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hi

[General]
- resize all bg to 1024x768
- pause button的部分和背景顏色太接近了, 建議加深陰影黑色/減少間格, 或移除陰影改用黑色邊框或暗色系光暈
- audio lead-in 所有難度都統一 (另外2000可能比1500好些, 現在Manaka的hp-bar最後還是瞬移了)
- KIAI線snap到高白線上, 現在沒有所謂的綠線bug了, 不用把綠線擺在note前

[Rinko]
<00:30:165> (1) use S:finish
<00:36:279> (1) ^
- there're more place capable of putting finishes and i think putting them makes better rhythm, but up to you~
<01:01:502> (2,3) try not to overlap (2,3)

[Manaka]
- 開頭的部分能好好的排一下, 太直角了
<00:27:107> 認為這裡擺個spinner會比Breaktime好
<00:36:279> 下note

[Nene]
<00:07:617> (2,3,4) keep spacing?
<00:10:292> (1,2) ^
<00:35:897> (7,1,2) spacing
<01:42:776> (4,5,6) spacing
<01:50:802> (7) not perfectly stacked
<02:24:814> make this KIAI end where other diff does?

[Love Plus]
<02:24:814> (S) Orz end KIAI during spinner!?
<02:50:754> (T) 刪綠線
<02:53:142> (T) 刪綠線
<03:18:318> (S) again Orz

star

You posted on my queue a long time ago orz.... here's my mod.

General:
The center circle for the spinner is very hard to see, maybe color it black or something so it's visible?
You do know that there are different colors throughout different difficulties, right? (in case this was an oversight).

Rinko:
00:30:165 (1,3) - A bit too square to be wrapping around (2), fix by adding more nodes.
00:32:458 (5) - Not symmetric
01:39:337 (1) - Move up to fit against (5), don't forget to adjust rest of combo accordingly.
01:53:859 (1) - Curve is a bit too sharp to wrap against a circle.

Manaka:
00:55:770 (1) - Don't think this needs to be a new combo
01:08:381 (4) - Not symmetrical, and doesn't wrap around (1) properly.
01:50:228 (4) - placement feels awkward, would have expected it to continue the flow from the arc at (3).
01:55:006 (3) - Asymmetrical
02:00:356 (1) - move endpoint up one grid so it points into (2).
02:23:668 (5) - Too flat against (4)

Nene:
All notes before 00:07:426 - I think the combos are placed kinda randomly, maybe reset the combos before here, then place them at:
00:00:356 (1) -
00:03:031 (1) -
00:06:088 (1) -
If you want shorter combos, then you can also place them on:
00:01:884 (1) -
00:04:941 (1) -

00:29:591 (1) - not NC

Love Plus:
00:03:413 (1) - Looks ugly scrunched up like that, try making symmetric and with more arc.
00:26:916 (3) - Symmetry- raise endpoint by one grid, right 1 grid.
01:14:305 (5) - A bit too sharp
02:58:827 (1,2,3) - Not quite rotationally symmetrical; it'd be best to pick on slider, copy twice more, and rotate those by 120 and 240 degrees to achieve perfection.

Pretty song, TBH I was enjoying Love Plus too much to mod it very thoroughly. Star + Kudostar!

akrolsmir wrote:

You posted on my queue a long time ago orz.... here's my mod.

General:
The center circle for the spinner is very hard to see, maybe color it black or something so it's visible?
You do know that there are different colors throughout different difficulties, right? (in case this was an oversight).

Rinko:
00:30:165 (1,3) - A bit too square to be wrapping around (2), fix by adding more nodes.
00:32:458 (5) - Not symmetric
01:39:337 (1) - Move up to fit against (5), don't forget to adjust rest of combo accordingly.
01:53:859 (1) - Curve is a bit too sharp to wrap against a circle.

Manaka:
00:55:770 (1) - Don't think this needs to be a new combo
01:08:381 (4) - Not symmetrical, and doesn't wrap around (1) properly.
01:50:228 (4) - placement feels awkward, would have expected it to continue the flow from the arc at (3).
01:55:006 (3) - Asymmetrical
02:00:356 (1) - move endpoint up one grid so it points into (2).
02:23:668 (5) - Too flat against (4)

Nene:
All notes before 00:07:426 - I think the combos are placed kinda randomly, maybe reset the combos before here, then place them at:
00:00:356 (1) -
00:03:031 (1) -
00:06:088 (1) -
If you want shorter combos, then you can also place them on:
00:01:884 (1) -
00:04:941 (1) -

00:29:591 (1) - not NC

Love Plus:
00:03:413 (1) - Looks ugly scrunched up like that, try making symmetric and with more arc.
00:26:916 (3) - Symmetry- raise endpoint by one grid, right 1 grid.
01:14:305 (5) - A bit too sharp
02:58:827 (1,2,3) - Not quite rotationally symmetrical; it'd be best to pick on slider, copy twice more, and rotate those by 120 and 240 degrees to achieve perfection.

