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Hotaru-
OMG OMG OMG aaaaaa
Korean Loliss <3

Shooted '3'
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

OMG OMG OMG aaaaaa
Korean Loliss <3

Shooted '3'
Thanks jakiiii~ o3o)/
Memories-
Hi, Elin!
This is little mod from me, btw, nice BG, and WTF that voices?! (/me nosebleeding)
Mod
1|2|3|4

Beginner

01:09:428 (69428|2) - How about move to column 1?
01:27:709 (87709|0) - I think it move to column 3, for pattern before
01:28:178 (88178|2) - How about move into column 1?
01:30:756 (90756|2) - How about move into column 4?

Normal

00:18:803 (18803|0) - How about move to column 4?
00:21:849 (21849|3) - How about move to column 3?
00:22:084 (22084|2) - And this to move to column 4?
00:38:959 (38959|1) - How about adding one notes?
00:42:709 (42709|3) - ^

Ichi's Sweet Brownie

I think it's nothing wrong with this diff
Well, that's the mod, I'm very sure it very bad, I'm sorry about it, I'm still new on modding, btw, I like this song very much :D
Ichigaki

leoudel wrote:

Superman is dead-Sound - Sweet Brownie


ichi
  1. 01:15:053 - add 1 maneh chi, kick ok
  2. 01:16:107 - ^
    ichi ET

other part is fine, goodluck uwu

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there little mod , dunno if that can help or not

dadon
Key=1/2/3/4
[Ichi's Sweet Brownie]
hi ichi hi Eter
00:03:217 (3217|2) - here you added a note but not here : 00:06:967 (6967|0) - , both are simillar in sound imho I decided to remove it
00:10:365 (10365|3,10482|2,10599|1) - thoose section might be more catchy and easy to understand as 1/4 , ^ earlier you used 1/4 then suddenly you leave a blank
I think it's okay to put 1/4 here since it's not that hard to read/ play I already added it (?)
00:14:115 (14115|3) - regardless of the previous suggestion , you forget to add a note here (maybe you intended it tho so just sayin in case) yes, added
00:21:381 (21381|0) - The double piano notes should be here , the piano sound that you use to make double is here and not here : 00:21:498 (21498|3,21498|1) - (move one note down basically) nope, i'm not following the hi-hat, instead I followed the main rhythm ( i mean the double notes are only for that )
00:28:881 (28881|1,28998|2,28998|3) - ^same suggestion ^
00:30:990 (30990|2) - you could add a note in 3 for a softer piano sound , but since it's barely audible it's up to you :3 added
01:00:990 (60990|0,60990|1,61224|3,61224|2,61342|1,61342|0) - just a self opinion but this part sounds abit hard to catch up , don't really know how to change that tho so nvm I made some changes there and i added a note at 01:01:107 - so it'll more playable

Catchy song , Good Luck and have a nice day :3/
Thank you guys :D

http://puu.sh/pWJTO/62abe4eb9c.osu
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Memories- wrote:

Hi, Elin!
This is little mod from me, btw, nice BG, and WTF that voices?! (/me nosebleeding)
Mod
1|2|3|4

Beginner

01:09:428 (69428|2) - How about move to column 1?
01:27:709 (87709|0) - I think it move to column 3, for pattern before
01:28:178 (88178|2) - How about move into column 1?
01:30:756 (90756|2) - How about move into column 4?

Normal

00:18:803 (18803|0) - How about move to column 4?
00:21:849 (21849|3) - How about move to column 3?
00:22:084 (22084|2) - And this to move to column 4?
00:38:959 (38959|1) - How about adding one notes?
00:42:709 (42709|3) - ^

Ichi's Sweet Brownie

I think it's nothing wrong with this diff
Well, that's the mod, I'm very sure it very bad, I'm sorry about it, I'm still new on modding, btw, I like this song very much :D
Thanks for mod! i appreciate it! owo)b
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-
Ichi's Sweet Brownie Updated!
Aste-
MOD here~

you already know my column format. right? skipped

General~

Found Nothing

Chart:

Beginner-

Found Nothing.. pretty well made~

Normal-

00:02:279 (2279|0,2279|1,2513|2) - you are following the Guitar on the opening. right? i suggest you pick someting else.. because the instrument you pick atm are barely audible, how about folowing the synth instead? make a simple pattern will do

the rest are good enough

Ichi Sweety Bunny Brownie Loli Let's Sack Him Shall we~? -

00:17:162 (17162|2,17631|2,17631|3) - i don't really get this.. same amount of sound. but different amount of note. care to explain it to me?

