Thx for the star~ And you're very welcome to mod it.jameskong1 wrote:
good song ~ mod if you want~
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Topic Starter
thank you veeeery much ~~ 
I was really confused about that mp3, cuz it isn't broken when playing by WMP.
I was really confused about that mp3, cuz it isn't broken when playing by WMP.fighto~
star 
路过STAR~同新人MAPPER求共勉
Overall
My advice - use small grid size. So will be fewer mistakes especially if you're a beginner.
00:50:428 - 01:08:541 to add kiai
01:41:938 - 02:00:617 to add kiai
02:23:258 - 02:32:315 to add kiai
02:36:277 - 02:54:957 to add kiai
C's world
I think it's Insane?
00:20:357 (6) - remove
00:20:428 - add note
00:27:504 (1) - ctrl+H like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64528
00:29:343 (5) - remove
00:35:711 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - hard to read. I suggest this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64531
00:59:626 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
02:22:126 (1,2,1,2) - replace the notes
02:23:258 (1) - just suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64533
02:45:900 (1,1,1,1) - Difficulty jumps
02:46:041 (1,1,1,1) - remove new combo
02:46:749 (2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read. not stack them
02:48:589 (4,5,6) - ^
Geass
Hard?
00:50:428 (5,6,7) - Try not stack notes like this. it's hard to read
01:10:805 (4) - make symmetrical
02:34:438 (6) - ^
01:38:258 (1,1,1,1) - remove new combo
Download: Yukana - Reincarnation (Lambda Delta) [Zero&CC].osu
My advice - use small grid size. So will be fewer mistakes especially if you're a beginner.
00:50:428 - 01:08:541 to add kiai
01:41:938 - 02:00:617 to add kiai
02:23:258 - 02:32:315 to add kiai
02:36:277 - 02:54:957 to add kiai
C's world
I think it's Insane?
00:20:357 (6) - remove
00:20:428 - add note
00:27:504 (1) - ctrl+H like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64528
00:29:343 (5) - remove
00:35:711 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - hard to read. I suggest this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64531
00:59:626 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
02:22:126 (1,2,1,2) - replace the notes
02:23:258 (1) - just suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64533
02:45:900 (1,1,1,1) - Difficulty jumps
02:46:041 (1,1,1,1) - remove new combo
02:46:749 (2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read. not stack them
02:48:589 (4,5,6) - ^
Geass
Hard?
00:50:428 (5,6,7) - Try not stack notes like this. it's hard to read
01:10:805 (4) - make symmetrical
02:34:438 (6) - ^
01:38:258 (1,1,1,1) - remove new combo
Download: Yukana - Reincarnation (Lambda Delta) [Zero&CC].osu
....对我来说真是好快好有挑战性的map啊 哈哈 nice song & nice amine 魔女加油啊！ star！
Topic Starter
thx a lot~~ most of them fixed. I don't make those two symmetrical cuz I wanna write a 'C' by that? Is it okay? XDHellzero wrote:
Overall
My advice - use small grid size. So will be fewer mistakes especially if you're a beginner.
00:50:428 - 01:08:541 to add kiai
01:41:938 - 02:00:617 to add kiai
02:23:258 - 02:32:315 to add kiai
02:36:277 - 02:54:957 to add kiai
C's world
I think it's Insane?
00:20:357 (6) - remove
00:20:428 - add note
00:27:504 (1) - ctrl+H like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64528
00:29:343 (5) - remove
00:35:711 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - hard to read. I suggest this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64531
00:59:626 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
02:22:126 (1,2,1,2) - replace the notes
02:23:258 (1) - just suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64533
02:45:900 (1,1,1,1) - Difficulty jumps
02:46:041 (1,1,1,1) - remove new combo
02:46:749 (2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read. not stack them
02:48:589 (4,5,6) - ^
Geass
Hard?
