did mostly everything, waiting for the guest diff mappers to reply~~

Remind me later~

Just two little things~

Mafia:

03:51:591 (4,5,6,7,8) - The combo color blends with the sb here, so it's a little hard to read.

Insane:

03:10:259 (1) - This slider is not a circle lol

344,176,190259,6,0,B|336:256|272:296|192:280|152:232|136:160|184:96|256:92,2,400

I moved 03:09:592 (4) - down one grid after I fixed the slider cuz it looks better as well.

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Yousei Teikoku <3

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Senketsu no Chikai (Saten-san) [Mafia].osu

hummmm this map lives i see:

Download: Yousei Teikoku - Senketsu no Chikai (Saten-san) [Weezy's Easy].osu

What the hell, great job!

Really like the map! Lots of fun to play.

What happened!!

Mafiamaster wrote:

What happened!!

I was planning on reviving it along with my other Yousei map. But I guess it'll be further delayed

:O is this alive again

Why is insanity gone?

Why?

Remapped [Insanity]

I really liked the old Insanity that you made D:
But since you remapped i can't play it anymore ;_; , could you add the old file on this topic for us to play it again ? I really enjoyed playing it, and the new one feels so different, still great but not the same >.<

And i love your map btw :3

Added~♪
Good thing I had it backed up

love this map

Saten-san wrote:

Added~♪
Good thing I had it backed up

thank you !!

This is definitely one of my favorite maps, why was this old version unrankable?

Stuff happened, and it's not unrankable D:

leave a star here

I've an inspiration to SS when it get ranked \:D/


awesome map !

Idk why you are asking me to mod this again, but now that I can actually fc every diff and pass insanity consistantly maybe I can actually help

[Weezy's Easy]
- SV changes are not really recommended for easier diffs

00:23:592 - The spacing during this slow down is not the same as earlier spacing and may confuse newer players. Recommend either removing slow down or remapping it so that the spacing is 1.25x that way it's the same as before just with slower sliders.
00:36:092 (3,4) - remove these two notes and place a note at 00:36:259 instead
00:57:425 (2) - move note to 00:57:592
01:59:592 - Again recommend removal of slow down or making the spacing the same as before (would use 1.5x here)
02:57:259 (3,4,5) - The first note of this stack will overlap with 02:58:259 (1), maybe just move the stack down and to the right a little so that doesn't happen?
03:03:592 - 0% volume is unrankable, must be at least 5%
03:42:259 (1) - add finish on slider start
03:59:592 (2) - add whistle to be consistant with the rest of that section
04:12:925 - You have a inherited section here that says 0%, but for some reason I can still here the spinner end anyway, so just remove it.

[Nekoo's Normal]
- Slider tick rate 1?
- OD -1?

00:52:925 (1) - Move the second slider anchor right one grid(grid lvl 3) to make the overlap smoother.
02:43:592 (3) - This slider randomly being normal hitsound is kinda wierd. Either make it soft or add nromal hitsounds on 02:46:259 (5) and 02:48:925 (3).
03:44:925 (3) - Add finish?
04:08:592 (1) - Move spinner start to 04:08:925 and add a double at 04:08:425 so that it looks like this http://puu.sh/CqL0 ? With clap on 5 and finish on 6 if you do.
04:12:925 - Remove 0% inherited section

[Mafia]

00:54:259 (3,4,5) - Add finish on 3 and 5?
02:08:926 (3,4,5) - Same as above.
02:09:175 - Remove unused inherited section.
02:09:342 - ^
02:09:509 - ^
02:09:842 - ^
02:43:592 (1) - Same thing I said in Nekoo's diff about the hitsound change here
03:02:259 - 0% hitsound volume is unrankable
03:15:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Add claps on the start of slider 3, on 4, and on the start of slider 6
03:18:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Add claps on the start of slider 3, on 4, and on the end of slider 5
03:24:925 (3,4,5) - make these finishes instead of whistles?
04:08:592 - add a note with finish here and start the spinner on the next red tick instead?
04:12:925 - Remove 0% inherited section

[Insane]

01:38:259 - extend the start of this break to here?
02:28:592 - add a note here, and possible one at the start of the spinner right after it too.
02:31:009 (2,3,4,5) - make this a triple instead of a quad
02:39:259 - add a note here? maybe make that entire combo move down slightly each note as well.
03:57:675 (2) - add clap?
03:58:092 (1,2) - add claps here as well if you did the above.
04:12:925 - remove 0% inherited section

[Insanity]

00:42:759 (1) - remove new combo
00:44:342 (2) - add whistle?
01:32:092 (1,1) - remove both of these new combos
01:35:009 (5) - add clap
02:20:092 (1) - remove new combo
02:41:675 (2) - add clap
02:55:009 (4) - add clap
02:57:425 (4,5) - add clap on start of 4 and on 5
03:47:009 (5,6,7) - add claps on 5 and 7
03:57:675 (5) - add clap
04:12:925 - remove 0% inherited section

I hope this mod is more helpful than the last one...

