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nayuta - Shan Dara Rin

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Nooko

kanpakyin wrote:

Hey...Time to handle some old request!

[General]
  1. I'm not sure about the timing.Seem it need dissimilarity offset (some vocal are off)
  2. Remove "Komeiji Yuki" from tag.You no need to put SB maker to tag.
  3. Set your offset to -1117 to avoid some notes are start begin the offset.
  4. Remove your last Kiai section,It's not a high tide part.
[Easy]
  1. 00:00:635(2)-Add a finish at the beginning of the slider?It may sounds better.
  2. 00:26:912(4)-IMO,It should be use a spinner to instead of.Well just my opinion only,you decide it.
  3. 01:01:948(1)-Unstack it please!!It will be concealed by the previous skin element(100,300)
  4. 01:47:496(1.2.3)-Don't make the pattern like this..It will make confused to newbie.
  5. 01:54:503(5.6.1)-^ Same.(i won't mention this after this..)
  6. 02:22:532(3)-Same as 00:26:912.
  7. 03:09:394(1)-Remove new combo here to keep the play flow.Then add a new combo at 03:10:707.
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:562(x)-Follow the vocal here?If yes,add a note please.
  2. 00:36:109(4)-Don't stack with (3)-please..Since it was weird during gameplay.So I suggest you just make a curve pattern here.
  3. 01:24:722(x)-This spinner may stop at 01:27:569?It maybe feel better.
  4. 02:22:532(x)-^ Same.
  5. 03:08:080(1)-Remove new combo to keep your play flow.
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:576(4)-Bad play flow here..First,It's play really awkward!!If I were you,I would reduce one reverse then add a note at 00:05:233 to instead of.
  2. 00:16:182(9)-New combo here?
  3. 00:19:905(7)-^ Same.
  4. 00:28:733(2)-Remove this note?5-plet is not appropriate here,so I prefer use a triplet here.
  5. 00:43:773(5.6)-Add a clap here?It may feel better.
  6. 01:12:897(4)-Bad flow here...look one more time the previous mod...
  7. 01:28:007(x)-This nreak is so long for Hard difficulty..Start feom hard you can map more to reduce your break.
  8. 02:09:175(6.7.8)-Don't stack it..I see you do many stack in your map...Please,too many stack will make your map more ugly during gamepaly.
  9. 03:08:956(3)-Use a note to instead of this slider because 03:09:175- odesn't have any kind of drum sound and vocal.
For me,The rhythm is too humdrum and play boring.You put too much 1/2,Think about to put some notes on ble tick or maybe 2-plet or 4-plet?Talking to another hand,Think twice when you put a note and slider when you arrange.Some jump in [Hard] may make it more fun,also,I'm not against the stack but don't put it too much.It make plyers feel weird.

Taiko part:
[596108's Taiko]
  1. You might check some of the 3/4 notes.I play it and feel weird almost of it.
  2. 00:37:423(179~195)-This pattern is more difficult than overall.You should simplify it
  3. 01:12:459(2)-Add a finish(Big d) here?because it is a accent point.
  4. 01:23:189(58~68)-This pattern is more difficult than overall.You should simplify it
  5. 01:26:255(x)-It is extremely weird if you don't map this part.You can add a spinner to it or add a break time.
  6. 01:56:255(235-241)-Make it to 1/2!!3/4 place is really weird this part.
    pattern
    ooooooooO All in 1/2
  7. 02:55:817(167-172)-feel awkward when 1/4 stream have 1/6 notes.
Rating:(For reference only)
Rhythm:2.5/5 (Too many wied rhythm..)
Pattern:3.5/5
Total:6/10

[pokedigi's Taiko]
Quite check in this diff only..sorry.
Also...This map is obvious overmapped..
But you need to check some 1/4 stream that with some 1/3 notes which it doesn't fit the music.
00:47:386(x)-1s spinner is not allow in Taiko diff
I think you need more improvement on this diff :/
谢谢 ´ω`)ノ
Numbers 596108

kanpakyin wrote:

Taiko part:
[596108's Taiko]
  1. You might check some of the 3/4 notes.I play it and feel weird almost of it.
  2. 00:37:423(179~195)-This pattern is more difficult than overall.You should simplify it No? It is my style , i don't want to fix
  3. 01:12:459(2)-Add a finish(Big d) here?because it is a accent point. Fixed
  4. 01:23:189(58~68)-This pattern is more difficult than overall.You should simplify it No?
  5. 01:26:255(x)-It is extremely weird if you don't map this part.You can add a spinner to it or add a break time.No?
  6. 01:56:255(235-241)-Make it to 1/2!!3/4 place is really weird this part.No?
    pattern
    ooooooooO All in 1/2
  7. 02:55:817(167-172)-feel awkward when 1/4 stream have 1/6 notes.
i think... it is not really a great pattern :O
Rating:(For reference only)
Rhythm:2.5/5 (Too many wied rhythm..)
Pattern:3.5/5
Total:6/10
Download: nayuta - Shan Dara Rin (Nooko) [596108's Taiko].osu
Suimya
:)
Topic Starter
Nooko
Thank you ´ω`)ノ
Red_old
cute song
xinhe
STAR
Topic Starter
Nooko
Thanks :3
Air_kannabi
:)
Komeiji Yuki

kanpakyin wrote:

Remove "Komeiji Yuki" from tag.You no need to put SB maker to tag.
So sad

period
soulfear
加油0...0
Natteke
´ω`)ノ
Topic Starter
Nooko

Air_kannabi wrote:

:)
谢谢 :3

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

kanpakyin wrote:

Remove "Komeiji Yuki" from tag.You no need to put SB maker to tag.
So sad

period
w

soulfear wrote:

加油0...0
恩 ´ω`)ノ

Natteke wrote:

´ω`)ノ
спасибо ヾ(;☆ω☆)ノ
Trans_Am
:oops:
Topic Starter
Nooko

Trans_Am wrote:

:oops:
谢谢 ´ω`)ノ
Lesjuh
Taiko
Aimod > Resnap all unsnapped objects!
00:47:386 (1) - Don't do this

That's it!
Topic Starter
Nooko

Lesjuh wrote:

Taiko
Aimod > Resnap all unsnapped objects!
00:47:386 (1) - Don't do this

That's it!
Thank you :3
pokedigi

Lesjuh wrote:

Taiko
Aimod > Resnap all unsnapped objects!
00:47:386 (1) - Don't do this

That's it!
All Fixed.

Download: nayuta - Shan Dara Rin (Nooko) [pokedigi's Taiko].osu
Lesjuh
bubbled
Topic Starter
Nooko

Lesjuh wrote:

bubbled
Thank you ´ω`)ノ
Komeiji Yuki
Yay , it's bubbled .

Will we have our 1st ranked maps together ? I wish so :3
Topic Starter
Nooko

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Yay , it's bubbled .

Will we have our 1st ranked maps together ? I wish so :3
:3
abalee
First map but fine. ranked.
KanaRin
總算<3
おめでとう!
Kotone
おめ~<3
Pokie
congratulations
Yumeko Yuki
这歌好有爱
congratulations :)
aesopl19193
愛歌 :)
Topic Starter
Nooko
谢谢大家 ´ω`)ノ
Komeiji Yuki
Congra :D
Topic Starter
Nooko

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Congra :D
谢谢 :3
Natteke
Congrats on 1st ranked map ´ω`)ノ
Topic Starter
Nooko

Natteke wrote:

Congrats on 1st ranked map ´ω`)ノ
спасибо ´ω`)ノ
wcx19911123
这年头的新人都太可怕了。。
我没法混了。。
mochi
Why does the verse not follow the song on insane? It half follows vocals and half random...
Komeiji Yuki

qilliam wrote:

Why does the verse not follow the song on insane? It half follows vocals and half random...
Some Chinese words have 2 or more sounds

If the vocal halts between the sounds ...

You know , It's embarrassing
Oohoshi Awai
nice map~0.0
Raging Bull

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

qilliam wrote:

Why does the verse not follow the song on insane? It half follows vocals and half random...
Some Chinese words have 2 or more sounds
What? I thought this song was japanese?
Komeiji Yuki

Raging Bull wrote:

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

\

Some Chinese words have 2 or more sounds
What? I thought this song was japanese?
I mean "漢字"

For instance : ima=いま=今

:o
Coffeezi
moe~
Blueberry pie_old
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