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OtakuFlame wrote:

Birthday mod \:D/

[Painful Longing]
00:12:835 (1,2) - Plz ctrl+G, it would emphasize the melody better since it goes from higher sound tone to lower ( 00:11:969 (1,2) - ) and then from the same lower tone to higher.

00:23:511 (1) - Why nc, sometimes u put an nc, sometimes u don't... yea its used for slider velocity changes
00:37:357 (1) - ^ ^

01:36:491 (1) - Slider end not snapped wtf where did my green lines go (they were supposed to be 0.75x, 0.65x, 0.55x), fixed
01:36:780 (1) - ^

01:46:588 (1) - Why nc here again same as above
02:00:434 (1) - ^

02:11:251 (1) - Imo this slider should end on the white tick 02:11:395 - here no its actually a 1/3 slider and ends before the white tick due to the piano sound on the tail

03:03:318 (1,2) - Random followpoint because of inconsistent spacing fixed, i just used ctrl f so i didnt really check over that lol

03:36:593 (1) - This slider also should be a bit longer and end on blue tick 03:36:593 (1) - here. Yeah, there was one short slider like that, following the piano in before but as you probably know piano wasn't digitally generated but just live recorded (what also shows that u had to start slider on 1/8 yellow tick 02:44:532 (1) - here) so it doesn't mean they gotta have the same duration. It's more about finding the closest tick to the piano sound to snap the slider to. i mean thats what im doing lol, this slider ends on the piano which is at the yellow tick

03:49:411 (6) - Maybe new combo here i dont think its really necessary since its all part of the drum buildup but ill check

03:52:872 (1) - And again xd why nc explained already
04:06:719 (1) - ^

That's all :o
gl with ranking it finally :D
thanks for the mod lol
Mir
It is time.

after a lot of rechecks, timing changes, sloppy guitar playing, and updating, i think this map is finally ready to get on track to ranked

oh yeah we irc'd and stuff
Topic Starter
not very smart
oh
Kalibe
i'll mod tomorrow w
Makeli
finalleh
Kalibe
itssogood

- 00:14:017 (1,2) - can you space them diffirently than others 00:16:180 (2) - 00:17:911 (2) - since it's not the same snapping thing, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10799215 might work in this case
- 00:20:074 (1) - using normal whistle on slidertail would be cute, also remove whistle from sliderend, since it lands on nothing
- 00:59:016 (1) - that's a strong drum sound so drum sample + finish sounds good
- for parts like 01:02:479 (1) - 01:09:402 (1) - 01:16:325 (1) - hihats are really strong in the backgrounds so doing instead 1/2 slider + circle wouldn't be a bad option http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10799279 example
- 01:36:805 (1,1) - seems pretty overspaced to what song offer imo, try maybe https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10799299 or something diffirent if you don't like overlap
- 02:25:556 (1) - clap is missing on end, 02:25:772 (2) - use whistle with drum addition, 02:39:114 (3) - whistle on head 03:34:468 (3) - also whistle on head
- also for sliders like these 02:56:409 (1) - 02:49:487 (1) - normal whistle on tail would be cute
- 03:41:662 (2,1) - this is kind of edgy patterns, if you wanna be more safe, do a ctrl g on each slider 03:41:203 (1) - 03:41:662 (2) - 03:42:121 (1) - to what you had on 03:26:509 (1,2,1) - it's also cute
- 03:46:713 (1) - add whistle
- 03:48:568 (1) - feels really missing something, i'd add here finish, since that instrument start is really strong, also missing clap on 03:48:712 (2) -
- 03:59:817 (1,1) - unstack is specially? i saw you're doing perfect stacks on similar patterns like 01:53:536 (1,1) - 00:30:459 (1,1) - etc
- 04:01:692 (2,3,4) - i don't really get why spacing are decreasing here instead of increasing like you've done for 01:55:411 (2,3,4) - also 04:02:125 (1) - would be cooler as 2 circles to express piano like here for example 01:55:844 (5,6) -
- 04:14:529 (1) - weird that you used drum additional hihat on sliderend only here, would be great adding it also on 04:14:529 (1) - 04:17:991 (1) - 04:21:452 (1) - 04:23:183 (1) - and etc.