Thanks Fiya!
Basically did all on my parts, except the 0% part. From what I know it acts like 5% (the minimum)
Yeah I mapped it before the limit got implemented.


Seriously, this is over a year old now. I need to get this ranked

This is also one of my favorite beatmaps in all of osu! I want it ranked =w=

Saten wrote:

Thanks Fiya!
Basically did all on my parts, except the 0% part. From what I know it acts like 5% (the minimum)
Yeah I mapped it before the limit got implemented.


Seriously, this is over a year old now. I need to get this ranked

Didn't know that about the volume, srry P:

And yes rank this already damnit lol

O hai


http://puu.sh/DS0p

Done,

Changed Weezy's Easy to Weez's Easy since he changed name~

Taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
00:12:425 - it's significantly louder at 00:12:592 - so ddkdddd may fit the song better.
00:44:592 - don't make a slowdown on this note? looks better if kd moves in the same speed. (and less overlapping
01:13:592 - why not keep the x xxxxx mode? you can make variation on xxxxx as a progression too.
03:23:592 - finish as music indicated?

other than these stuffs, I also think that the middle stream is too hard comparing with the rest of the diff.

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
00:12:425 - it's significantly louder at 00:12:592 - so ddkdddd may fit the song better. Yes.
00:44:592 - don't make a slowdown on this note? looks better if kd moves in the same speed. (and less overlapping) Moved green line on blue tick right behind it..
01:13:592 - why not keep the x xxxxx mode? you can make variation on xxxxx as a progression too. Okay. I didnt do many variations, the previous stuff stayed but I variated from the spot you suggested on.
03:23:592 - finish as music indicated? Yes.

other than these stuffs, I also think that the middle stream is too hard comparing with the rest of the diff. Reduced the complexity of the stream drastically..

Thanks alot!~
Updated diff: http://puu.sh/FSU5

Star~

oh god my diff sucks D: I must remap this

Go ahead then

late-night mod as usual~~

Tack ska du ha

(●´ω｀)

m4m back :3

[Insanity]

1. 00:33:425 - sounds empty here, try adding a note?
2. as score doesn't count anymore, this diff cound be ranked, but I cannot really mod it, it's much too overmapped for me. sorry.
3. 02:43:592 - double section? also happened in Insane

[Insane]

1. 00:55:092 (1,2) - remove them
2. 03:43:592 (1) - consider to add 1 more reversep

[Easy]

1. 01:18:259 (2) - ending position is kind of odd. 01:18:759 sounds much better
2. 01:20:926 (3) - ^ and condiser adding a reverse to it.
3. 01:22:259 (1) - ^

[Taiko]

1. 00:43:592 - the speed changes happended a bit earlier imo
2. 01:58:259 - ^

[StoryBoard]

1. the pulse of circle2.jpg is much too long for me, half the time is perfect.
2. the 2nd KIAI part is almost non-SBed, you should work harder for that.

Colin Hou wrote:

m4m back :3

[Insanity]

1. 00:33:425 - sounds empty here, try adding a note? added
2. as score doesn't count anymore, this diff cound be ranked, but I cannot really mod it, it's much too overmapped for me. sorry. you mean overjumped, these 2 insanes almost have the same amount of combo. Only difference is that Insanity have a few more streams
3. 02:43:592 - double section? also happened in Insane it's not really a double section, this is to get soft-hitfinish and then normal-sliderslide sound

[Insane]

1. 00:55:092 (1,2) - remove them I can hear the stream start from here
2. 03:43:592 (1) - consider to add 1 more reversep did something similar

[Easy]

1. 01:18:259 (2) - ending position is kind of odd. 01:18:759 sounds much better yes
2. 01:20:926 (3) - ^ and condiser adding a reverse to it. done
3. 01:22:259 (1) - ^ ^

[StoryBoard]

1. the pulse of circle2.jpg is much too long for me, half the time is perfect. removed half of them
2. the 2nd KIAI part is almost non-SBed, you should work harder for that. Did my best!

Thanks~ :3

Where's Loctav when you need him

Colin Hou wrote:

[Taiko]

1. 00:43:592 - the speed changes happended a bit earlier imo
2. 01:58:259 - ^

Fixed both.

Alright: http://puu.sh/1251o

General
Your background fade is fading out the background completely until 02:10:259 - . I can see no sensible reason why players who don't plan on watching the video should have to stare at a black screen for most of the song. The background should be visible until it is needed to be faded.

Discussed the above IRC. It's probably better to keep it the way it is.

