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Shira

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

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  1. ah....i wana say this song bpm is 160(i don't know 80 is ok or not) ranked one is 80 ;;
  2. big white ticks is not right,so your all NC is wrong.Plz look down and change ↓
  3. 00:00:815 - green line offset set 815 and then add a red line because here is the big white ticks's begain.when you finish this change,you will see strong sound is begain of here(big white tick) 00:00:815 - ,second is 00:03:815 - .Then you can follow the big white ticks to NC colour.About your NC,for example,00:27:815 (2) - you should NC this slider,not 00:27:440 (1) - and here 01:15:815 (4) - same.(Pay attention)→04:08:315 - here is change the strong sound,the reson for this change is 04:06:815 - .so you should add a red line at 04:08:315 - .
  4. At last.check your NC plz. uu combos and hitsounds. my "favorite"
    ill see what i can do with the combos with your suggestions :D


good luck!

thank you very much !
UndeadCapulet
PANIC QUEUE MOD #8:

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The first two notes of the song are anacruses, which means they belong to a measure that happens before the first downbeat. Your red line should be placed at 00:00:815 (1) - for proper timing.
Though tbh your offset is a little late right now. Use offset = 805 and resnap your objects.
It looks like your timing issues caused a lot of NC inconsistencies. After you've retimed your map, go through and redo your NC job to line up more with the real downbeats (you're pretty close but there are certain times, especially in the intro, that you need to recheck)

Rest of the mod will use your current timing:
  1. 00:22:940 (1) - steal from blissfulyoshi if you're having trouble designing heart shapes :> your current one has ugly kinks around the sliderends
  2. 01:24:815 (1,2,3) - If you want to use this vocal rhythming, you should do it more than just this one time in the chorus. Right now it feels out of place. Or maybe mix more of the 01:30:815 (1,2) - rhythm in bc it kinda works better with your rhythm style. (i guess this also applies to the other kiai parts too..)
  3. 01:45:440 (1) - lol you should probably drop sv for this slow section
  4. 02:33:815 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - imo just use the old pattern here again, it's more fun ;w;
  5. 03:00:815 (1) - kinda weird section imo since the violin is being played at 1/4, not 1/2. This would be more fun imo if all the sliders were 1/4 sliders.
  6. 04:18:815 (1) - this part of the song uses this snapping.
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Topic Starter
Shira

UndeadCapulet wrote:

PANIC QUEUE MOD #8:

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The first two notes of the song are anacruses, which means they belong to a measure that happens before the first downbeat. Your red line should be placed at 00:00:815 (1) - for proper timing.
Though tbh your offset is a little late right now. Use offset = 805 and resnap your objects. you mean 815? 805 sounds kinda off for me
It looks like your timing issues caused a lot of NC inconsistencies. After you've retimed your map, go through and redo your NC job to line up more with the real downbeats (you're pretty close but there are certain times, especially in the intro, that you need to recheck) yessir

Rest of the mod will use your current timing:
  1. 00:22:940 (1) - steal from blissfulyoshi if you're having trouble designing heart shapes :> your current one has ugly kinks around the sliderends changed kind of ?? stealing is bad >:c
  2. 01:24:815 (1,2,3) - If you want to use this vocal rhythming, you should do it more than just this one time in the chorus. Right now it feels out of place. Or maybe mix more of the 01:30:815 (1,2) - rhythm in bc it kinda works better with your rhythm style. (i guess this also applies to the other kiai parts too..) I like it like this adds more variety than playing the same thing over and over again
  3. 01:45:440 (1) - lol you should probably drop sv for this slow section it is? x0.9 > x0.7
  4. 02:33:815 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - imo just use the old pattern here again, it's more fun ;w; ..variety.. ;w;
  5. 03:00:815 (1) - kinda weird section imo since the violin is being played at 1/4, not 1/2. This would be more fun imo if all the sliders were 1/4 sliders. as of now, it sounds fine to me since its just hitting the strong beats ahh
  6. 04:18:815 (1) - this part of the song uses this snapping. I'm not going for streams ee
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thank you for the mod !
Lami
00:10:940 (1) - personally,i think you can find more good shape
01:33:252 (5) - i feel little doubt NC usage, compare with 01:21:065 (1,2) -
some part use many NC, but not here.
03:54:440 (2,3) - a bit adventurous partten. too suddenly jump for relax part.
04:07:190 (2,1) - similar with above
04:20:502 (2) - maybe unignorable beat

little confusing on NC usage for me. but i think it can be enough to approach ranked quaility.
Topic Starter
Shira

Lami wrote:

00:10:940 (1) - personally,i think you can find more good shape good enough for me kappa
01:33:252 (5) - i feel little doubt NC usage, compare with 01:21:065 (1,2) -
some part use many NC, but not here. 01:33:065 (1) - maybe nc here?
03:54:440 (2,3) - a bit adventurous partten. too suddenly jump for relax part. kind of low bpm so i think its fine but might change later on
04:07:190 (2,1) - similar with above expanding the notes before the kiai like the ones before
04:20:502 (2) - maybe unignorable beat ? theres a note so not really ignoring it?

little confusing on NC usage for me. but i think it can be enough to approach ranked quaility. lots of complaints about nc so redoing them
thanks for the mod~
Ashton
m4m from my q

[ Illusion]00:25:940 (3,4) - I think this overlap is unnecesarry
00:39:065 (4) - this completly breaks the calmness of the map, lower the volume a bit
00:42:065 (2) - ^
00:45:065 (4) - ^^
00:48:815 (1,2) - I don't like this stack, there a small break in between the notes and I think it would look much nicer if you moved 1 up or 2 down a tad
00:53:690 (3) - make this straight?
01:09:065 (1,2) - the volume gets a bit louder so shouldn't these be bigger than the jumps right before it?
01:34:377 (2,3,4,1) - 1 is in a weird place, maybe consider placing it above 4 or something.
01:38:690 (4,1,2,3) - 4 is overlapping 3 which is weird imo
02:21:440 (2,3) - blanket
02:49:940 (1) - maybe make the slider match the wavy vocals?
02:51:815 (1,2,3,4,1) - sliders 1 and 1 are overlapping
03:25:940 (4) - tbh I think this could be an nc


why not make the combo colours pink and red?
Topic Starter
Shira

Whirl wrote:

m4m from my q

[ Illusion]00:25:940 (3,4) - I think this overlap is unnecesarry since theres kind of a break there i want it to have that cursor dancing feel to it
00:39:065 (4) - this completly breaks the calmness of the map, lower the volume a bit ✓ 40%
00:42:065 (2) - ^
00:45:065 (4) - ^^
00:48:815 (1,2) - I don't like this stack, there a small break in between the notes and I think it would look much nicer if you moved 1 up or 2 down a tad again with the cursor dancing. it also matches the song imo
00:53:690 (3) - make this straight? the music isnt really strong here so no need
01:09:065 (1,2) - the volume gets a bit louder so shouldn't these be bigger than the jumps right before it? nuh i want the sliders to be "over" the previous slider heads for aesthetic reasons
01:34:377 (2,3,4,1) - 1 is in a weird place, maybe consider placing it above 4 or something. ✓ moved to where i originally had it
01:38:690 (4,1,2,3) - 4 is overlapping 3 which is weird imo the slider is gone by then doesnt affect playability
02:21:440 (2,3) - blanket its fine i dont want to go through the trouble of fixing the overlaps of 02:22:377 (4) - since ill have to move it for equal spacing if i blanket
02:49:940 (1) - maybe make the slider match the wavy vocals? i think it has more emphasis like this
02:51:815 (1,2,3,4,1) - sliders 1 and 1 are overlapping again slider disappears already
03:25:940 (4) - tbh I think this could be an nc


why not make the combo colours pink and red? maybe..
thank you for the mod!
Pachiru
Mod from my queue !
To be honest, I love the song, so I'm sure that I will have a lot of fun :D

