blissfulyoshi wrote:

Warm:
01:28:863 (5) - it is sort of weird that there is nothing to follow the sbed down arrow here
01:49:096 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 00:53:282 (1)?

Cold:
Here is how I would fix the last chorus: (I like more combos rather than fewer)
02:30:956 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 02:19:794 (1)
02:33:747 (2) - new combo to be consistent with 02:22:584 (1)
02:36:538 (5) - The mass repeat is a little boring and doesn't fit that well imo. I would advise changing it. Regardless, new combo to follow the change in lyrics

Freezing:
01:05:840 (1,1) - the short spinner combined with the notes quickly after is more cruel than fun imo
01:28:166 (1,2,3,4,5) - The stack leniency's overlap with the hp bar looks aesthetically unpleasing. If you really want to keep the pattern, I advise you manually stack the notes in a nicer pattern
02:01:654 (1,1) - same as 01:05:840 (1,1)

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That is all I found on this run. Reply to the post, contact me, and I'll remod, hopefully I'll rebubble.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

(no kds pls)

Cold:
02:36:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern still does not fit that well for me. Then again, I am not sure what fits. If you have another idea try it, otherwise just tell me, and I'll rebubble.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Everything seems to check out, so I'll rebubble.

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

HI~ nice map
just want to know,
is it too late too upload this ? (my taiko diff)

can you take a look at it please ~

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

The timing seems to be off. After some testing I found - BPM: 172,02 / Offset: 3.060 - Remember to resnap all notes and everything after changing it. Fixed, but are you sure this is the right timing? Did you discuss about this with your friend? I'm scare

[Freezing]

01:02:965 (1,2) - This sudden doublet is really hard to read and confusing while playing. Change it to something else.
01:58:773 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:59:732 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
02:36:443 (1,2) - Same as 01:02:965. Fixed
02:36:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why don't you make this pattern similiar to 01:58:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) ? Much better.[/color] NO thanks

That's all, I guess.

Sorry but have to pop due to the timing issue. WWHHHHHYYYYYY

NatsumeRin wrote:

BPM 172.030 offset 278

oh yeah my message is too short, star.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Seems to be better now.

Re-Bubbled~

To the next BAT: Please take a look at the timing once again before ranking this.

ShadowzI wrote:

Wanted to give you some combo burst.
One is a cocky Cirno
and the other is a Dx Suwako

Update
Whoops Cirno might be to wide.
I can crop it (that's saying if you even want it in the first place =P) if you want.

Shiirn wrote:

i hate this song

osuplayer111 wrote:

Popped until every timing section is fixed up on all the difficulties.

Sakura Hana wrote:

Oh jeez, rapid flashing X_X
[Cold]
01:19:799 (4) - Reverse selection, will flow better.

[Warm]
02:18:742 (1) - Too close to spinner imo, you could do well without this note (if you do remove remember to NC the next one to prevent a spinner bug).

Should be fine for rank after fixes.

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ok after talking with a few BATs there's some Improvements this map needs before ranking:

- Set slider tick rate 2 on all difficulties
- Avoid using hitsound claps on sliderticks.
- Set the storyboarded arrows to diff specific only on the highest difficulty if you want to argue about this i got enough evidence to back it up, it MUST be done.

That's about it, im mostly asking for the bold part, the others feel free to change them if you really care about your map, this was a discussion with other members of the BAT and they pretty much pointed this out.

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ok, so much time has passed since i came here, plus quite a bit of stuff has changed, so i should just be safe

Rebubbled~

Sorry T.T

1. AR+1. The whole map was kinda boring with AR7, and certain patterns were hard to read (01:58:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6) for example, you have this pattern on multiple places), especially considering with that low AR it's very hard to notice it's on a blue tick.
   Also having OD8 and AR7 is kinda harsh in my opinion, when I played this with AR8 it felt so much better.

1. 01:58:164 (3) - In every kiai at this spot (in the kiai) you were following the voice. Around this area you were following the voice as well, and this slider doesn't do that properly. Maybe start it at 01:57:990 but keep the end the same? It sounds much better. (I actually clicked it too early cause I expected it to follow the voice every time heh, but that's just me)

lolcubes wrote:

Hey there, some bubble checking!

[Freezing]:

1. AR+1. The whole map was kinda boring with AR7, and certain patterns were hard to read (01:58:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6) for example, you have this pattern on multiple places), especially considering with that low AR it's very hard to notice it's on a blue tick.
   Also having OD8 and AR7 is kinda harsh in my opinion, when I played this with AR8 it felt so much better. // OK

[Cold]:

1. 01:58:164 (3) - In every kiai at this spot (in the kiai) you were following the voice. Around this area you were following the voice as well, and this slider doesn't do that properly. Maybe start it at 01:57:990 but keep the end the same? It sounds much better. (I actually clicked it too early cause I expected it to follow the voice every time heh, but that's just me) // Fixed and change the pattern. I was add 1 repeating slider for make a good flow for this slider

Not gonna pop over this, but if you make these changes I can rebubble immediately~.

Raging Bull wrote:

That slider is fixed yesssssssssssssssssssssss Well I have a lot more sliders to complain about but not a big deal.