that should be all i think
Topic Starter
not very smart

Kalibe wrote:

itssogood

- 00:14:017 (1,2) - can you space them diffirently than others 00:16:180 (2) - 00:17:911 (2) - since it's not the same snapping thing, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10799215 might work in this case oh yea ur right, fixed
- 00:20:074 (1) - using normal whistle on slidertail would be cute, also remove whistle from sliderend, since it lands on nothing changed
- 00:59:016 (1) - that's a strong drum sound so drum sample + finish sounds good ok done
- for parts like 01:02:479 (1) - 01:09:402 (1) - 01:16:325 (1) - hihats are really strong in the backgrounds so doing instead 1/2 slider + circle wouldn't be a bad option http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10799279 example uhh personally i dont really like the idea of doing that, and i think the 1/1 slider works because of that strong sound on the heads (idk what it even is)
- 01:36:805 (1,1) - seems pretty overspaced to what song offer imo, try maybe https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10799299 or something diffirent if you don't like overlap changed some stuff so its closer
- 02:25:556 (1) - clap is missing on end, 02:25:772 (2) - use whistle with drum addition, 02:39:114 (3) - whistle on head 03:34:468 (3) - also whistle on head ok done
- also for sliders like these 02:56:409 (1) - 02:49:487 (1) - normal whistle on tail would be cute ok done
- 03:41:662 (2,1) - this is kind of edgy patterns, if you wanna be more safe, do a ctrl g on each slider 03:41:203 (1) - 03:41:662 (2) - 03:42:121 (1) - to what you had on 03:26:509 (1,2,1) - it's also cute changed
- 03:46:713 (1) - add whistle ok
- 03:48:568 (1) - feels really missing something, i'd add here finish, since that instrument start is really strong, also missing clap on 03:48:712 (2) - fixed, and i added finish + whistle
- 03:59:817 (1,1) - unstack is specially? i saw you're doing perfect stacks on similar patterns like 01:53:536 (1,1) - 00:30:459 (1,1) - etc oops that was accidental, fixed
- 04:01:692 (2,3,4) - i don't really get why spacing are decreasing here instead of increasing like you've done for 01:55:411 (2,3,4) - also 04:02:125 (1) - would be cooler as 2 circles to express piano like here for example 01:55:844 (5,6) - well i can only hear like one piano sound there, which is why its different
- 04:14:529 (1) - weird that you used drum additional hihat on sliderend only here, would be great adding it also on 04:14:529 (1) - 04:17:991 (1) - 04:21:452 (1) - 04:23:183 (1) - and etc. oh i dont think that was intentional, so i just removed it

that should be all i think
Kalibe
grats on your first qualified map!
Ascendance
Did you extend the end noise to get it to 5 minutes :P
Yuii-
shut up mike
Topic Starter
not very smart
shhh at least its not obvious like using r3 music box ;)
Nelly
Interesting
Arusamour
I know it's a bit late but i would like to inform you that you have made map-defining mistakes that i'd like to correct moving forward and i'd like anyone else reading this to learn and do so.

EXTRA+:
Shattered Dreams (7.01 stars, 1262 notes)

  1. The slider-end of 00:20:074 (1) does not perfectly align with 00:20:579 (2) 's curvature... A.K.A, does not blanket concisely enough for my visual standards in mapping as of May 4, 2018.
  2. To me, is very concerning on what you implied with 00:22:670 (1) 's curvature not circulating around 00:23:031 (1) 's slider-head. This is very disappointment to me.
  3. As a discerning community member, going into 2018, i would not like to see motives being portrayed in the editor like you have no here:

    This showcases a lack of undesired understanding in osu!Mapping art form as i can clearly read from your uncaring slider wave. This is an uber disapointment.
  4. 03:17:260 (1) - This is the prime peak of modern mapping thank you, very cool!
Topic Starter
not very smart

Arusamour wrote:

I know it's a bit late but i would like to inform you that you have made map-defining mistakes that i'd like to correct moving forward and i'd like anyone else reading this to learn and do so.

EXTRA+:
Shattered Dreams (7.01 stars, 1262 notes)

  1. The slider-end of 00:20:074 (1) does not perfectly align with 00:20:579 (2) 's curvature... A.K.A, does not blanket concisely enough for my visual standards in mapping as of May 4, 2018. FIXED! :)
  2. To me, is very concerning on what you implied with 00:22:670 (1) 's curvature not circulating around 00:23:031 (1) 's slider-head. This is very disappointment to me. FIXED! :)
  3. As a discerning community member, going into 2018, i would not like to see motives being portrayed in the editor like you have no here: FIXED! :)

    This showcases a lack of undesired understanding in osu!Mapping art form as i can clearly read from your uncaring slider wave. This is an uber disapointment.
  4. 03:17:260 (1) - This is the prime peak of modern mapping thank you, very cool!
oh shoot thanks Very many for you're Mod. Unfortunately at this time at this moment at this period I are unable to Fix mistakes. Thank for you're do a Understandings.
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