The old Payon in the BG made me miss the good old RO times
[Easy]
Seem OK. The 1/2 stacks may throw beginners off, but it is well made and not unreadable imo.
[Normal]
01:15:031 (1,2) - This transition is very confusing imo. Delete (2) and add 2x repeats to (1)
01:16:666 (4) - Use a short slider instead that starts 1/4 earlier (on the blue tick) and ends right here. Matching what you actually hear would make it much easier to read why (6) suddenly starts on the blue tick.
01:19:122 (1) - Reduce to 1x repeat to match the actual song
01:25:122 (4) - Reduce to 1x repeat, add stacked circle on the red tick @01:25:666 to make it match the song and less confusing
[Hard]
00:16:121 (6,1,2,3) - Some very weird spacing decisions. Personally I wouldn't go for a triple-jump with inconsistent spacing here. Rhythm pattern itself is already hard to read if you don't know the music by heart so I would keep the spacing simple here.
00:27:030 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it would be much better (playble) to reduce the spacing inside this first jump-pattern a bit. Select all 5 notes and use "Scale by..." -> 0,6x with "Playfield Centre"
00:37:121 (6) - Reduce to 1x repeat, move to 464/192 (ending point to 476/256) and add a circle on the red tick (where the slider ending used to be) @440/76. This way you'll fix the spacing error and match the actual song: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/102328
01:30:030 (X) - I wouldn't leave out this beat here.
01:30:303 (1,2,3) - Maybe use a 1x repeat slider instead of three circles here. This rhythm is hard to predict.
Pretty good so far. Keep it up!
~star
[Easy]
Seem OK. The 1/2 stacks may throw beginners off, but it is well made and not unreadable imo.
[Normal]
01:15:031 (1,2) - This transition is very confusing imo. Delete (2) and add 2x repeats to (1)
01:16:666 (4) - Use a short slider instead that starts 1/4 earlier (on the blue tick) and ends right here. Matching what you actually hear would make it much easier to read why (6) suddenly starts on the blue tick.
01:19:122 (1) - Reduce to 1x repeat to match the actual song
01:25:122 (4) - Reduce to 1x repeat, add stacked circle on the red tick @01:25:666 to make it match the song and less confusing
[Hard]
00:16:121 (6,1,2,3) - Some very weird spacing decisions. Personally I wouldn't go for a triple-jump with inconsistent spacing here. Rhythm pattern itself is already hard to read if you don't know the music by heart so I would keep the spacing simple here.
00:27:030 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it would be much better (playble) to reduce the spacing inside this first jump-pattern a bit. Select all 5 notes and use "Scale by..." -> 0,6x with "Playfield Centre"
00:37:121 (6) - Reduce to 1x repeat, move to 464/192 (ending point to 476/256) and add a circle on the red tick (where the slider ending used to be) @440/76. This way you'll fix the spacing error and match the actual song: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/102328
01:30:030 (X) - I wouldn't leave out this beat here.
01:30:303 (1,2,3) - Maybe use a 1x repeat slider instead of three circles here. This rhythm is hard to predict.
Pretty good so far. Keep it up!
~star