1. Extra (5.02 stars, 434 notes)
2. Normal (1.77 stars, 94 notes)

NoaGamer wrote:

Hello there

you should avoid placing the end of a slider in a downbeat (big white tick in the timeline), my mod will be mostly to help you to fix that

insane

00:02:218 (1) - remove reverse arrow and nc, then add a hitcircle in the downbeat as a nc
00:03:194 (1) - remove nc
00:06:120 (1) - remove reverse arrow and nc, then add a hitcircle in the downbeat as a nc
00:10:023 (1) - ^
00:12:218 (1) - if you really want this slider, remove nc, make it end in the previous blue tick, then add a hitcircle nc in the downbeat
00:13:925 (1) - remove reverse arrow and nc, then add a hitcircle in the downbeat as a nc
00:17:828 (1) - ^
00:21:730 (1) - ^
00:25:633 (1) - remove reverse arrow and nc, but in this case, a slider would be better than a hitcircle in the downbeat as a nc. for this, delete 00:26:242 (2) -
00:29:535 (1) - ^ for this, delete 00:30:145 (2) -
00:41:242 (1) - remove reverse arrow and nc, then add a hitcircle in the downbeat as a nc
00:49:047 (1) - ^
00:52:950 (1) - ^
01:00:754 (1) - remove reverse arrow and nc, but in this case, a slider would be better than a hitcircle in the downbeat as a nc. for this, delete 01:01:364 (2) -
01:04:657 (1) - remove reverse arrow and nc, then add a hitcircle in the downbeat as a nc
01:08:559 (1) - ^
01:20:267 (1) - ^
01:24:169 (1) - ^
01:28:072 (1) - remove reverse arrow and nc, but in this case, a slider would be better than a hitcircle in the downbeat as a nc. for this, delete 01:28:681 (2) -
01:31:974 (1) - remove reverse arrow and nc, then add a hitcircle in the downbeat as a nc
01:35:876 (1) - ^
01:43:681 (1) - ^
01:47:584 (1) - ^
01:55:876 (5) - nc

btw, gr8 map

Softy wrote:

Really enjoy this map and the song
Just make these more readable, at 1st glance it seems they are placed randomly
01:09:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:28:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
Make them look more like this 01:36:364 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - or like 00:59:779 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

Qapitol wrote:

Hello! Modded via IRC, from request in #modreq.