00:50:428 (5,6,7) - Try not stack notes like this. it's hard to read
01:10:805 (4) - make symmetrical
02:34:438 (6) - ^
01:38:258 (1,1,1,1) - remove new combo
来MOD了～～加油哦～团子～～
建议参考一下就好～～
[Code]
01:31:748 (2,3) - SPACING
01:38:540 (2,3) - ^
[Geass]
这个是HARD吧
整体感觉排版太密太挤了,DS可以改到1.1或者1.2
00:49:013 (3,4,5) - 不要放在Slider的下面
00:58:919 (3,4) - 这个不是很舒服
02:45:900 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不是很好读图
恩～主要就是太密太挤了～～感觉NOTE全都缩在一起～～～不论看还是打都不是很舒服～～建议大修改～～～DS可以改的高一点的～～～
[C's world]
AR-1
01:29:202 (1,2) - 距离拉开一点
01:50:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉不是很舒服～把三角形的底边向外会不会好点～
02:50:428 (1,2,3) - 挤了～
以下引用NR的建议：
很多地方的不用把节奏放的那么密～尤其是一些1/4放满的地方，可以变成o ooo o o,还有比如ooo可以换成SL折返，这样听起来比较舒服～～如果放满就感觉有些违和了。
建议参考一下就好～～
[Code]
01:31:748 (2,3) - SPACING
01:38:540 (2,3) - ^
[Geass]
这个是HARD吧
整体感觉排版太密太挤了,DS可以改到1.1或者1.2
00:49:013 (3,4,5) - 不要放在Slider的下面
00:58:919 (3,4) - 这个不是很舒服
02:45:900 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不是很好读图
恩～主要就是太密太挤了～～感觉NOTE全都缩在一起～～～不论看还是打都不是很舒服～～建议大修改～～～DS可以改的高一点的～～～
[C's world]
AR-1
01:29:202 (1,2) - 距离拉开一点
01:50:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉不是很舒服～把三角形的底边向外会不会好点～
02:50:428 (1,2,3) - 挤了～
以下引用NR的建议：
很多地方的不用把节奏放的那么密～尤其是一些1/4放满的地方，可以变成o ooo o o,还有比如ooo可以换成SL折返，这样听起来比较舒服～～如果放满就感觉有些违和了。
Topic Starter
thx~~ haaa~~=o= stay up too late for fixing..xinhe wrote:
来MOD了～～加油哦～团子～～
建议参考一下就好～～
[Code]
01:31:748 (2,3) - SPACING
01:38:540 (2,3) - ^
[Geass]
这个是HARD吧
整体感觉排版太密太挤了,DS可以改到1.1或者1.2
00:49:013 (3,4,5) - 不要放在Slider的下面
00:58:919 (3,4) - 这个不是很舒服
02:45:900 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不是很好读图
恩～主要就是太密太挤了～～感觉NOTE全都缩在一起～～～不论看还是打都不是很舒服～～建议大修改～～～DS可以改的高一点的～～～
[C's world]
AR-1
01:29:202 (1,2) - 距离拉开一点
01:50:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉不是很舒服～把三角形的底边向外会不会好点～
02:50:428 (1,2,3) - 挤了～
以下引用NR的建议：
很多地方的不用把节奏放的那么密～尤其是一些1/4放满的地方，可以变成o ooo o o,还有比如ooo可以换成SL折返，这样听起来比较舒服～～如果放满就感觉有些违和了。
路过star，口味略重了一点，不过结构已经不错了
Hi there!
I had a go with all your maps, and here's what I think:
I really like the song, so I'll give you a star~
All the best with your maps!
I had a go with all your maps, and here's what I think:
kurohacker's mod(^^)
[General]
The kiai time should be kept constant for all difficulties. I don't know why, but that's what recommended, apparently.
For the tags, there's a slight mistake in spelling. It's written "Amine" here. Change it to "Anime".
Also, you can increase the hitsound volume just a bit, so that you can hear them. I actually didn't notice the hitsounds until I clicked on some
of the notes in the editor.
[Code]
0:27:221 [3] - Move one grid up (Grid level 4).
0:34:579 [4] - New combo here.
0:36:843 [7] - Same here.
2:30:617 - Maybe add a circle here?
2:38:541 [4] - Align this with [3].
2:52:692 [3] - Flip this horizontally.
[Geass]
0:11:938 [5] - New combo here.
0:25:523 - Add a new combo circle here.
2:23:258 [5] - New combo here.
2:36:843 [5] - Same here.
2:43:636 [9] - Same here.
[C's world]
1:26:655 [9] - New combo here, to follow the style used earlier in the song.
1:26:938 [1] - Delete new combo here.
2:46:466 [1] - Same here.
The kiai time should be kept constant for all difficulties. I don't know why, but that's what recommended, apparently.
For the tags, there's a slight mistake in spelling. It's written "Amine" here. Change it to "Anime".
Also, you can increase the hitsound volume just a bit, so that you can hear them. I actually didn't notice the hitsounds until I clicked on some
of the notes in the editor.
[Code]
0:27:221 [3] - Move one grid up (Grid level 4).
0:34:579 [4] - New combo here.