Weez's Easy

00:12:925 (1,2) - Small but consider 1.0 spacing?
00:22:259 (3) - Meh slider. Moving last point to x 209 y 100 makes a lot of difference.
00:24:926 (3) - Does it have to look so unpolished? This could be better.
00:27:926 (4) - ^ (Middle point down 1 unit helps)
00:34:259 (1) - Asymmetrical in a bad way. A symmetrical U would be better.
00:44:092 (5,1) - Don't have spacings like this. It can be confusing. Switching from red to white shouldn't be done in an anti jump. Slider 1 should be the main start of the next combo rather than a transitional slider IMO. Noticed how slider 2 contributes to a pattern and 1 doesn't. 1 should contribute to a pattern.
00:48:925 (4,1) - It plays alright, but my mod wouldn't be complete if I didn't point out that lowering the spacing like this flows worse than properly spacing it.
01:00:925 (2) - Shouldn't this be a finish instead?
01:02:925 (1,2) - Meh IMO. Personal preference.
01:11:592 (1) - Whistle on end to follow hitsound pattern
01:16:925 (1) - So quiet. Start with whistle?
01:16:925 (1,2) - Strange transition, flow is odd too. It would flow better if 2 didn't start exactly under the end of 1 but if it were more forward.
01:54:259 (1,2) - These kind of sliders again >.<
01:59:592 (1,2,3) - You should line these sliders up better.
02:04:259 (4) - Find a cleaner position for this. It shouldn't overlap.
02:07:592 (3,4) - Exactly 1.0. Turn grid snap off to fix
02:12:926 (3) - Finish maybe?
02:20:925 (1,2) - A single slider here ending at 02:21:425 - sounds better to me.
02:22:259 (2) - Add whistle on repeat if there isn't one.
02:23:592 (1,2,3) - Could be better. Look at this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/504989
02:34:926 (2) - Feels offbeat but it's fine.
02:35:592 (3,1) - Please align better.
02:54:259 (3) - Sounds weird without a whistle on start. I added a clap to the end that sounded nice as well.
02:56:259 (2) - Whistle on end? also perhaps move middle point up 1 unit. This sliders seems off.
02:57:925 (5) - Clap to go with first clap.
02:58:259 (1) - Whistle on end
02:59:592 (2,3) - Perhaps have a slider that repeats on the red tick like you did 02:54:259 (3) - . The start of the slider doesn't sound the greatest when you click on it. It sounds better to skip over it instead.
03:03:425 - 0% is unrankable
03:02:259 (1) - I'm not sure if it's ending in the right place. when you're fixing the volumes, recheck to see if this is ending in the proper spot.
03:08:925 (2) - Curve doesn't look perfect to me. Try http://puu.sh/1uiKJ
03:12:925 (2) - Use a symmetry slider? apply the same to 03:14:259 (3) - if you do.
03:18:259 (1) - Unsure about this slider. I'm not sure if it should be this asymmetrical.
03:27:592 (2,3,4) - Doesn't look perfectly straight to me.
03:40:925 (4) - Add whistle on repeat?
03:42:259 (1) - Add finish to start?
03:58:259 (1) - Add whistle on end
04:00:925 (1) - ^
04:03:592 (1) - ^
04:06:925 (2) - ^
04:12:925 - 0%

Nekoo's Normal
I can see where you got your inspiration.

00:55:592 (1) - Not sure I like that curve. I kind of prefer this kind of curve here http://puu.sh/1uj9H
01:05:259 (4) - This offbeat slider plays weird IMO. I think just a circle on the red tick would be better.
01:44:925 (3) - The perfect version of this slider seems to require that the middle point be unsnapped to properly fit between the other points.
01:45:425 (4) - Also imperfect. If you could remove the flat parts in this curve, it would look a lot better. Try messing around with the new slider algorithm.
02:11:592 (2) - I don't like this slider design. You should make it softer. http://puu.sh/1ukaK
02:32:092 (2) - Not sure I like the lack of a curve this has. It's kind of weird. i'll leave it up to you to decide if this is a problem. the same goes for all other instances of this.
02:47:592 (1,2) - Do these really need four points? Small tweaks could be made to make these absolutely perfect (equal spacing between points make better sliders). Hard to notice the imperfections though.
02:51:592 (5) - ^ (slider points should be equally spaced)
02:52:092 (6) - Maybe 1 unit to the left. Unsure though. Change spacing to 7 accordingly.
03:04:925 (1) - End is flattening a bit. Adjust so that it's curve more at the end of it.
03:12:259 (1,2,3) - Spacing should be more equal IMO.
03:35:592 (5,6) - Plays weirdly. Maybe slider then note instead. http://puu.sh/1ukz0
03:47:925 (2,3) - Feels slightly closer than most of the other transitions. I don't agree with the pattern all that much either. Personally I would do this http://puu.sh/1ukIo
04:12:925 - 0% volume is unrankable

