SCREEN mode - ROUGH DIAMONDS · forum

Ohwow

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2016-07-06T06:59:23+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, January 2, 2018 at 5:24:32 PM

Artist: SCREEN mode
Title: ROUGH DIAMONDS
Source: 食戟のソーマ弍ノ皿
Tags: Shokugeki no Soma: Ni no Sara food wars tv size opening 3 season 2 太田雅友 Oota Masatomo 松井洋平 Matsui Youhei Akitoshi Corinn Kyle Y Shiratoi Neoskylove
BPM: 190
Filesize: 20298kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

Aki's Easy (1.52 stars, 107 notes)
Hard (3.5 stars, 268 notes)
Ky's Normal (1.89 stars, 143 notes)
NeoSL's Insane (4.81 stars, 346 notes)
Shira's Light Insane (4.39 stars, 237 notes)
Shogun's Advanced (2.7 stars, 216 notes)
STRIP!!!!! (5.9 stars, 389 notes)

Download: SCREEN mode - ROUGH DIAMONDS
Download: SCREEN mode - ROUGH DIAMONDS (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thank you for the 100+ likes!

Beatmap Thread

~Mapset~
Easy - by Akitoshi
Normal - by Kyle Y
Advanced - by ShogunMoon
Hard - by Ohwow
Light Insane - by Shiratoi
Insane - by Neoskylove
Extra (5.3-5.5*) - by ?
STRIP!!! - by Ohwow

Best BN #1:

Best BN #2:

Old Difficulties
TheOnlyLeon's Advanced
Mentai's Hyper - by Mentai
Insane - by me
Extra - by me
Extreme! - by me

I'm a year late, sorry guys.

Last edited by Ohwow 2020-12-27T06:27:12+00:00, edited 168 times in total.

Rizevim

344 posts

Joined December 2014

Rizevim 2016-07-30T11:17:12+00:00

Nice song! :3
btw do u need the vid?:3
gonna mod this later when it's ready to be mod :3
Good luck!~

Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2016-07-31T04:38:30+00:00

Rizevim wrote:
Nice song! :3
btw do u need the vid?:3
gonna mod this later when it's ready to be mod :3
Good luck!~

Yeah! Background vid would be great! Thanks! I'll try to finish the maps as soon as i can!

Quinoa

3 posts

Joined December 2015

Quinoa 2016-08-02T07:22:00+00:00

This is a great map. I the scrub eagerly await the completion of the hard difficulty.

Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2016-08-02T07:29:33+00:00

Quinoa wrote:
This is a great map. I the scrub eagerly await the completion of the hard difficulty.

Thanks Quinoa! Im on vacation right now so i wont be able to finish the hard dif in like another week or so. Thanks for playing mah map C:

TheLonePiggy

119 posts

Joined June 2015

TheLonePiggy 2016-08-07T07:43:31+00:00

love the map (insane diff)

Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2016-08-08T00:52:27+00:00

TheLonePiggy wrote:
love the map (insane diff)

Thanks bud! <3

Pinguino

47 posts

Joined February 2011

Pinguino 2016-08-09T03:51:29+00:00

Feel free to ignore any criticism i said, the diffs I tried play very well, good work!. I might do the Insane one later hand to cold to click that many times ):

Shira's Light Insane

00:25:210 I don't see a reason for this HC
00:27:026 ^
00:29:552 ^
00:30:736 ^
00:33:341 I think it should be move 1/4 that is when the sound starts
00:36:104 Remove HC
00:37:289 , 00:37:762 I would flip the sliders use in this
00:39:183 Make the slider 1/2 add hit circle in the new space on top of the 00:39:657
00:41:552 Remove HC
00:43:841 The sound starts here so I would have map it too
00:49:841 Not that i have any ideas how to map the sound to fit your sliders but i feel is worth pointing the sound too
00:51:104 ^
01:03:736 Sound again its earlier than what is map
01:07:447 I would change it to a 1/2 slider with kick
01:09:104 Another sound that maybe should be map
01:11:231 Not needed
01:15:508 the two 1/4 that follow map them
01:22:999 Add Hit circle
01:23:789 The sound starts earlier I guess not mapped as to not map in 1/4?

Hard

00:17:868 1/4 Kickslider
00:24:657 I guess it would be to awkward to play but the "rii" sound starts in my head after the 1/2 but before the 1/4 and to put a hit circle at the next white would be tough to play
00:25:447 1/4 Kickslider
00:27:973 ^
00:34:447 I think the slider shouldn't be straight the song is really lively and I feel a straight slider makes it flow less at this moment, not sure how to explain it but the following part of the song should be more "fun" to play is subjective I realize, just more back and forward I guess not sure, sorry!
00:36:973 Remove kick add HC instead and optional after change the 3 and 4 for a slider
00:39:499 ^
00:41:552 Remove HC
00:46:604 I think a 1/4 slider would fit not really pushing much in you though is fine
00:48:657 Change to kick slider
00:49:841 Add HC if possible
00:51:104 I think should be mapped
00:58:999 ^
01:03:341 Kickslider 1/2
01:09:104 I think should be mapped
01:13:447 Kickslider 1/2
01:15:499 As with other diff, i think both 1/4 that follow should be map a kick slider for the full 5 would be good
01:18:973 Tail of the slider should be a bit higher
01:24:341 Remove kick add HC

That's all i have for now, nice work overall hope it gets ranked, Good luck!

Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2016-08-09T07:54:46+00:00

Pinguino wrote:
Hard
00:17:868 1/4 Kickslider I don't think kick slider is good here
00:24:657 I guess it would be to awkward to play but the "rii" sound starts in my head after the 1/2 but before the 1/4 and to put a hit circle at the next white would be tough to play sometimes the vocals don't line up exactly with the beat, but the circles should stay with the beat.
00:25:447 1/4 Kickslider I don't think kick slider is good here either
00:27:973 ^ ^
00:34:447 I think the slider shouldn't be straight the song is really lively and I feel a straight slider makes it flow less at this moment, not sure how to explain it but the following part of the song should be more "fun" to play is subjective I realize, just more back and forward I guess not sure, sorry! Changed! I don't like overusing straight sliders, but at the same time I felt like i was overusing curvy sliders, so i just slapped some lazy straight sliders here and there.
00:36:973 Remove kick add HC instead and optional after change the 3 and 4 for a slider Changed because flow issues
00:39:499 ^ I don't think so
00:41:552 Remove HC Changed!
00:46:604 I think a 1/4 slider would fit not really pushing much in you though is fine Let's keep it simple for a 3*
00:48:657 Change to kick slider Changed it to something different
00:49:841 Add HC if possible I don't know bout that one
00:51:104 I think should be mapped I think its fine for this difficulty, but i'll consider this for other difficulties C:
00:58:999 ^ ^
01:03:341 Kickslider 1/2 Yeah it should match the previous 2
1:09:104 I think should be mapped Don't know
1:13:447 Kickslider 1/2 Changed
1:15:499 As with other diff, i think both 1/4 that follow should be map a kick slider for the full 5 would be good Dunno bout dat one
1:18:973 Tail of the slider should be a bit higher Fixed
1:24:341 Remove kick add HC Ehh i changed the pattern to something else

