Hashimoto Yukari - Flower

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Topic Starter
Garden
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年8月27日 at 9:31:04

Artist: Hashimoto Yukari
Title: Flower
Source: まよチキ!
Tags: Mayo Chiki! ost bgm
BPM: 94
Filesize: 3842kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Normal (1.82 stars, 142 notes)
  2. Reliance (2.67 stars, 179 notes)


Download: Hashimoto Yukari - Flower
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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thx everyone in the thread for help <3

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/375548
Narcissu
如果你想用高難度的BG作為網頁預覽的話,更改文件名讓他在前面即可
Pata-Mon
摸毛线啊

主难度
00:21:363 (3,1) - 其实没叠好,你ctrl+G两下看坐标
01:00:937 (2,4) - ^
00:22:001 (1,3) - overlap
00:33:491 (4,5) - 放远点
01:04:767 (1,2) - 这里节奏不是这样的……就别强行跟琴声了,跟01:04:767 - 01:05:086 - 的鼓,然后可以考虑跟01:05:246 - 的三角铁

GL
Left
InGame req

[Normal]
Why no kissing BG in Normal diff? :(:(:(:(
00:15:299 (3) - Strong melody in slider's tail, so I think 00:14:980 (2) - to 1/2 slider, circle in 00:15:618 - is better.
01:22:001 (4,1) - blanket better?
01:28:165 (4) - how about two circle?

[Reliance]
I think AR is a bit high. how about 6.5 or 7?
00:05:086 (3,4) - too close considering your other patterns of same sound..but I have no Idea how to fix lol
01:10:193 (6) - move to x471 y218 for https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5634146 ?

so beautiful song..I cried :cry::cry:
good luck!
CoLouRed GlaZeE
怎么摸图啊 超水的摸行不行啊
  • Normal

  1. 00:15:299 - 这里换成note 00:15:299 - 这里放个1/1滑条 00:16:257 (4) - 这个删掉是不是好点呀?
  2. 00:58:703 (2,3) - 调换一下?

    Reliance


    摸不出啦
作得很好啊 我喜欢
Topic Starter
Garden

Pata-Mon wrote:

摸毛线啊

主难度
00:21:363 (3,1) - 其实没叠好,你ctrl+G两下看坐标 总之我ctrlg两下然后自动叠上去了
01:00:937 (2,4) - ^ ^
00:22:001 (1,3) - overlap i like overlap
00:33:491 (4,5) - 放远点 4远了一点
01:04:767 (1,2) - 这里节奏不是这样的……就别强行跟琴声了,跟01:04:767 - 01:05:086 - 的鼓,然后可以考虑跟01:05:246 - 的三角铁 现在这样鼓都有跟到啊,我好像完全没听到三角铁。。。感觉这样跟琴声不算强行,我再问问别人看

GL

Left wrote:

InGame req

[Normal]
Why no kissing BG in Normal diff? :(:(:(:( its actually her ringtone in the anime, so i prepare a bg for her lol. as for the bg in the highest diff i just think that fits yuriii is love www
00:15:299 (3) - Strong melody in slider's tail, so I think 00:14:980 (2) - to 1/2 slider, circle in 00:15:618 - is better. i agree
01:22:001 (4,1) - blanket better? fixed a bit according to the approaching circle
01:28:165 (4) - how about two circle? hmm since the bpm varies here, a slider can be an easier alternative imo. i'll consider a change if more ppl mention this

[Reliance]
I think AR is a bit high. how about 6.5 or 7? lower to 7.2
00:05:086 (3,4) - too close considering your other patterns of same sound..but I have no Idea how to fix lol i moved 2,4 a bit Left xD
01:10:193 (6) - move to x471 y218 for https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5634146 ? wow nice idea! i make that more accurate with a slider btw

so beautiful song..I cried :cry::cry:  same
good luck!

CoLouRed GlaZeE wrote:

怎么摸图啊 超水的摸行不行啊
  • Normal

  1. 00:15:299 - 这里换成note 00:15:299 - 这里放个1/1滑条 00:16:257 (4) - 这个删掉是不是好点呀? 想让两个whistle clickable
  2. 00:58:703 (2,3) - 调换一下? 可以

    Reliance


    摸不出啦
作得很好啊 我喜欢 谢谢ww
Thanks you for the mod!!
Crystal
as requested

[General]
add "original soundtrack" to tags?