  1. 00:01:940 (1) - The blanket with those two notes : 00:00:815 (1,2) - is not very well done, you should try to rework a bit the slider. Or it's not probably intentional, I don't know :c
  2. 00:13:940 (1) - I think you should try to give a cute slider form on this one, since it's a long note, it's just my opinion, because to be honest, it's also a good choice to make a straight slider right there! You should try something circular, maybe it could be good!
  3. 00:18:440 (2) - On this note, you should try to put it elsewhere, you probably tried to make a little stack like you did before, but I think you should try to stack it directly on the slider, or put it elsewhere, since there is a lot of spacing between those two notes ^^
    In my opinion, you should put a note right here: 00:18:065 - because there is a beat that you can hear, and to me, it seems to be very important!
  4. 00:19:940 (1,2) - Mhh... You should try to move the note elsewhere, to make a better visual flow, even if it's an Insane diff, I'm sure you can do something very good with visual effects on sliders, so go on ! :3
  5. 00:22:940 (1) - ♥
  6. 00:25:752 (2) - On this note, you can try to move it like I did on the screen, to avoid little flow lack. And there is such things like it that could give so great points to your map! http://puu.sh/qhZfL/95fa450eb4.jpg
  7. 00:28:377 (2) - This slider should be a bit changed to clear the blanket here. Let's look at this with a screenshot! http://puu.sh/qhZme/858ea84e7e.jpg
  8. 00:33:065 (5) - I don't really know if this note is very necessary. In my opinion, its also fine without this.
  9. 00:49:940 (4,2) - The blanket with those two sliders are very strange, you should try to work a bit on those two, I have to admit that it's a bit hard since there isn't the same slider length. I think it's okay if you can't do this ;)
  10. 00:51:815 (4) - Don't you want to try something like that, in my opinion something like that is could be very good: http://puu.sh/qhZMO/04028c941c.jpg
  11. 00:52:940 (2) - Please adjust this slider, try to use the ctrl+G command on this slider 00:53:690 (3) - and try to adjust with the approach circle, I hope you will understand what I mean. http://puu.sh/qi2FW/e73b022745.jpg
  12. 00:54:065 (4) - Also adjust this slider then, you will have a bit change to do on this one. http://puu.sh/qi2PU/0bb36aad6f.jpg
  13. 00:54:815 (1) - On this slider, it might be tight to find how to fix the blanket. But I think you can try to move this slider 00:54:627 (4) - : http://puu.sh/qi2Xb/b5466fc4ec.jpg and then adjust your slider to make a perfect blanket, and then, put this slider: 00:54:627 (4) -
  14. 00:55:565 (3) - Try to change this slider by giving it a little curv effect, to fit with the previous slider. Like on this screen: http://puu.sh/qi33T/5fb4013ab9.jpg
  15. 00:56:690 (1) - Why this note isn't placed like this? http://puu.sh/qi37V/6b6539583f.jpg (adjust it with your own distance snap.) It could be very good for the flow !
  16. 00:57:065 (2) - If you changed the previous note, then try to do a triangular pattern out there, let check it with a screenshot! http://puu.sh/qi3fE/ca0ea9c914.jpg
  17. 00:57:815 (1) - Try to move then end of this slider a bit on the left, to allign it with the next circle !
  18. 01:00:065 (5) - Maybe curv this slider a bit more? Like this: http://puu.sh/qi3qv/de30cc8103.jpg It could be better for visual, as the blanket could be more visible.
  19. 01:06:815 (1,2,1,2) - For those 4 sliders... In my opinion, it looks like they are randomly placed, and to be honest, it could be good to play if it was longer slider or faster song... but it's not the case. Try to adapt those 4 sliders at it could look less random.
  20. 01:12:815 (1) - This slider is not doing the blanket with the previous note, like sth as this: http://puu.sh/qi3AA/6529cac510.jpg
  21. 01:13:565 (3) - This note is getting overleap by two slider, I would recommand you to place it elsewhere where it could be more visible.
  22. 01:20:690 (3,1) - To be honest, I would like to recommand you to have the same slider form with the two. Try to copy/paste and also the ctrl+H & ctrl+J command, and then adjust it to make it as beautiful as the song.
  23. 01:21:815 (1) - On this slider, in my opinion, you should try to have a blanket with at least one of them, because this slider shouldn't have a straight form as it's the kiai time. So try to blanket it with this slider 01:21:440 (2) - I think it could be good, but obviously this is your choice! I offer you the choice to do it, unless this is intentional, and you want to keep it straight!
  24. 01:22:377 (2,3,4) - (ONLY IF YOU REFUSED THE PREVIOUS CHANGES) On those triples, I feel like it's better if you do something like that: http://puu.sh/qi43g/2ac163e047.jpg It would be so great to be honest.
  25. 01:22:940 (1) - Also, please correct that overleap with the previous slider, try to extend the map elsewhere, like the song it's so beautiful, the map have to get a lot of curves. To be honest, mapping is pure art, so to me, design is very important. http://puu.sh/qi4c5/a5e98f01f6.jpg
  26. 01:24:440 (1,1,2) - I don't know why, but this chain slider fits quite weird, it seems like they are not... stacked with the previous slider. I mean, you should to make it like a blanket. Let give you a screenshot to help you if you need. http://puu.sh/qi4q4/ebcbc7634a.jpg
  27. 01:26:502 (4) - Try to curv this slider on the other way, to blanket it with the previous slider :3
  28. 01:28:190 (2,3) - On this way, you had to allign those two part of the beat, because it feels like it follow the flow~ http://puu.sh/qi4vA/10665ed4fc.jpg
  29. 01:28:940 (1) - Also here, just to tell, you don't have the obligation to change it, but there is an avoidable overleap.
  30. 01:28:940 (1,2,1) - On this chain, why don't you try to give it a very good flow, like something as this: http://puu.sh/qi4IE/97a118629a.jpg You know, I mean something more... spaced and it make it very great and fun to play. You don't have to follow everything I said huh, it's just my opinion, even the screenshot!
  31. 01:29:690 (1,2) - Try to blanket those two sliders. I don't really now how you could do it, but I think it would be better.
  32. 01:31:940 (1) - Why you don't try to make it curved, like giving it a blanket with the previous circle. http://puu.sh/qi4Vi/6fb89444d2.jpg
  33. 01:32:690 (3) - On this slider, I would recommand you to keep it straight, I think it would be better.
  34. 01:33:815 (1) - Please, try to work a bit more on this slider, it would be very cool, I will send you a screenshot to help you. http://puu.sh/qi59Y/41bc19edc7.jpg
  35. 01:37:190 (1) - This slider should be curved on the other side, let me show you how it could be better to do it. http://puu.sh/qi5cu/c24e922e12.jpg
  36. 01:37:940 (3,4) - Very nice blanket out there! :)
  37. 01:39:440 (1) - Try to align this note to previous slider, like this: http://puu.sh/qi5kF/4926c3ad70.jpg
  38. 01:38:690 (4,3) - Sweety overleap with those sliders, try to move a bit the end of the "3" slider to the left, and then it would be very great!
  39. 01:39:815 (3) - To be honest, I would recommand you to do this, because first, it will cancel the overleap as I said before, furthermore, it will be better to look, instead of a simple straight slider. http://puu.sh/qi5s3/56c5255973.jpg
  40. 01:41:502 (3) - Please adjust the end of this slider, and align it with the new combo note, it's very small, but I noticed it.
  41. 01:42:815 (1,2) - On this part of the combo, please, change the slide of the slider, I mean, try to do like this: http://puu.sh/qi5Br/13443670ff.jpg In fact, changing the slider like this would help the player to guide him to the next note, even if it seems to be simple, when you're playing, you brain will have less difficulty to read this if you help the player to go to the next note, do you agree with me?
  42. 01:43:940 (1) - Please rework this slider with the techniques I gave you previously. (with moving the slider on the timeline, and then going back :3)
  43. 01:44:502 (2) - This slider should be straight, and not on the other way as you did, because in my opinion, it's not very beautiful to see only on this part. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/qi5OP/af8d002edc.jpg
  44. 01:49:752 (3) - If you are putting this note here, try at least to give it a blanket else where, it could be so better to watch, don't you think? Look at this: http://puu.sh/qi5Vb/0e7282ffca.jpg
  45. 01:49:940 (1,4) - There is not perceptible overleap, but you know, it would be even cool if you place it elsewhere, like doing more jumps.
  46. 01:51:815 (3) - Here, you can try to give a blanket to this slider, and it would also guide the player to the next note! http://puu.sh/qi632/69cc2991bb.jpg
  47. 01:55:940 (1) - Blanket here, please correct this !
  48. 01:56:877 (3,5) - Why the spacing here is not the same as here: 01:56:502 (2,1) - ? Is that intentional?
  49. 01:58:377 (3) - Also align this slider to the next note, to again help the play to go to the next note, I think is somthing important, even if its just an Insane diff!
  50. 01:58:940 (5) - Please correct the blanket with this slider: 01:58:377 (3) - :3
  51. 02:00:815 (1) - Again a blanket here, I will send you a link to show you, and give you some ideas ! http://puu.sh/qi6hq/76a7b2b42c.jpg
  52. 02:01:940 (1) - Out there, why not doing a curved slider? Maybe it could be great, and it could go with the player to help him, no? Something like that: http://puu.sh/qi6mh/6591fd5c50.jpg
  53. 02:03:440 (1) - In my opinion, it would be better if this note would be placed like this: http://puu.sh/qi6qw/a4ce3dea82.jpg instead of what it was before, because, it sometimes keep the flow, even if it's a jump part. As I said before, it's just my opinion.
  54. 02:05:877 (1) - Why do you broke the flow like this? I think if the slider 02:05:502 (6) - were in the other way, it could be so great, then the part would be cool !
  55. 02:06:440 (3,4) - Those two notes placement should be inverted, instead of keeping it like this, because it's very... misleading, and I also fell in the trap xD
  56. 02:07:377 (2) - You can try to curv the slider to follow the flow to the next note? Maybe it could kept it like that, it's up to you honey.
  57. 02:08:690 (3) - Don't forget to correct this blanket out there!
  58. 02:09:815 (1) - I purpose something that you might find it cool, here it is: http://puu.sh/qi6OM/00e5396c83.jpg I moved a bit this slider up left, to make it stacked on the previous note ;)
  59. 02:10:377 (2) - If you changed the thing I said before, please try to move this note like I did here, and tell me what you think about it! http://puu.sh/qi6V3/947b08cd0c.jpg
  60. 02:10:940 (1,1) - I really love the blanket with the two sliders !
  61. 02:13:377 (2) - This note should be put here (or somthing like this, it's approximatively obviously) : http://puu.sh/qi70h/ba28c7c4c4.jpg
  62. 02:13:940 (1,2) - Out there, I would recommand you to blanket it, it's just my opinion, here is a screenshot: http://puu.sh/qi79z/8f490c8f01.jpg
  63. 02:15:440 (3) - In my opinion, it's a good think that this slider is straight. But I think the way he is straight isn't as good as it could be. http://puu.sh/qi7dR/92efb5d584.jpg
  64. 02:16:940 (3) - Please put the end of this slider up, as it could be very better to follow the flow.
  65. 02:17:690 (1,2) - Those sliders aren't very parallels, you should try to just copy/paste, and then use the ctrl+g trick.
  66. 02:18:440 (3) - Same here.
  67. 02:19:002 (4) - Why this note is a bit on the left, it should be on the same way as the next slider. Like this: http://puu.sh/qi7su/9568690657.jpg
  68. 02:19:190 (1) - Correct the blanket here, and then, obviously, try to avoid the lack of blanket on the next slider.
  69. 02:21:440 (2,3) - On this two slider, you should align those two sliders like I did here: http://puu.sh/qi7P3/26583dc065.jpg
  70. 02:25:377 (2) - Please fix the blanket out there. I think it would be better if in your further maps you will correct those blanket things!
So! I will stop here for today, because I already spend 4 hours to write this mod, and I somehow need to sleep ! I hope you will learn a lot of things in this, because even if it tooks me ages to do it, I want to see you grow, because I'm sure you can do something very good if you have the keys to do it. I'm absolutely not a great mapper, I might be a shitmapper tbh.
But please, never give up, I write it to make you learn things and to help you to push this map to the top, because it deserves it !
I had fun while doing this, and even if people are saying hating comments, blabla, you should not give up, did you understand me?
Now I will have to sleep, because I started at midnight, and I finished it a 4 AM. Here is the prove that there is a lot of little things that there is needed to changes. You're very good with the rhythm, but you have some advanced visual mapping things you should learns, and I really hope from the deep of my kokoro that you learnt at least one thing from my mod. ♥

Good luck cutie bro !
Topic Starter
Shira

Spotty wrote:

Mod from my queue !
To be honest, I love the song, so I'm sure that I will have a lot of fun :D ahh long mod

