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From your req (I will random 5 diffs yay ) ( ^ = same as above, Imo = In my opinion)

General

  1. Mark "Widescreen support" at Song setup > Design

Normal (Kyle Y)

  1. 00:56:394 - add circle here would be nice Imo
  2. 00:59:236 - ^
  3. 01:03:973 - ^
  4. 01:05:236 - ^

Hard

Only one opinion
  1. 00:06:183 (5) - Ctrl+J and arrange to same place would be nice Imo

Light Insane (Shiratoi)

  1. 00:22:604 (1,2,3,4) - move these patterns down little bit would be nice Imo
  2. 00:40:604 (2) - move it up and right little bit like this (below) would be nice Imo


Extra

  1. 00:04:447 (3,4,5) - make jump pattern like this (below) would be nice, no problem if you disagree


  2. 00:08:394 (5,6) - Ctrl+G (reverse selection) would be good jump Imo 8-) (no problem if you disagree :( )
  3. 00:12:973 (2,3) - ^
  4. 00:32:394 (5,6) - ^
  5. 00:42:341 (4,5) - ^

STRIP!!!!!

  1. 00:02:868 (2,3) - Ctrl+G would be nice Imo, no problem if you disagree
  2. 00:32:394 (6,7) - Ctrl+G would be good jump Imo 8-) (no problem if you disagree :( )
  3. 00:36:183 (5,6) - ^
  4. 01:21:499 (2,3) - ^

P.S I Hope this ranked soon
WITH LOVE
Topic Starter
Ohwow

KrastrovLap wrote:

From your req (I will random 5 diffs yay ) ( ^ = same as above, Imo = In my opinion)

General

  1. Mark "Widescreen support" at Song setup > Design Widescreen support is only for Storyboards

Hard

Only one opinion
  1. 00:06:183 (5) - Ctrl+J and arrange to same place would be nice Imo Hmm okay!

Extra

  1. 00:04:447 (3,4,5) - make jump pattern like this (below) would be nice, no problem if you disagree Thanks for the suggestions, but i'm going to stick to what i have currently.


  2. 00:08:394 (5,6) - Ctrl+G (reverse selection) would be good jump Imo 8-) (no problem if you disagree :( ) ^
  3. 00:12:973 (2,3) - ^ ^
  4. 00:32:394 (5,6) - ^ ^
  5. 00:42:341 (4,5) - ^ ^

STRIP!!!!!

  1. 00:02:868 (2,3) - Ctrl+G would be nice Imo, no problem if you disagree Changed! and moved some circles around a bit.
  2. 00:32:394 (6,7) - Ctrl+G would be good jump Imo 8-) (no problem if you disagree :( ) Leaving as it is
  3. 00:36:183 (5,6) - ^ ^
  4. 01:21:499 (2,3) - ^ Changed!

P.S I Hope this ranked soon
WITH LOVE
Thanks for the mod!!!
Frost
from q

STRIP!!!!!


  • 00:06:183 (6,7) - these really trigger me because they all end on a somewhat large beat. i understand why you did it, but having sliders with lots of emphasis on the end is pretty weird imo
    00:06:657 (2) - this is kinda similar, the end of the repeating slider starts the next section of guitar sounds, which feels kinda awkward
    00:08:868 (1,2,3) - also similar, the slider gets 2 of the guitar sounds but the third one goes on the note after it, leading into jumps with a different melody
    00:19:920 (7) - would be slightly easier to play if it was lowered and move to the right just a tad
    00:24:026 (1,2,3,4) - this is pretty awkward to play imo, jumps aren't sharp enough and they're far from the previous note
    00:25:131 (1,2,3) - beats on the slider ends aaaAAAA (the surrounding areas aren't really following vocals so it's weird that only this is)
    00:26:552 (1,2,3,4) - this breaks the flow bc you'd assume note (3) would be below the first slider as you've established a circular motion already
    00:34:131 (1,2) - not intuitive to play coming out of that stream, although this is less offensive than most of the flow breaks in the map because of the low stream spacing preceeding it
    00:56:868 (1,2,3) - flow break without much purpose
    01:04:920 (3,4,1) - could just be me, but this is pretty awkward to play
    01:05:394 (1,2,3) - another random flow break
    01:19:131 (3) - the new melody starts on the end of this slider :V

Extreme


  • 00:06:183 (6,7) - same thing as in the strip diff
    00:13:289 (4) - there's no sound that this note is capturing :/
    00:13:920 - this section is generally better, as it's more faithful to the vocals, so the sliders with beats on the end aren't nearly as bad
    00:23:710 (4,5) - slider --> stream
    00:34:131 (1,2,3) - this feels pretty awkward coming out of the stream on this diff too lol
    01:17:749 (1,2,3) - the spacing between the 3 of these notes is too inconsistent -- there should be a larger gap from 1 to 2 than from 2 to 3
    01:19:131 (3) - same thing as in the strip diff about the new melody on the sliderend
this diff was a bit stronger than the strip diff, felt more polished, gj on that

gl with rank :D
Shira
@KrastrovLap :
fixed first one + adjusted the second

thanks!
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101,295,48973,2,0,P|102:340|111:375,1,60,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,174,49289,6,0,L|316:127,1,67.4999979400635,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
73,208,49604,2,0,L|7:161,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,64,49920,2,0,L|301:17,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,98,50236,2,0,L|-6:51,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,3,50552,5,2,0:0:0:0:
250,174,50710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,98,50868,1,2,0:0:0:0:
167,233,51026,1,2,0:0:0:0:
234,63,51183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
73,208,51341,2,0,L|64:281,1,67.4999979400635,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,57,51657,6,0,P|308:29|235:63,1,134.999995880127,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,174,52131,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,132,52289,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,163,52447,1,2,0:0:0:0:
418,226,52604,1,2,0:0:0:0:
206,154,52762,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,300,52920,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,57,53078,5,2,0:0:0:0:
270,278,53236,1,2,0:0:0:0:
234,63,53394,1,2,0:0:0:0:
270,278,53710,6,0,L|212:279,1,44.999998626709,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,357,54026,2,0,L|203:358,1,44.999998626709,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,125,54341,6,0,P|119:193|141:285,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
270,278,54815,2,0,P|284:205|267:132,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,125,55289,2,0,P|92:129|44:118,1,75,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,28,55604,5,2,0:0:0:0:
168,200,55762,2,0,P|89:207|3:187,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,126,56236,2,0,L|263:192,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,78,56552,2,0,L|307:14,1,75,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,258,56868,6,0,P|298:261|342:193,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
457,149,57341,2,0,P|413:206|341:203,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,122,57815,6,0,P|242:85|313:113,1,150,8|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,202,58289,2,0,P|347:240|343:280,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
257,335,58604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,277,58762,2,0,B|163:240|163:240|222:260|263:230,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
340,202,59236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,57,59394,6,0,B|206:88|206:88|206:191,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
273,271,59868,2,0,B|205:239|205:239|205:136,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,55,60341,2,0,B|415:160|415:160|305:278,1,300,12|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
116,56,61289,2,0,P|166:60|204:50,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,145,61604,2,0,P|34:141|-4:151,1,75,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,198,61920,6,0,P|205:133|187:49,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
84,145,62394,2,0,P|68:217|89:288,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,198,62868,2,0,L|349:201,1,150,12|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,293,63341,2,0,L|221:291,1,75,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
89,288,63657,2,0,L|99:336,4,37.5,0|0|2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,198,64052,2,0,L|191:161,4,37.5,0|8|0|0|0,0:0|0:1|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,227,64447,6,0,L|33:385,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
266,173,64920,2,0,P|236:101|147:102,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,256,65394,2,0,P|335:188|265:172,1,150,12|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,336,65868,2,0,B|378:352|378:352|444:308,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,186,66341,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,353,66499,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,256,66657,1,8,0:1:0:0:
512,259,66815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,336,66973,6,0,P|262:283|284:186,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
434,50,67447,2,0,P|469:103|447:200,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,94,67920,2,0,L|384:127,1,150,12|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,18,68394,1,2,0:0:0:0:
234,94,68552,2,0,P|239:142|229:186,1,75,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,207,68868,2,0,P|116:132|126:58,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
234,94,69341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,209,69499,6,0,P|39:134|49:60,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
234,94,69973,2,0,L|316:91,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,163,70289,1,2,0:0:0:0:
275,258,70447,6,0,P|234:245|282:187,1,150,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,163,70920,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,271,71078,2,0,P|379:317|385:361,1,75,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,258,71394,2,0,P|229:259|185:253,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,163,71710,1,8,0:1:0:0:
380,271,71868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,100,72026,6,0,P|402:81|470:148,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
264,167,72499,2,0,B|241:122|241:122|253:66|253:66|238:1,1,150,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,32,72973,2,0,B|149:73|149:73|137:129|137:129|160:174,1,150,12|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,167,73447,1,4,0:0:0:0:
228,258,73604,6,0,L|146:264,1,75,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,341,73920,2,0,L|126:347,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,330,74236,2,0,P|227:280|232:233,1,75,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,115,74552,6,0,P|340:150|342:187,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,330,74868,2,0,P|277:317|314:315,1,75,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,267,75183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
341,187,75341,1,2,0:0:0:0:
314,315,75499,2,0,L|315:368,3,37.5,8|0|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,267,75815,5,0,0:0:0:0:
207,74,78657,6,0,P|158:88|124:86,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,126,78973,2,0,P|342:112|376:114,1,60,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,189,79289,2,0,P|195:116|220:51,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
293,126,79762,6,0,P|305:184|290:241,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,296,80236,2,0,L|239:304,1,60,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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250,381,81026,6,0,L|130:368,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,290,81499,2,0,P|73:254|70:213,1,60,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,137,81815,2,0,P|108:145|149:142,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
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308,168,82762,2,0,L|394:171,1,60,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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512,190,83552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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477,35,84183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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239,28,84657,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Ohwow
Updated Shira's diff, Gonna finish Frost's mod tomorrow since I am remapping a lot of Strip & Extreme.
Bibbity Bill
irc mod on extra

