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ClariS - Gravity (TV Size)

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Binguo
308 posts
Joined April 2015
Binguo
[kanor's Easy]
00:03:722 (1,2) - 这样的对与新人来说太不人道了00:05:094 (2) - 应该放在更加明显清楚的位置而非逆向flow 00:06:465 (1) - 此处也是 后面还有 我觉得应该想办法处理一下
00:11:951 (1) - Easy应该避免贴在一起
00:36:637 (1,2) - 175bpm不推荐1/2拍
01:10:922 (3) - 为什么要用红点 无意义... 这里和前面没有区别为什么会特殊对待更何况低难度

[Abhor's Normal]
试试01:24:122 (3) - 1/1滑条

[117's Hard]
00:20:694 (2) - 不折返00:21:380 - 此处单点放在00:21:551 (1) - 滑条头
00:43:665 (2) - 我觉得这里不应该1/1带过

[Insane]
00:06:465 (1,2,3,4) - 贴在一起了松开
00:29:094 (3) - 漏掉 舍取很重要
00:41:265 (2,3,4,5,6) - 虽然比第一条要好一点但还是太近了
00:56:351 (2,3) - ↑
00:58:751 (2,2) - 是水仙说的话 这个太挫了
01:06:808 (4) - 此处应该有移动而不是接着3原地点
01:07:322 (6) - 01:08:180 (1) - 完全可以避免贴在一起
01:19:494 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 你下了比较响的音效又是结尾为何不跳？

[Ag's Insane]
00:07:837 (1) - 这个不好看
00:12:980 (5) - 太近
00:18:637 (6,7,1) - 不懂为什么会分开
晚了几天抱歉 你怎么一直在坟 快飞 :) :o 那么多大佬 跑路
Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

Level9 wrote:

water touch
Insane
00:53:265 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - 是手摆的吗。。好像不太整齐复制的
01:04:751 - 这个音不做吗故意的0 0
发现一个问题
从01:04:065 - 开始的两小节都是用一个1/1滑条开头，但滑条后接的note的一个在红线一个在白线，时间间隔不一样，01:05:437 (1,2) - 1的尾和2贴的很紧，效仿01:04:065 (1,2) - 容易让人在01:05:951 - 就按下去了。。而且这个位置是有音的，可能会造成误判（我1pc栽在这了。。）
建议塞爆
在01:04:751 - 放一个圈，叠在01:04:580 (2) - 上
然后从01:05:437 - 开始的节奏这样下[/color]

01:09:465 - 放一个圈做成三连，和01:10:751 (4,5,1) - 对应

Binguo wrote:

[Insane]
00:06:465 (1,2,3,4) - 贴在一起了松开稍微松开了点....和第三个一样了(
00:29:094 (3) - 漏掉 舍取很重要去掉总感觉缺了什么
00:41:265 (2,3,4,5,6) - 虽然比第一条要好一点但还是太近了不近了吧....我觉得这里特别低
00:56:351 (2,3) - ↑放开了一点....
00:58:751 (2,2) - 是水仙说的话 这个太挫了尴尬，我没啥灵感了.....水仙有啥更好建议吗
01:06:808 (4) - 此处应该有移动而不是接着3原地点fix
01:07:322 (6) - 01:08:180 (1) - 完全可以避免贴在一起fix
01:19:494 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 你下了比较响的音效又是结尾为何不跳？摆了一个挺大的跳，不知道会不会被打(
晚了几天抱歉 你怎么一直在坟 快飞 :) 飞不起来 :o 那么多大佬 跑路

Speechless wrote:

hi

[Insane]

00:00:465 - 主难度^其实这里算是故意空出来的?

00:07:837 (7) - NCfix

00:11:951 (1) - 不如用两个1/2，理由同主难度fix

看上去没啥问题，但是就是感觉做的不算太好，另外图的风格看上去感觉有点像 natsu。。不算太好是啥概念....有点具体的吗，还有nastu是啥风格啊..... :o

音效看一下主难度，看看有没有什么要改的 先睡觉了，明天再看


其他难度懒的写了
这几天刚大学入学事情比较多，宽带今晚才装，没及时回摸，抱歉.... :o
thx for mod
sodarose
607 posts
Joined July 2011
sodarose
[琪老板]
00:02:694 (1) - 歪了
00:12:808 (4,5) - 这个间距感觉不好
00:28:408 (1) - 可以再弯一点
00:39:380 (1) - ^
01:16:065 (1) - 感觉有点丑

[Insane]
00:12:294 (2) - Clap？而且这样放间距缩短了好多
00:57:037 (5,3,4,1) - 不考虑来一发stack吗
01:01:665 (2,3) - blanket歪了
01:17:780 (1) - 这个间距怎么比前面的小

[117]
音效美丽

[啊巴赫]
没有clap？现在的音效太单调了

[Easy]
01:02:694 (2) - 前后间距调整下

水完了
__Ag
597 posts
Joined July 2011
__Ag

Binguo wrote:

[Ag's Insane]
00:07:837 (1) - 这个不好看调了一下
00:12:980 (5) - 太近拉开了
00:18:637 (6,7,1) - 不懂为什么会分开梗
[/quote]

sodarose wrote:

[琪老板]
00:02:694 (1) - 歪了调正了
00:12:808 (4,5) - 这个间距感觉不好拉开了
00:28:408 (1) - 可以再弯一点好
00:39:380 (1) - ^好
01:16:065 (1) - 感觉有点丑故意的
感谢摸得

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Kobayakawa Sae
131 posts
Joined December 2013
Kobayakawa Sae
很水的摸
[kanor's Easy]
00:05:094 (2,1) - 可以的话建议将1的滑条尾包好一点，美观一些
00:38:522 (4,1) - 包好
00:39:380 (1,2) - 这里2这个滑条头没有重音就不建议1/1+3/2了 改成两个1/1好点
00:59:265 (2,3) - 这个间距对好点吧 (1.04x→1.01x) 我看着还是比较明显的间距没对齐

还有一些地方没包好，检查一下吧

[Abhor's Normal]
00:45:722 (3,4,5) - 这里不是很好看 摆摆好一点吧

[117's Hard]
音效炸了 除此之外 很强!

