - to |0|.
00:53:652 (53652|1) - to |3|.
00:53:995 (53995|3) - to |1|.
00:54:338 (54338|1) - to |3|.
00:54:595 (54595|2) - to |1|.
00:55:195 (55195|2,55367|1) - Ctrl+H and move these one column to the left.
00:55:710 (55710|0) - to |3|.
00:56:224 (56224|2) - to |0|.
00:56:395 (56395|1) - to |3|.
00:56:738 (56738|3,57081|0) - Ctrl+H
00:57:338 (57338|2) - to |1|.
00:57:510 (57510|1) - to |3|.
00:57:767 (57767|3) - to |0|.
00:59:138 (59138|1) - to |0|.
00:59:310 (59310|0) - to |2|.
00:59:824 (59824|2) - to |1|
01:00:681 (60681|1,60852|2) - move these two one column to the right.
01:02:567 (62567|1) - to |0|.
01:03:252 (63252|2) - to |1|.
01:03:595 (63595|0,63938|3) - Ctrl+H.
01:04:110 (64110|1) - to |2|.
01:04:624 (64624|2) - to |0|.
01:04:967 (64967|0,65138|1) - Ctrl+H and move these two one column to the left.
01:05:481 (65481|2) - to |1|.
01:22:795 (82795|3,82795|0,82967|1,83138|2,83310|0,83481|1,83652|2,83824|3,83995|2,84167|1) - Do this:
http://i.imgur.com/veKXEaA.jpg stairs more better01:24:338 (84338|3,84510|2,84681|1,84852|0,85024|1,85195|2,85367|3) - And this:
http://i.imgur.com/H7S6DTd.jpg01:27:938 (87938|0) - I think you need add a note in |3|... kick + snare.
02:00:852 (120852|2,120852|1) - there a silence there, is good enough right now, but you can try Replace both for LongNotes. you decide, is good enough right now.
From 02:07:024 to 02:09:424 - something similar that "From 00:38:910 to 00:41:652".
02:09:424 (129424|3) - similar to 01:25:538 with that LongNote at least for me.
others are accepted