extra
2017-01-11 01:14 Bibbity Bill: 00:10:289 (2) - i feel this moved down would look nicer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028406
2017-01-11 01:15 Bibbity Bill: 00:11:394 (1) - i feel this looks better rotated a bit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028414
2017-01-11 01:15 Bibbity Bill: i mean do you want a mod or not
2017-01-11 01:15 Bibbity Bill: i should be asking first tbh
2017-01-11 01:15 Bibbity Bill: LOL
2017-01-11 01:15 Ohwow: i don't mind mods :D
2017-01-11 01:15 Ohwow: i'm actually gonna curve that slider towards the circle more
2017-01-11 01:16 Bibbity Bill: 00:01:289 (1,1,1) - i feel these 3 could look a bit nicer
2017-01-11 01:16 Bibbity Bill: 00:08:236 (3,4,5,6) - center this jump more in the middle of 2
2017-01-11 01:17 Bibbity Bill: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028420 that or maybe
2017-01-11 01:17 Bibbity Bill: or something*
2017-01-11 01:19 Bibbity Bill: 00:12:499 (6) - i feel this slider doesnt look the best i feel a standard harder curve looks nicer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028425
2017-01-11 01:21 Bibbity Bill: 00:13:447 (1,2,3,1) - i feel spacing these out a bit would look nicer and moving 1 slightly closer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028430
2017-01-11 01:22 Bibbity Bill: 00:15:657 (3) - probably blanket this better with 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028433
2017-01-11 01:23 Bibbity Bill: 00:16:447 (1) - move this closer to 5 so it doesnt look like a singletap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028438
2017-01-11 01:23 Bibbity Bill: also start the nc here 00:16:762 (2) -
2017-01-11 01:23 Bibbity Bill: so it looks better
2017-01-11 01:24 Bibbity Bill: but i figured you needed it for consistancy
2017-01-11 01:24 Bibbity Bill: 00:13:920 (1) - since you nced here
2017-01-11 01:24 Bibbity Bill: so yea that nc is optional i figure
2017-01-11 01:25 Bibbity Bill: 00:17:078 (2) - i feel a red point slider transition to straight sliders would look cool https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028446
2017-01-11 01:25 Bibbity Bill: 00:18:420 (4,5) - any reason why this isnt fully stacked
2017-01-11 01:26 Bibbity Bill: doesnt look bad but it just looks weird not being a full on stack under the slider
2017-01-11 01:27 Bibbity Bill: 00:21:026 (4) - you could polish this triangle a bit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028454
2017-01-11 01:28 Bibbity Bill: 00:22:289 (4) - same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028457
2017-01-11 01:29 Bibbity Bill: 00:24:973 (4) - make this the same spacing as 00:24:341 (2,3) - since it's part of the same sound https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028462
2017-01-11 01:30 Bibbity Bill: 00:26:552 (1) - same as earlier move this closer to 5 so it doesnt look like a singletap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028467
2017-01-11 01:32 Bibbity Bill: 00:27:657 (1,2) - i feel these moving more under 3 and pointing more down looks nicer https://puu.sh/titP3/7fc3d8850d.png
2017-01-11 01:33 Bibbity Bill: 00:27:183 (3) - and have this pointed more downward also https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028479
2017-01-11 01:34 Bibbity Bill: 00:26:868 (2) - and yea point this a bit more down also
2017-01-11 01:35 Bibbity Bill: like to make better looking downward flow stuff
2017-01-11 01:36 Bibbity Bill: like
2017-01-11 01:36 Bibbity Bill: https://puu.sh/titVQ/7ba12f1c82.mp4 overall
2017-01-11 01:36 Bibbity Bill: forgot to repeat 3
2017-01-11 01:36 Bibbity Bill: woops
2017-01-11 01:37 Bibbity Bill: https://puu.sh/titZ5/a892fc7e13.mp4
2017-01-11 01:37 Bibbity Bill: that or something
2017-01-11 01:38 Bibbity Bill: 00:28:289 (3) - and yea move 3 closer so it emphasizes the stream a bit nicer
2017-01-11 01:39 Bibbity Bill: 00:31:131 (4,5) - i feel you could polish up the triangle here also https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028499
2017-01-11 01:40 Bibbity Bill: 00:36:183 (4) - i feel this looks nicer like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028502
2017-01-11 01:41 Bibbity Bill: 00:36:973 (2) - and this moved down more
2017-01-11 01:41 Bibbity Bill: with 00:37:289 (3) - rotated a bit higher
2017-01-11 01:41 Bibbity Bill: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028505
2017-01-11 01:42 Bibbity Bill: 00:43:920 (4,5,6) - same as earlier why the weird looking stack
2017-01-11 01:43 Bibbity Bill: 00:45:657 (2) - should move this in a bit more closer to look the same as 00:44:710 (3,4) - 00:44:236 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028516
2017-01-11 01:44 Bibbity Bill: 00:47:552 (4) - same as above https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028517
2017-01-11 01:44 Bibbity Bill: 00:48:026 (1) - and same here also https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028519
2017-01-11 01:46 Bibbity Bill: 00:48:499 (3) - i feel making this triangle equal looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028523
2017-01-11 01:47 Bibbity Bill: 00:51:183 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - i know this is an old pattern but it seriously looks like it can be polished
2017-01-11 01:47 Bibbity Bill: and i'm triggered that you didnt map these sounds 00:49:841 - 00:51:104 -
2017-01-11 01:47 Bibbity Bill: like make a triple or something there lol
2017-01-11 01:48 Bibbity Bill: 00:57:183 (2) - you could probably fix the spacing here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028531
2017-01-11 01:49 Bibbity Bill: 00:57:657 (4) - probably move this up more https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028533
2017-01-11 01:50 Bibbity Bill: 00:58:999 - theres a triple here before the vocals if you want to rework your pattern not a problem tho just a suggestion
2017-01-11 01:51 Bibbity Bill: 01:01:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - could fix the spacing here like 00:44:236 - since it's the same sort of sounds IMO
2017-01-11 01:52 Bibbity Bill: kinda like https://puu.sh/tiutz/105120fc64.mp4
2017-01-11 01:52 Bibbity Bill: very roughly
2017-01-11 01:52 Bibbity Bill: 01:05:709 (2) - i feel https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028545 looks nicer for that spot
2017-01-11 01:53 Bibbity Bill: 01:08:947 - another triple here if you want to rework your pattern again XD suggestion again lol
2017-01-11 01:53 Bibbity Bill: 01:09:104 - actually here
2017-01-11 01:54 Bibbity Bill: 01:10:289 (2) - i feel https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028546 looks nicer
2017-01-11 01:55 Bibbity Bill: 01:11:394 (1,2) - these 2 sliders need to point downward more very ugly atm IMO
2017-01-11 01:55 Bibbity Bill: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028551 something like that
2017-01-11 01:56 Bibbity Bill: 01:13:920 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - same as earlier big jump i feel this can be a bit more polished since it's probably the old jump
2017-01-11 01:56 Bibbity Bill: 01:18:183 (3) - this slider looks pretty bad IMO
2017-01-11 01:57 Bibbity Bill: 01:17:749 (1,2) - same as these 2 notes maybe build them around a new slider shape
2017-01-11 01:58 Bibbity Bill: 01:19:604 (5) - fix spacing here as in make it similar to the first 10 seconds or whatever
2017-01-11 01:58 Bibbity Bill: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028562
2017-01-11 01:59 Bibbity Bill: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028566
2017-01-11 01:59 Bibbity Bill: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028567
2017-01-11 02:01 Bibbity Bill: 01:24:341 (2) - fix spacing https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028570
2017-01-11 02:01 Bibbity Bill: ok i'm done hopefully you find something to fix lol
2017-01-11 02:01 Bibbity Bill: or found it helpful for your new difficulty lol
2017-01-11 02:14 Ohwow: thx

good luck on ranking
Topic Starter
Ohwow

Bibbity Bill wrote:

irc mod on extra

extra
2017-01-11 01:14 Bibbity Bill: 00:10:289 (2) - i feel this moved down would look nicer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028406
2017-01-11 01:15 Bibbity Bill: 00:11:394 (1) - i feel this looks better rotated a bit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028414
2017-01-11 01:15 Bibbity Bill: i mean do you want a mod or not
2017-01-11 01:15 Bibbity Bill: i should be asking first tbh
2017-01-11 01:15 Bibbity Bill: LOL
2017-01-11 01:15 Ohwow: i don't mind mods :D
2017-01-11 01:15 Ohwow: i'm actually gonna curve that slider towards the circle more
2017-01-11 01:16 Bibbity Bill: 00:01:289 (1,1,1) - i feel these 3 could look a bit nicer
2017-01-11 01:16 Bibbity Bill: 00:08:236 (3,4,5,6) - center this jump more in the middle of 2
2017-01-11 01:17 Bibbity Bill: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028420 that or maybe
2017-01-11 01:17 Bibbity Bill: or something*
2017-01-11 01:19 Bibbity Bill: 00:12:499 (6) - i feel this slider doesnt look the best i feel a standard harder curve looks nicer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028425
2017-01-11 01:21 Bibbity Bill: 00:13:447 (1,2,3,1) - i feel spacing these out a bit would look nicer and moving 1 slightly closer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028430
2017-01-11 01:22 Bibbity Bill: 00:15:657 (3) - probably blanket this better with 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028433
2017-01-11 01:23 Bibbity Bill: 00:16:447 (1) - move this closer to 5 so it doesnt look like a singletap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028438
2017-01-11 01:23 Bibbity Bill: also start the nc here 00:16:762 (2) -
2017-01-11 01:23 Bibbity Bill: so it looks better
2017-01-11 01:24 Bibbity Bill: but i figured you needed it for consistancy
2017-01-11 01:24 Bibbity Bill: 00:13:920 (1) - since you nced here
2017-01-11 01:24 Bibbity Bill: so yea that nc is optional i figure
2017-01-11 01:25 Bibbity Bill: 00:17:078 (2) - i feel a red point slider transition to straight sliders would look cool https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028446
2017-01-11 01:25 Bibbity Bill: 00:18:420 (4,5) - any reason why this isnt fully stacked
2017-01-11 01:26 Bibbity Bill: doesnt look bad but it just looks weird not being a full on stack under the slider
2017-01-11 01:27 Bibbity Bill: 00:21:026 (4) - you could polish this triangle a bit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028454
2017-01-11 01:28 Bibbity Bill: 00:22:289 (4) - same here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028457
2017-01-11 01:29 Bibbity Bill: 00:24:973 (4) - make this the same spacing as 00:24:341 (2,3) - since it's part of the same sound https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028462
2017-01-11 01:30 Bibbity Bill: 00:26:552 (1) - same as earlier move this closer to 5 so it doesnt look like a singletap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028467
2017-01-11 01:32 Bibbity Bill: 00:27:657 (1,2) - i feel these moving more under 3 and pointing more down looks nicer https://puu.sh/titP3/7fc3d8850d.png
2017-01-11 01:33 Bibbity Bill: 00:27:183 (3) - and have this pointed more downward also https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028479
2017-01-11 01:34 Bibbity Bill: 00:26:868 (2) - and yea point this a bit more down also
2017-01-11 01:35 Bibbity Bill: like to make better looking downward flow stuff
2017-01-11 01:36 Bibbity Bill: like
2017-01-11 01:36 Bibbity Bill: https://puu.sh/titVQ/7ba12f1c82.mp4 overall
2017-01-11 01:36 Bibbity Bill: forgot to repeat 3
2017-01-11 01:36 Bibbity Bill: woops
2017-01-11 01:37 Bibbity Bill: https://puu.sh/titZ5/a892fc7e13.mp4
2017-01-11 01:37 Bibbity Bill: that or something
2017-01-11 01:38 Bibbity Bill: 00:28:289 (3) - and yea move 3 closer so it emphasizes the stream a bit nicer
2017-01-11 01:39 Bibbity Bill: 00:31:131 (4,5) - i feel you could polish up the triangle here also https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028499
2017-01-11 01:40 Bibbity Bill: 00:36:183 (4) - i feel this looks nicer like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028502
2017-01-11 01:41 Bibbity Bill: 00:36:973 (2) - and this moved down more
2017-01-11 01:41 Bibbity Bill: with 00:37:289 (3) - rotated a bit higher
2017-01-11 01:41 Bibbity Bill: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028505
2017-01-11 01:42 Bibbity Bill: 00:43:920 (4,5,6) - same as earlier why the weird looking stack
2017-01-11 01:43 Bibbity Bill: 00:45:657 (2) - should move this in a bit more closer to look the same as 00:44:710 (3,4) - 00:44:236 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028516
2017-01-11 01:44 Bibbity Bill: 00:47:552 (4) - same as above https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028517
2017-01-11 01:44 Bibbity Bill: 00:48:026 (1) - and same here also https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028519
2017-01-11 01:46 Bibbity Bill: 00:48:499 (3) - i feel making this triangle equal looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028523
2017-01-11 01:47 Bibbity Bill: 00:51:183 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - i know this is an old pattern but it seriously looks like it can be polished
2017-01-11 01:47 Bibbity Bill: and i'm triggered that you didnt map these sounds 00:49:841 - 00:51:104 -
2017-01-11 01:47 Bibbity Bill: like make a triple or something there lol
2017-01-11 01:48 Bibbity Bill: 00:57:183 (2) - you could probably fix the spacing here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028531
2017-01-11 01:49 Bibbity Bill: 00:57:657 (4) - probably move this up more https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028533
2017-01-11 01:50 Bibbity Bill: 00:58:999 - theres a triple here before the vocals if you want to rework your pattern not a problem tho just a suggestion
2017-01-11 01:51 Bibbity Bill: 01:01:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - could fix the spacing here like 00:44:236 - since it's the same sort of sounds IMO
2017-01-11 01:52 Bibbity Bill: kinda like https://puu.sh/tiutz/105120fc64.mp4
2017-01-11 01:52 Bibbity Bill: very roughly
2017-01-11 01:52 Bibbity Bill: 01:05:709 (2) - i feel https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028545 looks nicer for that spot
2017-01-11 01:53 Bibbity Bill: 01:08:947 - another triple here if you want to rework your pattern again XD suggestion again lol
2017-01-11 01:53 Bibbity Bill: 01:09:104 - actually here
2017-01-11 01:54 Bibbity Bill: 01:10:289 (2) - i feel https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028546 looks nicer
2017-01-11 01:55 Bibbity Bill: 01:11:394 (1,2) - these 2 sliders need to point downward more very ugly atm IMO
2017-01-11 01:55 Bibbity Bill: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028551 something like that
2017-01-11 01:56 Bibbity Bill: 01:13:920 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - same as earlier big jump i feel this can be a bit more polished since it's probably the old jump
2017-01-11 01:56 Bibbity Bill: 01:18:183 (3) - this slider looks pretty bad IMO
2017-01-11 01:57 Bibbity Bill: 01:17:749 (1,2) - same as these 2 notes maybe build them around a new slider shape
2017-01-11 01:58 Bibbity Bill: 01:19:604 (5) - fix spacing here as in make it similar to the first 10 seconds or whatever
2017-01-11 01:58 Bibbity Bill: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028562
2017-01-11 01:59 Bibbity Bill: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028566
2017-01-11 01:59 Bibbity Bill: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028567
2017-01-11 02:01 Bibbity Bill: 01:24:341 (2) - fix spacing https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7028570
2017-01-11 02:01 Bibbity Bill: ok i'm done hopefully you find something to fix lol
2017-01-11 02:01 Bibbity Bill: or found it helpful for your new difficulty lol
2017-01-11 02:14 Ohwow: thx

good luck on ranking
ty very much bud :D
Topic Starter
Ohwow
1/10/2017 Remapping Status:

Hard: Incomplete Nahh I like it the way it is currently
Insane: Complete!
Extra: Complete!
Extreme: Incomplete Same
STRIP!!!: Complete!