That's all i have for now, nice work overall hope it gets ranked, Good luck! Thank you for the mod, really appreciated it

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2016-08-09T15:59:28+00:00

Pinguino wrote:
Feel free to ignore any criticism i said, the diffs I tried play very well, good work!. I might do the Insane one later hand to cold to click that many times ):

Shira's Light Insane
00:25:210 I don't see a reason for this HC instruments if you listen at 50%
00:27:026 ^ ^
00:29:552 ^ ^
00:30:736 ^ nothing here D:
00:33:341 I think it should be move 1/4 that is when the sound starts the sound starts here 00:33:341 - @playback rate 75%
00:36:104 Remove HC ✓
00:37:289 , 00:37:762 I would flip the sliders use in this what do you mean?
00:39:183 Make the slider 1/2 add hit circle in the new space on top of the 00:39:657 ✓
00:41:552 Remove HC same as everything else
00:43:841 The sound starts here so I would have map it too its fine like this since its not too hard to read and even if i add it not it wouldnt really flow good with the 1/4 slider
00:49:841 Not that i have any ideas how to map the sound to fit your sliders but i feel is worth pointing the sound too these sliders are building momentum for the actual jumps
00:51:104 ^ ^ the jumps
01:03:736 Sound again its earlier than what is map its not?
01:07:447 I would change it to a 1/2 slider with kick vocals
01:09:104 Another sound that maybe should be map ^
01:11:231 Not needed id prefer to have notes like this in the kiai
01:15:508 the two 1/4 that follow map them ?
01:22:999 Add Hit circle its the same sound as the beginning
01:23:789 The sound starts earlier I guess not mapped as to not map in 1/4? ✓ mapped on 1/8 so hopefully ok

That's all i have for now, nice work overall hope it gets ranked, Good luck!

thank you for the mod ~

diff

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Source:食戟のソーマ 弍ノ皿
Tags:Shokugeki no Soma: Ni no Sara food wars tv size opening 3 season 2 Shira Shiratoi Aki Akitoshi Ky
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Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2016-08-09T17:47:13+00:00

Updated Shira's Light Insane

Lilyanna

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Joined March 2016

Lilyanna 2016-08-10T00:52:58+00:00

Hi nm from my queue

i hope i help

Easy

00:00:973 - maybe add a note here as the start
k

Hard

00:03:183 (7,3) - looks little overlapping
00:04:131 (2,4) - this stack doesnt look appealing if u consider changing this u may want to change the rest of the pattern
00:08:552 - changing sv is not needed here in my opinion
00:08:868 (1) - can make bigger spacing for emphasize
00:10:447 (2) - ctrl-h and rotate by 72 degree and replace and think that flow work better
00:11:710 (2,3,4,6) - avoid overlap
00:12:815 (1) - remove nc
00:26:236 (8,1) - this spacing should be bigger than this 00:26:552 (1,2,3) - to more emphasize the strong beat here 00:26:552 (1) -
00:29:710 (3,1) - overlapping i wont mention them anymore
00:31:447 (5,7) - stack
00:47:710 (3,4) - they are not stacked good
00:48:183 (5,6) - ^
00:50:552 (1) - remove nc?
01:13:920 (8) - nc
01:15:815 (5) - nc

Shira's light insane

00:08:710 (1) - remove nc and would be nice if u stack 00:08:710 (1,2) - imo
00:26:236 (5,1) - maybe bigger spacing for emphasize
00:27:973 (2) - ctrl-g for better flow
00:47:710 (3,4,1,2,3) - these seem overmapped why not stay consistence and do same like u did here 00:45:183 (1,2) -
00:49:131 (5,1) - the position of 5 and the spacing could use some work 00:49:131 - btw i dont hear no beat there
00:55:604 (1) - remove nc
00:56:236 (3) - nc
00:56:868 (1) - remove nc
01:00:341 (1) - remove nc
01:01:289 (2) - nc here i hope u get the idea same for the rest
01:20:552 (1,2) - blanket can be better
01:22:289 (2) - move to x332 y156 so it wont overlap
01:23:828 (3) - nc should be here not here 01:23:394 (1) -

sorry if i didnt help
Good luck

Pinguino

47 posts

Joined February 2011

Pinguino 2016-08-10T03:10:48+00:00

Shiratoi wrote:
Pinguino wrote:
Feel free to ignore any criticism i said, the diffs I tried play very well, good work!. I might do the Insane one later hand to cold to click that many times ):

Shira's Light Insane
00:25:210 I don't see a reason for this HC instruments if you listen at 50% I literally tried to listen over and over there is nothing there in my head D:
00:27:026 ^ ^
00:29:552 ^ ^
00:30:736 ^ nothing here D: Yeah not sure what I put one here
00:33:341 I think it should be move 1/4 that is when the sound starts the sound starts here 00:33:341 - @playback rate 75% The sound starts at least 1/8 tick earlier than that for sure not to say is better not to map it in 1/8 but the sound does start earlier
00:36:104 Remove HC ✓
00:37:289 , 00:37:762 I would flip the sliders use in this what do you mean? I mean put a reverse slider at 00:37:289 and a 1/1 tick slider at 00:37:762
00:39:183 Make the slider 1/2 add hit circle in the new space on top of the 00:39:657 ✓
00:41:552 Remove HC same as everything else Yup i was incorrect
00:43:841 The sound starts here so I would have map it too its fine like this since its not too hard to read and even if i add it not it wouldnt really flow good with the 1/4 slider
00:49:841 Not that i have any ideas how to map the sound to fit your sliders but i feel is worth pointing the sound too these sliders are building momentum for the actual jumps I can see that, I would then say that the first triangle jumps shouldn't be as wide apart as the second as the song didn't gain any more momentum and makes the second ones under mapped as they should be more intense
00:51:104 ^ ^ the jumps
01:03:736 Sound again its earlier than what is map its not? Yes it is the piano or whatever that instrument is clearly starts making sound from the red tick previous if not at least the blue tick
01:07:447 I would change it to a 1/2 slider with kick vocals
01:09:104 Another sound that maybe should be map ^
01:11:231 Not needed id prefer to have notes like this in the kiai
01:15:508 the two 1/4 that follow map them ? Doesn't matter I realize it was only vocals now
01:22:999 Add Hit circle its the same sound as the beginning So add it in the beginning too?
01:23:789 The sound starts earlier I guess not mapped as to not map in 1/4? ✓ mapped on 1/8 so hopefully ok