IRC

11:07 Qapitol: will mod 1 min
11:07 Qapitol: just the insane?
11:07 greatnathyboy: Yeah, thanks
11:08 Qapitol: np
11:11 Qapitol: it doesnt look like theres much to complain about with this
11:11 Qapitol: but
11:11 Qapitol: the spacing on the squares is very very large
11:11 Qapitol: i feel as though it should be spaced just a bit less, considering its an insane diff
11:11 Qapitol: like
11:11 Qapitol: those jumps belong in an extra
11:11 greatnathyboy: I dunno really
11:11 greatnathyboy: It might be better to call it an extra
11:12 Qapitol: yeah probably
11:12 greatnathyboy: But the difficulty is below 5 stars
11:12 Qapitol: ill just look and see if theres anything unrankable gimme a sec
11:12 Qapitol: can i just mod here in IRC
11:12 greatnathyboy: ty
11:12 greatnathyboy: Yeah that's fine
11:12 Qapitol: kk
11:13 Qapitol: 00:02:706 (1,2,3,4) - 
11:13 Qapitol: for those
11:13 Qapitol: its right at the beginning
11:13 Qapitol: those jumps are a bit intense 
11:13 Qapitol: like to me its just violin there
11:14 Qapitol: it should be sorta linear
11:14 greatnathyboy: hm
11:14 greatnathyboy: yeah I guess it does expect you to move back rather quickly early on
11:14 Qapitol: maybe a pattern that looks like this 
11:14 Qapitol: https://gyazo.com/87eb69fe6c24da02b5f90441c0ee2de6
11:15 Qapitol: but less spaced
11:16 Qapitol:  00:14:413 (1,2,3,4) - 
11:16 Qapitol: same thing with that
11:16 Qapitol: music isnt intense yet
11:16 greatnathyboy: hm
11:17 greatnathyboy: the pattern you suggested overlaps with the slider so im still working on that
11:17 Qapitol: yeah i just edited it to make the shape :P
11:17 Qapitol: unsure how you'd map it out exactly
11:17 Qapitol: granted at the second pattern you can hear the cello a bit more
11:18 Qapitol: so the pattern can be less linear
11:18 Qapitol: but 
11:18 Qapitol: maybe not the large square
11:19 Qapitol: 00:31:974 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 
11:19 Qapitol: the music is very intense here
11:19 greatnathyboy: hmm i kinda made a triangle shape with the first pattern
11:20 Qapitol: update? ill look
11:20 Qapitol: actually dont update
11:20 Qapitol: just screenshot it
11:20 greatnathyboy: ah too late
11:20 Qapitol: haha its fine
11:20 Qapitol: ill update it
11:20 greatnathyboy: how do you use the screenshot tool anyway?
11:20 Qapitol: shift+F12 to upload it
11:20 Qapitol: immediately
11:21 Qapitol: it opens in a browser window
11:21 Qapitol: yeah that looks much better 
11:21 Qapitol: now for these points
11:21 Qapitol: 00:31:974 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 
11:21 Qapitol: the music is really intense hgere
11:21 Qapitol: here8
11:21 Qapitol: but you used mainly small jumps and sliders
11:22 Qapitol: i feel like if there is a section for large jumps in the song
11:22 Qapitol: this would be it
11:22 greatnathyboy: idk
11:22 Qapitol: its subjective i know
11:22 Qapitol: sorta hitler stuff
11:22 Qapitol: but
11:22 Qapitol: thats just me :P
11:22 greatnathyboy: i kind of feel it's better with rep sliders
11:22 Qapitol: yeah im not bothered if yyou dont change it
11:23 greatnathyboy: im going to take a look at the second pattern you suggested now lol
11:23 Qapitol: you dont need to look at it right now if you dont want
11:24 Qapitol: im just going thru it you can edit it whenever you feel
11:24 greatnathyboy: it was quite easy to edit this one though
11:24 Qapitol: alright
11:25 Qapitol: did you update or screenshot
11:25 greatnathyboy: update
11:25 Qapitol: kk
11:25 Qapitol:  yeah nice
11:25 Qapitol: looks good
11:25 greatnathyboy: btw do maps always have to be possible with dt?
11:26 Qapitol: haha i dont think so
11:26 Qapitol: look at stuff like immortal falme
11:26 Qapitol: flame*
11:26 Qapitol: only rafis can do it
11:26 Qapitol: maybe yamemasita if he tried
11:26 greatnathyboy: haha
11:27 Qapitol: 00:49:535 (1,2,3,4) - 
11:27 Qapitol: is the spacing on this square the same as the others before it?
11:27 Qapitol: i cant tell
11:27 Qapitol: did you distance snap
11:28 greatnathyboy: yeah it is
11:28 Qapitol: ok i actually couldnt tell
11:28 Qapitol: lol
11:28 greatnathyboy: each timing section i went down 0.2x distance depending on slider speed
11:29 Qapitol: ok that makes sense
11:29 Qapitol: 01:00:267 (7) - 
11:29 Qapitol: nc here maybe
11:29 Qapitol: idk
11:29 Qapitol: up to you
11:29 greatnathyboy: nah, i think id have to re-nc the map if i did that
11:30 greatnathyboy: i nc'd on each big tic
11:30 Qapitol: yeah gotcha
11:31 Qapitol: 01:09:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
11:31 Qapitol: somewhere in here maybe a slider to replace 2 circles
11:31 Qapitol: because thats a lot of high bpm singletapping
11:31 Qapitol: for an insane
11:31 Qapitol: spacing will have to be edited for that ho
11:31 greatnathyboy: hm
11:31 Qapitol: tho
11:32 greatnathyboy: might just rename it extra tbh
11:32 Qapitol: yeah probably wise at this poin
11:32 Qapitol: t
11:32 greatnathyboy: i think the singletapping sections are good for the most intense part
11:33 Qapitol: yeah i was just judging by the fact that its an insane diff
11:33 Qapitol: if its extra it should be totally fine
11:33 greatnathyboy: renamed diff name
11:33 Qapitol: alright
11:33 Qapitol:  ill redl after
11:34 Qapitol: 01:44:413 (3) - 
11:34 Qapitol: maybe move this up just a hair
11:34 greatnathyboy: btw, do you know what ubisoft is like using their official backgrounds and osts?
11:34 Qapitol: uhhhh
11:34 Qapitol: i have no idea
11:34 Qapitol: like the background picture?
11:34 Qapitol: i dont think anyone will care about that
11:34 greatnathyboy: yeah
11:35 Qapitol: itd be all the same if you used a painting
11:35 greatnathyboy: ive seen other people use osts so i think that's safe
11:35 Qapitol: like technically its copyright
11:35 Qapitol: but
11:35 Qapitol: no1 cares
11:35 Qapitol: but yeah for this 01:44:413 (3) -  maybe move it up just a little
11:35 Qapitol: so its got the same angle as the jumps right below it
11:35 greatnathyboy: yeah i did
11:35 Qapitol: alright
11:36 Qapitol: and here
11:36 Qapitol: 01:57:828 - 
11:36 Qapitol: spinner?
11:36 greatnathyboy: hmm idk
11:37 greatnathyboy: either way it would work i guess
11:37 Qapitol: yeah it doesnt really matter i just thought it would sound nice
11:37 greatnathyboy: would i do it on the combo number 7?
11:37 Qapitol: i think so
11:38 greatnathyboy: updated it
11:38 greatnathyboy: not sure how well it works
11:39 Qapitol:  you could put it like 1/32 note
11:39 Qapitol: after combo7
11:39 Qapitol: it does play a little odd
11:39 Qapitol: without a last circle i mean
11:41 greatnathyboy: k, i think what i just did plays best
11:42 Qapitol: ill test
11:42 Qapitol: yes
11:42 Qapitol: that si good
11:42 Qapitol: is*
11:42 greatnathyboy: might make the spinner 20% volume tho
11:43 Qapitol: thats up to yo
11:43 Qapitol: u
11:43 Qapitol: i think it sounds ok but its subjective
11:43 Qapitol: again
11:43 Qapitol: oh and maybe go with ar9.2
11:44 Qapitol: its ok with ar9 but 9.2 may be easier to read
11:44 greatnathyboy: ah right
11:44 greatnathyboy: i can't really play it myself so i don't know what ar is best for it
11:44 Qapitol: haha
11:44 Qapitol: yeah its a fun map
11:45 Qapitol: alright i dont think i can find anything else wrong with it
11:45 greatnathyboy: ah right
11:45 Qapitol: mind if i post the IRC in the map thread?
11:45 Qapitol: gotta farm dat KD
11:45 greatnathyboy: yeah that's fine, free kudosu ha
11:45 Qapitol: alright cool
11:45 Qapitol: gl on ranking!