General Changes:
-Background change
-Combo color change

Edit: Ok, now I can look for some mods :D
Topic Starter
Ohwow

Frost wrote:

from q

STRIP!!!!!


  • 00:06:183 (6,7) - these really trigger me because they all end on a somewhat large beat. i understand why you did it, but having sliders with lots of emphasis on the end is pretty weird imo Fixed
    00:06:657 (2) - this is kinda similar, the end of the repeating slider starts the next section of guitar sounds, which feels kinda awkward Fixed
    00:08:868 (1,2,3) - also similar, the slider gets 2 of the guitar sounds but the third one goes on the note after it, leading into jumps with a different melodyFixed
    00:19:920 (7) - would be slightly easier to play if it was lowered and move to the right just a tad Remapped
    00:24:026 (1,2,3,4) - this is pretty awkward to play imo, jumps aren't sharp enough and they're far from the previous note Remapped
    00:25:131 (1,2,3) - beats on the slider ends aaaAAAA (the surrounding areas aren't really following vocals so it's weird that only this is) Remapped (Meant to focus on the vocals)
    00:26:552 (1,2,3,4) - this breaks the flow bc you'd assume note (3) would be below the first slider as you've established a circular motion already Remapped
    00:34:131 (1,2) - not intuitive to play coming out of that stream, although this is less offensive than most of the flow breaks in the map because of the low stream spacing preceeding it Changed
    00:56:868 (1,2,3) - flow break without much purpose Fixed
    01:04:920 (3,4,1) - could just be me, but this is pretty awkward to play Remapped
    01:05:394 (1,2,3) - another random flow break Fixed
    01:19:131 (3) - the new melody starts on the end of this slider :V Fixed

Extreme


  • 00:06:183 (6,7) - same thing as in the strip diff Fixed
    00:13:289 (4) - there's no sound that this note is capturing :/ Fixed
    00:13:920 - this section is generally better, as it's more faithful to the vocals, so the sliders with beats on the end aren't nearly as bad yes, it was my intention.
    00:23:710 (4,5) - slider --> stream Changed
    00:34:131 (1,2,3) - this feels pretty awkward coming out of the stream on this diff too lol Made the last note of the stream a slider
    01:17:749 (1,2,3) - the spacing between the 3 of these notes is too inconsistent -- there should be a larger gap from 1 to 2 than from 2 to 3 Fixed
    01:19:131 (3) - same thing as in the strip diff about the new melody on the sliderend fixed
this diff was a bit stronger than the strip diff, felt more polished, gj on that Thanks

gl with rank :D
Hope everything is better now, Thanks for the mod
Watch My Skill
Aki's Easy
00:41:078 (3,1) - Maybe dont overlap the trails?
01:15:815 (3) - You should end kiai mode here
Thats all
Nothing really bad here at all

Ky's Normal
00:02:710 (2,3,4) - Feels a little sloppy, maybe repeat 00:02:710 (2) - and replace the second part of 00:03:026 (3) - with a single.
00:54:815 (2,3,4,5) - Should spread these out a little, mostly just to help with reading.
01:05:868 (5) - Slider is too long, should end on the red tick
01:23:868 (2,3,4) - Feels weird to play, just check out a few different patterns, see if theres a better one.

TheOnlyLeon's Advanced
00:03:341 (3,4,5) - This is too hard for an advanced map.
00:16:289 (2,3) - These should overlap, also decrease the stack leniency.
00:23:789 (3) - Feels out of place, doesnt suit this spot. Try a non repeating slider
00:26:394 (2,3) - Should overlap
00:38:552 (3) - Doesnt follow any beat's. Consider changing to a single slider

Hard
00:04:920 (4) - The large white tick should be its own note, consider changing to 2 singles.
01:07:920 (1,3) - Try blanketing here

Mentai's Hyper
00:43:920 (5,6,7) - Stack these properly
00:49:920 (4,5) - Repeats are unnecessary
00:55:762 (4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Just consider spacing, some of these seem too spread.
01:22:762 (3,4) - Try a blanket here

Shira's Light Insane
00:55:289 (3,1,2) - Just check that these are blanketed properly, the sliders seem not curved enough.
01:15:499 (5) - Consider reversing this slider, so it flows well into 01:15:815 (1) -
01:23:828 (1) - This isnt snapped, and is out of beat.

Insane
00:04:447 (3,4,1,2) - Consider blanketing all of these, it will just make the map nice and smooth
Nice map!

Extra
00:40:289 (1,2) - Sliders should start on the white notes, to make it feel like you are hitting the notes, consider a similar pattern to 00:39:499 (2,3,4) ?
00:47:078 (2,3) - Make 00:47:078 (2) - Nice and snug in a blanket :)
01:02:868 (5,7) - Try overlapping the tails
01:18:183 (3) - Consider shortening this to the blue tick, then add a circle on the white tick
01:20:552 (4,5,6,1,2) - Blankets :D

Extreme!
00:11:394 (1,2) - Maybe curve them a little more
00:13:920 (1) - This should be a slider, as this circle breaks your flow into the rest of the song
00:28:604 (4,5,6,7,1) - Keep the spacing consistent 00:28:841 (7,1) - Particularly here
00:32:078 (3) - This clashes with 00:32:394 (5) - You should move 00:32:078 (3) right just a little
00:56:868 (1) - Maybe curve this a little more
00:59:868 (3,1) - This blanket shouldnt touch

STRIP!!!
My picky eyes cant see errors here. Nice Job!!!
Topic Starter
Ohwow

Watch My Skill wrote:

Hard
00:04:920 (4) - The large white tick should be its own note, consider changing to 2 singles. Mapping to the guitar
01:07:920 (1,3) - Try blanketing here Changed to something different

Insane
00:04:447 (3,4,1,2) - Consider blanketing all of these, it will just make the map nice and smooth Blanketed the first one
Nice map!

Extra
00:40:289 (1,2) - Sliders should start on the white notes, to make it feel like you are hitting the notes, consider a similar pattern to 00:39:499 (2,3,4) ? Mapping to the vocals.
00:47:078 (2,3) - Make 00:47:078 (2) - Nice and snug in a blanket :) Don't feel like blanketing here.
01:02:868 (5,7) - Try overlapping the tails Good suggestion, but no thanks
01:18:183 (3) - Consider shortening this to the blue tick, then add a circle on the white tick Changed!
01:20:552 (4,5,6,1,2) - Blankets :D No Thanks, i'll consider it if further opinion suggests so.

Extreme!
00:11:394 (1,2) - Maybe curve them a little more I think it's fine
00:13:920 (1) - This should be a slider, as this circle breaks your flow into the rest of the song I mapped this loud noise to a circle at 00:16:447 (1) - so it should be fine. Flow breaks are fine on the most intense sounds.
00:28:604 (4,5,6,7,1) - Keep the spacing consistent 00:28:841 (7,1) - Particularly here I'll wait on further opinion, I want to keep that increased spacing to emphasize the loud noise.
00:32:078 (3) - This clashes with 00:32:394 (5) - You should move 00:32:078 (3) right just a little fixed
00:56:868 (1) - Maybe curve this a little more Tried
00:59:868 (3,1) - This blanket shouldnt touch Fixed

STRIP!!!
My picky eyes cant see errors here. Nice Job!!!
Thank you for mod!
Pituophis
Hi!
Mostly went through strip, went through a few others quickly
Strip!!!
00:12:815 (1,2,3) - Rotate 5 degrees anticlockwise on selection center
00:13:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - maybe ctrl+j and make it blanket 00:12:973 (2) -
00:26:236 (5) - curve this like you did with these 00:26:552 (1,2,4) -
00:37:289 (3) - this rhythm seems better to me:


00:40:920 (3) - blanket 00:40:604 (2) -
00:41:710 (1) - slider shape doesn't seem to fit imo, maybe just a normal slider
00:42:026 (2,3,4,5,6) - star pattern could be better
00:59:236 (8) - move to x:460 y:325
01:09:973 (2,1) - blanket is just slightly off
01:22:289 (6) - move to x:170 y:130


Extreme!
01:22:289 (5,3) - blanket
01:24:657 (3,4) - ctrl+g


Extra
00:02:710 (1,2,3) - try rotating 21 degrees on selection center
00:07:447 (6,2) - is this a blanket?
00:40:289 (1,2) - could blanket these better
01:15:815 (1,2) - maybe move 01:16:289 (2) - to x:325 y:245
01:16:762 (1,2) - similar to ^


Shira's Light Insane
00:33:183 (2,3) - i think splitting these 2 repeating sliders into 3 like this:

or do this:

would be better

00:55:604 (1) - move down to x:105 y:50
00:56:236 (3,1) - fix blanket
01:04:052 (6) - Weird to start on a blue tick. maybe end 01:03:657 (5) - on 01:04:052 - and make 01:04:052 (6) - start on 01:04:131 -
01:19:289 (3) - cut it in half and put a repeater

Hope I gave at least a few useful suggestions.
Speed of Snail

Watch My Skill wrote:

TheOnlyLeon's Advanced
00:03:341 (3,4,5) - This is too hard for an advanced map.

I'm inclined to disagree

00:16:289 (2,3) - These should overlap, also decrease the stack leniency.

You have a point, but I'm worried about having perfect overlap, as generally you're supposed to avoid perfect overlap in all situations, I'll stay tentative here but I'll keep it in mind.

00:23:789 (3) - Feels out of place, doesnt suit this spot. Try a non repeating slider

This is exactly the same as the last time this rhythm came up, I'd value consistency here

00:26:394 (2,3) - Should overlap

Same as above

00:38:552 (3) - Doesnt follow any beat's. Consider changing to a single slider

That's, just incorrect, it directly follows the beat, just because the track got a bit higher pitched doesn't mean it no longer exists.
Thanks for the mod, didn't make any changes for now but I may consider a couple revisions of my own since it's been a while since I made it, also I've been pretty extensively grinding the RC for a while since I'm trying for BN, and while I understand the stacking, I'd be worried about that change on my own so I'd only make it if there was a larger consensus.
Akitoshi

Revialink wrote:

Aki's Easy

  1. 00:03:499 (3) – delete na
  2. 00:49:289 (1) - make sure that there is a reasonable time delay after a spinner to the next object. This will ensure that players have enough time to recover and react to the next object. In the case of consecutive spinners, make sure that the next spinner gives adequate time to account for a lower reaction time for new players oops
  3. 00:01:762 - 00:02:236 – delete all inherited timing points in that time (they’re doubling)
  4. 00:08:552 - 00:08:868 - ^
  5. 00:18:815 - ^
  6. 00:28:920 - ^
  7. 00:41:710 - 00:49:289 - ^
  8. 01:01:920 - 01:12:026 - ^
  9. 01:23:868 - ^ ye removed almost all of them

[ Space ] wrote:

[Aki's Easy]
01:15:815 (3) - Should Kiai time end here? No sense in dragging it through the break time fixed

Watch My Skill wrote:

Aki's Easy
00:41:078 (3,1) - Maybe dont overlap the trails? this is fine as the sliders path are visible
01:15:815 (3) - You should end kiai mode here ya
Thats all
Nothing really bad here at all
thanks all!

and btw you can remove "Aki" on tag and please add "Corinn" instead xd
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Topic Starter
Ohwow

Pituophis wrote:

Hi!
Mostly went through strip, went through a few others quickly
Strip!!!
00:12:815 (1,2,3) - Rotate 5 degrees anticlockwise on selection center I like it the way it is right now
00:13:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - maybe ctrl+j and make it blanket 00:12:973 (2) - ^
00:26:236 (5) - curve this like you did with these 00:26:552 (1,2,4) - I want it to be different from the next 3 sliders.
00:37:289 (3) - this rhythm seems better to me: I like it the way it is right now, I'll consider changing it if further opinion suggests so


00:40:920 (3) - blanket 00:40:604 (2) - Fixed
00:41:710 (1) - slider shape doesn't seem to fit imo, maybe just a normal slider K changed
00:42:026 (2,3,4,5,6) - star pattern could be better Fixed
00:59:236 (8) - move to x:460 y:325 K
01:09:973 (2,1) - blanket is just slightly off K hopefully it's better now
01:22:289 (6) - move to x:170 y:130 ok


Extreme!
01:22:289 (5,3) - blanket fixed
01:24:657 (3,4) - ctrl+g mm i like it the way it is right now


Extra
00:02:710 (1,2,3) - try rotating 21 degrees on selection center Changed
00:07:447 (6,2) - is this a blanket? Blanketed
00:40:289 (1,2) - could blanket these better Fixed
01:15:815 (1,2) - maybe move 01:16:289 (2) - to x:325 y:245 Hmm okay
01:16:762 (1,2) - similar to ^ ^
Thank you for the mod! Updated Corinn's/Aki's Easy and Metadata (tags)
Shira
no reply=fix

Watch My Skill wrote:

Shira's Light Insane
00:55:289 (3,1,2) - Just check that these are blanketed properly, the sliders seem not curved enough.
01:15:499 (5) - Consider reversing this slider, so it flows well into 01:15:815 (1) - modified
01:23:828 (1) - This isnt snapped, and is out of beat. listen at 25%. it obviously doesnt sound right
thanks!

