examination wrote:

SB
05:05:373 - 05:23:069 sb load over 5.0x becuz of 4 sb layers, you may find a way to delete 1 layer(mix 2 layers as 1), or scale some layers smaller.

koliron wrote:

General

1. enable countdown(? - OH SHIT REMOVED

Endless Hatred

1. 03:36:202 (4) - same as before about the 1/4 movements, this slider would plays much better being a little more vertical - Made it more diagonal, to still have the pattern, but making the catch smoother.

Lanturn wrote:

goreshit - I don't even know what I'm doing.

00:02:331 - is actually where you should start (or add) an uninherited point at. The rest is just lead-in. Optional, but if anyone does play this on Nightcore, the finish sounds will be off. - Timing taken from ranked mapset. So will keep this.

[The diff where I probably won't be any help]

1. 00:14:912 (3,4,5) - Shouldn't the emphasis be on the (4,5) instead of the (3,4) to follow the strong drum sounds. - I think this is ok, as i like the patterning.
2. 00:19:336 (3) - Just a circle? The tail end doesn't really hit anything, and it goes with 00:18:921 (1,2) - - There be faint sounds.
3. 00:22:101 (7,8,9) - pretty sure this is just 1/4, I don't really hear anything to support 1/8. - If you hear the snare sound here, it has a quick shaking motion in it, thats why i use 1/8 to empathize it.
4. 00:28:599 (7,8) - Maybe move the (8) out a bit further to match 00:28:184 (4,5) -
5. 00:31:778 (6) - to match 00:31:364 (3) - wouldn't a circle be more appropriate? nothing big plays on the tail end much anyways. It sounds mostly just like 00:31:433 - - I like to map every sound in breakcore, sorry >.<
6. 00:37:723 (12) - NC? So it'll be a red fruit when the red shows up in your SB mostly. - New combo colour added D:
7. 03:43:737 (2,3) - ^ - THis is ok.
8. 04:06:617 (8) - There's a stronger sound at 04:07:585 - so maybe end this slider here and if you want, add a note at 04:07:723 - or just leave blank. - WIll keep this as the motion here is best like this.
9. 04:14:497 (4) - I'm assuming this is ok? You hit the wall here and it lands in the center of the plate. - THis is ok yes.
10. 04:30:189 (2,2) - same thing with the whole dominant note thing. - But there is no jump so whats the problem?

This.. probably is pretty pointless stuff I'm mentioning. rip me trying to mod ctb XD

be gentle ;_;

koliron wrote:

i like how the map is now, but i cant play propely now so i will wait the first bub from a pro player who could, like mb or afb >.<



btw, can you add the link of the previous thread? so everyone will understand that this is not a speedrank lol

koliron wrote:

Ascendance wrote:

im a pro player.

Razor Sharp wrote:

Someone else than CLSW is trying to rank a hard as f map \:D/

JBHyperion wrote:

Razor Sharp wrote:

Someone else than CLSW is trying to rank a hard as f map \:D/

hi there

JBHyperion wrote:

Razor Sharp wrote:

Someone else than CLSW is trying to rank a hard as f map \:D/

hi there

koliron wrote:

welp

looks like there are no active bns in ctb who can bubble this map cuz is too hard :^) (?
ok gimme this weekend i will return playing just for u
then i could bub

koliron wrote:

🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎

aaaaa im finally here, after play again this weekend i got a decent score :^) but not enough to fc ;__;

how did you fc!? razor pro

i know that i modded 3 times already, but i will give some suggestions anyways :^)

Endless Hatred

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  🍎 02:35:511 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - humm i think you could improve a little the aesthetic here, 8 specially imo, you could move it a little closer and maybe make 7,8 vertical could help too - Created it like this to empathize the drum sound on (7,8). So going to keep this.
  
  🍎 05:56:387 (2,3) - what about make 2 more horizontal? players will be too exhausted at this point, miss with a movement like this would be so annoying and unnecessary, if you want to keep a pattern like this is better to add them in the beginning of the map - Wont change this. Making it more horizontal will make it harder. And having it completely vertical wont be fun. so going to keep it, as this is a pretty easy spot.
  🍎 06:04:129 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i'd say the same about aesthetic, but this one looks intentional, is it? if is not i think you could try with a different pattern, for example curves like in here 05:51:548 - - Intended.

i t ' s -

Fantasy wrote:

I'll throw another mod here if you want.

koliron wrote:

Let's break our hands

[Dashyy] wrote:

no lowercase diff name to match with the title ;-;

lulu lemon wrote:

masterpiece, even though im too noob to play it. great job!

