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Yukana - Reincarnation

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Lambda Delta
29 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Lambda Delta
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年3月23日 at 12:09:22

Artist: Yukana
Title: Reincarnation
Source: Code Geass
Tags: C.C. lelouch lamperouge Code Geass anime
BPM: 106
Filesize: 3515kb
Play Time: 02:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.81 stars, 416 notes)
  2. Normal (2.81 stars, 202 notes)
Download: Yukana - Reincarnation
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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O-O I'm back, and remapped thoroughly. So the stars before date Mar 1st, 2012 were NOT eloquent.

And this is a new map with ONLY two difficulties now.

Normal - uploaded,
Hard - uploaded.


welcome modifying O-O

==================================================
This is my first beatmap~~XD . And wanna learn more mapping skills O.O
Zero&CC - NOT uploaded.------ GD by Hellzero.seems he is AFKing, hence for the moment..
Try my best~~ fightoo~~~~
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And thx a lot for modding by:
CCHV-16,Hellzero,AngelHoney,xinhe,kurohacker,Vass_Bass
Last edited by Lambda Delta , edited 87 times in total.
MisakaMikoto
383 posts
Joined July 2010
MisakaMikoto
star ~~
safawu
61 posts
Joined September 2009
safawu
帮同学star :)
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
C.C. <3 I love her
Offset: 9 653 better for me ^^
can I make diff?
Lambda Delta
29 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Lambda Delta

Hellzero wrote:

C.C. <3 I love her
Offset: 9 653 better for me ^^
can I make diff?
thx for your advice on Offset, and sure you can make a diff. :)
Ark205
6 posts
Joined December 2010
Ark205
star~
and if possible can I help to make the skin for u? :3
Lambda Delta
29 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Lambda Delta

Ark205 wrote:

star~
and if possible can I help to make the skin for u? :3
Ar-chan~~ :)

and expect for your beautiful skin~~!
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
My diff and BG :3
About BPM i think it's wrong. My opinion is 212,04 and offset 9 653. Any way you need timing help.
And don't forget add me in tags.



Download: Yukana - Reincarnation (Lambda Delta) [Zero&CC].osu
jameskong1
403 posts
Joined December 2008
jameskong1
good song ~ mod if you want~ :)
Lambda Delta
29 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Lambda Delta

jameskong1 wrote:

good song ~ mod if you want~ :)
Thx for the star~ And you're very welcome to mod it. (but whether I'll take the advice...Umm, it all depends. XD)
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
mp3 is broken
try this one

BPM:212.000000000000
offset:9674

Download: reincarnation.rar
Lambda Delta
29 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Lambda Delta
thank you veeeery much ~~ :) I was really confused about that mp3, cuz it isn't broken when playing by WMP.
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
fighto~ :)
Megaparadox
98 posts
Joined December 2010
Megaparadox
star ;)
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
路过STAR~同新人MAPPER求共勉
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
Overall
My advice - use small grid size. So will be fewer mistakes especially if you're a beginner.
00:50:428 - 01:08:541 to add kiai
01:41:938 - 02:00:617 to add kiai
02:23:258 - 02:32:315 to add kiai
02:36:277 - 02:54:957 to add kiai

C's world
I think it's Insane?
00:20:357 (6) - remove
00:20:428 - add note
00:27:504 (1) - ctrl+H like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64528
00:29:343 (5) - remove
00:35:711 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - hard to read. I suggest this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64531
00:59:626 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
02:22:126 (1,2,1,2) - replace the notes
02:23:258 (1) - just suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64533
02:45:900 (1,1,1,1) - Difficulty jumps
02:46:041 (1,1,1,1) - remove new combo
02:46:749 (2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read. not stack them
02:48:589 (4,5,6) - ^

Geass
Hard?
00:50:428 (5,6,7) - Try not stack notes like this. it's hard to read
01:10:805 (4) - make symmetrical
02:34:438 (6) - ^
01:38:258 (1,1,1,1) - remove new combo