[Insane]
00:12:294 (2) - 漏了clap
00:40:751 (1) - 这个我建议放下一点比较好看 后面的多边形圆圈间距调大一点就可以保持现在这个梗
00:44:351 (4) - Prew:2.02x Next:2.18x 对齐一下吧
01:02:008 (3) - 再弯一点就更好看了
SPOILER
01:07:837 (7,1) - 叠好

主难度不会摸QwQ
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia

[Charlie Lam] wrote:

[Abhor's Normal]
00:45:722 (3,4,5) - 这里不是很好看 摆摆好一点吧唔。。。感觉还好，blanket不想调整QWQ

sodarose wrote:

[啊巴赫]
没有clap？现在的音效太单调了

Binguo wrote:

[Abhor's Normal]
试试01:24:122 (3) - 1/1滑条这里跟开头一个节奏 ，保持统一
所以就先不改啦=W=
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
as request

[Easy]
00:07:322 (2,3) - 呃这个easy里有一些1/2 gap...感觉不太好吧，尽量还是用长折返比较好，因为是easy嘛

[Normal]
nothing

[Hard]
00:35:951 (3) - 鼓点挺重的，用圈好一点
http://puu.sh/rmfzx/14ff7bac6a.jpg

01:18:808 - 这个绿线变速的地方不太对吧...

[Insane]
01:17:694 (8,1) - 间距不对

01:02:008 (3) - http://puu.sh/rmfzx/14ff7bac6a.jpg

00:16:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 想法很好不过好像不太合适...这里节奏大概是这样比较好，4做成一个圈亦可
http://puu.sh/rmfZ9/8da7223273.jpg

00:28:922 - 漏音

00:37:494 (3) - ctrl+g一下，跟下一个重音的间距会大一点，玩起来也更顺手

00:37:494 (3,1) - 还有，这两个没叠好0 0

00:53:094 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 想法没有问题，不过我觉得你下的节奏跟你摆的形状对不上。试试这个节奏
http://puu.sh/rmgeI/8cc865c962.jpg

good luck
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
kanor

Binguo wrote:

[kanor's Easy]
00:03:722 (1,2) - 这样的对与新人来说太不人道了00:05:094 (2) - 应该放在更加明显清楚的位置而非逆向flow 00:06:465 (1) - 此处也是 后面还有 我觉得应该想办法处理一下 好
00:11:951 (1) - Easy应该避免贴在一起 好
00:36:637 (1,2) - 175bpm不推荐1/2拍 为了避免1/2其他的地方都没压，但是这里不压会很不和谐
01:10:922 (3) - 为什么要用红点 无意义... 这里和前面没有区别为什么会特殊对待更何况低难度 第一个没改，后面的改了，个人爱好

sodarose wrote:

[Easy]
01:02:694 (2) - 前后间距调整下 好

[Charlie Lam] wrote:

很水的摸
[kanor's Easy]
00:05:094 (2,1) - 可以的话建议将1的滑条尾包好一点，美观一些 好
00:38:522 (4,1) - 包好 OK
00:39:380 (1,2) - 这里2这个滑条头没有重音就不建议1/1+3/2了 改成两个1/1好点 这里不压一下总感觉少了点什么，因为也是段落和段落之间的衔接地方，如果和其他的地方一样的话又觉得不太好
00:59:265 (2,3) - 这个间距对好点吧 (1.04x→1.01x) 我看着还是比较明显的间距没对齐 OK

还有一些地方没包好，检查一下吧 好

Lily Bread wrote:

as request

[Easy]
00:07:322 (2,3) - 呃这个easy里有一些1/2 gap...感觉不太好吧，尽量还是用长折返比较好，因为是easy嘛 诶诶我就放了一个地方嘛，不压不舒服QWQ


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音效creator来，懒
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]
哇哇~来水个摸了~

[Hard]
音效哇音效

[Insane]
00:11:951 (1,2) - 这里的音效呢
01:01:665 (2,3) - 没包住
01:07:322 (6) - 按照你的思路来做的话 这个地方属于人声部分，那么应该要加上个Whistle才对。

在kiai部分人声和背景乐你都加上了音效，其实这样听起来很混乱。01:01:322 (1,2,4,1) - 这里包括这部分的前面一小段感觉是背景乐音效突然加到了人声上。01:03:380 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 与01:04:922 (3,4,5,1) - 这里听起来也有些许冲突。01:05:437 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里也是。 所以如果按照你的思路 上面也提到了01:07:322 (6) - 这里就应该加上一个音效Whistle。其实做成简单的1w 3clap 这样估计会清晰明了。

[Ag's Insane]
00:18:722 (7,1) - 这里在slider取中间点的话 距离不等（感觉后面的note也稍微靠远些好点
建议：1whistle 3clap，光鼓点声稍微有些单调。
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
这个BG虽然面积大而且还是png，但是本体很潦草……我建议找华丽点的同人图