  1. 00:01:940 (1) - The blanket with those two notes : 00:00:815 (1,2) - is not very well done, you should try to rework a bit the slider. Or it's not probably intentional, I don't know :c ✓ ive been playing with this slider a lot since I couldn't get the blanket but maybe fixed
  2. 00:13:940 (1) - I think you should try to give a cute slider form on this one, since it's a long note, it's just my opinion, because to be honest, it's also a good choice to make a straight slider right there! You should try something circular, maybe it could be good! yea, I was thinking about how odd it was since it was so long but since there's a light curve to it I'm sure its fine haha
  3. 00:18:440 (2) - On this note, you should try to put it elsewhere, you probably tried to make a little stack like you did before, but I think you should try to stack it directly on the slider, or put it elsewhere, since there is a lot of spacing between those two notes ^^
    In my opinion, you should put a note right here: 00:18:065 - because there is a beat that you can hear, and to me, it seems to be very important! ✓ added the note but since I changed the position of everything I hope its ok
  4. 00:19:940 (1,2) - Mhh... You should try to move the note elsewhere, to make a better visual flow, even if it's an Insane diff, I'm sure you can do something very good with visual effects on sliders, so go on ! :3 as much as I thought I'm not really good at slider art ><
  5. 00:22:940 (1) - ♥ <3
  6. 00:25:752 (2) - On this note, you can try to move it like I did on the screen, to avoid little flow lack. And there is such things like it that could give so great points to your map! http://puu.sh/qhZfL/95fa450eb4.jpg ✓ nicenice
  7. 00:28:377 (2) - This slider should be a bit changed to clear the blanket here. Let's look at this with a screenshot! http://puu.sh/qhZme/858ea84e7e.jpg
  8. 00:33:065 (5) - I don't really know if this note is very necessary. In my opinion, its also fine without this. ..is it? this kind of affects playability for me but idk
  9. 00:49:940 (4,2) - The blanket with those two sliders are very strange, you should try to work a bit on those two, I have to admit that it's a bit hard since there isn't the same slider length. I think it's okay if you can't do this ;) ✓ tried my best
  10. 00:51:815 (4) - Don't you want to try something like that, in my opinion something like that is could be very good: http://puu.sh/qhZMO/04028c941c.jpg
  11. 00:52:940 (2) - Please adjust this slider, try to use the ctrl+G command on this slider 00:53:690 (3) - and try to adjust with the approach circle, I hope you will understand what I mean. http://puu.sh/qi2FW/e73b022745.jpg
  12. 00:54:065 (4) - Also adjust this slider then, you will have a bit change to do on this one. http://puu.sh/qi2PU/0bb36aad6f.jpg
  13. 00:54:815 (1) - On this slider, it might be tight to find how to fix the blanket. But I think you can try to move this slider 00:54:627 (4) - : http://puu.sh/qi2Xb/b5466fc4ec.jpg and then adjust your slider to make a perfect blanket, and then, put this slider: 00:54:627 (4) - I uh didn't really understand so just fixed the blanket
  14. 00:55:565 (3) - Try to change this slider by giving it a little curv effect, to fit with the previous slider. Like on this screen: http://puu.sh/qi33T/5fb4013ab9.jpg
  15. 00:56:690 (1) - Why this note isn't placed like this? http://puu.sh/qi37V/6b6539583f.jpg (adjust it with your own distance snap.) It could be very good for the flow ! to "notify" the change of instead of doing 1/4 changed to 1/2 it didn't really affect playability for me as well~
  16. 00:57:065 (2) - If you changed the previous note, then try to do a triangular pattern out there, let check it with a screenshot! http://puu.sh/qi3fE/ca0ea9c914.jpg owo
  17. 00:57:815 (1) - Try to move then end of this slider a bit on the left, to allign it with the next circle ! huh..? it is?
  18. 01:00:065 (5) - Maybe curv this slider a bit more? Like this: http://puu.sh/qi3qv/de30cc8103.jpg It could be better for visual, as the blanket could be more visible. ✓ sure
  19. 01:06:815 (1,2,1,2) - For those 4 sliders... In my opinion, it looks like they are randomly placed, and to be honest, it could be good to play if it was longer slider or faster song... but it's not the case. Try to adapt those 4 sliders at it could look less random. theres been a lot of complaints about these sliders and its been bugging me but when I was playing it repeatedly I didn't know how to exactly.. fix it so ill just leave it for now but will get changed later on
  20. 01:12:815 (1) - This slider is not doing the blanket with the previous note, like sth as this: http://puu.sh/qi3AA/6529cac510.jpg
  21. 01:13:565 (3) - This note is getting overleap by two slider, I would recommand you to place it elsewhere where it could be more visible. its fine first slider is gone by the time you play it
  22. 01:20:690 (3,1) - To be honest, I would like to recommand you to have the same slider form with the two. Try to copy/paste and also the ctrl+H & ctrl+J command, and then adjust it to make it as beautiful as the song.
  23. 01:21:815 (1) - On this slider, in my opinion, you should try to have a blanket with at least one of them, because this slider shouldn't have a straight form as it's the kiai time. So try to blanket it with this slider 01:21:440 (2) - I think it could be good, but obviously this is your choice! I offer you the choice to do it, unless this is intentional, and you want to keep it straight! its not straight
  24. 01:22:377 (2,3,4) - (ONLY IF YOU REFUSED THE PREVIOUS CHANGES) On those triples, I feel like it's better if you do something like that: http://puu.sh/qi43g/2ac163e047.jpg It would be so great to be honest. ~ keeping the pattern of these 3 for kiais
  25. 01:22:940 (1) - Also, please correct that overleap with the previous slider, try to extend the map elsewhere, like the song it's so beautiful, the map have to get a lot of curves. To be honest, mapping is pure art, so to me, design is very important. http://puu.sh/qi4c5/a5e98f01f6.jpg don't want a repeat of 01:19:377 (2,3,4,1) -
  26. 01:24:440 (1,1,2) - I don't know why, but this chain slider fits quite weird, it seems like they are not... stacked with the previous slider. I mean, you should to make it like a blanket. Let give you a screenshot to help you if you need. http://puu.sh/qi4q4/ebcbc7634a.jpg
  27. 01:26:502 (4) - Try to curv this slider on the other way, to blanket it with the previous slider :3 I like these little antiflows. they give emphasis imo
  28. 01:28:190 (2,3) - On this way, you had to allign those two part of the beat, because it feels like it follow the flow~ http://puu.sh/qi4vA/10665ed4fc.jpg isn't that what it is now just closer
  29. 01:28:940 (1) - Also here, just to tell, you don't have the obligation to change it, but there is an avoidable overleap. doesn't affect playability~~
  30. 01:28:940 (1,2,1) - On this chain, why don't you try to give it a very good flow, like something as this: http://puu.sh/qi4IE/97a118629a.jpg You know, I mean something more... spaced and it make it very great and fun to play. You don't have to follow everything I said huh, it's just my opinion, even the screenshot! spacing it out makes it stand out from the rest of the kiai :^) so kept it as it is to emphasize 01:29:690 (1,2) -
  31. 01:29:690 (1,2) - Try to blanket those two sliders. I don't really now how you could do it, but I think it would be better. its not really supposed to be a blanket haha..
  32. 01:31:940 (1) - Why you don't try to make it curved, like giving it a blanket with the previous circle. http://puu.sh/qi4Vi/6fb89444d2.jpg
  33. 01:32:690 (3) - On this slider, I would recommand you to keep it straight, I think it would be better.
  34. 01:33:815 (1) - Please, try to work a bit more on this slider, it would be very cool, I will send you a screenshot to help you. http://puu.sh/qi59Y/41bc19edc7.jpg
  35. 01:37:190 (1) - This slider should be curved on the other side, let me show you how it could be better to do it. http://puu.sh/qi5cu/c24e922e12.jpg more aesthetic like this imo
  36. 01:37:940 (3,4) - Very nice blanket out there! :) ~
  37. 01:39:440 (1) - Try to align this note to previous slider, like this: http://puu.sh/qi5kF/4926c3ad70.jpg don't really want to mess up the blanket 01:39:440 (1,3) -
  38. 01:38:690 (4,3) - Sweety overleap with those sliders, try to move a bit the end of the "3" slider to the left, and then it would be very great! the slider is gone by then
  39. 01:39:815 (3) - To be honest, I would recommand you to do this, because first, it will cancel the overleap as I said before, furthermore, it will be better to look, instead of a simple straight slider. http://puu.sh/qi5s3/56c5255973.jpg nuhh
  40. 01:41:502 (3) - Please adjust the end of this slider, and align it with the new combo note, it's very small, but I noticed it. wat I dont
  41. 01:42:815 (1,2) - On this part of the combo, please, change the slide of the slider, I mean, try to do like this: http://puu.sh/qi5Br/13443670ff.jpg In fact, changing the slider like this would help the player to guide him to the next note, even if it seems to be simple, when you're playing, you brain will have less difficulty to read this if you help the player to go to the next note, do you agree with me? its fine they can still read it.
  42. 01:43:940 (1) - Please rework this slider with the techniques I gave you previously. (with moving the slider on the timeline, and then going back :3)
  43. 01:44:502 (2) - This slider should be straight, and not on the other way as you did, because in my opinion, it's not very beautiful to see only on this part. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/qi5OP/af8d002edc.jpg eh the song its rather calm and the big part of the song, the notes are hitting it not the slider
  44. 01:49:752 (3) - If you are putting this note here, try at least to give it a blanket else where, it could be so better to watch, don't you think? Look at this: http://puu.sh/qi5Vb/0e7282ffca.jpg
  45. 01:49:940 (1,4) - There is not perceptible overleap, but you know, it would be even cool if you place it elsewhere, like doing more jumps. slider. gone.
  46. 01:51:815 (3) - Here, you can try to give a blanket to this slider, and it would also guide the player to the next note! http://puu.sh/qi632/69cc2991bb.jpg matching 01:51:815 (3,4) -
  47. 01:55:940 (1) - Blanket here, please correct this !
  48. 01:56:877 (3,5) - Why the spacing here is not the same as here: 01:56:502 (2,1) - ? Is that intentional? ✓ fixed
  49. 01:58:377 (3) - Also align this slider to the next note, to again help the play to go to the next note, I think is somthing important, even if its just an Insane diff! the blanket 01:57:815 (2,3) - and it flows fine
  50. 01:58:940 (5) - Please correct the blanket with this slider: 01:58:377 (3) - :3
  51. 02:00:815 (1) - Again a blanket here, I will send you a link to show you, and give you some ideas ! http://puu.sh/qi6hq/76a7b2b42c.jpg ✓ well fixed the blanket
  52. 02:01:940 (1) - Out there, why not doing a curved slider? Maybe it could be great, and it could go with the player to help him, no? Something like that: http://puu.sh/qi6mh/6591fd5c50.jpg matching previous slider
  53. 02:03:440 (1) - In my opinion, it would be better if this note would be placed like this: http://puu.sh/qi6qw/a4ce3dea82.jpg instead of what it was before, because, it sometimes keep the flow, even if it's a jump part. As I said before, it's just my opinion. branket
  54. 02:05:877 (1) - Why do you broke the flow like this? I think if the slider 02:05:502 (6) - were in the other way, it could be so great, then the part would be cool ! flow isn't broken but fixed the unequal ds haha
  55. 02:06:440 (3,4) - Those two notes placement should be inverted, instead of keeping it like this, because it's very... misleading, and I also fell in the trap xD more emphasis on 1
  56. 02:07:377 (2) - You can try to curv the slider to follow the flow to the next note? Maybe it could kept it like that, it's up to you honey. it is?
  57. 02:08:690 (3) - Don't forget to correct this blanket out there!
  58. 02:09:815 (1) - I purpose something that you might find it cool, here it is: http://puu.sh/qi6OM/00e5396c83.jpg I moved a bit this slider up left, to make it stacked on the previous note ;)
  59. 02:10:377 (2) - If you changed the thing I said before, please try to move this note like I did here, and tell me what you think about it! http://puu.sh/qi6V3/947b08cd0c.jpg moved it the other side kek
  60. 02:10:940 (1,1) - I really love the blanket with the two sliders ! ~
  61. 02:13:377 (2) - This note should be put here (or somthing like this, it's approximatively obviously) : http://puu.sh/qi70h/ba28c7c4c4.jpg that would be a big jump for 3
  62. 02:13:940 (1,2) - Out there, I would recommand you to blanket it, it's just my opinion, here is a screenshot: http://puu.sh/qi79z/8f490c8f01.jpg
  63. 02:15:440 (3) - In my opinion, it's a good think that this slider is straight. But I think the way he is straight isn't as good as it could be. http://puu.sh/qi7dR/92efb5d584.jpg i want the slider to be at a downwards position for emphasis
  64. 02:16:940 (3) - Please put the end of this slider up, as it could be very better to follow the flow. it is
  65. 02:17:690 (1,2) - Those sliders aren't very parallels, you should try to just copy/paste, and then use the ctrl+g trick. theyre parallel if you stack them
  66. 02:18:440 (3) - Same here. ^
  67. 02:19:002 (4) - Why this note is a bit on the left, it should be on the same way as the next slider. Like this: http://puu.sh/qi7su/9568690657.jpg
  68. 02:19:190 (1) - Correct the blanket here, and then, obviously, try to avoid the lack of blanket on the next slider.
  69. 02:21:440 (2,3) - On this two slider, you should align those two sliders like I did here: http://puu.sh/qi7P3/26583dc065.jpg ✓ rejected earlier but new time new me or something
  70. 02:25:377 (2) - Please fix the blanket out there. I think it would be better if in your further maps you will correct those blanket things!
So! I will stop here for today, because I already spend 4 hours to write this mod, and I somehow need to sleep ! I hope you will learn a lot of things in this, because even if it tooks me ages to do it, I want to see you grow, because I'm sure you can do something very good if you have the keys to do it. I'm absolutely not a great mapper, I might be a shitmapper tbh.
But please, never give up, I write it to make you learn things and to help you to push this map to the top, because it deserves it !
I had fun while doing this, and even if people are saying hating comments, blabla, you should not give up, did you understand me?
Now I will have to sleep, because I started at midnight, and I finished it a 4 AM. Here is the prove that there is a lot of little things that there is needed to changes. You're very good with the rhythm, but you have some advanced visual mapping things you should learns, and I really hope from the deep of my kokoro that you learnt at least one thing from my mod. ♥ thank you so much for the long mod ~ I (think) I fixed most blankets and the map looks much better now. hopefully this mapset will progress more~