Pituophis wrote:

Shira's Light Insane
00:33:183 (2,3) - i think splitting these 2 repeating sliders into 3 like this:

or do this:

would be better

00:55:604 (1) - move down to x:105 y:50
00:56:236 (3,1) - fix blanket
01:04:052 (6) - Weird to start on a blue tick. maybe end 01:03:657 (5) - on 01:04:052 - and make 01:04:052 (6) - start on 01:04:131 - nah then the split wouldnt be even and itll be hard to read
01:19:289 (3) - cut it in half and put a repeater i like the aesthetics~

Hope I gave at least a few useful suggestions.
thanks!

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Kyle Y

KrastrovLap wrote:

From your req (I will random 5 diffs yay ) ( ^ = same as above, Imo = In my opinion)

Normal (Kyle Y)

  1. 00:56:394 - add circle here would be nice Imo
  2. 00:59:236 - ^
  3. 01:03:973 - ^
  4. 01:05:236 - ^
These 4 modding above still talking aout the same thing, just adding circle on the vocal. um.... imo, if I add to the place mentioned above, the pattern would be very dense and increase the difficulty in certain stands, therefore I would remain here.

Watch My Skill wrote:



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00:02:710 (2,3,4) - Feels a little sloppy, maybe repeat 00:02:710 (2) - and replace the second part of 00:03:026 (3) - with a single. it is still acceptable for a normal diff, I would like to remain here as it doesn't cause rankable problem.
00:54:815 (2,3,4,5) - Should spread these out a little, mostly just to help with reading. let me think about it, wait for further modding.
01:05:868 (5) - Slider is too long, should end on the red tick I ended for the next vocal.
01:23:868 (2,3,4) - Feels weird to play, just check out a few different patterns, see if theres a better one. I will fix this
ky's
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268,76,63341,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Ohwow
Updated Shira's and Kyle's diff
Arf
Hey M4M from your queue. Here's my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/551049

Aki's easy
00:17:710 (3) - Consider making this a repeat slider instead? Breaks the pattern I know
01:18:657 (1,2) - Why not use patterns like 00:03:815 (1,2,3) - instead for this section, I think these ones from the beginning fit the music much better than the current ones

Beautifully structured

Ky's normal
I don't fully understand the flow in places like 00:14:236 (2,3) - and 00:25:131 (3,4) - it doesn't move towards the next note or cut back in any way. Just an anomaly I wanted to point out
00:17:552 (3) - Ruins the pattern but this sounds much better as a repeat slider in my opinion
00:37:762 (3,4) - This sounds better if "3" were a single long slider ending where "4" ends, in my opinion
00:39:183 (1,2,3) - This sounds rather odd rhythmically, something like this (maybe extend the 4 even) sounds much better in my opinion
00:55:289 (3,4) - Could make this a single slider, I think this sudden stack is slightly out of left field and a bit overcomplicated for this difficulty since there is an Advanced
01:01:289 (5) - Perhaps extend this to be a 1/2 slider
01:03:341 (2,3) - Why the rhythm change? I don't know about your hitsounds but it feels quite strange to not follow the same rhythm as the previous slider. 3 being a separate slider instead of the slider simply starting at 2 sounds strange imo.
01:05:394 (3,4) - As before
01:23:868 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe sounds better like this? I think missing out that sound in the middle of 01:24:026 (3) - is not good and last note should be clickable as well I believe

Decently done, well played

TheOnlyLeon's Advanced
Bigger CS than Normal, I'm not sure lol
00:03:341 (3,4,5) - Yo, kicksliders in an Advanced is a bit much isn't it? Large circles or not, I don't think this is a good idea. Even the Hard has repeat sliders here instead. Please nerf this
00:16:289 (2) - 00:26:394 (2,3) - Yeah... I don't think it is appropriate to use this technique in a Advanced at all, particularly when the Hard has nothing like this
00:13:920 (1,3) - Also, following the background guitar instead of the vocals on a lower diff like this is not recommended. Remember you're mapping for people who have just graduated from Normals, they haven't learned to listen to all of the stuff in the background yet.
00:23:789 (3,1) - Too much dexterity required to hit this for an Advanced, it's too hard I think
01:24:815 (1) - Recommend mapping the note the spinner stars on and starting the spinner on the blue tick after

I admit, I don't get this difficulty. If it's supposed to be a gap closer between Hard and Normal, it does a strange job of it, having some elements which are harder than both difficulties and following rhythms which are a bit complex for what it needs to be. What is being followed at 00:35:552 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:38:078 (1,2,3) - ? It's not the vocals, it's some sort of more complex implied beat which I feel is inappropriate for the level the difficulty should be at. If you're trying to make it less dense to keep the difficulty down, I think it's having the opposite effect because the notes aren't on obvious vocal or instrumental beats. Methods of mapping such as the kicksliders or 01:09:026 (3) - should also not be present here, at least that is my feelings. Perhaps a BN can give better spread info, this is just my 2 cents.

hard
00:08:552 (5) - Ctrl+G for flow?
00:12:815 (1,2) - Recommend three notes instead of a slider, like 00:51:341 (1,2,3) -
00:17:078 (3) - sounds better as two circles in my opinion
00:20:868 (3) - Bit of a strange flow here from 3 to 4. Perhaps 3 should be a Ctrl+G'd "2" pointing at 4?
00:23:078 (2,3,4) - Sudden spacing drop is sudden, space these out a bit more? Particularly as they use finish hit sounds, anti jumps here feels awkward in my opinion
00:26:552 (1) - Could be a jump here, since you added them in places like 00:07:447 (5,1) - this place has an even clearer beat which could be used for a jump. Same at places like 00:16:447 (1) - 00:18:815 (1) - 00:24:026 (1) -
00:33:183 (1,2,3) - As before about anti jumps. Finish hitsounds feel really weird with low spacing (to me at least)
01:12:341 (2,4,6) - Recommend these to be on the head of the next slider instead of under the first, easier to read imo
01:15:815 (5) - Kiai continuing in the gap?

Rhythmically the diff is good, it feels slight untidy aesthetically but that's an experience thing so don't worry too much about that. Nice work

Mentai's Hyper
00:04:131 (3,4) - This pattern appears once and then never again. It's not bad rhythmically (though I see you favored the guitar in the next notes), so you could use it a couple more times, but if not then recommend dumping it for consistency
00:16:447 (1,2) - The lower SV here actually makes this somewhat tougher to read. It's not necessarily needed to have a lower SV here tbh, I see the effect you were going for but meh
00:16:920 (3,4,5,1) - As much as I hate red to white sliders, something like this sounds better here imo, current pattern is noticeably off beat
00:19:604 (2,3) - Ctrl+G for flow from "1"?
00:20:868 (2,3,4) - Recommend just making these a triangle like the one before it, something like this perhaps. It's good for flow and you get a nice jump lead in to "5", which fits the beat. Either way, stack "3" or "4" (depending on whether you make the change or not) correctly, it's off
00:21:973 (2) - Stack this with thew previous note that it ghost overlaps and adjust the way 00:22:131 (3) - faces accordingly
00:27:815 (1) - Instead of this, a slider starting on the previous red tick and ending here sounds better imo
00:32:236 (3,4) - Consider mapping the note between these
00:54:341 (1,2) - These are mapped with a pattern less difficult than the Hard has, which is odd. Personally recommend nerfing the Hard to fit this pattern, but you may have to increase the difficulty of this if Ohwow doesn't want to nerf his
01:01:604 (6) - stack properly
01:03:341 (4) - No reason not to make "4" fit the same symmetrical style pattern of 2 and 3. Looks better imo
01:06:341 (5) - Stack this correctly
01:07:447 (2,3,4) - This is a pretty nasty jump pattern to sic on someone for a Hyper. The sheer linear jump is perhaps not a good idea to have in a Hyper since there's nothing like it in the rest of the map, maybe make it more flowy/triangular
01:14:552 (1,2,3) - Could fit together to make a better lookign triangle
01:14:552 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Could look a bit better aesthetically, but fun to play
01:15:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Other diffs left this blank, recommend you do too for consistency

Another diff which is nice rhythmically, but a bit untidy aesthetically. Imperfect stacks, some squicky overlaps and a few questionable patterning choices add to this, but again, not something which happens overnight. Pretty nice diff overall, could use a bit more polish.


Shira's diff is very clean and well done, only thing worth mentioning is that 00:52:131 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - these are a bit of a spike in difficulty and recommended to maybe make them a teensy bit smaller.

insane
Like above, this diff is extremely well done, quite tidy and clean, not many things to mention at all
00:43:920 (4,5) - Are you sure about this? I reckon a triple, or a short quad starting from the blue tick after the "3" works just as well. This is a little out of left field and there's nothing like it in the rest of the map really.
01:15:815 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Most of the difficulties left this blank, I recommend it too, better imo

Aesthetically pleasing and fun to play, excellent stuff.

I can't mod Extra difficulties and I apologize for that, but I prefer to mod things I can play at a satisfactory level. Ignoring those diffs that I didn't look at, I think the Hyper/Hard/Advanced could use a bit more puff and polish, and then you're pretty much good to go. It's a good mapset :D
vekt0r
Hi, m4m
modding 3 top diffs since last one did everything else
(also did you really make three 5* diffs of the same song by yourself xd)

strip
00:03:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I like this rhythm better because it follows the drums and it also properly emphasizes the cymbal

00:11:394 (1,2,4) - these are a little uneven
00:18:420 (4,5) - putting these so close to the slider doesn’t seem to fit, put them farther out
00:23:394 (3,5) - you should emphasize these with spacing, not 2 and 4
00:23:789 - this isn’t as noticeable as the end of kiai but I’d prefer it if you mapped this
don’t just ignore spacing for the calm parts, for example 00:26:078 (4,5,1) - should not be less than 00:25:131 (1,2) -
00:47:710 (1) - this slider seems out of place, if you want something like that probably use a red anchor:

00:49:841 - and 00:51:104 - really don’t think you should leave this out; I get that you’re trying to emphasize the snare-kick or something, but imo it’s awkward leaving that unmapped
01:09:104 - drum triple again, and besides your jump pattern should be emphasizing 01:08:552 (3,7) -, not 4,6,8
01:17:749 (1) - probably an accident (also why were you on 1/8 snap in the first place lul)
01:17:749 (1,2,3) - also I get not wanting to use a slider on the 1 this time, but at least don’t make it an equilateral triangle; it may not be a reading problem but it feels uneven
01:18:657 (4) - why not nc here? it feels intentional

extreme
00:03:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same as strip, idk why you mapped a 9 note burst for this diff and kicksliders for strip
00:07:447 (6,2) - not quite stacked
00:11:394 (1,6) - ^
00:16:131 (5) - move this up for spacing emphasis
00:23:078 (2,3,4) - keep spacing low, but not that low here, also make the kickslider longer, otherwise it looks weird
00:49:841 - and 00:51:104 - same as strip
00:50:552 (1,2,3) - fix the flow here
00:55:131 (4,1) - bad flow again
00:59:868 (3,1) - don’t blanket such that the sliders actually touch
01:07:447 (3,1) - make 3 flow into 1 better, also try to make 1 prettier, but I suck at slider shapes too so idk
01:09:104 - same as strip but your jump pattern does the emphasis thing right
01:13:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - why is this here? seems very out of place; the kicksliders after are good though
01:15:815 (1) - okay I get the effect you’re trying to go for but you literally decreased the SV by a factor of 3; raise it just a bit

extra
00:03:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same as strip
00:05:710 (3,4,5,6) - maybe you nerfed ds because it’s a square, but it’s way smaller here than every other jump pattern in this section
00:18:420 (4,5) - same as strip
00:43:920 (4,5,6) - why are these stacked so closely?
starting at 00:44:236 -, you have notes going into sliders at sharp angles for 2 measures, and wide angles for 2 measures; probably intentional but I don’t see any difference between the two sections
00:49:841 - and 00:51:104 - same as strip
01:09:104 - same as strip but your jump pattern does the emphasis thing right again
01:14:552 (2) - nc
01:15:815 (1) - same as extreme and it doesn’t help that you go right back to sv 1.5

That's it from me, personally I wouldn't call it ready for rank, but it's getting there; I like the themes you're using :D
Speed of Snail
OK, I can't make any changes right now, but I can reply and I think I'd like to just talk about the points briefly before I forget anything.

Arf wrote:

TheOnlyLeon's Advanced
Bigger CS than Normal, I'm not sure lol

Honestly, I was originally mapping around CS 3, but found it a tad awkward with the style I was going for, and frankly the diff is a little bit on the harder side weighed against it's SR, so I needed some superficial ways to increase the margin of error.