你换过offest 所以预览的黄线unsnap，有强迫症可以改一下，带GD了所以比较麻烦

各个难度结束点不一样，我觉得停在01:24:637 - 是最好的

[kanor's Easy]
  1. 我建议去掉全部非长白线的finish，尤其如00:19:494 - ，这个位置是淡出的，而finish是强调作用。原本不可能发生，好比吃饱了饭菜准备起身别人端上一锅红烧猪蹄
  2. 包的弧度千差万别……类似00:07:837 (3,4) - 00:25:665 (1,2,1) - 我都建议拉好一个然后剩下所有的滑条都复制那个进行旋转比如00:58:580 (1,2,3,4) - ，但是后面这个只是旋转了45度而已，中间距离也不一样……虽然你开了DS但是肉眼可见的实际距离是近-远-近……
  3. 没用的线……
  4. 00:34:580 (1,2) - 这个是错的……
  5. 01:19:494 (2) - 第一个clap 建议去掉
[Abhor's Normal]
  1. 大叔啊你没动音量啊，至少不要全程一百吧，结尾再降一下
[117's Hard]
  1. 没有音效
  2. 00:06:980 (4,1) - 01:23:780 (4,5,1) - 应该是一样的折返加圈
  3. 00:35:780 (2,3) - note better?
  4. 01:16:237 (1) - 应该和01:18:808 (1) - 一样在三拍
  5. nice diff
[Insane]
  1. 00:32:008 (4,5) - 00:33:380 (4,5) - 为啥扔drum……
  2. 00:34:922 (4) - 虽然你是开DS的，但是看的时候是这样的↓↓↓ 我建议弄成这样→→→ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6175950。往大了说，是空间利用，美学思想；往小了说，就是zzb 垃圾。可以看看Hard gd 相关的排列

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Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
超级对不起的。。。我竟然忘记弄音量了。。。
fixed
osu file format v14

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Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

[Charlie Lam] wrote:

[Insane]
00:12:294 (2) - 漏了clapfix
00:40:751 (1) - 这个我建议放下一点比较好看 后面的多边形圆圈间距调大一点就可以保持现在这个梗3和4叠在短滑条的两头
00:44:351 (4) - Prew:2.02x Next:2.18x 对齐一下吧fix
01:02:008 (3) - 再弯一点就更好看了是1和2旋转后对齐延长的滑条
SPOILER
01:07:837 (7,1) - 叠好fix

[Kamiya] wrote:

哇哇~来水个摸了~

[Insane]
00:11:951 (1,2) - 这里的音效呢复制忘了....fix
01:01:665 (2,3) - 没包住同soda
01:07:322 (6) - 按照你的思路来做的话 这个地方属于人声部分，那么应该要加上个Whistle才对。fix

在kiai部分人声和背景乐你都加上了音效，其实这样听起来很混乱。01:01:322 (1,2,4,1) - 这里包括这部分的前面一小段感觉是背景乐音效突然加到了人声上。01:03:380 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 与01:04:922 (3,4,5,1) - 这里听起来也有些许冲突。01:05:437 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里也是。 所以如果按照你的思路 上面也提到了01:07:322 (6) - 这里就应该加上一个音效Whistle。其实做成简单的1w 3clap 这样估计会清晰明了。
试了一下1w3c，感觉有些单调，因为我节奏主要走的就是人声所以用了不少whistle，24clap只是装饰，自己听起来感觉没有什么违和

Narcissu wrote:

这个BG虽然面积大而且还是png，但是本体很潦草……我建议找华丽点的同人图同人图找过，但是没有符合歌曲的.....姑且先继续用这个

你换过offest 所以预览的黄线unsnap，有强迫症可以改一下，带GD了所以比较麻烦 fix

各个难度结束点不一样，我觉得停在01:24:637 - 是最好的不同人的图结束点可以不一样的吧...

[Insane]
  1. 00:32:008 (4,5) - 00:33:380 (4,5) - 为啥扔drum……我听这里有类似的音啊....
  2. 00:34:922 (4) - 虽然你是开DS的，但是看的时候是这样的↓↓↓ 我建议弄成这样→→→ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6175950。往大了说，是空间利用，美学思想；往小了说，就是zzb 垃圾。可以看看Hard gd 相关的排列好，改

    SPOILER

Lily Bread wrote:

as request

[Insane]
01:17:694 (8,1) - 间距不对fix

01:02:008 (3) - http://puu.sh/rmfzx/14ff7bac6a.jpg这是啥意思...换节奏？我跟vocal的

00:16:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 想法很好不过好像不太合适...这里节奏大概是这样比较好，4做成一个圈亦可我个人喜欢这样的节奏啦.....
http://puu.sh/rmfZ9/8da7223273.jpg

00:28:922 - 漏音上次冰菓叫我删了，想了想还是加上吧....我挺想放一个在这的

00:37:494 (3) - ctrl+g一下，跟下一个重音的间距会大一点，玩起来也更顺手change in my way

00:37:494 (3,1) - 还有，这两个没叠好0 0fix

00:53:094 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 想法没有问题，不过我觉得你下的节奏跟你摆的形状对不上。试试这个节奏
http://puu.sh/rmgeI/8cc865c962.jpg我觉得有点奇怪，又觉得没啥问题.....等我问问别人怎么说

good luck
感谢各位摸图 :) 同时庆祝一下军训结束 :D
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
01:02:008 (3) - 我是说这个滑条方向歪了..
Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

Lily Bread wrote:

01:02:008 (3) - 我是说这个滑条方向歪了..
被提好几遍了....故意的
这么放真的不好看吗 :o 是我就改了
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
我只有3拍那邊暫時沒有動，不動也還好，雖然確實鼓點很明確...我覺得現在這樣處理也是可以的

音效跟改過的摸都在這裡了

Edit:

Tag加上我的舊ID: 
m1223961117
__Ag
597 posts
Joined July 2011
__Ag

[Kamiya] wrote:

[Ag's Insane]
00:18:722 (7,1) - 这里在slider取中间点的话 距离不等（感觉后面的note也稍微靠远些好点这里你看着距离不等是因为插了变速线，其实距离差不多
建议：1whistle 3clap，光鼓点声稍微有些单调。嗨呀，音效最气了，现在也是可以的
谢谢摸得
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
音效我還會再修一次，不夠好 :)

我會直接Edit這樓
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
kanor

Narcissu wrote:

[kanor's Easy]
  1. 我建议去掉全部非长白线的finish，尤其如00:19:494 - ，这个位置是淡出的，而finish是强调作用。原本不可能发生，好比吃饱了饭菜准备起身别人端上一锅红烧猪蹄
  2. 包的弧度千差万别……类似00:07:837 (3,4) - 00:25:665 (1,2,1) - 我都建议拉好一个然后剩下所有的滑条都复制那个进行旋转比如00:58:580 (1,2,3,4) - ，但是后面这个只是旋转了45度而已，中间距离也不一样……虽然你开了DS但是肉眼可见的实际距离是近-远-近……以前弄的blanket怎这么辣鸡，改了
  3. 没用的线……
  4. 00:34:580 (1,2) - 这个是错的…… ok ,fixed
  5. 01:19:494 (2) - 第一个clap 建议去掉
音效让给照帮我弄算了，我自己也不懂音效
GD
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Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino
clap帮kanor去掉了，updated
@117 你真的没发thread啊...
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
把soft-hitwhistle10刪掉在上傳一次

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166,14,84637,5,2,0:1:0:0:
Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
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Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino
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Seijiro
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Seijiro
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how to read the mod
there are 2 parts:
- first part is made by rhythm, patterning & flow and aesthetics
- second part is made by Comboing and Hitosunding

Comboing and Hitosunding are irrelevant with the map per se, so you can apply them without really having to look at the above parts.
Rhythm, Patterning and Aesthetics are in order of importance, like a pyramid. Rhythm errors are usually more "heavy" while aesthetics ones are less important due to subjectivity. Also, stuff that appears in the Aesthetics section most likely doesn't have problems with the rhythm and flow in general.

