Alright gonna do a proper mod now.ive read it but sorry im not applying this- You've been told by quite a few people to change the background and diffname now, you should really listen to them. You replied to me earlier saying that the background isn't unrankable or NFSW - you're 100% right there, but that's not the point; it just doesn't fit with the map. A background like this just doesn't work well with a song like this. Remember we're just trying to help you improve the map (:
- Spacing seems completely random through out the map. Take a look at this video, this will help you improve spacing a lot.
- Add the following into tags: marathon, dnb, drum and bass.00:20:830 (5,1) - Small jump, 00:23:573 (5,1) - same sound, but much bigger jump. Fix this.
00:21:173 (1) - You have a slider here for this sound, but here 00:23:916 (1,2) - for the same sound, you have two circles. This isn't a huge problem but if you looked out for places like this through out the map and fixed them the map would feel a lot nicer to play
00:21:687 (3,5) - This overlap is ugly and doesn't fit. While none of the other objects around this time overlap, these two do. Please fix.
00:32:145 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Why suddenly make a section with no sliders? The song is calm in this part and should be mapped the same as the other parts before which sound exactly the same.
00:48:602 (1) - Hear that beat? That's heavy, which indicates for a jump. Right now it's way too close to the slider.
00:54:088 (1) - Ok this stream feels way too spaced, just reduce that a little bit. Also I think some direction changes at appropriate times wouldn't do any harm.
01:08:402 (3,4) - Stack these with the slider end.
01:15:516 (5) - Bad overlap with 01:15:859 (7,8,1) -
01:20:145 (1) - Why does the spacing increase when the pitch starts getting lower wat.
01:25:288 (7,2) - Not really a fan of this overlap.
01:40:716 (1) - Add some direction changes, this is boring as it is.
01:55:459 (8) - Blanket this with the stream.
01:56:402 (3,4) - Stack with the slider end.
02:19:373 (2,3) - ^
02:23:059 (13,14,1,2,3,4,5) - What's your reason for stacking the first notes?
02:24:430 (12,13,1,2,3,4,5) - Here makes sense, because you can hear a change in pitch, but the one above doesn't make sense.
02:36:945 (1,2,3) - Compared to other spacing, these three sliders are too close.
02:50:659 (1,2) - Why the jump? There should be a jump here 02:52:030 (1) - where you can actually hear a louder beat.
03:00:259 (1) - There should be a bigger jump here.
03:29:059 (1) - Why is there a stream here? I can't hear 1/4s in the background. (I might be not listening hard enough though)
03:37:888 (3,4) - Stack with the slider end.
03:48:602 (2,3,4) - Looks odd seeing as there's nothing else around it that looks like this.
03:49:973 (2) - Too close to the slider.
03:52:373 (1) - You missed a good opportunity for a stream here.
03:57:516 (8) - As you can see this isn't perfectly blanketed with the stream
04:07:116 (10,11,1,2,3,4,5) - Not really sure about this but it doesn't seem right.
04:12:773 (11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - The start shouldn't be stacked.
04:14:316 (1) - Ok from there until 04:16:973 (16) - this part is mapped perfectly so I'll give you that.
04:36:259 (1) - Boring stream, add direction changes to spice it up.
04:46:116 (4,5) - Bad overlap, fix.
05:08:830 (7,8) - These are too close.
05:25:288 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't think this works very well personally but if you're sure you want to do it, please silence the slider ends.
Hope this helps. Good luck with the map.
so as you mentioned pishfat pro mapper's spacing video, my spacing does make sense between emphasizing stuffs and kiai
the problem i've found you guys not understanding is the most simple jumps through out the map.
those jumps are random? not following musics? to me, is fits where is should be and that makes it plays good
why? because naturally they are representing themselves similar to me and the spacing is actually not the point (00:20:830 (5,1,5,1) - you've mentioned, are simply similar patterns, they don't jump too far to emphasize anything)
this is actually my understanding on this map, which i've mentioned several times. you guys may have different understanding, but to me it works
discussing circles can vary a lot as I realized these days through you guys' comment, if this map sucks why do people like it?
this map is for playing not circle-kidnapping just because people have different understandings of mappings and musics
EDIT: oh and about the bg i've asked different people's opinion, they said fine, not just because you guys leave comments here so it looks like everybody disagree with me, just to clarify. and bg is the stuff i really think it does not need a change.
diff name i'm considering but not sure yet, please read my poor english.