Heya dude, modding time, sorry for being a bit late, plz don't hate me >//<
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I feel that there is a more blue-ish tone to the background, so you could consider changing that up a bit instead of the yellow color, but that's up to you
No storyboard = feel free to remove widescreen support (People from modhelp said it doesn't apply to BG's :p)
Apart from that, it seems fine, I donno if you got a check on <5ms hitsound stuff, but consider that if you havn't, 'cause there are a lot of them lol.
There are a few "nazi" blankets in the beginning that you should find and change (like 00:10:500 (1,2) - , slider is curved a bit too much etc etc, but I won't mention more blankets unless it's "add a new blanket here" x)
00:10:260 (3,1) - I feel that the flow is a little odd here because of the sudden turn. You could do something like this if you want: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5676617 (With fixed nazi blanket lel)
00:16:860 (4) - Wrong emphasis, slider should start on 00:16:740 (3) - or 00:16:980 - (There's a stronger sound on 00:17:220 (6) - , making the 16:980 slider a nice choise.)
00:24:180 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing seems a little cramped here, maybe because of the last three kicksliders, also, consider a ctrl+G on 9.
00:49:700 (1,2) - Doesn't feel too easy to spot the 1/6 for two reasons: 1: it doesn't start on the red tick (which makes sense), and two, the spacing is is only lowered a bit, due to it being an insane. You could do a 1/6 slider that goes the opposite direction of the long slider if you want (Idea: osu.ppy.sh/ss/5676651 (Feel free to polish the 1/6 slider, didn't really do much aesthetically with it)
01:20:820 (2) - I feel that this is the strongest part of this stream, thus it should contain a sharper turn or contain a kickslider. (Or make the turn on 01:21:060 (4) - like when you did the kickslider on 02:18:660 (1) - ?
02:02:340 (3,1) - Here it's more obvious because of the non-existent break, but even then the slider is too far away from the 1/6 triple (1/6 distance >.<), consider placing it closer.
03:42:660 (4,5,6) - Not really a fan of how this looks aesthetically, I feel something's missing, I don't really know what tho, just seems very different from the other streams you've done >.<
04:01:740 (1,2,1) - Spacing is odd compared to timing, I feel like rearranging the rhythm so the "awkward" timing parts are on a slider instead to prevent 100's is a better idea? ;o (Maybe extended to kickslider on 1,2)
04:29:220 (1,2) - Spacing is too big here compared to 04:29:460 (2,3), as well as the turn being a little odd. I get your aesthetics, but it looks better than it plays imo.
04:40:740 (5) - To make this emphasis spot even stronger, you could ctrl+g this slider.
04:44:100 (4) - I don't think you've used a single 4-point reverse in this entire map ;o Why now? it's pretty late into the song, so if anything, it should be stronger with a stream or summin :3
05:01:380 (5,6) - There's a nice break between those, so I'd either stack 5,6, or make the spacing a bit larger (Maybe same spot as 4) (Change the next notes accordingly)
Sick map, I liked it, looking forward to see this ranked! Here, have a star 'cause I felt like I was late D:
Good luck <3
MADOKA BEST ANIMUUUU <3 <3 <3
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I feel that there is a more blue-ish tone to the background, so you could consider changing that up a bit instead of the yellow color, but that's up to you
No storyboard = feel free to remove widescreen support (People from modhelp said it doesn't apply to BG's :p)
Apart from that, it seems fine, I donno if you got a check on <5ms hitsound stuff, but consider that if you havn't, 'cause there are a lot of them lol.
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Very fitting diff name for the song, I like ^^There are a few "nazi" blankets in the beginning that you should find and change (like 00:10:500 (1,2) - , slider is curved a bit too much etc etc, but I won't mention more blankets unless it's "add a new blanket here" x)
00:10:260 (3,1) - I feel that the flow is a little odd here because of the sudden turn. You could do something like this if you want: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5676617 (With fixed nazi blanket lel)
00:16:860 (4) - Wrong emphasis, slider should start on 00:16:740 (3) - or 00:16:980 - (There's a stronger sound on 00:17:220 (6) - , making the 16:980 slider a nice choise.)
00:24:180 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing seems a little cramped here, maybe because of the last three kicksliders, also, consider a ctrl+G on 9.
00:49:700 (1,2) - Doesn't feel too easy to spot the 1/6 for two reasons: 1: it doesn't start on the red tick (which makes sense), and two, the spacing is is only lowered a bit, due to it being an insane. You could do a 1/6 slider that goes the opposite direction of the long slider if you want (Idea: osu.ppy.sh/ss/5676651 (Feel free to polish the 1/6 slider, didn't really do much aesthetically with it)
01:20:820 (2) - I feel that this is the strongest part of this stream, thus it should contain a sharper turn or contain a kickslider. (Or make the turn on 01:21:060 (4) - like when you did the kickslider on 02:18:660 (1) - ?
02:02:340 (3,1) - Here it's more obvious because of the non-existent break, but even then the slider is too far away from the 1/6 triple (1/6 distance >.<), consider placing it closer.
03:42:660 (4,5,6) - Not really a fan of how this looks aesthetically, I feel something's missing, I don't really know what tho, just seems very different from the other streams you've done >.<
04:01:740 (1,2,1) - Spacing is odd compared to timing, I feel like rearranging the rhythm so the "awkward" timing parts are on a slider instead to prevent 100's is a better idea? ;o (Maybe extended to kickslider on 1,2)
04:29:220 (1,2) - Spacing is too big here compared to 04:29:460 (2,3), as well as the turn being a little odd. I get your aesthetics, but it looks better than it plays imo.
04:40:740 (5) - To make this emphasis spot even stronger, you could ctrl+g this slider.
04:44:100 (4) - I don't think you've used a single 4-point reverse in this entire map ;o Why now? it's pretty late into the song, so if anything, it should be stronger with a stream or summin :3
05:01:380 (5,6) - There's a nice break between those, so I'd either stack 5,6, or make the spacing a bit larger (Maybe same spot as 4) (Change the next notes accordingly)
Sick map, I liked it, looking forward to see this ranked! Here, have a star 'cause I felt like I was late D:
Good luck <3