00:03:341 (3,4,5) - Yo, kicksliders in an Advanced is a bit much isn't it? Large circles or not, I don't think this is a good idea. Even the Hard has repeat sliders here instead. Please nerf this

I personally like the pattern, however it's been brought up 3 or 4 times now, so I could change this to just circles maybe? Although I'd really rather not just make this a kick slider, there's a number of those in the diff already.

00:16:289 (2) - 00:26:394 (2,3) - Yeah... I don't think it is appropriate to use this technique in a Advanced at all, particularly when the Hard has nothing like this

As much as I get the sentiment, I'm not sure how I could replace it without fundamentally changing the rhythm here, cause having a triple isn't acceptable, Again I could just ignore background rhythm and make it a circle but I'd rather not if I can avoid it.

00:13:920 (1,3) - Also, following the background guitar instead of the vocals on a lower diff like this is not recommended. Remember you're mapping for people who have just graduated from Normals, they haven't learned to listen to all of the stuff in the background yet.

I disagree here, mapping to the vocals or quick and light snares would both be much harder than the guitar here, since the vocal's are not nicely timed and the drums are very fast and barely audible while playing.

00:23:789 (3,1) - Too much dexterity required to hit this for an Advanced, it's too hard I think

Yea I see what you mean, will move this around.

01:24:815 (1) - Recommend mapping the note the spinner stars on and starting the spinner on the blue tick after

Not a bad idea, frankly not sure why I didn't already have this in the original diff.

I admit, I don't get this difficulty. If it's supposed to be a gap closer between Hard and Normal, it does a strange job of it, having some elements which are harder than both difficulties and following rhythms which are a bit complex for what it needs to be. What is being followed at 00:35:552 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:38:078 (1,2,3) - ? It's not the vocals, it's some sort of more complex implied beat which I feel is inappropriate for the level the difficulty should be at. If you're trying to make it less dense to keep the difficulty down, I think it's having the opposite effect because the notes aren't on obvious vocal or instrumental beats. Methods of mapping such as the kicksliders or 01:09:026 (3) - should also not be present here, at least that is my feelings. Perhaps a BN can give better spread info, this is just my 2 cents.

Personally, I don't think comparing this to the Normal and Hard diffs is the best metric, sure it fits between them, but all 3 diffs are made by different people and are going to play out drastically differently.

Although at the same time, I give credit that this is one cohesive set and having massively contradicting styles, while acceptable in Extra's, may not be a good fit for low difficulties. Fact is this is a pretty new area for me, as every finished map I have is either an Easy/Normal or an Extreme+, I really have almost no experience with Hard/Insane range. As someone who normally plays 5.7/5.8*+ it's entirely possible I just don't GET moderate rhythms and structure at this point, but I'm not really sure how else to make this, If anyone want's to bring up discussion I'm happy to talk about it, otherwise I'll stick to updating the changes I've mentioned already and leave it there for now.


Thanks for you mod, also thanks for my top play :P
[ -Scarlet- ]
Hey there~ m4m from your queue :D
p/5772301#p5772301

  1. 00:01:289 (1,1,1) - These sliders feels really out of place and random shape. Prefer them to be more spaced apart. Maybe try this pattern? http://puu.sh/tAKQH/6eb4528fbc.jpg . Copy the first slider and rotate 120 degree. It'll looks a lot nicer and the sliders less random
  2. 00:03:815 (1) - Obviously needs a finish here >>
  3. 00:04:131 (2) - Small stuff, slider tail not stacked properly with 00:03:183 (1) - oh, also this too 00:07:289 (5) - 00:20:078 (1) -
  4. 00:05:394 (2) - This slider feels weird as it is the only slider with that sharp corner throughout this beginning section.
  5. 00:16:131 (5) - Maybe extend the slider here to 3/4? Fits well with the guitar
  6. 00:23:868 (6,7) - Really unnecessary finish here. Really noisy not really fitting with the music
  7. 00:33:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - err, you could make this stream pattern nicer making it fitting to the piano. Try this? http://puu.sh/tALsD/da8ee2d633.jpg . There's and obvious loud drum 00:33:814 (1,2,3,4) - that needs to but emphasized with the stream.
  8. 00:39:815 (4) - Two circles here would better great. Fitting the vocal
  9. 00:45:183 (1,2) - This one should be similar with 00:44:236 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
  10. 00:47:710 (1) - Not a big fan of this irregular shape slider :?
  11. 00:48:973 (2,1) - Visually looks bad while playing imo. Maybe try this? http://puu.sh/tALHR/d8f7ba7386.jpg
  12. 01:03:657 (4,1) - This flows really badly with the stream, and the current stream doesn't emphasize nicely on the piano too. Try this: http://puu.sh/tALXe/aa55193285.jpg . Not only if gives some space to flows towards the stream, but the strong piano should be emphasized with more spaced streams followed with the low pitch here 01:04:131 -
  13. 01:18:183 (3) - this part is rather confusing to play. It's because the guitar obviously starts at 01:18:499 - , making the players think the slider ends there followed by 01:18:657 (4) - being 1/4 apart due to its spacing. Most of the time I get 100s at 01:18:657 (1) - because I can't figure when exactly I should hit this note
  14. 01:24:341 (3) - NC here then remove NC here 01:24:657 (1) -

    Not much to say about this. Personally not my type of map :(

  1. 00:01:289 (1,1,1) - Same thing I've mentioned in the previous diff
  2. 00:03:499 (5,6,7,8) - Kinda odd stream shape. Could make it more curve and circular stream http://puu.sh/tAMyd/bb6a53b246.jpg
  3. 00:05:710 (3) - Stacked properly I guess @@ (Never really like to mod like this but nvm) and 00:12:341 (5) -
  4. 00:16:131 (5) - Similar thing I've mentioned about 3/4 slider
  5. 00:23:868 (5,6) - Same about finish
  6. 00:23:078 (2,3,4,5,6) - Not sure, but making this section a lower DS felt unnecessary, especially when you made the part more exciting the finish
  7. 00:33:183 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Similar stuff I've mentioned before
  8. 00:52:920 (1) - Really unnecessary NC here if you ask me, maybe you wanna keep the (1,2) combo color but this random NC feels random to me
  9. 01:10:447 (1) - Felt really off when playing this kind of long slider especially during the chorus, where things suppose to be exciting
  10. 01:11:394 (4,5,6,7) - Should have bigger spacing than 01:11:078 (2,3) - following the strong vocal

    Not sure, I actually kinda prefer this diff more than your hardest one when comes to rhythm. @@

  • [Extra]
    First try testplay

    Actually, kinda like this. Very neat compared to the other two >>
  1. 00:28:762 (8) - I think this slider should point downwards toward your 00:28:920 (1) - . The players expect the next note after 00:28:762 (8) - to be somewhere around the top area of the playfield, but having it somewhere else feels off
  2. 00:53:236 (2,3) - Ctrl+G here, really flows better since you have been doing the similar "triangular to the right" flow this jump section
  3. 01:03:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the spacing of the stream should be similar to what you've done in Extreme! diff
  4. 01:18:183 (3) - Similar thing I've mentioned in the Strip diff

    Nothing much to say, feels like this difficulty is mapped by different person @@

Anyway that's all from me~ Not comfortable with modding anything below Insane :?

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Ohwow
No reply = Fixed/Changed

Arf wrote:

Hey M4M from your queue. Here's my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/551049


hard
00:08:552 (5) - Ctrl+G for flow?
00:12:815 (1,2) - Recommend three notes instead of a slider, like 00:51:341 (1,2,3) -
00:17:078 (3) - sounds better as two circles in my opinion Changed to somethin similar
00:20:868 (3) - Bit of a strange flow here from 3 to 4. Perhaps 3 should be a Ctrl+G'd "2" pointing at 4? Changed to something different. ctrl+g would make spacing too big
00:23:078 (2,3,4) - Sudden spacing drop is sudden, space these out a bit more? Particularly as they use finish hit sounds, anti jumps here feels awkward in my opinion
00:26:552 (1) - Could be a jump here, since you added them in places like 00:07:447 (5,1) - this place has an even clearer beat which could be used for a jump. Same at places like 00:16:447 (1) - 00:18:815 (1) - 00:24:026 (1) -
00:33:183 (1,2,3) - As before about anti jumps. Finish hitsounds feel really weird with low spacing (to me at least)
01:12:341 (2,4,6) - Recommend these to be on the head of the next slider instead of under the first, easier to read imo
01:15:815 (5) - Kiai continuing in the gap?

Rhythmically the diff is good, it feels slight untidy aesthetically but that's an experience thing so don't worry too much about that. Nice work Remapping this lul

insane
Like above, this diff is extremely well done, quite tidy and clean, not many things to mention at all
00:43:920 (4,5) - Are you sure about this? I reckon a triple, or a short quad starting from the blue tick after the "3" wor ks just as well. This is a little out of left field and there's nothing like it in the rest of the map really.
01:15:815 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - Most of the difficulties left this blank, I recommend it too, better imo mm im gonna keep it

Aesthetically pleasing and fun to play, excellent stuff.

I can't mod Extra difficulties and I apologize for that, but I prefer to mod things I can play at a satisfactory level. Ignoring those diffs that I didn't look at, I think the Hyper/Hard/Advanced could use a bit more puff and polish, and then you're pretty much good to go. It's a good mapset :D
Thanks for mod. No reply = fixed (gonna partially remap Hard tho C:)


vekt0r wrote:

Hi, m4m
modding 3 top diffs since last one did everything else
(also did you really make three 5* diffs of the same song by yourself xd)

strip
00:03:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I like this rhythm better because it follows the drums and it also properly emphasizes the cymbal Probably gonna change it but i'm gonna have to think of a pattern for it.

00:11:394 (1,2,4) - these are a little uneven
00:18:420 (4,5) - putting these so close to the slider doesn’t seem to fit, put them farther out
00:23:394 (3,5) - you should emphasize these with spacing, not 2 and 4 I think it's fine
00:23:789 - this isn’t as noticeable as the end of kiai but I’d prefer it if you mapped this I believe it's only a triple starting at the red tick
don’t just ignore spacing for the calm parts, for example 00:26:078 (4,5,1) - should not be less than 00:25:131 (1,2) -
00:47:710 (1) - this slider seems out of place, if you want something like that probably use a red anchor:

00:49:841 - and 00:51:104 - really don’t think you should leave this out; I get that you’re trying to emphasize the snare-kick or something, but imo it’s awkward leaving that unmapped
01:09:104 - drum triple again, and besides your jump pattern should be emphasizing 01:08:552 (3,7) -, not 4,6,8
01:17:749 (1) - probably an accident (also why were you on 1/8 snap in the first place lul) Woops
01:17:749 (1,2,3) - also I get not wanting to use a slider on the 1 this time, but at least don’t make it an equilateral triangle; it may not be a reading problem but it feels uneven
01:18:657 (4) - why not nc here? it feels intentional

extra
00:03:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same as strip
00:05:710 (3,4,5,6) - maybe you nerfed ds because it’s a square, but it’s way smaller here than every other jump pattern in this section
00:18:420 (4,5) - same as strip
00:43:920 (4,5,6) - why are these stacked so closely? I like stacking like this, my style i guess? I don't think it's too big of a problem
starting at 00:44:236 -, you have notes going into sliders at sharp angles for 2 measures, and wide angles for 2 measures; probably intentional but I don’t see any difference between the two sections Changed a bit
00:49:841 - and 00:51:104 - same as strip
01:09:104 - same as strip but your jump pattern does the emphasis thing right again
01:14:552 (2) - nc
01:15:815 (1) - same as extreme and it doesn’t help that you go right back to sv 1.5

That's it from me, personally I wouldn't call it ready for rank, but it's getting there; I like the themes you're using :D
Thanks for the mod!!!


