Thank you very much for your mod! It was very helpful to get a third party's perspective on some weak points with this one.
Haganenno wrote:[Spicy's Marshal]
00:40:678 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - some variety would be nice. For example, ctrl+g 00:41:195 (2,2) - these two I feel like this would create an unnecessarily high spaced jump between 00:41:368 (1,2) - those two, which would not coincide with the lowering pitch at all. Leaving it for now, as I feel the pattern is playable and compliments the instrumentals in this section sufficiently.
01:05:333 (3) - ctrl+g This would cause more confusion than improvement, as the current pattern is somewhat flowy (down-up arc). The change you proposed would suggest a much more rash and maybe technical playstyle in terms of aiming, which I purposefully avoid in order to maintain a distinctive style.
01:05:505 (1) - ctrl+g (more variety as I said) Same as above
01:13:954 (5) - I'd make this slider 1-tick and place a hitcircle there 01:14:126 (6) - making 01:14:126 (6,7,8) - this a triple Applied, thanks!
01:42:747 (2) - overmapping
01:48:092 (2) - seems overmapping which you're trying to cover with a beat from 01:47:919 -
01:53:781 (2) - sameGonna leave the slower part as it is for now, as I would have wanted it to be a part where the player can prove himself rhytmically by adding some very significant beats to the background. Obviously this is going to be an issue further along so I'll keep it in mind anyway and if more people point it out being a problem I'll tone the slow section down to a bare minimum. This is just my own interpretation of the background beat and in no means should it be an issue to the rankability or playability of the map!
02:16:195 (3,1) - jump is too big I feel like the background beat supports this bigger-than-usual "jump" enough to leave it there for the time being.
02:33:436 (1,2,1,2) - if you make hanzer streams on fast bpm maps, you have to make them go with the flow. Ctrl+H would be something more flow-ey (with 02:33:436 (1,2) - this ctrl+g'd as well) Applied, thanks!
02:44:040 - overmapped I tried doing this because of the introduction to the faster part again. Should be doable with some reading skill and introduced the vocals well enough. I'll reconsider if more people point this out as an issue.
02:55:505 (1,2,1,2) - flow hanzer streams! Yep!
03:00:678 (2) - beat ending on the strong beat doesn't really feel right in places like thisVery true, tried to fix it as efficiently as I could