0:36:843 [7] - Same here.
2:30:617 - Maybe add a circle here?
2:38:541 [4] - Align this with [3].
2:52:692 [3] - Flip this horizontally.
[Geass]
0:11:938 [5] - New combo here.
0:25:523 - Add a new combo circle here.
2:23:258 [5] - New combo here.
2:36:843 [5] - Same here.
2:43:636 [9] - Same here.
[C's world]
1:26:655 [9] - New combo here, to follow the style used earlier in the song.
1:26:938 [1] - Delete new combo here.
2:46:466 [1] - Same here.
I really like the song, so I'll give you a star~
All the best with your maps!
Topic Starter
fixed ~~ XD
star~
Hi
General
Remove tags and remove letterbox
In all diffs different colors, ir's not good, fix it
Code
Where are hitsounds? -_- Use more claps
01:31:183 - 01:32:740 - soft sounds there
01:36:843 (6) - don't stuck it
01:56:089 (5) - new combo
02:27:787 (1,2,3) - hard to read, don't stuck it
02:32:598 - i think it will be better if you will "map" this part, confusing break
02:44:768 (1) - remove new combo
Geass
00:23:258 (1) - remove this combo
02:45:900 (3) - new combo
C's world (is it guest diff or specific mame? if it's guest diff name of creator must be in tags)
Don't use white combo color
00:13:636 (1) - remove new combo
00:09:957 (2) - ugly sliders like this... ><
00:18:164 (1) - in future don't use combos like this
Star
General
Remove tags and remove letterbox
In all diffs different colors, ir's not good, fix it
Code
Where are hitsounds? -_- Use more claps
01:31:183 - 01:32:740 - soft sounds there
01:36:843 (6) - don't stuck it
01:56:089 (5) - new combo
02:27:787 (1,2,3) - hard to read, don't stuck it
02:32:598 - i think it will be better if you will "map" this part, confusing break
02:44:768 (1) - remove new combo
Geass
00:23:258 (1) - remove this combo
02:45:900 (3) - new combo
C's world (is it guest diff or specific mame? if it's guest diff name of creator must be in tags)
Don't use white combo color
00:13:636 (1) - remove new combo
00:09:957 (2) - ugly sliders like this... ><
00:18:164 (1) - in future don't use combos like this
Star
Topic Starter
fixed~
that's not a guset diff and.... okay I have changed that diff's name
that's not a guset diff and.... okay I have changed that diff's name
-Try to name the difficulties so they actually show the difficulty of the map, they aren't too creative at the moment
-Starting the second kiai time at 01:42:504 seems to fit more. I would also start the last kiai time at 02:36:843
-Make sure all timing sections (especially kiai) are snapped
Code:
00:45:899 (1) - some sliders could look better having smoother curves
00:50:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - some stuff like this is getting kind of hard for the easiest difficulty - same for all streams like this
01:51:559 (2,5) - nazi: you could go through and stack minor stuff like this
01:57:221 (2,3) - stack these
Geass:
00:36:843 (1,2,3,4) - snap the end of these to the red ticks
01:27:221 (2) - extend to red tick?
02:00:051 (3) - 2x doesn't really fit (also don't have the repeat hidden by previous notes)
02:17:881 (5,1) - space out more
02:47:315 (8,1) - ^
02:49:720 (7,1) - ^
C-world:
00:20:357 (6) - should be a on a white tick (I would just use a note not a slider)
00:38:541 (1) - add a note here?
00:41:655 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - continue clap pattern from before
00:48:730 (2,3,4,5,6) - kind of unexpected and doesn't follow the flow the map
01:07:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ (same for the rest)
01:10:806 (4) - might want to extend to 01:12:504
01:25:947 (7) - add a note here
02:13:919 (3,1) - kind of random jump
02:40:523 (4,1) - space out more
02:45:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - really hard to follow spacing changes like this especially as most of them aren't like this
In general go through and make sure all of your spacing makes sense and matches up, not too bad but a first map but needs some more work before I can give this a star
-Starting the second kiai time at 01:42:504 seems to fit more. I would also start the last kiai time at 02:36:843
-Make sure all timing sections (especially kiai) are snapped
Code:
00:45:899 (1) - some sliders could look better having smoother curves
00:50:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - some stuff like this is getting kind of hard for the easiest difficulty - same for all streams like this
01:51:559 (2,5) - nazi: you could go through and stack minor stuff like this
01:57:221 (2,3) - stack these
Geass:
00:36:843 (1,2,3,4) - snap the end of these to the red ticks
01:27:221 (2) - extend to red tick?
