1. Easy - 9Key (1.22 stars, 281 notes)
2. Hard - 9Key (2.59 stars, 805 notes)
3. Normal - 9Key (1.65 stars, 501 notes)

ajeemaniz wrote:

ez

00:35:124 (35124|1,35791|1) - different pr
00:36:457 (36457|0,37124|0) - ^
00:55:791 (55791|2,56124|6) - ^ (4 6)
00:57:124 (57124|1,57457|4) - ^ (3 6)
01:06:124 (66124|4,66791|7) - 4 & 6
01:12:457 (72457|1,73124|1) - different pr
01:13:791 (73791|2,74457|2) - ^
01:15:124 (75124|7,75457|3,75791|7,76124|3) - ctrl + j
01:20:457 (80457|1,81124|1) - 01:21:791 (81791|7,82457|7) - different pr

01:24:457 (84457|1,84624|2,84791|3,84957|4) - 2457 // it'll make it harder to press
01:25:291 (85291|1,85457|3,85624|5) - 468

nm


00:20:457 (20457|7,20624|6,20791|5,20957|4) - 6868
00:29:791 (29791|7,29957|6,30124|5,30291|4) - http://puu.sh/pThIJ/236331f44c.png
00:31:957 (31957|2) - 2 pls
00:55:291 (55291|4,55624|4,55957|6,56291|6) - move right 1 col
00:55:124 (55124|0,55457|0,55791|2,56124|2) - different pr
01:04:457 (64457|1,64624|2,65124|7,65291|6) - 12 98
01:07:291 (67291|3,67457|2,67624|1,67957|5,68124|6,68291|7) - 321 789
01:13:791 (73791|8,73957|7,74124|6,74291|5,74457|4,74624|3,74791|2,74957|1) - make broken stair, 7968574635
01:17:124 (77124|7,77291|6,77457|5,77624|4) - 8858
01:20:624 (80624|6,80791|5) - 01:21:291 (81291|2,81457|3) - ctrl + j


hd
00:18:457 (18457|4,18624|6,18624|8,18791|4,18957|8,18957|6) - move left 1 col
00:20:624 (20624|5,20624|3,20791|8,20791|6,20957|5,20957|3) - 13 57 13
00:27:957 (27957|7) - 7
the HD diff good already, just take a look at EZ mod about different pr and which you have to move

.. not sure if 9K only will be good, not fan of 9K-only keymode
5K diff would be good to add i think, ez to map, ez to mod

BilliumMoto wrote:

Modding from:

BilliumMoto's Mania Workshop


First Impressions:
o!m needs more 9k
map seems pretty solid although the song itself is really repetitive
man i wish i could sing that high

tinkerings inside

ajeemaniz seems to have taken care of a lot of the pitch relevance (pr) stuff

Easy seems to be solid! // thanks

Normal really irks me, for nothing is matched to pitch and the map seems more like an arbitrary practice map than anything else, which has no business being ranked.
honestly i suggest you go through the NM and remap it like you've mapped the Easy and Hard // uhh.. for NM. i focus on playability and pattern flow without looking at the PR.

[Hard]
00:00:458 (458|0) - this LN ends a beat earlier // ey wait a minute... my mistake ~ fixed

00:05:791 (5791|4,5791|8) - unneeded double note, delete one of these // Got it

00:09:291 (9291|5) - this note should change since the chord has changed // got it

00:11:624 (11624|5,11624|3) - should match 00:11:291 (11291|6,11291|8) // ok

00:12:291 (12291|2,12291|0) - should match 00:11:957 (11957|5,11957|3) // ok

00:12:457 (12457|5) - should be a double // uh.. idk about this. since i only hear 2 key here *the high without chord, and the low key
00:31:291 (31291|4) - ^ // same

00:12:791 (12791|0,12957|0) - these are not the same pitch so do not make a jack here // ok

00:16:457 (16457|1,17124|0) - these two should be in the same column since they are the same pitch // hmm ok then
00:32:457 (32457|4,33124|1) - ^ // ok