Pretty song, TBH I was enjoying Love Plus too much to mod it very thoroughly. Star + Kudostar!

fix
and THX your mod and kudostar

XD

传送过来给☆

GJ, 越来越舒畅的排列
就是最后有几个跳完全没有征兆,稍微有点突然,但是不影响整体,可无视本建议
LOVE PLUS+ 无条件支持

前来膜拜星河神mapper

[Rinko]
00:17:171 (1,2,3) - 这spacing是怎么回事
00:26:152 (4,5) - 两个建议，(3)(4)合成一个slider，(4)(5)stack
00:51:566 (1,1) - 靠太近了感觉
01:31:884 (4,5) - 同理

[Manaka]
01:36:088 (1,2,3) - 这里先用折返slider让玩家熟悉节奏之后，后面同样的节奏再用circle比较好
01:42:203 (1) - 比如这里开始换circle

[Nene]
- sb -
00:00:069 - 建议提早渐进，然后在这里00:01:120做一个扩大+消失的效果，不懂mod sb不知道听得懂不 0.0
- other -
00:26:343 (3) - 这里没有tick提醒感觉有点突然0.0
00:29:591 (3) - 突然快了。。
00:35:897 (7,1,2) - spacing
01:01:502 (5) - flow没了，多一次repeat？
01:19:082 (8) - 感觉没什么意思的0.75 0.0
01:34:369 (2,1) - 这里的spacing最好还是遵守0.5速的比较好
02:36:662 (1) - 这里结尾最好听得到比较好，不然接下来的note节奏不好抓
02:38:572 (2) - 02:39:146结束？
03:18:318 (1) - 感觉finish比静音好

[Love Plus]
slider tick rate = 2？因为减速slider太多了最好来点tick提醒下
00:20:802 (3) - 跟vocal的话，circle 00:20:802，slider 00:20:993 - 00:21:375比较好
00:57:107 (3) - 跟vocal的话可以改改
01:18:891 (1) - 这里开始01:19:082？或者circle下紧接spinner？
02:57:872 (6,7,8) - 这circle和slider头跟sliderbody没在一条弧线上感觉很违和
03:26:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里spacing坑爹，这种骗pc的手段一般没有好结果
03:32:076 (1) - 我觉得结尾可能要提前1/8

总的来说不错的图，flow很好，也不坑爹
如果肯下点功夫在slider上就更好了0.0 比如多点shape啊，slider包围circle包好点啊，之类的
恩就这么多了

Love Plus:
02:24:814 (1) - end at 02:26:152 (x) - ?

nene:
00:29:591 (3) - seems a bit far from previous.
01:38:572 (9) - ^
02:21:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如果你是想要弄小jump的話這裡的spacing最好保持一致,和後面的也一樣.

可以的話把manaka和rinko做到和其他的一樣長.

title & artist的話，我個人建議是譯成 [Valentine no Ai Kotoba](バレンタインの愛言葉), 人名的話把名字在前面 (Saori Hayami, Sakura Tange, Yuko Minaguchi),符合西方習慣.

對了，也許也會有人叫你把topic title也改掉讓整個title能完整顯示(例:S.Hayami, S.Tange, Y.Minaguchi - Valentine no Ai Kotoba)，到時改就是了，其實我也不太關心這個.

abalee wrote:

Love Plus:
02:24:814 (1) - end at 02:26:152 (x) - ?

nene:
00:29:591 (3) - seems a bit far from previous.
01:38:572 (9) - ^
02:21:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如果你是想要弄小jump的話這裡的spacing最好保持一致,和後面的也一樣.

可以的話把manaka和rinko做到和其他的一樣長.

title & artist的話，我個人建議是譯成 [Valentine no Ai Kotoba](バレンタインの愛言葉), 人名的話把名字在前面 (Saori Hayami, Sakura Tange, Yuko Minaguchi),符合西方習慣.

對了，也許也會有人叫你把topic title也改掉讓整個title能完整顯示(例:S.Hayami, S.Tange, Y.Minaguchi - Valentine no Ai Kotoba)，到時改就是了，其實我也不太關心這個.

FIX~

唔..再提點小意見.
Nene：
很多地方都用10%的音量來消slidertick的聲音，其實倒不如把 slider tick rate 改成 0.5,那樣其實可以少加很多綠線，分也不會少很多.現在的話也可以pass只是看起來蛋疼了點.
00:08:381 (4,5) - & 00:11:820 (3,4) -同為 1/1 sapcing不一致，大概是因為一段是0.5x另外一段是0.75x吧，改動一下好點.

edit.

abalee wrote:

唔..再提點小意見.
Nene：
很多地方都用10%的音量來消slidertick的聲音，其實倒不如把 slider tick rate 改成 0.5,那樣其實可以少加很多綠線，分也不會少很多.現在的話也可以pass只是看起來蛋疼了點.
00:08:381 (4,5) - & 00:11:820 (3,4) -同為 1/1 sapcing不一致，大概是因為一段是0.5x另外一段是0.75x吧，改動一下好點.

FIX

I'm seeing the SB objects in the list, but I don't actually see the object itself.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/99786 . Also, the pokie.png doesn't look right. the "p" looks more like an uppercase "D". Make sure to check into that as well.


[Nene]

01:57:299 (1,2) - Honestly, this doesn't look very neat. You can try stacking (2) under the slider and moving 01:57:872 (3,1) down a bit.

whymeman wrote:

I'm seeing the SB objects in the list, but I don't actually see the object itself.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/99786 . Also, the pokie.png doesn't look right. the "p" looks more like an uppercase "D". Make sure to check into that as well.


[Nene]

01:57:299 (1,2) - Honestly, this doesn't look very neat. You can try stacking (2) under the slider and moving 01:57:872 (3,1) down a bit.

fix all

Where did the Pokie.png go?

whymeman wrote:

Where did the Pokie.png go?

what? sorry i will reupload

Ah, there we go.

Awesome <3 !!!
Congratz !

Awesome \o/

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