Mafia
Good difficulty

00:21:925 (4,1) - I keep losing the beat here. Remove clap from the start of 4?
00:30:425 (4,5,6) - I get to here and I feel like the curve is too shallow. Like it should dip more after the arc. If this makes sense at all.
00:44:092 (4,5,1) - Those claps are distracting and I lose the beat because of it. Personally I wouldn't have claps there. (you didn't have claps here 01:59:259 - ) Also I noticed that the spacing isn't the same here.
01:01:425 (3,4) - Please don't troll players. Fill this.
02:16:092 (3,4) - Troll
02:47:759 (2) - Maybe a more uniform curve? Personal preference.
03:10:092 (7) - sounds and plays better if you moved this back 1/2th. that's where the sound is. Just stack with the first stack.
03:32:091 (3,4) - Troll
03:48:591 (3,4) - Spacing?

Insane
Probably not everything is fixable. I left out a few things that I felt weren't fixable, but there were several on the fence issues that might be fixable that I included.

00:12:925 (1,2,3,4,5) - Such a lumpy curve. Make better?
01:17:259 (3) - Maybe could be brought inward a little. Unsure if this will negatively affect flow.
01:49:592 (4,5) - I don't care for this, but just my opinion.
01:59:592 - I hate when songs decide to just kill the speed suddenly.
02:34:259 (1,2) - Doesn't look great IMO.
02:38:592 (1,2,3) - Are you manually stacking? I don't think 0.02 is enough to make the spacing differences seem like a mistake.
03:12:925 (3,4) - Meh spacing.
03:38:759 (3,4) - Doesn't look great.
03:48:092 (2) - Covered by a hitburst. it's difficult to see :/
04:12:925 - 0% volume is unrankable

Insanity
IMO it's more than a bit overmapped.

00:12:925 (1,2) - The angles here seem off. i'm not sure if you did them like this for better flow, but I expected something more aligned. I expected something akin to rotating 2 by -6 - -10 degrees. Not sure if it could even work though. Up to you to do anything or nothing here.
00:20:092 (4) - end part of this slider seems to be off. adjust the second to last and the next to last point until it's perfect.
00:21:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Can you play this? Personally I don't even hear jump notes during these parts. The rhythm keeps alternating, and that's not good for jumps IMO. You can keep, but I feel that jumps like this are overmapped. (referring to the other jumps too)
00:24:259 (2,3,4) - Spacing should be exactly 1.2
00:25:425 (6) - Looks imperfect.
00:28:925 (1) - Curve feels out of place to me. I suggest a more symmetrical curve.
00:29:759 (3,4) - Flows badly when it drops like this. It needs to be a forward movement IMO.
00:30:425 (5,6,7,8) - Should be curving to the right of 4. Take some flow lessons from your Insane.
00:44:592 (4) - when you make a player speed up to follow a slider, it becomes awkward to have them reverse off of it into a less intense pace. With that being said I think you should add a note here 00:45:092 -
01:09:926 (7,1) - So annoying to read after jumps.
01:10:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again I ask, can you play this? Your patterns don't seem to be following the music and I really dislike when mappers decide to map based on pattern rather than song.
01:11:425 - Add note to dissolve the painful anti jump at the end
01:11:592 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Personally I don't like how these types of transitions look. but they flow alright so take my opinion as you wish.
01:30:425 (2,3) - Huge jump- out of nowhere. 1,2 is more a jump sound than 2,3. there's no reason why 2,3 is ridiculously spaced.
01:34:759 (4,5,6) - Extra claps sound out of place.
01:48:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I want to see this ranked, just to see people try to play this 100% troll grade jump stream.
02:01:925 (1,2,3,1,2) - Looks kind of random IMO.
02:31:759 - I can barely hear this sound, nevermind it being part of a huge jump. Most of your jump sequences are filled with these barely related to the beat notes.
02:37:925 (1,2,3) - Plays badly IMO. IDK why you've switched from nice flowing streams to awkward symmetry patterns.
02:45:759 (6,7,8,1) - Spacing
02:56:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Such poor flow. Not very fun to play IMO. It seems you're mapping this backwards, when there are jump sounds you have streams, and when there are stream sounds you have jumps. It makes this difficulty really obnoxious to play.
03:04:925 (1,2,3) - Meh looking pattern IMO. You've already used many nice looking transitions. There's no sense having a bad one like this.
03:20:092 (6,1) - 6 isn't pointing at 1. It doesn't look good. Try moving 1 to x 371 y 317. Then mirror 2 off of 1
03:46:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ugh this pattern again >.<
04:12:925 - 0% volume is unrankable.


Good luck with this. Personally i would never rank Insanity with such backwards reasoning jumps, but i'm not the BATs and they usually allow crazy unfitting stuff in as long as it's consistently coherent. So all is not lost I guess.