Good luck cutie bro !
again, thank you for the mod !
Monstrata
A recommendation from assimb in my modding queue led me here! : p/5355782

[Connection]

  1. 00:06:440 (3,4,1) - Try and arrange this so that you cam emphasize the high note on slider 1. Try an arrangement like this: It'll create a larger jump from 4>1 which would fit the music.
  2. 00:22:940 (1) - Hmm... This heart doesn't look that nice. Try setting up the heard slider symmetrically first. And when you are content with the shape, then rotate it like 30 degrees to get the slant you have here.
    https://osu.ppy.sh/s/124806 Check out this map for a lot of heart-slider designs. When you find one you like, try copying the slider-points :D
  3. 00:27:815 (1,2) - I don't think a jump here is that necessary. Use normal spacing? (00:25:377 (1,2,3) - Is what i'd associate with "normal" spacing)
  4. 00:33:065 (5) - I don't think there's actually a note here... might just be my headphones though but please double check and delete if you agree.
  5. 00:36:815 (1) - How about making this a 1/2 slider? That way you can map a slider-end to the guitar string on 00:37:190 - .
  6. 00:45:440 (5,6) - I think a 1/2 slider is more appropriate here. You don't really hear a strong note on 6, so something more passive like a slider-end would work better.
  7. 00:52:940 (2,3) - Be careful of spacing like this. It really resembles a 1/2 pattern, however it's actually a 1/1 gap here. Compare the spacing here to
  8. 00:53:690 (3,4) - . It's almost the same. This is a problem because it confuses players as to what's 1/1 and what's 1/2. For gaps like this, possible solutions are to make it really sure this is a 1/1 gap by making the spacing larger. That, or using a stack. also works.
  9. 01:03:065 (1,2,1) - This doesn't really flow well imo. See how after slider 2, you're going at a down/left ish movement. suddenly you have to move to the right, and then play a slider that's again going left. it feels jarring.
  10. 01:24:815 (1,1) - Hmm, blankets could be improved I guess.
  11. 01:26:877 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - DO MORE PATTERNS LIKE THIS :D.
  12. 01:33:815 (1) - I would reduce this to a 1/2 slider and make 01:34:190 - clickable just because the vocal is so strong here.
  13. 01:39:815 (3,4,1) - Try and arrange it so that 4>1 has a larger jump to emphasize the drum beat on 1.
  14. 01:55:565 (2,3,1) - Here too, try and arrange your jumps so that 3>1 receives more impact.
  15. 01:57:065 (4,5) - This jump doesn't really feel appropriate since 5 is barely audible.
  16. 02:05:502 (6,1,2) - What happened with the spacing here. It's a lot smaller compared to 02:04:377 (3,4,5,6) - .
  17. 02:10:940 (1) - Nice
  18. 02:27:815 (1,2) - I think you can make the spacing bigger to signal the 1/1 gap.
[]

Hmm. I think here is a good place to stop. This set has potential. I think you've got a really good rhythm choice. I only commented like twice about your rhythms haha. I think you can still work on spacing, especially distinguishing 1/1 from 1/2 (or 1/2 and 1/4 since this map is double bpm). Your flow is not bad, but it could still be improved to make the map more fluid. And as always, when you can, try and improve your placements. This can be doing structural patterns, or just cleaning up blankets, polishing up sliders, things that will make your map look more visually appealing!

Good luck~ Let me know if you have questions!
Topic Starter
Shira

Monstrata wrote:

A recommendation from assimb in my modding queue led me here! : p/5355782 ~

[Connection]

  1. 00:06:440 (3,4,1) - Try and arrange this so that you cam emphasize the high note on slider 1. Try an arrangement like this: It'll create a larger jump from 4>1 which would fit the music.
  2. 00:22:940 (1) - Hmm... This heart doesn't look that nice. Try setting up the heard slider symmetrically first. And when you are content with the shape, then rotate it like 30 degrees to get the slant you have here. ✓ tried my best :s
    https://osu.ppy.sh/s/124806 Check out this map for a lot of heart-slider designs. When you find one you like, try copying the slider-points :D pretty sliders
  3. 00:27:815 (1,2) - I don't think a jump here is that necessary. Use normal spacing? (00:25:377 (1,2,3) - Is what i'd associate with "normal" spacing) ✓ ctrl+g
  4. 00:33:065 (5) - I don't think there's actually a note here... might just be my headphones though but please double check and delete if you agree. ✓ since its the second time this popped up deleted.
  5. 00:36:815 (1) - How about making this a 1/2 slider? That way you can map a slider-end to the guitar string on 00:37:190 - . I think its fine like this since I kinda wanted a break between this note and the next
  6. 00:45:440 (5,6) - I think a 1/2 slider is more appropriate here. You don't really hear a strong note on 6, so something more passive like a slider-end would work better. considering~ since it flows better to the next slider imo
  7. 00:52:940 (2,3) - Be careful of spacing like this. It really resembles a 1/2 pattern, however it's actually a 1/1 gap here. Compare the spacing here to
  8. 00:53:690 (3,4) - . It's almost the same. This is a problem because it confuses players as to what's 1/1 and what's 1/2. For gaps like this, possible solutions are to make it really sure this is a 1/1 gap by making the spacing larger. That, or using a stack. also works. I think its ok? since theres approach circles to help the player know that its a jump. I played it a while and never really got confused here
  9. 01:03:065 (1,2,1) - This doesn't really flow well imo. See how after slider 2, you're going at a down/left ish movement. suddenly you have to move to the right, and then play a slider that's again going left. it feels jarring.
  10. 01:24:815 (1,1) - Hmm, blankets could be improved I guess.
  11. 01:26:877 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - DO MORE PATTERNS LIKE THIS :D. its a triangle :D
  12. 01:33:815 (1) - I would reduce this to a 1/2 slider and make 01:34:190 - clickable just because the vocal is so strong here. ee instruments here since theres a strong beat & the vocal there isn't as strong as the ones in the jump imo
  13. 01:39:815 (3,4,1) - Try and arrange it so that 4>1 has a larger jump to emphasize the drum beat on 1.
  14. 01:55:565 (2,3,1) - Here too, try and arrange your jumps so that 3>1 receives more impact. ✓ maybe ? still want to keep the blanket so stretched it out a bit
  15. 01:57:065 (4,5) - This jump doesn't really feel appropriate since 5 is barely audible.
  16. 02:05:502 (6,1,2) - What happened with the spacing here. It's a lot smaller compared to 02:04:377 (3,4,5,6) - .
  17. 02:10:940 (1) - Nice ~
  18. 02:27:815 (1,2) - I think you can make the spacing bigger to signal the 1/1 gap.
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Hmm. I think here is a good place to stop. This set has potential. I think you've got a really good rhythm choice. I only commented like twice about your rhythms haha. I think you can still work on spacing, especially distinguishing 1/1 from 1/2 (or 1/2 and 1/4 since this map is double bpm). Your flow is not bad, but it could still be improved to make the map more fluid. And as always, when you can, try and improve your placements. This can be doing structural patterns, or just cleaning up blankets, polishing up sliders, things that will make your map look more visually appealing!

Good luck~ Let me know if you have questions!
thank you for the mod ~
Zallies
When ranked? XD
Topic Starter
Shira

zeroallies wrote:

When ranked? XD
maybe one day

noonelikesnm.makesmecryformylaziness
Pentori
nm

[General]
my overall experience when playtesting this was that the offset is a little late (like 10ms). ~ try 805?
hp 6? seems a bit excessive since the map is generally slow -> maybe try 5

[Connection]
00:31:752 (3,1) - stack
00:36:815 (1,2) - would b nice if you moved this down so it continues the downward flow created from 00:36:065 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/qrjGY/ab1314f278.jpg
00:43:940 (2) - i would ctrl g this slider and move it a little up so that u can continue circular flow http://puu.sh/qrjQB/63bc373ad7.jpg
01:01:377 (2) - blanket could be improved
01:05:690 (2,3) - increase spacing here for emphasis
01:08:315 (1,2,1,2) - jumps seem nonsensical to me here, they're way to big in comparison to the jumps u have in ur map. could you reduce these a little to be more like 01:07:565 (1,2)
01:20:690 (1) - remove nc?
01:24:440 (1,2) - u have back and forth jumps here 01:23:502 (2,3,4,1,2) - so i think u should maintain that flow instead of switching to circular
01:41:877 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - u could tidy up the pattern a bit
01:59:315 (1,2) - tbh u could break these in half into smaller reverse sliders, having 1 for each pitch change
02:03:440 (1,2) - blanket could be better
02:15:440 (3) - pretty important key change on the end of the slider. i would make it a clickable object
02:18:440 (3) - ^
02:32:315 (1,2,1,2) - nuh, 02:31:565 (1,2) - should be the max spacing u use
02:56:877 (3) - avoid clap on slider end in kiai. i would do a rhythm like http://puu.sh/qrkV0/234a4bd798.jpg
03:36:815 (8) - nc for finish
03:42:815 (1) - keep hitsound volume at 40% here. i feel 60% overpowers the soft vocals
04:30:440 (1) - idk why this slider end has a finish? theres no finish in the music
05:01:940 (1,2,3,4) - theres nothing stream worthy here tbh. the music is on the red and blue ticks. on top of that, this is the only time you've done a 5 note stream in the whole map so i would avoid catching the player off guard :/
05:09:065 (3,4) - spacing here seems a little large given the clap + high pitch note is on 05:09:065 (3) - i dont see why the spacing is bigger than this.
05:09:440 (1) - also because of the finish on this beat u should increase the spacing between 05:09:252 (4,1)
05:13:940 (1,2,3,4) - the sound ur mapping to is actually on the 1/6 and begins on 05:13:565 (5) - and ends at 05:14:315 (1) . so u could use two reverse sliders to represent these sounds -> http://puu.sh/qrlHN/a0ae15c556.jpg

good luck!
Topic Starter
Shira

Pentori wrote:

nm

[General]
my overall experience when playtesting this was that the offset is a little late (like 10ms). ~ try 805?
hp 6? seems a bit excessive since the map is generally slow -> maybe try 5