00:21:498 (21498|2,21498|3) - a bit inconsisitence here if you ignore this section 00:17:748 - 00:19:623 - 00:25:248 - 00:27:123 - and soo~ you can check it yourself~

00:54:193 (54193|2,54193|1) - i dont hear anything beside Vocal and hi hat. so why you give it 2 note while 00:49:037 - 00:49:506 - 00:49:974 - have a same amount as that only have 1? if it's intended for transition. that wouldn't be necessary since 00:53:959 (53959|2,53959|3,53959|0,54428|0,54428|3) - are enough to represent the transition

00:54:662 (54662|2,54779|0,54779|1,54896|2,54896|3,55131|1,55365|0,55365|2,55482|1,55482|3,55599|2,55834|1,55834|3,55834|0,56068|2,56303|0,56303|3,56537|1,56654|3,56654|2,56771|1,56771|0,57006|0,57240|3,57240|2,57357|0,57357|1,57474|2,57709|3,57709|0,57709|1,57943|1,58178|3,58178|2) - uhh.. can you explain this to me? why you map the synth here while the synth are starting from this point? 00:46:928 -

Mod end ~
Aras
S.I.D. and Sid and SID

Normal
* 00:09:428 - gimana kalau gini aja lin ?
berikut beberapa alasannya :
- 00:13:178 - LN disini ga sama dengan yang di 00:09:428 -
- trus notenya aku coba re arrange biar gini

* 00:46:459 (46459|1,46459|0) - note nya pisah di dua tangan seems better
* 01:00:053 (60053|3,60756|2) - swap? re- arrange note sebelumnya kalau acc
* 01:08:959 - LN ke-2 nya gak start sini aja? kalau accept jangan llupa ini 01:23:724 (83724|0) -
*

other diff siap maghrib ya owo Beginner is clean, owo)b
Ichigaki

Aste- wrote:

MOD here~

you already know my column format. right? skipped

General~

Found Nothing

Chart:

Ichi Sweety Bunny Brownie Loli Let's Sack Him Shall we~? -

00:17:162 (17162|2,17631|2,17631|3) - i don't really get this.. same amount of sound. but different amount of note. care to explain it to me? I changed some layering here, maybe my bad because i don't really hear it well there

00:21:498 (21498|2,21498|3) - a bit inconsisitence here if you ignore this section 00:17:748 - 00:19:623 - 00:25:248 - 00:27:123 - and soo~ you can check it yourself~ ^

00:54:193 (54193|2,54193|1) - i dont hear anything beside Vocal and hi hat. so why you give it 2 note while 00:49:037 - 00:49:506 - 00:49:974 - have a same amount as that only have 1? if it's intended for transition. that wouldn't be necessary since 00:53:959 (53959|2,53959|3,53959|0,54428|0,54428|3) - are enough to represent the transition Pretty obvious that i following the piano and hihat only (and drum)

00:54:662 (54662|2,54779|0,54779|1,54896|2,54896|3,55131|1,55365|0,55365|2,55482|1,55482|3,55599|2,55834|1,55834|3,55834|0,56068|2,56303|0,56303|3,56537|1,56654|3,56654|2,56771|1,56771|0,57006|0,57240|3,57240|2,57357|0,57357|1,57474|2,57709|3,57709|0,57709|1,57943|1,58178|3,58178|2) - uhh.. can you explain this to me? why you map the synth here while the synth are starting from this point? 00:46:928 - i still keep it, but and made the previous part (which have same melody) to be same as the timing you have mentioned there (and yes, some slightly changes)

Mod end ~
Thanks

http://puu.sh/pXUdz/9487a8f9f1.osu
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Aras25 wrote:

S.I.D. and Sid and SID

Normal
* 00:09:428 - gimana kalau gini aja lin ? Ok!
berikut beberapa alasannya :
- 00:13:178 - LN disini ga sama dengan yang di 00:09:428 -
- trus notenya aku coba re arrange biar gini