That's all i have for now, nice work overall hope it gets ranked, Good luck!
thank you for the mod ~

Explained myself a bit better in some things and stuff hope its okay to reply again

Also why is it not ar9 its 4.4 stars with 190bpm I don't see how that qualifies for a 8.7

Ohwow

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Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2016-08-10T04:21:06+00:00

Pinguino wrote:
Explained myself a bit better in some things and stuff hope its okay to reply again

Also why is it not ar9 its 4.4 stars with 190bpm I don't see how that qualifies for a 8.7

Thanks for the extra mod <3

Ohwow

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Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2016-08-10T04:49:30+00:00

Lilyanna wrote:
Hi nm from my queue

i hope i help

Hard

00:03:183 (7,3) - looks little overlapping Fixed
00:04:131 (2,4) - this stack doesnt look appealing if u consider changing this u may want to change the rest of the pattern I will consider it!
00:08:552 - changing sv is not needed here in my opinion Fixed
00:08:868 (1) - can make bigger spacing for emphasize ^
00:10:447 (2) - ctrl-h and rotate by 72 degree and replace and think that flow work better Fixed!
00:11:710 (2,3,4,6) - avoid overlap Yessir
00:12:815 (1) - remove nc Mmm I don't think so
00:26:236 (8,1) - this spacing should be bigger than this 00:26:552 (1,2,3) - to more emphasize the strong beat here 00:26:552 (1) - K made it a bit farther C:
00:29:710 (3,1) - overlapping i wont mention them anymore K gonna fix all overlappings
00:31:447 (5,7) - stack Fixed
00:47:710 (3,4) - they are not stacked good Fixed
00:48:183 (5,6) - ^ ^
00:50:552 (1) - remove nc? Maybe, I'll think about it
01:13:920 (8) - nc Fixed
01:15:815 (5) - nc Hmm for me, it was already NC. o well

sorry if i didnt help Helped a lot, thank you!
Good luck

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2016-08-10T15:38:24+00:00

Pinguino wrote:
Pinguino wrote:
Feel free to ignore any criticism i said, the diffs I tried play very well, good work!. I might do the Insane one later hand to cold to click that many times ):

Shira's Light Insane
00:25:210 I don't see a reason for this HC instruments if you listen at 50% I literally tried to listen over and over there is nothing there in my head D: i understand what youre saying but i think these little notes flow much better with them here compared to if they werent. rhythm wise it can be a little challenge for the players for the upcoming insane
00:27:026 ^ ^
00:29:552 ^ ^
00:30:736 ^ nothing here D: Yeah not sure what I put one here
00:33:341 I think it should be move 1/4 that is when the sound starts the sound starts here 00:33:341 - @playback rate 75% The sound starts at least 1/8 tick earlier than that for sure not to say is better not to map it in 1/8 but the sound does start earlier tbh as i played through it i never saw this part as hard to hit and the first note should be plenty fine to signal the "stream" noise
00:36:104 Remove HC ✓
00:37:289 , 00:37:762 I would flip the sliders use in this what do you mean? I mean put a reverse slider at 00:37:289 and a 1/1 tick slider at 00:37:762
00:39:183 Make the slider 1/2 add hit circle in the new space on top of the 00:39:657 ✓
00:41:552 Remove HC same as everything else Yup i was incorrect
00:43:841 The sound starts here so I would have map it too its fine like this since its not too hard to read and even if i add it not it wouldnt really flow good with the 1/4 slider
00:49:841 Not that i have any ideas how to map the sound to fit your sliders but i feel is worth pointing the sound too these sliders are building momentum for the actual jumps I can see that, I would then say that the first triangle jumps shouldn't be as wide apart as the second as the song didn't gain any more momentum and makes the second ones under mapped as they should be more intense this is still a light insane, tbh i still find them hard to hit for me based on their placements
00:51:104 ^ ^ the jumps
01:03:736 Sound again its earlier than what is map its not? Yes it is the piano or whatever that instrument is clearly starts making sound from the red tick previous if not at least the blue tick yea it starts 01:03:657 - where the sliderend of it is fine to hit the noise.
01:07:447 I would change it to a 1/2 slider with kick vocals
01:09:104 Another sound that maybe should be map ^
01:11:231 Not needed id prefer to have notes like this in the kiai
01:15:508 the two 1/4 that follow map them ? Doesn't matter I realize it was only vocals now
01:22:999 Add Hit circle its the same sound as the beginning So add it in the beginning too?
01:23:789 The sound starts earlier I guess not mapped as to not map in 1/4? ✓ mapped on 1/8 so hopefully ok

That's all i have for now, nice work overall hope it gets ranked, Good luck!

thank you for the mod ~
Explained myself a bit better in some things and stuff hope its okay to reply again

Also why is it not ar9 its 4.4 stars with 190bpm I don't see how that qualifies for a 8.7 light insane

thank you for recheck~

Lilyanna wrote:
Hi nm from my queue

i hope i help

Shira's light insane

00:08:710 (1) - remove nc and would be nice if u stack 00:08:710 (1,2) - imo fixed the nc part but i dont really understand what you mean by stacking? bc it would just be confusing to read since 3 stacks on one slider??
00:26:236 (5,1) - maybe bigger spacing for emphasize the slider shape emphasizes it .~. also since theres a break i want it to stay in the same spot
00:27:973 (2) - ctrl-g for better flow ✓
00:47:710 (3,4,1,2,3) - these seem overmapped why not stay consistence and do same like u did here 00:45:183 (1,2) - there isnt only vocals here D: theres plenty of instruments in the back
00:49:131 (5,1) - the position of 5 and the spacing could use some work 00:49:131 - btw i dont hear no beat there flow is fine and explained the beat thing in the previous mod
00:55:604 (1) - remove nc ✓
00:56:236 (3) - nc ✓
00:56:868 (1) - remove nc ✓
01:00:341 (1) - remove nc ✓
01:01:289 (2) - nc here i hope u get the idea same for the rest ✓
01:20:552 (1,2) - blanket can be better ✓
01:22:289 (2) - move to x332 y156 so it wont overlap intended since i like these little overlaps c:
01:23:828 (3) - nc should be here not here 01:23:394 (1) - ✓

sorry if i didnt help
Good luck

thank you for the mod! you did help~

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celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

celerih 2016-08-10T19:04:20+00:00

Just felt like modding this.