00:31:457 (31457|8,31624|8) - these are not the same pitch so do not make a jack here // ok
00:31:791 (31791|3,31957|3) - ^ // ok

00:35:291 (35291|6,35291|8,35624|3,35624|5) - these two chords should be the same // ok
00:35:957 (35957|2,35957|0,36291|8,36291|6) - ^ // ok

00:37:457 (37457|2) - i think there should be another note here? making this a double? listen carefully. // uh.. there's no low key chord there.. and on the rest of the music

and so on throughout the rest of the song, you get the idea lol

Final impressions:
I would honestly try following the vocals for the harder two difficulties, the vocals have a much more interesting melody than the piano does. Yea it's harder to chart, but anything good takes effort.
Good map, best of luck getting it ranked!

Protastic101 wrote:

This song is cute >///<
Since there's nothing really wrong with the diffs itself, I'm going to nitpick pitch relevancy

Column 1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9

Wee

[General]- Maybe increase OD of HD to ~7.2 or so due to more notes and less LNs.
- Uncheck widescreen support in all diffs

[Easy]00:06:791 (6791|4,7124|0) - Control J or something because the note in 5 is lower in pitch than 00:07:124 (7124|0) which should be in column 3 // got it
00:07:791 (7791|0) - If that's accepted, move this to 3 // accepted
00:17:124 (17124|4) - Move to a column lower than 5, lower pitch than 00:16:457 (16457|4) // got it
00:35:124 (35124|1,35791|2) - Control J, the pitch of the first note is higher than the second note.// got it
00:36:457 (36457|0,37124|1) - ^^// got it
00:39:457 (39457|7,39624|5) - Flip these notes because 00:39:457 (39457|7) is lower in pitch than 00:39:624 (39624|5)// got it
00:41:791 (41791|2,42457|2) - Move this to 1 since it's lower in pitch than 00:40:457 (40457|1,41124|1)// got it
00:45:791 (45791|2,46457|2,47124|1) - Move the first two notes to a column lower than 00:47:124 (47124|1)// got it
00:55:124 (55124|2,55791|3) - Control J// got it
00:58:624 (58624|8,58791|7,58957|6) - Maybe having all these notes on one hand is a bit too difficult for a beginner. Try spreading it out over both hands.// got it, i'll try
01:17:124 (77124|7,77291|6) - Control J because these two notes are ascending in pitch. // got it, i'll re- arrange it again
01:20:457 (80457|1,81124|2) - Control J since the first note is higher in pitch than the second one. // got it

[Normal]00:02:791 (2791|7) - This note should be in the same column as 00:02:124 (2124|5) // got it
00:28:457 to 00:34:624 - You don't use column 1 or 9 at all for the entire duration of this. // oops. my bad
00:35:124 to 00:45:791 - ^^ I'd greatly consider rearranging some of the notes so that you don't have empty columns for 10 seconds or more. // got it
00:45:791 (45791|8,46457|8) - Move this to 8 since the pitch is lower than 00:46:124 (46124|8,46791|8) // uh.. for nm on the main part. i focus on the pattern flow and playability. by moving that to 8 will make it harder to press
00:47:457 (47457|0) - move to 3 // this too
00:47:791 (47791|0) - Move to 2 cause of PR // i'm afraid this too

[Hard]00:00:416 (416|2) - Why not just move this to 5 (or the center key, I can't remember) so it's symmetrical and nice to look at too. // okay
00:00:458 (458|0) - Extend this to end at 00:01:791 or end it at 00:01:124 for easier playability, but the piano chord is held out until the first time mentioned. // got it. i'll do the 2nd suggestion so the change of the pitch are clear
00:05:791 (5791|8,5791|4) - Shouldn't this note be a single because the piano here is a similar weight to 00:04:457 (4457|4) // ah.. my bad. fixed
00:21:291 - Since the piano is a little heavier here, try something like this
00:39:624 (39624|2,39624|7) - Shouldn't this be the same chord as 00:39:291 (39291|0,39291|3) ? // ah yeah you're right, fixed

sorry for the short mod, nice map and cute song though, good luck ^.^