[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:

Hey there~ m4m from your queue :D
p/5772301#p5772301

  1. 00:01:289 (1,1,1) - These sliders feels really out of place and random shape. Prefer them to be more spaced apart. Maybe try this pattern? http://puu.sh/tAKQH/6eb4528fbc.jpg . Copy the first slider and rotate 120 degree. It'll looks a lot nicer and the sliders less random
  2. 00:03:815 (1) - Obviously needs a finish here >>
  3. 00:04:131 (2) - Small stuff, slider tail not stacked properly with 00:03:183 (1) - oh, also this too 00:07:289 (5) - 00:20:078 (1) -
  4. 00:05:394 (2) - This slider feels weird as it is the only slider with that sharp corner throughout this beginning section.
  5. 00:16:131 (5) - Maybe extend the slider here to 3/4? Fits well with the guitar Mmm No thanks
  6. 00:23:868 (6,7) - Really unnecessary finish here. Really noisy not really fitting with the music
  7. 00:33:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - err, you could make this stream pattern nicer making it fitting to the piano. Try this? http://puu.sh/tALsD/da8ee2d633.jpg . There's and obvious loud drum 00:33:814 (1,2,3,4) - that needs to but emphasized with the stream. I like it :D
  8. 00:39:815 (4) - Two circles here would better great. Fitting the vocal I switched the circle and the slider
  9. 00:45:183 (1,2) - This one should be similar with 00:44:236 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
  10. 00:47:710 (1) - Not a big fan of this irregular shape slider :?
  11. 00:48:973 (2,1) - Visually looks bad while playing imo. Maybe try this? http://puu.sh/tALHR/d8f7ba7386.jpg Changed to something different
  12. 01:03:657 (4,1) - This flows really badly with the stream, and the current stream doesn't emphasize nicely on the piano too. Try this: http://puu.sh/tALXe/aa55193285.jpg . Not only if gives some space to flows towards the stream, but the strong piano should be emphasized with more spaced streams followed with the low pitch here 01:04:131 - I like my stream currently, sorry
  13. 01:18:183 (3) - this part is rather confusing to play. It's because the guitar obviously starts at 01:18:499 - , making the players think the slider ends there followed by 01:18:657 (4) - being 1/4 apart due to its spacing. Most of the time I get 100s at 01:18:657 (1) - because I can't figure when exactly I should hit this note 01:18:657 (1) - is the literally the loudest beat :/
  14. 01:24:341 (3) - NC here then remove NC here 01:24:657 (1) -

    Not much to say about this. Personally not my type of map :(

  • [Extra]
    First try testplay

    Actually, kinda like this. Very neat compared to the other two >>
  1. 00:28:762 (8) - I think this slider should point downwards toward your 00:28:920 (1) - . The players expect the next note after 00:28:762 (8) - to be somewhere around the top area of the playfield, but having it somewhere else feels off It puts more emphasis with the current pattern imo, plus it looks cleaner with the slider lined up with the stream
  2. 00:53:236 (2,3) - Ctrl+G here, really flows better since you have been doing the similar "triangular to the right" flow this jump section Changed direction of flow on purpose to make those last 3 jumps feel distinct from the rest
  3. 01:03:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the spacing of the stream should be similar to what you've done in Extreme! diff I like the current stream
  4. 01:18:183 (3) - Similar thing I've mentioned in the Strip diff Same

    Nothing much to say, feels like this difficulty is mapped by different person @@

Anyway that's all from me~ Not comfortable with modding anything below Insane :?

Good luck! Thank you so much!
Holy shieettt those are a lot of mods at the same time, i've been pretty busy so i couldn't have done it right away. Thank you so much for the mods guiz i felt like my maps are a lot better now :D

Gonna remap Hard. As for the Extreme dif... i haven't been a great fan of that diff and i'm tired of improving that difficulty, so i'm deleting that diff. RIP Extreme
Plus that was the very first map i made for the mapset so it has a lot of nooby flaws.


I'm going to do the M4M req tomorrow. Thanks again :D
fattypikachu
Hello from your M4M queue!

Probably one of the longest mods I've done... so many difficulties x_x

[Aki's Easy]
00:34:131 (1,2,3) - Feel like there should be something clickable at 00:34:920 - I'd change the rhythm to this
00:39:183 (1,2,3) - ^
00:49:289 - add note

[Ky's Normal]
00:37:131 (2) - Rhythm doesn't follow vocal rhythm like the rest of the map, I'd change to this
00:42:183 (2) - ^
00:39:973 (3,4) - Move tail of 3 up so it points to 4
01:24:026 (3) - Guitar emphasizes beat 4, so put a note there. I'd change to this

[TheOnlyLeon's Advanced]

No video?
00:05:236 (1) - Move tail point to x492 y140
00:09:026 (1) - similar to above
00:07:447 (3) - Positioning looks weird, move so it directly follows slider
00:12:026 (2) - Bend slider the other way so it points to 3
01:24:815 - There's a cymbal sound here, put a circle

[Hard]

open me
00:22:604 (1) - I'd use the same shape as 00:21:341 (1) -
- There seems to be a pattern of reversing flow on every NC, so the slider should go clockwise, sort of like this -> here
00:59:868 (3) - Move to x89 y75 so it's symmetrical with 00:59:394 (1) - and blankets 01:00:341 (1) -
01:00:183 (4) - Move to x229 y107
01:00:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try and form a hexagon?
01:06:815 (3,1) - Increase spacing for emphasis ,like at 01:04:131 (2,1) -
01:19:604 (4,5,1) - Emphasis seems to be on 5, so move it closer to 1
01:20:868 (4,5,1) - ^
01:22:131 (4,5,1) - ^

[Mentai's Hyper]

open me
00:03:815 (1,2) - Stack on 00:02:710 (1,2) -
00:06:973 (3) - Stack head on 00:06:026 (4) -
00:12:026 (3,6) - Stack
00:21:183 (4,2) - ^
00:31:131 (3,2) - ^
00:35:710 (2,5) - ^
01:06:341 (5) - Stack head on 01:05:394 (3) -
01:01:604 (6) - Stack with tail of 01:00:973 (4) -
Some of these look like stylistic choices, so ignore what you want

00:04:131 (3,5) - Blanket
00:10:762 (4,1) - Slight overlap

00:36:657 (1,4) - These should be the same shape
00:48:499 (2,4) - ^

00:44:078 (7) - Move to x104 y240 so it follows 5 and 6
01:24:341 (1) - Empahsis is on 1, ctrl+G 01:24:341 (1,2) - so flow changes on 1 rather than 2

[Shira's Light Insane]

no video?

00:20:868 (3,4) - Move 4 closer to 3 to de-empshasize 4
00:32:710 (1) - ctrl+G to keep flow (unless this was intended)
00:45:657 (4,5) - Increase spacing to emphasize cymbal?

[Insane]

00:22:604 (1) - ctrl+G to break flow
01:00:341 (1) - ctrl+H to break flow and increase spacing emphasis
01:11:868 (4) - move to x464 y128 to make a parallelogram

[Extra]

00:31:447 (1,2) - Blanket like this -> here
00:54:026 (2,1) - increase spacing for emphasis on 1 - alternatively decrease spacing between 00:53:710 (1,2) -
01:11:394 (1) - move tail point to x127 y252 so it points straight down middle of 01:11:710 (2) - like this

This map is very polished already, good luck on getting this ranked! :)
Shunao

Hi!
NM from my Queue ~ ( つ・`д・´)っ


  • [General]
  1. Add on the tags 太田 雅友 - Oota Masatomo - The composer and arrangement of the song
    松井 洋平 - Matsui Youhei - The lyrics
  2. On the diff TheOnlyLeon's Advanced and Shira's Light Insane there isn't the video


  • [Aki's Easy]
  1. 00:18:341 (4,1) - blanket?
  • [Ky's Easy]
  1. 00:06:341 - there is no sound here, so the overlap is not necessary. the sound is here 00:06:578 - so move the slider here
  2. 00:08:868 - here too
  3. 00:11:394 - ^
  4. 00:12:657 - ^
  5. 01:20:552 (5) - can you make this slider straight for follow the flow better
  6. 01:24:183 - you jump a strong note here so I suggest to try something like this http://i.imgur.com/W9DBBpY.jpg?1
  • [TheOnlyLeon's Advanced]
  1. I find that the CS is too small tbh, I think that by playing there will be notes not clickable then I recommend you to put rather 3
  2. 00:38:552 (3) - can you curved this slider because this is not very beautiful.. something like this http://i.imgur.com/JR7IAHz.jpg?1
  3. I think this difficulty should be more work on the aethetics there are patterns kinda like overmapped like 00:19:131 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - or 00:34:289 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - ( because of the aesthetic :/ ) this is my opinion but I don't find this difficulty attractive and interesting.
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:23:947 - Add a note here there is the drum.. stack with 00:24:026 (1) - and overlap them with 00:23:710 (4) - like this http://i.imgur.com/5M30sXD.jpg?1
  2. 00:33:183 (2) - you don't here the beautiful piano? you can make a beatiful pattern like this http://i.imgur.com/f7WqKy7.jpg?1 it's sound so much better
  3. 00:43:841 (4) - add a note for emphasis the piano
  4. 01:03:736 (5) - ^
  5. 01:23:078 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - these notes goes back into itself, can you try something like this http://i.imgur.com/wJewz8H.jpg?1
That's all for me~

GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR MAP!
Kyle Y

Arf wrote:

Ky's normal
I don't fully understand the flow in places like 00:14:236 (2,3) - and 00:25:131 (3,4) - it doesn't move towards the next note or cut back in any way. Just an anomaly I wanted to point out
00:17:552 (3) - Ruins the pattern but this sounds much better as a repeat slider in my opinion
00:37:762 (3,4) - This sounds better if "3" were a single long slider ending where "4" ends, in my opinion
00:39:183 (1,2,3) - This sounds rather odd rhythmically, something like this (maybe extend the 4 even) sounds much better in my opinion
00:55:289 (3,4) - Could make this a single slider, I think this sudden stack is slightly out of left field and a bit overcomplicated for this difficulty since there is an Advanced
01:01:289 (5) - Perhaps extend this to be a 1/2 slider
01:03:341 (2,3) - Why the rhythm change? I don't know about your hitsounds but it feels quite strange to not follow the same rhythm as the previous slider. 3 being a separate slider instead of the slider simply starting at 2 sounds strange imo.
01:05:394 (3,4) - As before
01:23:868 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe sounds better like this? I think missing out that sound in the middle of 01:24:026 (3) - is not good and last note should be clickable as well I believe

Decently done, well played
I fixed lots of it... and sorry that it is not convenient to reply to all modding in my macbook.

ShogunMoon wrote:

  • [Ky's Easy]
  1. 00:06:341 - there is no sound here, so the overlap is not necessary. the sound is here 00:06:578 - so move the slider here
  2. 00:08:868 - here too
  3. 00:11:394 - ^
  4. 00:12:657 - ^
    there is beat sound in fact... I know it is a little bit different from the other part, which is mapping according to vocal, but I would like to keep atm as it repeat the melody at 00:03:815 (1) -
  5. 01:20:552 (5) - can you make this slider straight for follow the flow better fixed
  6. 01:24:183 - you jump a strong note here so I suggest to try something like this http://i.imgur.com/W9DBBpY.jpg?1[

fattypikachu wrote:

[Ky's Normal]
00:37:131 (2) - Rhythm doesn't follow vocal rhythm like the rest of the map, I'd change to this
00:42:183 (2) - ^
repeated modding as Arf, fixed
00:39:973 (3,4) - Move tail of 3 up so it points to 4 minor
01:24:026 (3) - Guitar emphasizes beat 4, so put a note there. I'd change to this fixed to another rhythm.
Baka Baka
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[General]
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Title:ROUGH DIAMONDS
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Creator:Ohwow
Version:Ky's Normal
Source:食戟のソーマ 弍ノ皿
Tags:Shokugeki no Soma: Ni no Sara food wars tv size opening 3 season 2 Shira Shiratoi Corinn Kyle Y Ky Mentai TheOnlyLeon
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Creator, please send me mail if I have a modding. If possible, please send me again once I do not reply over 2 weeks as I will forget it.
Topic Starter
Ohwow
No reply = Fixed/Changed

fattypikachu wrote:

Hello from your M4M queue!

Probably one of the longest mods I've done... so many difficulties x_x

[Hard]

open me
00:22:604 (1) - I'd use the same shape as 00:21:341 (1) -
- There seems to be a pattern of reversing flow on every NC, so the slider should go clockwise, sort of like this -> here
00:59:868 (3) - Move to x89 y75 so it's symmetrical with 00:59:394 (1) - and blankets 01:00:341 (1) -
01:00:183 (4) - Move to x229 y107
01:00:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try and form a hexagon?
01:06:815 (3,1) - Increase spacing for emphasis ,like at 01:04:131 (2,1) -
01:19:604 (4,5,1) - Emphasis seems to be on 5, so move it closer to 1
01:20:868 (4,5,1) - ^
01:22:131 (4,5,1) - ^

[Insane]

00:22:604 (1) - ctrl+G to break flow i think the changing direction of flow is good enough
01:00:341 (1) - ctrl+H to break flow and increase spacing emphasis didn't ctrl + G, but i did something else to increase emphasis, thanks for pointing that out.
01:11:868 (4) - move to x464 y128 to make a parallelogram

[Extra]

00:31:447 (1,2) - Blanket like this -> here
00:54:026 (2,1) - increase spacing for emphasis on 1 - alternatively decrease spacing between 00:53:710 (1,2) - Did the 2nd
01:11:394 (1) - move tail point to x127 y252 so it points straight down middle of 01:11:710 (2) - like this Changed to something different!