Extra

00:01:447 (2) - 00:01:920 (2) - 00:02:394 (2) - These three notes shouldn't be there, there are no sounds to support them.
00:03:736 (8,1) - Have the distance between these two notes be the same as the rest of the stream before it
00:04:920 (6,1,2) - This is an example of a pattern that doesn't flow well and feels awkward to play because of the sudden direction changes that don't really work. Something like this. Blanket this slider 00:04:920 (6) - with this circle 00:04:447 (3) - and move back this circle 00:05:236 (1) -
00:12:184 (5,6) - I'd move these two lower
00:13:920 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section is a good example for something I often see. This is all in the same ''slow'' section of the song, so distance snap should be constant. But, the snap is inconsistent. 00:13:920 (1,2) - These are further apart in the timeline than these two circles 00:14:868 (4,5) - but the later two have a higher DS. THis is confusing to play and . To fix this kind of thing you have two options, but first, to mark a different DS, NC on this note 00:14:868 (4) - Now, you can either make the DS between these 00:14:236 (2) - higher than for the notes after, or go the other way and make them closer than before, having. With the current DS, this section is just kinda weird. I'd also go back through the maps, to see of this happens to other places.
00:17:868 (5) - Just do this, looks better and is simpler.
00:21:815 (2,3,4) - They are not aligned properly
00:23:710 (6) - Use a red control point for this slider instead of two whites.
00:28:604 (7) - Ctrl-G this slider because right now it ends on the wrong side see here
00:42:341 (7,8,9) - Pattern here is kinda weird, change it so this 00:42:499 (8) - is first of the three, 00:42:657 (9) - is second and 00:42:341 (7) - is last.
00:44:236 (1,2) - Sliders shaped like this don't add anything or fit the song, change them to make them look normal, or at least look better
01:02:236 (2,3,4) - This plays weirdly, I'd change it to something like this
01:18:183 (3) - Change this slider to make it look less ugly

These are all the major things I found with this diff. I don't have the time to continue other diffs, but I'll point out some general things that aplly to most of the diffs you made.

General stuff for the Extra diffs

The biggest problems with the Extra difficulties is I found the flow of the map is often not very good. I pointed at a few examples, but you should probably go back through the maps and check back on patterns to see if they play well. Also, I saw a lot of slider that didn't fit the song or looked ugly, you should probably change those.

Pinguino

47 posts

Joined February 2011

Pinguino 2016-08-10T20:46:53+00:00

Shiratoi wrote:
Pinguino wrote:
Also why is it not ar9 its 4.4 stars with 190bpm I don't see how that qualifies for a 8.7 light insane
thank you for recheck~

I guess at this matter will just disagree but a Light insane is 3.76 to max 4.2-4.3 (opinion) that if your map wants to be defined as such it should lower its overall difficulty, plus adding the fact that is not low bpm I would say it needs an AR check for what the meta is atm for ranking, if this was the past it would have being easily ar 8 or 8.5 but right now it should be 9 this is easily a difficulty that is my playing range (sadly enough) and I wouldn't be able to play it properly at the current AR.

So even if you won't change it because of me I would recommend getting someone more knowledgeable opinion on this matter if they agree with you I guess i'll just deal with it and play it edited to ar9 even when ranked.

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2016-08-11T01:14:55+00:00

Pinguino wrote:
Shiratoi wrote:
Also why is it not ar9 its 4.4 stars with 190bpm I don't see how that qualifies for a 8.7 light insane
thank you for recheck~

I guess at this matter will just disagree but a Light insane is 3.76 to max 4.2-4.3 (opinion) that if your map wants to be defined as such it should lower its overall difficulty, plus adding the fact that is not low bpm I would say it needs an AR check for what the meta is atm for ranking, if this was the past it would have being easily ar 8 or 8.5 but right now it should be 9 this is easily a difficulty that is my playing range (sadly enough) and I wouldn't be able to play it properly at the current AR.

So even if you won't change it because of me I would recommend getting someone more knowledgeable opinion on this matter if they agree with you I guess i'll just deal with it and play it edited to ar9 even when ranked.[/quote]

i didn't think there was much difference between ar9 and 8.7 but oh well. I realize 4.4 is obviously not light insane but when I checked out the current insane there was just a lot of jumps and compared to light insane there's only like 2 major jumps that's all. Star rating doesn't really mean anything imo. But since you're so convinced that it should be ar9 ok. I don't really mind since I can't differentiate them .~.

@Ohwow just change the ar on my diff since I don't think there's really a need to send you the whole code :^)

small boob

36 posts

Joined February 2015

small boob 2016-08-11T01:56:03+00:00

Shira's Light Insane

the visuals for 00:59:394 (1,2,1) - arent that great i think you should make the long slider 01:00:341 (1) - closer to the other two sliders 00:59:394 (1,2) - and lower the slider heads a bit

kinda like this

what it looks like rn

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2016-08-11T02:05:55+00:00

assimb wrote:
Shira's Light Insane

the visuals for 00:59:394 (1,2,1) - arent that great i think you should make the long slider 01:00:341 (1) - closer to the other two sliders 00:59:394 (1,2) - and lower the slider heads a bit ✓ ok fine
kinda like this
what it looks like rn

wow literally greatest mod in my life thanks ass

changed ar while at it

osu file format v14

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Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2016-08-11T06:12:55+00:00

from queue~

General
-mapping style looks underdeveloped, sometimes objects appear to be randomly placed. try to use object spacing (spacing between ANY object, not just DS) to make things look more neat. geometrical patterns look alright though, just gotta shift things around to make it work.
-the normal-hitnormal hitsound makes no sense for this map, replace it with something else.
-i cant hear the finish at all. the sound youre using for the finish sounds more like a hitnormal sound, so try to find something that actually sounds finish-y?

