S3RL feat Krystal - R4V3 B0Y · forum

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Title:R4V3 B0Y
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Artist:S3RL Feat Krystal
ArtistUnicode:S3RL Feat Krystal
Creator:DeRandom Otaku
Version:IZE 白勺 ㄧˋ舟殳
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Tags:happy hardcore EMFA music rave boy
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Last edited by Macthir_TW 2016-08-06T04:48:44+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-08-04T09:32:04+00:00

q8720123 wrote:

I like this song

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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Artist:S3RL Feat Krystal
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Creator:DeRandom Otaku
Version:123's NORMAL
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Tags:happy hardcore EMFA music rave boy
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u should have asked me before making the GD ;w; ... i dont need any , sorry :c also the gd is not good enough to be ranked so keep paractising mapping c:

gl with future mapping

Macthir_TW

11 posts

Joined March 2013

Macthir_TW 2016-08-04T09:52:58+00:00

It's ok

I just love this song

so~ thank you

I wish you could be rank this map

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-08-04T16:42:55+00:00

Dont worry ~ it will be ranked one day :>

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Shmiklak 2016-08-11T09:54:13+00:00

Asaiga wrote:

from queue :3

sad mod

Easy

[notice]01:22:319 (3,1) - It will be a small pain to fix this ''small overlap'' or rather, touching. You can choose either not to fix it or apply a small change there to keep these more apart. it's not really important but ok
02:07:576 (1) - Spinner ends here. Easy's rule, at least 4 beat of recovery. rule says not 4 beats of recovery. Rule says that recovery time should be fine for newbies. 1 1/1 beat for 175 bpm song is fine.

[box]
This set is kinda solid, I don't have many suggestions to add O_O
Good luck on ranking![box=fixed overlap xd]

osu file format v14

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HitHitex

1 post

Joined July 2015

HitHitex 2016-08-14T20:27:37+00:00

Awesome Map

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-08-15T10:45:06+00:00

Thanks c:

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2016-08-21T21:05:43+00:00

[General]

Beatmap finishes on different times
Inconsistent widescreen storyboard
Break too long in Shmiklak diff

[ez]

00:53:519 - 01:40:148 - 02:45:976 - было бы замечательно если бы ты все это замапал
00:13:405 (2) - Здесь кончается слово, а тут начинается we 00:13:748 - так что лучше убери реверс и поставь там круг
01:22:319 (3,1) - Маленький оверлап который ты можешь пофиксить
01:57:291 (2,1) - Мог бы стакнуть их, это же легко
02:06:205 (3) - Очень странно выглядит на фоне реверсов, ты либо добавь где-то еще такой слайдер или же скороти и поставь реверс.
02:07:576 (1) - 170 бпм и только один бит для отдыха? ммм, классно же
02:35:691 (2) - Кнтрл H для лучшего флоу?
02:44:605 (3) - Убери нахуй этот реверс и поставь здесь круг 02:45:976 -
02:40:491 - сука

[nor]

00:28:834 (7) - How about these form? I just copied 00:27:462 (5) - and I think that looks good
SPOILER

gl

Bray-

Bray- 2016-08-26T06:26:20+00:00

is this for rank?
if it is
are u already ask for permission about the owner of the BG?

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Lully 2016-08-27T18:13:05+00:00

oh shit whatup
its dat boi!!

insayyyyn

00:02:091 (3) - http://puu.sh/qQrBx.jpg
00:24:205 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/qQrFw.jpg ? ovo
00:29:176 (2) - symmetry, hun. ovo
00:58:319 (3,4,5) - ey same as 00:56:948 (3,4,5,6) - pls
01:01:576 (2,3) - looks like a double lulul
01:12:034 (1,2) - could be a slow slider too - same for ^
01:17:519 (1) - fix overlapshu - *chuu*

okok

~~more stuff would be to picky lul~~ ren is forcing me

extra

01:01:405 (2,3) - should be a slider too - fits better.
01:22:319 (1) - symmetry
02:29:433 (9) - 143 272

i wont mention all those straight sliders

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2016-09-24T09:37:33+00:00

Finished my part

~

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DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-09-24T11:29:05+00:00

Ay , Revived and updated . Also applied old mods \o//

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Shmiklak 2016-09-24T12:39:47+00:00

Now bubble it like your other maps xd

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-09-24T12:46:05+00:00

Sooooon xd

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-09-25T09:40:38+00:00

m4m

my map link : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/476227

be pointing out things that might make it better. feel free to reject without giving reason

Insane

00:09:634 (1) - Alternate the slider opposing 00:08:948 (3) - to enrich the flow
01:02:776 (5) - pretty isolated pattern compared to the stacking in 01:03:119 (1,2,3,4) -
01:05:176 (3,4,5,6,1) - Could be a star pattern
01:19:576 (1,2,3,4) - 2 can be put at 3,4 and 3 can be put at 1

Extra

00:15:119 (1,2,3) - 2 can be dragged a bit to the upper side to make it neater
00:23:348 (1) - odd stream spacing, but since it's extra then i wouldn't mind
00:27:119 (5) - slider kind of killed the flow for the slider after it. A straight would be good
01:43:234 (2,3) - possible blanket
02:20:262 (2) - ctrl+h ctrl+j and put where you see fit

good luck

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-09-25T12:41:15+00:00

Underdogs wrote:
m4m

my map link : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/476227

be pointing out things that might make it better. feel free to reject without giving reason