02:00:051 (3) - 2x doesn't really fit (also don't have the repeat hidden by previous notes)
02:17:881 (5,1) - space out more
02:47:315 (8,1) - ^
02:49:720 (7,1) - ^
C-world:
00:20:357 (6) - should be a on a white tick (I would just use a note not a slider)
00:38:541 (1) - add a note here?
00:41:655 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - continue clap pattern from before
00:48:730 (2,3,4,5,6) - kind of unexpected and doesn't follow the flow the map
01:07:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ (same for the rest)
01:10:806 (4) - might want to extend to 01:12:504
01:25:947 (7) - add a note here
02:13:919 (3,1) - kind of random jump
02:40:523 (4,1) - space out more
02:45:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - really hard to follow spacing changes like this especially as most of them aren't like this
In general go through and make sure all of your spacing makes sense and matches up, not too bad but a first map but needs some more work before I can give this a star
Topic Starter
. .Very thank you for your modding~~~~!
I'm really busy these days and I'll fix it after that.
.Very thank you for your modding~~~~! I'm really busy these days and I'll fix it after that.
Topic Starter
totally remapped. only a draft now. [Insane] structure done.
[Easy]mapping.
_____________________________________________________
okay, it finally got two difficulties: Normal & Hard.
welcoming modding
[Easy]mapping.
_____________________________________________________
okay, it finally got two difficulties: Normal & Hard.
welcoming modding
来了~
[General]
1.BG裁成1024*768
2.slider最好消音
[Hard]
00:11:938 (7) - NC在这
00:12:787 (1) - 去NC
00:16:466 (5) - NC
00:36:843 (1) - 消音
00:43:353 (1,2,3,4) - 改成图示看看,这样的节奏第一次打有点怪
00:56:655 (6) - 拉成和5一样
01:52:692 (5,6,7,8,9) - 图示,蓝线结束略怪
01:54:957 (5,6) - ^
02:18:164 (4) - spacing,建议移到3正下方
02:19:862 (5,6) - 6用5复制的
02:36:843 (7,8,9,10,11) - finsh or clap,建议用绿线音量递进,11就用finsh吧
02:39:107 (1,2,3) - ^
02:45:900 (1,2,3) - ^
02:48:164 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:41:938 (5,6,7) - 有点乱,稍微放的有些规律吧..或者6,7对也行
02:51:560 (7) - NC
[Normal]
00:36:843 (1) - 消音
00:50:428 (3) - finish
00:52:692 (1) - ^
00:54:957 (1) - ^
00:57:221 (5) - ^
...
长白线这样到1:08:541,下半段也一样
01:31:183 (1) - 消音
02:38:541 (3) - finish
02:44:768 (1,2,3,4,5) - finish or clap
Nice map,GJ~ star again & good luck
[General]
1.BG裁成1024*768
2.slider最好消音
[Hard]
00:11:938 (7) - NC在这
00:12:787 (1) - 去NC
00:16:466 (5) - NC
00:36:843 (1) - 消音
00:43:353 (1,2,3,4) - 改成图示看看,这样的节奏第一次打有点怪
00:56:655 (6) - 拉成和5一样
01:52:692 (5,6,7,8,9) - 图示,蓝线结束略怪
01:54:957 (5,6) - ^
02:18:164 (4) - spacing,建议移到3正下方
02:19:862 (5,6) - 6用5复制的
02:36:843 (7,8,9,10,11) - finsh or clap,建议用绿线音量递进,11就用finsh吧
02:39:107 (1,2,3) - ^
02:45:900 (1,2,3) - ^
02:48:164 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:41:938 (5,6,7) - 有点乱,稍微放的有些规律吧..或者6,7对也行
02:51:560 (7) - NC
[Normal]
00:36:843 (1) - 消音
00:50:428 (3) - finish
00:52:692 (1) - ^
00:54:957 (1) - ^
00:57:221 (5) - ^
...
长白线这样到1:08:541,下半段也一样
01:31:183 (1) - 消音
02:38:541 (3) - finish
02:44:768 (1,2,3,4,5) - finish or clap
Nice map,GJ~ star again & good luck
Topic Starter
SPOILER
safawu wrote:
来了~
[General]
1.BG裁成1024*768 上下黑边了
2.slider最好消音 empty file added
[Hard]
00:11:938 (7) - NC在这 done.
00:12:787 (1) - 去NC done.
00:16:466 (5) - NC done.