[Reliance]
OD5? 是不是有点低
00:26:788 (5,1) - 建议ctrl+g
00:27:746 (3,4) - 形状为什么不一样啊
01:04:767 (1,2,1) - spacing容易读错

[Normal]
00:01:576 (1) - 不需要NC
00:16:895 (1,2) - 如果是我可能会swap nc
00:38:597 (4) - 大概不需要折返 1/1滑条 背景那个音你很多地方也没有跟
01:20:725 (1,2) - 也是swap nc

good luck!
EDIT: yuri is love :D
Misure
论如何水摸
[Reliance]
  1. 00:01:576 (1) - 也弄成00:04:129 (1) - 的就ok了 弧度方向一样的那种 其实我一直想问这种叫“向上弯”还是叫“向下弯”
  2. 开头到20s左右的部分 物件重心有点偏左 可以整体右移一些
  3. 00:32:214 (1) - 用弧的?
  4. 00:52:320 (4) - 180°旋转一下之后的那种弧向?
  5. 01:14:980 (5,6,7) - 角度可能有点太尖 6号加滑条往下放一些?

[Normal]
  1. none.

讲道理可以直接飞了
Good luck :)
EDIT: yuri is love :D
Topic Starter
Garden

Crystal wrote:

as requested

[General]
add "original soundtrack" to tags? 一般人大概都用缩写,懒改了zzz

[Reliance]
OD5? 是不是有点低 反正横竖没pp也无所谓吧,还算是比较简单的hard
00:26:788 (5,1) - 建议ctrl+g ok
00:27:746 (3,4) - 形状为什么不一样啊 乱七八糟的美学
01:04:767 (1,2,1) - spacing容易读错 打起来其实不容易读错,第一个1/4和前面的1/2间距明显不同,后面1/6想给finish一个跳所以看上去那部分间距一样了…总之稍微区分了下

[Normal]
00:01:576 (1) - 不需要NC
00:16:895 (1,2) - 如果是我可能会swap nc 不太想改,现在这样也ok
00:38:597 (4) - 大概不需要折返 1/1滑条 背景那个音你很多地方也没有跟
01:20:725 (1,2) - 也是swap nc

good luck!
EDIT: yuri is love :D

Misure wrote:

论如何水摸
[Reliance]
  1. 00:01:576 (1) - 也弄成00:04:129 (1) - 的就ok了 弧度方向一样的那种 其实我一直想问这种叫“向上弯”还是叫“向下弯” 行。这种叫 ''弯一点''
  2. 开头到20s左右的部分 物件重心有点偏左 可以整体右移一些 这还真有点难办.. 绕圈圈的坏处,前后关联太多
  3. 00:32:214 (1) - 用弧的? 其实想和后面两个区分开来
  4. 00:52:320 (4) - 180°旋转一下之后的那种弧向? 作了一下类似思路的改动
  5. 01:14:980 (5,6,7) - 角度可能有点太尖 6号加滑条往下放一些? 稍调整了下

[Normal]
  1. none.

讲道理可以直接飞了
Good luck :)
EDIT: yuri is love :D
Thx both!
Wing My Way
2016-07-19 13:09 Garden: hi 有空摸图吗?
2016-07-19 13:09 Garden: 2dif tv
2016-07-19 13:14 Wing My Way: houa
2016-07-19 13:14 Garden: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1031554 Hashimoto Yukari - Flower]
2016-07-19 13:14 Garden: irc可
2016-07-19 13:14 Garden: thx
2016-07-19 13:21 Wing My Way: 于是发现摸不出东西orz
2016-07-19 13:21 Wing My Way: 00:25:831 (4) - 这个改成drum如何
2016-07-19 13:21 Garden: orz
2016-07-19 13:22 Wing My Way: 00:27:108 (1) - 这个音效音调最高所以我觉得适合放在那里
2016-07-19 13:23 Garden: 可以,我按照这个思路改改看
2016-07-19 13:24 Garden: 现在其实只是把这个音效随便丢在了非drum的其他大白线上(
2016-07-19 13:27 Wing My Way: 01:06:682 (4) - 这个也换成drum吧 然后01:07:959 (1) - 这个我觉得用普通whistle比较好
2016-07-19 13:30 Garden: 嗯你都发着好了然后post就行,我得重新排下whistle了
2016-07-19 13:35 Wing My Way: 01:25:831 (1) -
2016-07-19 13:36 Wing My Way: nm这个overlap不太好
2016-07-19 13:36 Wing My Way: 其他就没啥了
2016-07-19 13:36 Garden: ok
水摸美丽;w;
yf_bmp
迟了。。

