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Sound Horizon - Ao to Shiro no Kyoukaisen

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Selee
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Selee
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月4日 at 4:06:32

Artist: Sound Horizon
Title: Ao to Shiro no Kyoukaisen
Source: Chonicle 2nd
Tags: 1st story cd Sandpig Garven
BPM: 100
Filesize: 4773kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Garven's Easy (1.76 stars, 106 notes)
  2. Garven's Taiko Oni (4.97 stars, 421 notes)
  3. Hard (4.61 stars, 305 notes)
  4. Normal (4.05 stars, 208 notes)
Download: Sound Horizon - Ao to Shiro no Kyoukaisen
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My Variation of Sea

Blue Style Chonicle

Sandpig's Red Style

thx for Sandpig's help with hitsounds
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Sandpig
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Sandpig
KDS不多了;_;
Daiguren
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Daiguren
围观两人基情 :3
gdeath
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gdeath

Daigurenhyourinmaru wrote:

围观两人基情 :3
^
(kds用完没得射了x.x)
Suzully
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Suzully
Sound Horizon :oops:
Bessy
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Bessy
0.0
Sandpig
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Sandpig
补足10个 :3
Ever 14
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Ever 14
尼玛
我说我kd不多了你敢给么
_Kiva
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_Kiva
STRESS.
sound horizon!
MisakaMikoto
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MisakaMikoto
stress
SamiPale
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SamiPale
star~
HellDawn
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HellDawn
:D
Card N'FoRcE
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Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
Ohai.

- Normal:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    00:59:968 (2,3) - a bit ugly imho.
  2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:53:668 (3,4) - please just move them a bit more farther
  3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    01:06:568 (1) - the end of this slider is wrongly snapped.
    01:08:968 (1,2) - omg what, overlapping xD
    So yeah, the slider speed fucked up all the sliders after this point D: Oh the map is still WIP now i get it
    This is not a Normal, it's a Hard.
    A lot of things are really nice but fit a moderate hard difficulty: they're too much for a normal. Since this is still a WIP, i hope you'll be able to balance this better :>
I should check the forum more carefully lol.

- Hard:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Circle Size Normal? ;_;[/color]
Feel free to ask me for a new mod after it's completed :>
Selee
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Selee

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Ohai.

- Normal: WIP :P

- Hard:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Circle Size Normal? ;_;[/color]
err...my notes aren't dense enough for Normal size..also I want to make this diff as relaxing/easy as possible...

Feel free to ask me for a new mod after it's completed :>
Thank you for checking =w=...waiting for Garven's easy+taiko also my WIP normal~

Edit: Normal 100% ^^
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vivicat
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vivicat
"围观两人基情"
Garven
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Garven
And here's the Easy/Taiko. Sorry I'm so slow. ;_;

Taiko is iffy because of some Finish usage, but I figured since the BPM was so low it'd be okay. We'll see after some modding.

Okay, no more of those finishes. XD

Download: Sound Horizon - Ao to Shiro no Kyoukaisen (Selee) [Garven's Easy].osu

Download: Sound Horizon - Ao to Shiro no Kyoukaisen (Selee) [Taiko Oni].osu
JoJo
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JoJo
8-)
_Kiva
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_Kiva

vivicat wrote:

"围观两人基情"
同围观
loveFantasy
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loveFantasy
hey.

no major problem found so have a star

[General]
- missing source in [Garven's Taiko Oni] and [Garven's Easy]
- letterbox isn't disable in [Garven's Easy] as other diff does
- combo color 3 and 4 are really alike, consider changing one of them?

[Garven's Easy]
- delete the following timing sections:
SPOILER
  1. 6,568
  2. 21,118
  3. 21,718
  4. 22,768
  5. 22,918
  6. 32,518
  7. 34,918
<00:21:868> (2,3,1) spacing a bit confusing
<00:53:068> (1) remove new combo?

[Normal]
- delete the following timing sections:
SPOILER
  1. 27,718
  2. 28,168
  3. 34,918
  4. 35,368
  5. 79,618
  6. 80,068
  7. 82,018
  8. 82,468
  9. 84,418
  10. 84,868
<00:57:868> (2) whistle the startpoint?
<01:26:368> (7) new combo?