00:36:843 (1) - 消音 为什么我只能用5%..是不是新版不允许0了 - -
00:43:353 (1,2,3,4) - 改成图示看看,这样的节奏第一次打有点怪 nty
00:56:655 (6) - 拉成和5一样 done.
01:52:692 (5,6,7,8,9) - 图示,蓝线结束略怪 nty
01:54:957 (5,6) - ^
02:18:164 (4) - spacing,建议移到3正下方 尝试了另一种摆法
02:19:862 (5,6) - 6用5复制的 done.
02:36:843 (7,8,9,10,11) - finsh or clap,建议用绿线音量递进,11就用finsh吧 finish 顺便加了一些whistle
02:39:107 (1,2,3) - ^
02:45:900 (1,2,3) - ^
02:48:164 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:41:938 (5,6,7) - 有点乱,稍微放的有些规律吧..或者6,7对也行 5,6对称了 7变成了reverse
02:51:560 (7) - NC done
[Normal]
00:36:843 (1) - 消音 QAQ
00:50:428 (3) - finish 其实我不太爱finish 基本只难得用用.. 现在加了一些了
00:52:692 (1) - ^
00:54:957 (1) - ^
00:57:221 (5) - ^
...
长白线这样到1:08:541,下半段也一样
01:31:183 (1) - 消音
02:38:541 (3) - finish nty
02:44:768 (1,2,3,4,5) - finish or clap nty, I tried whistles
Nice map,GJ~ star again & good luck
MOD~[General]
应该要有一个3颗星以下的难度，normal再删一点notes
三个难度的BPM不同，请统一一下，统一成212也可以吧
[Normal]
某些note距离太远，会让新手感到困难，请开DS修改
00:23:258 (1) - 和上一个5的距离太远
00:25:806 (1) - ^
00:36:843 (1) - spinner太短了，新手玩不起
00:44:768 (2,3,4) - 排出一个弧度来比较好
00:48:730 (3) - 往右上一格
01:31:183 (1) - spinner太短，最好改成4个circle或者2个slider
01:54:957 (3,4,5) - 不要和后面的slider遮到，不好看，稍微拉远点
02:11:938 (1) - 还是spinner太短
02:24:107 (3,4) - 这两个的节奏换一下，然后5去掉
02:27:504 (4) - 删
02:40:523 (4) - 去掉折返，不然够不到下一个
02:52:692 (6) - NC
[Hard]
00:18:730 (1,2,3) - 删掉3，把2放到3原来的节奏点（蓝线）上面，2的结尾加上clap
00:44:202 (3,4) - 34调换一下节奏
01:01:183 (7) - 拉远
01:41:938 (1,2,3,4) - 会出现读图失误，这个距离增大的梗还是算了比较好
01:53:541 (8) - 右上角一格
02:18:730 (1,2) - 交换一下，先slider？
[Zero&CC]
确认一下这个GD作者会不会来改图……lol如果你改的话，也要和人家通知一下
00:28:919 (1) - NC
00:34:438 (6,7) - exchange
01:04:579 (6) - doesn't stack well
01:25:523 (1,2,3,4,5) - ugly, try to put them with a better pattern
01:37:409 (4) - doesn't stack well
02:30:475 (2) - a slower slider? Then it should have a different shape or NC.
02:53:824 (10) - NC
02:54:390 (1) - remove this NC
没了，加油~！
star够多就先不给了w
Topic Starter
SPOILER
eikkaleyd wrote:
:D MOD~
[General]
应该要有一个3颗星以下的难度，normal再删一点notes
三个难度的BPM不同，请统一一下，统一成212也可以吧
[Normal]
某些note距离太远，会让新手感到困难，请开DS修改
00:23:258 (1) - 和上一个5的距离太远 诶0 0.我每次combo结束基本都是1.4出去 combo内是0.8这样...
00:25:806 (1) - ^
00:36:843 (1) - spinner太短了，新手玩不起 加长了~
00:44:768 (2,3,4) - 排出一个弧度来比较好 嗯done
00:48:730 (3) - 往右上一格 还是弧度撒其实我开始准备摆成折角现在发现还是弧度好了...
01:31:183 (1) - spinner太短，最好改成4个circle或者2个slider 2个slider嗯嗯。
01:54:957 (3,4,5) - 不要和后面的slider遮到，不好看，稍微拉远点 done
02:11:938 (1) - 还是spinner太短 QuQ为什么感觉长了好拖....