Razor Sharp wrote:

lulu lemon wrote:

masterpiece, even though im too noob to play it. great job!

thankyou!
now it will stay bubbled forever cause all bns left.

lulu lemon wrote:

Razor Sharp wrote:

thankyou!
now it will stay bubbled forever cause all bns left.

can't koliron bubble and qualify the same map? i feel like ive seen other BNs do it before

1. Tags: Add "Razor Sharp" to them, since it's recommendable to have the old username for search purposes. Taking a look at the Ranking Criteria there's no information about adding storyboarders to the tags (it's always been a grey zone anyway), so "ComfyWolf" can be removed from there. "rsi" is also not justified to be included in tags either and shall go out (don't worry, people won't get any muscular disease for playing your beatmaps).
2. Combo colours: The current ones are rather dark and blend at some parts with the storyboard, which makes them sometimes hard to read. Please try to make them lighter, and also try to get rid of that pure red to make default hyper glows better differenciate.

1. There's confirmation from the Storyboarder to use their code as of p/5328295 . It's more or less the same as the one used in grumd's ranked version https://osu.ppy.sh/s/359890 but well... There's nothing to say about using a similar SB as other beatmap as long as there's consent in it.
2. The only thing that disturbs a bit is the base scaling you used for the sharper picture, which is bigger than the default you used in your background picture. It's more noticeable when you go to 00:37:723 - where your 1st break starts and move the timeline with your mousewheel back and forth. In order to have the same scaling (and probably the easy solution would be changing the scaling of the default pictures) you'll have to find the following piece of code:
   
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"Burn this moment.jpg",320,240
    F,0,-985,0,1
    M,0,0,,320,240
    S,0,0,,0.6944516

   ... and substitute the 3rd line for:
   
   

    S,0,37654,55350,0.7274838

3. The second piece of code you'd have to change is in the sharper picture:
   
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"Sharpenthismoment.jpg",320,240
    M,0,196986,,320,240
    S,0,196986,,0.6944516

   ... where the 3rd line of code should turn into:
   
   

    S,0,196986,,0.7274838

1. 00:00:396 (1,1) - The fact that the immediate note after the spinner is placed at almost the border of the screen makes this transition a bit troll if you don't know the beatmap. To avoid unnecessary surprises, I recommend you to shorten the spinner by placing the end at 00:02:055 - .
2. 00:19:889 (6) - Make this slider totally horizontal so the next transition gets a bit softened?
3. 00:25:557 (1,2) - This dash caught me a bit offguard due to the big distance you used + the almost vertical slider. Try to place the beginning of the slider (2) at about x:182 and make it completely horizontal so the next distances aren't too much affected.
4. 00:31:052 (13,1) - Quite minor, but optically the transition from 1/8s to 1/4s isn't the best, aesthetically speaking. For that, try moving the end of the slider (1) to about x:156 to follow the direction of the 1/8 stream.
5. 00:33:230 (9,1,2) - The relatively low SV you used for this section makes this transition a bit uncomfortable since it's more typical to use more speedy sliders in the middle section. An alternative for that is using the same distance for all the objects, which would mean you'd have to move (1) to x:232 in order to achieve it.
6. 00:37:688 (11,1) - I'm not against using 1/8 hypers on this difficulty, but I must say this one is a bit tricky to play due to the current shape that small 1/8 stream has. Try out something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8043420 .
7. 01:03:990 (6,7,1) - On this one other example, it'd also be recommendable to use the same distance again between the three objects so the different strengths in the hypers aren't too confusing. That'd be moving (7) to x:240.
8. 01:09:244 (3) - With a quite intense section and you stack objects like that... Please move this object more to the left to create a bit more of movement. What about x:204?
9. 02:43:391 (8,9) - Having a big distance between those two sliders with the surrounding sucession of hypers makes this transition a real pain to play and an easy source of misses. Consider reducing the distance between those two sliders.
10. 02:57:631 (4) - Consider introducing a bit of angle in this slider so the transition to the next one isn't that extreme. I'd suggest placing the end of it at about x:308.
11. 03:54:590 - On this section you'd need to be extra careful with the objects that collect in the plate. Especially on parts like 04:12:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it starts being slightly annoying for the gameplay. I'd recommend you to place NCs on every 2nd stanza where possible: 03:56:802 (3) - 04:01:225 (3) - 04:05:649 (6) - 04:14:497 (4) - 04:18:921 (3) - 04:23:345 (6) - .
12. 04:24:451 (9) - Shorten this slider until 04:25:281 - and add a new note with NC on 04:25:557 - ? The beat at 04:25:281 - can be remarked like that.
13. 04:36:064 (3,4) - The section after the spinner gets a bit more of intensity by increasing the speed of the sliders, even without using hypers. You can also get rid of one, since it's the only place you used a hyper in this section by making the slider (3) totally horizontal looking towards the next one (4).
14. 04:55:143 (7,8,1) - In order to improve the flow in this transition, try making the slider (8) horizontal so the required movement softens.
15. 05:00:534 (6,7,8) - I believe the intensity of this pattern can be reduced a bit, considering the relatively high distanve (5,6) and the sucessing strong hypers. Try moving (6) and (8) a bit more to the right to soften this section a bit.
16. 05:51:825 (1) - Something similar was mentioned in a previous point about the aesthetics after a 1/8 stream. For the same reason, you can move this slider to x:392.
17. 06:05:096 (1) - Tilt a bit this slider to add some more movement? Something similar like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8043771 . Something similar can be done to the next slider 06:07:308 (1) - .