[Connection]
00:31:752 (3,1) - stack
00:36:815 (1,2) - would b nice if you moved this down so it continues the downward flow created from 00:36:065 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/qrjGY/ab1314f278.jpg
00:43:940 (2) - i would ctrl g this slider and move it a little up so that u can continue circular flow http://puu.sh/qrjQB/63bc373ad7.jpg
01:01:377 (2) - blanket could be improved
01:05:690 (2,3) - increase spacing here for emphasis isnt to big of a beat imo so fine for now
01:08:315 (1,2,1,2) - jumps seem nonsensical to me here, they're way to big in comparison to the jumps u have in ur map. could you reduce these a little to be more like 01:07:565 (1,2) i kind of want it to space out for emphasis :c
01:20:690 (1) - remove nc? ✓ oo wats dat doing there
01:24:440 (1,2) - u have back and forth jumps here 01:23:502 (2,3,4,1,2) - so i think u should maintain that flow instead of switching to circular its actually 2 triangles 01:23:492 (2,3,4) -01:24:055 (1,2,1,2) -
01:41:877 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - u could tidy up the pattern a bit
01:59:315 (1,2) - tbh u could break these in half into smaller reverse sliders, having 1 for each pitch change its fine imo. then it would be too hard to tell when to alt
02:03:440 (1,2) - blanket could be better
02:15:440 (3) - pretty important key change on the end of the slider. i would make it a clickable object ✓ was having my doubts on this xd
02:18:440 (3) - ^
02:32:315 (1,2,1,2) - nuh, 02:31:565 (1,2) - should be the max spacing u use same thing as last time
02:56:877 (3) - avoid clap on slider end in kiai. i would do a rhythm like http://puu.sh/qrkV0/234a4bd798.jpg
03:36:815 (8) - nc for finish
03:42:815 (1) - keep hitsound volume at 40% here. i feel 60% overpowers the soft vocals
04:30:440 (1) - idk why this slider end has a finish? theres no finish in the music
05:01:940 (1,2,3,4) - theres nothing stream worthy here tbh. the music is on the red and blue ticks. on top of that, this is the only time you've done a 5 note stream in the whole map so i would avoid catching the player off guard :/ theres a stream sound0 and 5:13:930 (1,2,3,4) - :D
05:09:065 (3,4) - spacing here seems a little large given the clap + high pitch note is on 05:09:065 (3) - i dont see why the spacing is bigger than this.
05:09:440 (1) - also because of the finish on this beat u should increase the spacing between 05:09:252 (4,1)
05:13:940 (1,2,3,4) - the sound ur mapping to is actually on the 1/6 and begins on 05:13:565 (5) - and ends at 05:14:315 (1) . so u could use two reverse sliders to represent these sounds -> http://puu.sh/qrlHN/a0ae15c556.jpg i listened to it @25 and @75 but i hear 1/8 :c

good luck!
thanks for mod~
Pentori
nah im 100% sure its 1/6..
turn effect volume to 0% with 25% playback and count the amount of sounds you hear (should be 7)
Chihara Minori

Pentori wrote:

nah im 100% sure its 1/6..
turn effect volume to 0% with 25% playback and count the amount of sounds you hear (should be 7)
nope, its 1/8
for simple explanation the effect (idk what instrument make that kind of effect lel) acrually start here 05:13:742 - which will be more noticeable if shira start the stream here. But he doesnt and dcd to give 1/2 gap so thatthing is prolly bothered you so much.
Well, considering you didnt hear that effect well ill just play a bit with volume there

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umm shira, if you dont mind it, could you update my name change on the map credits? tyvm
Topic Starter
Shira

Time Capsule wrote:

Pentori wrote:

nah im 100% sure its 1/6..
turn effect volume to 0% with 25% playback and count the amount of sounds you hear (should be 7)
nope, its 1/8
for simple explanation the effect (idk what instrument make that kind of effect lel) acrually start here 05:13:742 - which will be more noticeable if shira start the stream here. But he doesnt and dcd to give 1/2 gap so thatthing is prolly bothered you so much.
Well, considering you didnt hear that effect well ill just play a bit with volume there

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umm shira, if you dont mind it, could you update my name change on the map credits? tyvm
~
Lilyanna
Connection

00:07:930 (1) - remove nc
00:10:930 (1) - ^
00:10:930 (1,2) - the flow here kinda wierd maybe make the slider go to the next note direction
01:25:555 - there is a beat there maybe a cirlce here 01:25:367 - and a slider after
01:31:555 - i would suggest to make this downbeat clickable maybe 3 circles like u did here 01:43:367 (2,3,4) -
02:18:055 (2,1) - stack maybe
02:19:180 (1,3) - and blanket
03:54:711 (3,1) - this confuses me xd
04:12:430 (1,2) - blanket can be better

I hope i helped with short mod xd sorry
Good luck
Topic Starter
Shira

Lilyanna wrote:

Connection

00:07:930 (1) - remove nc
00:10:930 (1) - ^
00:10:930 (1,2) - the flow here kinda wierd maybe make the slider go to the next note direction this is to distinguish between 1/2 and 1/1 notes
01:25:555 - there is a beat there maybe a cirlce here 01:25:367 - and a slider after I'm following the vocals here when she starts holding out "tsu"
01:31:555 - i would suggest to make this downbeat clickable maybe 3 circles like u did here 01:43:367 (2,3,4) - its fine imo since the playability of the slider flows well. the hitsounds also help support the beat
02:18:055 (2,1) - stack maybe
02:19:180 (1,3) - and blanket
03:54:711 (3,1) - this confuses me xd small bpm so you can just use the ar xd
04:12:430 (1,2) - blanket can be better

I hope i helped with short mod xd sorry
Good luck
thank you for the mod~
and star
rohasshiki
Hey Shira! This is for the Connection Difficulty:

General
  1. Offset seems off, but based on what you told me, I think our universal offset might be a bit different, so I'm going to assume that it sounds good for you, though a bit off for me. To me, offset sounds like it should be 765.
  2. I'm not too sure what thing I'll focus on, will just kinda look for anything wrong as I go.
  3. I changed the offset to make it easier to find the issues since I can hear it better, so the timing points might be a little off. Hope you can figure it out though.
Connection
  1. 00:22:140 (2) - I know you might not want use triplets (as in 1/3 beat snap) but there's a pretty clear one right here that'll actually require 1/6 beat snap. Whether or not you hit it is up to you, but it's pretty apparent in the music and I thought it was worth pointing out.
  2. 00:35:640 - There's a note right here in the bass that you're missing, again, up to you if you want to hit it. I'd recommend a 1/2 slider here though and replace 00:36:015 (3) -
  3. 00:46:890 (3) - There are multiple instrumental notes in here that you miss, but I'm assuming it's intentional since you're focusing on vocals in this section. Still, I thought I'd point it out.
  4. 00:58:515 (2) - I actually don't really see the point of this note, it doesn't fall on any vocal or instrumental hits. What sounds better imo is ending the slider at 00:57:765 (1) - at 00:58:140 and add another 1/2 slider at 00:58:327 (2) - . It hits both the vocal and instrumental hit so I'd take a look at it.
  5. 01:23:452 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - These notes follow a strange pattern as the triangular flow reversed and does some weird stuff. It's not too bad, but a little awkward, at least the first time I played it. Honestly not a big issue, could probably be me being stupid.
  6. 01:35:077 (1) - I think this slider is too long, because you miss the notes of pickup at 01:36:390 which are pretty important. I think maybe a 1/4 slider and a note could be good there, idk.
  7. 01:46:327 (3,4) - I think ctrl + g could be good here, idk it sounds a bit better to me.
  8. 02:18:952 (5) - This feels a little out of place since before then you were using 1 note pickups and now you're using a 2 note pickup. You could fix by just deleting it, but it's up to you.
  9. For the section from 03:00:765 (1) - to about 03:08:265 (1) - you're missing out on the cool double hit by using a single slider. It might be intentional, so I'll leave it up to you.
  10. 03:18:014 (3,4,5) - If you're following the vocals, this part seems a bit out of place. She sings in triplets actually, or 1/3 beat snap, so adding a bouncing s1/3 slider here fits very well.
  11. 03:21:390 (2,3,4,5,6) - These notes have a weird spacing for the timing that they're hit. They're all relatively similar distances while being pretty different in timings. Up to you once again how to address it, or if not at all.
  12. 03:36:015 (4) - Right here the instrumental builds up by going twice as fast as what you have mapped. Since streaming in 1/6 is hard, a few 1/6 bouncing sliders work really well here, otherwise the mapping doesn't fit the music as well as it could.
  13. 03:42:015 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Might be a bit overmapped, doesn't fit the vocals like the rest of the parts. The extra notes play over her held notes, kinda diminishing their value.
  14. 03:54:671 (3) - This note sounds good but it goes with the instrumental instead of the vocals, which is what you've been doing in this section, so it seems a little out of place and also kinda hard to read since it's one of the first 1/8 notes. Idk, sounds good though.
  15. 03:56:077 (5,6,7) - These notes don't really hit anything. The vocals end on the slider end before these, and they don't hit any instrumentals either. Idk, do what you think works best here.
  16. 04:51:202 - There's no note here but I think it would fit since this pause is kinda random because there aren't any pauses before or after this for the rest of the song.
  17. 05:26:358 (1) - this spinner is super long lol. If you want you could break it up the same way you did earlier in the song by starting a new spinner at 05:39:365 using the piano twinkle.
That's about all I could get for now, if you ever need some more help hit me up, Sorry if it wasn't too useful, I tried my best!
Hokichi

Shiratoi wrote:

---NM---
Title: MIRAI
Artist: GARNiDELiA
Link: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/479795
Drain: 5:25
Specified diffs: Connection
Extra: nuh
Ok. I can't play this so I'll give some general mods

Connection


00:19:930 (1) - Make this slider symmetrical please

00:21:430 (3,3) - Overlapped

00:25:930 (3,4) - You can either stack these, or move them apart. The overlap doesn't look nice

00:31:367 (2) - Curve this slider so the end of it point to 00:31:742 (3) -

00:33:805 (3) - NC

00:51:805 (4) - Start NC here

00:58:555 (2,3) - Stack these

01:25:930 (2) - 01:27:805 (1) - 01:28:180 (2) - 01:28:930 (1) - Finish hitsound?

01:27:430 (4) - Remove finish hitsound

02:18:805 (4) - Replace with a whistle hitsound instead

02:19:180 (1,3) - Adjust blanket

02:27:805 (1,2) - You should try to make these sliders the same

03:13:930 (3,3) - Overlapped

03:24:430 (3,4) - Keep the same distance as 03:24:055 (1,2) -

03:36:055 (4,5,6,7,1) - Turn into 1/8 silders/stream?