This map is very polished already, good luck on getting this ranked! :)

Thank you for the mods Shogun and Pika! :D Fixed Video on TheOnlyLeon's and Shira's diff and added some more tags on all of the difficulties. Updated Ky's Normal
TequilaWolf
mod
STRIP!!!!!-

00:13:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - maybe ctrl+j these and move downwards

00:16:131 (5,1) - should be larger to emphasise 1

00:18:420 (4) - consider removing, don't hear sound here

00:21:815 (2) - ctrl+g might be better flow

00:37:289 (3) - maybe better if it's 1/2 slider+circle, 00:37:604 clickable. also 01:09:499 (1) -

00:40:604 (2) - ctrl+j

00:47:236 (1,2) - make these similar distance with 00:46:762 (1,2) -

00:48:183 (1,2,3) - suggest copypasting and rotating 00:47:710 (1,2) -

01:17:710 (1,2) - should be larger because 1/1 gap. maybe ctrl+g 01:18:183 (3) - and stack 2 on sliderhead?
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-NanoRIPE-
m4m

easy
00:23:078 (3,4) - unnecessary finish cause theres no vocal/instrument that really need to put finish ~(even though you use green line to reduce the volume of finish)
00:33:183 (3,4) - ^ and missing whistle here?
00:34:131 (1) - finish for cymbal
00:37:762 (3) - fix the shape (it doesnt feel smooth for me)
00:53:078 (1) - the end of spinner should be at 00:53:394 - cause the vocal and instrument stop at here at the same time
01:00:341 (1) - unnecessary finish
01:02:868 (2) - it would be great if you make this slider to 3/2 reverse slider ~ for emphatize the vocal sound at 01:03:341 - more
01:03:815 (3,1) - bad overlap
01:12:973 (2) - same as 01:02:868 (2)
01:24:973 (1) - unnecessary finish

normal
00:35:236 (3) - try to make this slider to 1/1 ~ cause 1/1 fit with the music than 3/2 slider imo
00:41:394 (4) - circle here for emphatize the vocal more,same as you did at 00:35:868 (5,6)
01:03:341 (2,3) - i think you should make the circle on the big white tick and the slider on the red tick cause it more make sense if you put the slider on the red tick
01:06:341 (4) - circle here,the vocal looks strong here
01:13:447 (2,3) - same as 00:41:394 (4) -
01:24:815 (3) - finish here?

advanced
00:03:341 (1,2,3,4) - this is too diffcult for advanced diff (this pattern would fit if put on insane diff) even though you want emphatize the stream but its still hard ~ just nerf it
00:06:341 - 00:08:868 - 00:11:394 - considering to map these cause there are cymbal on it ~
00:13:447 (2) - if you want to emphatize the drum at 00:03:341 - im recommended to make the slider like this ~ (its acceptable for advanced i thin)
00:13:920 (1) - im not sure about this slider,cause of this slider you skipped some beats that really need to emphatize it (considering to map more on this part)
00:16:131 (1,2,3) - im sure player would confuse with this pattern cause its really tight and the rhythm its too eehhh idk how to describe this one,my english is weak
00:16:447 (3) - same as before
00:18:499 (1,1) - swap nc
00:26:236 (1) - same as before
00:38:552 (3) - the piano is really weak to emphatize,so i think this slider is unnecessary
01:24:657 (3)- same as normal

hmmm im not sure about this diff.im not complain about the rhythm but the structure.the structure is weak and ehh damn i hope i can speak english well so i can give my explanation clearly ;w; ~
im just pointed out that really need to fix it ~

hard
00:18:341 - im prefer if you emphatize the drum more here,like 00:13:447 (3) -
00:32:710 (1,2,3) - i think you just need slider (3) to emphatize the piano and drum,and for (1,2) - you can emphatize the vocal (im just feel slider (1,2) is not follow the music well)
00:40:604 (2) - ctrl j for better flow
01:03:815 (4,5) - it would be great if you put normal-drum clap here
01:10:447 (4) - make the slider 1/1 here and then a circle for better rhytyhm
01:24:815 (1) - 214,289 for better placement i think

insane
00:06:341 - 00:08:868 - 00:11:394 - same as advanced
01:00:341 (3) - 1/1 slider here is enough here for emphatize the vocal cause for light insane diff is not really good to put long slider especially on kiai time which the rhythm should be harder than non kiai time part
01:05:710 - circle here cause the vocal looks strong here
01:19:762 (1) - im prefer you stack this slider on 01:19:131 (2) - the slidertail for emphatize the guitar more
01:24:657 (1,2) - make it a bit farther,cause its still closer for me

ok gl!
-CD
STRIP!!!
00:16:447 (1,2,3) - Spacing on 1/1 notes.

00:34:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The 1,2,3,4 have a pattern, and then the 5th note just goes back? Seems like it was thought out, but make sure it doesn't feel odd when playing.

01:17:710 (1,2,3) - Spacing? It is a little weird, but the jump from 1,2 should be spaced more, but make the three closer because it's closer on the timeline.

Jesus, this mapping is really good.

I hope this gets ranked because I'm a food wars fan myself lol, but good luck man :D
neonat
Strip

00:15:341 (2,3) - honestly too close to each other though, taking to account every other positioning around it. If it's start is somewhere around the same as 00:15:026 (1) - it could be better position to receive from the previous slider because it's similar to 00:15:026 (1,2) - but it's spacing right now is too different. It's like 00:18:183 (3) and 00:25:762 (3) - which are better spaced than 00:15:657 (3)
00:33:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - audio is too soft here, there is very little feedback to go by for the stream, give some hitsounds or increase the volume
00:46:289 (2,3) - with the impact on 00:46:447 (3) - it would be better if they were spaced out more than the spacings between 00:46:447 (3,4) and 00:46:131 (1,2)
00:51:657 (7) - finish?
01:03:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - well 01:04:130 (1,2,3,4) can be heard quite well but 01:03:815 (1,2,3,4) could still be a little louder than it is right now
01:23:552 (1) - rather than a slider, it would help if this was just a circle, so that there is a gap until 01:23:868 (1) - to emphasize that stop in the music. Using a slider extends over that emptiness in the music which is very additional. What you did in Insane with 01:23:552 (6) - is what is ideally achieved. Could also add a drum whistle here.


Extra

00:33:183 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - similar to ^
00:51:657 (3) - finish
01:23:552 (1) - similar to ^
Arbane
Hello! Bad M4M from your queue.

TheOnlyLeon's Advanced
00:03:341 (3,4,5) - I think this is too intense for an advanced diff.

00:13:920 (1,1,2,3) - Just having long sliders here is pretty boring.

00:24:026 (1,1,2,3) - ^

Mentai's Hyper
00:12:026 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - Make this symmetrical.

00:20:868 (2,3,4) - This is pretty hard to read.

00:28:920 - Why does this section have much higher SV than this section 00:18:815 - They should both be 1.00

00:44:394 (2) - Hitfinish shouldn't be here

00:44:868 (4) - ^

00:55:762 (4) - Ctrl - G

Shira's Light Insane
00:12:499 (1) - Maybe move this to x:177 y:73 and do something different with the circles afterwards.

01:01:920 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe up the spacing here a bit to put more emphasis on the hitfinishes.

01:04:920 (2) - Nerf the spacing here. The jump is way too large

Insane
00:21:341 (1) - Maybe Ctrl - G this for better flow.

00:25:447 (5) - Spacing here is a bit too large.

00:32:710 (1) - This has pretty bad flow. Maybe do something like this instead https://puu.sh/ukYCW/23d6a96aa8.jpg

01:03:341 (3) - Maybe change this slider into something along the lines of this https://puu.sh/ukZe5/733966bf23.jpg and then change the pattern afterwards for obvious reasons.

01:13:447 (3) - Ctrl - G this and it flows sooo much better.

01:18:183 (3) - Having the song start back up again on the sliderend is pretty anticlimactic. Something like this would probably be better https://puu.sh/ukZvP/23c220c79b.jpg

Extra
00:06:184 (6) - Spacing here should be larger to match the rest of this section.

00:09:499 (3,4,5) - Make this a perfect triangle.

00:27:973 (2) - Ctrl - G for flow maybe

00:59:394 (1) - This needs bigger spacing

01:18:183 (3) - Sorry but this slider just doesn't look good. Try doing something like this instead https://puu.sh/ul0dt/aa2c9c4919.jpg Or maybe this https://puu.sh/ul0ms/4671034dbc.jpg

STRIP!!!!!
00:12:815 (1,2,3) - Spacing on this pattern might need to be a bit larger.

00:27:657 (1,2,3) - Since you've been using a lot of curved sliders i don't think these types of sliders fit in here.

00:37:289 (3) - Ctrl - G

00:40:604 (2) - Vertically flip this.

00:47:710 (1) - This slider kind of pops up out of nowhere and feels unnatural to play. Just use a normal slider that you've been using for this pattern up to this point.

00:49:841 (3,1) - Nerf the spacing here.

01:13:447 (1,2) - I don't like having these overlap. Doesn't really fit in this buildup section.

Sorry for the bad english :D

The reason that i didn't mod all diffs is because i didn't have anything to say about the ones i didn't mod.
Topic Starter
Ohwow

TequilaWolf wrote:

mod
STRIP!!!!!-

00:13:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - maybe ctrl+j these and move downwards I like it the way it is right now.

00:16:131 (5,1) - should be larger to emphasise 1 K

00:18:420 (4) - consider removing, don't hear sound here I hear a sound there

00:21:815 (2) - ctrl+g might be better flow I don't think so

00:37:289 (3) - maybe better if it's 1/2 slider+circle, 00:37:604 clickable. also 01:09:499 (1) - I like it as a repeating slider, i'm also following the vocal, so it's not necessary to make 00:37:604 - clickable imo. If you're talking about the clap sound, then i would have to make all the clap sounds in that area as well to make it consistent, which I don't want to do.

00:40:604 (2) - ctrl+j K

00:47:236 (1,2) - make these similar distance with 00:46:762 (1,2) - Remapped, which should fix this problem

00:48:183 (1,2,3) - suggest copypasting and rotating 00:47:710 (1,2) - remapped

01:17:710 (1,2) - should be larger because 1/1 gap. maybe ctrl+g 01:18:183 (3) - and stack 2 on sliderhead? Fixed
#

JayJay-San wrote:

STRIP!!!
00:16:447 (1,2,3) - Spacing on 1/1 notes. Not sure what you mean there. I made them a bit farther but i don't want to make them too far, it's a calm section.

00:34:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The 1,2,3,4 have a pattern, and then the 5th note just goes back? Seems like it was thought out, but make sure it doesn't feel odd when playing. Changed it a bit.

01:17:710 (1,2,3) - Spacing? It is a little weird, but the jump from 1,2 should be spaced more, but make the three closer because it's closer on the timeline. Wanted to emphasize the 3, but since other people mentioned it, fixed it.

Jesus, this mapping is really good.

I hope this gets ranked because I'm a food wars fan myself lol, but good luck man :D


neonat wrote:

Strip

00:15:341 (2,3) - honestly too close to each other though, taking to account every other positioning around it. If it's start is somewhere around the same as 00:15:026 (1) - it could be better position to receive from the previous slider because it's similar to 00:15:026 (1,2) - but it's spacing right now is too different. It's like 00:18:183 (3) and 00:25:762 (3) - which are better spaced than 00:15:657 (3) Gotcha
00:33:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - audio is too soft here, there is very little feedback to go by for the stream, give some hitsounds or increase the volume K
00:46:289 (2,3) - with the impact on 00:46:447 (3) - it would be better if they were spaced out more than the spacings between 00:46:447 (3,4) and 00:46:131 (1,2) K
00:51:657 (7) - finish? K
01:03:815 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - well 01:04:130 (1,2,3,4) can be heard quite well but 01:03:815 (1,2,3,4) could still be a little louder than it is right now Volume never changed though, also 01:04:210 (2,3,4) - have the drum sounds, which makes it sound louder.
01:23:552 (1) - rather than a slider, it would help if this was just a circle, so that there is a gap until 01:23:868 (1) - to emphasize that stop in the music. Using a slider extends over that emptiness in the music which is very additional. What you did in Insane with 01:23:552 (6) - is what is ideally achieved. Could also add a drum whistle here. Yeah i agree what you said there, changed.


Extra

00:33:183 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - similar to ^
00:51:657 (3) - finish
01:23:552 (1) - similar to ^
Fixed all

Arbane wrote:

Hello! Bad M4M from your queue.

Insane
00:21:341 (1) - Maybe Ctrl - G this for better flow. K

00:25:447 (5) - Spacing here is a bit too large. Fixed

00:32:710 (1) - This has pretty bad flow. Maybe do something like this instead https://puu.sh/ukYCW/23d6a96aa8.jpg K

01:03:341 (3) - Maybe change this slider into something along the lines of this https://puu.sh/ukZe5/733966bf23.jpg and then change the pattern afterwards for obvious reasons. I like the slider the way it is right now

01:13:447 (3) - Ctrl - G this and it flows sooo much better. K

01:18:183 (3) - Having the song start back up again on the sliderend is pretty anticlimactic. Something like this would probably be better https://puu.sh/ukZvP/23c220c79b.jpg K

Extra
00:06:184 (6) - Spacing here should be larger to match the rest of this section. K

00:09:499 (3,4,5) - Make this a perfect triangle. :O it was a perfect triangle before but i think i accidentally moved it. fixed

00:27:973 (2) - Ctrl - G for flow maybe K

00:59:394 (1) - This needs bigger spacing I think the spacing is good enough

01:18:183 (3) - Sorry but this slider just doesn't look good. Try doing something like this instead https://puu.sh/ul0dt/aa2c9c4919.jpg Or maybe this https://puu.sh/ul0ms/4671034dbc.jpg I just changed it to a normal slider like every other difficulty

STRIP!!!!!
00:12:815 (1,2,3) - Spacing on this pattern might need to be a bit larger. Made it larger just a bit

00:27:657 (1,2,3) - Since you've been using a lot of curved sliders i don't think these types of sliders fit in here. Changed

00:37:289 (3) - Ctrl - G I like it the way it is currently.