* 00:46:459 (46459|1,46459|0) - note nya pisah di dua tangan seems better keep aja, hehehe. kayaknya udah pass
* 01:00:053 (60053|3,60756|2) - swap? re- arrange note sebelumnya kalau acc ^
* 01:08:959 - LN ke-2 nya gak start sini aja? kalau accept jangan llupa ini 01:23:724 (83724|0) - itu ln pertama ikut vokal, ln yg ke 2 ngelayer 1/4 nya

other diff siap maghrib ya owo Beginner is clean, owo)b
Makasehhh Aras >w<)/

Ichi's Sweet Brownie UPDATED!
NVAN
I was thinking to re-map my standard set. Would you mind if I join your set?
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

XeroiZi HD wrote:

I was thinking to re-map my standard set. Would you mind if I join your set?
maap bgt zik, tapi udah planning bkin mania mapset aja.. hehehehe
Gomuryuu
Hi Elin & Ichi~

Here's my mod as requested via in-game chat

Column 1|2|3|4

Beginner
Nothing particularly had to be changed, overall a good beginner diff, but i'm going to be a bit nitpicky about this part 01:16:224 (76224|3,76224|0,76459|0,76459|3,76693|1) - which might be a little bit too hard for a beginner diff and it really sticks out on the diff curve http://puu.sh/q03Fm/bafb72b671.jpg
i know that it is intended because the music suggest so and yeah it is nice to have one or two element of surprise along the map, but you might want to consider nerfing it down to something like this http://puu.sh/q04qv/2387cdb07d.jpg or something similar as it also provide consistency to 01:08:959 (68959|1) - here you used 1/1 LN to cover the 1/4 drum sound

01:23:959 (83959|0) - still related to my previous point, also a small consistency issue here, i'm not sure if you are mapping this LN to the vocal or to supposedly cover a nonexistent 1/4 drum sound (unlike 01:08:959 (68959|1) - which actually have 1/4 sound), if it is intended for the vocal then you should do the same to the other part that have similar vocal, else just make it a normal note
Normal
01:17:162 (77162|2,77396|3) - swap column, unnecessary jack also for comfortability & better play i guess
nice flow, good job ;)
Ichi's Sweet Brownie
00:32:162 ~ 00:45:053 - in this section, i noticed that the jack LN pattern should have changed one beat earlier for each key change, for instance 00:35:443 (35443|3) - this LN should be moved to column 2, following the next key for the jack pattern and so on for each key change. and i also noticed that there's another synth sound in the transition between each key change that could make some interesting pattern, such as http://puu.sh/q07Ze/4b837e617d.jpg or any similar pattern

that's all i found, great rhythm choice as always, loved it :)

Nice map and Lovely song, sorry if i can't be of much help, good luck

GO RANK!~ :)
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi Elin & Ichi~

Here's my mod as requested via in-game chat

Column 1|2|3|4

Beginner
Nothing particularly had to be changed, overall a good beginner diff, but i'm going to be a bit nitpicky about this part 01:16:224 (76224|3,76224|0,76459|0,76459|3,76693|1) - which might be a little bit too hard for a beginner diff and it really sticks out on the diff curve http://puu.sh/q03Fm/bafb72b671.jpg
i know that it is intended because the music suggest so and yeah it is nice to have one or two element of surprise along the map, but you might want to consider nerfing it down to something like this http://puu.sh/q04qv/2387cdb07d.jpg or something similar as it also provide consistency to 01:08:959 (68959|1) - here you used 1/1 LN to cover the 1/4 drum sound

01:23:959 (83959|0) - still related to my previous point, also a small consistency issue here, i'm not sure if you are mapping this LN to the vocal or to supposedly cover a nonexistent 1/4 drum sound (unlike 01:08:959 (68959|1) - which actually have 1/4 sound), if it is intended for the vocal then you should do the same to the other part that have similar vocal, else just make it a normal note
Normal
01:17:162 (77162|2,77396|3) - swap column, unnecessary jack also for comfortability & better play i guess
nice flow, good job ;)

that's all i found, great rhythm choice as always, loved it :)