03:42:055 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3) - The vocal is the loudest sound here. You should follow it, and reduce the amount of circles

04:06:055 (1,2) - Make sure 04:04:930 (1) - overlap at 04:06:055 (2) - center

Well, that's it from me. Good luck with ranking!
Chihara Minori
If you going to mod the hs please do it sparately
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Hokichi wrote:

Ok. I can't play this so I'll give some general mods

Connection


01:25:930 (2) - 01:27:805 (1) - 01:28:180 (2) - 01:28:930 (1) - Finish hitsound? i do alternative there

01:27:430 (4) - Remove finish hitsound nope, i do some change with part you mention above, so this wont work if i remove it

02:18:805 (4) - Replace with a whistle hitsound instead oh that miss hsing prolly xD

03:42:055 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3) - The vocal is the loudest sound here. You should follow it, and reduce the amount of circles
imo, even if that included at solo vocal part the anount of volume play is support it to get mapped by vocal base just like shira already did

Well, that's it from me. Good luck with ranking!
yay, hs first ~
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Topic Starter
Shira

rohasshiki wrote:

Hey Shira! This is for the Connection Difficulty:

General
  1. Offset seems off, but based on what you told me, I think our universal offset might be a bit different, so I'm going to assume that it sounds good for you, though a bit off for me. To me, offset sounds like it should be 765. my universal offset is 0ms so there shouldnt be a problem ?
  2. I'm not too sure what thing I'll focus on, will just kinda look for anything wrong as I go.
  3. I changed the offset to make it easier to find the issues since I can hear it better, so the timing points might be a little off. Hope you can figure it out though.
Connection
  1. 00:22:140 (2) - I know you might not want use triplets (as in 1/3 beat snap) but there's a pretty clear one right here that'll actually require 1/6 beat snap. Whether or not you hit it is up to you, but it's pretty apparent in the music and I thought it was worth pointing out. thats not the beat i was following D:
  2. 00:35:640 - There's a note right here in the bass that you're missing, again, up to you if you want to hit it. I'd recommend a 1/2 slider here though and replace 00:36:015 (3) - ^ following the piano
  3. 00:46:890 (3) - There are multiple instrumental notes in here that you miss, but I'm assuming it's intentional since you're focusing on vocals in this section. Still, I thought I'd point it out. u explained yourself xd
  4. 00:58:515 (2) - I actually don't really see the point of this note, it doesn't fall on any vocal or instrumental hits. What sounds better imo is ending the slider at 00:57:765 (1) - at 00:58:140 and add another 1/2 slider at 00:58:327 (2) - . It hits both the vocal and instrumental hit so I'd take a look at it. no, this note brings emphasis to the next slider and this still hits the beat any ways
  5. 01:23:452 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - These notes follow a strange pattern as the triangular flow reversed and does some weird stuff. It's not too bad, but a little awkward, at least the first time I played it. Honestly not a big issue, could probably be me being stupid. i like this flow ;; id hopefully like to keep this throughout the ranking process
  6. 01:35:077 (1) - I think this slider is too long, because you miss the notes of pickup at 01:36:390 which are pretty important. I think maybe a 1/4 slider and a note could be good there, idk. the sound is bigger 01:36:805 - here so it wouldnt really matter. vocals anyways
  7. 01:46:327 (3,4) - I think ctrl + g could be good here, idk it sounds a bit better to me. ✓ i think so too :D
  8. 02:18:952 (5) - This feels a little out of place since before then you were using 1 note pickups and now you're using a 2 note pickup. You could fix by just deleting it, but it's up to you. its the second part of the song so i kind of wanted more variety. it picks up the instrumental beat too
  9. For the section from 03:00:765 (1) - to about 03:08:265 (1) - you're missing out on the cool double hit by using a single slider. It might be intentional, so I'll leave it up to you. ive explained myself countless mods above
  10. 03:18:014 (3,4,5) - If you're following the vocals, this part seems a bit out of place. She sings in triplets actually, or 1/3 beat snap, so adding a bouncing s1/3 slider here fits very well. this part is actually not vocals xd
  11. 03:21:390 (2,3,4,5,6) - These notes have a weird spacing for the timing that they're hit. They're all relatively similar distances while being pretty different in timings. Up to you once again how to address it, or if not at all. ✓ changed a bit
  12. 03:36:015 (4) - Right here the instrumental builds up by going twice as fast as what you have mapped. Since streaming in 1/6 is hard, a few 1/6 bouncing sliders work really well here, otherwise the mapping doesn't fit the music as well as it could. each little pair grows building momentum
  13. 03:42:015 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Might be a bit overmapped, doesn't fit the vocals like the rest of the parts. The extra notes play over her held notes, kinda diminishing their value. these parts are literally what i did in the kiai with the same vocals
  14. 03:54:671 (3) - This note sounds good but it goes with the instrumental instead of the vocals, which is what you've been doing in this section, so it seems a little out of place and also kinda hard to read since it's one of the first 1/8 notes. Idk, sounds good though. also explained on previous mods~
  15. 03:56:077 (5,6,7) - These notes don't really hit anything. The vocals end on the slider end before these, and they don't hit any instrumentals either. Idk, do what you think works best here. theres a little instrument sound if you turn off effect volume
  16. 04:51:202 - There's no note here but I think it would fit since this pause is kinda random because there aren't any pauses before or after this for the rest of the song. already has enough emphasis based on the shape of the slider
  17. 05:26:358 (1) - this spinner is super long lol. If you want you could break it up the same way you did earlier in the song by starting a new spinner at 05:39:365 using the piano twinkle. I KNOW everytime i play this map im like when is this spinner over but the note that its ending on is so farrr so keeping it
That's about all I could get for now, if you ever need some more help hit me up, Sorry if it wasn't too useful, I tried my best!
thanks for the mod even if i ended up denying a lot ;;

Hokichi wrote:

Shiratoi wrote:

---NM---
Title: MIRAI
Artist: GARNiDELiA
Link: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/479795
Drain: 5:25
Specified diffs: Connection
Extra: nuh
Ok. I can't play this so I'll give some general mods

Connection


00:19:930 (1) - Make this slider symmetrical please ✓ ok i did my best im not messing with this slider anymore

00:21:430 (3,3) - Overlapped

00:25:930 (3,4) - You can either stack these, or move them apart. The overlap doesn't look nice ✓ fixed after a few complaints

00:31:367 (2) - Curve this slider so the end of it point to 00:31:742 (3) -

00:33:805 (3) - NC

00:51:805 (4) - Start NC here

00:58:555 (2,3) - Stack these intentional for emphasis

01:25:930 (2) - 01:27:805 (1) - 01:28:180 (2) - 01:28:930 (1) - Finish hitsound? ~

01:27:430 (4) - Remove finish hitsound ~

02:18:805 (4) - Replace with a whistle hitsound instead ~

02:19:180 (1,3) - Adjust blanket looks fine to me

02:27:805 (1,2) - You should try to make these sliders the same the sound if softer than the first slider

03:13:930 (3,3) - Overlapped the slider is gone by then

03:24:430 (3,4) - Keep the same distance as 03:24:055 (1,2) - the first 4 notes were just to symbolize that its 1/4 notes

03:36:055 (4,5,6,7,1) - Turn into 1/8 silders/stream? nope building up here and id prefer to stay away from streams if possible

03:42:055 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3) - The vocal is the loudest sound here. You should follow it, and reduce the amount of circles i am following the vocals? since its kind of the only thing here

04:06:055 (1,2) - Make sure 04:04:930 (1) - overlap at 04:06:055 (2) - center i dont really understand .~.

Well, that's it from me. Good luck with ranking!
thank you for the mod

Time Capsule wrote:

If you going to mod the hs please do it sparately
P L E A S E
L E A S E
E A S E
A S E
S E
E
i will separate xd so mod first :^)

yay, hs first ~
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268,212,315430,6,0,B|316:252|348:196|408:232,1,125,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,280,315992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,144,316180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,308,316367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
489,253,316555,6,0,P|486:222|480:192,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,228,316930,2,0,P|340:244|288:256,1,62.5
148,264,317305,2,0,P|204:216|244:144,1,125,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,160,317867,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,232,318055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,348,318242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,128,318430,6,0,B|92:76|152:68|152:68|184:100|232:108,1,187.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,80,319180,2,0,P|288:148|260:184,1,62.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,204,319555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,192,319742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,280,319930,5,8,0:0:0:0:
384,352,320117,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,232,320305,6,0,P|436:168|396:116,1,125,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,36,320867,2,0,P|412:36|476:28,1,62.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,72,321242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,88,321430,6,0,P|260:148|220:216,1,125,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,212,321992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,300,322180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,312,322367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,248,322555,6,0,L|48:176,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,136,322930,2,0,L|152:52,1,62.5
248,88,323305,2,0,L|396:52,1,125,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,72,323867,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,160,324055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,252,324242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,224,324430,6,0,B|296:204|244:216|244:216|284:152|236:112|236:112|168:144|192:208|192:208|168:196|128:208|100:256|100:256|144:304|204:264|204:264|204:308|232:352,1,625,6|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,326398,12,0,337930,0:0:0:0:
-Atri-
m4m
  1. The BG size should be 1026x768 or 1366x768, Here is the edited BG of 1366x768: http://puu.sh/qyJS8/55a2569f56.jpg
  2. There's so much NC inconsistencies in this map, ex: 00:03:430 (1) - and 00:06:430 (3) - , usually you can NC for a note on every big white tick or SV changes, I suggest you to re NC the entire map
  3. 00:18:617 (4) - Unstack? That's the only stacked note on this part
  4. 00:22:180 (2) - Try this rhythm, to follow more flute sound:
  5. 00:27:805 (1,2) - Nazi, But they're not symmetric
  6. 00:34:930 (2) - Turn this into 1/1 slider, to emphasize the vocal
  7. 01:05:305 (1,2) - Remove grey node at the middle?
  8. 01:08:680 (2) - Put closer for smoother buildup
  9. 01:45:805 (2,3) - Try this rhythm, follows violin better imo, and let 01:46:180 (3) - to map anything
  10.  04:56:305 - Continue kiai.

GL~
Topic Starter
Shira

KuranteMelodii wrote:

m4m
  1. The BG size should be 1026x768 or 1366x768, Here is the edited BG of 1366x768: http://puu.sh/qyJS8/55a2569f56.jpg yea thats what i thought too but it the quality was worse so maybe (hopefully) its ok like this
  2. There's so much NC inconsistencies in this map, ex: 00:03:430 (1) - and 00:06:430 (3) - , usually you can NC for a note on every big white tick or SV changes, I suggest you to re NC the entire map ✓ redid the entire map
  3. 00:18:617 (4) - Unstack? That's the only stacked note on this part
  4. 00:22:180 (2) - Try this rhythm, to follow more flute sound: i think its fine since im just hitting the loud notes here like everything before .~.
  5. 00:27:805 (1,2) - Nazi, But they're not symmetric
  6. 00:34:930 (2) - Turn this into 1/1 slider, to emphasize the vocal no its matching the other 2 note thing
  7. 01:05:305 (1,2) - Remove grey node at the middle? i think its fine with a little curve since the music isnt as strong yet
  8. 01:08:680 (2) - Put closer for smoother buildup its a triangle with 01:07:180 (2,2,2) - :/
  9. 01:45:805 (2,3) - Try this rhythm, follows violin better imo, and let 01:46:180 (3) - to map anything its fine imo hits the violin fine
  10.  04:56:305 - Continue kiai.

GL~
thank you for the mod~
MisterDinner
m4m (you honestly dont have to mod my map i just posted an m4m for the opportunity)
I havent felt this much joy playing a map in a long time.

Mod m8
First off about the beginning, i cant remember where and when i read it but i saw somewhere sometime that mapping lyrics isnt something you should do, because lyrics are often not perfectly on beat. It might be passable here because the vocals are as on beat as they could possibly be, just a heads up.

hp5 is a bit low for a 4.10* map thats this easy to play try 6,5 or 7, after missing a bunch and nearly failing the player shouldnt be able to regain that health in a few seconds, 7 is enough that if the player for some reason cant aim while playing this (which is probably a player that shouldnt be playing 4*s anyway) will have to work to get pp from a map he/she can barely play.

