Crystal wrote:

as requested

[General]
add "original soundtrack" to tags? 一般人大概都用缩写，懒改了zzz

[Reliance]
OD5? 是不是有点低 反正横竖没pp也无所谓吧，还算是比较简单的hard
00:26:788 (5,1) - 建议ctrl+g ok
00:27:746 (3,4) - 形状为什么不一样啊 乱七八糟的美学
01:04:767 (1,2,1) - spacing容易读错 打起来其实不容易读错，第一个1/4和前面的1/2间距明显不同，后面1/6想给finish一个跳所以看上去那部分间距一样了…总之稍微区分了下

[Normal]
00:01:576 (1) - 不需要NC 好
00:16:895 (1,2) - 如果是我可能会swap nc 不太想改，现在这样也ok
00:38:597 (4) - 大概不需要折返 1/1滑条 背景那个音你很多地方也没有跟 好
01:20:725 (1,2) - 也是swap nc

good luck!
EDIT: yuri is love

Misure wrote:

论如何水摸
[Reliance]

1. 00:01:576 (1) - 也弄成00:04:129 (1) - 的就ok了 弧度方向一样的那种 其实我一直想问这种叫“向上弯”还是叫“向下弯” 行。这种叫 ''弯一点''
2. 开头到20s左右的部分 物件重心有点偏左 可以整体右移一些 这还真有点难办.. 绕圈圈的坏处，前后关联太多
3. 00:32:214 (1) - 用弧的？ 其实想和后面两个区分开来
4. 00:52:320 (4) - 180°旋转一下之后的那种弧向？ 作了一下类似思路的改动
5. 01:14:980 (5,6,7) - 角度可能有点太尖 6号加滑条往下放一些？ 稍调整了下

[Normal]

1. none.

讲道理可以直接飞了
Good luck
EDIT: yuri is love

yf_bmp wrote:

迟了。。

这种歌感觉滑条慢点比较好，现在这个..感觉就是高bpm具有的风格 再考虑一下要不要remap一个小圈低一点sv的主难度
音效可以，就是把默认的drum-finish改下换个，然后开头的话我会尽量用whistle跟下吉他 换了，开头段whistle我再看下

00:15:618 (4) - 3/4？ 好

除了细节其实真 没什么说（各种不等距和无意遮挡挺多的，推荐开AR0看），另外就是看自己愿不愿意减sv换风格了。。看了一下是有一些不太好，之后考虑一下怎么改

没帮助的话就不用kds了

1. 00:39:874 - Add finish?
2. 00:40:831 - Normal addition instead? Sounds off cuz you didn't use any soft-whistle since 00:23:278 . If you apply any of these hitsounds suggestions then please apply on Reliance too.
3. 00:40:512 (2,3) - Ctrl+G rhythm? I would prioritize 00:40:831 than 00:41:150 since it's in a higher pitch.
4. 00:44:661 - 00:54:874 - Can be removed cuz 00:34:767 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) is a really long chain of rhythm so removing them will make things less tiring in gameplay.
5. 01:17:533 (2) - 01:17:533 - 01:17:852 aren't the same sound so how about using circles instead of a slider? That way will distinguish the different sounds properly.

Electoz wrote:

Can you provide the metadata?

[Normal]

1. 00:39:874 - Add finish? indeed
2. 00:40:831 - Normal addition instead? Sounds off cuz you didn't use any soft-whistle since 00:23:278 . If you apply any of these hitsounds suggestions then please apply on Reliance too. i decided to delete this whistle for consistency in overall hitsounding pattern
3. 00:40:512 (2,3) - Ctrl+G rhythm? I would prioritize 00:40:831 than 00:41:150 since it's in a higher pitch. yea i agree, did that
4. 00:44:661 - 00:54:874 - Can be removed cuz 00:34:767 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) is a really long chain of rhythm so removing them will make things less tiring in gameplay. yes
5. 01:17:533 (2) - 01:17:533 - 01:17:852 aren't the same sound so how about using circles instead of a slider? That way will distinguish the different sounds properly. i agree with ur point, but i dont feel like throwing two circles after a 1/1 gap so i did sth else here

Reliance looks good, call me back when you're ready~

Pentori wrote:

im next ww

Narcissu wrote:

thx ww