Ag's Insane


  • Rhythm:
  1. 00:00:465 - I'd place a 1/2 reverse slider here, to follow those cool vocals. Little example
  2. 00:02:694 (1) - again, you ignore the most prominent rhythm, which feels off. I'm referring to vocals, which keep kicking in every 1/1. If I check again I can't even understand what that slider is following... .-.
  3. 00:12:980 (5) - I can see you still follow violin sounds here, so it feels a bit awkward you skip the beat at 00:13:151 - , and I mean, you don't click, not that you don't use it (because there's a slider end there). I would rather use circles here, applying a similar pattern to what I suggested for 00:09:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (see the "patterning & flow" section below). Suggestion (at least try this stuff out, I ensure you it feels cool)
  4. 00:14:522 (6) - minor and just personal, but I'd rather have stacked circles for more emphasis on the drum beats. I understand that it is actually preference here: your current pattern is more flow oriented, while mine is more rhythm oriented... so yeah, ignore it if you don't like it
  5. 00:15:722 (5,6) - maybe turn them into a slider? You're following mainly drums so there is no real beat at 00:15:894 - , or at least not a beat worth of a click
  6. 00:20:180 (1) - I checked the whole combo + the next one to confirm this and I get the feeling you still follow vocals a lot. Imo you should make this object a 1/2 slider instead, due to the fact it falls on a similar vocal to 00:20:694 (3,4) -
  7. 00:22:065 (2,3) - similar reasoning to above. I'd have them turned into a slider instead, to follow vocals
  8. 00:41:265 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is heavily overmapped. Beats like 00:41:522 - or 00:41:951 - are not even in the drum's rhythm and they don't feel so nice. The rhythm for that part should be like this
  9. 00:42:465 (2) - well, decide if you want to map vocals or drums, because this beat is throwing everything away: 00:42:122 (1,3,4) - these guys follow drums, while 00:42:465 (2) - follows vocals. If you want to map on vocals make sure to use 00:42:294 - , otherwise it feels strange
  10. 00:43:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you're probably disregarding vocals completely here, although they seem to be the most interesting part. Try to follow them a little more, because drum is pretty passive in this section. If you tell me you were following vocals with 00:43:494 (1,2) - I must tell you you did the exact opposite: listen to where the vocal starts please
  11. 00:52:751 (2,3) - just personal, but I would have used 2 circles instead, to help the transition from instruments to vocals
  12. 00:53:608 (4) - this one follows vocals again, but once you reach 00:54:294 - you're not doing that anymore, even tho vocals are still in foreground.
  13. 00:43:322 (5) - just as a test, try starting a 1/2 slider from here and you'll notice what I mean by "mapping more vocals"
  14. 00:59:780 (5,1) - a slider would feel better here, considering the non-existent beat at 00:59:951 -
Patterning & flow:
  1. 00:07:322 (1,2,1) - not gonna go too much in detail, but the movement between 00:07:665 (2,1) - feels a bit forced due to jump and slider body having opposite directions. What about stacking 00:07:665 (2) - on top of 00:07:837 (1) - ? (You'd need to move the heart shaped slider a bit to the top tho)
  2. 00:09:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can see you followed the violin rhythm here, which is cool. My only concern regarding the pattern is that you place a spacing which doesn't give a good perception of the violin's pitch. Try reducing 00:10:065 (4,5) - and increasing the spacing between 00:10:237 (5,6) - . Spacing between 00:10:408 (6,1) - can be kept shorter than 00:10:237 (5,6) - . Example (it can be refined a bit)
  3. 00:16:580 (4,1,2,3) - the constant DS here feels out of place, mostly because tit doesn't reflect how the song really plays. If you listen carefully you can hear how piano is making a little build-up in rhythm: that's what you should be using imo (which is what you tried to use anyway probably). If you ignore the stupid pattern, this is how spacings should work for that part imo
  4. 00:18:637 (6,7,1) - this comes out of nowhere and I bet barely anyone of this level will read it properly the first time. I see this pattern more fitting for an Extra diff, that's why you should change it into a normal stack or something with constant DS. I won't point out the same thing for all the similar ones.
  5. 00:24:122 (4,1) - not the first time I see this sort of movement and I have the feeling it's one of your favorites, but it plays badly. I already mentioned how jump and slider body direction being opposite feels awkward, but here's a picture to let you understand a bit more: reference. Well, maybe it's not so visible here, but refer to also stuff like 00:22:237 (3,4) - , where similar stuff happens
  6. 00:25:665 (1,2,3) - seeing the spacing here, I guess you were doing something similar to 00:16:065 (1,2,3,4) - , but imo you should avoid that, otherwise it feels less special to use it. That sort of spacing is rather unique for the map, so you should use it for unique situations, not multiple ones.
Aesthetics:
  1. 00:02:694 (1) - In case you deny my suggestion for rhythm change above, make sure to improve this shape a little. That zig zag is a bit too cramped imo, so is there any way to make it smoother?
  2. 00:07:837 (1) - just minor I guess, but I can see the shape is not perfectly symmetrical. See if you can improve it a bit
  3. 00:10:580 (1,2,3,4) - structure is a bit week here, but only on the aesthetics side (rhythm is fine). How about something similar to this? I suggest that because each slider is a violin decreasing scale if you notice. Change it how you want, but at least don't put random sliders please (as it is now) (I'm referring to the whole combo of 4 sliders, not just 00:10:922 (2,3,4) - or just 00:10:580 (1,2,3) - or any other combination of objects. The whole combo)
  4. 00:11:951 (1,2,3) - you already went for a "blanket"-like thing here, yet you ignored it D: Is something like this so bad? xD If you didn't want that at all make sure to at least change the slider shapes, because they are just hinting at that. Maybe make them more straight, so the blanket feels off or something similar...
  5. 00:15:380 (3,4,5,6) - looks like you really like placing objects a bit randomly. I honestly can't suggest much here... Just make sure to incorporate a slider into this, as I suggested above (00:15:722 (5,6) - in Rhythm)
  6. 00:17:437 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't know what is this pattern supposed to mean lol. Why are 1 and 3 with different shapes? What's the reasoning behing those jumps? And so on... Try to build more your patterns, don't place an object somewhere just because you feel like it flows well: mapping is not only flow. Maybe check this or this (in case you don't like overlaps as I do). I bet you can come up with better solutions tho, just make sure those objects aren't placed there just because
  7. 00:20:180 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I'm honestly already getting tired of trying to fix patterns without any reason behind them, zzz. What is this whole pattern supposed to be? Refer to previous suggestions to understand what I mean by "meaning"
  8. 00:21:551 (1,1) - A map should have all the objects as a "set" , just like every mom has a set of dishes for special occasions or how every clothes shop puts coordinated pieces in showcases.
    I made a big detour here, but you should make your slider shapes be part of the same "concept". It's more or less how aesthetics work in general, or how fashion works: they are in sync with each other.
    Taking it into mapping, to fix what you did there you should either add a curvy part on the first slider or remove the curvy part from the second one. Having both of them so discordant with each other makes it look ugly
  9. 00:21:551 (1,2,3,4) - Again, the whole pattern is a bit random with object placement
  10. 00:27:037 (1,2,3,4) - ^ I guess this stuff will go on for a while...
  11. the stuff above keeps kicking in here and there while being the same stuff so I won't add anything more in this section, but keep in mind that general aesthetics are somehow lacking in many parts
Hitsounds:
  1. 00:06:465 (1,2,3,4) - to better emphasize these whistles, I'd remove the whistle from 00:04:065 (3,3) - these
  2. 00:07:665 (2) - remove whistle from this one too for the same reason above ^
  3. 00:16:065 (1,4,3) - I'd instead add a soft whistle on all these objects (just on the head of the slider) to emphasize the piano
  4. 00:31:151 (1) - maybe add a normal finish on this one
  5. 00:47:608 (1) - normal finish?
  6. 01:16:751 (1,1,1) - hit normals instead of whistles works why better imo
  7. 01:20:865 (3,3) - as for the start of the song, I'd remove these whistles
  8. there is a general lack of whistles in the map. I bet some vocals can fit well for more whistles
Combo-ing:
  1. 00:07:837 (1) - if you use the suggestion I made above about stacking this and the previous slider, you can as well remove the NC from here
  2. 00:26:180 (1) - NC not needed imo
  3. 00:43:322 (5,1) - considering what I suggested above in the Rhythm section, if you fix above make sure to swap NC between these 2 objects+
  4. 00:46:065 (5,1) - same as above ^ (both rhythm and comboing)
  5. 00:52:580 (1) - this surely doesn't need any sort of NC now, seeing the rhythm
  6. 00:54:294 (7,1) - swap NC, the strong note is on the red tick on vocals
  7. 00:57:037 (5,1) - same
  8. 00:59:951 (1) - this NC doesn't fit here, listen to the lyrics and drum rhythm: it should be on 01:00:294 - but your pattern doesn't allow it (which means you should fix that too)
  9. 01:01:665 (1,1,1) - if you don't even change Slider Velocity there is no need for this NC spam
  10. 01:11:608 (1) - NC not needed here, it's still the same rhythm so...
  11. 01:12:980 (1,1) - remove NCs here and add one on 01:13:322 (3) -
  12. 01:15:551 (1) - same as before, if you don't change SV why are you using a NC?
  13. 01:16:751 (1,1,1,1) - you sure like this NC spam, huh?
please do notice that after half of the map I cut down the mentioned stuff since it was mostly the same and you should be mapping, not me lol.