01:06:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part could do with some jumps to keep it interesting, not essential it seems fine, just a suggestion.
02:30:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

01:59:305 (5,6) - i think you could put 6 sliders or 1/6 stacks there because the kicks threw me off, there are streams near the end so i think its doable..

02:22:367 (2,3,4) - kind of difficult to read

03:05:680 (6,7) - the spacing is just way too big for whats going on in the song.
03:23:867 (7,1) - ^

03:42:242 (2) - this note isnt mapped to anything

03:54:430 (5,6,1) - That reads as a 1/2 pattern, make it flow.

04:54:055 (9,10) - make these border the slider equally, it doesnt look good when a note is overlapping the track

05:26:398 (1) - NO that spinner is god damn ludicrous just leave it out and use the fade as a nice result screen effect.

Yeah like always the errors stand out in the second play but its a sick map, i cant really make easy maps like this due to lack of restraint...
Topic Starter
Shira

MisterDinner wrote:

m4m (you honestly dont have to mod my map i just posted an m4m for the opportunity)
I havent felt this much joy playing a map in a long time. sure but itd be nice if you read the rules kek. says i mod first since i dont want to give a bad quality mod and you give me this amazing one

Mod m8
First off about the beginning, i cant remember where and when i read it but i saw somewhere sometime that mapping lyrics isnt something you should do, because lyrics are often not perfectly on beat. It might be passable here because the vocals are as on beat as they could possibly be, just a heads up. usually. but theres not much/loud instruments in the beginning so it should be fine

hp5 is a bit low for a 4.10* map thats this easy to play try 6,5 or 7, after missing a bunch and nearly failing the player shouldnt be able to regain that health in a few seconds, 7 is enough that if the player for some reason cant aim while playing this (which is probably a player that shouldnt be playing 4*s anyway) will have to work to get pp from a map he/she can barely play. ✓ i couldve swore there was a mod that told be to change hp lower but oh well fixfix

01:06:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part could do with some jumps to keep it interesting, not essential it seems fine, just a suggestion. slider jumps
02:30:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^

01:59:305 (5,6) - i think you could put 6 sliders or 1/6 stacks there because the kicks threw me off, there are streams near the end so i think its doable.. there hasnt been a complaint on it so far but maybe. we'll see :^)

02:22:367 (2,3,4) - kind of difficult to read ✓ modified

03:05:680 (6,7) - the spacing is just way too big for whats going on in the song. this is to emphasize the violin
03:23:867 (7,1) - ^ ^

03:42:242 (2) - this note isnt mapped to anything instead of a slider its notes :D like the beginning of my first kiai same mapping

03:54:430 (5,6,1) - That reads as a 1/2 pattern, make it flow. this is 80bpm so it should be fine also provides a little difficulty

04:54:055 (9,10) - make these border the slider equally, it doesnt look good when a note is overlapping the track ✓ hopefully fix?

05:26:398 (1) - NO that spinner is god damn ludicrous just leave it out and use the fade as a nice result screen effect. I KNOW I KNOW but it matches the music so..

Yeah like always the errors stand out in the second play but its a sick map, i cant really make easy maps like this due to lack of restraint... i feel u
thank you for the mod!
MisterDinner

Shiratoi wrote:

sure but itd be nice if you read the rules kek. says i mod first since i dont want to give a bad quality mod and you give me this amazing one
Your picture really suits what you just said topkek.

Like i said your quality doesnt matter, I also said that you dont have to mod it if youre too lazy or busy, dont rush to get it done, stress gives you cancer, well actually living gives you cancer, its proven, but take your time.

Anyways this is only half an hour of work, I just spent 3 1/2 hours modding a 3 star diff. Dude it had skinning problems, taiko spread problems, placement problems, the works m8.

GL in ranking, I'll probably be able to dthr this by the time it does. (That isn't an insult I'm close)
Topic Starter
Shira

MisterDinner wrote:

Shiratoi wrote:

sure but itd be nice if you read the rules kek. says i mod first since i dont want to give a bad quality mod and you give me this amazing one
Your picture really suits what you just said topkek.

Like i said your quality doesnt matter, I also said that you dont have to mod it if youre too lazy or busy, dont rush to get it done, stress gives you cancer, well actually living gives you cancer, its proven, but take your time.

Anyways this is only half an hour of work, I just spent 3 1/2 hours modding a 3 star diff. Dude it had skinning problems, taiko spread problems, placement problems, the works m8.

GL in ranking, I'll probably be able to dthr this by the time it does. (That isn't an insult I'm close)
holy you have a lot of patience :o tbh I would just give up halfway. but thank you for your concern >< as for modding, it's not like I have stress of doing it, I just want to get it done since I know I'm going to forget about it. best of luck to your map and modding that 3* ~
O-Moei
Shiracchan
\:3/
Chihara Minori

O-Moei wrote:

Shiracchan
\:3/
I start hate yellow . . .
-C O N T R A L-
Mod from my queue

General
Its just a suggestion but i would prefer a little bit higher AR.

Connection
01:29:492 (6,7) - Maybe blanket?
03:00:055 (7) - Would prefer a linear slider, maybe parallel to 03:00:430 (8) - ?
03:14:117 (4,5) - u could do this blanket a little little bit better i think :p

Hm, i think thats all what i got for now. The song is really beautiful and i like the map. I hope u will get this ranked, i will shoot a Kudosu for ya :3
Hope i was helpful. So much mods on this map, thats why i found not so much ;) xD

Good Luck!
_handholding
hi from my queue, I'll just be quick

Connection
  1. 00:28:930 (3) - I feel like this would flow better in rhythm if you ended it at 00:30:055
  2. 00:34:180 (2,3) - Would play better if you added a small jumps in between just like 00:33:617 (6,1) -
  3. 00:34:742 (4,5) - ^
  4. 00:40:930 (3) - Why didn't you make this a 3/4 slider to map the vocals? You did it for 00:37:930 (4) . Doing so would take out the awkward pause, map the vocals and improve flow
  5. 00:58:555 (2,3) - when playing the stack doesn't play that well imo >< how about this http://puu.sh/qA6Z4/88e55ff9c8.jpg ? It takes out the stack and still keeps the structure of the map
  6. 01:06:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These sliders have more spacing than the circles jumps after it. I recommend you either increase the spacing of the circle jumps or decrease the sliders
  7. 01:37:930 (3) - same as 00:58:555 (2,3)
  8. 01:59:305 (5,6) - Personally I would split this into 4 reverse sliders as it's split into 4 triplet patterns http://puu.sh/qA7pH/15fc144b63.jpg
  9. 02:30:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 01:06:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
  10. 03:42:055 (1,2) - turn into a 1/4 slider. I don't see any reason why (2) needs to be clickable
  11. 03:55:930 - Make this clickable, You've been mapping the vocals a lot throughout the map and in this section, it feels weird that you skipped this vocal sound.
  12. 03:58:930 (5) - 1/2 slider for vocals?
    I noticed your NCs are inconsistent in places like 05:03:430 (1) and 04:02:305 (1)
gl!
Topic Starter
Shira

Time Capsule wrote:

O-Moei wrote:

Shiracchan
\:3/
I start hate yellow . . .
O-Moeieieieieie
let me give u some yellow :D

-C O N T R A L- wrote:

Mod from my queue

General
Its just a suggestion but i would prefer a little bit higher AR. ill consider

Connection
01:29:492 (6,7) - Maybe blanket? i dont want it to interfere with the other slider (01:30:055 (8) -) :(
03:00:055 (7) - Would prefer a linear slider, maybe parallel to 03:00:430 (8) - ? ✓ fixfix
03:14:117 (4,5) - u could do this blanket a little little bit better i think :p

Hm, i think thats all what i got for now. The song is really beautiful and i like the map. I hope u will get this ranked, i will shoot a Kudosu for ya :3
Hope i was helpful. So much mods on this map, thats why i found not so much ;) xD

Good Luck!
thank you for the mod and the star ahh ;A;

Kisses wrote:

hi from my queue, I'll just be quick

Connection
  1. 00:28:930 (3) - I feel like this would flow better in rhythm if you ended it at 00:30:055 i think its fine? she ends the "bu" part here
  2. 00:34:180 (2,3) - Would play better if you added a small jumps in between just like 00:33:617 (6,1) - i think it looks more aesthetic like this
  3. 00:34:742 (4,5) - ^ ^
  4. 00:40:930 (3) - Why didn't you make this a 3/4 slider to map the vocals? You did it for 00:37:930 (4) . Doing so would take out the awkward pause, map the vocals and improve flow the instruments start being more noticable here so i think it has more emphasis like this but maybe if someone mentions it again owo
  5. 00:58:555 (2,3) - when playing the stack doesn't play that well imo >< how about this http://puu.sh/qA6Z4/88e55ff9c8.jpg ? It takes out the stack and still keeps the structure of the map awh ;; this was something that i like so i hope to keep it for emphasis
  6. 01:06:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These sliders have more spacing than the circles jumps after it. I recommend you either increase the spacing of the circle jumps or decrease the sliders
  7. 01:37:930 (3) - same as 00:58:555 (2,3) ~
  8. 01:59:305 (5,6) - Personally I would split this into 4 reverse sliders as it's split into 4 triplet patterns http://puu.sh/qA7pH/15fc144b63.jpg
  9. 02:30:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 01:06:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
  10. 03:42:055 (1,2) - turn into a 1/4 slider. I don't see any reason why (2) needs to be clickable ✓ since a lot of people said the same thing
  11. 03:55:930 - Make this clickable, You've been mapping the vocals a lot throughout the map and in this section, it feels weird that you skipped this vocal sound.
  12. 03:58:930 (5) - 1/2 slider for vocals?
    I noticed your NCs are inconsistent in places like 05:03:430 (1) and 04:02:305 (1) ✓ one day my nc's will improve :^(
gl!
thank you for the mod !
Gus
hi m4m from ur qUEUEUUEUEU

[Connection]
could move od up a bit, its low for the *, od7 would fit well

00:22:180 (2,3) - should be 1/6th slider(s)

00:43:930 (3) - looks better as a str8 slider

00:54:805 (7) - nc

01:09:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this section kills any momentum that the spaced sliders had going, don't make it pause so abrubtly here; use sliders
like so:



or in your own way

01:45:430 (9,1,2,3,4) - ok no complaints here just wanna say this use of hitsound is bomb my dude

In general: past 2mins it seems to flow so much better here with less pauses and abruptness, I'd apply this to the beginning too if possible

02:33:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ok kills momentum but not as much, this is a good pattern here

03:00:805 (1,2,3,4,1) - the blue ticks in between these r crying to be mapped pls

03:06:805 (1,2,3,4) - ^

03:36:898 (1) - in between these spinners u could map that as a repeating slider

03:56:680 (7,8) - big ol jump considering the way it makes u stop and kills ur momentum and dreams

05:26:398 (1) - mute the end of spinner

ok in general also: I won't talk about this more bc theres plenty of example in the map

00:33:430 (5,6) - I feel like having these kind of double jumps (this example isnt very extreme, there are actual jumps like this but this is the earliest 1)
actual jumps @: 03:05:305 (4,5,6,7) and in other places
since most of your jumps are back and forth, they look like this exact type of double pattern: 01:41:867 (6,9,7,10) - heres the problem, this is major confusion especially on a low bpm map like this cus fam they look like doubles but they're jumps, someone could easily misread and mistake the jumps for doubles or the doubles for jumps, this mightt be too much of a style change, and to be honest it's prob ok but personally I think it would improve if changed so you can differentiate (stack the doubles!)