Nice map and Lovely song, sorry if i can't be of much help, good luck

GO RANK!~ :)
All Acc, Thanks for MOD >w<
lenpai
"ps. loli song"

was expecting nanahira. Disappointed </3

some really easy stuff so dont expect a good mod

got nothing for sweet brownie

cant believe im modding a normal diff huhuhuhu
00:30:053 - i think the section should be mapped like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5612098
00:45:990 (45990|0) - idk this could work better at 2
00:58:412 (58412|2,58881|2,59349|2,59818|2) - these stuff are really not audible on 100% thus the previous screenshot stongly suggesting to drop these notes

well that was a crappy mod from me /me throws star

Good luck!
Ichigaki

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi Elin & Ichi~

Here's my mod as requested via in-game chat

Column 1|2|3|4


Ichi's Sweet Brownie
00:32:162 ~ 00:45:053 - in this section, i noticed that the jack LN pattern should have changed one beat earlier for each key change, for instance 00:35:443 (35443|3) - this LN should be moved to column 2, following the next key for the jack pattern and so on for each key change. and i also noticed that there's another synth sound in the transition between each key change that could make some interesting pattern, such as http://puu.sh/q07Ze/4b837e617d.jpg or any similar pattern pretty nice catch here :)

that's all i found, great rhythm choice as always, loved it :)

Nice map and Lovely song, sorry if i can't be of much help, good luck

GO RANK!~ :)
Thanks!
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Lenfried- wrote:

"ps. loli song"

was expecting nanahira. Disappointed </3

some really easy stuff so dont expect a good mod

got nothing for sweet brownie

cant believe im modding a normal diff huhuhuhu
00:30:053 - i think the section should be mapped like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5612098 hmm.. but i think that part have loud sound in red tick, so keep for this one
00:45:990 (45990|0) - idk this could work better at 2 oki
00:58:412 (58412|2,58881|2,59349|2,59818|2) - these stuff are really not audible on 100% thus the previous screenshot stongly suggesting to drop these notessame as ^^

well that was a crappy mod from me /me throws star

Good luck!
Thanks len for mod and for star <3
Virtue-


Virtue's Mania Modding Queue


Things that you need to know :
  1. this mod contains of suggestions, something that need to be fixed, and my opinions
  2. if your map still need to be fixed, just req in my queue

General
Title/Artist : OK!
Song : OK!
BPM/Offset : OK!
BG/Video : OK!
Hitsounds : OK!

Beginner
00:01:928 (1928|3,3803|1,5678|1,7553|3) - dst, itu stop di biru... mundurin 1 garis :v
00:08:724 (8724|3) - move to 2
00:47:396 (47396|3,47396|0) - why double? padahal di depan gk double :/

Normal
no comment

Ichi's Sweet Brownie
no comment, add some SVs(?)

-END OF MOD-


SCORES
92/100

sorry for very very short mod :( (ni map kek g gua apa"in =w=) klo g guna jgn give kudos

CAN'T WAIT THIS SIMPLE AND FUN MAP RANKED OMG >w<)
Amids
Request NM ><

Maaf di PHP-in terus :(

1 | 2 | 3 | 4


Beginner
* 00:16:928 - add 1 lagi buat simbal
* 01:16:459 (76459|0,76459|1,76928|3,76928|2) - ini CTRL + H aja biar gak awkward


Ichi's Coklat Manis Kayak Aku
* 00:20:912 - miss, add 1 note
* 00:45:053 - agak sreg liatnya, mungkin kayak gini lebih enak http://puu.sh/q6omG/756364b1b6.png
* 01:30:404 - sampai 01:31:928 - teriak "ikkeh ~ ikkeh" :v

Overall dah Bagos~ apalagi lagu Fine Lady >///< goodluck buat mapnya elin owo)/
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Virtue- wrote:



Virtue's Mania Modding Queue


Things that you need to know :
  1. this mod contains of suggestions, something that need to be fixed, and my opinions
  2. if your map still need to be fixed, just req in my queue

General
Title/Artist : OK!
Song : OK!
BPM/Offset : OK!
BG/Video : OK!
Hitsounds : OK!

Beginner
00:01:928 (1928|3,3803|1,5678|1,7553|3) - dst, itu stop di biru... mundurin 1 garis :v jadi ane ntar
00:08:724 (8724|3) - move to 2 nope
00:47:396 (47396|3,47396|0) - why double? padahal di depan gk double :/ my bad, oke added

Normal
no comment

Ichi's Sweet Brownie
no comment, add some SVs(?)