02:24:107 (3,4) - 这两个的节奏换一下，然后5去掉 done
02:27:504 (4) - 删 done.
02:40:523 (4) - 去掉折返，不然够不到下一个 吼吼- - 原来那个也算是跳
02:52:692 (6) - NC done.
[Hard]
00:18:730 (1,2,3) - 删掉3，把2放到3原来的节奏点（蓝线）上面，2的结尾加上clap 尝试了一下嗯.感觉也不错.
00:44:202 (3,4) - 34调换一下节奏 nty
01:01:183 (7) - 拉远 done
01:41:938 (1,2,3,4) - 会出现读图失误，这个距离增大的梗还是算了比较好 诶这样吗...那之前那个距离减小的怎么办..?O-O
01:53:541 (8) - 右上角一格 done.
02:18:730 (1,2) - 交换一下，先slider？ 诶其实我喜欢这样摆..
[Zero&CC] 他有好几个月没登陆了Q Q 这样的话是不是先别动啦
确认一下这个GD作者会不会来改图……lol如果你改的话，也要和人家通知一下
00:28:919 (1) - NC
00:34:438 (6,7) - exchange
01:04:579 (6) - doesn't stack well
01:25:523 (1,2,3,4,5) - ugly, try to put them with a better pattern
01:37:409 (4) - doesn't stack well
02:30:475 (2) - a slower slider? Then it should have a different shape or NC.
02:53:824 (10) - NC
02:54:390 (1) - remove this NC
没了，加油~！
OuO感谢潇子，有时候觉得自己能读就可以的看来也不行嗷...
Topic Starter
果然按照Insane做的hard不像hard... 还是去重新做一个hard好啦?...
hihi~
Hard
00:36:843 - try this?
00:59:485 (1) - add finish
01:09:390 (x) - add note here
01:09:674 (T) - need sound here imo T.T
01:32:881 - add whistle
01:33:447 (1) - add finish
01:42:504 (1) - ^
01:51:560 (1) - ^
01:52:834 (6) - start from 01:52:975 like this
02:01:466 (x) - add note
02:01:749 (1) - here too~need sound imo
02:23:258 (1) - add finish
02:36:843 (7) - try new combo here? so read easy imo O:
02:37:975 (1) - remove new combo
02:36:843 (1) - add finish and remove whistle?
02:37:409 (11) - if you add finish 02:36:843 (1). remove finish here
02:45:900 (1) - add finish and remove whistle
play楽しかったです！がんばれー OvO
Hard
00:36:843 - try this?
00:59:485 (1) - add finish
01:09:390 (x) - add note here
01:09:674 (T) - need sound here imo T.T
01:32:881 - add whistle
01:33:447 (1) - add finish
01:42:504 (1) - ^
01:51:560 (1) - ^
01:52:834 (6) - start from 01:52:975 like this
02:01:466 (x) - add note
02:01:749 (1) - here too~need sound imo
02:23:258 (1) - add finish
02:36:843 (7) - try new combo here? so read easy imo O:
02:37:975 (1) - remove new combo
02:36:843 (1) - add finish and remove whistle?
02:37:409 (11) - if you add finish 02:36:843 (1). remove finish here
02:45:900 (1) - add finish and remove whistle
play楽しかったです！がんばれー OvO
Topic Starter
SPOILER
y u c a wrote:
hihi~
Hard
00:36:843 - try this?
00:59:485 (1) - add finish
01:09:390 (x) - add note here
01:09:674 (T) - need sound here imo T.T
01:32:881 - add whistle
01:33:447 (1) - add finish
01:42:504 (1) - ^
01:51:560 (1) - ^
01:52:834 (6) - start from 01:52:975 like this I remove the next note (7), or there's gonna be a hyper jump..for 7.00x+ O.O
02:01:466 (x) - add note
02:01:749 (1) - here too~need sound imo
02:23:258 (1) - add finish
02:36:843 (7) - try new combo here? so read easy imo O:
02:37:975 (1) - remove new combo
02:36:843 (1) - add finish and remove whistle?
02:37:409 (11) - if you add finish 02:36:843 (1). remove finish here
02:45:900 (1) - add finish and remove whistle
play楽しかったです！がんばれー OvO
all fixed.
はいはい、がんばりますー OuO~
[General]
[Hard]
00:10:523 (3) - down 1 grid orz
00:15:334 (3) - flip vertically?