cool map good luck w the set dude!!1
_IxApplePie_
Helo! NM req from my WQ~ :)

[ Connection ]
  1. 00:54:805 (7) - you missed your NC here
  2. 01:45:430 (9) - deleting this would make a really nice suspension here :)
  3. 01:45:055 (8) - if you're following ^ , then making this stack over with 01:45:805 (1) would really emphasis this note, or maybe just put more distance as this is a strong beat
  4. 02:34:367 (3,4) - and 02:35:492 (3,4) - the distance here is smaller than the ones previously ( e.g. 01:10:367 (3,4) )
  5. 02:49:367 (2) - put a further spacing for this from 02:48:805 (1) - would feel much better, since the ones with finish hitsounds (02:48:805 (1,4) ) have a bigger spacing too :c
  6. 02:52:367 (2) - ^
nice map overall, good luck!
Topic Starter
Shira

Gus wrote:

hi m4m from ur qUEUEUUEUEU

[Connection]
could move od up a bit, its low for the *, od7 would fit well light insane~

00:22:180 (2,3) - should be 1/6th slider(s) im following the same pattern again

00:43:930 (3) - looks better as a str8 slider ✓ i didnt see the difference but ok ono

00:54:805 (7) - nc

01:09:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this section kills any momentum that the spaced sliders had going, don't make it pause so abrubtly here; use sliders
like so: its just hitting the big notes dont see the problem ?



or in your own way

01:45:430 (9,1,2,3,4) - ok no complaints here just wanna say this use of hitsound is bomb my dude to the wonderful time capsule

In general: past 2mins it seems to flow so much better here with less pauses and abruptness, I'd apply this to the beginning too if possible it slowly gets harder from each kiai

02:33:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ok kills momentum but not as much, this is a good pattern here ~

03:00:805 (1,2,3,4,1) - the blue ticks in between these r crying to be mapped pls like always, just hitting the strong beats

03:06:805 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

03:36:898 (1) - in between these spinners u could map that as a repeating slider nope i think the hitsounds take care of it fine

03:56:680 (7,8) - big ol jump considering the way it makes u stop and kills ur momentum and dreams 1/2 pause ;o

05:26:398 (1) - mute the end of spinner it is ?_?

ok in general also: I won't talk about this more bc theres plenty of example in the map

00:33:430 (5,6) - I feel like having these kind of double jumps (this example isnt very extreme, there are actual jumps like this but this is the earliest 1)
actual jumps @: 03:05:305 (4,5,6,7) and in other places
since most of your jumps are back and forth, they look like this exact type of double pattern: 01:41:867 (6,9,7,10) - heres the problem, this is major confusion especially on a low bpm map like this cus fam they look like doubles but they're jumps, someone could easily misread and mistake the jumps for doubles or the doubles for jumps, this mightt be too much of a style change, and to be honest it's prob ok but personally I think it would improve if changed so you can differentiate (stack the doubles!) ive said this before but im just hitting the larger beats and the ar will help because as you said, low bpm

cool map good luck w the set dude!!1
thank you for the mod !

_IxApplePie_ wrote:

Helo! NM req from my WQ~ :)

[ Connection ]
  1. 00:54:805 (7) - you missed your NC here
  2. 01:45:430 (9) - deleting this would make a really nice suspension here :) i want to hit all the notes here :o
  3. 01:45:055 (8) - if you're following ^ , then making this stack over with 01:45:805 (1) would really emphasis this note, or maybe just put more distance as this is a strong beat ~
  4. 02:34:367 (3,4) - and 02:35:492 (3,4) - the distance here is smaller than the ones previously ( e.g. 01:10:367 (3,4) )
  5. 02:49:367 (2) - put a further spacing for this from 02:48:805 (1) - would feel much better, since the ones with finish hitsounds (02:48:805 (1,4) ) have a bigger spacing too :c the upcurve has enough emphasis imo ><
  6. 02:52:367 (2) - ^ ~
nice map overall, good luck!
thank you for the mod !
Yukiyo
Hi o/
from my q
Disclaimer: I sometimes sound rude in my mods I don't mean it

Ugg already so many mods ... I'll try to find something
Future~


Connection
00:07:930 (3,4) - maybe form the slider so that it leads into the circle instead of above it
00:16:930 (4,5) - hmm awkward angle
00:28:367 (2) - hmm ctrl+g perhaps? it would creat a better flow for 00:28:930 (3) - which is the most emphasized note here, isn't it?
01:26:492 (4) - hmmm how about ctrl+h this one and put it at the same place ... I know you prolly want the outward flow but this note is really just a filler so why make it something fancy
01:33:430 (9,2) - Stack~
02:09:805 (1,2) - awkward angle
02:36:055 (5) - Ugh NC?
04:43:742 (6) - this feels kinda awkward in place ... hmm I'd place it a tick before because then it at least emphasizes the snare
05:01:742 (6,7) - is this flowbreak really necessary?

honestly very nice map
not much to say about it



sry for short mod ; _ ;
Electoz
[Connection]

  1. 00:00:805 - You need to use the same volume from both red and green lines to be considered rankable.
  2. Generally NC should be put on every spinner, mentioning this just in case they are not intended.
  3. 00:06:805 (1,2,3) - Quite small spacings which can be confused with other 1/4 spacings, I prefer the similar spacings as 00:01:180 (2,3,4) .
  4. 00:12:055 - Didn't hear anything here so how about 5% volume instead of 45?
  5. 00:33:617 (6,1) - Idk if you're trying to emphasize 00:33:805 (1) here but it doesn't really work cuz 00:33:617 (6,1) can be misread as a 1/1 spacing considering how 00:33:430 (5,6) is spaced, using 0.8 DS on 00:33:617 (6,1) would already work fine imo.
  6. 00:51:617 (7) - Feels weird to make this clickable cuz you seems to focus having objects clickable on vocal in general, 00:51:055 (6,7) can be changed to 2 1/4 sliders to fit with vocal, or if you prefer a less dense rhythm you can go for a 1/2 repeat slider instead of 00:50:680 (5,6,7) . Same applies to 00:54:617 (6) .
  7. 00:49:930 (4,5) - 00:52:930 (3,4) - The rhythm on these places are pretty much same so better either stack both of these or not at all, what you have now feels like I have to pause and wait for 00:53:680 (4) but the same thing didn't happen on 00:49:930 (4,5) .
  8. 01:03:805 (1,2,3) - Prefer a consistent spacing here so it can follow vocal better.
  9. 01:06:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - When the rhythm is building up like this, it's better to gradually increase the spacings on each slider, here you can see the spacing is decreased on 01:07:555 (3,4) and somehow got a drastic increase on 01:08:305 (5,6) which shouldn't happen cuz there's nothing to emphasize on 01:08:680 (6) compare to other sliders. I recommend rework this pattern while increasing spacing gradually and evenly from each slider.
  10. 01:12:430 (7,1) - The spacing here should be bigger than 01:12:242 (6,7) - 01:15:617 (9,1) so that it can emphasize the beginning of kiai properly, which is where the rhythm changes.
  11. 01:27:805 (1,2,3,4) - Okay so you did emphasize vocal with 01:24:805 (1,2,3) but not here? Anyways the current one doesn't look really good cuz 01:28:367 is a strong sound and it should be clickable.
  12. 01:34:555 (3,4) - Optional but the spacing here can be smaller to make 01:34:930 (5) more stand out.
  13. 01:35:117 (1) - Ending this at 01:36:430 sounds better imo cuz vocal faded out here.
  14. 01:41:867 (6,7,8) - This pattern doesn't play well, from what it looks, it looks like 01:42:242 (8) is gonna get emphasized, but it's not cuz 01:42:055 (7) is a stronger sound but it's in the middle of that triangle so it doesn't look stand out as much as 01:42:242 (8) . How about deleting 01:41:492 (5) and move 01:41:867 (6,7,8) to 1/4 tick earlier? Sounds a lot better this way.
  15. 01:37:742 - 01:43:742 (4) - Better map both of these or not at all for consistency.
  16. 01:51:242 (8) - 01:57:242 (10) - 02:03:242 (8) - Not really needed imo, at least I don't hear anything on these places and considering the song is still calmer than some other parts these can be removed so rhythm will be less dense.
  17. 02:15:805 (1) - 02:18:805 (1) - Missing whistle cuz you have them on 00:51:805 - 00:54:805 .
  18. 02:30:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Almost good but 02:33:055 (7,8) need to have the highest spacing with the same reasoning as explained before, I recommend decreasing spacings on 02:30:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) so the final spacings won't be too big and overdone.
  19. 02:36:617 (8,9,1) - There's a triplet here but not 01:12:805 (1) ?
  20. 02:39:055 (1,2) - Stacks usually works when the objects at the bottom is stronger, which is not in this case, unstacking this would play better. Same applies to 04:48:055 (3,4) .
  21. 02:41:492 (6,7,8) - Kinda curious what are you going for with these 3 circles here cuz I don't think it reflects anything from the song, it didn't seems to reflect vocal like what 02:42:055 (1,2,3,4,1) did, personally I prefer what you did on first kiai 01:16:930 (5,6,7) where you clearly distinguished instruments 01:17:680 (6,7) from vocals 01:18:055 (8,9) .
  22. 04:12:992 (2,3,4) - Same as above.
  23. 02:46:930 (5) - A strong vocal landed here, but you spaced 02:47:117 (6) higher and there's nothing to emphasize on it, recommend to use a smaller spacing on 02:46:930 (5,6) .
  24. 02:51:805 (1,2) - aaaa was expecting a higher spacing for emphasis on 02:52:367 (2) .
  25. 03:04:555 (2,3) - Curious why this is mapped differently from 03:00:805 (1,2,3,4,1) .
  26. 03:11:117 (4,5) - a 1/2 slider+circle instead of this is better imo cuz there's a strong sound on 03:11:117 which can be supported better with a longer slider.
  27. 03:18:054 (6,7) - Ctrl+G rhythm fits vocal better as 03:18:430 will be clickable instead of 03:18:242 .
  28. 03:26:492 (5,6) - Ctrl+G rhythm cuz 03:26:680 is strong and should be clickable.
  29. 03:35:305 - Could have used all circles here from this point onward as the violin is getting more prominent at this point, gradually increasing the spacings like 02:30:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) would work here as well.
  30. 03:36:898 (1,1) - Just one spinner is enough cuz the second spinner feels pretty rushed while the song is getting slower, but it's a matter of preference so it's up to you.
  31. 03:56:117 (5) - To me 03:56:492 is clearly more prominent than this one so it should be mapped and have this one removed.
  32. 04:04:555 (3) - Optional but how about changing this to 2 circles? Kinda wasted for not making 04:04:742 clickable.
  33. 04:04:930 (4) - Should be ended at 04:05:680 so that sound won't be skipped.
  34. 04:15:242 (8,1) - Was expecting a higher spacing than 04:14:867 (6,7,8) maybe it's just me idk
  35. 04:32:492 (3) - Should be removed, the song is calmer now so rhythm should be less dense too, I don't hear anything here in the first place though.
  36. 04:48:430 (5,6) - The spacing here should be smaller than 04:48:242 (4,5) to make 04:48:430 (5) more stand out which is a stronger sound. Actually there's a few more of this later on but I'm too lazy to mention them zzz
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