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Insane


  • Rhythm:
  1. 00:00:465 - as for the other diff, I'd put a 1/2 slider here to match the vocals. It's just personal tho
  2. 00:18:465 (4) - I have the feeling the beat at 00:18:637 - is unnecessary by listening to the song. To put more emphasis on that single clap I'd put just a circle, like this
  3. 00:27:894 - what about making this beat clickable?
  4. 00:52:751 (5,6,7) - heh... the triplet should start from 5 tho, not 00:52:922 - . Let's say that also the pattern is a bit at fault here, since that spacing is misleading. Actually, after checking again, removing 00:53:008 - would be the best solution here.
  5. 00:53:094 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - you kept missing the strong beat here lol. Strong beats fall on 00:53:608 - 00:54:294 - 00:54:980 -
  6. 00:58:580 (1,2,1,2) - same here
  7. 00:56:351 (2,3) - considering vocals and the pattern you use there, these guys would be better be a 1/1 slider imo
  8. 00:58:408 (3,4,1) - same as for the other one, it would be better to either move the triplet 1/2 earlier or just removing 00:58:494 (4) -
  9. 01:05:437 (1,2,3) - what's with the 1/1 breaks, omg. It's kiai time, make it kick in with more 1/2 beats
Patterning & flow:
  1. 00:16:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nice star pattern, but imo you should make a ctrl + g on 00:16:580 (4,6) - . The reason is emphasis of the song: it's like a buildup and a bigger spacing on 6 is what you need, while keeping the 4 a little closer
  2. 00:25:494 (6) - shouldn't this one be stacked on 00:25:151 (4) - ? Or at least, it should have the same spacing from next and previous object imo, due to the strong beat on 00:25:665 (1) -
  3. 00:32:180 (5,6) - you did something similar here too ^. You should Ctrl + g these so you can keep a good emphasis on the slider
  4. 00:53:094 (1) - (check Rhythm before checking this) it would be better to space this beat a bit more from the previous one
  5. 00:53:094 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - make sure to re-arrange this pattern once you fixed the rhythm please
  6. 01:16:065 (3,4) - personal, but why not stacking them? I mean, 4 under 3's tail
Aesthetics:
  1. 00:28:408 (1,2,3) - why not constant DS, zzz
  2. 00:44:351 (4) - what about moving this one to around x164 y200? As it is now you have a strange spacing increase for no reason, so at least make sure to respect visual DS with other objects around it
  3. 01:01:665 (2,3) - blanket can be improved here
  4. 01:17:608 (7,8,1) - Keep DS constant maybe
  5. 01:06:808 (4,5,6) - clearly this object placement is random here. Isn't there any way to make those slider shapes more connected with each other? Something like this can work imo
  6. 01:18:808 (3) - similar to the above ^, the this shape is just random compared to the other ones imo. What about something like this?
Hitsounds:
  1. 00:04:065 (3,3) - As I suggested for the other diff, it would be cool to remove these whistles. They will create a nice constrast and give more emphasis to the last beat of the combo
  2. 00:11:951 (1) - missing whistle on head
  3. 00:18:808 (5) - that finish on tail is not a good match for the song :/
  4. 00:27:551 (2) - just the drum-hitnormal is good enough imo, no need for the whistle too
  5. 00:30:808 (7) - how about drum finish addition? + 00:30:980 (8) - soft-sampleset + drum-hitclap addition?
  6. 00:32:180 (5) - just the drum clap is enough, but make sure to put a drum finish on 00:32:351 (6) - (remove the current soft whistle)
  7. 00:33:380 (4,5,6) - same hitsounding for the above ^
  8. 00:36:294 (5) - this one should be normal-hitnormal + soft-hitwhistle (the clap you use just stands out too much)
  9. 00:41:265 (2,3,6) - remove these whistles, there are too many, holy
  10. 00:50:351 (1,1,1) - try with normal finishers instead of whistles
  11. 01:03:380 (3) - I'd remove this whistle too, you keep using too many of them <.<
  12. 01:19:494 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - duh, what a mess here. First off, remove claps. Second, add normal-hitnormal on all of them. Third, make sure that volume levels are like this: 01:19:494 - 50%; 01:19:837 - 65%; 01:20:180 - 80%. And this should be fixed...
  13. 01:20:865 (2,2) - same as for the start of the map: remove the whistle from their heads
Combo-ing:
  1. 00:38:522 (1) - NC not needed
  2. 00:46:065 (5) - you missed a NC here
  3. 00:48:980 (5) - same
  4. 00:58:065 (1) - remove combo and add it on 00:57:037 (5) - instead
  5. 01:06:808 (4) - missing NC
  6. 01:13:151 (1) - remove NC from here and add it on 01:12:465 (4) -
  7. 01:16:751 - in theory, you should have a NC here, but it's a no-go seeing your pattern. Instead, place the NC on 01:17:094 (4) - , since the combo is becoming too long (time-wise)
  8. 01:19:837 (1,1) - not needed for sure. Please don't copy dumb stuff popular mappers do

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117's Hard


  • Rhythm:
  1. all good
Patterning & flow:
  1. all good
Aesthetics:
  1. 00:17:437 (1,3) - minor, but what about giving them the same "slope". I mean, 3 is a bit too curved, so making it more similar to 1 would be cool
Hitsounds:
  1. 00:04:065 (3,3) - same as for the other diffs, it would be cool to remove these whistles to put more emphasis on the last pattern (00:06:465 (1,2,3,4) - )
  2. 00:30:980 (4) - maybe add a drum clap?
  3. 00:41:608 (2) - clap instead of finish?
  4. 01:20:865 (3,3) - same as for the start of the song for consistency
Combo-ing:
  1. all good
Really nice and clean diff

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Abhor's Normal


  • Rhythm:
  1. 00:24:294 (3) - imo this slider should start 1/2 earlier. Check vocals.
    As a reference, go also check out 00:26:865 (3,4) - this part, since it does the same rhythm, yet you map vocals properly... so which is it?
  2. 00:28:408 (1) - same ^
Patterning & flow:
  1. all good
Aesthetics:
  1. 00:24:980 (5,6) - just minor, but wouldn't these look cuter if you make them curved like this?
  2. 01:17:780 (1,2) - minor again. Maybe make them curved the same?
Hitsounds:
  1. 00:09:208 - from here till 00:18:808 - you should place a normal-hitnormal every 2 white ticks, starting from 00:09:551 - (check the Insane diff)
  2. 01:20:522 - from here on you should start decreasing volume imo. The song is fading out, and so should do the hitsounds
Combo-ing:
  1. all good

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kanor's Easy


  • Rhythm:
  1. all good
Patterning & flow:
  1. all good
Aesthetics:
  1. all good
Hitsounds:
  1. 00:11:608 (4) - missing clap? (and maybe also whistle? Not sure about this one)
  2. 00:18:808 (1) - if ever, move the finish on the head lol. On the tail feels just randomly placed (also remove whistle from head)
  3. 00:33:551 (4) - missing clap
  4. 00:46:237 (2,3) - you're surely missing some hitsounds here. Check 00:43:494 (2,3) -
  5. 00:49:665 (4) - what's with that finish lol
  6. 00:55:837 (1) - whistle on repeat?
  7. 01:01:322 (1) - same
  8. 01:04:751 (2) - missing whistle on head
  9. 01:15:037 (1,1) - finish on repeat?
  10. 01:19:494 (2) - whistle instead of clap sounds better on repeat here
Combo-ing:
  1. 00:33:894 (5) - missing NC?