00:27:362 (4,5) - unexpected spacing You can put (2) from left to right, then (3,4,5,6) on the right of the previous red streams
00:36:419 (4,5) - unexpected spacing
00:37:975 (1) - considering that the first spinner's still under normal volume, try to add one timing line here to use normal volume for the spinner, then mute the end of the spinner?
00:51:843 (6) - up 2 grid
00:54:107 (5) - unexpected spacing
01:56:655 (5) - try to make it more symmetrical
01:57:646 (7,8) - remove whistle
02:02:315 - clap like the previous combo, otherwise remove clap at 01:58:919 -
02:13:636 - background claps are obvious. You might want to add some claps here
[Normal]
...
如果回到2年前我覺得這圖fix一點東西之後很不錯 ._.
可惜2012這世代容不下這種圖 orz
1/4的spacing在同一個combo中不要改, 那樣會打死玩家；normal的1/2跳也一樣 (漸變例外 不要突然大跳)
其他歉稍為改一下 不錯
[Hard]try to make them start at the same time?
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:862, ends on 01:08:541
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:41:938, ends on 02:00:617
[Normal]
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:428, ends on 01:08:541
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:42:504, ends on 02:00:617
[Hard]
00:10:523 (3) - down 1 grid orz
00:15:334 (3) - flip vertically?
00:27:362 (4,5) - unexpected spacing You can put (2) from left to right, then (3,4,5,6) on the right of the previous red streams
00:36:419 (4,5) - unexpected spacing
00:37:975 (1) - considering that the first spinner's still under normal volume, try to add one timing line here to use normal volume for the spinner, then mute the end of the spinner?
00:51:843 (6) - up 2 grid
00:54:107 (5) - unexpected spacing
01:56:655 (5) - try to make it more symmetrical
01:57:646 (7,8) - remove whistle
02:02:315 - clap like the previous combo, otherwise remove clap at 01:58:919 -
02:13:636 - background claps are obvious. You might want to add some claps here
[Normal]
...
如果回到2年前我覺得這圖fix一點東西之後很不錯 ._.
可惜2012這世代容不下這種圖 orz
1/4的spacing在同一個combo中不要改, 那樣會打死玩家；normal的1/2跳也一樣 (漸變例外 不要突然大跳)
其他歉稍為改一下 不錯
Topic Starter
SPOILER
wmfchris wrote:
[General][Hard]try to make them start at the same time?
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:862, ends on 01:08:541
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:41:938, ends on 02:00:617
[Normal]
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:428, ends on 01:08:541
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:42:504, ends on 02:00:617
[Hard]
00:10:523 (3) - down 1 grid orz
00:15:334 (3) - flip vertically?
00:27:362 (4,5) - unexpected spacing You can put (2) from left to right, then (3,4,5,6) on the right of the previous red streams
00:36:419 (4,5) - unexpected spacing
00:37:975 (1) - considering that the first spinner's still under normal volume, try to add one timing line here to use normal volume for the spinner, then mute the end of the spinner?
00:51:843 (6) - up 2 grid
00:54:107 (5) - unexpected spacing
01:56:655 (5) - try to make it more symmetrical
01:57:646 (7,8) - remove whistle
02:02:315 - clap like the previous combo, otherwise remove clap at 01:58:919 -
02:13:636 - background claps are obvious. You might want to add some claps here
[Normal]
...
如果回到2年前我覺得這圖fix一點東西之後很不錯 ._.
可惜2012這世代容不下這種圖 orz
1/4的spacing在同一個combo中不要改, 那樣會打死玩家；normal的1/2跳也一樣 (漸變例外 不要突然大跳)
其他歉稍為改一下 不錯
O O。normal一些地方重新弄.... HARD里面的1/4的加减速我会改掉的。QuQ
Topic Starter
welcome modding alwaysHi, from my queue
Normal
Good luck~
Normal
- 00:10:806 (3) - move the last slider point 2 grids down
- 00:24:674 (3) -放这里? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot085-7.jpg
- 00:51:560 (5,6) - 1/2 slider?
- 02:18:872 (2,3) - 在这里放两个1/4的slider比较好...
- 02:25:523 (1,2,3,4) - plz use slider...
Good luck~
Topic Starter
SPOILER
[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
Hi, from my queue
Normal
[list][*]00:10:806 (3) - move the last slider point 2 grids down嗯.好像切线了
Hard
[list][*]00:24:674 (3) -放这里? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot085-7.jpg 嗯.