Extra

00:02:236 (1) - how about stacking this on one of the stream notes from here 00:00:973 (1,2,3,4,1)?
00:19:289 (2,3,4,5,6) - make star
00:15:657 (7,8) - 00:16:131 (9,1) - DS of 9,1 should be bigger than 7,8, if not equal (for emphasis on guitar/drum).
00:25:131 (5,6,7) - spacing too close, might trick people into thinking its 1/2 beat spacing instead of 1 beat spacing. same applies here 00:24:026 (1,2) -
00:38:394 (3,6) - stack?
00:44:236 (1,2,3) - increase DS for more emphasis
00:47:078 (2,3) - 00:47:552 (4,5) - 00:48:026 (1,2) - increase DS for all these so that the DS is similar to 00:46:604 (8,1) (or even higher)
00:50:552 (1,3) - stack?
00:50:868 (2,5) - ^
01:06:815 (8,1) - make jump?
01:09:341 (8,1) - ^
01:10:289 (3,1) - ^
01:18:026 (2,3) - ^
01:20:394 (3,5) - stack?
01:20:236 (2,6) - ^

Insane

00:25:131 (5,6,7) - DS just seems illogical here, beat spacing is the same, DS probably should be too
00:31:131 (5,1,4) - stack?
00:37:762 (1,1,1) - do you really need all these NCs?
00:39:026 (4,4) - stack?
00:54:026 (2,1) - jump
00:57:657 (4,1) - ^
00:59:868 (1) - get rid of NC?
01:07:763 (2,1) - jump
01:10:289 (3,1) - ^
01:18:183 (3) - shorten this slider a bit so you can get a click on 01:18:657

STRIP!!!!!

I WILL NOT!!!!!

Good luck~

Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2016-08-11T10:05:08+00:00

celerih wrote:
Just felt like modding this.

Extra
00:01:447 (2) - 00:01:920 (2) - 00:02:394 (2) - These three notes shouldn't be there, there are no sounds to support them. Changed
00:03:736 (8,1) - Have the distance between these two notes be the same as the rest of the stream before it Changed
00:04:920 (6,1,2) - This is an example of a pattern that doesn't flow well and feels awkward to play because of the sudden direction changes that don't really work. Something like this. Blanket this slider 00:04:920 (6) - with this circle 00:04:447 (3) - and move back this circle 00:05:236 (1) - Changed it to something else
00:12:184 (5,6) - I'd move these two lower I think it's fine, i changed slider (7) to make it line up with those 2 hitcircles.
00:13:920 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section is a good example for something I often see. This is all in the same ''slow'' section of the song, so distance snap should be constant. But, the snap is inconsistent. 00:13:920 (1,2) - These are further apart in the timeline than these two circles 00:14:868 (4,5) - but the later two have a higher DS. THis is confusing to play and . To fix this kind of thing you have two options, but first, to mark a different DS, NC on this note 00:14:868 (4) - Now, you can either make the DS between these 00:14:236 (2) - higher than for the notes after, or go the other way and make them closer than before, having. With the current DS, this section is just kinda weird. I'd also go back through the maps, to see of this happens to other places. Kay using Distance snapping this time
00:17:868 (5) - Just do this, looks better and is simpler. K
00:21:815 (2,3,4) - They are not aligned properly Fixed i hope
00:23:710 (6) - Use a red control point for this slider instead of two whites. I'm not sure what you mean by this, can you explain? sry
00:28:604 (7) - Ctrl-G this slide r because right now it ends on the wrong side see here Fixed
00:42:341 (7,8,9) - Pattern here is kinda weird, change it so this 00:42:499 (8) - is first of the three, 00:42:657 (9) - is second and 00:42:341 (7) - is last. It's suppose to be a little "M" pattern LOL! I'm going to keep it for now, but if more people mention about this, i'll consider changing it.
00:44:236 (1,2) - Sliders shaped like this don't add anything or fit the song, change them to make them look normal, or at least look better Hmm I'll see what I can do
01:02:236 (2,3,4) - This plays weirdly, I'd change it to something like this Changed to something similar!
01:18:183 (3) - Change this slider to make it l ook less ugly I tried LOL

These are all the major things I found with this diff. I don't have the time to continue other diffs, but I'll point out some general things that aplly to most of the diffs you made.Yessir

General stuff for the Extra diffs
The biggest problems with the Extra difficulties is I found the flow of the map is often not very good. I pointed at a few examples, but you should probably go back through the maps and check back on patterns to see if they play well. Also, I saw a lot of slider that didn't fit the song or looked ugly, you should probably change those. The flow is my biggest problem cuz I wanted to map like skystar LOL. I try not to make my maps boring with ordinary patterns, but I do agree that flow is something that shouldn't be ignored. Thank you for the useful mod!

Going to work on Yahuri's mod tomorrow, its 3:00 am in the morning for me XD. Updated Shira's Light Insane and uploaded a new GD, Mentai's Hyper

-C O N T R A L-

143 posts

Joined October 2015

-C O N T R A L- 2016-08-11T11:50:08+00:00

From my queue

Shira's Light Insane

00:07:762 (2,3,4,5) - I think they look better when u place them like this :

00:09:026 (9) - Not sure but maybe NC?
01:00:341 (3) - Maybe make there a fancy slider? Would be cool!
01:00:341 (3) - Maybe place a break there? I would be really pissed of when i die there :p
01:18:657 (1) - NC

Mentai's Hyper

00:04:131 (3) - 1/2 Slider is better like here : 00:05:710 (3,4) -
00:18:815 (5) - Same like ^ but with a 4/4 slider, sounds much better
00:20:078 (5) - ^
00:20:078 (5) - Stack them
00:38:868 (4,5,6,7,1) - Fix stack
00:38:868 (4,5,6,7,1) - Stack them
00:45:026 (4) - Place it like 00:44:552 (2) - under the slider
00:45:657 (3,4) - Fix stack
00:52:762 (1) - Prefer NC

Insane

Maybe 00:02:710 (8) - or 00:03:183 (11) - NC
00:14:236 (7) - NC
01:18:183 (3) - Sexy Slider :3

Hope the mod helped you Guys. Wanna see this map on ranked status :3 Tadokoro Megumi is best

Mentai

472 posts

Joined June 2016

Mentai 2016-08-11T12:11:09+00:00

Mentai's Hyper

00:04:131 (3) - 1/2 Slider is better like here : 00:05:710 (3,4) - I like the rhythm it creates here specifically
00:18:815 (5) - Same like ^ but with a 4/4 slider, sounds much better listening to it like that makes me agree!
00:20:078 (5) - ^ ^
00:20:078 (5) - Stack them not 100 % sure what you mean. Having a stacked long slider into a 1/2 and then a circles sounds weird
00:38:868 (4,5,6,7,1) - Fix stack idk how this even happened...
00:38:868 (4,5,6,7,1) - Stack them not too much, but just right ♥
00:45:026 (4) - Place it like 00:44:552 (2) - under the slider done
00:45:657 (3,4) - Fix stack whoops
00:52:762 (1) - Prefer NC hm, i can live with that