________________



General


  1. Can you use some custom combo colors? Default ones just hurt my eyes lol
  2. Is the title really with "TV -MIX-" in it? It's kinda awkward... If it's a TV Size song (and it is) you should be removing that "TV -MIX-" and add "TV Size" to tags instead

I guess I did what I could here.
As a side note: it is true I am late but I didn't really like the attitude you had to ask me about this <.<
Whatever...

The highest insane needs a lot of work so keep searching for mods. The fact you just waited a month without receiving mods makes me think you were pretty sure I was going to bubble your map or something. Well, that's not the case and you should always search for more mods.

Good luck~
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
明天改，不要太伤心呀QWQ我也被送了论文来着...

fixed
osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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Artist:ClariS
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Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Topic Starter
Yorita Yoshino

MrSergio wrote:

m4m from my queue

Insane


  • Rhythm:
  1. 00:00:465 - as for the other diff, I'd put a 1/2 slider here to match the vocals. It's just personal tho I really dont want put any note here.....
  2. 00:18:465 (4) - I have the feeling the beat at 00:18:637 - is unnecessary by listening to the song. To put more emphasis on that single clap I'd put just a circle, like thisfix
  3. 00:27:894 - what about making this beat clickable? Maybe strange
  4. 00:52:751 (5,6,7) - heh... the triplet should start from 5 tho, not 00:52:922 - . Let's say that also the pattern is a bit at fault here, since that spacing is misleading. Actually, after checking again, removing 00:53:008 - would be the best solution here.fix
  5. 00:53:094 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - you kept missing the strong beat here lol. Strong beats fall on 00:53:608 - 00:54:294 - 00:54:980 - well.....I cant hear any strong beat....
  6. 00:58:580 (1,2,1,2) - same here ^
  7. 00:56:351 (2,3) - considering vocals and the pattern you use there, these guys would be better be a 1/1 slider imofix
  8. 00:58:408 (3,4,1) - same as for the other one, it would be better to either move the triplet 1/2 earlier or just removing 00:58:494 (4) - fix
  9. 01:05:437 (1,2,3) - what's with the 1/1 breaks, omg. It's kiai time, make it kick in with more 1/2 beats
imo it is 1/1 vocal here

Patterning & flow:
  1. 00:16:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nice star pattern, but imo you should make a ctrl + g on 00:16:580 (4,6) - . The reason is emphasis of the song: it's like a buildup and a bigger spacing on 6 is what you need, while keeping the 4 a little closertried but feel not good....hold suggest
  2. 00:25:494 (6) - shouldn't this one be stacked on 00:25:151 (4) - ? Or at least, it should have the same spacing from next and previous object imo, due to the strong beat on 00:25:665 (1) - fix
  3. 00:32:180 (5,6) - you did something similar here too ^. You should Ctrl + g these so you can keep a good emphasis on the sliderfix
  4. 00:53:094 (1) - (check Rhythm before checking this) it would be better to space this beat a bit more from the previous oneUmm.....I think it is fit enough
  5. 00:53:094 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - make sure to re-arrange this pattern once you fixed the rhythm pleaseoh....
  6. 01:16:065 (3,4) - personal, but why not stacking them? I mean, 4 under 3's tail fix
Aesthetics:
  1. 00:28:408 (1,2,3) - why not constant DS, zzz fix
  2. 00:44:351 (4) - what about moving this one to around x164 y200? As it is now you have a strange spacing increase for no reason, so at least make sure to respect visual DS with other objects around it fix
  3. 01:01:665 (2,3) - blanket can be improved here It's not for blanket,but nearly every modder suggest me to change it....Okay.
  4. 01:17:608 (7,8,1) - Keep DS constant maybe I forget it :P
  5. 01:06:808 (4,5,6) - clearly this object placement is random here. Isn't there any way to make those slider shapes more connected with each other? Something like this can work imo changed
  6. 01:18:808 (3) - similar to the above ^, the this shape is just random compared to the other ones imo. What about something like this?changed
Hitsounds:
  1. 00:04:065 (3,3) - As I suggested for the other diff, it would be cool to remove these whistles. They will create a nice constrast and give more emphasis to the last beat of the combo
  2. 00:11:951 (1) - missing whistle on head
  3. 00:18:808 (5) - that finish on tail is not a good match for the song :/
  4. 00:27:551 (2) - just the drum-hitnormal is good enough imo, no need for the whistle too
  5. 00:30:808 (7) - how about drum finish addition? + 00:30:980 (8) - soft-sampleset + drum-hitclap addition?
  6. 00:32:180 (5) - just the drum clap is enough, but make sure to put a drum finish on 00:32:351 (6) - (remove the current soft whistle)
  7. 00:33:380 (4,5,6) - same hitsounding for the above ^
  8. 00:36:294 (5) - this one should be normal-hitnormal + soft-hitwhistle (the clap you use just stands out too much)
  9. 00:41:265 (2,3,6) - remove these whistles, there are too many, holy
  10. 00:50:351 (1,1,1) - try with normal finishers instead of whistles Change in my way:3
  11. 01:03:380 (3) - I'd remove this whistle too, you keep using too many of them <.<
  12. 01:19:494 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - duh, what a mess here. First off, remove claps. Second, add normal-hitnormal on all of them. Third, make sure that volume levels are like this: 01:19:494 - 50%; 01:19:837 - 65%; 01:20:180 - 80%. And this should be fixed...sorry but I prefer soft-clap....
  13. 01:20:865 (2,2) - same as for the start of the map: remove the whistle from their heads
    All fix except red words
Combo-ing:
  1. 00:38:522 (1) - NC not needed
  2. 00:46:065 (5) - you missed a NC here
  3. 00:48:980 (5) - same
  4. 00:58:065 (1) - remove combo and add it on 00:57:037 (5) - instead
  5. 01:06:808 (4) - missing NC
  6. 01:13:151 (1) - remove NC from here and add it on 01:12:465 (4) -
  7. 01:16:751 - in theory, you should have a NC here, but it's a no-go seeing your pattern. Instead, place the NC on 01:17:094 (4) - , since the combo is becoming too long (time-wise)
  8. 01:19:837 (1,1) - not needed for sure. Please don't copy dumb stuff popular mappers doI NC them because I think the volume is
    Stepped increase but not copy any mapper，and I will ask some people for their opinion
    All fix except blue words

