Hellohello, as I've discussed to you in-game
Why does the spacing of this stream increase as the pitch starts getting lower? 01:20:145 (1) - I think the spacing should decrease.Listen to the music, it does have a sound become stronger gradually
Also this background doesn't really fit at all, but that's up to you lol. And please, change the diff name...
No kd. Good luck with the map (:
Honestly saying, I'm totally agree with Bakari.I play my map to map, and adjust those to fit musics, maybe that is how it varies from "make sense mapping"
Some patterns look really random and spacing changes make zero sense.
Some curve sliders don't make sense as well (for example 01:57:516 (2) - )
By the way, rhythm looks pretty neat for me.
And you should pay more attention on spacings.
Great map!thank you
Both the diffname and background were already mentioned by me. I have not recieved any feedback on these.I also find this statement and the mod made by Bakari reasonable.
02:24:688 - not the same has not the same electric sound as 02:24:602 - so the streams sounds wanky around here an example how it should have been is 02:09:516 (1) - herethanks
so have you heard 02:09:602 - a sound yet?
02:15:259 - imo should be a note here to be consistent with the other occasions for pattern, no, i fixed this and thought about this from previous mods, and some you think unnecessary i mapped streams some you think it does have 1/4s i don't put any notes. and that is because it plays much better and it does fit the music.
03:40:373 (2) - there should be a note why slider not allowed?
imo there's alot of undermapping like mapping zero streams when there are clear streams in the music, mapping no 5 note streams when they are in the music and mapping triplets instead. I just picked a few of those undermapping things out. Undermapping is usually okay, but not for an Extra of this difficulty.
for playing I made kiais much more simple, that is the most which you called undermapping stuffs i remember so far, and it is ok while playing it, it does fit itself
The spacings do not get higher in the stream sections which i find pretty weird as well considering the music is pretty intense at the end of the song.
i wanted to keep it same spacing, and it is ok to map this way
btw. It just seems to me that you want to avoid poping the bubble at all cost. of course, this map does have the quality of being ranked.
Bakari wrote:Both the diffname and background were already mentioned by me. I have not recieved any feedback on these.I also find this statement and the mod made by Bakari reasonable.
Alright gonna do a proper mod now.ive read it but sorry im not applying this- You've been told by quite a few people to change the background and diffname now, you should really listen to them. You replied to me earlier saying that the background isn't unrankable or NFSW - you're 100% right there, but that's not the point; it just doesn't fit with the map. A background like this just doesn't work well with a song like this. Remember we're just trying to help you improve the map (:
- Spacing seems completely random through out the map. Take a look at this video, this will help you improve spacing a lot.
- Add the following into tags: marathon, dnb, drum and bass.00:20:830 (5,1) - Small jump, 00:23:573 (5,1) - same sound, but much bigger jump. Fix this.
00:21:173 (1) - You have a slider here for this sound, but here 00:23:916 (1,2) - for the same sound, you have two circles. This isn't a huge problem but if you looked out for places like this through out the map and fixed them the map would feel a lot nicer to play
00:21:687 (3,5) - This overlap is ugly and doesn't fit. While none of the other objects around this time overlap, these two do. Please fix.
00:32:145 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Why suddenly make a section with no sliders? The song is calm in this part and should be mapped the same as the other parts before which sound exactly the same.
00:48:602 (1) - Hear that beat? That's heavy, which indicates for a jump. Right now it's way too close to the slider.
00:54:088 (1) - Ok this stream feels way too spaced, just reduce that a little bit. Also I think some direction changes at appropriate times wouldn't do any harm.
01:08:402 (3,4) - Stack these with the slider end.
01:15:516 (5) - Bad overlap with 01:15:859 (7,8,1) -
01:20:145 (1) - Why does the spacing increase when the pitch starts getting lower wat.
01:25:288 (7,2) - Not really a fan of this overlap.
01:40:716 (1) - Add some direction changes, this is boring as it is.
01:55:459 (8) - Blanket this with the stream.
01:56:402 (3,4) - Stack with the slider end.
02:19:373 (2,3) - ^
02:23:059 (13,14,1,2,3,4,5) - What's your reason for stacking the first notes?
02:24:430 (12,13,1,2,3,4,5) - Here makes sense, because you can hear a change in pitch, but the one above doesn't make sense.
02:36:945 (1,2,3) - Compared to other spacing, these three sliders are too close.
02:50:659 (1,2) - Why the jump? There should be a jump here 02:52:030 (1) - where you can actually hear a louder beat.
03:00:259 (1) - There should be a bigger jump here.
03:29:059 (1) - Why is there a stream here? I can't hear 1/4s in the background. (I might be not listening hard enough though)
03:37:888 (3,4) - Stack with the slider end.
03:48:602 (2,3,4) - Looks odd seeing as there's nothing else around it that looks like this.
03:49:973 (2) - Too close to the slider.
03:52:373 (1) - You missed a good opportunity for a stream here.
03:57:516 (8) - As you can see this isn't perfectly blanketed with the stream
04:07:116 (10,11,1,2,3,4,5) - Not really sure about this but it doesn't seem right.
04:12:773 (11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - The start shouldn't be stacked.
04:14:316 (1) - Ok from there until 04:16:973 (16) - this part is mapped perfectly so I'll give you that.
04:36:259 (1) - Boring stream, add direction changes to spice it up.
04:46:116 (4,5) - Bad overlap, fix.
05:08:830 (7,8) - These are too close.
05:25:288 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't think this works very well personally but if you're sure you want to do it, please silence the slider ends.
Hope this helps. Good luck with the map.