Insane
00:09:634 (1) - Alternate the slider opposing 00:08:948 (3) - to enrich the flow would make it worse tbh
01:02:776 (5) - pretty isolated pattern compared to the stacking in 01:03:119 (1,2,3,4) - uh? so whats ur point here
01:05:176 (3,4,5,6,1) - Could be a star pattern could be
01:19:576 (1,2,3,4) - 2 can be put at 3,4 and 3 can be put at 1 i prefer mine

Extra
00:15:119 (1,2,3) - 2 can be dragged a bit to the upper side to make it neater would ruin DS
00:23:348 (1) - odd stream spacing, but since it's extra then i wouldn't mind i emphasized 1 there
00:27:119 (5) - slider kind of killed the flow for the slider after it. A straight would be good linear slider kills it harder
01:43:234 (2,3) - possible blanket yeahj
02:20:262 (2) - ctrl+h ctrl+j and put where you see fit i prefer mine ww

good luck

Thanks!

_kotachi_

567 posts

Joined July 2014

_kotachi_ 2016-09-25T14:53:48+00:00

Hi! From Modding queue

i can only insane more diff
and i cant english well. sorry

1NS4N3

00:35:691 (6,1) - swap NC
00:55:919 (5) - I think good x112 y64
01:01:405 (2,3) - Along the pattern change these to slider
02:03:462 (1,2,3,4) - I think better of spread DS

3XTR4

01:05:862 (1) - I think good x269 y327
01:11:005 (4) - copy 01:10:662 (3) -
02:03:462 (1,2,3,4) - I think better of spread DS
02:20:262 (2) - ctrl+G

sorry a little...

Good luck!

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-09-26T08:43:30+00:00

_kotachi_ wrote:
Hi! From Modding queue

i can only insane more diff
and i cant english well. sorry Its fine c::

1NS4N3
00:35:691 (6,1) - swap NC oops , fixed
00:55:919 (5) - I think good x112 y64 uh , i want this to be stacked with the repeat of 00:54:205 (3) -
01:01:405 (2,3) - Along the pattern change these to slider i wanna make antiflow there because it gives the instrument more empahsis
02:03:462 (1,2,3,4) - I think better of spread DS sure
3XTR4
01:05:862 (1) - I think good x269 y327 i want to keep mine to have a proper triangle pattern for 01:04:834 (2,4,5,6,7,1) - :<
01:11:005 (4) - copy 01:10:662 (3) - sure
02:03:462 (1,2,3,4) - I think better of spread DS Fixed
02:20:262 (2) - ctrl+G i prefer mine here
sorry a little...

Good luck!

Thanks!!

onsaemiro

85 posts

Joined February 2014

onsaemiro 2016-09-26T09:51:14+00:00

wtf why u asking a noob to mod your map its too gud xD
here i go

1NS4N3

00:11:348 (2,3) - curve 2 tad bit more for better blanket
00:32:948 - clearly you like the break here since you left it blank in the other diff as well, but are you sure you want that? I think you can achieve some cool effects in here if mapped right (I'm thinking along the line of perhaps a set of notes that decrease in DS to fit in with the fade-away vocal)
00:43:919 - ^ gah these random pauses feel so awkward and abrupt please do something about ittt
01:01:405 (2,3) - they are so close to each other D: just a tad bit further would make it less awkward to hit
01:12:034 (1,2,1) - ^ feels so awk to hit. Maybe consider stacking 1 and 2 (but not onto the slider 1)?
01:14:776 (3,6) - is this overlap intentional? stacking these might be nice
01:40:148 (1,2,3) - imo the sudden right angle pattern with straight sliders looks really out of place D: the whole song was filled with cool stuff like 01:00:719 (4,1) and then suddenly this appeared *gasp*. either change the angle, curve the slider, or anything
02:00:719 (1,2,3,4) - 4 is not aligned with the rest xD - move 4 to x:40 y:136
02:03:462 (1,2,3,4) - spacing these further than 02:02:091 (1,2,3,4) might be a nice touch to show tension buildup
02:50:091 (1,2,3,4) - instead of parallel, what do you think about mirror (ctrl+h) for aesthetics?

holy that was good

3XTR4

00:48:034 (1,2,3,4) - this is actually not symmetrical. move 1 to x:292 y:283
00:49:405 (1,2,3,4) - why is 4 so further up than the other 3 D: to avoid breaking the blanket, just bring the other 3 up

00:55:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - the 5 is sticking out like a sore thumb! you should rotate it 120 degrees counterclockwise to look like this -https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6183991
01:09:291 (3,4,5,6) - not gon lie this was really confusing D: maybe switch 4 and 5 so sight-readers don't lose combo?
02:03:462 (1,2,3,4) - same as what i mentioned in insane diff

02:07:576 (1,3) - overlap? you could either stack them, but not sure why you didn't put 3 in x:320 y:100 for the symmetry
02:14:776 (2,4) - overlap? pretty sure you are just doing what you did here --> 02:33:291 (7,2,4), but it's less obvious with only 2 circles and it looks like accidental overlap D:
02:34:319 (5,6,7,1) - blankettt
02:36:034 (5,2) - ^

