GFRIEND - NAVILLERA [OsuMania]

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Shinzo-

Lapis Aoki wrote:

I said tags, not source, but okay. xD
And np ^^ (Good luck getting it ranked soon)
OMG hahahaha xD sorry sorry xD
[ A v a l o n ]
ddal ddal song ~


  • [General Issues]
  1. Why you not start the offset at here ? 00:00:384 - since you've already start mapping at that position too
  2. Your soft-hitwhistle have much unnecessary blank spot in the end http://puu.sh/qzSsM/b4faa1495c.png here is my fix http://puu.sh/qzSvU/3e85b7e9e9.wav
  3. Metadata fine https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Se8bbsUFjC8 official record studio on youtube, and also p/5329965

    |1|2|3|4|


    [Easy]
  4. 00:10:824 - LN should be start here just like all other diffs
  5. 00:11:424 - 00:13:344 - if you decide to follow same sound like other diff, then it should be 1/2 snap too this time, that's not really hard too for this diff level . . . make it consistent (but if you feel 1/2 LN is hard for Easy, you can change it to single note instead of LN)
  6. 00:23:664 (23664|0,24144|0) - that's sound was different this time, try to move this 00:23:664 (23664|0) - into 2nd column (please make this more simply as possible to current rhythm)
  7. 01:49:824 (109824|0,109824|1) - swap this to right side, since they're really different instrument with 01:50:304 (110304|1,110304|0) - newbie player will get confuse to read that if you keep that in same column
  8. alright no more on this diff (but a little boring hhh, nvm)

    [Normal]
  9. 00:02:184 - not going to add at least a note in here ? that drum sound was really loud this time
  10. 00:26:784 (26784|3,26784|2,27264|3,27264|2) - since they're have different instrument, that would be more good if you place them into different column too
  11. 00:33:024 - 00:34:944 - same reason as above ^
  12. 01:26:784 (86784|0,86784|1,87264|1,87264|0) - hmm, i would not to repeat again, ayyy
  13. Well, fine diff

    [Hard]
  14. 00:46:464 (46464|0,46944|1) - if you decide to follows vocal with LN here, so this part is need to be given as LN too 00:45:984 (45984|3) - since that parts is start losing all other instrument (except vocals like afterwards pattern)
  15. 00:47:904 (47904|2) - this just . . . too ez for this difficulty level laaaa, you can start layering 1/4 here since they're also really loud to map
  16. 00:50:544 - add one more note here like 00:54:384 - it have same kick polyrhythm
  17. 00:57:504 (57504|0,57504|1,57984|1,57984|0) - well then, they're really different this time . . . suggest to try this http://puu.sh/qzTXf/7d7b7266ee.jpg
  18. 01:20:064 (80064|3,80304|3,80544|3) - this just not feels really good, you can layer this 01:20:544 (80544|3,81024|1) - to 2 4 column
  19. 01:41:664 (101664|0) - same reason as my previously mod
  20. 02:23:184 (143184|2,143304|1) - those note come too early with guitar sound itself, it's clearly start on 02:23:244 - 02:23:364 - (with 1/8 snaps)
  21. 02:25:104 - damn, i think it's same this time . . . those guitar come too late, i highly recommended you to confirm those issue with QAT first (more better to do that before qualify)
  22. 02:26:784 (146784|0,146904|1) - this still 1/6 for sure . . . it still have 2 sound in around 02:26:784 - to 02:26:944 -
  23. 02:27:104 - same ^ still 1/6
  24. 02:57:024 (177024|0,177024|1,177264|0) - Ctrl H . . . it have different instrument from previous pattern

    [Insane]
  25. 00:02:064 (2064|2,2064|1) - move them to 1 and 4 column ? since the first sound is still same with 00:01:824 - also pressing 1/4 at 2nd column in three times was really pain too i feel
  26. 00:10:824 (10824|1) - 00:11:904 (11904|1,12384|2) - 00:14:304 (14304|2) - 00:15:264 (15264|1) - please consider this LN length consistency with your hard diff too . . . that would be more good if you explain why (?) you do that
  27. 02:22:344 (142344|1,142464|2,142464|3) - what
  28. 02:55:044 (175044|3) - ghost note, i really can't hear clear sound here . . . please delete it
  29. I have no more complains with this diff . . . but please check the snap issue like on Hard diff and also LN consistency with other diff