Thanks for the mod ♥

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2016-08-11T16:23:02+00:00

-C O N T R A L- wrote:
From my queue

Shira's Light Insane
00:07:762 (2,3,4,5) - I think they look better when u place them like this : ✓i think so too

00:09:026 (9) - Not sure but maybe NC? ✓
01:00:341 (3) - Maybe make there a fancy slider? Would be cool! its actually a diamond xd https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5821389
01:00:341 (3) - Maybe place a break there? I would be really pissed of when i die there :p forgot to copy?
01:18:657 (1) - NC ✓

Hope the mod helped you Guys. Wanna see this map on ranked status :3 Tadokoro Megumi is best

thanks for the mod !
~~obviously erina best~~

here

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Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2016-08-11T17:05:33+00:00

also free mod

aki diff 2 good

Hard

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00:01:289 (1,2,3) - I'm not really sure about the sv change here since theyre the same beat/noise but your choice .~.
00:03:183 (7,8,1) - make these closer together since itd be hard to read bc its the same spacing as 00:02:710 (4,5,6) - but theyre not 1/2 notes
00:04:920 (4,1,2) - equal spacing for my pleasure
00:06:499 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:06:183 (5) - don't end the slider here ! start one. its bad to have such a strong beat with a slider end. ( you can just ctrl+g this 00:06:183 (5,1) - )
00:08:868 (1) - I would change this into a note and add a 1/2 slider 00:09:026 - because theres a beat here. you can also make it repeat or add a note, your choice
00:14:236 (2,3,4,5) - ds
00:15:657 (6,7,8) - this is kind of a big jump imo. theres not really a strong beat so maybe use ds to have equal spacing with the rest
00:16:447 (1,2) - another weird spacing issue. theyre 1/1 notes but you space them together like 1/2 so maybe stack them or move the slider farther
00:20:078 (1,2) - large spacing no music change ;;
00:22:604 (1) - this can be better : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5821482
00:23:078 (6,7,8) - bad spacing here again. space them out like the other 1/2 notes you did
00:30:183 (1) - its off the screen
00:31:920 (6,7,8) - ds
00:33:183 (1,2,3) - same thing again with the other one. rhythm wise, why not 2 1/4 kick sliders? c:
00:38:710 (4,5) - this can get hard to read for this level of difficulty so maybe separate like : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5821505
00:42:815 (1,2,3) - separate
00:55:604 (2,3) - intentional? fix the stack
01:19:762 (5,1) - ds
overall, fix the ds for notes like some of the ones in my mod and a few aesthetic problems. good luck

Mentai's Hyper

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00:00:973 - whats de point in 2 inherited points in one spot
00:04:447 (4,5) - you can blanket better >:3
00:06:026 (4,3) - bad overlap. if you want to do an overlap like this, try something like : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5821553 since it flows with the previous circle then fix the blanket and everything else
00:09:026 (2,3) - another weird overlap thing. I would just ctrl+g this so that 00:09:025 (2,3) - are stacking
00:10:289 (2,3) - also ctrl+g
00:12:026 (3,6) - fix stack
00:13:447 (4,1) - separate for emphasis?
00:16:604 - maybe unignorable beat
00:16:920 (3,4,5) - closen up these since theres not really a change in the music and might get confusing since almost same spacing as 00:16:762 (2,1) -
00:18:815 (5,1) - as much as I love these notes its no good in this part of the song. you can shorten this 00:18:815 (5) - to be a 1/1 slider and add a note 00:19:210 -
00:20:078 (5,1) - ^
00:32:236 (3,5) - bad overlap. just separate a tiny bit more
00:40:762 (2,3,4) - this could get hard to read since you've been using 2 note stacks but now 3 so take out one of the notes
00:44:710 (3,4) - fix stack
00:48:183 (4,5,6) - same thing as before
01:00:341 (3) - you can make this better
01:18:341 (1) - I get youre following the vocals but the spinner misses lots of beats would make a small break here 01:18:341 (1) - and just start add notes here 01:18:657 - like the hard difficulty
01:26:552 - lel whats up with these points
some bad overlaps and also aesthetics problems but good job~

Insane

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00:01:289 (5,6,7) - holy shit the slider velocity is too high
00:15:973 (12,1) - closen these up since theyre almost the same spacing as 00:15:341 (10,11) - but not 1/1 notes
00:19:762 (5,6) - large spacing for no reason
00:21:025 (5,6) - ^
00:34:131 (1) - this last note looks very off
00:48:973 (6,1) - this is a part where you should increase spacing not stack em
00:57:815 (1,4) - stack note with slider end
00:59:868 (1,1) - stack slider ends and fix blanket later on
bleh I'm ded

call for recheck/finish mod

-C O N T R A L-

143 posts

Joined October 2015

-C O N T R A L- 2016-08-11T18:13:40+00:00

Ugh sorry for this 2 Copy / Paste Fails Shiratoi and Mentai. Mentai i pm'd you so you know now what i mean ( i hope so xd)

And Shira 01:15:815 - Here the place for the break xd And nice Diamond whoops

xD

Again sorry sorry and sorry

Shitty Copy / Paste .-.

No KDS

Mentai

472 posts

Joined June 2016

Mentai 2016-08-11T18:52:44+00:00

Shiratoi wrote:
also free mod

Mentai's Hyper00:00:973 - whats de point in 2 inherited points in one spot what
00:04:447 (4,5) - you can blanket better >:3 sigh
00:06:026 (4,3) - bad overlap. if you want to do an overlap like this, try something like : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5821553 since it flows with the previous circle then fix the blanket and everything else done
00:09:026 (2,3) - another weird overlap thing. I would just ctrl+g this so that 00:09:025 (2,3) - are stacking i really want to keep these, if another person calls them out, i'll change them to your suggestion
00:10:289 (2,3) - also ctrl+g ^
00:12:026 (3,6) - fix stack done
00:13:447 (4,1) - separate for emphasis? changed to an overlap
00:16:604 - maybe unignorable beat gonna keep this for the sake of flow
00:16:920 (3,4,5) - closen up these since theres not really a change in the music and might get confusing since almost same spacing as 00:16:762 (2,1) - might've accidentally messed with ds multiplier : V
00:18:815 (5,1) - as much as I love these notes its no good in this part of the song. you can shorten this 00:18:815 (5) - to be a 1/1 slider and add a note already rekt in another mod : ( never forget rip00:19:210 -
00:20:078 (5,1) - ^ ^
00:32:236 (3,5) - bad overlap. just separate a tiny bit more fixed
00:40:762 (2,3,4) - this could get hard to read since you've been using 2 note stacks but now 3 so take out one of the notes altered
00:44:710 (3,4) - fix stack done
00:48:183 (4,5,6) - same thing as before same thing as before
01:00:341 (3) - you can make this better SURE
01:18:341 (1) - I get youre following the vocals but the spinner misses lots of beats would make a small break here 01:18:341 (1) - and just start add notes here 01:18:657 - like the hard difficulty
01:26:552 - lel whats up with these points i literally didn't even put them there : (
some bad overlaps and also aesthetics problems but good job~