ITS BEAUTIFUL HELP IM TEARING UP

your map is so clean help i feel useless

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-09-26T12:56:47+00:00

chparkkim wrote:
wtf why u asking a noob to mod your map its too gud xD i always ask people who open new queues to check their modding skills lo
here i go
1NS4N3
00:11:348 (2,3) - curve 2 tad bit more for better blanket i hate blankies but fixed
00:32:948 - clearly you like the break here since you left it blank in the other diff as well, but are you sure you want that? I think you can achieve some cool effects in here if mapped right (I'm thinking along the line of perhaps a set of notes that decrease in DS to fit in with the fade-away vocal) nah my mapping concept is different than what u might think ww
00:43:919 - ^ gah these random pauses feel so awkward and abrupt please do something about ittt ~
01:01:405 (2,3) - they are so close to each other D: just a tad bit further would make it less awkward to hit its intentional
01:12:034 (1,2,1) - ^ feels so awk to hit. Maybe consider stacking 1 and 2 (but not onto the slider 1)? ~
01:14:776 (3,6) - is this overlap intentional? stacking these might be nice intended overlap
01:40:148 (1,2,3) - imo the sudden right angle pattern with straight sliders looks really out of place D: the whole song was filled with cool stuff like 01:00:719 (4,1) and then suddenly this appeared *gasp*. either change the angle, curve the slider, or anything it looks fine to me .-.
02:00:719 (1,2,3,4) - 4 is not aligned with the rest xD - move 4 to x:40 y:136 lo fixed
02:03:462 (1,2,3,4) - spacing these further than 02:02:091 (1,2,3,4) might be a nice touch to show tension buildup Same intensity so no need to mess up spacing
02:50:091 (1,2,3,4) - instead of parallel, what do you think about mirror (ctrl+h) for aesthetics? cool idea but i like current one moar

holy that was good

3XTR4
00:48:034 (1,2,3,4) - this is actually not symmetrical. move 1 to x:292 y:283 it looks already perfect to me
00:49:405 (1,2,3,4) - why is 4 so further up than the other 3 D: to avoid breaking the blanket, just bring the other 3 up i emphasized the snare
00:55:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - the 5 is sticking out like a sore thumb! you should rotate it 120 degrees counterclockwise to look like this -https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6183991 current one is totally fine
01:09:291 (3,4,5,6) - not gon lie this was really confusing D: maybe switch 4 and 5 so sight-readers don't lose combo? its intentional lo , 4 and 5 actually WERE like the way u suggested but i swapped them for fun :>
02:03:462 (1,2,3,4) - same as what i mentioned in insane diff ~
02:07:576 (1,3) - overlap? you could either stack them, but not sure why you didn't put 3 in x:320 y:100 for the symmetry intended
02:14:776 (2,4) - overlap? pretty sure you are just doing what you did here --> 02:33:291 (7,2,4), but it's less obvious with only 2 circles and it looks like accidental overlap D: intended
02:34:319 (5,6,7,1) - blankettt i still hate blankets
02:36:034 (5,2) - ^ why do blankets exist

ITS BEAUTIFUL HELP IM TEARING UP
your map is so clean help i feel useless

Thanks!

onsaemiro

85 posts

Joined February 2014

onsaemiro 2016-09-26T18:24:43+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
i always ask people who open new queues to check their modding skills lo

DID I PASS jk

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
00:48:034 (1,2,3,4) - this is actually not symmetrical. move 1 to x:292 y:283 it looks already perfect to me

uhh sorry i mentioned this because when i tried ctrl+h on 1 and 2 and overlapped with 3 and 4, this happened -- https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6187160 D:

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
why do blankets exist

_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

_DT3 2016-09-29T20:25:21+00:00

Placeholdering for the ticket you wanted to use

Gonna mod on the weekend

Oread_old

Oread_old 2016-10-01T13:53:24+00:00

From my Q =w=

[Shmik's easy]
00:30:205 (3,4) - make blanket?
02:07:576 (1,1) - in easy must give break 4 white tick before spinner (maybe it's unrankable)
02:45:976 - why don't mapping before?

[Renby's Normal]
00:43:919 (1) - http://puu.sh/ru2xu/23ae96d9be.jpg i think this one is more better
01:00:376 (5) - rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/ru2BE/ea9b99d463.jpg
Nice Map =w=

[FCL's Hard]
00:24:462 - sound finished here
00:25:748 (9,10) - how about this http://puu.sh/ru2Qv/1ff605d82c.jpg
00:27:205 - sound finished here
00:28:491 (6) - stream started 00:28:319 - here
00:29:948 - sound finished ... etc
00:36:891 - circle?
00:39:291 - stream start
02:06:548 (2,3) - don't overlap
02:27:291 - put circle like 02:24:548 (2) - this

[insane]
00:24:462 - big sound
00:27:205 - ^
00:28:319 - stream started here
01:01:405 (2,3) - confused

[Extra]
00:24:462 - sound is here... etc
01:09:405 (4,5) - very confused player can't see 01:09:519 (5) - this in first try
01:20:091 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/ru3C0/c21ce97bc8.jpg
02:14:262 (6) - make 1/4 slider?