Call me back when you've already check everything ~
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

ddal ddal song ~


  • [General Issues]
  1. Why you not start the offset at here ? 00:00:384 - since you've already start mapping at that position too oki
  2. Your soft-hitwhistle have much unnecessary blank spot in the end http://puu.sh/qzSsM/b4faa1495c.png here is my fix http://puu.sh/qzSvU/3e85b7e9e9.wav doki
  3. Metadata fine https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Se8bbsUFjC8 official record studio on youtube, and also p/5329965

    |1|2|3|4|


    [Easy]
  4. 00:10:824 - LN should be start here just like all other diffs
  5. 00:11:424 - 00:13:344 - if you decide to follow same sound like other diff, then it should be 1/2 snap too this time, that's not really hard too for this diff level . . . make it consistent (but if you feel 1/2 LN is hard for Easy, you can change it to single note instead of LN)
  6. 00:23:664 (23664|0,24144|0) - that's sound was different this time, try to move this 00:23:664 (23664|0) - into 2nd column (please make this more simply as possible to current rhythm)
  7. 01:49:824 (109824|0,109824|1) - swap this to right side, since they're really different instrument with 01:50:304 (110304|1,110304|0) - newbie player will get confuse to read that if you keep that in same column
  8. alright no more on this diff (but a little boring hhh, nvm)
    all applied here

    [Normal]
  9. 00:02:184 - not going to add at least a note in here ? that drum sound was really loud this time i'll let it empty siince hard diff just 1 note
  10. 00:26:784 (26784|3,26784|2,27264|3,27264|2) - since they're have different instrument, that would be more good if you place them into different column too fixed
  11. 00:33:024 - 00:34:944 - same reason as above ^ ookay
  12. 01:26:784 (86784|0,86784|1,87264|1,87264|0) - hmm, i would not to repeat again, ayyy LMayo
  13. Well, fine diff

    [Hard]
  14. 00:46:464 (46464|0,46944|1) - if you decide to follows vocal with LN here, so this part is need to be given as LN too 00:45:984 (45984|3) - since that parts is start losing all other instrument (except vocals like afterwards pattern) wut, idk but i'm gonna reject it lol sorry
  15. 00:47:904 (47904|2) - this just . . . too ez for this difficulty level laaaa, you can start layering 1/4 here since they're also really loud to map welp okay
  16. 00:50:544 - add one more note here like 00:54:384 - it have same kick polyrhythm yap
  17. 00:57:504 (57504|0,57504|1,57984|1,57984|0) - well then, they're really different this time . . . suggest to try this http://puu.sh/qzTXf/7d7b7266ee.jpg okay, btw you give a wrong timing
  18. 01:20:064 (80064|3,80304|3,80544|3) - this just not feels really good, you can layer this 01:20:544 (80544|3,81024|1) - to 2 4 column okay
  19. 01:41:664 (101664|0) - same reason as my previously mod same
  20. 02:23:184 (143184|2,143304|1) - those note come too early with guitar sound itself, it's clearly start on 02:23:244 - 02:23:364 - (with 1/8 snaps)
  21. 02:25:104 - damn, i think it's same this time . . . those guitar come too late, i highly recommended you to confirm those issue with QAT first (more better to do that before qualify)
  22. 02:26:784 (146784|0,146904|1) - this still 1/6 for sure . . . it still have 2 sound in around 02:26:784 - to 02:26:944 -
  23. 02:27:104 - same ^ still 1/6
  24. 02:57:024 (177024|0,177024|1,177264|0) - Ctrl H . . . it have different instrument from previous pattern

    [Insane]
  25. 00:02:064 (2064|2,2064|1) - move them to 1 and 4 column ? since the first sound is still same with 00:01:824 - also pressing 1/4 at 2nd column in three times was really pain too i feel i'll keep it since this bpm wont be really painful
  26. 00:10:824 (10824|1) - 00:11:904 (11904|1,12384|2) - 00:14:304 (14304|2) - 00:15:264 (15264|1) - please consider this LN length consistency with your hard diff too . . . that would be more good if you explain why (?) you do that fixed instead
  27. 02:22:344 (142344|1,142464|2,142464|3) - what
  28. 02:55:044 (175044|3) - ghost note, i really can't hear clear sound here . . . please delete it okay
  29. I have no more complains with this diff . . . but please check the snap issue like on Hard diff and also LN consistency with other diff


Call me back when you've already check everything ~
i wont reply about the guitar part, i'll confirm it with QAT asap
thanks Avalon >w<)~
Satria_Garuda
Why not add a video to this?
Natsu
Can I take this mp3?

