我会慢慢改的,因为我以前做NORMAL都在对鼓,第一次碰到这种人声鼓很多错开来的,有点不知所措,导致就作混乱了QWQ真的这曲子NORMAL做起来不太友好,然后很多鼓点强的让我没办法忽视384059043 wrote:
via forum pm[Abhor's Normal]
- 00:10:185 (5,6) - 这里的时间间隔是3/2拍,而此前的所有stack了滑条的circle与前一个物件的间距都是1/1拍,在Normal里很容易引起误读,尽量避免
- 02:10:509 - 加Kiai
这个难度我不仔细摸了,指出几个问题:
第一个问题比较重要。二、三是后话了
- 一是跟轨的问题,00:11:158 - 之前以及kiai的开始到00:53:320 - 很明显只跟人声,而在00:53:644 (1,2) - 处却跟了鼓,把00:53:807 - 00:54:131 - 的人声忽略了。这样跳换音轨对Normal玩家很不友好,而且听上去也会很别扭、音效也加不好。01:32:563 (3) - 也是同理。
- 二是排版的问题。现在全图是按转圈圈的方式铺开的(可以看一看00:55:104 - 01:15:698 - ,这段比较典型,一连转了若干圈逆时针)。这样的flow导致排版就显得集中于中心而放不开、空间利用度低、打着也缺乏一定的趣味性。
- 三是滑条样式的选择。全图的滑条样式感觉比较随便,虽然大部分对于flow的实现到位,但滑条前后在直观上却没有紧密地联系在一起,以02:40:996 (5,1,2,3,4) - 为例,瞬间让人产生滑条4的样式选择并没有经过仔细考虑的感觉。
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先这样QWQ这个曲子我着实不是很会做,如果实在不行建议你删掉它
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