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-10-01T14:15:37+00:00

Oread wrote:
From my Q =w= =w=

[Renby's Normal]
00:43:919 (1) - http://puu.sh/ru2xu/23ae96d9be.jpg i think this one is more better Fixed
01:00:376 (5) - rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/ru2BE/ea9b99d463.jpg did something else
Nice Map =w=

[insane]
00:24:462 - big sound not really
00:27:205 - ^
00:28:319 - stream started here dont want it to be as dense as extra
01:01:405 (2,3) - confused Fixed

[Extra]
00:24:462 - sound is here... etc ~
01:09:405 (4,5) - very confused player can't see 01:09:519 (5) - this in first try Fixed
01:20:091 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/ru3C0/c21ce97bc8.jpg Fixed
02:14:262 (6) - make 1/4 slider? unnecessary imo

Thank you!

zhuxiaoyan

533 posts

Joined October 2014

zhuxiaoyan 2016-10-01T18:28:43+00:00

3XTR4

00:04:148 (1,3) - just a preference, but i would overlap this more like this

00:08:091 (4,1) - why do you choose to space this out so closely unlike other downbeats? there's a pretty big clap that should be emphasized more on the sliderhead of 00:08:262 (1) -

00:15:805 (3) - move this down to y:321 so it lines up perfectly with 00:15:119 (1) -

same thing, i would space 00:19:234 (1) - out farther so you can emphasize the clap on the downbeat

00:23:691 (2) - this would honestly sound better as a 1/2 slider because the beat 00:24:034 - is pretty strong and i believe it should be emphasized with a hitcircle

00:29:176 (2) - same thing ^

00:39:291 (4) - don't see the point for this slider, because there is no sound on 00:39:376 - (other than lyrics) , it would be better as just a hitcircle 00:39:291 -

00:43:748 (6,1) - i dont see why this is spaced so far, there is no sound on 00:43:919 (1) - , so i would emphasize it way less than that

01:09:405 (4) - there's no significant beat here for it to be a hitcircle

01:28:491 (4) - putting the last slidernode at x:437 makes the slider perfect

01:42:891 (1) - i would space this out more from 01:42:719 (3) - to emphasize the piano chord on 01:42:891 -

01:45:634 (1) - same thing

01:56:262 (2) - nc maybe?

02:13:405 (2) - this would honestly sound better as a 1/2 slider because the beat 02:13:749 - is pretty strong and i believe it should be emphasized with a hitcircle

02:40:319 (6) - putting this at x:201 y:238 makes is exactly perfectly straight from 02:39:805 (5) -

1NS4N3

00:19:234 (1) - just like the extra, i would space this out farther out from 00:19:062 (4) - so you can emphasize the clap on 00:19:234 -

00:23:691 (2) - just like the extra, i would make this a 1/2 slider because the beat on 00:24:034 - is strong enough to be its own hitcircle

00:25:062 (2) - same thing ^

00:29:176 (2) - same thing ^

00:37:405 (3) - same thing ^

00:43:919 (1) - i would put this closer to 00:43:748 (8) - because there is barely a sound at 00:43:919 (1) - except for lyrics, so there shouldn't be that much emphasis there

00:55:919 (5) - nc suggestion?

01:02:776 (5,1) - this blanket looks kind of weird, the middle slider node of 01:03:119 (1) - is too close to 01:02:776 (5) -

01:17:519 (1) - please oh please put the last node at x:231 so it lines up with the first node and the red node

01:18:719 (2,3) - ew blanket (sorry ;^(

FCL's H4RD

00:12:034 (6) - just a suggestion i would rotate 180 degrees

00:25:834 (10,1) - this looks so awkward to play especially because of 00:25:834 (10) - ending on a downbeat

00:55:919 (6) - 3/4 is not really a good idea for hards, just pointing that out.

RenBy's N0RM4L

good

Shmik's 34SY

looks good!

niyuji

529 posts

Joined November 2014

niyuji 2016-10-02T00:35:06+00:00

3XTR4
► 00:27:805 (2) - move to 444 81 for better blanket
► 00:31:319 (6) - maybe change this slider to 00:31:576 (1) - (i mean copy paste and rotate -81)
► 00:33:034 (1) - maybe add a spinner here? untill here 00:34:062 - and maybe add a timing point to mute spinner's end? (vol: 5)
► 00:44:005 (1) - same here? ^
► 01:15:805 (2,4) - fix blanket and also you will have to change 01:15:462 (1) - this equally
► 01:40:148 (1) - copy this slider here 01:40:834 (3) - ctrl+h and rotate -87

1NS4N3
► 00:26:434 (3) - move to 266 293? better ds
► 00:33:034 (1) - maybe add a spinner here? untill here 00:34:062 - and maybe add a timing point to mute spinner's end? (vol: 5)
► 00:44:005 (1) - same here? ^
► 00:56:262 (1,3) - ok, but 00:56:262 (1,3) - blanked needs to be fixed
► 02:24:034 (1) - move to 315 98 for better blanket

Nice map(set). Good luck.