Deif wrote:

[Storyboard]

1. There's confirmation from the Storyboarder to use their code as of p/5328295 . It's more or less the same as the one used in grumd's ranked version https://osu.ppy.sh/s/359890 but well... There's nothing to say about using a similar SB as other beatmap as long as there's consent in it.
2. The only thing that disturbs a bit is the base scaling you used for the sharper picture, which is bigger than the default you used in your background picture. It's more noticeable when you go to 00:37:723 - where your 1st break starts and move the timeline with your mousewheel back and forth. In order to have the same scaling (and probably the easy solution would be changing the scaling of the default pictures) you'll have to find the following piece of code:
   
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"Burn this moment.jpg",320,240
    F,0,-985,0,1
    M,0,0,,320,240
    S,0,0,,0.6944516

   ... and substitute the 3rd line for:
   
   

    S,0,37654,55350,0.7274838

3. The second piece of code you'd have to change is in the sharper picture:
   
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"Sharpenthismoment.jpg",320,240
    M,0,196986,,320,240
    S,0,196986,,0.6944516

   ... where the 3rd line of code should turn into:
   
   

    S,0,196986,,0.7274838

Deif wrote:

What's a CtB BN? m4m:

[Endless Hatred]

1. 00:37:688 (11,1) - I'm not against using 1/8 hypers on this difficulty, but I must say this one is a bit tricky to play due to the current shape that small 1/8 stream has. Try out something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8043420 . - I changed it to something a little similar to what you suggested. Is much better now.
2. 06:05:096 (1) - Tilt a bit this slider to add some more movement? Something similar like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8043771 . Something similar can be done to the next slider 06:07:308 (1) - . - Not changing these. These are intentionally made like this due to the drum sounds they are placed on being the main focus here, and to add a little variety when the whole map is a movement map.

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I'll pop koliron's bubble by now. The beatmap feels quite ready, but I'm not 100% sure about some sections. Please contact some more experienced players to give a check on your beatmap and then I'll be glad to give it a recheck, since I've probably overseen some patterns that could be polished a bit more. See you then!

1. Tags: Please delete "ctbhell" from them. Try to keep this field just with useful information that would help users identify your beatmap by the melody itself (eg "breakcore" is the music genre or "Semantics: The Benzo Chronicles" is the album the song comes from, those would be appropriate to go into tags for your beatmap).

1. 01:03:990 (6,7,1) - Are you sure you want to keep the middle slider so vertical? It breaks unexpectedly the flow of this section, which has a pretty continuous movement generally.
2. 04:25:557 (5) - Forgot to add New Combo on this note? It'd be recommendable to empty the place a bit more before facing the almost 5-sec spinner afterwards.
3. 06:16:156 (1) - Please make this spinner finish on 06:18:368 - . From that point on there's no hearable sound anymore.

Deif wrote:

Everything has been applied. Additionally "Razor Sharp" got added to tags. Prepare your fingers, because you'll need it:

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