Good luck!

1. At first, you need more difficulties for sure. Create at least 2 more.
   Then the Dif name should actually be "Insane"
   

   1. Below 1.50: Easy
   2. 1.50-2.25: Normal
   3. 2.25-3.75: Hard
   4. 3.75-5.25: Insane
   5. Above 5.25: Expert

   From: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
   
2. Don't put "fight club" in the Tags since its the Title (besides that I am not that sure but i think you can get rid of every tag. But wait for what others will say about this) -> check AiMod
   
   
   Well lets move on: As you said, only extra Dif
   
3. The general problem with your map is, its way to repetitive which is boring.
4. 00:05:633 (4) - sliders like this who are very small don't look good at all when curved. just use straight ones. Same for 00:06:120 (5) - this one also doesn't look good since its not a blanket with anything.
5. 00:06:608 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:12:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:14:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - things like that (and you have a lot of them) look really messy.
6. 00:55:389 (1) - here you start to not overusing the back and forth sliders. do this much earlier. Add streams, longer sliders, etc. to your beatmap
7. 01:09:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again even tho it maybe plays nice it doesn't look to well
8. 01:11:120 breaks... your map is only 2 mins long Map this part. (Breaks in general are awefull imo. Try to avoid breaks)
9. so yeah There isn't that much to mod anymore since your map feels like Ctrl+C the whole time :/ You really should get rid of at least 70% of those back and forth sliders.
   
   So overall: Your Beatmap feels the same through the whole song, you really should change that. Try to not map that messy. And create at least 2 more difficulties.

Zunv wrote:

Hey there from #modreqs
Im kinda new with this but i hope my mod will still help you out:

1. At first, you need more difficulties for sure. Create at least 2 more.
   Then the Dif name should actually be "Insane"
   

   1. Below 1.50: Easy
   2. 1.50-2.25: Normal
   3. 2.25-3.75: Hard
   4. 3.75-5.25: Insane
   5. Above 5.25: Expert

   From: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
   I think the changes I'll do will bring the sr up.
   
2. Don't put "fight club" in the Tags since its the Title (besides that I am not that sure but i think you can get rid of every tag. But wait for what others will say about this) -> check AiMod
   
   
   Well lets move on: As you said, only extra Dif
   
3. The general problem with your map is, its way to repetitive which is boring.
4. 00:05:633 (4) - sliders like this who are very small don't look good at all when curved. just use straight ones.Fixing Same for 00:06:120 (5) - this one also doesn't look good since its not a blanket with anything.
5. 00:06:608 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:12:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:14:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - things like that (and you have a lot of them) look really messy. Fixed?
6. 00:55:389 (1) - here you start to not overusing the back and forth sliders. do this much earlier. Add streams, longer sliders, etc. to your beatmap I don't really think longer sliders will fit except in the parts I already used them in, probably can fit streams in tho
7. 01:09:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again even tho it maybe plays nice it doesn't look to well Eh idk I think it looks fine, I'll wait for more feedback about that
8. 01:11:120 breaks... your map is only 2 mins long Map this part. (Breaks in general are awefull imo. Try to avoid breaks)
9. so yeah There isn't that much to mod anymore since your map feels like Ctrl+C the whole time :/ You really should get rid of at least 70% of those back and forth sliders.
   
   So overall: Your Beatmap feels the same through the whole song, you really should change that. Try to not map that messy. And create at least 2 more difficulties.

Anyways. Good Luck with your map