-END OF MOD-


SCORES
92/100

sorry for very very short mod :( (ni map kek g gua apa"in =w=) klo g guna jgn give kudos

CAN'T WAIT THIS SIMPLE AND FUN MAP RANKED OMG >w<)

Hamids- wrote:

Request NM ><

Maaf di PHP-in terus :(

1 | 2 | 3 | 4


Beginner
* 00:16:928 - add 1 lagi buat simbal added
* 01:16:459 (76459|0,76459|1,76928|3,76928|2) - ini CTRL + H aja biar gak awkward ok



Overall dah Bagos~ apalagi lagu Fine Lady >///< goodluck buat mapnya elin owo)/
thanks modnya gaesss >w<)b
Ichigaki

Hamids- wrote:

Request NM ><

Maaf di PHP-in terus :(

1 | 2 | 3 | 4


Ichi's Coklat Manis Kayak Aku
* 00:20:912 - miss, add 1 note nice catch
* 00:45:053 - agak sreg liatnya, mungkin kayak gini lebih enak http://puu.sh/q6omG/756364b1b6.png aku ganti tapi versiku sendiri ww
* 01:30:404 - sampai 01:31:928 - teriak "ikkeh ~ ikkeh" :v instrumennya udah berhenti

Overall dah Bagos~ apalagi lagu Fine Lady >///< goodluck buat mapnya elin owo)/
thanks

http://puu.sh/qcAv1/3d24c724cf.osu
Cursetyl
Fun map :)

Beginner
Can't find anything wrong with this dif, good stuff

Normal
00:53:256 (53256|0) - Maybe start at the beginning of the word rather than the "ba" part

Ichi's Sweet Brownie
00:46:224 (46224|1) - Try placing an SV from this to 00:46:928 (46928|0,46928|2,46928|3)
01:01:342 (61342|3) - And another SV from this to 01:01:928 (61928|0,61928|3,61928|2)

Good luck with rank :D
Rivals_7
yo o/
sorry mager buat modding wkwkw
1|2|3|4

[General]

you might want to raise the HS volume to 40%. they're not rly audible

[Ichi's]

00:01:928 (1928|1) - W

00:02:279 (2279|0) - dunno if this W are worth to be added, this section is mainly a piano so i guess its more convenient to delete it (you could check "normal" for reference, there's more like this)

00:10:834 (10834|0) - I believe this should be C, well claps is literally louder here. you do that at - 00:11:771 (11771|3) - too

00:12:709 (12709|0) - ^

00:14:584 (14584|3) - ^

00:18:334 (18334|1) - C?

00:20:209 (20209|2) - ^

00:22:084 (22084|1) - ^

00:27:709 (27709|2) - ^

00:30:404 (30404|0,30756|0,31224|0) - delete W? also make it SN since there's no kick apparently

00:45:990 (45990|0) - should be C

00:46:928 (46928|3) - W?

00:55:834 (55834|0) - C?

00:57:709 (57709|0) - ^

01:00:756 (60756|0,60756|3) - delete w? also make it SN cuz it seems really faint here

01:01:928 (61928|3) - maybe C? loud crash tho

01:02:396 (62396|3) - to C? you could see normal for the reference since there's more

01:27:592 (87592|2,87709|3) - swap? juct to minimalize the triple stacking - 01:27:123 (87123|2,87357|2,87592|2) -

01:30:053 - Guess you could make it more interesting? try to follow pitch http://puu.sh/qptim/ab36643c7e.jpg

[Normal]

00:34:740 (34740|0) - move this to 4 maybe? just to make it a lil' bit look more hand balanced

01:01:928 (61928|2) - C maybe? loud crash

01:05:209 (65209|2,65443|0) - ctrl+g. so people could hit the double more convenient since there's an LN there

[Beginner]

01:16:459 (76459|1) - delete C, there's already C there

01:16:224 (76224|1,76224|0) - move to 3|4, its quite overkill for an EZ player. they probably will lose balance since they have to hold the LN after it

Good Luck :D
Ortlinde
Hi, Elinnnnnn...

all diffs are lust too good for me so maybe this one is a shitmod uwu

as usual feel free to reject

somehow i hear "uwu"sound at 01:08:724 -

moddar
[Beginner]
  1. 00:01:928 (1928|3) - End LN and add at 00:02:279 (the chord sound is clear) (00:03:803 (3803|1,5678|1,7553|3) - this too)
  2. 01:23:959 - Change 1 note into LN for consistency (see 01:08:959 (68959|1) - )
[Normal]
  1. 00:58:412 (58412|2,58881|2,59349|2,59818|2) - This note is unnecessary since it's for "normal" players imo
[Ichi]
00:58:178 - Add LN or change 1/2 note into LN

#kthxbye
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