00:40:604 (2) - Vertically flip this. K

00:47:710 (1) - This slider kind of pops up out of nowhere and feels unnatural to play. Just use a normal slider that you've been using for this pattern up to this point. Changed

00:49:841 (3,1) - Nerf the spacing here. K

01:13:447 (1,2) - I don't like having these overlap. Doesn't really fit in this buildup section. Unstacked

Sorry for the bad english :D

The reason that i didn't mod all diffs is because i didn't have anything to say about the ones i didn't mod.
Thanks all! That was a lot xD
Shira

Arf wrote:

Shira's diff is very clean and well done, only thing worth mentioning is that 00:52:131 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - these are a bit of a spike in difficulty and recommended to maybe make them a teensy bit smaller. i know but its to raise SR so its higher than hyper :c
thank!

fattypikachu wrote:

[Shira's Light Insane]

no video?

00:20:868 (3,4) - Move 4 closer to 3 to de-empshasize 4
00:32:710 (1) - ctrl+G to keep flow (unless this was intended) emphasis -3-
00:45:657 (4,5) - Increase spacing to emphasize cymbal? vocals are getting repeated so i wanted to show it with the mapping
thanks!

Arbane wrote:

Shira's Light Insane
00:12:499 (1) - Maybe move this to x:177 y:73 and do something different with the circles afterwards.

01:01:920 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe up the spacing here a bit to put more emphasis on the hitfinishes. explained ^

01:04:920 (2) - Nerf the spacing here. The jump is way too large the flow is the same so i think it should be relatively easy to hit
thanks!

no reply = fix

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Akitoshi
things i didn't change:
00:17:710 (3) - no, i don't put reverse here as 00:18:341 - has strong beat that worth circle.
01:18:657 (1,2) - and related pattern, i made it different with 00:03:815 (1,2,3) - as there's a cymbals at the last one.
00:34:131 (1,2,3) - and related stuff, prioritizing vocal that starts with red on every 2nd slider.
00:18:341 (4,1) - not blanket
00:49:447 (1) - ending spinner on current one as Easy needs a lot of recovery time for another objects after the spinner
01:02:868 (2) - 01:12:973 (2) - i don't 3/2 as 01:03:815 (3) - is worth as sth clickable
01:03:815 (3,1) - wut overlap?

others are fixed, thanks boiz

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Tags:Shokugeki no Soma: Ni no Sara food wars tv size opening 3 season 2 太田 雅友 Oota Masatomo 松井 洋平 Matsui Youhei Shira Shiratoi Corinn Kyle Y Ky Mentai TheOnlyLeon
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Saika0k1
hi!, M4M from your queue and sorry for being late

Extra

00:13:447 (1,2,3) - this could go better with a ministream or setting shape too them similar to 01:15:183 (1,2,3,4)
00:14:236 (2) - this should get an NC, the vocal starts here
00:49:604 (2,3) - should stick closer too each other
01:15:815 (1,2) - you skipped a sound, this looks better like this
01:16:762 (1,2) - ^

STRIP!!!

00:14:236 (2) - this could get an NC, same reason as in Extra diff
00:14:552 - the music in the background here seems pretty intense, but this part here isnt as intense
and maybe you can pay a bit more attention on the instruments in the background than the vocal
00:16:131 (8,1) - you could do a double right after this slider to make and stronger impact sound on the 00:16:131 (1)
00:37:289 (3) - you skipped a sound with the reverseslider, this looks better like this
00:44:236 (1) - this could move a bit to the left to match the rest of the previous notes distance
00:53:078 (1,2,3) - if you want to make a perfect triangle here you can do ctrl+shift+d to make a perfect triangle
and then you can scale it up even more with ctrl+shift+s
00:54:341 - when kiai starts the music gets more intense so need you map to be, you can improve this by using more of
triples that can make an impact on the last note of it like 00:56:710 (5,1) and 00:59:236 (8,1)
01:22:762 (2,3,4,5,6) - and here you can also make a perfect star with ctrl+shift+d and make a pentagon, scale it up
and line it up right in the timeline, if its not your intention to make an imperfect star that is
some of those i mentioned here also need to be considered in Extra diff

this mapset is truly good! i had so much fun playing the STRIP!!!!! but the diff name though, cant something
othe than strip? you perv xD ill shoot a star for you cuz its realy good!

good luck!
Speed of Snail
Geez, sorry it took so long to make any changes, haven't had much time to work with osu recently.

fattypikachu wrote:

Hello from your M4M queue!



[TheOnlyLeon's Advanced]

No video?
00:05:236 (1) - Move tail point to x492 y140

A lot of these angles were made to avoid making any sliders perfectly straight.

00:09:026 (1) - similar to above

? I may be misinterpreting what you meant, but even if I'm not, I don't understand what you're asking here

00:07:447 (3) - Positioning looks weird, move so it directly follows slider

Yea I guess, Changed

00:12:026 (2) - Bend slider the other way so it points to 3

Was debating this in my head for about 15 minutes after reading your mod, but I think I do prefer it your way, changed

01:24:815 - There's a cymbal sound here, put a circle

Sure, Changed

ShogunMoon wrote:

  • [TheOnlyLeon's Advanced]
  1. I find that the CS is too small tbh, I think that by playing there will be notes not clickable then I recommend you to put rather 3

    There's definitely no notes that're unclickable, and the map was built around a large circle size, so making them smaller would change most of the map
  2. 00:38:552 (3) - can you curved this slider because this is not very beautiful.. something like this http://i.imgur.com/JR7IAHz.jpg?1

    I get what you mean, didn't do exactly what you demonstrated but I changed it to something similar, changed
  3. I think this difficulty should be more work on the aethetics there are patterns kinda like overmapped like 00:19:131 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - or 00:34:289 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - ( because of the aesthetic :/ ) this is my opinion but I don't find this difficulty attractive and interesting.
You're giving me virtually nothing to go on there, and idk what your idea of overmapped is, but to me, this isn't it

Arbane wrote:

00:03:341 (3,4,5) - I think this is too intense for an advanced diff.

I've heard that a few times now, but I still don't want to make any changes as of now, I don't really consider this a diff spike, and it's just 2 seconds into the map, so even if the pattern is a tad difficult it shouldn't take more than a couple tried to get it down, it's really not a hard pattern.

00:13:920 (1,1,2,3) - Just having long sliders here is pretty boring.

Well, to put anything here I'd either need to invent my own rhythm, which I don't want to do, or follow the vocals, which I generally don't like, so I'm going to stick with it for now

00:24:026 (1,1,2,3) - ^

Same
Alright that's everything, thx to everyone who spent the time modding my map, as snarky as I can be I really do appreciate the mods :)

Code
osu file format v14

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Title:ROUGH DIAMONDS
TitleUnicode:「ROUGH DIAMONDS」
Artist:SCREEN mode
ArtistUnicode:SCREEN mode
Creator:Ohwow
Version:TheOnlyLeon's Advanced
Source:食戟のソーマ 弍ノ皿
Tags:Shokugeki no Soma: Ni no Sara food wars tv size opening 3 season 2 太田 雅友 Oota Masatomo 松井 洋平 Matsui Youhei Shira Shiratoi Corinn Kyle Y Ky Mentai TheOnlyLeon
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Topic Starter
Ohwow
No response = fixed

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

m4m

hard
00:18:341 - im prefer if you emphatize the drum more here,like 00:13:447 (3) -
00:32:710 (1,2,3) - i think you just need slider (3) to emphatize the piano and drum,and for (1,2) - you can emphatize the vocal (im just feel slider (1,2) is not follow the music well) I think it's fine.
00:40:604 (2) - ctrl j for better flow Made that on purpose.
01:03:815 (4,5) - it would be great if you put normal-drum clap here I don't see why though :/
01:10:447 (4) - make the slider 1/1 here and then a circle for better rhytyhm
01:24:815 (1) - 214,289 for better placement i think
ok gl!
I think you modded Shira's Insane instead of the actually insane diff. Thanks tho :D

Saika0k1 wrote:

hi!, M4M from your queue and sorry for being late

Extra

00:13:447 (1,2,3) - this could go better with a ministream or setting shape too them similar to 01:15:183 (1,2,3,4) I think it's fine as it is
00:14:236 (2) - this should get an NC, the vocal starts here I don't want to NC spam
00:49:604 (2,3) - should stick closer too each other
01:15:815 (1,2) - you skipped a sound, this looks better like this I think it's fine as it is
01:16:762 (1,2) - ^ ^

STRIP!!!

00:14:236 (2) - this could get an NC, same reason as in Extra diff ^
00:14:552 - the music in the background here seems pretty intense, but this part here isnt as intense
and maybe you can pay a bit more attention on the instruments in the background than the vocal It's just a guitar sound though, and it starts at 00:13:920 . If anything, I would have to do something to make it more intense there, like increase spacing or something, but it's a end of a stream, so can't really do anything about it.
00:16:131 (8,1) - you could do a double right after this slider to make and stronger impact sound on the 00:16:131 (1) There's no sound on the blue tick for me to make it a double. I instead increased the spacing to emphasize it more.
00:37:289 (3) - you skipped a sound with the reverseslider, this looks better like this
00:44:236 (1) - this could move a bit to the left to match the rest of the previous notes distance
00:53:078 (1,2,3) - if you want to make a perfect triangle here you can do ctrl+shift+d to make a perfect triangle
and then you can scale it up even more with ctrl+shift+s
00:54:341 - when kiai starts the music gets more intense so need you map to be, you can improve this by using more of
triples that can make an impact on the last note of it like 00:56:710 (5,1) and 00:59:236 (8,1) I don't put triples when there's no sound to support it. Instead, I use large spacing to emphasize the intensity of the song. (Which I believe I did owo)
01:22:762 (2,3,4,5,6) - and here you can also make a perfect star with ctrl+shift+d and make a pentagon, scale it up
and line it up right in the timeline, if its not your intention to make an imperfect star that is bruh It's already a perfect star, I did use ctrl+shift+d
some of those i mentioned here also need to be considered in Extra diff

this mapset is truly good! i had so much fun playing the STRIP!!!!! but the diff name though, cant something
othe than strip? you perv xD ill shoot a star for you cuz its realy good!

good luck!Thanks buddy :D :D :D
Updated Leon's Advanced
Kyle Y

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

m4m

normal
00:35:236 (3) - try to make this slider to 1/1 ~ cause 1/1 fit with the music than 3/2 slider imo fixed
00:41:394 (4) - circle here for emphatize the vocal more,same as you did at 00:35:868 (5,6) remain, I would like to have little changes, but in fact, they are similar rhythm
01:03:341 (2,3) - i think you should make the circle on the big white tick and the slider on the red tick cause it more make sense if you put the slider on the red tick yup... general yes. But here, circle is for the vocal sound and slider is for the sound sth like wind chime? It is reasonable to have this rhythm here.
01:06:341 (4) - circle here,the vocal looks strong here remain, both are okay.
01:13:447 (2,3) - same as 00:41:394 (4) - I think they are in different rhythm.
01:24:815 (3) - finish here? I think i have already put here for the spinner. If you can talking about the 01:24:815 - timing, I remember spinner start could not place a finish sound
ok gl!
Kyle Y

Kyle Y wrote:

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

m4m

normal
00:35:236 (3) - try to make this slider to 1/1 ~ cause 1/1 fit with the music than 3/2 slider imo fixed
00:41:394 (4) - circle here for emphatize the vocal more,same as you did at 00:35:868 (5,6) remain, I would like to have little changes, but in fact, they are similar rhythm
01:03:341 (2,3) - i think you should make the circle on the big white tick and the slider on the red tick cause it more make sense if you put the slider on the red tick yup... general yes. But here, circle is for the vocal sound and slider is for the sound sth like wind chime? It is reasonable to have this rhythm here.
01:06:341 (4) - circle here,the vocal looks strong here remain, both are okay.
01:13:447 (2,3) - same as 00:41:394 (4) - I think they are in different rhythm.
01:24:815 (3) - finish here? I think i have already put here for the spinner. If you can talking about the 01:24:815 - timing, I remember spinner start could not place a finish sound
ok gl!
seems I forget to post update file, and here it is
update
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Source:食戟のソーマ 弍ノ皿
Tags:Shokugeki no Soma: Ni no Sara food wars tv size opening 3 season 2 太田 雅友 Oota Masatomo 松井 洋平 Matsui Youhei Shira Shiratoi Corinn Kyle Y Ky Mentai TheOnlyLeon
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