[*]00:51:560 (5,6) - 1/2 slider? nty
[*]02:18:872 (2,3) - 在这里放两个1/4的slider比较好... nty
[*]02:25:523 (1,2,3,4) - plz use slider...换了个摆法><这地方忘记改了
that's all
Good luck~
thx for modding 谢谢你~。
Hi there~~ mod for request
General:
General:
- 0KB的.wav文件是不允许的，需要空白sliderslide的话直接找我要把
- 没用的.osb就干掉好了
- 我觉得Preview time可以放在49862会感觉更好一点？
- 怎么说呢……一眼看过去像是09年的图……直来直去的……感觉不是很好看……而曲子本身又不是那种节奏明快的音乐，似乎多用一些弧形slider会感觉更好一点？
- 01:33:447 (1) - 感觉停在前面白线上会舒服点？
- 01:58:919 - Spinner从这里开始比较好吧？
- 结尾后面的长度太长了，建议截掉吧。
- 00:22:126 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这儿应该做成一个5连+slider
- 00:27:221 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这种1/4突然变间距就太坑人了……
- 00:35:145 (3,4) - 改slider吧
- 00:51:419 (4,5) - 坑人的1/4跳
- 00:51:560 (5) - 另外我觉得这里用note比较好，然后删掉00:51:419 (4) - 和00:52:409 (8) -
- 01:35:853 (2) - 感觉可以删掉
- 01:57:928 (8) - ^
- 01:59:060 - Spinner从这里开始？
- 排版的问题……呃……和Normal一样怎么能说呢……感觉可以再好好调整一下什么的，整体的排版感觉不太好所以没法一处一处的说清楚……
Topic Starter
SPOILER
Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~ mod for request
General:
- 0KB的.wav文件是不允许的，需要空白sliderslide的话直接找我要把 o.o其实我也不知道这是干嘛的 只是人家叫我加我就加了 于是删掉了。。
- 没用的.osb就干掉好了 done
- 我觉得Preview time可以放在49862会感觉更好一点？虽然感觉差不多不过就改了吧0 0
Normal:
- 怎么说呢……一眼看过去像是09年的图……直来直去的……感觉不是很好看……而曲子本身又不是那种节奏明快的音乐，似乎多用一些弧形slider会感觉更好一点？我会试图加一点 不过还是喜欢直来直去的slider
- 01:33:447 (1) - 感觉停在前面白线上会舒服点？ 嗯好0 0
- 01:58:919 - Spinner从这里开始比较好吧？ 待定0 0 不知道你从那里开始是为什么..总之我是从提琴开始的..
- 结尾后面的长度太长了，建议截掉吧。超出限制规定了吗？。总之反正我弄不来><所以就没管...
Hard:
- 00:22:126 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这儿应该做成一个5连+slider ok试了
- 00:27:221 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这种1/4突然变间距就太坑人了…… 我拉近><虽然没感觉 记得说同一个combo里面一样就行了的..
- 00:35:145 (3,4) - 改slider吧 O O之前都slider了所以这里不用
- 00:51:419 (4,5) - 坑人的1/4跳 拉近了
- 00:51:560 (5) - 另外我觉得这里用note比较好，然后删掉00:51:419 (4) - 和00:52:409 (8) - 保留意见
- 01:35:853 (2) - 感觉可以删掉 删了没啥违和嗯
- 01:57:928 (8) - ^ 我觉得既然上面是2个这里应该对称 0 0 另外你的理由？
- 01:59:060 - Spinner从这里开始？ 同上我是从提琴音开始的
- 排版的问题……呃……和Normal一样怎么能说呢……感觉可以再好好调整一下什么的，整体的排版感觉不太好所以没法一处一处的说清楚……
差不多就这样了加油的说！
嗯0 0 排版各人想法不同也很正常....回路不同？大概就是这样了。
Sorry for the delay ^^ Couldnt mod yesterday x3
Normal
00:13:636 Distance spacing is maybe a little bit too much compared to the others
00:50:428 Is it just me or does this slider should be 1 grid right? o_o
01:26:089 Also big distnace space compared to others? o_o
02:38:541 ^
02:54:390 Maybe try to put circle somewhere else instead of stacking
Hard
Nothing Special ^^
~Star because Code Geass made me cry at the end ;_;~
Normal
00:13:636 Distance spacing is maybe a little bit too much compared to the others
00:50:428 Is it just me or does this slider should be 1 grid right? o_o
01:26:089 Also big distnace space compared to others? o_o
02:38:541 ^
02:54:390 Maybe try to put circle somewhere else instead of stacking
Hard
Nothing Special ^^
~Star because Code Geass made me cry at the end ;_;~