Weezy wrote:

Oh look a K-ON map by someone who never watched the series!!! (I still like the song >.<)

General
- 320kbps for the mp3...You know the rules! (Will do later.)
- 2 .osb files here :U (Opps, forgot to delete this after adding the SB)

Kiddo's Hard
- Do you really need to put your name in the diff >_> (I don't see a problem with that >.>)
00:10:862 (1) Make this slider even (Done~)
00:24:905 (5) same^ (^)
02:54:011 (5) Same^ (^)

Here!

Mok wrote:

[General]
Maybe you do not care about, but in storyboard appears "K-on!", it should be "K-ON!!", since is a single from the second season soundtracks.

Download: HTT - Girls in Wonderland (Kiddo-Kun) [Ozzy's TaiK-On!! +].osu

//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\OzzyOzrock.png",320,240
 M,1,394,649,818,84,456,84
 F,0,133160,133671,1,0
 F,0,137245,137500,0,1
 M,1,196479,196734,456,84,818,84
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\K-on!.png",320,240
 M,1,394,649,273,-29,273,65
 F,0,133160,133671,1,0
 F,0,137245,137500,0,1
 M,1,196479,196734,273,65,273,-29

ouranhshc wrote:

Easy
00:16:990 (4) - place hitclap on the beginning of the slider instead of the end?
Okk~ Could you do this Kiddo ? :3

Lizzehb wrote:

[lovin's Easy]
00:29:756 (4) - Slider sounds stranger here when it ends I would extend it one more tick but then where to put the (1) after that I don't know. I think it sounds good, so no change
01:35:628 (6) - This sounds really nice if you add a repeat. Done ~
02:07:032 (3) - Make this slider straight to mach the others. Good point, changed

Lizzehb wrote:

Saw this in #modreq

Here ya go:

[General]
-Best SB I've seen in a long time. Thanks to Beuchi~
-Oh shiii- 4 guest difficulties I think that breaks some guideline so people will rate your map low just because of that fact. (Look at Be My Animal by Larto) I've done this before, but with 3 guest diffs and only one being mine.

[Hard]
00:51:713 (2) - Overlaps the slider but you can keep it if you want. I did that intentionally

Lizzehb wrote:

Saw this in #modreq

Here ya go:

[General]
-Best SB I've seen in a long time.
-Oh shiii- 4 guest difficulties I think that breaks some guideline so people will rate your map low just because of that fact. (Look at Be My Animal by Larto)

[lovin's Easy]
00:29:756 (4) - Slider sounds stranger here when it ends I would extend it one more tick but then where to put the (1) after that I don't know.
01:35:628 (6) - This sounds really nice if you add a repeat.
02:07:032 (3) - Make this slider straight to mach the others.

[Sallad's Normal]
01:19:288 (2,3,4) - Move these down so they don't overlap the slider.
01:43:415 (2) - This slider needs some shaping work. (Use less anchors)
02:19:288 (2) - OMG THESE SLIDERS I LOVE THEM NEVER EVER CHANGE THEM.

-Also I love how you sliders/notes fit into eachother so sexyyy.

[Hard]
00:51:713 (2) - Overlaps the slider but you can keep it if you want.

[Astom's Insane]
00:13:671 (1,2,3,4,5) - Strange jumps for not being durring the kiai time and the music/vocals don't change. I don't see any problem with it
00:49:160 (2) - Overlapping the slider. (Just move one grib down.) I don't think this was intentional. that circle is aligned with 00:48:905 (1) , and I don't see any problem with that overlap
01:18:777 (4) - Failed here while play testing T_T. xD
01:28:862 (2) - Overlapping the slider. all overlaps are intentional, you can see 01:28:862 (2,3) overlaping a little
01:29:628 (2) - Was this overlap intentional? I can't tell.
02:01:543 (3) - ^^^
02:03:330 (2) - ^^^
02:19:926 (3) - ^^^
02:36:011 (2) - ^^^
02:53:628 (2) - ^^^
02:56:564 (3,1) - ^^^
03:01:798 (2) - ^^^
03:08:181 (3,1) - ^^^

S o r d a wrote:

01:19:798 (4) - add finish added in 01:19:032 (1) and 01:20:054 (1)
01:46:862 (1) - spin end Silent? no
02:39:841 - add note? no
03:16:415 - unused timing section? no
03:16:479 - ^ no

Weezy wrote:

03:04:862 (4) Repeat arrows are hidden! D: with circle or not you can't see it lol, anyway fixed

abalee wrote:

Hard:
unsnapped note too. Oh God, sorry I fixed that
General: have you try to set slider tick rate to 1 and replace the slider tick as clap? that will make that clap hitsound more flow. and If you do so, recheck the map so that there's not additional claps(that is added by the slider tick) being added. I think it's fine the way it is
00:21:841 (5) - remove clap? Okay

scalone wrote:

Easy:
00:17:245 Add Clap

scalone wrote:

Star, Great map!
Hard:
00:10:862:Add Finish Hitsound Sure
00:12:649:Add Whistle Sure
00:15:202:Oh... Spacing error! Why don't u map a thing like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/104776 Sure
00:17:245:Add WhistleSure
00:18:266:Add Whistle Sure
00:23:373:Remove Whistle Sure
00:23:628:Add Whistle Nope
00:25:926:Add Whistle Sure
00:26:436:Add Finish Sure
00:27:841:Well... It's not so nice. Why don't u map a thing like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/104781 Nope
00:29:500:Add Whistle Sure
00:30:266:^ Sure
00:31:926:That's a bit like 00:27:841. Try to do like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/104783 Nope
00:37:671:Add Whistle Nope
00:38:436:^ Sure
00:40:734:^ Nope
00:42:011:^ Sure
00:42:266:Add Finish Sure
00:42:777:^ Sure
02:12:139:I think that the slider is better if is done like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/104786 Nope
02:29:756:Do Slider like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/104788 Sounds better
02:33:458:Add HitCircle Nope

Snepif wrote:

[Easy]
-1 AR.
00:29:500 (3,4) - Maybe this is a bit difficult to hit if you are a beginner.
02:12:139 - You can add a slider here that ends at 2:12:522 (and delete 2:12:394 of course)

Snepif wrote:

Helloooo~

[Hard]
Overall, I see many places where there should be a note. Maybe the notes follow another rhythm, idk. For example at 00:14:436 and 00:19:032, I think a note would fit perfectly there. But it's just my opinion, maybe you want it like that. I took the second suggestion.
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Anyway, sorry for my poor mod, I tried my best xD.
Deserves lots of stars: STAR SUMMONED~

You did better than I did~ Good job, and thanks~

Download: HTT - Girls in Wonderland (Kiddo-Kun) [Ozzy's TaiK-On!! +].osu