Download: Yukana - Reincarnation (Lambda Delta) [Zero&CC].osu
I Love One Piece
19 posts
Joined September 2010
I Love One Piece
....对我来说真是好快好有挑战性的map啊 哈哈 nice song & nice amine 魔女加油啊！ star！
Lambda Delta
29 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Lambda Delta

Hellzero wrote:

Overall
My advice - use small grid size. So will be fewer mistakes especially if you're a beginner.
00:50:428 - 01:08:541 to add kiai
01:41:938 - 02:00:617 to add kiai
02:23:258 - 02:32:315 to add kiai
02:36:277 - 02:54:957 to add kiai

C's world
I think it's Insane?
00:20:357 (6) - remove
00:20:428 - add note
00:27:504 (1) - ctrl+H like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64528
00:29:343 (5) - remove
00:35:711 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - hard to read. I suggest this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64531
00:59:626 (1,1,1) - remove new combo
02:22:126 (1,2,1,2) - replace the notes
02:23:258 (1) - just suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64533
02:45:900 (1,1,1,1) - Difficulty jumps
02:46:041 (1,1,1,1) - remove new combo
02:46:749 (2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read. not stack them
02:48:589 (4,5,6) - ^

Geass
Hard?
00:50:428 (5,6,7) - Try not stack notes like this. it's hard to read
01:10:805 (4) - make symmetrical
02:34:438 (6) - ^
01:38:258 (1,1,1,1) - remove new combo
thx a lot~~ most of them fixed. I don't make those two symmetrical cuz I wanna write a 'C' by that? Is it okay? XD
LuPiiTa
371 posts
Joined June 2010
LuPiiTa
star~
xinhe
116 posts
Joined February 2010
xinhe
来MOD了～～加油哦～团子～～
建议参考一下就好～～

[Code]
01:31:748 (2,3) - SPACING
01:38:540 (2,3) - ^


[Geass]
这个是HARD吧
整体感觉排版太密太挤了,DS可以改到1.1或者1.2
00:49:013 (3,4,5) - 不要放在Slider的下面
00:58:919 (3,4) - 这个不是很舒服
02:45:900 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不是很好读图

恩～主要就是太密太挤了～～感觉NOTE全都缩在一起～～～不论看还是打都不是很舒服～～建议大修改～～～DS可以改的高一点的～～～

[C's world]
AR-1
01:29:202 (1,2) - 距离拉开一点
01:50:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉不是很舒服～把三角形的底边向外会不会好点～
02:50:428 (1,2,3) - 挤了～

以下引用NR的建议：
很多地方的不用把节奏放的那么密～尤其是一些1/4放满的地方，可以变成o ooo o o,还有比如ooo可以换成SL折返，这样听起来比较舒服～～如果放满就感觉有些违和了。
Lambda Delta
29 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Lambda Delta

xinhe wrote:

来MOD了～～加油哦～团子～～
建议参考一下就好～～

[Code]
01:31:748 (2,3) - SPACING
01:38:540 (2,3) - ^


[Geass]
这个是HARD吧
整体感觉排版太密太挤了,DS可以改到1.1或者1.2
00:49:013 (3,4,5) - 不要放在Slider的下面
00:58:919 (3,4) - 这个不是很舒服
02:45:900 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不是很好读图

恩～主要就是太密太挤了～～感觉NOTE全都缩在一起～～～不论看还是打都不是很舒服～～建议大修改～～～DS可以改的高一点的～～～

[C's world]
AR-1
01:29:202 (1,2) - 距离拉开一点
01:50:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉不是很舒服～把三角形的底边向外会不会好点～
02:50:428 (1,2,3) - 挤了～

以下引用NR的建议：
很多地方的不用把节奏放的那么密～尤其是一些1/4放满的地方，可以变成o ooo o o,还有比如ooo可以换成SL折返，这样听起来比较舒服～～如果放满就感觉有些违和了。
thx~~ haaa~~=o= stay up too late for fixing..
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
路过star，口味略重了一点，不过结构已经不错了
Cattigrew
1 post
Joined September 2010
Cattigrew
路过star...好触的图...
GinzZ_old
GinzZ_old
:)
Kurowolfe
459 posts
Joined June 2010
Kurowolfe
Hi there!
I had a go with all your maps, and here's what I think:
kurohacker's mod(^^)
[General]
The kiai time should be kept constant for all difficulties. I don't know why, but that's what recommended, apparently.
For the tags, there's a slight mistake in spelling. It's written "Amine" here. Change it to "Anime".
Also, you can increase the hitsound volume just a bit, so that you can hear them. I actually didn't notice the hitsounds until I clicked on some
of the notes in the editor.