i was gonna go take another nap and then THIS happened. UGH

~~OMW lol~~ I did the thing. Thank you ♥

Last edited by Mentai 2016-08-11T19:34:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2016-08-11T19:29:01+00:00

Yahuri wrote:
from queue~

General
-mapping style looks underdeveloped, sometimes objects appear to be randomly placed. try to use object spacing (spacing between ANY object, not just DS) to make things look more neat. geometrical patterns look alright though, just gotta shift things around to make it work.
-the normal-hitnormal hitsound makes no sense for this map, replace it with something else.
-i cant hear the finish at all. the sound youre using for the finish sounds more like a hitnormal sound, so try to find something that actually sounds finish-y?

Extra
00:02:236 (1) - how about stacking this on one of the stream notes from here 00:00:973 (1,2,3,4,1)? Not sure what you meant there
00:19:289 (2,3,4,5,6) - make star Done
00:15:657 (7,8) - 00:16:131 (9,1) - DS of 9,1 should be bigger than 7,8, if not equal (for emphasis on guitar/drum). Done
00:25:131 (5,6,7) - spacing too close, might trick people into thinking its 1/2 beat spacing instead of 1 beat spacing. same applies here 00:24:026 (1,2) - I think i fixed it
00:38:394 (3,6) - stack? fixed
00:44:236 (1,2,3) - increase DS for more emphasis Made them a bit farther, but i think it's fine
00:47:078 (2,3) - 00:47:552 (4,5) - 00:48:026 (1,2) - increase DS for all these so that the DS is similar to 00:46:604 (8,1) (or even higher)
00:50:552 (1,3) - stack? fixed
00:50:868 (2,5) - ^ ^
01:06:815 (8,1) - make jump? Changed the pattern a bit to make the jump a bit farther.
01:09:341 (8,1) - ^ I'll see what i can do for these, might gonna have to change patterns in order to emphasize the jumps on the NCs
01:10:289 (3,1) - ^ ^
01:18:026 (2,3) - ^ I think it's fine
01:20:394 (3,5) - stack? fixed? :O it's so unnoticeable LOL
01:20:236 (2,6) - ^ Fixed!

Insane
00:25:131 (5,6,7) - DS just seems illogical here, beat spacing is the same, DS probably should be too
00:31:131 (5,1,4) - stack? fixed
00:37:762 (1,1,1) - do you really need all these NCs? no... C:
00:39:026 (4,4) - stack? O.o umm I think i fixed it
00:54:026 (2,1) - jump I'll consider it
00:57:657 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:59:868 (1) - get rid of NC? fixed
01:07:763 (2,1) - jump probably not, i wanna keep the pattern C:
01:10:289 (3,1) - ^ fixed
01:18:183 (3) - shorten this slider a bit so you can get a click on 01:18:657 I don't know bout this one.

STRIP!!!!!
I WILL NOT!!!!!

Good luck~ Thanks for the mod!

-C O N T R A L- wrote:
From my queue

Insane
Maybe 00:02:710 (8) - or 00:03:183 (11) - NC made the 8 an NC
00:14:236 (7) - NC I actually made the 00:13:920 (6) the NC. ty for pointing it out tho C:
01:18:183 (3) - Sexy Slider :3 Honestly, it was a half-assed slider art trying to emphasize the voice. Probably neext recommendations to make it better.

Hope the mod helped you Guys. Wanna see this map on ranked status :3 Tadokoro Megumi is best TY so much, although #TeamErina LOLOL

Updated Shira's Light Insane

Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2016-08-11T23:28:55+00:00

Shiratoi wrote:
also free mod

aki diff 2 good

Hard
~
00:01:289 (1,2,3) - I'm not really sure about the sv change here since theyre the same beat/noise but your choice .~. The pitch changes tho C:
00:03:183 (7,8,1) - make these closer together since itd be hard to read bc its the same spacing as 00:02:710 (4,5,6) - but theyre not 1/2 notes Fixed
00:04:920 (4,1,2) - equal spacing for my pleasure I want to emphasize the jumps on the new combos
00:06:499 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:06:183 (5) - don't end the slider here ! start one. its bad to have such a strong beat with a slider end. ( you can just ctrl+g this 00:06:183 (5,1) - ) I'm following the guitar. The pattern is pretty much the same for the other combos as well.
00:08:868 (1) - I would change this into a note and add a 1/2 slider 00:09:026 - because theres a beat here. you can also make it repeat or add a note, your choice Fixed
00:14:236 (2,3,4,5) - ds Fixed
00:15:657 (6,7,8) - this is kind of a big jump imo. theres not really a strong beat so maybe use ds to have equal spacing with the rest Fixed
00:16:447 (1,2) - another weird spacing issue. theyre 1/1 notes but you space them together like 1/2 so maybe stack them or move the slider farther Fixed?
00:20:078 (1,2) - large spacing no music change ;; fixed
00:22:604 (1) - this can be better : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5821482 fixed
00:23:078 (6,7,8) - bad spacing here again. space them out like the other 1/2 notes you did This is intentional. I'll change it if more people think it's a problem
00:30:183 (1) - its off the screen fixed
00:31:920 (6,7,8) - ds fixed a bit
00:33:183 (1,2,3) - same thing again with the other one. rhythm wise, why not 2 1/4 kick sliders? c: This is intentional. I'll change it if more people think it's a problem
00:38:710 (4,5) - this can get hard to read for this level of difficulty so maybe separate like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5821505 Leaving it as is for now
00:42:815 (1,2,3) - separate Separated the 1, leaving 2 & 3 stacked
00:55:604 (2,3) - intentional? fix the stack fixed
01:19:762 (5,1) - dsemphasizing jumps on NC
overall, fix the ds for notes like some of the ones in my mod and a few aesthetic problems. good luck