________________



General


  1. Can you use some custom combo colors? Default ones just hurt my eyes lolfix...
  2. Is the title really with "TV -MIX-" in it? It's kinda awkward... If it's a TV Size song (and it is) you should be removing that "TV -MIX-" and add "TV Size" to tags insteadThere is a metadata from IamKwaN :p

I guess I did what I could here.
As a side note: it is true I am late but I didn't really like the attitude you had to ask me about this <.<sorry :?
Whatever...

The highest insane needs a lot of work so keep searching for mods. The fact you just waited a month without receiving mods makes me think you were pretty sure I was going to bubble your map or something. Well, that's not the case and you should always search for more mods.thanks for suggestions

Good luck~
thank for modding~ :)
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
kanor

MrSergio wrote:

kanor's Easy


  • Rhythm:
  1. all good
Patterning & flow:
  1. all good
Aesthetics:
  1. all good
Hitsounds:
  1. 00:11:608 (4) - missing clap? (and maybe also whistle? Not sure about this one)
  2. 00:18:808 (1) - if ever, move the finish on the head lol. On the tail feels just randomly placed (also remove whistle from head)
  3. 00:33:551 (4) - missing clap
  4. 00:46:237 (2,3) - you're surely missing some hitsounds here. Check 00:43:494 (2,3) -
  5. 00:49:665 (4) - what's with that finish lol
  6. 00:55:837 (1) - whistle on repeat?
  7. 01:01:322 (1) - same
  8. 01:04:751 (2) - missing whistle on head
  9. 01:15:037 (1,1) - finish on repeat?
  10. 01:19:494 (2) - whistle instead of clap sounds better on repeat here
Combo-ing:
  1. 00:33:894 (5) - missing NC?


Good luck~
all fixed ,thx for modding :)
GD
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Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
Insane
  1. clap不合适，换个别的吧，比如normal-hitnormal，可以参考下117的diff
  2. 00:11:951 (1,2) - 这种梗呢，其实挺好玩的，但是梗是要前后照应的，如果只是突发奇想放个梗，很突然，要放就前后一起放
  3. 00:53:437 (3,3,3) - 要么overlap面积一样，要么不要overlap，这样很丑
  4. 00:56:865 (3) - clap
  5. 01:05:951 - 漏掉不太舒服
  6. 01:13:494 (2,1,2,3,4) - flow好像不是很好
  7. 01:23:608 - 为什么突然有whistle
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Yorita Yoshino
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Karen wrote:

Insane
  1. clap不合适，换个别的吧，比如normal-hitnormal，可以参考下117的diff好的
  2. 00:11:951 (1,2) - 这种梗呢，其实挺好玩的，但是梗是要前后照应的，如果只是突发奇想放个梗，很突然，要放就前后一起放暂时没想到别的梗= =
  3. 00:53:437 (3,3,3) - 要么overlap面积一样，要么不要overlap，这样很丑复制的时候考虑了....当时觉得无所谓
  4. 00:56:865 (3) - clapfix
  5. 01:05:951 - 漏掉不太舒服vocal这里全放掉的，没漏不漏吧
  6. 01:13:494 (2,1,2,3,4) - flow好像不是很好
  7. 01:23:608 - 为什么突然有whistle漏了
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kanor's Easy
  1. 音效默认？要不看看117's diff
  2. 感觉挺多短的滑条弯的太过了。。
Abhor's Normal
这个难度有问题，下下来osu里看不到 建议检查下
117's Hard
  1. 00:10:237 (3,1) - 抄这个：00:12:980 (3,1) -
  2. 00:48:808 (4,1) - 感觉不是很好 这应该比前面一段要放开
Insane
  1. whistle太多了 适量减一点
  2. 00:51:894 (2,3) - 完全可以再加个折返
  3. 00:55:837 (1,2) - 说实话这两个滑条我觉得拉的莫名其妙
  4. 01:05:437 (1,2,3,4) - 空的很糟 而且那个滑条一样莫名
  5. 01:16:065 (3,3) - 这两个我就觉得可以
Yorita Yoshino
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yf_bmp wrote:


  • [notice]Insane
  1. whistle太多了 适量减一点
  2. 00:51:894 (2,3) - 完全可以再加个折返
  3. 00:55:837 (1,2) - 说实话这两个滑条我觉得拉的莫名其妙说实话确实是莫名其妙拉的，没有其他的主意了，求建议啊
  4. 01:05:437 (1,2,3,4) - 空的很糟 而且那个滑条一样莫名为啥空的很糟....这里我是想跟vocal的 还有滑条为啥莫名 :(
  5. 01:16:065 (3,3) - 这两个我就觉得可以
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