I didn't manage to mod e,n,h diffs (sorry)

Last edited by niyuji 2016-11-03T12:54:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Juiceys

530 posts

Joined June 2016

Juiceys 2016-10-02T03:14:33+00:00

Upupupupu

Easy

01:13:405 (2,3) - I feel like this is a good spot for a great overlap
01:16:834 (3) - I think this could be turned into a repeating slider to follow the music a bit more
01:22:319 (3,1) - The other overlaps look nice but this one looks a bit sloppy and i think it could be fixed to not overlap
02:07:576 (1,1) - It's confusing for beginners to have an object appear during a spinner so the spinner should be shortened
02:40:148 (4,1) - If it doesn't mess with spacing then I think the slider could be modified to make a nice blanket
02:40:491 (1,3) - If the starting and ending points of both of these could stack each other that would be nice

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-10-02T08:20:04+00:00

Frostwich wrote:
3XTR4
00:04:148 (1,3) - just a preference, but i would overlap this more like this

00:08:091 (4,1) - why do you choose to space this out so closely unlike other downbeats? there's a pretty big clap that should be emphasized more on the sliderhead of 00:08:262 (1) -

00:15:805 (3) - move this down to y:321 so it lines up perfectly with 00:15:119 (1) -

same thing, i would space 00:19:234 (1) - out farther so you can emphasize the clap on the downbeat

00:23:691 (2) - this would honestly sound better as a 1/2 slider because the beat 00:24:034 - is pretty strong and i believe it should be emphasized with a hitcircle There are many others like this and i prefer to keep them

00:29:176 (2) - same thing ^ ~

00:39:291 (4) - don't see the point for this slider, because there is no sound on 00:39:376 - (other than lyrics) , it would be better as just a hitcircle 00:39:291 -

00:43:748 (6,1) - i dont see why this is spaced so far, there is no sound on 00:43:919 (1) - , so i would emphasize it way less than that well yea i know but i emphasized it because i wanted to lo

01:09:405 (4) - there's no significant beat here for it to be a hitcircle There is actually

01:28:491 (4) - putting the last slidernode at x:437 makes the slider perfect

01:42:891 (1) - i would space this out more from 01:42:719 (3) - to emphasize the piano chord on 01:42:891 - i didnt emphasize anything in this section cuz i wanted to use consistent spacing

01:45:634 (1) - same thing ~

01:56:262 (2) - nc maybe? Not needed

02:13:405 (2) - this would honestly sound better as a 1/2 slider because the beat 02:13:749 - is pretty strong and i believe it should be emphasized with a hitcircle ~

02:40:319 (6) - putting this at x:201 y:238 makes is exactly perfectly straight from 02:39:805 (5) - Linear flows suck tbh

1NS4N3
00:19:234 (1) - just like the extra, i would space this out farther out from 00:19:062 (4) - so you can emphasize the clap on 00:19:234 - ~

00:23:691 (2) - just like the extra, i would make this a 1/2 slider because the beat on 00:24:034 - is strong enough to be its own hitcircle ~

00:25:062 (2) - same thing ^ ~

00:29:176 (2) - same thing ^ ~

00:37:405 (3) - same thing ^ ~

00:43:919 (1) - i would put this closer to 00:43:748 (8) - because there is barely a sound at 00:43:919 (1) - except for lyrics, so there shouldn't be that much emphasis there ~

00:55:919 (5) - nc suggestion? Dont really want to add one here

01:02:776 (5,1) - this blanket looks kind of weird, the middle slider node of 01:03:119 (1) - is too close to 01:02:776 (5) - Tbh it looks fine to me

01:17:519 (1) - please oh please put the last node at x:231 so it lines up with the first node and the red node xd i m baka

01:18:719 (2,3) - ew blanket (sorry ;^(

_Kise wrote:
3XTR4
► 00:27:805 (2) - move to 444 81 for better blanket
► 00:31:319 (6) - maybe change this slider to 00:31:576 (1) - (i mean copy paste and rotate -81) eh nope
► 00:33:034 (1) - maybe add a spinner here? untill here 00:34:062 - and maybe add a timing point to mute spinner's end? (vol: 5) Dont prefer having one
► 00:44:005 (1) - same here? ^ ~
► 01:15:805 (2,4) - fix blanket and also you will have to change 01:15:462 (1) - this equally
► 01:40:148 (1) - copy this slider here 01:40:834 (3) - ctrl+h and rotate -87

1NS4N3
► 00:26:434 (3) - move to 266 293? better ds ww unnecessary
► 00:33:034 (1) - maybe add a spinner here? untill here 00:34:062 - and maybe add a timing point to mute spinner's end? (vol: 5) ~
► 00:44:005 (1) - same here? ^ ~
► 00:56:262 (1,3) - ok, but 00:56:262 (1,3) - blanked needs to be fixed It might look weird cuz of stack but its already perfect
► 02:24:034 (1) - move to 315 98 for better blanket would ruin the symmetry also the blanket is cool already

Nice map(set). Good luck. I didn't managed to mod e,n,h diffs (sorry)

Thanks!
No reply or Green = Fixed

[ Drop ]

556 posts

Joined February 2013

[ Drop ] 2016-10-02T09:10:12+00:00

From queue

1NS4N3

00:25:834 (5,1) - place closer since it was insane
00:31:319 (6,1) - ^
00:36:805 (6,1) - ^
00:33:205 - add a spinner or a slider here
00:34:148 (2) - will it be better if you place it on the slider head?
01:03:119 (1,2,3,4) - that\s weird

3XTR4

00:03:119 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6227804 it will be better if you change to this (sry for bad english
00:06:034 (2,3) - move to Y32
00:33:205 - add a spinner or a slider here
02:34:319 (5,6,7,1) - blanket
02:39:805 (5) - change another slider ? because this slider doesn't look very good :/

Not much can say, nice map GL!

