Hey m4m here
damn this song is so catchy
Okay that's all from me, there're some distance issues that still should be fixed imo. In the last diff the jumps are way too overdone for a 135bpm song so I'd recommend to reduce them a bit and add some triplets/streams instead. Good luck
damn this song is so catchy
[general]
- Right now the aimod is showing tag issues with capsule's diff.
- In my opinion the kiai section should be the following:
from 00:36:110 - to 00:48:554 -
from 00:50:332 - to 01:04:554 -
from 01:18:777 - to 01:31:221 -
from 01:32:999 - to 01:50:777 -
[The Anthem of the Heart] - Why 1,4x for SV?? It's waaaay too slow imo. I know you should change a lot of things if you change it, but I think u really should. Try 1,7~1,8 i guess
- The hitsounding is quite messed imo, i recommend you to follow what eraser did on his diff. Basically claps on 2 & 4 white ticks.
- 00:07:221 (4,5) - These single notes seems a bit random imo, basically because 00:03:666 (4) - here u used a slider reverse.
- 00:16:555 (1,2,1,2) - these jumps appear suddenly after a low distanced pattern which is 00:14:776 (1,2,3) - I recommend you to increase spacing 00:14:776 (1,2,3) - these and keep distance consistent for 00:15:666 (3,4,1) - these.
- 00:18:110 - 00:18:221 - Add 2 circles so it's a triplet? it gives good emphasis for vocals
- 00:20:110 - Why this section don't follow vocals like the other slider? (00:09:887 (3) - 00:12:999 (1) -)
- 00:21:665 (6,7,1) - Well this jumps is way too high imo. try to reduce it a bit
- 00:23:443 (3,1,2) - The difference of spacing is too much. Ok you're giving emphasis 00:23:443 (3,1) - because of vocals but 00:23:666 (1,2) - also has a similar strength in terms of music. I suggest you to add more distance between those 2 sliders.
- 00:28:777 - triple? same as before... it feels a bit empty
- 00:32:332 - ^
- 00:40:554 (2,1,2) - For this section i'd following vocals instead. maybe try out this rhythm? http://puu.sh/s6BU6/39ac91cb5b.jpg
- 01:06:554 (2,2) - stack?
- 01:13:666 (2,1) - personally i don't like these kind of overlaps, maybe try something else?
- 01:25:888 (1,1,1) - This SV changes are quite... aa I don't know but they really don't fit imo, they are waaaaaay too slow xd Also 01:29:443 (1,2) - these are pretty similar and don't have SV changes so try to be more consistent with this.
- 01:55:888 (4,1) - you can increase distance here since it's stronger than on the other jumps sections and has less DS.
- 01:56:888 (3) - for this ending part why not increasing SV on this slider?
Overall the diff is not bad, but some jumps are way too overdone and appear suddenly in the map, try to be more consistent in your DS, some sections have very low DS between objects and make everythings slow. Also the SV don't fit the actual difficulty of the map imo. For the kiai sections I mentioned in general you could try adding some green lines and make the SV 1,3x~1,2x or so, so it emphasizes better the actual music. Ah, and also you could try some triplets/stream in this diff, I think it's too much a jumpy map... which is unbalanced imo.
[eraser's] - 00:07:666 (1,2,3) - this transition has a weird flow imo. mainly because 00:08:554 (3) - has a linear movement which make it awkward when playing. maybe try sth like this? http://puu.sh/s6CCF/05dda8e26c.jpg
- 01:02:221 - add note in between?
- 01:09:443 (4) - make it a 1/2 slider + circle instead? It following better the vocals+music imo
- 01:50:777 - You could try with some triples for all this sections. would fit nice
[shira's] - 00:17:999 (5,6) - I'd preffer a whole stream here adding a note 00:18:221 - here or move the triplet to 00:18:332 (1) -
- 00:39:666 (1) - Move it a bit up to the left so 00:39:666 (1,2,3) - this sections has similar DS
- 00:50:332 (1) - for this slider i'd recommend you to angle it like this or similar so it flows better http://puu.sh/s6D7w/8906d53244.jpg
- 01:29:443 (1) - make this slider smoother? I know you can :p
- 01:31:221 (1,2) - right now this pattern feels a bit awkward because you're starting the reverse on a red tick and there's not giving the best of emphasis imo. I'd try to add 2 1/2 slider instead.
- 01:49:888 (2) - NC because of SV change
[capsule's] - 00:14:777 (1,2) - convert these into a 1/1 slider so it doesn't full too crowded of objects?
- 00:41:666 (4,5) - These slider starting of red ticks feels a bit off imo since the white ticks should be emphasized with the head of a slider instead of the tail, imo it plays better like that. Why not make these 2 sliders into a circle + 1/1 slider?
- 01:16:999 - same as before, this white tick would be better if you emphasize it with the head of a slider instead, why not moving 01:17:443 (5) - this so it starts 01:16:999 - here?
[exkyu's] - wtf the green line at 02:25:221? xD I guess you missclicked somewhere
- 01:18:777 - Since it's an easy diff you shouldn't be changing SV because it may confuse newbie palyers
Okay that's all from me, there're some distance issues that still should be fixed imo. In the last diff the jumps are way too overdone for a 135bpm song so I'd recommend to reduce them a bit and add some triplets/streams instead. Good luck