[Code]

0:27:221 [3] - Move one grid up (Grid level 4).
0:34:579 [4] - New combo here.
0:36:843 [7] - Same here.
2:30:617 - Maybe add a circle here?
2:38:541 [4] - Align this with [3].
2:52:692 [3] - Flip this horizontally.

[Geass]

0:11:938 [5] - New combo here.
0:25:523 - Add a new combo circle here.
2:23:258 [5] - New combo here.
2:36:843 [5] - Same here.
2:43:636 [9] - Same here.

[C's world]

1:26:655 [9] - New combo here, to follow the style used earlier in the song.
1:26:938 [1] - Delete new combo here.
2:46:466 [1] - Same here.

I really like the song, so I'll give you a star~
All the best with your maps! :)
Lambda Delta
29 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Lambda Delta
fixed ~~ XD :)
Furukawa Nagisa_old
12 posts
Joined October 2010
Furukawa Nagisa_old
star~
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi

General
Remove tags and remove letterbox
In all diffs different colors, ir's not good, fix it

Code
Where are hitsounds? -_- Use more claps
01:31:183 - 01:32:740 - soft sounds there
01:36:843 (6) - don't stuck it
01:56:089 (5) - new combo
02:27:787 (1,2,3) - hard to read, don't stuck it
02:32:598 - i think it will be better if you will "map" this part, confusing break
02:44:768 (1) - remove new combo

Geass
00:23:258 (1) - remove this combo
02:45:900 (3) - new combo

C's world (is it guest diff or specific mame? if it's guest diff name of creator must be in tags)
Don't use white combo color
00:13:636 (1) - remove new combo
00:09:957 (2) - ugly sliders like this... ><
00:18:164 (1) - in future don't use combos like this

Star
DMCxzr
10 posts
Joined March 2010
DMCxzr
@@
Lambda Delta
29 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Lambda Delta
fixed~

that's not a guset diff and.... okay I have changed that diff's name :)
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
-Try to name the difficulties so they actually show the difficulty of the map, they aren't too creative at the moment
-Starting the second kiai time at 01:42:504 seems to fit more. I would also start the last kiai time at 02:36:843
-Make sure all timing sections (especially kiai) are snapped

Code:
00:45:899 (1) - some sliders could look better having smoother curves
00:50:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - some stuff like this is getting kind of hard for the easiest difficulty - same for all streams like this
01:51:559 (2,5) - nazi: you could go through and stack minor stuff like this
01:57:221 (2,3) - stack these

Geass:
00:36:843 (1,2,3,4) - snap the end of these to the red ticks
01:27:221 (2) - extend to red tick?
02:00:051 (3) - 2x doesn't really fit (also don't have the repeat hidden by previous notes)
02:17:881 (5,1) - space out more
02:47:315 (8,1) - ^
02:49:720 (7,1) - ^

C-world:
00:20:357 (6) - should be a on a white tick (I would just use a note not a slider)
00:38:541 (1) - add a note here?
00:41:655 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - continue clap pattern from before
00:48:730 (2,3,4,5,6) - kind of unexpected and doesn't follow the flow the map
01:07:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ (same for the rest)
01:10:806 (4) - might want to extend to 01:12:504
01:25:947 (7) - add a note here
02:13:919 (3,1) - kind of random jump
02:40:523 (4,1) - space out more
02:45:900 (1,2,3,4,5) - really hard to follow spacing changes like this especially as most of them aren't like this

In general go through and make sure all of your spacing makes sense and matches up, not too bad but a first map but needs some more work before I can give this a star
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