Insane
~
00:01:289 (5,6,7) - holy shit the slider velocity is too high Toned it down a little lol
00:15:973 (12,1) - closen these up since theyre almost the same spacing as 00:15:341 (10,11) - but not 1/1 notes fixed
00:19:762 (5,6) - large spacing for no reason fixed
00:21:025 (5,6) - ^ fixed
00:34:131 (1) - this last note looks very off It's intentional, ill change it if more people mentio bout it
00:48:973 (6,1) - this is a part where you should increase spacing not stack em I'll consider it
00:57:815 (1,4) - stack note with slider end fixed
00:59:868 (1,1) - stack slider ends and fix blanket later on fixed
bleh I'm ded sowwy, ty fo the mod tho ahah

call for recheck/finish mod

SORRY MENTAI The double inherited points are my fault C: C: updated Mentai's Hyper

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Lully 2016-08-12T11:29:53+00:00

ғroм мy мoddιɴɢ qυeυe

i-i would love it do create a 5*+ diff for this map.. ovo

akieasy

00:03:499 (3) - fix blanket ~
00:54:341 (1,2) - i would suggest you not to use the same slider 2 times
01:15:815 - break

more to come
im to lazy right now.
just poke me ig or smth so we can do irc lol

Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Chalwa 2016-08-12T17:43:10+00:00

Hello! Mod from my queue!

General

Nothing ^^

Aki's Easy

00:13:920 (1,2) - Improve it
01:02:868 (2) - Make it symmetrical?
Nice diff ^^

Hard

Open AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) and fix all mistakes with DS and unsnapped end sliders
00:12:026 (3) - This slider looks weird here :/. Make it with small curve like
SPOILER
00:20:868 (3,1) - Stack this two
00:30:657 (2,5) - Overlap
and
00:31:447 (5) - Very weird slider. Here you have a site where you have help with this sliders! click!
00:40:288 (1,3) - Overlap
00:48:183 (5,6) - It's imo too hard to read for players :/
00:48:657 (7,1) - Fix overlap
00:49:920 (3,6) - ^
01:03:341 (4,2) - ^^

/ Shira's Light Insane

You have unsnapped timing line - 01:26:563
00:00:973 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:32:710 (1,2) - Improve blanket
01:03:815 (3,4,1) - This pattern looks weird

END!
This is nice map! Take my 3 stars

GOOD LUCK!]

Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2016-08-12T21:06:58+00:00

Chalwa wrote:
Hello! Mod from my queue!

Hard
Open AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) and fix all mistakes with DS and unsnapped end sliders Fixed. That was weird
00:12:026 (3) - This slider looks weird here :/. Make it with small curve like I'm keeping this slider for now
SPOILER
00:20:868 (3,1) - Stack this two Already stacked?
00:30:657 (2,5) - Overlap Fixed
and
00:31:447 (5) - Very weird slider. Here you have a site where you have help with this sliders! click! Fixed!
00:40:288 (1,3) - Overlap Fixed
00:48:183 (5,6) - It's imo too hard to read for players :/ Changed
00:48:657 (7,1) - Fix overlap Fixed
00:49:920 (3,6) - ^ Fixed
01:03:341 (4,2) - ^^ Fixed
END!
This is nice map! Take my 3 stars Holy moly thanks man!
GOOD LUCK!<3

Ashton

Ashton 2016-08-13T03:06:15+00:00

hi nm from my que

sorry I can't mod hard diffs so I will only be modding the easy ones

[Mentai's Hyper]
00:02:710 (4,5,6,7,8) - overlap, I know this is a hyper but.....
00:20:868 (2,3,4) - too hard to read
00:26:552 (1,2) - I would stack these
00:30:183 (4,1) - this isn't correctly overlapped, unfourtunetly
00:39:499 (2,3) - stack
00:52:762 (1,2,3,4,5) - volume raises aso make ds here a little bit bigger
01:14:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not a pattern

honestly I think this diff needs a remap but idk

[Hard]
00:45:026 (4,5) - inconsistant spacing

other than that really nice diff

[Aki's Easay]
thats a good diff, nothing really

nice map, really really nice map!

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-08-13T04:00:12+00:00

CookieKivi wrote:
akieasy
00:03:499 (3) - fix blanket ~ ok
00:54:341 (1,2) - i would suggest you not to use the same slider 2 times style of shockwave lo
01:15:815 - break added

Chalwa wrote:
Aki's Easy
00:13:920 (1,2) - Improve it idk what was wrong but ok...
01:02:868 (2) - Make it symmetrical? those nazi isn't necessary imo, still can follow even newbies.
Nice diff ^^

thanks guys

up

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282,91,59394,6,0,P|275:49|246:16,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,167,60341,2,0,P|231:243|265:322,1,160,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
329,351,61289,2,0,L|415:346,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
471,296,61920,6,0,B|487:184|487:184|468:128,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
421,77,62868,2,0,B|390:104|391:146|391:146|352:116|308:123,1,160,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,139,63815,2,0,P|221:180|227:234,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
255,288,64447,6,0,P|190:288|145:198,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,134,65394,2,0,B|192:104|192:104|317:94,1,160,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
381,94,66341,2,0,P|394:136|385:179,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
349,241,66973,6,0,B|293:244|293:244|247:229|247:229|177:235,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,253,67920,2,0,P|136:175|215:156,1,160,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
285,153,68868,2,0,P|274:112|241:82,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
169,71,69499,6,0,L|72:67,2,80,2|8|2,0:0|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,86,70447,2,0,B|304:93|352:66|352:66|401:89,1,160,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
456,143,71394,2,0,P|467:181|462:227,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
416,286,72026,6,0,B|363:295|363:295|315:273|315:273|250:284,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,327,72973,2,0,P|188:253|252:202,1,160,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,183,73920,2,0,P|336:140|325:92,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
288,36,74552,6,0,L|192:30,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
151,87,75183,2,0,L|55:81,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
15,138,75815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
15,138,78657,6,0,B|6:191|6:191|17:306,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,342,79762,2,0,P|183:343|239:295,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
253,228,80552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,109,81026,6,0,B|334:94|334:94|401:99,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
469,111,81815,1,2,0:0:0:0:
506,225,82289,2,0,P|500:271|440:322,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
368,313,83078,2,0,B|325:320|290:298|290:298|242:309,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,319,83868,6,0,P|155:257|180:198,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,144,84657,2,0,L|221:90,1,40,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84973,12,4,86552,0:0:0:0:

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