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2016-10-02T09:38:22+00:00

here comes dat boy

Oread wrote:
[FCL's Hard]
00:24:462 - sound finished here i don't want to have problems with polarity
00:25:748 (9,10) - how about this http://puu.sh/ru2Qv/1ff605d82c.jpg yea, here's I have some issues with rhythm. changed in my way
00:27:205 - sound finished here as above
00:28:491 (6) - stream started 00:28:319 - here there's pretty quit, so won't map so
00:29:948 - sound finished ... etc
00:36:891 - circle? a
00:39:291 - stream start as above
02:06:548 (2,3) - don't overlap don't
02:27:291 - put circle like 02:24:548 (2) - this did cuz bass sounds were stopped here

Frostwich wrote:
00:12:034 (6) - just a suggestion i would rotate 180 degrees nah

00:25:834 (10,1) - this looks so awkward to play especially because of 00:25:834 (10) - ending on a downbeat changed in previous mod

00:55:919 (6) - 3/4 is not really a good idea for hards, just pointing that out. not really sure it's hard, keep now

ty guys

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FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2016-10-02T15:57:23+00:00

doublepost

[3xtr4]

meme setting
00:08:262 (1,2) - only there stacked, when you using distance snap for same beats
00:15:119 (1) - I would map 1/2 reverse instead cuz glitch on the background
Actually I'd mapped all these glitch sounds, now this mapping looks very simple, given that it's a hardest difficulty
00:26:605 - don't like how you undermapped this bass, also 1/1 looks bad because was ended at hard white beat
00:28:319 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - you could make spacing more diverse, I mean make less spacing for 00:28:319 (4,5) - cuz these sounds sound quieter than the rest melody. Same suggestion for similar points
00:29:176 (2) - as above
00:32:948 (1) - If you want to make a smooth symmetry between followpoints, you could move 00:32:948 (1) - to 463 174
00:42:891 (2) - a
00:49:405 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern looks inconsistent with 00:48:034 (1,2,3,4) - , but 00:45:291 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - look pretty similar.Anyway make these consistency has no sense, I just want to say that you could increase the spacing between 00:49:405 (1,2,3,4) - , cuz the stuttering sounds louder here
00:50:434 (4,1) - shitblanket
00:55:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - hey, the stream sounds much intense than you have mapped, use 1.0-1.2x ds at least http://puu.sh/rvdmi/c7adbdd8a4.jpg
01:00:034 (5,6) - you shoud use less distance between tbh, cuz it sounds sounds less intense than 00:59:691 (3,4) - , but anyway you used more spacing between. something like this 00:56:948 (3,4,5,6) - looks fine for example
01:08:948 (2,4) - this stack looks like really painful for reading, 1st time when i played I wasn't able to read it lo. I'd suggest do square instead http://puu.sh/rvdF8/12307eec31.jpg
01:22:834 (2,3) - could stack these, to consistence with 01:20:948 (1,2) -
btw, where is hitsounds here lo ?
02:03:462 (1,2,3,4) - could increase the distance between to fit with intensity of the song , and make it more diverse
02:07:576 (1,2,3) - tbh these objects also should be look symmetrical, it's kinda weird when only this jump not symmetrical. I'd suggest you move 02:07:576 (1) - to 347 80
02:12:376 (1,4) - is this overlap really need?
02:13:405 (2) - wtf (as above)
02:25:576 (2) - at 27 107 it fits better with you map p i n g s ty l e
02:34:834 (6,7) - these sounds like 1/8, so you could add two 1/8 sliders instead but w/e
scarce hitsounding tbh, when I listened it I felt missing of some standart soft-whistles. Actually the song is also kinda boring, so you can't add so much, but anyway I feel than that map has some room for improve of the hitsounding

[1ns4n3]

00:08:262 (1) - some reasons to make an anchor slider? it sounds same like 00:06:891 (1) - 00:09:634 (1) - , but you used standart shares
00:31:319 (6,1) - I wouldn't use same spacing in insane because it could me confusing a bit, also there's calm part, so it doesn't have much sense
01:01:576 (3) - you could move it further (367, 82), there's no a simple beat as it was before. also 3.13 spacing 01:01:576 (3,1) - is kinda questionable lo
01:02:262 (3) - this stack is probably confusing a bit for insane players
01:03:119 (1,2,3,4) - there's no need to make something like that. At least cuz the song has same structure as it was before
01:09:976 (1,2,3) - these sliders should be outright tbh, to make costistence with other shapes before 01:07:234 (1,2,3) - 01:08:605 (1,2,3) -
01:24:891 (4,1) - they should have constant spacing as before 01:23:691 (1,2,3) -
02:03:462 (1,2,3,4) - same as in sextra

[h4rd]

pls update my diff

[n0rm4l]

