kyukkyu wrote:

しゃんだらりんらだんだらりんだｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ

lucyfly wrote:

帝大爱> ω <~！
scorebar-colour的高度比scorebar-bg内的高度少了一点，底层的颜色露出来了
还有建议把两个颜色换一下，把scorebar-colour帝的图案和scorebar-bg合并，上下层都用这个图案，scorebar-bg.png改灰白色，然后，把scorebar-ki和scorebar-kidanger改成小萝卜放进去，看看怎样？:3
Star~

Nymph_ wrote:

新人妮姆芙MOD >.<

General:
Combo colour用默认? 最起码也要把34两个红色删掉一个
hitcircle立体的..嘛 无所谓啦
Cursor有点难看,稍微透明一下带点光感? 只是牢骚而已 可以无视掉

Insane:
KIAI很别扭 尤其是开头和结尾的喷星.建议去掉开头结尾的KIAI
节奏和HITSOUND在我看来都很好~ 那就不NAZI了

Hard:
同上KIAI

Normal Easy:
也都很好 0 0 nice~

哎 第一张图这么好 嫉妒羡慕恨呢 星星+星星好了..

KanaRin wrote:

嗯..來點建議.

[General]

Combo Colours 可以改一改嘛 ? 不太喜歡看見兩個紅色.

[Easy]

03:19:898 (T) - Spinner頭停Kiai吧.

總體沒問題,Good.

[Normal]

03:19:898 (T) - 和 Easy一樣問題

Nice.

[Hard]

00:00:956 (x) - Add a Note. 排法可以這樣: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/90325
00:01:832 (x) - 一樣是加個Note,重疊就好.
00:14:971 (x) - Add a Note.
00:54:496 (5) - 重疊連打之後再來一個1/2有點難讀. 建議排出去 : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/90328
02:25:263 (4,5,6,7) - Note未對好02:24:934 (3) - 的尾巴,可以關捍grid snap和distance snap慢慢對好

[Insane]

00:02:379 (9) - New Combo.
00:05:883 (10) - ^
00:16:394 (10) - ^
00:19:898 (11) - ^
01:17:708 (10) - ^
01:21:211 (9) - ^
02:17:270 (2) - 未對好Slider尾部
02:42:343 (11) - 建議Del這note
02:51:211 (6,7,8) - 不要重疊..放在另一邊吧,改做Slider3連打都是可行的改法

沒問題:3

嗯. 加油~

soulfear wrote:

好像不錯...
不過我這陣子都在學校,電腦是別人的,鼠標鍵盤都是別人的...暫時不能MOD...更不能玩...

littlecar3370 wrote:

我osu作圖還算新手，所以只看個taiko吧;_;

【數字醬's Taiko】

- 加KIAI，跟Poke的對齊
02:51:430 (144,145,147,148) - 往前移1/4小格
02:56:686 (171,172,173,174) - 改成同色連打，節拍也會比較容易認出來
02:58:438 - 加個note比較好聽
02:59:314 - ^
03:05:883 - ^

【pokedigi's Taiko】

- 音量調小聲一點，大約85左右比較適合
00:36:211 (73,74) - 這邊太不建議用1/3，改到00:36:321 - 跟00:36:430 - 會比較好
00:38:876 (89,90,91,92,93) - 這邊對口白有點奇怪，建議重下全部對到1/4，例如像下面這樣

00:42:671 (116,117,118) - 這邊要1/3的話，後面00:43:219 (120,121) - 也要1/3，不然就全部1/4
00:46:832 - 加個note
01:34:204 (73) - 移動到1/4的線上，前後都可

littlecar3370 wrote:

【數字醬's Taiko】

- 加KIAI，跟Poke的對齊 > 哪...我覺得不改會比較好,前面那段擺了會覺得怪怪的
02:51:430 (144,145,147,148) - 往前移1/4小格 > Fixed
02:56:686 (171,172,173,174) - 改成同色連打，節拍也會比較容易認出來 > 這點倒是不用,節拍主要有到就好,不用再刻意調成相同的
02:58:438 - 加個note比較好聽
02:59:314 - ^
03:05:883 - ^

soulfear wrote:

看了很久,也幫你修改了很久,不過最後發現,中間清唱用的是1/6,但是你的Insane用的的是1/4,而且還跟人聲...其實有很多地方OFF了,有必要REMAP一部份了...

littlecar3370 wrote:

【pokedigi's Taiko】

- 音量調小聲一點，大約85左右比較適合
00:36:211 (73,74) - 這邊太不建議用1/3，改到00:36:321 - 跟00:36:430 - 會比較好 <暂时还不想改，1/4插1/3虽然有些邪道但是还好。如果其他人也提出这个问题我会想想……
00:38:876 (89,90,91,92,93) - 這邊對口白有點奇怪，建議重下全部對到1/4 <做了~稍微有点变形
00:42:671 (116,117,118) - 這邊要1/3的話，後面00:43:219 (120,121) - 也要1/3，不然就全部1/4 <同00:36:211
00:46:832 - 加個note <做了~
01:34:204 (73) - 移動到1/4的線上，前後都可<果然这里怪怪的……重新作了一下

Alace wrote:

offset+7ms to 635
resnap all notes and move all of your timing lines too

關於1/6 rap的部份建議跟著音樂走,因為突然卡個1/6一般玩家根本反應不過來
而且真的照著vocal下節奏,大概只剩下蛋疼兩個字可以形容了 我下個幾秒給你看,你大概就懂了

1. I'm not sure about the timing.Seem it need dissimilarity offset (some vocal are off)
2. Remove "Komeiji Yuki" from tag.You no need to put SB maker to tag.
3. Set your offset to -1117 to avoid some notes are start begin the offset.
4. Remove your last Kiai section,It's not a high tide part.

1. 00:00:635(2)-Add a finish at the beginning of the slider?It may sounds better.
2. 00:26:912(4)-IMO,It should be use a spinner to instead of.Well just my opinion only,you decide it.
3. 01:01:948(1)-Unstack it please!!It will be concealed by the previous skin element(100,300)
4. 01:47:496(1.2.3)-Don't make the pattern like this..It will make confused to newbie.
5. 01:54:503(5.6.1)-^ Same.(i won't mention this after this..)
6. 02:22:532(3)-Same as 00:26:912.
7. 03:09:394(1)-Remove new combo here to keep the play flow.Then add a new combo at 03:10:707.

1. 00:20:562(x)-Follow the vocal here?If yes,add a note please.
2. 00:36:109(4)-Don't stack with (3)-please..Since it was weird during gameplay.So I suggest you just make a curve pattern here.
3. 01:24:722(x)-This spinner may stop at 01:27:569?It maybe feel better.
4. 02:22:532(x)-^ Same.
5. 03:08:080(1)-Remove new combo to keep your play flow.

1. 00:04:576(4)-Bad play flow here..First,It's play really awkward!!If I were you,I would reduce one reverse then add a note at 00:05:233 to instead of.
2. 00:16:182(9)-New combo here?
3. 00:19:905(7)-^ Same.
4. 00:28:733(2)-Remove this note?5-plet is not appropriate here,so I prefer use a triplet here.
5. 00:43:773(5.6)-Add a clap here?It may feel better.
6. 01:12:897(4)-Bad flow here...look one more time the previous mod...
7. 01:28:007(x)-This nreak is so long for Hard difficulty..Start feom hard you can map more to reduce your break.
8. 02:09:175(6.7.8)-Don't stack it..I see you do many stack in your map...Please,too many stack will make your map more ugly during gamepaly.
9. 03:08:956(3)-Use a note to instead of this slider because 03:09:175- odesn't have any kind of drum sound and vocal.

1. You might check some of the 3/4 notes.I play it and feel weird almost of it.
2. 00:37:423(179~195)-This pattern is more difficult than overall.You should simplify it
3. 01:12:459(2)-Add a finish(Big d) here?because it is a accent point.
4. 01:23:189(58~68)-This pattern is more difficult than overall.You should simplify it
5. 01:26:255(x)-It is extremely weird if you don't map this part.You can add a spinner to it or add a break time.
6. 01:56:255(235-241)-Make it to 1/2!!3/4 place is really weird this part.
   
   pattern

   ooooooooO All in 1/2
7. 02:55:817(167-172)-feel awkward when 1/4 stream have 1/6 notes.

kanpakyin wrote:

Hey...Time to handle some old request!

[General]

1. I'm not sure about the timing.Seem it need dissimilarity offset (some vocal are off)
2. Remove "Komeiji Yuki" from tag.You no need to put SB maker to tag.
3. Set your offset to -1117 to avoid some notes are start begin the offset.
4. Remove your last Kiai section,It's not a high tide part.