[Hard]
<00:53:968> (4) slightly inconsistent spacing
<01:47:368> (1) increase spacing

[Garven's Taiko Oni]
<00:49:768> (3) whistle+finish?
<01:18:568..> (1..) this kind of make me "...", but since it fit the music...k
adding some big K/D could make it more fun imho
Numbers 596108
Former osu!taiko Champion: #1
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Numbers 596108
Mod Request from Selee

Before mod please read the meaning represented by the color

Color Help

Red -> Recommended
Orange -> Must to Fixed
Green -> Currect
Blue -> Don't fixed it...
Purple -> If you fixed the one,please fixed the pattern

Taiko

Timing :

All Timing... 70% ~ 100% Volume?
All Timing... expect BPM Timing Line...add a 1.5x?

00:06:568 100.00 BPM - N - -> Ok
00:49:768 1.0x - K - -> 1.5x
01:08:968 1.0x - N - -> 1.5x
01:37:758 1.0x - K - -> 1.5x
02:01:758 1.0x - N - -> 1.5x

Notes :

00:17:068 (4) -
00:38:668 (1) -
00:56:218 (X) - Add a
01:18:868 (3,4,5,6,7,8....48) - it is too monotonous?

Others :

Song Difficulty -
HP Drain Rate - 5 -> 6~8
Circle Size - Max -> OK
Approach Rate - Mix -> Max
Overall Difficulty - 5 -> 3~4

I vote...85 / 100
winber1
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winber1
Hard

01:25:468(5) - i would rather just turn this into two notes. idk why, i just want to. (and you can add a new combo on the new combo six if you decide to change this)
01:34:318(9) - feels better if this note did not repeat and ended here imo. Then add a note at 01:34:618 (and fix hitsounds)
02:00:268(4) - *nazi* D: 1 grid left

Normal

00:19:168(3,4) - switch notes around (so combo 3 is at 00:19:768 and combo 4 starts at 00:19:168)
[Then replace the two finishes on the slider with whistles and replace the whistle on combo 3 with a finsih]

Garven's Easy

--Add "Chonicle 2nd" to the source.
--Disable "Letterbox during break" or check the box for all of them

00:12:868(x) - add note? (with finish)
00:15:568(2) - move note 1/2 tick back?
00:53:068(1) - remove new combo?
01:27:568(1) - makes more sense to me if you delete this note
01:32:068(x) - add note with finish and clap?

Nice map! :3
Star~~
Garven
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Garven

loveFantasy wrote:

[General]
- missing source in [Garven's Taiko Oni] and [Garven's Easy] I'll add them, though I still think they should be in tags rather than the source.
- letterbox isn't disable in [Garven's Easy] as other diff does Woot, go go long production time. :P

[Garven's Easy]
- delete the following timing sections:
SPOILER
  1. 6,568
  2. 21,118
  3. 21,718
  4. 22,768
  5. 22,918
  6. 32,518
  7. 34,918
Taken care of
<00:21:868> (2,3,1) spacing a bit confusing Oops
<00:53:068> (1) remove new combo? Gah, I should QC my stuff more. Thanks.

[Garven's Taiko Oni]
<00:49:768> (3) whistle+finish? Sure
<01:18:568..> (1..) this kind of make me "...", but since it fit the music...k If you have a suggestion as to what I can do there that isn't stupid against the music, I'm all ears. I'm not exactly proficient with Taiko stuff, haha.
adding some big K/D could make it more fun imho
Well, added in the other two I used to have but edited out due to the 1/4 finish thing. Any examples would be appreciated.

Edit: AAAH
Two mods while I'm addressing another mod. =_=

Numbers 596108 wrote:

Taiko

Timing :

All Timing... 70% ~ 100% Volume?
All Timing... expect BPM Timing Line...add a 1.5x?

70% volume feels too loud for such a calm song. 40% seems enough to hear the notes but not have them intrude upon the song itself.