00:16:834 (5) - the overlap looks kinda meh
00:31:576 (1,2,3,4) - kinda meh rhythm, you could make something like http://puu.sh/rvfmz/5281f75a4c.jpg, so you will have properly emphasize on vocal
00:37:405 (2) - something similar as above, make strong vocal no clickable in normal is kinda bad idea, you could try this instead http://puu.sh/rvfum/dfb42a45a6.jpg
00:43:919 (1) - there's a horse
byby_chan
01:41:519 (2) - at 36 294 01:40:148 (1,2) - looks better as a blanket
01:47:519 - I can't head there same piano beat as it was at 01:46:148, so I would say that 1,5/1 has no sense here. You could extend this slider before 01:47:691 and add a note at 01:48:034, looks readable for the rhythm
02:28:148 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - there's kinda long time without 1/1 break, it probably could be hard for normal players. I'd remove 02:30:719 (4) - for example

[34s7]

holy shit it's easy maps mapping god, of course nothing to say
ytn

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-10-02T16:57:01+00:00

FCL wrote:
doublepost
[3xtr4]
meme setting i agree!
00:08:262 (1,2) - only there stacked, when you using distance snap for same beats aa yes , does it matter? xd
00:15:119 (1) - I would map 1/2 reverse instead cuz glitch on the background only following vocals tbh
Actually I'd mapped all these glitch sounds, now this mapping looks very simple, given that it's a hardest difficulty ~
00:26:605 - don't like how you undermapped this bass, also 1/1 looks bad because was ended at hard white beat yeahj i know but eh i wanna keep it =w=
00:28:319 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - you could make spacing more diverse, I mean make less spacing for 00:28:319 (4,5) - cuz these sounds sound quieter than the rest melody. Same suggestion for similar points
00:29:176 (2) - as above ~
00:32:948 (1) - If you want to make a smooth symmetry between followpoints, you could move 00:32:948 (1) - to 463 174 i dont use followpoints tho
00:42:891 (2) - a for apple
00:49:405 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern looks inconsistent with 00:48:034 (1,2,3,4) - , but 00:45:291 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - look pretty similar.Anyway make these consistency has no sense, I just want to say that you could increase the spacing between 00:49:405 (1,2,3,4) - , cuz the stuttering sounds louder here
00:50:434 (4,1) - shitblanket
00:55:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - hey, the stream sounds much intense than you have mapped, use 1.0-1.2x ds at least http://puu.sh/rvdmi/c7adbdd8a4.jpg
01:00:034 (5,6) - you shoud use less distance between tbh, cuz it sounds sounds less intense than 00:59:691 (3,4) - , but anyway you used more spacing between. something like this 00:56:948 (3,4,5,6) - looks fine for example The intensity is same for both actually
01:08:948 (2,4) - this stack looks like really painful for reading, 1st time when i played I wasn't able to read it lo. I'd suggest do square instead http://puu.sh/rvdF8/12307eec31.jpg linear flows suck but ok
01:22:834 (2,3) - could stack these, to consistence with 01:20:948 (1,2) - unnecessary tbh
btw, where is hitsounds here lo ? gimme sum suggestions aaaaaaa
02:03:462 (1,2,3,4) - could increase the distance between to fit with intensity of the song , and make it more diverse wanna keep because i m shitmapper
02:07:576 (1,2,3) - tbh these objects also should be look symmetrical, it's kinda weird when only this jump not symmetrical. I'd suggest you move 02:07:576 (1) - to 347 80
02:12:376 (1,4) - is this overlap really need? i overlapped them more because i wanted an overlap there
02:13:405 (2) - wtf (as above) xd
02:25:576 (2) - at 27 107 it fits better with you map p i n g s ty l e
02:34:834 (6,7) - these sounds like 1/8, so you could add two 1/8 sliders instead but w/e 1/4 represents it properly
scarce hitsounding tbh, when I listened it I felt missing of some standart soft-whistles. Actually the song is also kinda boring, so you can't add so much, but anyway I feel than that map has some room for improve of the hitsounding i suck at hs thats why my hitsounding is simple always

[1ns4n3]
00:08:262 (1) - some reasons to make an anchor slider? it sounds same like 00:06:891 (1) - 00:09:634 (1) - , but you used standart shares Random
00:31:319 (6,1) - I wouldn't use same spacing in insane because it could me confusing a bit, also there's calm part, so it doesn't have much sense i agree but i dont wanna overlap them Dx
01:01:576 (3) - you could move it further (367, 82), there's no a simple beat as it was before. also 3.13 spacing 01:01:576 (3,1) - is kinda questionable lo Tried to decrease the spacing but i still wanna emphasize the downbeat as much as i can xd
01:02:262 (3) - this stack is probably confusing a bit for insane players is fine
01:03:119 (1,2,3,4) - there's no need to make something like that. At least cuz the song has same structure as it was before
01:09:976 (1,2,3) - these sliders should be outright tbh, to make costistence with other shapes before 01:07:234 (1,2,3) - 01:08:605 (1,2,3) - i agree but meh , these look good also
01:24:891 (4,1) - they should have constant spacing as before 01:23:691 (1,2,3) - its alread y consistent , eh?
02:03:462 (1,2,3,4) - same as in sextra ~

[h4rd]
pls update my diff suer

[n0rm4l]
00:16:834 (5) - the overlap looks kinda meh its not even noticeable
00:31:576 (1,2,3,4) - kinda meh rhythm, you could make something like http://puu.sh/rvfmz/5281f75a4c.jpg, so you will have properly emphasize on vocal
00:37:405 (2) - something similar as above, make strong vocal no clickable in normal is kinda bad idea, you could try this instead http://puu.sh/rvfum/dfb42a45a6.jpg
00:43:919 (1) - there's a horse Theres a what!?