[Easy]

1. 00:00:635(2)-Add a finish at the beginning of the slider?It may sounds better.
2. 00:26:912(4)-IMO,It should be use a spinner to instead of.Well just my opinion only,you decide it.
3. 01:01:948(1)-Unstack it please!!It will be concealed by the previous skin element(100,300)
4. 01:47:496(1.2.3)-Don't make the pattern like this..It will make confused to newbie.
5. 01:54:503(5.6.1)-^ Same.(i won't mention this after this..)
6. 02:22:532(3)-Same as 00:26:912.
7. 03:09:394(1)-Remove new combo here to keep the play flow.Then add a new combo at 03:10:707.

[Normal]

1. 00:20:562(x)-Follow the vocal here?If yes,add a note please.
2. 00:36:109(4)-Don't stack with (3)-please..Since it was weird during gameplay.So I suggest you just make a curve pattern here.
3. 01:24:722(x)-This spinner may stop at 01:27:569?It maybe feel better.
4. 02:22:532(x)-^ Same.
5. 03:08:080(1)-Remove new combo to keep your play flow.

[Hard]

1. 00:04:576(4)-Bad play flow here..First,It's play really awkward!!If I were you,I would reduce one reverse then add a note at 00:05:233 to instead of.
2. 00:16:182(9)-New combo here?
3. 00:19:905(7)-^ Same.
4. 00:28:733(2)-Remove this note?5-plet is not appropriate here,so I prefer use a triplet here.
5. 00:43:773(5.6)-Add a clap here?It may feel better.
6. 01:12:897(4)-Bad flow here...look one more time the previous mod...
7. 01:28:007(x)-This nreak is so long for Hard difficulty..Start feom hard you can map more to reduce your break.
8. 02:09:175(6.7.8)-Don't stack it..I see you do many stack in your map...Please,too many stack will make your map more ugly during gamepaly.
9. 03:08:956(3)-Use a note to instead of this slider because 03:09:175- odesn't have any kind of drum sound and vocal.

For me,The rhythm is too humdrum and play boring.You put too much 1/2,Think about to put some notes on ble tick or maybe 2-plet or 4-plet?Talking to another hand,Think twice when you put a note and slider when you arrange.Some jump in [Hard] may make it more fun,also,I'm not against the stack but don't put it too much.It make plyers feel weird.

Taiko part:
[596108's Taiko]

1. You might check some of the 3/4 notes.I play it and feel weird almost of it.
2. 00:37:423(179~195)-This pattern is more difficult than overall.You should simplify it
3. 01:12:459(2)-Add a finish(Big d) here?because it is a accent point.
4. 01:23:189(58~68)-This pattern is more difficult than overall.You should simplify it
5. 01:26:255(x)-It is extremely weird if you don't map this part.You can add a spinner to it or add a break time.
6. 01:56:255(235-241)-Make it to 1/2!!3/4 place is really weird this part.
   
   pattern

   ooooooooO All in 1/2
7. 02:55:817(167-172)-feel awkward when 1/4 stream have 1/6 notes.

Rating:(For reference only)
Rhythm:2.5/5 (Too many wied rhythm..)
Pattern:3.5/5
Total:6/10

[pokedigi's Taiko]
Quite check in this diff only..sorry.
Also...This map is obvious overmapped..
But you need to check some 1/4 stream that with some 1/3 notes which it doesn't fit the music.
00:47:386(x)-1s spinner is not allow in Taiko diff
I think you need more improvement on this diff :/

kanpakyin wrote:

Taiko part:
[596108's Taiko]

1. You might check some of the 3/4 notes.I play it and feel weird almost of it.
2. 00:37:423(179~195)-This pattern is more difficult than overall.You should simplify it No? It is my style , i don't want to fix
3. 01:12:459(2)-Add a finish(Big d) here?because it is a accent point. Fixed
4. 01:23:189(58~68)-This pattern is more difficult than overall.You should simplify it No?
5. 01:26:255(x)-It is extremely weird if you don't map this part.You can add a spinner to it or add a break time.No?
6. 01:56:255(235-241)-Make it to 1/2!!3/4 place is really weird this part.No?
   
   pattern

   ooooooooO All in 1/2
7. 02:55:817(167-172)-feel awkward when 1/4 stream have 1/6 notes.

i think... it is not really a great pattern :O
Rating:(For reference only)

Rhythm:2.5/5 (Too many wied rhythm..)
Pattern:3.5/5
Total:6/10

kanpakyin wrote:

Remove "Komeiji Yuki" from tag.You no need to put SB maker to tag.