00:06:568 100.00 BPM - N - -> Ok
00:49:768 1.0x - K - -> 1.5x
01:08:968 1.0x - N - -> 1.5x
01:37:758 1.0x - K - -> 1.5x
02:01:758 1.0x - N - -> 1.5x

These really necessary? I find the speed changes refreshing for such a calm piece.

Notes :

00:17:068 (4) -
00:38:668 (1) - Nah, feels against the rhythm set up in the previous set at 00:36:868 (2,1,1,2,3,1,1) -
00:56:218 (X) - Add a I wanted to keep strict to the music for this section (only added own rhythms during final kiai) so nah
01:18:868 (3,4,5,6,7,8....48) - it is too monotonous?[/color] Probably, but I dunno what else to do without making it dub against the music. ;_; Tried varying the rhythms up a bit.

Others :

Song Difficulty -
HP Drain Rate - 5 -> 6~8 Moved to 7.
Circle Size - Max -> OK
Approach Rate - Mix -> Max
Overall Difficulty - 5 -> 3~4[/color] Mm, moved to 4 then.
Thanks!

winber1 wrote:


Garven's Easy

--Add "Chonicle 2nd" to the source.
--Disable "Letterbox during break" or check the box for all of them Done from previous mod

00:12:868(x) - add note? (with finish) Nah
00:15:568(2) - move note 1/2 tick back? That goes against the general rhythm I have set up, and it would feel like I would need to add more notes to help cover that hole, so I'd rather not.
00:53:068(1) - remove new combo? Covered from previous mod
01:27:568(1) - makes more sense to me if you delete this note It's a good pickup note to play.
01:32:068(x) - add note with finish and clap? Nah, I like that gap.
Download: Sound Horizon - Ao to Shiro no Kyoukaisen (Selee) [Garven's Easy].osu

Download: Sound Horizon - Ao to Shiro no Kyoukaisen (Selee) [Garven's Taiko Oni].osu
loveFantasy
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loveFantasy

Garven wrote:

[Garven's Taiko Oni]
<00:49:768> (3) whistle+finish? Sure
<01:18:568..> (1..) this kind of make me "...", but since it fit the music...k If you have a suggestion as to what I can do there that isn't stupid against the music, I'm all ears. I'm not exactly proficient with Taiko stuff, haha.
if you want to keep the 'k' sounds, i can only suggest you to change up the pattern, like


^ apply to (30)~(38) for consistency if you think this is a good idea

Garven wrote:

adding some big K/D could make it more fun imho Well, added in the other two I used to have but edited out due to the 1/4 finish thing. Any examples would be appreciated.
i'd like to see them every 2 high white ticks in KIAI sections, those position are all end of 1/4 streams so i think it won't bring too much difficulty issue, up to you ;)

don't kd this post
Garven
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Garven
Well, I took the spirit of your suggestions in tow and changed a few things. I felt adding all the finishes during the first kiai didn't fit, and I only found one spot that felt right during the second one, but I did add it. :3

I appreciate the followup!

Download: Sound Horizon - Ao to Shiro no Kyoukaisen (Selee) [Garven's Taiko Oni].osu
Card N'FoRcE
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Ding!

(ノ￣∇￣)ノ 彡
Bikko
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Bikko
Oops, I'm too late. sorry~
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Bikko wrote:

Oops, I'm too late. sorry~
me too lol
Garven
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Garven
There's nothing wrong for you to continue modding even after a bubble is applied, you know. :3
Selee
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Selee
Sorry dear bikko and my commander... totally my fault ;_;
Alace
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能把offset移到1768嗎?? 這樣紅綠線就不會疊一起了?

<All diffs>
01:37:758:為什麼這一條kiai要找10ms呢?

<Hard>
00:10:468 (1) - 取消new combo?
00:11:368 (4) - 加入new combo?
我不認為同一個combo這樣斷中間是好主意,既然你已經意識到那邊是個很好的斷點,那其實應該這個斷點才是新combo的起點才是?
00:15:268 (1) - 同上一區

GJ

EDIT:here we go!!
Suzully
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Congratz~!<3
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我操rank了 :)
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