这种歌感觉滑条慢点比较好,现在这个..感觉就是高bpm具有的风格
音效可以,就是把默认的drum-finish改下换个,然后开头的话我会尽量用whistle跟下吉他

00:15:618 (4) - 3/4?

除了细节其实真 没什么说(各种不等距和无意遮挡挺多的,推荐开AR0看),另外就是看自己愿不愿意减sv换风格了。。

没帮助的话就不用kds了
Topic Starter
Garden

yf_bmp wrote:

迟了。。

这种歌感觉滑条慢点比较好,现在这个..感觉就是高bpm具有的风格 再考虑一下要不要remap一个小圈低一点sv的主难度
音效可以,就是把默认的drum-finish改下换个,然后开头的话我会尽量用whistle跟下吉他 换了,开头段whistle我再看下

00:15:618 (4) - 3/4?

除了细节其实真 没什么说(各种不等距和无意遮挡挺多的,推荐开AR0看),另外就是看自己愿不愿意减sv换风格了。。看了一下是有一些不太好,之后考虑一下怎么改

没帮助的话就不用kds了
Electoz
Can you provide the metadata?

[Normal]

  1. 00:39:874 - Add finish?
  2. 00:40:831 - Normal addition instead? Sounds off cuz you didn't use any soft-whistle since 00:23:278 . If you apply any of these hitsounds suggestions then please apply on Reliance too.
  3. 00:40:512 (2,3) - Ctrl+G rhythm? I would prioritize 00:40:831 than 00:41:150 since it's in a higher pitch.
  4. 00:44:661 - 00:54:874 - Can be removed cuz 00:34:767 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) is a really long chain of rhythm so removing them will make things less tiring in gameplay.
  5. 01:17:533 (2) - 01:17:533 - 01:17:852 aren't the same sound so how about using circles instead of a slider? That way will distinguish the different sounds properly.


Reliance looks good, call me back when you're ready~
Topic Starter
Garden
thx for checking Electoz!
about metadata, source and artist thing shall be right it was copied from this set, a track from the same ost.
will get to the mod tonight when i come back home :3
Pentori
im next ww
Narcissu
thx ww
Topic Starter
Garden

Electoz wrote:

Can you provide the metadata?

[Normal]

  1. 00:39:874 - Add finish? indeed
  2. 00:40:831 - Normal addition instead? Sounds off cuz you didn't use any soft-whistle since 00:23:278 . If you apply any of these hitsounds suggestions then please apply on Reliance too. i decided to delete this whistle for consistency in overall hitsounding pattern
  3. 00:40:512 (2,3) - Ctrl+G rhythm? I would prioritize 00:40:831 than 00:41:150 since it's in a higher pitch. yea i agree, did that
  4. 00:44:661 - 00:54:874 - Can be removed cuz 00:34:767 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) is a really long chain of rhythm so removing them will make things less tiring in gameplay. yes
  5. 01:17:533 (2) - 01:17:533 - 01:17:852 aren't the same sound so how about using circles instead of a slider? That way will distinguish the different sounds properly. i agree with ur point, but i dont feel like throwing two circles after a 1/1 gap so i did sth else here


Reliance looks good, call me back when you're ready~
thx for mod!

Pentori wrote:

im next ww
thx for attention ww

Narcissu wrote:

thx ww
<33
Electoz
Alright then, bubbled!
Good luck~
Pentori
my turn

01:18:810 (2) - hm the last time there was a hi hat sound, you hitsounded it with drum-hitnormal eg. 00:23:916 - perhaps you could change this hitsound to that instead of a clap?

that's all, poke me for heart
Topic Starter
Garden
did :> but it sounds kinda loud with the background so i nerf volume a bit
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