[ Drop ] wrote:
From queue

1NS4N3
00:25:834 (5,1) - place closer since it was insane Its fine
00:31:319 (6,1) - ^ ~
00:36:805 (6,1) - ^ ~
00:33:205 - add a spinner or a slider here i dont prefer having one
00:34:148 (2) - will it be better if you place it on the slider head? that would be lame because it wouldnt give any emphasis to downbeat
01:03:119 (1,2,3,4) - that\s weird xd fixed from fcl's mod

3XTR4
00:03:119 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6227804 it will be better if you change to this (sry for bad english i wanna have simple flow so keeping mine
00:06:034 (2,3) - move to Y32
00:33:205 - add a spinner or a slider here ~
02:34:319 (5,6,7,1) - blanket
02:39:805 (5) - change another slider ? because this slider doesn't look very good :/ i like the shape
Not much can say, nice map GL!

no reply means fixed!
Danke

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2016-10-03T12:24:24+00:00

hi again

Shmik's 34SY

01:22:319 (3,1) - yea u can avoid the overlap
01:55:234 (3,4) - i believe the two sounds 01:55:919 - 01:56:262 - are special enough for two notes, try a different rhythm pattern here would be nice
02:40:491 (1) - makes the shape symmetry with 02:40:148 (4) - might look better

RenBy's N0RM4L

01:47:005 (2) - tho symmetry looks nice but no piano sound is on the reverse arrow like 01:45:634 (1) - so u might do sth else here

FCL's H4RD

02:06:205 (1,2,3,4) - well this isnt so neat as ur similar patterns

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Shmiklak 2016-10-03T16:16:49+00:00

Did some minor changes. Here's update:

I'm Shmiklak

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DeRandom Otaku

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DeRandom Otaku 2016-10-03T16:22:45+00:00

Alright updated and Fixed Tags ... Also did a tiny change to meta idk if its noticeable or not so
@GDer : Please re-dl

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

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Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2016-10-03T16:45:20+00:00

m4m (sorry for late mod)

[General]

In my opinion I think soft-hitwhistle is too similar with the background instrument, which don't really give a good feedback

[Shmik's Easy]

02:40:491 (1,2,3) - Why not mapping it out but skipping al the beats? You can simply follow 1/1 rhythm you have used before, ending a map in this way is not a good idea

[RenBy's Normal]

00:27:462 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Try using other patterns? Right now the angle build up here is really sharp, it is quite uncomfortable to play with
01:01:405 (8) - same here, the flow works better when it is put above 01:01:062 (7)
01:18:205 - 01:29:176 - I think I have a already told when i mod your last map, this section have no hitsounds which cannot provide proper feedback when hitted
01:40:148 - 01:51:119 - Same, well there are some more sections without hitsound, not going to point out all of them here

[FCL's Hard]

01:40:148 - 01:51:119 - Same, lack of hitsounds
02:02:091 - 02:13:062 - ^
02:22:148 (3,4) - Stack it? It is the only double you didnt stack them completely

Same hitsounds problem go to Easy, Insane and Extra diff, this set needs more work on hitsounding imo
Good luck!

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

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Shmiklak 2016-10-03T16:59:30+00:00

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Come[Back]Home

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Come[Back]Home 2016-10-03T18:30:09+00:00

Shmik's 34SY

*00:31:576 (1,2) - I hope that Im not the only one who thinks that those sliders somehow dont really fit, they look so weird and random.
*00:50:691 - 00:50:776 - You should delete those unused inherited points
*00:53:519 - 00:56:262 - Why didnt you map that part? Clearly has strong enough beats to be mapped
*01:29:176 - 20 second long break? That seems pretty long imo. Its mappable starting here 01:40:148 -
*01:56:091 - 01:56:434 - 02:12:376 - Unused Green lines
*02:21:291 (1,2) - I really hate those sliders, they look so damn ugly
*02:40:491 (1,2,3) - Were you lazy here or why did you start to map such long sliders? Would be better to map the beats imo

RenBy's N0RM4L

*00:25:576 (5,6) - How about a slider instead? I somehow think it fits better.
*02:10:319 (1,2,3) - I dont really understand to what theyre mapped.
*Please delete unused green lines

FCL's H4RD

*00:00:034 (1) - Multiple repeats are boring imo
*00:34:319 (1,3) - I dont really like the overlap.
*00:46:319 (4,2) - This might be a bit hard to read.
*02:27:291 - Why do you ignore the sound here? The breaks seems kinda weird because of that.

1NS4N3

*00:34:148 (2,1) - This is really shitty to read and shouldnt be used in an Insane
*02:45:291 (3) - ctrl+g might create a good flow here

3XTR4

*00:24:205 (3,4) - Sliders end should be usually be clearly visible which is not the case here
*01:09:291 (3,4,5) - This overmap doesnt really fit to the song itself or to the map.

Yeah thats it, sry if this mod seems shitty. There is a lot more to mention but I used my last bit of energy to finally mod it, so I just pointed out the obvious things. I hope you understand, and good luck with this mapset~

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