Normalctrl-shift-A = check aimod lot of unsapped objects lots
00:00:738 (2) - move x164 y308 so they dont touch
00:01:300 (3) - x233 y207 so the pattern look little clean
00:02:613 (6) - this revers should end here 00:02:988 - and then add a 1/2 slider here 00:02:988 - for consistency rythm for that sound
00:13:861 - 00:14:049 - 00:14:611 - can add note here i cant tell what u exactly following with these sliders but those notes had that sort of beat so can be mapped imo it felt empty
00:14:797 (4,5) - looks overlapping not so much appealing
00:18:173 - this strong beat can be emphasized with a click note
00:16:297 (5,1) - keep one consistante ds .
00:16:298 (5,2) - stack
00:22:859 (2,4,1) - avoid overlap ( i recommand u use bigger ds for whole map maybe 1.0)
00:25:859 (4,6) - overlap no need go back where u alread placed an object u had planty of room on left bottom side for example
00:27:171 (1,2) - can make parallel
00:31:297 (2) - this confuses me xd why such big sv change in normal difficulty it really confuse players specialy normal players i suggest u avoid that this 1/2 slider look like 1/4
00:33:733 (1) - ^ dont use such big sv change it doesnt make sens imo
00:39:921 - strong beat here
00:44:044 (2) - give some angles i can be more creative with those sliders
00:53:605 (2,3) - not equal spacing
00:59:604 (3,4,5,6,1) - so much overlap thats why i said use more bigger ds
01:04:104 (7,1) - spacing is confusing pls use ds often
overall u need avoid overlaps avoid using big SV changes in normal when they dont make much sens use biggerd ds and use the ds use nice and neat sliders arts check this may help u ->
Neat sliders Hard00:07:861 (1) - u can place this note anywhere else why overlap it over the slider avoid that
00:08:049 (2,3) - ^
00:12:642 (4,5) - overlaps and sliders can look better
00:18:173 - same as in normal clickable strong note for emphasize
00:32:796 (7) - nc
00:42:169 (4) - nc
00:47:606 (6,7,11) - overlap
00:48:169 (9) - nc
01:02:417 (6) - nc
01:50:598 (9,10,11,1) - looks messy and combo too long
thx for warning in the queue well overall so manny overlaps u just stack notes on top of each others try avoid that as much u have planty rooms since u new try watch other maps in editing and see how they are mapperd and learn copy neat and creative sliders x) .
well i tried Good luck in further mapping.