BTW don't use anime BG :(
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Natsu wrote:

Can I take this mp3?

BTW don't use anime BG :(
Aaaaa natsu will map GFRIEND <3<3<3
sure, just take it

Btw help me to find BG for Gfriend's navillera xD i just can't found a HD BG for this so i use anime bg lol
Topic Starter
Shinzo-
OKAY !
14:46 Shinzo-: hi blocko ._.
14:46 *Blocko is away: afk brb
14:46 Blocko: hiya
14:46 Shinzo-: do you get my message ?
14:47 Blocko: about the snaps?
14:47 Shinzo-: yes ._.
14:47 Blocko: uhh did feerum help you out or something
14:47 Blocko: i think i was out that time
14:47 Shinzo-: no xD
14:48 Blocko: ripperino
14:48 Shinzo-: hehe yea actually still waiting for you.. or feerum
14:48 Blocko: aaaaaaaa
14:48 Shinzo-: hehe xD
14:48 Blocko: hold on
14:48 Shinzo-: okay >w<
15:43 Blocko: wew it's almost 4am
15:43 Blocko: uhh
15:43 Blocko: what song was it agakin
15:43 *Shinzo- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1027188 GFRIEND - NAVILLERA]
15:43 Shinzo-: well it's almost 4pm hahaha xD (in here lol)
15:44 Blocko: nice
15:44 Shinzo-: hmm
15:46 Blocko: looking at it
15:46 Blocko: hmmmmmmm
15:46 Shinzo-: eh ?
15:46 Shinzo-: ye
15:46 Blocko: 02:23:184 (143184|2,143304|1,143424|0) - looks good
15:46 Blocko: 02:25:104 (145104|0,145224|1,145344|3,145464|2,145584|1,145704|2) - looks good
15:47 Blocko: you pretty much did a good job on estimating those irregular snaps
15:47 Shinzo-: ha xD
15:48 Shinzo-: ok im confused lol
15:48 Blocko: hmm?
15:48 Shinzo-: ur not joking right? ._. i-i mean dat"looks good"
15:49 Blocko: i'm not kidding
15:49 Shinzo-: okay xD
15:49 Blocko: they sound very close to the music
15:49 Shinzo-: yey
15:49 Blocko: question on 02:26:304 - though: do you want to be really accurate on this part or let it stay as it is?
15:50 Shinzo-: really accurate will be awkward imo ._. if it's fine like that then i think i'll keep it
15:50 Blocko: yeah it'd be super awkward lmao
15:50 Shinzo-: ye hahaha xD :P
15:51 Blocko: it would look like this http://puu.sh/qITdf/88844a0936.png
15:51 Shinzo-: lol xD
15:51 Shinzo-: 02:21:984 - kinda late, is it okay ?
15:52 Blocko: yeah that's fine
15:53 Shinzo-: 02:26:784 - is this fine too ?
15:53 Blocko: alternatively, you can map 02:26:304 - like [http://puu.sh/qIThM/ef379a35c8.png this]
15:53 Blocko: yeah that sounds like you're mapping to the drums and hi-hat
15:54 Shinzo-: 02:26:304 - well is it better to follow da pic you give ?
15:54 Blocko: hmm
15:55 Shinzo-: omg xD
15:55 Shinzo-: actually im fine with da pict tho
15:55 Blocko: i'd say yea, it follows a distinct snap like the semi-audible hi-hat
15:55 Shinzo-: okayy :D
15:56 Blocko: they're 1/4 LNs to give off a feeling that they're used for the guitar
15:56 Blocko: if you know what i mean
15:56 Shinzo-: ye i understando
15:56 Blocko: aaa it's almost 4am
15:56 Blocko: anything else?
15:56 Shinzo-: ok
15:56 Shinzo-: just that tho
15:57 Shinzo-: that guitar snap is fine right ?
15:57 Shinzo-: since it's the only problem haha :P
15:57 Blocko: yee it's fine
15:57 Shinzo-: i meanissue lol
15:57 Shinzo-: okayy
15:57 Shinzo-: thank you
15:57 Blocko: it's just that 1/6 part that needs changing
15:57 Blocko: no problem, good luck!
15:57 Shinzo-: yea changed sir :3
15:57 Shinzo-: good night blocko >W<
15:57 Blocko: goodnight~

i think it's ready now :D !!!
[ A v a l o n ]
okay . . . let's give a try then
Qualified
REUSE-ABLE
OWO
Congratz aaaa! XD
Kuo Kyoka
this song o:
congratulation
Natsu
You didn't change the anime bg :(, current one is not even related to the song, there are alot of nice ones if you search in google.
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

okay . . . let's give a try then
Qualified
AAAAAAA THANK YOUUUUUUU ~~~~ <3

REUSE-ABLE wrote:

OWO
Congratz aaaa! XD
Thanks xD

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

this song o:
congratulation
Eheee~
Thanks :D

Natsu wrote:

You didn't change the anime bg :(, current one is not even related to the song, there are alot of nice ones if you search in google.
Sorry xD heu heu
It just look fit with the song..
(Da girl look like eunha tho lmao) (i mean long haired eunha)
XD XD XD XD XD
Muu-chan

Natsu wrote:

You didn't change the anime bg :(, current one is not even related to the song, there are alot of nice ones if you search in google.
You should check this one, mate..
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/282345

For Shinzo-
Something little that bother me is SV on 02:47:784 - x1.30 in 1/4 snap.. is kinda sudden.. maybe? I'm sorry but i'm bad at SV :( it just my opinion.. Kalau yang udah tau beatnya mungkin ok ok aja.. cuman buat yg baru denger / main, feels like sudden ;;
I enjoyed the other SV btw :3

Anyway.. congrats! :)
Xiaolin

Natsu wrote:

You didn't change the anime bg :(, current one is not even related to the song, there are alot of nice ones if you search in google.
+1

Shinzo- wrote:

Btw help me to find BG for Gfriend's navillera xD i just can't found a HD BG for this so i use anime bg lol
There're so many good BGs if you googled "gfriend navillera" it didn't even take an hour to find one.. .__. Since this is still qualified, maybe you can use these:

1 2 3 4 5

On a side note: Just because the girl in the BG looks like one of the members, doesn't mean it fits..

EDIT: Using an anime BG for a non-related anime song is actually fine IMO.. But, at least make it sensible. Don't just put any random anime BG and call it a map. Also, if you looked at this BG and the MV, you'd know that this BG is 0% related to the song..
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Muu-chan wrote:

For Shinzo-
Something little that bother me is SV on 02:47:784 - x1.30 in 1/4 snap.. is kinda sudden.. maybe? I'm sorry but i'm bad at SV :( it just my opinion.. Kalau yang udah tau beatnya mungkin ok ok aja.. cuman buat yg baru denger / main, feels like sudden ;;
I enjoyed the other SV btw :3

Anyway.. congrats! :)
dat sv still predictable imo, ive look to the other player, ye they still can perfect on that SV in their first try :D
anyway.. Thanks !! :D

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Natsu wrote:

You didn't change the anime bg :(, current one is not even related to the song, there are alot of nice ones if you search in google.
+1

Shinzo- wrote:

Btw help me to find BG for Gfriend's navillera xD i just can't found a HD BG for this so i use anime bg lol
There're so many good BGs if you googled "gfriend navillera" it didn't even take an hour to find one.. .__. Since this is still qualified, maybe you can use these:

1 2 3 4 5

On a side note: Just because the girl in the BG looks like one of the members, doesn't mean it fits..

EDIT: Using an anime BG for a non-related anime song is actually fine IMO.. But, at least make it sensible. Don't just put any random anime BG and call it a map. Also, if you looked at this BG and the MV, you'd know that this BG is 0% related to the song..
okay.. but the girl looks like one of the gfriend's member and there's a butterfly fly over her (navillera means something that refer to butterfly) so i think it will be fine with this BG
oh you can check this map's BG
Verniy_Chan
bnyak yg complain tntng BG, lel XD
Gratz Shin ET~
[ A v a l o n ]
why people complained about bg so much lol . . . that's BG is really fine for me btw, even i'm not really an anime lovers
actually this BG is not related to any anime-movies/series (?) it just an artwork, also it's fit with song atmosphere itself imo
and also there is so much korean people outside that drawing comic/anime-like things too ayy . . . try LINE webtoon

for SV, i can read and press it well (even for first time when i playing it) . . . so, no problem
Xiaolin

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

and also there is so much korean people outside that drawing comic/anime-like things too ayy . . . try LINE webtoon
I know that Koreans draw anime and stuff.. Besides, this really has nothing to do with the topic IMO. ^

But, I'll just shut it. I'm not gonna force the mapper to change it. And, on a side note, late grats. \ o /
Muu-chan
As long as it isn't Rated 18+ i think ok

Btw i always dim the BG when play something..
Frim4503
just dim it when you playing.

(i think dat bg is fit the song)
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